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Sale police ko bula leta main bhi napta tere chakkar m...ghar to mera h....
Mahendr kuch nhi bola bas bike le kar ghar ko aagya ...
3 baje or ravi bhi tution ko chala gya ..usne vivek se kuch nhi bola...
Ab aage::
Sham ko tution se aaya to ravi vivek se bola...
R:: sun wo tere ghar ke pass wo dukan hai na??( Thoda serious ho ke)
V:: Haan mahendra bhaiya ki...kyn??( Cycle m chadye hue)
R:. Hmmm ..chlega uske dukan pe kaam h...
V:: Haan chal ...kya kama h??
R:: hai chal tu ...( Sochte hue)
V:: usse jo kya kaam ho gaya tujhe..??hamesa to dukan band hi kare rehta h wo....( Ravi se Bolte hue)
Ravi kuch nhi bola bas cycle ke kar chale gaya ..
Vivek sochta hua uske piche piche aane laga...
Thodi der bad dono mahendra ki dukan pe phuche...
Ravi ne vivek ko wahi pe rukne ko bola
Mahendra ki dukan pe kafi log bhi the...wo saman de raha tha logo ko..
Or jaise hi usne ravi ko dekha uske hath per fulne lage..
Halnki wo ravi se kafi bada tha ..lekin jis tarah se ravi ne din m usko thoka tha...wo dar gaya..kyonki galti uski hi thi...
Mahendr hungama na ho isliye dukan se bhar aa gya...
Or ravi bina dar ke uski ankhon m dekhta hua uske pass aya...
Mahendr ne socha thoda daryega ravi ko to aake bola..
M:: kya hai be??( Gusse m)
R:: akele m baat karega ya inke samne hi nanga karu tujhe???( Dhare se logo ko dekh ke)
M:: kya karega tu?? Haan??( Bhaduri dikhate hue)
R:. Tu bol to sahi pata chal jayega main kya karunga...( Mahendr ki ankh m dekhte hue)
M:: baccha h bacche ki tarh reh...wahi marta tuje teri wo anju ke samne ..( gusse se dhere se vivek ko dur khada dekh ke)
R:: accha le maar ..aa gya abhi...fir soch tera kya hoga...wo ladka dekh raha h na...ager uske baap Ko bol diya na..beta teri *** faad ke hath m de dega...( Vivek ke or ishara karke)
Mahendr thoda dar gaya...vivek ke pitaji ki aachi pahunch thi ye wo janta tha...to bola...
M:: kya baat h bol ..( thoda aatitude m)
R:: sun ager fir se uski didi ke Piche pada ..to tu janta hi h...mujhe baacha mat samj...dimag ghumega...to tu janta nhi m kya karunga..aukat m rehna apni ...jitna h utna hi reh...mujhe dikhna nhi chaiye tu uske aas paas bhi ..
Tera jo hua hua...ab natak mat karna...or kya bol raha tha tu...apne dost ke sath karne ko...madar**** sharm nhi aati tujhe...ek to usko jabardasti le gaya ..upper se...bhut kamina h tu ....( Dhere se dant piste hue)
Mahendr samj gaya ki baat bigad jayegi...ye sanki ladka kuch bhi kar dega to bola...
M:: thik h main nhi karunga...usse bhi bola dena mujhe phone nhi karegi....wo kam nhi h...or pehli Baar nhi gayi h mere sath...shadi se pehle bhi jati thi...paise ke liye usne wo police wale se shadi kar li ...
Yakeen na ho to puch le tu...tere samne kehbrahi thi...mujhe zabrdasti laya...
Pehle kud aarati thi mere sath...thik h aaj se wo Apne raste m apne raste....
Thik h wo hogi paise wale baap ki ladki ..mujhe dhokha de kar usse shadi kar li...pehle kun boli wo..ki shadi ke baad bhi milungi???( Ravi ko dekh ke Apne man ki bhadas nikalte hue)
Tabi vivek ne ravi ko awaz di ....
Ravi ne usko Wahi rukne ko bola...
Or mahendra se bola ..
