Adultery Meri fantasy ( Adultery/Romance)

[Ashish@1234]

Muje reply se koi matlab nhi rehta bhai...ye reply se thodi kuch fark padna hai.youtube thodi h..ye..bas man kiya to likha..
Lekin kuch din se itna zaida unnecessary pressure hai ki man nhi kar raha likhne ka..

Har koi chata hai uske hisab se khani likhi jaye..
Kisi ko sonu ko side karna h...kisi ko radha se sex karwana h..kisi ko kewal ravi hi ravi chaiye..har jagh...
Kiski ko lagta h ki. Sonu ko weak dikha diya..gupta ko strong dikhaya...

Bhai jo kuch bhi likhta hu kuch soch ke hi to likhta hunga..??main koi apni tariff nhi kar raha na kisi se koi Competition kar raha hu...

Bas koi bhi story ho usme logic hona bhut zaroori h...isliye jo kuch bhi likha h wo hi soch ke..jo daily life m hota h hum logo ke sath...

Sonu or radha ka dilhane ka matlab bhi ye hi tha..

Main har kisi ko khush nhi kar sakta...ab kisi ko reply deta hu..to kuch logo ko lagega..main readers ki bezati kar raha hu..

Ab koi ulta hi baat bolega to jawab bhi waise hi milega...

Ab main tabhi likunga..jab mera man hoga...wo kab hoga ye muje bhi nhi pata...zabrdasti likhunga to accha nhi likh paunga..

Lekin m likhunga apne hi hisab se.. kisi ko aacha lage ya bura...
Nhi fark padta...koi bhi mat pade story muje tab bhi koi fark nhi padta...
Kabhi free ho ke main khud hi padh lunga..muje koi tension nhi h uski...

Mera man karta h to likh raha hu...isse mera ghar nhi chalta h yaar...job h...wo first priority h...lekin story puri complete zarror hogi...
M aadhe se bhagne walo main se nhi hu...


Thanks to everyone.

भाई राइटर को तंग ना करे
वर्ना सोनु का गांड मार लेगा रवि

 

[Pyarapenis4u]

Muje reply se koi matlab nhi rehta bhai...ye reply se thodi kuch fark padna hai.youtube thodi h..ye..bas man kiya to likha..
Lekin kuch din se itna zaida unnecessary pressure hai ki man nhi kar raha likhne ka..

Har koi chata hai uske hisab se khani likhi jaye..
Kisi ko sonu ko side karna h...kisi ko radha se sex karwana h..kisi ko kewal ravi hi ravi chaiye..har jagh...
Kiski ko lagta h ki. Sonu ko weak dikha diya..gupta ko strong dikhaya...

Bhai jo kuch bhi likhta hu kuch soch ke hi to likhta hunga..??main koi apni tariff nhi kar raha na kisi se koi Competition kar raha hu...

Bas koi bhi story ho usme logic hona bhut zaroori h...isliye jo kuch bhi likha h wo hi soch ke..jo daily life m hota h hum logo ke sath...

Sonu or radha ka dilhane ka matlab bhi ye hi tha..

Main har kisi ko khush nhi kar sakta...ab kisi ko reply deta hu..to kuch logo ko lagega..main readers ki bezati kar raha hu..

Ab koi ulta hi baat bolega to jawab bhi waise hi milega...

Ab main tabhi likunga..jab mera man hoga...wo kab hoga ye muje bhi nhi pata...zabrdasti likhunga to accha nhi likh paunga..

Lekin m likhunga apne hi hisab se.. kisi ko aacha lage ya bura...
Nhi fark padta...koi bhi mat pade story muje tab bhi koi fark nhi padta...
Kabhi free ho ke main khud hi padh lunga..muje koi tension nhi h uski...

Mera man karta h to likh raha hu...isse mera ghar nhi chalta h yaar...job h...wo first priority h...lekin story puri complete zarror hogi...
M aadhe se bhagne walo main se nhi hu...


Thanks to everyone.

Dost aap bilkul thik bol rahe ho Magar jo readers hain unke angle Se socho. Sab aapki is story ko itna pasand karte hain ke sab apna apna dimag lagate rehte h. It is a victory of your writing that readers are so much connected with this. Unki suggestion ka bura mat Mano. Yahan tak aap apne vision aur hisab se lekar aaye ho aage bhi aap lekar Chalo. Baki bolte hain na ke apna kam Banta ma’am chudaye janta. To bhai aur mat tadpao aur kahani aage badao. Waiting for updates friend.

 

[Ek number]

Muje reply se koi matlab nhi rehta bhai...ye reply se thodi kuch fark padna hai.youtube thodi h..ye..bas man kiya to likha..
Lekin kuch din se itna zaida unnecessary pressure hai ki man nhi kar raha likhne ka..

