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Adultery Meri fantasy ( Adultery/Romance)

Golu_nd

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Yaar aage ki story week ho jayegi..ager ye point nhi liya to....
Hero Ravi hai..lekin har chizz hero ko hi mile. Ye hona mushkil hai ..
Madhu ke sasur ka role aage bhut effect karega ..ager usko bhi silent kar diya to..story main bas ravi or baki ladies hi rahenge....

Madhu ke ghar se bhi ek 2 character aayenge .kyonki...uske liye...uske ghar ki situation dikhana zaroori hai...

Ek ravi ke sahare Kitna story ko khinchenge.?? Har baar sex sex hi rahega.. ravi ka abhi highschool bhi h...to usko padhai m bussy rakhana bhi zaroori hai....
Nhi to story real nhi lagegi...

Main to Deepika hai...madhu to side role main hai...

Baki aap log jaise bolo...

Lekin mere hisab se yaha pe twist hona zaroori hai...

Pls sab log suggestions do ki kya karna chaiye...nhi to fir kuch or tatha se sochenge..story ko aage badhne ko....

Bus Kuch bhi boliye lekin wo bhai ,behan ,maa wala chor ke...

Main wait karunga aap sab ka...usi hisab se story aage badhegi....

Thank you app sabhi ka ki story m interest le rahe ho ..

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Thik h bhai jesa apne socha h jese hi likhe sasur ko RAVI ke mukable kamjor hi rkhna taki RAVI sab ke dil aur dimag me basa rhe
Baki ap ho best to jese ap chao
Best👍💯 of U
 

rajpoot01

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bhai kahani mai twist laiyeye

lakin sasur bahu mai maja nahi ayega

kyonki hero se chudne ke baad madhu sasur ki JABARDASTI hi hogi


wo to uske pass jayegi nahi

thoda bahut karwa kar blackmail madhu aur RAVI se karwao sasur ko

taki hero ki power aur bade








baki aapki marji


a silent reader


RAJPOOT
 
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Alok

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Waiting for next update....
 

Sk.

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भाई साहब
अब तक की कहानी के सफर में जितने किरदार आप ने पेश किए हैं।
उनमें दीपिका और मधु सब से मजबूत किरदार हैं, लेकिन इनका किसी और के साथ सम्भोग दिखाना,
इनके किरदार को कमज़ोर करेगा भाई सहाब।
बाकी आप की कहानी है आप ने कुछ अछा सोचा होगा।
 

jatin thakur

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Yaar aage ki story week ho jayegi..ager ye point nhi liya to....
Hero Ravi hai..lekin har chizz hero ko hi mile. Ye hona mushkil hai ..
Madhu ke sasur ka role aage bhut effect karega ..ager usko bhi silent kar diya to..story main bas ravi or baki ladies hi rahenge....

Madhu ke ghar se bhi ek 2 character aayenge .kyonki...uske liye...uske ghar ki situation dikhana zaroori hai...

Ek ravi ke sahare Kitna story ko khinchenge.?? Har baar sex sex hi rahega.. ravi ka abhi highschool bhi h...to usko padhai m bussy rakhana bhi zaroori hai....
Nhi to story real nhi lagegi...

Main to Deepika hai...madhu to side role main hai...

Baki aap log jaise bolo...

Lekin mere hisab se yaha pe twist hona zaroori hai...

Pls sab log suggestions do ki kya karna chaiye...nhi to fir kuch or tatha se sochenge..story ko aage badhne ko....

Bus Kuch bhi boliye lekin wo bhai ,behan ,maa wala chor ke...

Main wait karunga aap sab ka...usi hisab se story aage badhegi....

Thank you app sabhi ka ki story m interest le rahe ho ..

☺️☺️☺️
Bhai please in characters ke sath hero ke alawa kisi aur ko nhi.. vidhya ke sath jo krna hai aap kr skte hai kyun ki uska character aapne sure se hi aisa dikhaya hai. But madhu,suneeta, radha, Deepika in sb ka character bahut hi clean dikhya hai. To aisa hi sahi lagta hai. Baki sir aapki mrji. We trust your writing skills. Jo bhi aap likhoge mst hoga.
 

raghav1992

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me suggestion nahi doonga bhai kyunki meri nazariya apki nazariya se mel nahi khati so aap jo bi likhe muje manjoor hai or har haal me mai padunga story chahe achi ho yaa bura or haan kuch logonki baat se me sehmat hu ki sirf ravi sex naa kare jo ki baad me boring lagne lagta hai

sasur bahu ka tho me kuch nahi kahunga lakin ravi jitni kheenchna mat kyunki jaise hum log ravi ko lead role diya hai tho koi or jyada maza le ravi ke hote hue ye thoda khatak sakta hai baaki apki jo bi marzi ya nazariya hoga shat pratishat manjoor hai
 
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Bhai please in characters ke sath hero ke alawa kisi aur ko nhi.. vidhya ke sath jo krna hai aap kr skte hai kyun ki uska character aapne sure se hi aisa dikhaya hai. But madhu,suneeta, radha, Deepika in sb ka character bahut hi clean dikhya hai. To aisa hi sahi lagta hai. Baki sir aapki mrji. We trust your writing skills. Jo bhi aap likhoge mst hoga.
Jatin bhai aap sahi kah rahe ho.ki maine sunita Deepika or madhu radha ko clean dikhaya hai.

Lekin kabhi kabhi kuch hard decision lena padhta hai life main..
Story main kuch na kuch aisa karna padega nhi to story ka end aa jayega...

Or sahi bolu to main is story main kisi bhi character ko hero ya heroine nhi manta..ye story ek normal life ke tarh hi hai..
Main nhi chata ki jo main character hain unke sath bas sab aacha hi ho ...jaise ki other movie main dikhate hain.ki wo hero hai to sab kuch usko hi aacha milega...usko kitni bhi goli lag jaye wo bach jayega... Wo marega hi nhi...naa wo real nhi h ...

Madhu or uske sasur ka intimate scenes dikhane ke kuch reason hain. Jo main abhi open nhi Kar sakta...

Ravi ke nature main Kuch badlav Lana hoga....kab tak wo ek bacche ke jaise rahega....
Abhi tak usko sab kuch aacha hi mila hai...thoda thokar bhi khilana zaroori hai ...

Ye main sunita ke sath bhi kar sakta tha..but sunita bhut simple hI...wahi Madhu thoda mordern hai ....

Or Virendra or gupta prakash jaise character bhi to chaiye...nhi to bas ravi ko baar baar koi na koi milegi or wo bas sex karega ....

Challenge hona zaroori h ..abhi usko bhut kuch dekhna hai...
Ho sakta hai Deepika or gupta ka past bhi sayad sun le wo...tab us pe kya bitegi wo dekhna hai ..

Abhi to sab kuch aacha hi mila hai...

Main janta hu bhut logo ko ye accha nhi lagega...but life main hamesa hi hamko positive mile ye zaroori to nhi....

Negative milega tavi postive ki value pata chalegi....


Or sach m accha laga app logo ne suggestions diye...bhut se silent readers bhi aage aaye...

Main to sochta tha ki 4,5 log hi padhte honge ye story...🤭🤭.
Really majak nhi kar raha hu...main ye hi sochta tha....

Main is story ko alag tarah se likhna chata hu...taki koi bhi pade to usko story na lage..ek real life ke jaise experience ho..jaise normal hamari life main Roz hota hai....

Thank you aap sabhi ka...you are wonderful readers....
Stay tuned....☺️☺️
 
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