.R:: dekh jo hua so hua...maine abhi tak kisi ko nhi bola h...khali tere liye thik nhi hoga... isliye bol raha hu...uske piche mat pad ..Haan wo tune phone nhi karegi...or na main aunga tere ghar...( Thoda aache se samjte hue)
M:: tere relation m h wo???( Normal ho ke)
R:: Haan ..uska pati mera dur ka bhai lagta h ..maine uske pati ko nhi bola h...bata diya to na tu bachega na wo... isliye ho gaya bhut...( Mahendr ko darne ko bola).
M:: are m socha teri behan lagti hogi...tu bolta m usko bol deta karne ko...teri bhabhi hi to lagti...tu bhi majja ke leta...kasam se karara maal h teri bhabhi...kha wo buddhe kale admi se shadi kar li....meri baat man dono mil jate h...majje karenge.... ..( ravi ko dekh ke kamini muskaan dete hue).
Ravi ne mutthi bhinch li...lekin vivek tha to usko dekha or mahendr ko daant piste hue bola...
R:: Bdsk dimag mat khrab kar mera...kya chu*** admi h re tu??...jahil hai kya...bol raha hu . dur reh...tere jaise nich nhi hu..jo aurat ki izzat nilam kare ..
Tere sath wo Apne mann se aati or khud karti to bhad m jaye wo ..or tu....
Tu zabrdasti kar raha tha uske sath...( Gusse se Bolte hue lekin dhere se bola vivek sun na le)
M:: thik h thik h sorry... ..uska phone nhi aana chahiye...bol dena usko...( Thoda gusse se)
R:: bol raha hu na nhi aayega...baat khtam or zaida dimag mat laga .....( Thoda zor se)
Fir mahendra apni dukan ko chala gya...wo bhi is chakkar m nhi padna chata tha...
Or fir ravi vivek ke paas aaya vivek usse puchne laga ..
V:. Kya hua isse kya kaam or kya baat kar rahe the tum dono( thoda shak karte hue)
.R:: are mama ne bola tha...iska khet h qJa iske janwar aate h khet m ti bola tha bandh ke rakhna...( Baat ghumate hue)
V:: iske janwar tumhare waha???( Sochte hue)
R: tu dimag mat laga...chal ja raha hu m..( cycle m chadye hue)
Or fir vivek bhi Apne ghar chala gya or ravi aate hue sochne laga..
Anju karti thi isko phone???ye bhi kam nhi h...
Karega hi ladka jab line degi to...kal pata chal jata... bewkuff aurat...vivek keg raha tha bhut danti h...or khud ke kaam Ase hain .hunnnhhhh....
Accha hua chala gya...nhi to pata chalta kal kya hota h...iska dost or ye kar dete zindagi barbad....( Anju ko koste hue)
Ravi ka mood khrab tha ..usne thodi der Deepika se bat ki .. Deepika usse puchte rahi ki kya hua...lekin usne sir dard ka bhana bna diya ..
Uska aaj kisi se baat karne ka mood nhi tha ...
Ase hi 9 baj gaya..
Anju or ruma sham ko apne ghar aa Gye...
Anju mahendr ki dukan ke side se nhi aayi .. bagiche wale raste se aa gayi ghar...
Anju ke dimag m din bhar ravi ki baat aane lagi ki kaise ravi ne usko aaj bacha liya...nhi to ramesh or mahendr usko kahi ka bhi chorte...
Wo ghar m bethi sochne lagi...
Bhagwan bacha liya tune...kya karti nhi to main... mahendr pe Kitna bharosa kiya...or ye kamina kahi ka ..
Ravi matlab picha kar raha tha...usne jo kyon bachaya hoga mujhe...wo to mujhe janta bhi nhi h...
Us din bagiche m dekh liya tha .. sayad sun liya hoga ..or kisi ne to nhi suna..
Ravi na bata de Vicky ko ..
Waise itna chota h...fir bhi mujhe bachne ko mahendr se lad gaya...
Bhut accha ladka h...raste m kuch bola bhi nhi....
Kaise jaungi yar uske samne....uske man m nhi h mere liye kuch galt...
