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Shandaar updateWahi subh hui..or din aise hi bit gaya..sham ko Ravi ka man nahi lag Raha tha to wo vivek ke Ghar ko Chala gya..
Sonali to Anju ke Ghar chale gayi thi .
Neha Ghar pe thi,or Ravi jab Ghar gaya to wo Bahar Aayi or Sharma gayi or Ravi ko Vivek nahi hai ye bop ke muskurate hue Ander ko chale gayi..Ravi ne bhi Ander Jana thik nahi samjha.
Or wo waps Aa gaya Apne Ghar ko.
Wahi Neha Sochi ki Ravi Ander aayega..lekin Ravi nahi aaya to wo Thoda shocked bhi thi.
Lekin dusri tarf uski maa Ghar main hi thi Jo Bahar thi..lekin Neha Ravi se milna chati thi..
Wahi Ravi Apne Ghar ko aane laga to usko Vidya dikahyi di Ghar ke bhar..
Ravi ne pehle to usko ignore Kiya dur se hi dekh ke.lekin vidya kahde Rahi or Ravi ke Anne ka wait karte Rahi.. muskurate hue..
Vidya ki behan ne usko bata diya tha ki wo Sonali ke Ghar aaya tha.
Vidya Ravi se Hans ke boli..
V:: Ghar gaye the Kya Ravi??(muskura ke)
R:: haan Mami...(normal ho ke)
V::acchaa.....hmmmm..(Ravi ko dekh ke mand mand muskura ke)
Ravi wahi pe kahda tha or Apne Ghar ko Jana chata tha..,jis din se Prakash Wala seen hua tha tab se Ravi Vidya logo se chidd gaya tha..to Vidya boli..
V:: Deepika bhi nahi hai na??(Ravi ko dekh ke)
R::nahi wo Apne Ghar gayi Hain..(bas itna hi bola idhar udhar dekh ke)
V:: accha ...kab gayi??(soch ke)
R::ho gaya Kafi din...(bas itna hi bola)
V': haan ..wo us din ke baad toain bhi nahi Aa payi..pata hai tumahree mama ne to bhut mara paraksh ko..batao aisa koi karta hai..Apne hi Ghar ki bhau beti ke sath...
Kya kare Ravi hum log to bhut pareshan ho gaye hai .Sharm se main to Aayi hi nahi..tumhare mama Aaye the Chachi ke pass...( Ravi ko dekh ke)
Ravi bas usko ignore kare ja Raha tha..wo Janta tha ki ye bas dikhawa kar Rahi hai..
To Vidya usko boli..
V::Tum bhi nahi aate ho..??Khana bna dungi aaj??(Thoda muskura ke)
R::nahi Mami .fir aunga..aacha chalta hu...(baat kaat ke)
V::are hum logo se bhi naraz ho Kya?? Haan Hoge hi..Kya kare hum bhi..bhut pareshan hai..Prakash keh Raha tha ki, Ravi ko main itna Pyar karta hu.usne bhi mere upper hath utha diya..(Ravi ko dekh ke)
Ravi ko ek dam se gussa Aa gaya or wo bola..
R::Mami ....Maine koi hath nahi uthaya..bas unko bhar ko kar Raha tha to dhakka lag gaya tha..Baki wo Jo bhi soche muje farak nahi padhta.. Sharm aani chaiye unko..(gusse se bol ke)
Vidya uska muh hi dekhe Reh gayi..or Ravi Ander ko Chala gaya..
Vidya bhi usko dekhte Rahi or man hi man boli..
Baap re tewar Dekho Zara...ye Deepika ne Jo aisa Kya kar diya iske Liye???Jo ye itna gussa kar Raha hai..haan haan ,ho Raha Hoga Kuch dono ke bich..
Suresh yaha hua nahi..Le Rahe honge dono mazze..Prakash to chorega nahi usko...ghamndi hai ek number ki sochati hai ki usse sunder koi hai hi nahi..Badi Aayi..
Mat Aaye muje Kya..khud ka bhai Jo mere sath muh kala Karke gaya wo Kuch nahi ..
