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Ye baath sahi he kon deraha he 2 updates in one day1 din main 2 update aa rahe hai.fir bhi consistency problem???![]()
1 din main 2 update aa rahe hai.fir bhi consistency problem???
Driver ne ek jagh pe car roki or sonali ko bola..
Sa::madam kya kya pack karwau??(piche ko dekh ke)
Sonali Ravi ko dekhi or smile karke boli..
So::kya khaoge??(smile se)
R::kuch bhi kha lunga,aise kuch nahi hai .(smile se)
So::bahiya ,paneer ki sabji or ek daal fry or 10 12 roti rakh lena..or app apne liye bhi karwa Lena..(paise nikalte hue).
Or driver car se utar gaya..
Ab car Main sonali thi,Ravi tha or uska beta jo aage soya tha..
Sonali bahar ko dekhne lagi .jabki Ravi chup chap bethe raha..tabhi Sonali apne bete ko utha ke boli..
So::sidd sidd..beta utho ab..aane Wale hai .chalo utho...(piche se bol ke)..
Lekin Sid nahi utha..to sonali boli .
So::abhi soya hai..fir raat ko nahi soyega..(Ravi ko dekh ke)
Ravi bas muskura gaya .to sonali smile karte hue bahar ko dekhne lagi..
Ravi ne kuch nahi kiya..kyunki glass khule the..or aas pass bhi or car bhi khadi thi..
Sonali ander hi ander kaam agani main jal rahi thi .wo jaldi se Ghar phuchna chhati thi..
Thodi der pe driver aa gaya..sonali ne uske paise nikal ke hath pe rakhe the..
Or karib 15 min baad wo log apne apartment pe pahuch gaye..
Sonali or Ravi car se utare..sonali ne apne bete ko uthaya..uska beta nind mai tha..
Sonali ne driver ko paise diye .or wo log apne apartment ko aa gaye .
Uske pados main vidya ki behan rehti thi..jo ki kisi aurat se baat kar rahi thi..Ravi sonali ke piche chal rha tha..
Sonali ko vidya ki behan dikhayi di..wo usse Kam hi bolati thi..to bas hai hello kiya..or aage ko badh gayi..
Vidya ki behan Ravi ko dekhi or sath wali aurat se dhere se boli..
Vidya ki behan:: umm ..dekha aa gayi heroine...jaha se aa rahi hogi...(muh bna ke)
2 lady:: are apne bete ko lene gayi hogi ..hostel pe...(piche se dekh ke)
Vidya ki behan::hmm..paise walo ki maya hai...khoob Paisa hua..hum to nahi rakh sakte ,apne baachon ko apne se dur..inke paas hua khoob Paisa..ye sath main kon hoga iske??(soch ke)
2 lady:: bhatija hoga iska ..wahi to gayi thi...(soch ke)..
Vidya ki behan:: nahi to wo to nahi hai .aata hai yaaha .isko dekha hai Maine kahi ..(soch ke).
2lady:: jo hoga ..hame kya karna.
Vidya ki behan::: haan sahi baat hame kya karna .jo bhi hoga...hum to hue sidhe sadhe..iski barabari kha kar payenge...(man hi man chid ke)
Or wo apne ghar ko aa gyai ..lekin usko Ravi ka face jana pehchana lagne laga .or wo sochane lagi ki isko kaha dekh hai??
Or wo apne ghar khana banne lagi tab usko dyan aaya or man hi man boli...
Are ye to didi ke pradosh main rehta hai..unke chachere sasur ka Nati hai...ye yah akya kar raha hai...???
Kher wahi sonali ander a gyai..or Ac on ki..or apne bete se boli..
So::sid..beta chalo muh hath dho lo .khana khaoge .aise mat Sona .(ander ko jate hue)
Ravi wahi bethe raha ,or usko yaad a Gaya ki kaise last time wo sonali ke ghar aaya tha..or kya kya kiya tha..
Aise hi so Ali ne apne pati se baat ki .or anju se bhi baat ki lekin anju ko nahi bataya ki wo usko sath laayi hai .
Thodi der baad 3no ne khana khaya .Ravi bhi kapde change kar liya tha..