Dekha nhi jab meri salwar niche giri to nazar hata di usne...
Salwar girne se kya hota h anju...itna sab to dekh hi liya..tabhi to aa gya ander...thodi der or hoti to or ager ramesh bhi aa jata...
Soch ke bhi dar lag raha h...ye kamine mahendr ko to bataungi...faida utya kutte ne mera .
Keh rha tha baat karunga...or waha ja ke...chiii...gussa aa rha h...kaise iske jhanse m aa gayi main...
Ab ravi ke samne kaise jaungi...
Nhi bhi kal chale jati hu...ghar...or monu ke papa ke sath hi rahungi...
Bhagwan unko pata nhi chala nhi to mujhe goli mar denge...
Ravi se bolungi ..mat batana ...lekin kaise bolungi...ek baar baat karni padegi ..fir ghar chale jaungi...mujhe kuch ho jayega to mere bacche kon dekhega...iske papa ka to kya h..dusri shadi kar lenge...or ere bacche...( Tension m sochte hue)
Wahi ruma ka ravi se baat karne ka mann ho rah tha...pati se to ladai hui thi...lekin anju ke samne kaise karegi..
Wahi sonali...ka bhi mood off tha ki aaj baat nhi ho payegi...
Kal raat jo usko baat karke mazza mila tha...waisa majja kabhi nhi mila....uska bhut man tha...lekin sayad aaj nhi kar payegi...
Ravi ke ghar m...
Ravi padhne m Dyan lagne laga...lekin man nhi kar raha tha..baar baar mahendr ke bole shabd yaad aa rahe the ki...wo to pehle bhi aati thi...
Uska mann kiya ki abhi jaye vivek ke ghar or 2 thappad mare anju ko..
Or book band karke let gaya...
Or thodi der m Niid bhi aa gayi...
Pehle din ki tarh sonali ke sath Neha soyi or ruma ke sath anju....
Thodi der baad ruma to so hi gayi wo janti thi baat ho nhi payegi...
Lekin anju ko Niid nhi aa rahi thi...
Uske dimag m din ki baat ghum rahi thi...kabhi Apne gussel pati ke bare m sochti to kabhi mahendr to kabhi ravi ke bare m...
Aisa nhi tha wo ravi ke tarf aakarshit ho gayi thi...lekin wo ravi se baat karna chati thi ki...pls kisi ko uske bare m na bataye...
Wo bhagwan se dua mangne lagi ki ek bar bas ravi se baat ho jaye...
Wahi sonali bechain thi bed m...sham ko bhi ravi se baat nhi kar pati thi...na hi ravi ajj din m aaya tha...
Wo sochne lagi...
Kahi Ravi gussa to nhi hua ...kl maine phone kaat diya to...tabhi nhi aaya hoga ..
Or ajj sham ko milne bhi nhi aaya....ab kaise bolti m ...sharm aa rahi thi mujhe...
Uff kaise kaise baat kar raha tha...mujhe ye dekhna h mujhe wo dekhna h....ufff....main bhi kaise bol rahi thi ki...or or or.....
Hai re kya soch raha hoga mere bare m...
Usko pata to nhi chala hoga na main kya kar rahi thi usse bat karte time ..
Sach m ghar ja ke wo hi karega kya...jo keh raha tha...
Riya bhi to hogi....ghar main ..mar to mar jaungi ..kaise karungi wo sab jo ravi keh raha tha...
Kaise bol raha tha...mujhe apki panty m hath dalna h....uffff.....
Ghar m to koi bhi nhi hoga...riya bhi so jati h zaldi ..uske baad usne wo sab kiya to ..kaise karungi main?? Mujse nhi hoga wo sab ...
Sonali ka dil::..accha bhut sidhi ban rahi h..to kyon le ja rahi h ghar??wo to karega hi...usne to bol bhi diya h...main ungliyan chatunga apki....uff pata nhi kha kha chatega sonali...( Hanste hue)..