Hain na hamare iske papa..Jo Lage rehate Hain in logo ke Piche..nakhare Dekho Zara..usne hi bahdkaya Hoga Ravi ko nahi to mere hi aage pich ghum Raha tha ek dino...
Or ye sochate hue wo Ander Aa gyai..
Wahi Ravi ka mood kharab ho gaya..tabhi Deepika ka phone Aa gaya..
Ravi usse normal hi baat kar Raha tha,jabki Deepika usse Pyar se baat kar Rahi thi..wo abhi room main akele thi..
Ravi bas haan na ka jawab de raha tha..
D::Kya hua??mood thik nahi hai Kya??(Pyar se)
R::nahi ..aisa Kuch nahi hai .wo ladke wale kyn nahi Aaye??(baat kaat ke)
D::are in logo ne gadi book ki thi,bol rahe the wo gadi wala nahi aaya..ab parso aane wale hai..ajj Kuch keh rahe the ki din thik nahi hai..(normal tarh se)
R::kyn Kya hai aaj???(serious awaz m)
D::Hoga Kuch ,muje pata nahi..koi pandit ji ko dikhaya bol rahe the...Aa jayenge parso ..(baat kaat ke)
R::hmmm..to bank Wala kaam ho gaya pura??(serious awaz m)
D::haan ho gaya ..
R::mama ka phone aaya tha??(serious awaz m)
D: haan aaya tha Geeta se baat to kar rahe the..(uncomfortable feel karte hue)
R::kyn apse nahi hui??
D::naa..zaida nahi .or Didi mummy ji log kab Aa rahe hai??(baat kaat ke)
R::pata nahi ..Meri aaj baat nahi hui ..
D::hmm..Kavita ka phone aaya tha ,keh Rahi thi Anshul ki mummy log Aaye the.june main engagement kar denge bol rahe the..kyn Tumne baat nahi ki??(herani ho ke)
R::nahi hui..aaya Hoga to main abhi Vivek ke Ghar agya tha. Kyn itni garmi main kyn kar rahe hai ..??abhi kar lete..(soch ke)
D::are Kuch Hoga na ,maine nahi pucha..aacha baat kar lo ek Baar ..fir Batana muje ..or sunita thik hai??(normal tarh se)
R::hmm thik h...abhi wo Vidya Mami Mili thi Bahar...(man ki baat bolate hue)...
Deepika ek dam se chup ho gayi .or fir boli..
D:: kyn Kya keh Rahi thi ..(Thoda gusse wali awaz main)
R::Kuch nahi Kya kehati hai.. Prakash mama ki baat kar Rahi thi ki usne galat Kiya..Vimal mama ne mara unko...ye hi sab...(muh bna ke bolate hue)
D::hmm .itna bura lag raha hai to Ghar main kyn rakha hai .??bas baate hi Karna jante hai ...hmmm..ek Baar aaayi nahi khud ..Vimal bhaiya to Aaye the,app school gaye the..(normal tarh se Vidya ke bare main soch ke)
R::choro Jo bhi hai...( Baat kaat ke)
D::hmm..tabhi gussa Aa rah tha na abhi .hmm .(dherese bol ke)
R::hmmm......
D::muj pe bhi Aa rah hai gussa hmmmm??(dherese Pyar se bol ke)
R::nahi ....kyn aayega...(normal ho ke)
D: or shadi main bhi mood off kyn tha haan??(Pyar se bol ke)
R::kha tha .??(serious awaz m)
D::muje to laga ..(Pyar se narazagi dikahte hue)
R::lagta bhut h tumko. Chalo thik h main Ghar baat karta hu ..(baat kaat ke)..