Sonali ka beta tv dekh raha tha ..uski nind Puri ho gayi thi .jabki Ravi bhi chup chap betha tha..jo uska beta dekh raha tha wo bhi wo hi dekhne laga.
Wahi sonali ne kitchen ka kaam pura kiya or bhar aayi or sidd se boli..
So::beta galat baat na..,bahiya ko do remote...Aisa karte hai??(pyar se bolate hue)
Sidd ne Ravi ki remote diya mare man se to ,Ravi ne usko mana kar diya .or bola .
R::nahi nahi dekho. Aacha laga tha hai ye..(tv dekh ke)
..sidd khush ho gay to sonali Beth gayi or Ravi ko boli..
So::hostel main dekhne nahi dete hai to ghar aa ke tv chaiye isko ..(smile karte hue)....
Ravi bas muskura gaya .sonali..Ravi ke samne sofe pe bethi thi .
Tabhi door bell baji .to wo uth ke gayi..
Door khola to dekha vidya ki behan Rekha thi...
Wo door pe khadi hans rahi thi...sonali thoda uncomfortable ho gayi .to wo boli .
R::khana bna liya ..??sabji layi thi...(sonali ko dekh ke muskura ke)
So::are bhabhi ..aao...haan kha liya bahar se hi le aayi thi .aao na .(mare man se dikhawa karte hue)
Rekha ander aa gayi..or tak jhak karne lagi..
Haal main aayi or boli .
R::accha bete ko lene Gaye hoge .kitne din ki chutti padi hai ..(bina piche bethte hue).
Ravi bhi usko pehchan chuka tha, lekin usne ignore Kiya..
So::abhi garmi ki chutti padi hai..ab jayega...(bas itna hi boli)
To Rekha Ravi ko dekh ke boli .
R::ye apke Bhai ka ladka hai kya???(aankh choti karte hue)
Sonali ko samjh nahi aay ki kya bole .wo boli..
So::nahi wo mere bhatija ka dost hai .ye ghar aaye the to mere sath aa gaye ..kal jayenge hum log diya ko nahi layi hu...(Ravi ko dekh ke).
R::aacha accha...tabhi to main kahu .wo to thoda chota lagta tha..inko kahi dekh hai maine..(anjaan bante hue).
Ravi kuch nahi bola .
So::haan apki didi ke bagal main rehte hai...(Ravi ko dekh ke)...
Re::haan haan...didi ke waha dekha tha birthday main...haan ...yaad aaya..ye nahi pehchan rahe honge ..(Ravi ko dekh ke).
Ravi kuch nahi bola..bas namste kar diya..
Rekha thodi der pakate rahi..or sonali se idhar udhar ki baat puchane lagi .wahi sonali ander hi ander gusse se jal rahi thi..
Karib 15 min baad wo gayi .
To sonali usko gate Tak chorne gayi .or zaldi se door band karke aayi or boli..
So::baap re..ye aurat bhi .mere wah koi aa jaye bas ..pata nahi kya aurat hai..Ravi iski didi bhi aise hi hai kya??(chidd ke)
Ravi bas muskura gaya or bola ..
R::haan aise hi hai ..thodi thodi..(hans ke)
So::haan aati hai. Uski beti..lekin uski beti aachai hai bhut..ye hi hai .ajeeb si ..(chidd ke)
Ravi bas muskura gaya..
Kher sonali apne bete se sone ko bolne lagi .lekin wo tv hi dekhte raha..
Sonali bhi wahi Beth gayi ..or bas Ravi ko dekhne lagi ..or boli .
So: nind to nahi aa rahi??(smile se).
.
R::nahi .abhi nahi ..(smile se )
So::sidd beta so jao .kal Jana hai Nani ke waha...(apne bete ko dekh ke)
Si::so jaunga mummy..app so jao na ..(tv dekhte hue)...
Lekin usko kya pata..wo soyega to uski mummy pass main bethe hue bhaiya ke sath raat gujarne wali hai..
Wo kuch bol nahi payi..
Wahi Ravi ne pehle hi apne ghar pe bata Diya tha.. Deepika ko phone nahi Kiya tha... kyunki wo gussa hi karti..
Aise hi 10 baj Gaya..