Sonali ka mind:: na na main nhi karungi ..main to ghar dikhane le ja rahi hu .baat karu hi bas...( Sharmate hue)
Sonali ka dil:: accha tujhe lagta h...wo bas baat karega...kahi riya ke samne hi wo sab karne lagega to??? Tu mana kar degi ...tera mann nhi hoga akele m wo sab karne ka??(( Muskurate hue sochne lagi)..
Mind:: mujhe nhi pata ...main to bas baat karne ko le ja rahi hu....( Shrm se hanste hue)
Dil:: keh nhi raha tha bus m shawl dhak lena....hai re...Kitna wo hai ravi...(shrma ke hanste hue)
Mind:: salwar suit pehna lungi...bus main saree se problem hoti h...( Sochte hue)..
Dil:: Haan problem to hogi hi saree uthani padegi...salwar m to kya bas nara hi kholna h( muskurate hue planing karne lagi)
Mind:: main nhi karne dungi kuch bhi dekh lena...( Ravi ko pyar se yaad karke)
Ase hi sochte hue so gayi....
To be continued...
Mahendr kuch nhi bola bas bike le kar ghar ko aagya ...
3 baje or ravi bhi tution ko chala gya ..usne vivek se kuch nhi bola...
Ab aage::
Sham ko tution se aaya to ravi vivek se bola...
R:: sun wo tere ghar ke pass wo dukan hai na??( Thoda serious ho ke)
V:: Haan mahendra bhaiya ki...kyn??( Cycle m chadye hue)
R:. Hmmm ..chlega uske dukan pe kaam h...
V:: Haan chal ...kya kama h??
R:: hai chal tu ...( Sochte hue)
V:: usse jo kya kaam ho gaya tujhe..??hamesa to dukan band hi kare rehta h wo....( Ravi se Bolte hue)
Ravi kuch nhi bola bas cycle ke kar chale gaya ..
Vivek sochta hua uske piche piche aane laga...
Thodi der bad dono mahendra ki dukan pe phuche...
Ravi ne vivek ko wahi pe rukne ko bola
Mahendra ki dukan pe kafi log bhi the...wo saman de raha tha logo ko..
Or jaise hi usne ravi ko dekha uske hath per fulne lage..
Halnki wo ravi se kafi bada tha ..lekin jis tarah se ravi ne din m usko thoka tha...wo dar gaya..kyonki galti uski hi thi...
Mahendr hungama na ho isliye dukan se bhar aa gya...
Or ravi bina dar ke uski ankhon m dekhta hua uske pass aya...
Mahendr ne socha thoda daryega ravi ko to aake bola..
M:: kya hai be??( Gusse m)
R:: akele m baat karega ya inke samne hi nanga karu tujhe???( Dhare se logo ko dekh ke)
M:: kya karega tu?? Haan??( Bhaduri dikhate hue)
R:. Tu bol to sahi pata chal jayega main kya karunga...( Mahendr ki ankh m dekhte hue)
M:: baccha h bacche ki tarh reh...wahi marta tuje teri wo anju ke samne ..( gusse se dhere se vivek ko dur khada dekh ke)
R:: accha le maar ..aa gya abhi...fir soch tera kya hoga...wo ladka dekh raha h na...ager uske baap Ko bol diya na..beta teri *** faad ke hath m de dega...( Vivek ke or ishara karke)
Mahendr thoda dar gaya...vivek ke pitaji ki aachi pahunch thi ye wo janta tha...to bola...
M:: kya baat h bol ..( thoda aatitude m)
R:: sun ager fir se uski didi ke Piche pada ..to tu janta hi h...mujhe baacha mat samj...dimag ghumega...to tu janta nhi m kya karunga..aukat m rehna apni ...jitna h utna hi reh...mujhe dikhna nhi chaiye tu uske aas paas bhi ..
Tera jo hua hua...ab natak mat karna...or kya bol raha tha tu...apne dost ke sath karne ko...madar**** sharm nhi aati tujhe...ek to usko jabardasti le gaya ..upper se...bhut kamina h tu ....( Dhere se dant piste hue)
Mahendr samj gaya ki baat bigad jayegi...ye sanki ladka kuch bhi kar dega to bola...