D::kar Lena na..Kya hai. Abhi koi nahi hai to baat mat Karna .fir bologe is room main Jao us room m Jao...(Pyar se narazagi dikahte hue)
R::hmm bolo ..(normal tarh se)
D::rehne do..man to Hota nahi mujse baat Karne ko..thik h Ghar baat kar lo .(muh bna ke)
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R::bolo na yaar...(serious awaz m)
D::Aa kyn gaye Ghar se ,ajj rukana tha apko ..Kavita ko bhi aacha lagta ..(soch ke)
R::Aa gaya..wo tution lagna hai ..maths or physics ka..Khali beth ke Kya karunga (soch ke)
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D::Kya baat ,ab bhut fikar hone lagi hai..hmm..bade hone lag gaye ho .pehle to Pagal the ..Pagal Kahi ke . (Dhere se Pyar se muskura ke)
R::hmm...ye hi bolna. (Halka muskura ke or fir serious ho ke)
D:: sahi keh Rahi hu..ab change ho gaye ho..nahi hue ho??(Pyar se dhere se)
R:: pata nahi app jano ..(gehrai saans Le kar)
D::muje to aisa laga...tabhi keh Rahi hu .aaj tak to nahi bola..(Pyar se pure man se baat karte hue)
R::hmm...time ke sath change bhi Hona padhta hai ..(serious awaz m muskura ke)
D::hmm...ek din pure change ho Jaoge..or muje bhi bhul Jana thik h ..(Thoda serious ho ke nam ankhon se)
Ye baat bolte hi Deepika ki aankh nam ho gayi .or wo dhere se Apne Anshu pochne lagi .honth dab ke..
R::itna faltu Kyn bolati ho .hmm ...Kuch zaida nhi bolati ho...Kam bola karo Thoda...(Thoda sa daant ke)
Or Deepika chup ho gayi...or bas Ravi ki baat sunate Rahi ..
R::ab bologe???(serious awaz m)
D::hmm .bolo ...( Bhut dhere se Pyar se bol ke)
Deepika ki ye awaz sun ke Ravi ko ajeeb sa lagne laga...or usne apni aankh band kar di..or fir man main control karte hue bola..
R::to sonu Kya kar Raha hai ab 12 ke baad(baat kaat ke)
D::pass to ho jaye pehle ..b com karega or Kya karta hai ..pass ho gaya to iske lakshan dekh ke to lag nahi Raha hai muje. (bhar ko dekh ke)...
R::hmm ho jayega..(casually bol ke)
D::sonu waise Apke hi barabar to hai .1 sal Bada Hoga sayad ..(soch ke)
R::mere 2 sal barbad hue na bachpan pe .nahi to 12 ka de Raha Hota...(gehari saans Le kar)
D::hmm....accha to Apke papa keh rahe the ki app wahi padhoge??(soch ke)..
R::nahi yahi rahunga ..papa yahi ko transfer Karwa lete na .to thik tha . mummy log bhi yahi Reh lete..(soch ke)
D::hmm.or Ghar ???(soch ke)..
R::wha Kya aadha rent pe de dete...Baki ko lock kar dete..Mera na wah man nahi lagta...bhut shor sharaba hai...yaha Shanti hai ..(soch ke)
D::hmm..tabhi to keh Rahi hu .app change ho gaye ho .Bhala kisko city main nahi aacha lagta ..koi nahi rehna chata Chote sehar main .(muskura ke)..
R::muje pehle se hi yaha aacha lagta hai ..thik h na ..koi aaj hi nahi lag Raha...muje bhid bhaad passnd nahi ..(muh bna ke)
D::aacha to job to bhar hi lagegi na..wo thodi koi gaon main lag jayegi??
R::tab ki tab dekhenge .. present main jeen achaiye .hamesa..aage ka soch ke rahenge to koi jee hi nahi payega...(soch ke)...
D::hmm .(Ravi baat sun ke man main muskura ke)
R::Chalo thik h..Ghar baat karta hu ek baarrr..(soch ke)
D::hmm kar lo kar lo ..mujse baat kar ne main to phone rakhne ka hi Hota hai ..(muh bna ke)...
R:: are...kar to li ..ab Kya baat karu??( Hans ke)
D::hmmm.....pata hai ..chlo thik h..muje Batana Kavita Kya keh Rahi thi ..