To be continued
Bhai aap apna Twitter account bana lo isi naam se galti se bhi agar kuch hi gaya iss forum ko udhar se bata Dena aage kis site ya forum pe jaaoge1 din main 2 update aa rahe hai.fir bhi consistency problem???![]()
Behtreen updateDriver ne ek jagh pe car roki or sonali ko bola..
Sa::madam kya kya pack karwau??(piche ko dekh ke)
Sonali Ravi ko dekhi or smile karke boli..
So::kya khaoge??(smile se)
R::kuch bhi kha lunga,aise kuch nahi hai .(smile se)
So::bahiya ,paneer ki sabji or ek daal fry or 10 12 roti rakh lena..or app apne liye bhi karwa Lena..(paise nikalte hue).
Or driver car se utar gaya..
Ab car Main sonali thi,Ravi tha or uska beta jo aage soya tha..
Sonali bahar ko dekhne lagi .jabki Ravi chup chap bethe raha..tabhi Sonali apne bete ko utha ke boli..
So::sidd sidd..beta utho ab..aane Wale hai .chalo utho...(piche se bol ke)..
Lekin Sid nahi utha..to sonali boli .
So::abhi soya hai..fir raat ko nahi soyega..(Ravi ko dekh ke)
Ravi bas muskura gaya .to sonali smile karte hue bahar ko dekhne lagi..
Ravi ne kuch nahi kiya..kyunki glass khule the..or aas pass bhi or car bhi khadi thi..
Sonali ander hi ander kaam agani main jal rahi thi .wo jaldi se Ghar phuchna chhati thi..
Thodi der pe driver aa gaya..sonali ne uske paise nikal ke hath pe rakhe the..
Or karib 15 min baad wo log apne apartment pe pahuch gaye..
Sonali or Ravi car se utare..sonali ne apne bete ko uthaya..uska beta nind mai tha..
Sonali ne driver ko paise diye .or wo log apne apartment ko aa gaye .
Uske pados main vidya ki behan rehti thi..jo ki kisi aurat se baat kar rahi thi..Ravi sonali ke piche chal rha tha..
Sonali ko vidya ki behan dikhayi di..wo usse Kam hi bolati thi..to bas hai hello kiya..or aage ko badh gayi..
Vidya ki behan Ravi ko dekhi or sath wali aurat se dhere se boli..
Vidya ki behan:: umm ..dekha aa gayi heroine...jaha se aa rahi hogi...(muh bna ke)
2 lady:: are apne bete ko lene gayi hogi ..hostel pe...(piche se dekh ke)
Vidya ki behan::hmm..paise walo ki maya hai...khoob Paisa hua..hum to nahi rakh sakte ,apne baachon ko apne se dur..inke paas hua khoob Paisa..ye sath main kon hoga iske??(soch ke)
2 lady:: bhatija hoga iska ..wahi to gayi thi...(soch ke)..
Vidya ki behan:: nahi to wo to nahi hai .aata hai yaaha .isko dekha hai Maine kahi ..(soch ke).
2lady:: jo hoga ..hame kya karna.
Vidya ki behan::: haan sahi baat hame kya karna .jo bhi hoga...hum to hue sidhe sadhe..iski barabari kha kar payenge...(man hi man chid ke)
Or wo apne ghar ko aa gyai ..lekin usko Ravi ka face jana pehchana lagne laga .or wo sochane lagi ki isko kaha dekh hai??
Or wo apne ghar khana banne lagi tab usko dyan aaya or man hi man boli...
Are ye to didi ke pradosh main rehta hai..unke chachere sasur ka Nati hai...ye yah akya kar raha hai...???
Kher wahi sonali ander a gyai..or Ac on ki..or apne bete se boli..
So::sid..beta chalo muh hath dho lo .khana khaoge .aise mat Sona .(ander ko jate hue)
Ravi wahi bethe raha ,or usko yaad a Gaya ki kaise last time wo sonali ke ghar aaya tha..or kya kya kiya tha..
Aise hi so Ali ne apne pati se baat ki .or anju se bhi baat ki lekin anju ko nahi bataya ki wo usko sath laayi hai .
Thodi der baad 3no ne khana khaya .Ravi bhi kapde change kar liya tha..
