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Adultery Meri fantasy ( Adultery/Romance)

komalkh

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Flymovers777 Bro....... we don't know we hv right to give suggestions or not..... but.....u hv so amazing writing skills.... so can't resist to request our ideas or suggestions..... just request....don't show there relation to be known by everyone..... means there lovestory beinbetween them.... and don't show deepika with any other male character.... physically or emotionaly regarding sexually..... keep her only for ravi and nobody else.... and gupta should also not fulfill his evil desires or deepika relation with ravi and family..... keep deepika innocent as she hv shown till now in whole story....... dono ki shaadi bhi dikhana... in temple.... far away from home.... both know abt this marriage of their..... and in end of story give birth to ravi child.... un dono k pyar ki nishaani....means happy ending rakhna jab bhi end karo story..... pld don't mind.....if u don't like my suggestions..... we just love ur story...... so gave our thoughts to be a part od story..... we know with ur superb writing skills u can mk it happen..... thanks one again for superb story...bura mat manana kisi baat/suggestion ka... tk cr..... be safe......
 

komalkh

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Flymovers777 bhai.... jo acha lga likh diya......baaki story aapki jaise aapko sahi lage...... bas deepika ko slut mat show dikhana like some other characters...... aur gupta ko hath m le k hilaane layak hi chhodna...... aur deepika aur ravi ka relation expose mat dikhana kisi k bhi samne..... story ka maza chala jayega.... aisa i think..... pls dont mind.....
 
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Rocky9i

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Ab to dono अकेले है kuch to karo
 
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R:: didi mami gaye kya???( Mahol ko halke karte hue)

Rd:: Haan wo wo wo...gaye......( Saree Ka palla thik karte hue)

Ravi ne pani piya or room ko chala gya......

Ab aage::::;

Radha ne ek lambi saans li.....or dono hath wash besin m rakh diye uper sir karke ankh band karke khadi rahi.......

Wahi Ravi radha ko akele dekh ke beiman ho gaya ...or kuch der wahi room m ruka raha......

Wo koi faisla nhi kar paa raha tha ki usko jana chahiye ki nhi jana chahiye......

Mind keh raha tha...mat ja...koi aa jayega...rehne de..yahi padhai kar le.....

Dil keh raha tha....koi nhi aayega....mami log abhi gaye h.....
Kam se kam 2,3 hours baad hi aayenge......

Bas ye hi sochate sochate usne 5 min bita diye.....

Or fir mind ko ignore karte hue...fir se room ke bhar gaya...or ek baar bhar ko gaya......

Bhar sab sun sani thi.......road m... padosi bhi sab apne ander hi the.
.to ravi ander aa gaya...or bhari sanso se darwaje ki chitkani ko lagaya . .

Or excitment m tight hui apni body ke sath .... kitchen ko chala gya...jha....radha bartan dho ke wash besin saaf kar rahi thi......

Ravi chupke se... kitchen ke ander aa gaya ...dabe paon....

Or radha ke pass aa ke khada ho gya......


Excitment m uske kaan garam ho gaye. The . Saans bhi bhut mushkil se le paa raha tha .....

Or piche se radha ke karib khada ho gya.......

Radha ne ek dam se piche mud ke dekha...or dar gayi...or usne dekha ki ravi uski kamar ko dekh raha h.....

Radha se kamar ko chhupana bhi nhi ban pada....bas muh aage ko kar liya.....

Tabhi Ravi aage badha or radha ko piche se pakad liya apne aagosh m
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Or radha ke gale m chumban lene laga.....bhut pyar se.....
Radha ke body se..pears sabun ki khushbu aa rahi thi.....

Ravi bas chumta rha....

Or fir hath usne kadak urozoo m rakh diya.....or halke se daba liya ....

Radha ne masti m sir piche ko kar liya.....lekin apni awaz ko control m rakhi....

Karib 1 min baad ravi ka right hand Radha ke pet se hote hue...niche ko jane laga...or ravi ne apna hath...uske tango ke jod pe rakh diya ..saree ke upper se....
Or apni hatheli se dabane laga.....