R::hmm ..thik h chlo bye .take care love you ..(dhere se)
Deepika Sharma gayi or bas boli..
D::hmmmm....bye....kar Lena phone .(Pyar se)...
R::hmm hmmmm...
Or fir Ravi ne phone rakh diya.. Deepika soch main pad gayi ki , Ravi ko Kya hua Jo ab aise baat kar Raha hai..
Lekin usko aacha bhi lag Raha tha..wo janti Ravi usse Pyar karta hai lekin dikahata nahi hai ..
Kher Ravi ne Ghar main Kafi der baat ki ..or usko pata Chala ki Kavita ki engagement June main hai..
Puchne pe pata Chala ki, Anshul ke Ghar pe work chal Raha hai .to wo log chate the ki June main ho .or isi November main Kavita ki shadi bhi fix honi thi..abhi date nahi nikali thi lekin ye confirm tha ki November main shadi ho jayegi..
Ravi ke papa ne usse pucha ki wo 11 main kha padhna chata hai to Ravi ne bol diya ki wo yahi Reh ke padhai karega .
To uske papa ne bhi haan bol diya...
Or Ravi ne fir phone rakh diya or Deepika ko bata diya Jo bhi baat hui thi lekin ye nhi bataya ki wo yahi padhne Wala hai ..wo yahi aake hi Batana chata tha..
To be continued..
Shandaar updateWahi subh hui..or din aise hi bit gaya..sham ko Ravi ka man nahi lag Raha tha to wo vivek ke Ghar ko Chala gya..
Sonali to Anju ke Ghar chale gayi thi .
Neha Ghar pe thi,or Ravi jab Ghar gaya to wo Bahar Aayi or Sharma gayi or Ravi ko Vivek nahi hai ye bop ke muskurate hue Ander ko chale gayi..Ravi ne bhi Ander Jana thik nahi samjha.
Or wo waps Aa gaya Apne Ghar ko.
Wahi Neha Sochi ki Ravi Ander aayega..lekin Ravi nahi aaya to wo Thoda shocked bhi thi.
Lekin dusri tarf uski maa Ghar main hi thi Jo Bahar thi..lekin Neha Ravi se milna chati thi..
Wahi Ravi Apne Ghar ko aane laga to usko Vidya dikahyi di Ghar ke bhar..
Ravi ne pehle to usko ignore Kiya dur se hi dekh ke.lekin vidya kahde Rahi or Ravi ke Anne ka wait karte Rahi.. muskurate hue..
Vidya ki behan ne usko bata diya tha ki wo Sonali ke Ghar aaya tha.
Vidya Ravi se Hans ke boli..
V:: Ghar gaye the Kya Ravi??(muskura ke)
R:: haan Mami...(normal ho ke)
V::acchaa.....hmmmm..(Ravi ko dekh ke mand mand muskura ke)
Ravi wahi pe kahda tha or Apne Ghar ko Jana chata tha..,jis din se Prakash Wala seen hua tha tab se Ravi Vidya logo se chidd gaya tha..to Vidya boli..
V:: Deepika bhi nahi hai na??(Ravi ko dekh ke)
R::nahi wo Apne Ghar gayi Hain..(bas itna hi bola idhar udhar dekh ke)
V:: accha ...kab gayi??(soch ke)
R::ho gaya Kafi din...(bas itna hi bola)
V': haan ..wo us din ke baad toain bhi nahi Aa payi..pata hai tumahree mama ne to bhut mara paraksh ko..batao aisa koi karta hai..Apne hi Ghar ki bhau beti ke sath...
Kya kare Ravi hum log to bhut pareshan ho gaye hai .Sharm se main to Aayi hi nahi..tumhare mama Aaye the Chachi ke pass...( Ravi ko dekh ke)
Ravi bas usko ignore kare ja Raha tha..wo Janta tha ki ye bas dikhawa kar Rahi hai..
To Vidya usko boli..
