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Adultery Meri fantasy ( Adultery/Romance)

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Flymovers777 bhai some of the last updates seems to be boring and love between ravi and deepika is not going forward as both are the main leads of the story......

Why?????

Don't mind my words as this is my personel view towards the story......
Bro because it is necessary to do for story and other characters...I know it seems to be boring..but if they do always In Romance .. nothing will remain in story.and when ever they will feel that both are to far away from each other..then a love level between them will be in the next level.. and also other characters will a live.. because some new characters will come in story..if Ravi will busy with deepika then there is the no way for any other character. and story will remain between two person. and also that story also telling us ,life is not same as for other days..it changes every moment.and when ever it changes a story become.. in other hand nothing to change ,we can't say that a story.
Hope you will be understand..

Thank you 😊😊
 

Alok

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Bro because it is necessary to do for story and other characters...I know it seems to be boring..but if they do always In Romance .. nothing will remain in story.and when ever they will feel that both are to far away from each other..then a love level between them will be in the next level.. and also other characters will a live.. because some new characters will come in story..if Ravi will busy with deepika then there is the no way for any other character. and story will remain between two person. and also that story also telling us ,life is not same as for other days..it changes every moment.and when ever it changes a story become.. in other hand nothing to change ,we can't say that a story.
Hope you will be understand..

Thank you 😊😊

I totally agree with you on the point that life changes in every second and also story should not be focused on only two lead characters but my request to you is that just make incidences and twist and turns of the story somewhat interesting so that it did't sound boring for the readers....

Also i understand that each and every character is important for the story and i don't have any complaints about any of the character in the story but the turn of events should be intersting... So that we are totally bound to the story........

Hope you will also understand my feelings towards your story......:inluv::inluv::inluv:
 

saurabh

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Waaah beta mauj kardi Vidya ki pelai karte hue madhu ka chehra ae baba kahi Deepika ka pyar madhu pe toh transfer nahi hua hai aur babu kab tak deepika ko ignore karega lagta hai babu naye sire se start karna chahata hai 😀😀 babu ko deepika ke saath nahi jaana kahi bhi tution jana hai madhu darling ke pass jaanu madhu meri madhu darling aa raha hu mein tum meri kutia banane 😃😃 Ravi ki kutia banogi madhu darling 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Very nice script lage raho bhai
Ravi aur kavita ki ladhai dikhate rehna
 

Luffy

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...to wo bed ke dusre side ko sone laga....
Tabhi usko dhyan aaya ki wo madhu ko yaad karke vidya ko chod raha tha ...usko thoda ajeeb laga ki asa usne kyon kiya...or apne ko samjhate hue ki ye thik nhi h...bed m so gya ...


Ab aage:::

Ravi Subh 7 baje tak soya raha...tabhi wha kavita aa gayi or ravi ka door knock kiya....
Kafi der knock karne ke baad ravi ne door khola...kapde to wo night ko hi pehn chuka tha...

To door khola or fir bed m aa ke let gya.....

Kavita usse boli...

K: main ja rahi hu tu aa jana baad m( ander aate hue)

R:: m bhi aa raha hu didi..ruko...( Lete lete bola)

K::. Mujhe to nind hi nhi aayi...sir m dard ho raha h( jamhai lete hue)

R:: mujhe bhi..( bed se uthte hue)

Fir ravi or kavita dono bhar aaye...or ravi ne muh dhoya...
Or kavita vidya ko boli...

K::: mami main ja rahi hu baad m aaungi...( Vidya ko awaz dete hue)

Vidya kitchen se bhar aa gayi or ravi ko dekh ke muskurai.. lekin ravi ne koi reaction nhi diya..or kavita ko boli....

V:: yaha bhi aana h haaann....ye nhi ki ek baar aa Gye....
Thik h ??( ravi ko dekhte hue)

Ravi bilkul chup raha ...jis tarah se vidya dekh rahi thi wo dar raha tha....

Or fir dono aa Gye ghar ko....

Jab dono chote gate se Apne ghar ko aa ye to kavita boli....

K:: Kitna badal gayi h vidya mami....pehle to dekh ke muh palta leti thi....mujhe ummid nhi thi...inte acche se behave karegi...( Chalte chalte boli)


Ravi kuch nhi bola or Bolta bhi kya ....

Tabhi dono aage side aa Gye...ravi ka school to tha nhi .. Deepika Pooja kar rahi thi....

Kavita wahi upper wale room m aa ke let gayi...

Tabhi Deepika aayi or boli...


D:: kya ho gya...( Hanste hue kavita ko dekh ke)

K:: kuch nhi mami niid nhi aayi Wha mujhe....ab sir m dard ho raha h....(Deepika ko dekh kar)

D:: kyn logo ko to bhut niid aati h Wha( ravi ko tount marte hue, kavita ko dekh kar)

Ravi kuch nhi bola....or na Deepika ko dekha....