Radha ye dhora hamla nhi jhel payi....
Or wo..ravi ka hath pakadne lagi ...or jhuk gayi...jisse ki ravi aache tarah se uski yoni ko nhi pakad paaye ....

Ravi ne fir se left haath se uske urozz ko daba diya jisse radha sidhe khadi ho gayi...or ravi ke sine ke share ladhar lete hue....ravi ke shoulder m sir rakh liya piche ko.....

Ab ravi aram se radha ki yoni ko saree ke upper se hi masalne laga dheere dheere.....
Or uske gale ko Apne thuk se gila karne laga ...


Radha moan karne lagi...orboli....


Rd::. Siiiiii ....siiiiiii....koi....aa jaayegaaaaaa.......chorte dddddooooo naaa......siiiii........aram see......darwaza khula...h ...( Masti m dhere se ravi ke right hath ke upper hath rakhte hue)

Ravi kuch nhi bola ..bas Apne ling ko uske guda dwar m dalne ki koshish karte raha...lekin saree hone ke karan kha sambhav tha.....

Ravi bethasa radha ko chumban dene laga....kabhi uske gale m...kabhi kaan ke piche ...or saree ke upper uski mast jawan yoni ko masalne laga .....


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Flymovers777 Bro....... we don't know we hv right to give suggestions or not..... but.....u hv so amazing writing skills.... so can't resist to request our ideas or suggestions..... just request....don't show there relation to be known by everyone..... means there lovestory beinbetween them.... and don't show deepika with any other male character.... physically or emotionaly regarding sexually..... keep her only for ravi and nobody else.... and gupta should also not fulfill his evil desires or deepika relation with ravi and family..... keep deepika innocent as she hv shown till now in whole story....... dono ki shaadi bhi dikhana... in temple.... far away from home.... both know abt this marriage of their..... and in end of story give birth to ravi child.... un dono k pyar ki nishaani....means happy ending rakhna jab bhi end karo story..... pld don't mind.....if u don't like my suggestions..... we just love ur story...... so gave our thoughts to be a part od story..... we know with ur superb writing skills u can mk it happen..... thanks one again for superb story...bura mat manana kisi baat/suggestion ka... tk cr..... be safe......
Heads off for you bro.......🙏🙏

Really what a nice thinking you have......I am so happy....same jaise maine socha h...wo hi....keh diya apne.....so good for you....

I promise apko nirasha nhi hogi.......bas ending thoda surprise hoga....but accha hoga....app tension na karo....

Deepika acchi lady h or hamesa acchi rahegi....
Main Deepika ko Asia dikhana chata hu..ki hum sab log usko life ke end tak yaad rakhe ki...asi bhi koi lady h.....

Real world m koi deepika or ravi nhi h.....but apni soch m hum log unko zinda rakhenge......

Ye story kewal erotic ke liye nhi h.... erotic part to bus bich m mood changes karne ko h ....but jo pyar or care isme dekhne ko milega....wo accha hona chahiye......

Thank you..apka ki app ek acchi soch ke sath isko padh rahe ho ...
Thank you so much bro....God bless you....😊😊😊😊
 

Rocky9i

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Jabardast hot update ki surwat ho gaya re baba
 
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Ravi bethasa radha ko chumban dene laga....kabhi uske gale m...kabhi kaan ke piche ...or saree ke upper uski mast jawan yoni ko masalne laga .....

Ab aage::::

Rd:: SIIII siiiiiiiiii....siiiiiiii darwaza khula hhhjj...... aaaannnnnn...nhi......dard ho raha h...Wha...( Ravi ka hath pakdete hue)

R:: bnd kar aaya hu.....( Dhere se kaan ko chumate hue)


Or jab radha dubara se niche ko jhuk gayi...to ravi piche hath gaya ... or radha fir se khadi ho gayi or tez tez hafne lagi .....