M:: thik h main nhi karunga...usse bhi bola dena mujhe phone nhi karegi....wo kam nhi h...or pehli Baar nhi gayi h mere sath...shadi se pehle bhi jati thi...paise ke liye usne wo police wale se shadi kar li ...
Yakeen na ho to puch le tu...tere samne kehbrahi thi...mujhe zabrdasti laya...
Pehle kud aarati thi mere sath...thik h aaj se wo Apne raste m apne raste....
Thik h wo hogi paise wale baap ki ladki ..mujhe dhokha de kar usse shadi kar li...pehle kun boli wo..ki shadi ke baad bhi milungi???( Ravi ko dekh ke Apne man ki bhadas nikalte hue)
Tabi vivek ne ravi ko awaz di ....
Ravi ne usko Wahi rukne ko bola...
Or mahendra se bola ..
.R:: dekh jo hua so hua...maine abhi tak kisi ko nhi bola h...khali tere liye thik nhi hoga... isliye bol raha hu...uske piche mat pad ..Haan wo tune phone nhi karegi...or na main aunga tere ghar...( Thoda aache se samjte hue)
M:: tere relation m h wo???( Normal ho ke)
R:: Haan ..uska pati mera dur ka bhai lagta h ..maine uske pati ko nhi bola h...bata diya to na tu bachega na wo... isliye ho gaya bhut...( Mahendr ko darne ko bola).
M:: are m socha teri behan lagti hogi...tu bolta m usko bol deta karne ko...teri bhabhi hi to lagti...tu bhi majja ke leta...kasam se karara maal h teri bhabhi...kha wo buddhe kale admi se shadi kar li....meri baat man dono mil jate h...majje karenge.... ..( ravi ko dekh ke kamini muskaan dete hue).
Ravi ne mutthi bhinch li...lekin vivek tha to usko dekha or mahendr ko daant piste hue bola...
R:: Bdsk dimag mat khrab kar mera...kya chu*** admi h re tu??...jahil hai kya...bol raha hu . dur reh...tere jaise nich nhi hu..jo aurat ki izzat nilam kare ..
Tere sath wo Apne mann se aati or khud karti to bhad m jaye wo ..or tu....
Tu zabrdasti kar raha tha uske sath...( Gusse se Bolte hue lekin dhere se bola vivek sun na le)
M:: thik h thik h sorry... ..uska phone nhi aana chahiye...bol dena usko...( Thoda gusse se)
R:: bol raha hu na nhi aayega...baat khtam or zaida dimag mat laga .....( Thoda zor se)
Fir mahendra apni dukan ko chala gya...wo bhi is chakkar m nhi padna chata tha...
Or fir ravi vivek ke paas aaya vivek usse puchne laga ..
V:. Kya hua isse kya kaam or kya baat kar rahe the tum dono( thoda shak karte hue)
.R:: are mama ne bola tha...iska khet h qJa iske janwar aate h khet m ti bola tha bandh ke rakhna...( Baat ghumate hue)
V:: iske janwar tumhare waha???( Sochte hue)
R: tu dimag mat laga...chal ja raha hu m..( cycle m chadye hue)
Or fir vivek bhi Apne ghar chala gya or ravi aate hue sochne laga..
Anju karti thi isko phone???ye bhi kam nhi h...
Karega hi ladka jab line degi to...kal pata chal jata... bewkuff aurat...vivek keg raha tha bhut danti h...or khud ke kaam Ase hain .hunnnhhhh....
Accha hua chala gya...nhi to pata chalta kal kya hota h...iska dost or ye kar dete zindagi barbad....( Anju ko koste hue)
Ravi ka mood khrab tha ..usne thodi der Deepika se bat ki .. Deepika usse puchte rahi ki kya hua...lekin usne sir dard ka bhana bna diya ..
Uska aaj kisi se baat karne ka mood nhi tha ...
Ase hi 9 baj gaya..
Anju or ruma sham ko apne ghar aa Gye...
Anju mahendr ki dukan ke side se nhi aayi .. bagiche wale raste se aa gayi ghar...
Anju ke dimag m din bhar ravi ki baat aane lagi ki kaise ravi ne usko aaj bacha liya...nhi to ramesh or mahendr usko kahi ka bhi chorte...