V::Tum bhi nahi aate ho..??Khana bna dungi aaj??(Thoda muskura ke)
R::nahi Mami .fir aunga..aacha chalta hu...(baat kaat ke)
V::are hum logo se bhi naraz ho Kya?? Haan Hoge hi..Kya kare hum bhi..bhut pareshan hai..Prakash keh Raha tha ki, Ravi ko main itna Pyar karta hu.usne bhi mere upper hath utha diya..(Ravi ko dekh ke)
Ravi ko ek dam se gussa Aa gaya or wo bola..
R::Mami ....Maine koi hath nahi uthaya..bas unko bhar ko kar Raha tha to dhakka lag gaya tha..Baki wo Jo bhi soche muje farak nahi padhta.. Sharm aani chaiye unko..(gusse se bol ke)
Vidya uska muh hi dekhe Reh gayi..or Ravi Ander ko Chala gaya..
Vidya bhi usko dekhte Rahi or man hi man boli..
Baap re tewar Dekho Zara...ye Deepika ne Jo aisa Kya kar diya iske Liye???Jo ye itna gussa kar Raha hai..haan haan ,ho Raha Hoga Kuch dono ke bich..
Suresh yaha hua nahi..Le Rahe honge dono mazze..Prakash to chorega nahi usko...ghamndi hai ek number ki sochati hai ki usse sunder koi hai hi nahi..Badi Aayi..
Mat Aaye muje Kya..khud ka bhai Jo mere sath muh kala Karke gaya wo Kuch nahi ..
Hain na hamare iske papa..Jo Lage rehate Hain in logo ke Piche..nakhare Dekho Zara..usne hi bahdkaya Hoga Ravi ko nahi to mere hi aage pich ghum Raha tha ek dino...
Or ye sochate hue wo Ander Aa gyai..
Wahi Ravi ka mood kharab ho gaya..tabhi Deepika ka phone Aa gaya..
Ravi usse normal hi baat kar Raha tha,jabki Deepika usse Pyar se baat kar Rahi thi..wo abhi room main akele thi..
Ravi bas haan na ka jawab de raha tha..
D::Kya hua??mood thik nahi hai Kya??(Pyar se)
R::nahi ..aisa Kuch nahi hai .wo ladke wale kyn nahi Aaye??(baat kaat ke)
D::are in logo ne gadi book ki thi,bol rahe the wo gadi wala nahi aaya..ab parso aane wale hai..ajj Kuch keh rahe the ki din thik nahi hai..(normal tarh se)
R::kyn Kya hai aaj???(serious awaz m)
D::Hoga Kuch ,muje pata nahi..koi pandit ji ko dikhaya bol rahe the...Aa jayenge parso ..(baat kaat ke)
R::hmmm..to bank Wala kaam ho gaya pura??(serious awaz m)
D::haan ho gaya ..
R::mama ka phone aaya tha??(serious awaz m)
D: haan aaya tha Geeta se baat to kar rahe the..(uncomfortable feel karte hue)
R::kyn apse nahi hui??
D::naa..zaida nahi .or Didi mummy ji log kab Aa rahe hai??(baat kaat ke)
R::pata nahi ..Meri aaj baat nahi hui ..
D::hmm..Kavita ka phone aaya tha ,keh Rahi thi Anshul ki mummy log Aaye the.june main engagement kar denge bol rahe the..kyn Tumne baat nahi ki??(herani ho ke)
R::nahi hui..aaya Hoga to main abhi Vivek ke Ghar agya tha. Kyn itni garmi main kyn kar rahe hai ..??abhi kar lete..(soch ke)
D::are Kuch Hoga na ,maine nahi pucha..aacha baat kar lo ek Baar ..fir Batana muje ..or sunita thik hai??(normal tarh se)
R::hmm thik h...abhi wo Vidya Mami Mili thi Bahar...(man ki baat bolate hue)...
Deepika ek dam se chup ho gayi .or fir boli..
