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UPDATE 6
Recap -
Mujhe nahi pta me kab tak aise betha rha...na kuch dikh rha tha...na sun rha tha...sab kuch suniye tha...mera dhyan tab tuta jab koi mere samne aaker khada ho gya... mene nazre uper karke uski vyakti ki aur dekha...to use apni aankho me ghurta paya...uski bhi aankhe nam thi... wo bhi meri trah jam sa jya tha...meri budhi ne mera saath chood diya tha...aur admi ko kuch samaj nahi aata to bhagta hai...dur bhagta hai... aur usi tarah me bhi wha se bhaag gya...
Ab aage -
Me bhaga...bhgata rha ye pta nhi chal rha tha ja kha rha hu...raste me kisi ke takar hui...usne kuch kha par mera dimag to sunn tha kuch smj nhi aa rha tha...me phir bhaga...pta nahi kis se bhag rha tha...kyu bhag rha tha...kab tak bhaga...par jab kuch hosh sambhala to apne aap ko ek washroom ke compartment me paya...me neeche jamin par betha tha...ghutno ko mode...hat sar par tha...aur bas ro rha tha...rota ja rha tha...bhot roya...aankho se aansu sookhne tak roya...ab tak ka saara jeevan ek film ki trah aankho ke smne se niklta ja rha tha...pta nahi kitni der tak bathroom ke farsh par betha rha...pta nahi kya-kya soch rha tha...shayad
"Kuch tol rha tha kuch mol rha tha, jeevan ke is dwand me kuch tatol rha tha"
Kafi der tak jb kuch smaj nahi aaya...to compartment se bahar nikla...saamne aayna tha...aayne me apki shakl dekhi...sara chera aansu se bhiga hua...aur chere par halki muskan...ek adbhut sa combination tha...kher mene pani se apna muh dhoya...rumal se saaf kiya...chere par halki smile layi...par ye kambhakt aakhe dga de rhi thi...kher jaise-taise khud to thoda presentable kiya aur washroom se bhar aaya...aur seedha apni table par puch gya...stage ki traf meri dekhne ki himat nahi ho rhi thi...shayad dar tha...kher me table ki aur bdha wha Rana pehle se mojood tha...
RANA:
Are raj sir kidhar gyab ho gye the bhai...kab se intzar kar rha hu
Uski awaz kuch ladkhda rhi thi shyad drugs ka asar tha...
ME:
Ji kahi nahi washroom tak gya tha
Tabhi ek aur announcement hui...par mere liye ab koi announcement mayne nahi rakhti thi...mne ignore kiya aur nazre neechi rakhi...
RANA:
Bhai mza aa gya yha to yar...salo ke paas kya jabardast maal hai...aaj tak nahi phuka...lo tum bhi ek kash mar ke dekho aaj
Aur Rana ne joint meri aur bdha diya...me us joint ko dekhta rha...dekhta rha... par na jane kuch soch kar joint tham liya...shayad mere seena me uth rha dard kuch kam ho jaye yehi soch kar mene ek kash kheecha... par adat to thi nhi dhaska lag gya...pehle socha chood deta hu...par dard ghera tha isliye ek baar aur try kiya aur successful rha... bas fir kya 3-4 takde kash kheech diye...sala pta nahi kon hi jdi-buti mili thi dimag ekdum thnda sa mehsus hua... agli kash lene ja rha tha ki Rana ne mera hath tham liya
RANA:
Abe bas kar..pehli baar me itna kon peeta hai...mar jaega...
ME:
(haste hue)
Rana bhai ab jinda bhi kya bacha hai mere sharir me...
RANA:
Mtlb?
ME:
Kuch nhi nhai...
Ab mujhe apna sir thoda halka-halka lag rha tha...par ander abhi bhi ek tufan utha tha... ek aise tees jo khaye ja rhi thi...ki tabhi kisi ne mere kandhe pe hath rakha...mne halke nashe ki halat me peeche mudkar dekha to wo Manoj tha... wo meri ankho me ghur rha tha...
MANOJ:
Sale aaj tuje ho kya gya hai...jo banda kabhi beer nahi peeta...aaj sedha charas...
ME:
(haste hue...shayad ye bhi joint ka asar tha)
Kuch nahi yaar socha aaj kuch nya try karta hu...aur koi bat nahi
(ab kya btata ise jab mujhe hi kuch smaj nahi aa rha tha)
MANOJ:
Acha...sahi hai bhai...ab to tune peena shuru kar diya...ab dekh tujhe kya-kya pilata hu...are ye bhai ko kya hua...
Mene nazre Rana ki aur ki to wo table par sar jhukaye pda tha...shayad bhai ne kuch jada sevan kar liya nashe ka...tabhi Manoj uki aur bhaga...
MANOJ:
Bhai utho aapko kya hua hai...
RANA:
La...lagta hai nashe da..jada chad gy..gya
MANOJ:
Bhai lagta nahi sahi me jada ho gya hai aapko... chaliye ghar chalte hai...chal Raj bhai ki halat theek nahi hai chalte hai
Par me kha ja sakta tha...mere gle me to ek faas fas gyi thi...jab tak wo nahi nikalti...me to yha se khi jane ka soch bhi nahi sakta...par himat nahi ho rhi thi us faas ko nikalne ki...ajjeb majdhar me phas gyi thi meri jindagi... par ab kuch to bolna tha...