Wo ghar m bethi sochne lagi...
Bhagwan bacha liya tune...kya karti nhi to main... mahendr pe Kitna bharosa kiya...or ye kamina kahi ka ..
Ravi matlab picha kar raha tha...usne jo kyon bachaya hoga mujhe...wo to mujhe janta bhi nhi h...
Us din bagiche m dekh liya tha .. sayad sun liya hoga ..or kisi ne to nhi suna..
Ravi na bata de Vicky ko ..
Waise itna chota h...fir bhi mujhe bachne ko mahendr se lad gaya...
Bhut accha ladka h...raste m kuch bola bhi nhi....
Kaise jaungi yar uske samne....uske man m nhi h mere liye kuch galt...
Dekha nhi jab meri salwar niche giri to nazar hata di usne...
Salwar girne se kya hota h anju...itna sab to dekh hi liya..tabhi to aa gya ander...thodi der or hoti to or ager ramesh bhi aa jata...
Soch ke bhi dar lag raha h...ye kamine mahendr ko to bataungi...faida utya kutte ne mera .
Keh rha tha baat karunga...or waha ja ke...chiii...gussa aa rha h...kaise iske jhanse m aa gayi main...
Ab ravi ke samne kaise jaungi...
Nhi bhi kal chale jati hu...ghar...or monu ke papa ke sath hi rahungi...
Bhagwan unko pata nhi chala nhi to mujhe goli mar denge...
Ravi se bolungi ..mat batana ...lekin kaise bolungi...ek baar baat karni padegi ..fir ghar chale jaungi...mujhe kuch ho jayega to mere bacche kon dekhega...iske papa ka to kya h..dusri shadi kar lenge...or ere bacche...( Tension m sochte hue)
Wahi ruma ka ravi se baat karne ka mann ho rah tha...pati se to ladai hui thi...lekin anju ke samne kaise karegi..
Wahi sonali...ka bhi mood off tha ki aaj baat nhi ho payegi...
Kal raat jo usko baat karke mazza mila tha...waisa majja kabhi nhi mila....uska bhut man tha...lekin sayad aaj nhi kar payegi...
Ravi ke ghar m...
Ravi padhne m Dyan lagne laga...lekin man nhi kar raha tha..baar baar mahendr ke bole shabd yaad aa rahe the ki...wo to pehle bhi aati thi...
Uska mann kiya ki abhi jaye vivek ke ghar or 2 thappad mare anju ko..
Or book band karke let gaya...
Or thodi der m Niid bhi aa gayi...
Pehle din ki tarh sonali ke sath Neha soyi or ruma ke sath anju....
Thodi der baad ruma to so hi gayi wo janti thi baat ho nhi payegi...
Lekin anju ko Niid nhi aa rahi thi...
Uske dimag m din ki baat ghum rahi thi...kabhi Apne gussel pati ke bare m sochti to kabhi mahendr to kabhi ravi ke bare m...
Aisa nhi tha wo ravi ke tarf aakarshit ho gayi thi...lekin wo ravi se baat karna chati thi ki...pls kisi ko uske bare m na bataye...
Wo bhagwan se dua mangne lagi ki ek bar bas ravi se baat ho jaye...
Wahi sonali bechain thi bed m...sham ko bhi ravi se baat nhi kar pati thi...na hi ravi ajj din m aaya tha...
Wo sochne lagi...
Kahi Ravi gussa to nhi hua ...kl maine phone kaat diya to...tabhi nhi aaya hoga ..
Or ajj sham ko milne bhi nhi aaya....ab kaise bolti m ...sharm aa rahi thi mujhe...
Uff kaise kaise baat kar raha tha...mujhe ye dekhna h mujhe wo dekhna h....ufff....main bhi kaise bol rahi thi ki...or or or.....
Hai re kya soch raha hoga mere bare m...
Usko pata to nhi chala hoga na main kya kar rahi thi usse bat karte time ..
Sach m ghar ja ke wo hi karega kya...jo keh raha tha...