Sonali ka beta tv dekh raha tha ..uski nind Puri ho gayi thi .jabki Ravi bhi chup chap betha tha..jo uska beta dekh raha tha wo bhi wo hi dekhne laga.
Wahi sonali ne kitchen ka kaam pura kiya or bhar aayi or sidd se boli..
So::beta galat baat na..,bahiya ko do remote...Aisa karte hai??(pyar se bolate hue)
Sidd ne Ravi ki remote diya mare man se to ,Ravi ne usko mana kar diya .or bola .
R::nahi nahi dekho. Aacha laga tha hai ye..(tv dekh ke)
..sidd khush ho gay to sonali Beth gayi or Ravi ko boli..
So::hostel main dekhne nahi dete hai to ghar aa ke tv chaiye isko ..(smile karte hue)....
Ravi bas muskura gaya .sonali..Ravi ke samne sofe pe bethi thi .
Tabhi door bell baji .to wo uth ke gayi..
Door khola to dekha vidya ki behan Rekha thi...
Wo door pe khadi hans rahi thi...sonali thoda uncomfortable ho gayi .to wo boli .
R::khana bna liya ..??sabji layi thi...(sonali ko dekh ke muskura ke)
So::are bhabhi ..aao...haan kha liya bahar se hi le aayi thi .aao na .(mare man se dikhawa karte hue)
Rekha ander aa gayi..or tak jhak karne lagi..
Haal main aayi or boli .
R::accha bete ko lene Gaye hoge .kitne din ki chutti padi hai ..(bina piche bethte hue).
Ravi bhi usko pehchan chuka tha, lekin usne ignore Kiya..
So::abhi garmi ki chutti padi hai..ab jayega...(bas itna hi boli)
To Rekha Ravi ko dekh ke boli .
R::ye apke Bhai ka ladka hai kya???(aankh choti karte hue)
Sonali ko samjh nahi aay ki kya bole .wo boli..
So::nahi wo mere bhatija ka dost hai .ye ghar aaye the to mere sath aa gaye ..kal jayenge hum log diya ko nahi layi hu...(Ravi ko dekh ke).
R::aacha accha...tabhi to main kahu .wo to thoda chota lagta tha..inko kahi dekh hai maine..(anjaan bante hue).
Ravi kuch nahi bola .
So::haan apki didi ke bagal main rehte hai...(Ravi ko dekh ke)...
Re::haan haan...didi ke waha dekha tha birthday main...haan ...yaad aaya..ye nahi pehchan rahe honge ..(Ravi ko dekh ke).
Ravi kuch nahi bola..bas namste kar diya..
Rekha thodi der pakate rahi..or sonali se idhar udhar ki baat puchane lagi .wahi sonali ander hi ander gusse se jal rahi thi..
Karib 15 min baad wo gayi .
To sonali usko gate Tak chorne gayi .or zaldi se door band karke aayi or boli..
So::baap re..ye aurat bhi .mere wah koi aa jaye bas ..pata nahi kya aurat hai..Ravi iski didi bhi aise hi hai kya??(chidd ke)
Ravi bas muskura gaya or bola ..
R::haan aise hi hai ..thodi thodi..(hans ke)
So::haan aati hai. Uski beti..lekin uski beti aachai hai bhut..ye hi hai .ajeeb si ..(chidd ke)
Ravi bas muskura gaya..
Kher sonali apne bete se sone ko bolne lagi .lekin wo tv hi dekhte raha..
Sonali bhi wahi Beth gayi ..or bas Ravi ko dekhne lagi ..or boli .
So: nind to nahi aa rahi??(smile se).
.
R::nahi .abhi nahi ..(smile se )
So::sidd beta so jao .kal Jana hai Nani ke waha...(apne bete ko dekh ke)
Si::so jaunga mummy..app so jao na ..(tv dekhte hue)...
Lekin usko kya pata..wo soyega to uski mummy pass main bethe hue bhaiya ke sath raat gujarne wali hai..
Wo kuch bol nahi payi..
Wahi Ravi ne pehle hi apne ghar pe bata Diya tha.. Deepika ko phone nahi Kiya tha... kyunki wo gussa hi karti..
Aise hi 10 baj Gaya..
To be continued
Dar ke aagye hi to jit hai1 din main 2 update aa rahe hai.fir bhi consistency problem???![]()