Har koi chata hai uske hisab se khani likhi jaye..
Kisi ko sonu ko side karna h...kisi ko radha se sex karwana h..kisi ko kewal ravi hi ravi chaiye..har jagh...
Kiski ko lagta h ki. Sonu ko weak dikha diya..gupta ko strong dikhaya...

Bhai jo kuch bhi likhta hu kuch soch ke hi to likhta hunga..??main koi apni tariff nhi kar raha na kisi se koi Competition kar raha hu...

Bas koi bhi story ho usme logic hona bhut zaroori h...isliye jo kuch bhi likha h wo hi soch ke..jo daily life m hota h hum logo ke sath...

Sonu or radha ka dilhane ka matlab bhi ye hi tha..

Main har kisi ko khush nhi kar sakta...ab kisi ko reply deta hu..to kuch logo ko lagega..main readers ki bezati kar raha hu..

Ab koi ulta hi baat bolega to jawab bhi waise hi milega...

Ab main tabhi likunga..jab mera man hoga...wo kab hoga ye muje bhi nhi pata...zabrdasti likhunga to accha nhi likh paunga..

Lekin m likhunga apne hi hisab se.. kisi ko aacha lage ya bura...
Nhi fark padta...koi bhi mat pade story muje tab bhi koi fark nhi padta...
Kabhi free ho ke main khud hi padh lunga..muje koi tension nhi h uski...

Mera man karta h to likh raha hu...isse mera ghar nhi chalta h yaar...job h...wo first priority h...lekin story puri complete zarror hogi...
M aadhe se bhagne walo main se nhi hu...


Thanks to everyone.

Ur writing skill is too good dear .
Waiting for update

 

[xdcfvgbh]

please update

 

[Abhi857558]

Muje reply se koi matlab nhi rehta bhai...ye reply se thodi kuch fark padna hai.youtube thodi h..ye..bas man kiya to likha..
Lekin kuch din se itna zaida unnecessary pressure hai ki man nhi kar raha likhne ka..

Har koi chata hai uske hisab se khani likhi jaye..
Kisi ko sonu ko side karna h...kisi ko radha se sex karwana h..kisi ko kewal ravi hi ravi chaiye..har jagh...
Kiski ko lagta h ki. Sonu ko weak dikha diya..gupta ko strong dikhaya...

Bhai jo kuch bhi likhta hu kuch soch ke hi to likhta hunga..??main koi apni tariff nhi kar raha na kisi se koi Competition kar raha hu...

Bas koi bhi story ho usme logic hona bhut zaroori h...isliye jo kuch bhi likha h wo hi soch ke..jo daily life m hota h hum logo ke sath...

Sonu or radha ka dilhane ka matlab bhi ye hi tha..

Main har kisi ko khush nhi kar sakta...ab kisi ko reply deta hu..to kuch logo ko lagega..main readers ki bezati kar raha hu..

Ab koi ulta hi baat bolega to jawab bhi waise hi milega...

Ab main tabhi likunga..jab mera man hoga...wo kab hoga ye muje bhi nhi pata...zabrdasti likhunga to accha nhi likh paunga..

Lekin m likhunga apne hi hisab se.. kisi ko aacha lage ya bura...
Nhi fark padta...koi bhi mat pade story muje tab bhi koi fark nhi padta...
Kabhi free ho ke main khud hi padh lunga..muje koi tension nhi h uski...

Mera man karta h to likh raha hu...isse mera ghar nhi chalta h yaar...job h...wo first priority h...lekin story puri complete zarror hogi...
M aadhe se bhagne walo main se nhi hu...


Thanks to everyone.

You are a great writer.na hamko sonu ka side ka story chahiye na Ravi ki side ka.ham ko bas apka kahani chahiye.

 

[The Mask Editor]

Dear Flymovers777, Please take your to set the right mood. Whenever you are comfortable you can write and post the update. Like I have mentioned earlier please continue the story forward with your thought process.

There will be different suggestions from different people. I too have my preferences for characters.

But the important fact is that we all are attracted towards your story is because of your vision and writing skills.

 

[Ajay chauhan]

Dear Flymovers777, Please take your to set the right mood. Whenever you are comfortable you can write and post the update. Like I have mentioned earlier please continue the story forward with your thought process.

There will be different suggestions from different people. I too have my preferences for characters.

But the important fact is that we all are attracted towards your story is because of your vision and writing skills.

Bro agar suggestion a che nahi lagte to ignore kardo par please story aage badho mujhe ek hi dar hai ki kahi aap story bandh na karde

Bro please story continu karo please yaar

I humble request you please

 

[Chote babu]

Muje reply se koi matlab nhi rehta bhai...ye reply se thodi kuch fark padna hai.youtube thodi h..ye..bas man kiya to likha..
Lekin kuch din se itna zaida unnecessary pressure hai ki man nhi kar raha likhne ka..

