Rock Arvind
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Sabse pehle to bohot-bohot shukriya bhai ki aapko story achi lgi...dusra apki rai ko jarur dhyan me rakhunga...teesra me jarur apki story read karunga...till then keep supportingSabse pahale to
for new story bhai , hmm story ka concept kafi new or unique h I like it or story ki running speed bhi achi ja rahi h , m as a writer friend aapko bas itna hi suggestion dunga ki story jesi aapne sochi h bedi hi likho kisi ki k negative reviews m aaker change kerne ki koi jarurat ni h or story jarur complete kijiyega.
And ha meri story bhi jarur read kijiyega
Hahaha...nahi bhai kisi ne kidnap nahi kiya hai..ek kaam me fas gya tha...Lagta hai ke Russian mafia ke hath lag gya hai isi liye gayab hai.
hahaha bhai...jaldi dene ki koshis karta hu bhai...par kabh-kabhi kaam me atak jata hu...keep supportingBich me mt rukna bhai updates jaldi diya karo jyada sabar nahi ho raha