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Bahut had tak aise hi lekin thoda aur kareeb the dono...
Thanks almost correct pic post karne ke lie
Bahut had tak aise hi lekin thoda aur kareeb the dono...
Comments nahi mil raha hai...pata nahi shayad yaha logo ko sachhi ghatnaon me interest nahi hai...
Bhai, mai jabardasti ke naatak nahi bana sakta...bhai sach me bahut mast likh rahe ho lekin jydatar mitron ko bas chudai aur nangi baaton se bhare apdate chahiye sach ke itne pas se dikhati story nahi.please tum likhna band mat karna likhte raho.
Main bas ek hi baat kahunga ki shuruaat main sholey film bhi jyada nahi chali thi lekin aaj aisa koyi nahi hai jise sholey pasnd na ho . isliye likhte raho ye story hit hogi meri garanty haiBhai, mai jabardasti ke naatak nahi bana sakta...
Yaha to aisi kahaniya hai jaise lag raha hai ki saari aurte apna khol ke baithi hui hai aur hero ja ke bas waha beej daal raha hai.
Sach me wo kahaniya hi hai.
Sach se koso dur...
Mai jo bhi likh raha hu usme kewal 20% hi banaya hua hai baaki sab fact hai.
For bhi agar kisi ko pasand nahi aati hai sachhi baate aur ghatnaye to fir mujhe sochna padega ki mai aage likhu ya nahi.
Ye afsos rahega ki aisi baato ke lie koi forum nahi hai.kyonki ye baate aur kaha karega koi.
Muje bot pasand ayiBhai, mai jabardasti ke naatak nahi bana sakta...
Yaha to aisi kahaniya hai jaise lag raha hai ki saari aurte apna khol ke baithi hui hai aur hero ja ke bas waha beej daal raha hai.
Sach me wo kahaniya hi hai.
Sach se koso dur...
Mai jo bhi likh raha hu usme kewal 20% hi banaya hua hai baaki sab fact hai.
For bhi agar kisi ko pasand nahi aati hai sachhi baate aur ghatnaye to fir mujhe sochna padega ki mai aage likhu ya nahi.
Ye afsos rahega ki aisi baato ke lie koi forum nahi hai.kyonki ye baate aur kaha karega koi.