Har koi chata hai uske hisab se khani likhi jaye..
Kisi ko sonu ko side karna h...kisi ko radha se sex karwana h..kisi ko kewal ravi hi ravi chaiye..har jagh...
Kiski ko lagta h ki. Sonu ko weak dikha diya..gupta ko strong dikhaya...

Bhai jo kuch bhi likhta hu kuch soch ke hi to likhta hunga..??main koi apni tariff nhi kar raha na kisi se koi Competition kar raha hu...

Bas koi bhi story ho usme logic hona bhut zaroori h...isliye jo kuch bhi likha h wo hi soch ke..jo daily life m hota h hum logo ke sath...

Sonu or radha ka dilhane ka matlab bhi ye hi tha..

Main har kisi ko khush nhi kar sakta...ab kisi ko reply deta hu..to kuch logo ko lagega..main readers ki bezati kar raha hu..

Ab koi ulta hi baat bolega to jawab bhi waise hi milega...

Ab main tabhi likunga..jab mera man hoga...wo kab hoga ye muje bhi nhi pata...zabrdasti likhunga to accha nhi likh paunga..

Lekin m likhunga apne hi hisab se.. kisi ko aacha lage ya bura...
Nhi fark padta...koi bhi mat pade story muje tab bhi koi fark nhi padta...
Kabhi free ho ke main khud hi padh lunga..muje koi tension nhi h uski...

Mera man karta h to likh raha hu...isse mera ghar nhi chalta h yaar...job h...wo first priority h...lekin story puri complete zarror hogi...
M aadhe se bhagne walo main se nhi hu...


Thanks to everyone.

Sahi bhi hain.Yaha reader apni apni fantasy jeeta hain.Main character,yaha Ravi,khud ko mehsoos karte hain.
Uske hisse ka shikaar,koi chin na le ,yaani woh Gupta ho ya phir Sonu,usse sabhi ko pareshaani hoti hain.Aur readers apne apne sujhav aap ko comment dwara batate bhi hain.
Kahani aap ne start ki thi kuch buniyadi characters ko madhye nazar rakh ke.Usi pe atal raho bhai.Under pressure likhoge,to pehle aap ko boriya mehsoos hogi aur phir readers ko bhi.
Isliye kehta hu ke koi pressure mat lena aur maje se likhna.Sab ko apne jivan vaapika ke sadhaan alag alag hote hain.Job pressure,Meetings, Deadlines yeh to roj marra ka hisaab hain.
Yeh forum kewal ek manoranjan ka jariya hain jaha sabhi thread pe upasthit readers connected hain.
Jaise jab jee main aaye likho,break lo.Lekin update deni hain us hisaab se mat dena Flymovers777 bhai.
Yeh kewal mera opinion hain.Jis thik lage woh bhi chalega,jinhe bura lage,woh to aur daudega.

 

[Flymovers777]

Bro agar suggestion a che nahi lagte to ignore kardo par please story aage badho mujhe ek hi dar hai ki kahi aap story bandh na karde

Bro please story continu karo please yaar

I humble request you please

Nhi bhai story puri hogi..or koi shortcut nhi hoga...ye promise h.

 

[Flymovers777]

Sahi bhi hain.Yaha reader apni apni fantasy jeeta hain.Main character,yaha Ravi,khud ko mehsoos karte hain.
Uske hisse ka shikaar,koi chin na le ,yaani woh Gupta ho ya phir Sonu,usse sabhi ko pareshaani hoti hain.Aur readers apne apne sujhav aap ko comment dwara batate bhi hain.
Kahani aap ne start ki thi kuch buniyadi characters ko madhye nazar rakh ke.Usi pe atal raho bhai.Under pressure likhoge,to pehle aap ko boriya mehsoos hogi aur phir readers ko bhi.
Isliye kehta hu ke koi pressure mat lena aur maje se likhna.Sab ko apne jivan vaapika ke sadhaan alag alag hote hain.Job pressure,Meetings, Deadlines yeh to roj marra ka hisaab hain.
Yeh forum kewal ek manoranjan ka jariya hain jaha sabhi thread pe upasthit readers connected hain.
Jaise jab jee main aaye likho,break lo.Lekin update deni hain us hisaab se mat dena Flymovers777 bhai.
Yeh kewal mera opinion hain.Jis thik lage woh bhi chalega,jinhe bura lage,woh to aur daudega.

Nhi bhai kisi ke sujhav se dikkat nhi h...har koi sochta h aisa ho, lekin problem ye h ki...apni soch ko kisi pe thopna ye gaalt h..