D:: kyn Kya keh Rahi thi ..(Thoda gusse wali awaz main)
R::Kuch nahi Kya kehati hai.. Prakash mama ki baat kar Rahi thi ki usne galat Kiya..Vimal mama ne mara unko...ye hi sab...(muh bna ke bolate hue)
D::hmm .itna bura lag raha hai to Ghar main kyn rakha hai .??bas baate hi Karna jante hai ...hmmm..ek Baar aaayi nahi khud ..Vimal bhaiya to Aaye the,app school gaye the..(normal tarh se Vidya ke bare main soch ke)
R::choro Jo bhi hai...( Baat kaat ke)
D::hmm..tabhi gussa Aa rah tha na abhi .hmm .(dherese bol ke)
R::hmmm......
D::muj pe bhi Aa rah hai gussa hmmmm??(dherese Pyar se bol ke)
R::nahi ....kyn aayega...(normal ho ke)
D: or shadi main bhi mood off kyn tha haan??(Pyar se bol ke)
R::kha tha .??(serious awaz m)
D::muje to laga ..(Pyar se narazagi dikahte hue)
R::lagta bhut h tumko. Chalo thik h main Ghar baat karta hu ..(baat kaat ke)..
D::kar Lena na..Kya hai. Abhi koi nahi hai to baat mat Karna .fir bologe is room main Jao us room m Jao...(Pyar se narazagi dikahte hue)
R::hmm bolo ..(normal tarh se)
D::rehne do..man to Hota nahi mujse baat Karne ko..thik h Ghar baat kar lo .(muh bna ke)
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R::bolo na yaar...(serious awaz m)
D::Aa kyn gaye Ghar se ,ajj rukana tha apko ..Kavita ko bhi aacha lagta ..(soch ke)
R::Aa gaya..wo tution lagna hai ..maths or physics ka..Khali beth ke Kya karunga (soch ke)
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D::Kya baat ,ab bhut fikar hone lagi hai..hmm..bade hone lag gaye ho .pehle to Pagal the ..Pagal Kahi ke . (Dhere se Pyar se muskura ke)
R::hmm...ye hi bolna. (Halka muskura ke or fir serious ho ke)
D:: sahi keh Rahi hu..ab change ho gaye ho..nahi hue ho??(Pyar se dhere se)
R:: pata nahi app jano ..(gehrai saans Le kar)
D::muje to aisa laga...tabhi keh Rahi hu .aaj tak to nahi bola..(Pyar se pure man se baat karte hue)
R::hmm...time ke sath change bhi Hona padhta hai ..(serious awaz m muskura ke)
D::hmm...ek din pure change ho Jaoge..or muje bhi bhul Jana thik h ..(Thoda serious ho ke nam ankhon se)
Ye baat bolte hi Deepika ki aankh nam ho gayi .or wo dhere se Apne Anshu pochne lagi .honth dab ke..
R::itna faltu Kyn bolati ho .hmm ...Kuch zaida nhi bolati ho...Kam bola karo Thoda...(Thoda sa daant ke)
Or Deepika chup ho gayi...or bas Ravi ki baat sunate Rahi ..
R::ab bologe???(serious awaz m)
D::hmm .bolo ...( Bhut dhere se Pyar se bol ke)
Deepika ki ye awaz sun ke Ravi ko ajeeb sa lagne laga...or usne apni aankh band kar di..or fir man main control karte hue bola..
R::to sonu Kya kar Raha hai ab 12 ke baad(baat kaat ke)
D::pass to ho jaye pehle ..b com karega or Kya karta hai ..pass ho gaya to iske lakshan dekh ke to lag nahi Raha hai muje. (bhar ko dekh ke)...
R::hmm ho jayega..(casually bol ke)
D::sonu waise Apke hi barabar to hai .1 sal Bada Hoga sayad ..(soch ke)
R::mere 2 sal barbad hue na bachpan pe .nahi to 12 ka de Raha Hota...(gehari saans Le kar)
D::hmm....accha to Apke papa keh rahe the ki app wahi padhoge??(soch ke)..
R::nahi yahi rahunga ..papa yahi ko transfer Karwa lete na .to thik tha . mummy log bhi yahi Reh lete..(soch ke)
D::hmm.or Ghar ???(soch ke)..