ME:
Bhai me nahi aa paunga...
Manoj ne meri aur ghura...jaise use yakin na hua ho mene kya bola...
ME:
(jhuti hasi hoto pe late hue)
Bhai asal me tere bhai ko koi yha bha gya hai... usne club band hone ke bad mine ka time diya hai...isliye rukna padega...hahaha
(mujhe hi pta hai kitni muskil se hasi nikli meri...)
MANOJ:
Oh ho kya baat Raj sir...aate hi sixer shabash...chal koi ni tu ruk...me isa dost nahi jo dost ki khushi me hadi bane...par tu aayega kaise
ME:
Iski chinta mat kar yaar...me aa jaunga...tu dhyan se bhai ko le ja...
Uske bad mene Manoj aur Rana ko main gate tak chod diya...wha se ek bouncer ki help se wo log bhar nikal gye...aur me wapas apni jgah pe aaker beth gya...tabhi ek aur stage performance chalu hua...par mera usper koi dhyan nahi tha...
us waqt tak mera nasha bhi halka padne lga...aur wo pehle wali tees fir uthne lgi dil me...jab bardast nahi hua to... me uthakar bar counter pe chala gya...
BARTENDER:
What you like to have sir...
ME:
20 Strongest shot available...
BARTENDER:
Sir?..sure sir
Mne ek shot liya...fir dusra...fir teesra...chotha...uske bad counting bhul gya...bas man me me ek hi awaz gunj rhi thi akhir kyu kiya tumne aisa...akhir kyu...akhir kyu... peeta ja rha tha ...kyu..kyu bolta ja rha tha...jab peena limit se bahar ho gya to ladkhadakar me stool se neeche gir pda...
Par jamin ko touch karne se pehle ek cheek sune "Raaajjj"...aur kisi ne mera sir jamin se takrane se pehle apni god me rakh liya... me us shaksh ko apni hosh khoti aankho se dekha aur ek halki muskurahat ke saath bas itna bol paya...
"Akhir tumne aisa kyu kiya mere saath Aanchal"
Aur meri aankho ke saamne andhera cha gya...sab kuch shuniye ho gya.....................................................
To be continued....
Mujhe nahi pta me kab tak aise betha rha...na kuch dikh rha tha...na sun rha tha...sab kuch suniye tha...mera dhyan tab tuta jab koi mere samne aaker khada ho gya... mene nazre uper karke uski vyakti ki aur dekha...to use apni aankho me ghurta paya...uski bhi aankhe nam thi... wo bhi meri trah jam sa jya tha...meri budhi ne mera saath chood diya tha...aur admi ko kuch samaj nahi aata to bhagta hai...dur bhagta hai... aur usi tarah me bhi wha se bhaag gya...
Ab aage -
Me bhaga...bhgata rha ye pta nhi chal rha tha ja kha rha hu...raste me kisi ke takar hui...usne kuch kha par mera dimag to sunn tha kuch smj nhi aa rha tha...me phir bhaga...pta nahi kis se bhag rha tha...kyu bhag rha tha...kab tak bhaga...par jab kuch hosh sambhala to apne aap ko ek washroom ke compartment me paya...me neeche jamin par betha tha...ghutno ko mode...hat sar par tha...aur bas ro rha tha...rota ja rha tha...bhot roya...aankho se aansu sookhne tak roya...ab tak ka saara jeevan ek film ki trah aankho ke smne se niklta ja rha tha...pta nahi kitni der tak bathroom ke farsh par betha rha...pta nahi kya-kya soch rha tha...shayad
"Kuch tol rha tha kuch mol rha tha, jeevan ke is dwand me kuch tatol rha tha"
Kafi der tak jb kuch smaj nahi aaya...to compartment se bahar nikla...saamne aayna tha...aayne me apki shakl dekhi...sara chera aansu se bhiga hua...aur chere par halki muskan...ek adbhut sa combination tha...kher mene pani se apna muh dhoya...rumal se saaf kiya...chere par halki smile layi...par ye kambhakt aakhe dga de rhi thi...kher jaise-taise khud to thoda presentable kiya aur washroom se bhar aaya...aur seedha apni table par puch gya...stage ki traf meri dekhne ki himat nahi ho rhi thi...shayad dar tha...kher me table ki aur bdha wha Rana pehle se mojood tha...
RANA:
Are raj sir kidhar gyab ho gye the bhai...kab se intzar kar rha hu
Uski awaz kuch ladkhda rhi thi shyad drugs ka asar tha...
ME:
Ji kahi nahi washroom tak gya tha
Tabhi ek aur announcement hui...par mere liye ab koi announcement mayne nahi rakhti thi...mne ignore kiya aur nazre neechi rakhi...