Ab khud sochiye as a sonu ke jaise...radha or ravi ko usne dekh liya..or wo bhi teen ager h..jahir h uska bhi man karega...
Ab chae wo margi se mile ya..thoda zabrdasti se..usko bas apni thark mitani h..
Main sonu ke sahi hone ya galat hone ki baat nhi kar raha hu..bas situation ki baat kar raha hu...

Ab kuch log bolenge ki..madhu ko bhi uske mayke main hi kiya tha ravi ne...wha to kuch nhi hua?? lekin gaur karne wali baat ye h...madhu ke gahr m ek to koi teen ager nhi tha..normal bhudhe maa baap..or ghar ki physical location ase thi ki...kisi ko pata nhi chala ki room m kya chal rah h...

Radha ne din m jo thoda bhut exposed kiya..wo sonu ne bhi dekha...wo bhi to normal hi ladka h...
To ager m yaha pe sonu ko bilkul sidha sadha bewkuff kism ka dikha deta jisko koi fark nhi padta to ye baat muje logical nhi lagi...

Or rahi baat madu ke sasur ki ..uska character hi aisa h...wo madhu pe chance lega hi..bhale hi wo uski bahu h...or ab upper se ravi ke sath dekh liya...to uske man to madhu ke liyw wo hi image banegi na..ki jab usse kar sakti h to mere sath kyn nhi???
Halnki madu usse bachte hi rahi...lekin ye zaroori to nhi madhu aacha soche to wo bach hi jayegi...
Kahi na kahi..usne ravi ke sath kiya to wo bhi to apne sasur ke nazar m galat hi h...

Dekhiye isko normal ek aam admi ke jaise sochiye..har kisis ke mann main din bhar na jane kitne vichar aate h...kisi ko aache to kisi ko vyabhichar ke...

Bas ye mat sochiye ki ravi ne kar liya to dusra nhi kar sakta...
Mauka milega to wo kyn chorega...ye baat alg h ki ladies coprate kar rahi hai ki nhi...
Kuch majburi m bhi kaam hote h...jaise radha ne kiya...
Starting m appose tha lejin last m wo sonu pe is baat pe gussa nhi thi ki usne zabrdasti ya blackmail karke kiya...gussa is baat ka tha ki wo satisfied nhi hui...

Radha ne sonu ko ek nazar m hi namard kaha...iska matlab ye thodi ki wo namard ho gaya..
Excitement m wo nhi satisfied kar paya...
Or jaise radha ne usko sunaya..jahir si baat h...teen age ladka h...darega hi..ek to galti...or upper se satisfied bhi nhi kar paya...

Or ab gupta ki baat kare to...uska character hi rough hai..
Yar jab negative character hi dumdar nhi hoga to kya maja ayega story m??

Acchi baat h app sab log itna padhte h story...lekin jab unnecessary pressure hota h..to pata nhi kyn likha nhi jata...kynki main story ke present ke sath future ko bhi soch ke likh raha hu..

Isliye up down story m zarror ayenge...

Main likunga story...puri bhi zaroor hogi...bas ek normal tarh se soch ke padiye..ki kis jagh pe kya seen hona chaiye..wo bhul jaiye ki kon kiske sath kya kar raha h...
Jo bhi hoga as a situation zabrdasti wali koi baat hi nhi...ki zabrdasti sex dikhaya..

Jaha jaroori hoga waha sex bhi hoga emotion bhi honge...

Ager zabrdasti ka seen likhna hota to ravi jab neha se akele m mili din m...to waha bhi kuch ho jata..lekin wo logically sahi lagta hi nhi...jab pehle koi baat na hui ho..tk sidha to usse ja ke chipkega nhi ..pehle wo situation banni zaroori h...

Isliye aram se padhiye...apas m koi bhi ek dusre ko mat boliye...ki radha bachegi ya sonu ko milega...
Jiske bahgya m jo likha hoga wo ho ke hi rahega..situation khud banegi..

Thoda relax hone ke liye story likhta hu...din bhar work load se thoda behtar mehsoos karne ko...
Muje aacha bhi lagta h likhna...usse koi fark nhi padta..kitne comments aa rahe h kitne nhi...bas story asi ho ki asa lage ki ankhon ke samne hi sab chal raha h...
Kuch bhi artificial nhi...


Upadte likhta hu..thoda soch lu ki aage kya hona chaiye...
Kynki sonu ke aane se radha or ravi ko milana wo bhut muskil hoga...sonu nhi bhi hota tab bhi...ghar pe sab log hain kaise wo situation banyi jaye...

Ispe aap log koi sujav dijiye...wo accha lagega...ki kaha pe dono mil sakte h....


So thank you app sabhi ka...kuch bura laga ho to maffi chaunga...
Bas padhte rahiye...or Fantasy puri kariye...