R::wha Kya aadha rent pe de dete...Baki ko lock kar dete..Mera na wah man nahi lagta...bhut shor sharaba hai...yaha Shanti hai ..(soch ke)
D::hmm..tabhi to keh Rahi hu .app change ho gaye ho .Bhala kisko city main nahi aacha lagta ..koi nahi rehna chata Chote sehar main .(muskura ke)..
R::muje pehle se hi yaha aacha lagta hai ..thik h na ..koi aaj hi nahi lag Raha...muje bhid bhaad passnd nahi ..(muh bna ke)
D::aacha to job to bhar hi lagegi na..wo thodi koi gaon main lag jayegi??
R::tab ki tab dekhenge .. present main jeen achaiye .hamesa..aage ka soch ke rahenge to koi jee hi nahi payega...(soch ke)...
D::hmm .(Ravi baat sun ke man main muskura ke)
R::Chalo thik h..Ghar baat karta hu ek baarrr..(soch ke)
D::hmm kar lo kar lo ..mujse baat kar ne main to phone rakhne ka hi Hota hai ..(muh bna ke)...
R:: are...kar to li ..ab Kya baat karu??( Hans ke)
D::hmmm.....pata hai ..chlo thik h..muje Batana Kavita Kya keh Rahi thi ..
R::hmm ..thik h chlo bye .take care love you ..(dhere se)
Deepika Sharma gayi or bas boli..
D::hmmmm....bye....kar Lena phone .(Pyar se)...
R::hmm hmmmm...
Or fir Ravi ne phone rakh diya.. Deepika soch main pad gayi ki , Ravi ko Kya hua Jo ab aise baat kar Raha hai..
Lekin usko aacha bhi lag Raha tha..wo janti Ravi usse Pyar karta hai lekin dikahata nahi hai ..
Kher Ravi ne Ghar main Kafi der baat ki ..or usko pata Chala ki Kavita ki engagement June main hai..
Puchne pe pata Chala ki, Anshul ke Ghar pe work chal Raha hai .to wo log chate the ki June main ho .or isi November main Kavita ki shadi bhi fix honi thi..abhi date nahi nikali thi lekin ye confirm tha ki November main shadi ho jayegi..
Ravi ke papa ne usse pucha ki wo 11 main kha padhna chata hai to Ravi ne bol diya ki wo yahi Reh ke padhai karega .
To uske papa ne bhi haan bol diya...
Or Ravi ne fir phone rakh diya or Deepika ko bata diya Jo bhi baat hui thi lekin ye nhi bataya ki wo yahi padhne Wala hai ..wo yahi aake hi Batana chata tha..
To be continued..
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मुझे एक बात बहुत अजीब लगती है इस site पर, कि readers story को कम पढते हैं और अपनी राय ज्यादा देते हैं, कि ये करवाओ या फिर ऐसा मत करना etc. अच्छी भली situation बन गई थी गुड्डू वाली पर एक भाई ने stay order ले लिया कि गुड्डू से मत करना। story changed. Same way, पहले लेखक ने प्लान बताया था गुप्ता वाली back story को flashback में तीन चार एपिसोड में विस्तार से बताने का, और कोई भलता बीच में बोल गया गुप्ता से मत चुदवाना दीपिका को, और लेखक ने प्रेशर में प्लान बदल दिया।
बार बार देखा है इस फोरम में ऐसा होते।
ये कहानियां हैं सिर्फ!!! जो लिख रहा है उसकी कल्पना है, उसे अपने हिसाब से लिखने दो ना यार। आपको कोई सिचुएशन या पात्र नहीं जम रहा हो तो आप अपने हिसाब से लिख डालो, या अगर कल्पना में भी नहीं सह सकते तो porn आप के लिये नहीं है।
भारतीय मर्द काल्पनिक कहानियों में भी औरत की sexuality को ना तो imagine कर सकता है और न tolerate. अजीब ही है, कि कहानी और यथार्थ में फर्क नहीं कर सकते हैं कुछ लोग
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