RANA:
Bhai mza aa gya yha to yar...salo ke paas kya jabardast maal hai...aaj tak nahi phuka...lo tum bhi ek kash mar ke dekho aaj
Aur Rana ne joint meri aur bdha diya...me us joint ko dekhta rha...dekhta rha... par na jane kuch soch kar joint tham liya...shayad mere seena me uth rha dard kuch kam ho jaye yehi soch kar mene ek kash kheecha... par adat to thi nhi dhaska lag gya...pehle socha chood deta hu...par dard ghera tha isliye ek baar aur try kiya aur successful rha... bas fir kya 3-4 takde kash kheech diye...sala pta nahi kon hi jdi-buti mili thi dimag ekdum thnda sa mehsus hua... agli kash lene ja rha tha ki Rana ne mera hath tham liya
RANA:
Abe bas kar..pehli baar me itna kon peeta hai...mar jaega...
ME:
(haste hue)
Rana bhai ab jinda bhi kya bacha hai mere sharir me...
RANA:
Mtlb?
ME:
Kuch nhi nhai...
Ab mujhe apna sir thoda halka-halka lag rha tha...par ander abhi bhi ek tufan utha tha... ek aise tees jo khaye ja rhi thi...ki tabhi kisi ne mere kandhe pe hath rakha...mne halke nashe ki halat me peeche mudkar dekha to wo Manoj tha... wo meri ankho me ghur rha tha...
MANOJ:
Sale aaj tuje ho kya gya hai...jo banda kabhi beer nahi peeta...aaj sedha charas...
ME:
(haste hue...shayad ye bhi joint ka asar tha)
Kuch nahi yaar socha aaj kuch nya try karta hu...aur koi bat nahi
(ab kya btata ise jab mujhe hi kuch smaj nahi aa rha tha)
MANOJ:
Acha...sahi hai bhai...ab to tune peena shuru kar diya...ab dekh tujhe kya-kya pilata hu...are ye bhai ko kya hua...
Mene nazre Rana ki aur ki to wo table par sar jhukaye pda tha...shayad bhai ne kuch jada sevan kar liya nashe ka...tabhi Manoj uki aur bhaga...
MANOJ:
Bhai utho aapko kya hua hai...
RANA:
La...lagta hai nashe da..jada chad gy..gya
MANOJ:
Bhai lagta nahi sahi me jada ho gya hai aapko... chaliye ghar chalte hai...chal Raj bhai ki halat theek nahi hai chalte hai
Par me kha ja sakta tha...mere gle me to ek faas fas gyi thi...jab tak wo nahi nikalti...me to yha se khi jane ka soch bhi nahi sakta...par himat nahi ho rhi thi us faas ko nikalne ki...ajjeb majdhar me phas gyi thi meri jindagi... par ab kuch to bolna tha...
ME:
Bhai me nahi aa paunga...
Manoj ne meri aur ghura...jaise use yakin na hua ho mene kya bola...
ME:
(jhuti hasi hoto pe late hue)
Bhai asal me tere bhai ko koi yha bha gya hai... usne club band hone ke bad mine ka time diya hai...isliye rukna padega...hahaha
(mujhe hi pta hai kitni muskil se hasi nikli meri...)
MANOJ:
Oh ho kya baat Raj sir...aate hi sixer shabash...chal koi ni tu ruk...me isa dost nahi jo dost ki khushi me hadi bane...par tu aayega kaise
ME:
Iski chinta mat kar yaar...me aa jaunga...tu dhyan se bhai ko le ja...
Uske bad mene Manoj aur Rana ko main gate tak chod diya...wha se ek bouncer ki help se wo log bhar nikal gye...aur me wapas apni jgah pe aaker beth gya...tabhi ek aur stage performance chalu hua...par mera usper koi dhyan nahi tha...
us waqt tak mera nasha bhi halka padne lga...aur wo pehle wali tees fir uthne lgi dil me...jab bardast nahi hua to... me uthakar bar counter pe chala gya...
BARTENDER:
What you like to have sir...
ME:
20 Strongest shot available...
BARTENDER:
Sir?..sure sir
Mne ek shot liya...fir dusra...fir teesra...chotha...uske bad counting bhul gya...bas man me me ek hi awaz gunj rhi thi akhir kyu kiya tumne aisa...akhir kyu...akhir kyu... peeta ja rha tha ...kyu..kyu bolta ja rha tha...jab peena limit se bahar ho gya to ladkhadakar me stool se neeche gir pda...
Par jamin ko touch karne se pehle ek cheek sune "Raaajjj"...aur kisi ne mera sir jamin se takrane se pehle apni god me rakh liya... me us shaksh ko apni hosh khoti aankho se dekha aur ek halki muskurahat ke saath bas itna bol paya...
"Akhir tumne aisa kyu kiya mere saath Aanchal"
Aur meri aankho ke saamne andhera cha gya...sab kuch shuniye ho gya.....................................................
To be continued....
for new story bhai , hmm story ka concept kafi new or unique h I like it or story ki running speed bhi achi ja rahi h , m as a writer friend aapko bas itna hi suggestion dunga ki story jesi aapne sochi h bedi hi likho kisi ki k negative reviews m aaker change kerne ki koi jarurat ni h or story jarur complete kijiyega.