Riya bhi to hogi....ghar main ..mar to mar jaungi ..kaise karungi wo sab jo ravi keh raha tha...
Kaise bol raha tha...mujhe apki panty m hath dalna h....uffff.....
Ghar m to koi bhi nhi hoga...riya bhi so jati h zaldi ..uske baad usne wo sab kiya to ..kaise karungi main?? Mujse nhi hoga wo sab ...
Sonali ka dil::..accha bhut sidhi ban rahi h..to kyon le ja rahi h ghar??wo to karega hi...usne to bol bhi diya h...main ungliyan chatunga apki....uff pata nhi kha kha chatega sonali...( Hanste hue)..
Sonali ka mind:: na na main nhi karungi ..main to ghar dikhane le ja rahi hu .baat karu hi bas...( Sharmate hue)
Sonali ka dil:: accha tujhe lagta h...wo bas baat karega...kahi riya ke samne hi wo sab karne lagega to??? Tu mana kar degi ...tera mann nhi hoga akele m wo sab karne ka??(( Muskurate hue sochne lagi)..
Mind:: mujhe nhi pata ...main to bas baat karne ko le ja rahi hu....( Shrm se hanste hue)
Dil:: keh nhi raha tha bus m shawl dhak lena....hai re...Kitna wo hai ravi...(shrma ke hanste hue)
Mind:: salwar suit pehna lungi...bus main saree se problem hoti h...( Sochte hue)..
Dil:: Haan problem to hogi hi saree uthani padegi...salwar m to kya bas nara hi kholna h( muskurate hue planing karne lagi)
Mind:: main nhi karne dungi kuch bhi dekh lena...( Ravi ko pyar se yaad karke)
Ase hi sochte hue so gayi....
To be continued...
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Bhai ab ye reh gaya h dekhne ko.....
Kya faltu ki baat kar rahe ho...jaise story chal rahi h...usko padiye....
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Deepika ka suresh ke prati bhi kuch jimedari h bhai suresh akhir uska pati h
.Esme suresh ke kya galti h uska bhi kuch seen hona chahia. Ab aapke story ha apni jano usne koi interference nahi kar raha hu.Apne deepika ko ek charitra hin aurat bana diya h jo apne pyar karne wale pati ko chor ke ravi pe mohit h.aur ravi ka character to ek alpha nar ke tarah h jiska abhi madal per haq h.Thora practical plot dalo .khali bakre ko bhi ser bana rahe ho.
.Esme suresh ke kya galti h uska bhi kuch seen hona chahia. Ab aapke story ha apni jano usne koi interference nahi kar raha hu.Apne deepika ko ek charitra hin aurat bana diya h jo apne pyar karne wale pati ko chor ke ravi pe mohit h.aur ravi ka character to ek alpha nar ke tarah h jiska abhi madal per haq h.Thora practical plot dalo .khali bakre ko bhi ser bana rahe ho.
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Main kya karu ,Mujhe na bekar hi accha lagta h...or rahi baat Deepika ki wo charitr hin h ya savitri..wo main samj lunga..
Apko charithin nhi pasand to koi baat nhi...
Jimmedari se apka matlab ye hai ki uske jimmedari ka bhana bna ke app apni roti sekane ki soch rahi ho...
Wo uska pati h...to hoga hi sex..usko dikhana kya h...
App ek kaam kariye ek acchi si bina charithin wali koi story likhiye...or usme character ko savitri dikhaye...mujhe koi appti nhi hogi...
Kyonki wo writer ki soch h...wo charithin dikhaye ya kuch bhi ..
Ager Deepika ravi pe mohit na hoti na...to app bhi ye story nhi padh rahe hote..isko yaad rakhiye...
Or rahi baat practical ki ...wo maine bhut kiye h.....
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Or Haan ravi se dikaat h ki usko sabhi mada mil rahi h to ..apke naam ka ek bar character likh dete h...
Fir apka bhi huq hoga...
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Ghisne do bhai.,..jo chlega wo ghisega bhi...
Mujhe ghisne ka tension nhi h...
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This is your property I am not interested to write a new thread in it,but be practical .