Tabhi Ravi usko kitchen ki deewar ke sahare khada kar diya....

Or piche se nice beth gaya or radha ki kamar ko chumane laga.....radha ne dono hath deewar pe rakhe the ...

Ab usko pata tha ki door bnd h to koi nhi aayega.... isliye wo bhi is pal ka anand lena chati thi ..bina kisi tension ke....

Ravi uski kamar chumte raha...or dhere dhere aage badhata raha upper ko..


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Or fir ravi khada ho gaya.....or radha ko sidha kar diya....


Ravi radha ke gale m kiss karta hua...apna haath uske bade fule hue kulhon m masalne laga......radha ank khul ke awaz nikal rahi thi ....

Rd:: aaannnhhhh aannnnnnhhhhh Aaannnnhhhhhh......siiiiii aaaaannnnhhhhhh........

Radha ka pallu to niche gir gaya tha....ravi sarre khichne laga uski kamar se.....
Radha kitchen m hi nangi hone wali thi....ajjjj.



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Ravi ne pehle uski saree khinchi fir radha ko Apne ling m daba diya ...ravi ka khad aling side Radha ki chut se takraya....

Radha mast ho gayi thi....or fir se gili hone lagi thi ...ravi radha ke honth chusne laga...ab khade kahde ...or sath m uske khulhe masalne laga...jaise keh raha ho...

Aji de de yaha.

Ravi ne honth chuste chupate radha ko diwar ke sahare kar diyaaa.....

Radha sab bhool chuki thi ki wo kha h.....

Wo bas ravi ke kandhon pe hath rakhe hue ..ravi se garam ho rahi thi chudane ko.....


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Ravi radha ke honth chusta or katta raha ....


Kitchen m Radha ki sitkari ki aawaz aa rahi thi....or kissing ki awaz...or sath m radha ki chudiyon ki awaz thi ....

Radha ki saree piche se nikal chuki thi uske petikot se....or uski...panty ka shape saaf dikh raha tha uske peticot ke bahar.....


Ravi ne uski panty ki side ki lastik se uske nitambon main hath dala...jisse isaka peticot bhi panty ke ander hath ke sath chala gya ....

Kafi der wasie hi radha ke khule masalne ke baad ravi petikot upper karne laga ...or radha ko Apne ling pe dabane laga .. or radha ka left per upper uthane laga.....

Rasha bechan hone lagi...ling ke yoni ke upper ragadne se......

Tabhi Ravi ne uske jangh se hote hue...uski chaddi m hath dalne laga......




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Ravi uski chaddi ke bhar se hi uski chut kuredane laga...or radha ke honth m smooch lene laga ....
Radha se bardasht nhi hua...or usne Apne left hath se zor se ravi ki right hand ki baju pakad li ...or ghutne mod ke bethne lagi .....


Radha ki halt kharab thi....ravi ne bhi thoda jhuk ke aakhir kar uski yoni m do anguliyon ko ander ko sarka diya.....

Radha pagal ho gayi or boli.....

Rd:::: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh...SIIII.....mtttt kaaarrrrrooooooooo naaaaaa.....mar jaungi....... aaaaiiiiyaaaa.....siiiiiiiiiiiii......unnnnnnnnnnnn.....unnnnnnnn.....raviiiiiiiiii....siii...raviiiiiiiiiiiiiii.....keh rahhhhiiiii hunnnnn...( Ravi ke baal khinchte hue)


Ravi ne radha ko chir diya...or apna lower niche kar diya or apna ling bhar nikal diya......


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Radha ank din ke ujale m ravi ka ling dekh rahi thi.....radha ko samj nhi aaya wo kya kare.....

Bas hafte hue apni saree sametne lagi.....

usko itni himmat nhi thi..ki ab wo kahde rahe ...to wahi sleb pakad ke hafne lagi....or apni saree se apna joban dhakne lagi.....

Ravi Uske pass gya..Radha uske ling ko dekh rahi thi nazar chura ke ..or saree.ko thik karne lagi....

To be continued....
 
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