K:: wo log kon ye h???( Hanste hue ravi ko dekhne lagi)

Ravi tab bhi kuch nhi bola.....

D:: ye vidya didi ka bhi samaj nhi aata...pehle to us din bunty ke liye itna ladne ko aayi thi ..or ab( gusse m ,muh palte hue khidki ko dekhte hue)

K:: Haan mami ,sahi m pehle bhut alag thi...ab to bilkul change ho gayi...( Deepika ko dekh kar utsahpurvak boli bethte hue)

Tabhi Ravi bola ..

R:: rehne do na didi ab acche se baat kar rahi h to kya problem h...kon sa jo hum log Roz jaa rahe h waha...( Kavita ko dekhte hue)

Vidya ki tariff sun ke Deepika chale gayi bhar ko ....

Fir ravi bhi chala gya Apne room ko.....

Or kavita bhi so gayi thodi der.....

Deepika jhadu pocha karne lagi.....

Wahi Sunita apne bacchon ka nasta bna rahi thi...uski maa ghar m thi to wo or ravi dur hi rahe.....


Fir ravi bhi thodi der so gya or fir uth ke nahane chala gya...

Or waps aaya to dekha Deepika uske room m thi..or jhadu laga rahi thi...

Ravi chup chap room m aaya or bina kuch bole...apni almira kholi or lower nikala...tabhi deepika boli.....

D:: dhone wale kapde nikal dena...( Jhadu lagate hue)

R:: hmmmm( lower pehnte hue)

Deepika or ravi zaida kuch nhi bole....

Nhi or din to itne der m ravi Deepika ko pakad ke diwar ke sahare kissing karna suru kar deta ...lekin aaj wo bilkul normal tha....

Deepika ko bhi aaj bhut ajeeb laga..or khusi bhi hui ki chalo kuch to akal aayi ...
Lekin wo confused or man m bolne lagi..

D:: ye sahi m akal aa gayi h ya muh bnaya h....inhone... Pata nhi muh bhi kiss baat m bana le ye bhi to pata nhi...( Ravi ko dekhte hue khadi lagane lagi)


Ravi mirror m dekh k baal bna raha tha...or bilkul shant tha...na koi gussa na pyar ..bas normal....

Tabhi Deepika ne chek karne ko bola....

D:: bhai duj m ,main or Kavita mere mama ke ghar jaa rahe h..chaloge???( Ravi ko Mirror m dekhte hue)

R:: Haan didi bata rahi thi..... tution hoga mera ...app log chale jana...( Mirror m hi Deepika ko ek nazar dekha or baal bnane laga)

Deepika kuch nhi boli...bhar chale gayi....poacha lene......

Or fir ravi bhi kuch book dekhne laga ....or bhar ko nikala....

Or tabhi deppika bhi aa gyi....or poche ki balti le kar ...

Dono ek dusre se darwaja pe mile...to ravi darwaza se hath gya or Deepika ko rasta diyaa...

Deepika nazar niche karte hue ander aa gayi....
Or ravi bina kuch bole bhar chala gya.....

To Deepika boli ...


D:: kahi jana mat nasta bnaungi abhi ...( Palt ke ravi ko Bolte hue)

R:: yahi hun kahi nhi jaa raha hu...( Palt ke bola)
or aage side chala gya....


Deepika bilkul shocked thi ki ,or mann m boli.....

D:: hua kya h inko....gussa bhi nhi lag rahe h...or behave Ase Kar rahe h ...maine kuch thodi bola..jo Asa kar rahe h....Haan us din Vimla aunty aa gyi thi....to maine gusse m dekha...lekin mera wo matlab thodi tha ki mujhe ignore karo...
Or padhai ke liye bhi isliye bola ki result kharab na ho..acche number se pass ho jaye... Lekin ye to usko bilkul hi ulta le gaye.......
Mera bolna kya itna galt h ..ya m ab acchi nhi lagti.....ya main ab khoobsurat nhi lagti... Jo Ase ignor kar rahe hain....
Or mama ke ghar bhi sath jane ko mana kar diya. ..bhana bna ke ...thik h koi baat nhi....ab boor ho gaye honge mujse...ya mujse bhi koi khoobsurat mil gayi hogi.....
Mujhe sex thodi chaiye inse...bas pyar se bol de...mujhe or kya chaiye.....
Sex ke liye to m kabhi nhi bolti hu or na bolungi...koi sex ke liye pyar kiya h kya maine ....kam se kam acche se behave to Kar sakte h........( Bhari hui aankhon se bed m bethte hue man m boli)

Deepika ko bhut bura lagne laga tha....lekin fir usne Apne anshu poche or pocha lagane lag gayi....

Or fir ravi ke kapde bathroom m dali...or fir aage side aa gayi.....


Usne dekha ravi Kavita or suresh hasi mazak kar rahe h....

Deepika kitchen m chale gayi...or aalo ubalne rakh diye...parathe bnane ke liye......


To be continued....
Awesome update
 
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