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superb update bhaiUska pati bhi...bhar dhup seek raha tha....
Or tabhi vidya aa gayi...ir shankar se baat kar rahi thi...
Ravi ne vidya ki awaz suni to dgere se utha or apna door band kar liya taki wo ander nhi aaye...Ravi ka mann nhi tha usse baat karne ka...
Ab aage:::
Vidya jana to chati thi...ravi ke room m lekin shankar ke wajh se nhi ja paayi..kynki kal hi uske chachere bhai vinay ne uski kaam leela sun hi li thi...
To ravi ka room ghurte hue chale gayi...
Ravi padh hi raha tha...kynki moj masti apne jagh thi padhai apni jgah...
Kynki life santulan mangti h...or ye baat ravi ko is umar m samj aa gayi thi...wo ek kitabi keeda bhi ban ke nhi reh sakta tha..or naa hi in sab kaam ke piche apni padhai ko nazarandazz kar sakta tha...
Sayad isiliye aage ki life m safal bhi hua...
Kher abhi uska past hi dekhte h....
To hua ye hi ravi padha raha tha...karib 12 baje uske door m knock hua....
Door khola to samne radha thi...or muskurte hie boli..
Rd::are kya baat darwaza band karke padhai kar rahe ho?? Aa jau kya...( dhere se hanste hue)
Ravi ne bhar ko dekha...sunita ka pati ander room ko chala gya tha...
Ravi ne usko rasta diya...to radha ne aankh dikha ke boli..
Rd:: pagal mazzak kar rahi hu...abhi koi time h ..wo sab ka...( bhut dhere se muh hi muh m boli ravi ko dekh ke jisse koi sun na paye)
Ravi ko bhit ajeeb laga wo to soch raha tha radha milne aayi hogi...bas kuch bol nhi paya...
Tovradha hanste hue boli..
Rd:: wo madhu ke ghar jana h...kuch le aaoge...us time gaye the bhul gayi...mangana...khali haath kya jau???( smile karke paise dete hue or apne uroozo ka darshan dete hue)
Ravi jo embarrasse feel kar raha tha hadbada ke bola...uske urozzo ko dekh ke...
R:: haan haan le aata hu...kya launga...( apne room ke ander aa ke)
Radha bhar hi kahde rahi...wo bewajh kisi ke shaq ka karan nhi banna chatai thi...or bhar se hi boli...
Rd:: kya laoge..?? Mithai le aana..or fruits...or bacchon ke liye chocolate wagera jo sahi lage...tumko bhi kuch chaiye to le aana...( bahr se bolte hue)
R:: thik h..( darwaza dide karke dawaze ke picheja ke pent pehnte hue)
Radha hasne lagi...kapde utarne ki awaz se samj gayi ki ladka kapde balad raha h...ek baar to man hua ki jaa ke ched de...lekin pata nhi kyn wahi pe kahdi ho ke muskurate rahi or sochne lagi....
Janab ko abhi bhut sharm aa rahi h...mere samne...or raat m baap re kya kaya bolta h us time...chii...sharm lagti h ab wo sab yaad karke...abhi aapp app...or raat ko tu...teri wo bhit tight h....chii sahrm bhi nhi lagti besharm ko....( darwaze ke pass kade ho ke)
Radha hans hi rahi thi ki ravi bhar aa gaya or radha ko hansta hua dekh kefir se emberssing feel karne laga...
To radha ne idhar udhar dekha...orapne chote se bag se ek dawai ka paat nikal ke ravi ko diya...or boli...
Rd:: suno ek kaam or kar doge??( idhar udhar dekh ke smile karke)
R: kya ??( heran ho ke)
Or radha ne jaldi se ravi ki mutthi m wo dawai ka paat thama diya or uski mutti band karte hue boli...
Rd:: ye le aana kahi se ..muje hi dena aa ke ..( sunita ke room ko dekh ke..or vidya ki chat ke or dekh ke)
Ravi ne bhi wo dawai ka patta jeb m rakh diya or nhi khola waha pe or bike le kar chala gya market ko...
Saman liya or jeb se jab paise nikalne laga wo dawai ka patta jeb se gira...
Wahi pe kahde ek admi ravi se bola....
Adami:: are tumahara ye kya gir gaya..( dawa i je or ishara karke)
Ravi ne ek dam se zamin m dekha...to hos udd gaye...
Wo garbh nirodhak dawai ka bhar ka cover tha...ravi sharm se pani ho gya...or turant jeb m rakh diya...
Wo adami ravi ko ghur ke dekhne laga...jab tak ravi waha se chala nhi gya...
Jaise hi usne sauda liya turant bhaga...bike ke or ghabra ke...
Or wo adami us shop keeper se bola...
Admi:: dekha is ladke ko???( ravi ke traf ishara karke)
Shop keeper apni chair se uth ke..bhar ko jhankte hue bola..
S:: kon?? Bhai shab...( bhar ko dekhte hue)
Lekin ravi ja chuka tha..tabhi.wo bola..
Adami:: are ye chokra jo gya...jeb m garb nirodahka dwai le kar ghum raha h...pata nhi kya ho gya h aj kal ke bacchon ko...
Shop keeper bhi hasnte hue bola...
S:: are bhai shab ajj ke laundo ka danada bhut zaldi zor marne lagta h...( us admi ki mithai tolte hue)
Wahi ravi ko radha pe gussa aa raha tha ki be faltu bezatti karwa di...
Lekin galti uski bhi thi...sahi se usne hi nhi rakha...ab kiya ravi ne h to goli bhi to usko hi laa ke deni hogi...
To bechara pure market ghumta raha ki kaha..koi ladka type mile dukan pe jo le le ...
Lekin har jagh uncle type hi bethe the..ek maan hua ki nhi le jata hu...tabhi socha...sala nhi le gaya or kuch gadbad ho gaya to...
Ye sochte hue pure bazar m ghumne laga...kishmet se ek dukan peek ladka dikha...jo usse bada tha lekin uncle type nhi tha..
Ravi ne himmat ki...or sidhe dukan pe gya...or jebse wo dawai ka cover nikal ke us ladke ko pakda diya...
Or bhit casually bola..
R: bhai ye dawai de do...( ek dam confidence se)
Ladke ne usko dekha lekin sidhe dawai de i...ravi ne zaldi se paise liye or ghar ko aane laga...
Or ek jagh fruits kharid raha tha ki...uske bagal wale dukan pe...usko neha or anju dikhayi diye...jo fruits wale se behas kar rahi thi...
A:: bhaiya khud mat dalo apki bola...tab bhi...ek to paise kam nhi kar rahe ho upper se...dekho pure santare khrab h...chal neha nhi lena yaha se...( gusse se)..
Ravi ne jaise hi usko aate dekha...ase react karne laga...jaise..ki usko dekh ana ho...
Wo thele wala anju ko pata nhi kya kya bolne laga...anju ravi jaha pe kahda tha us thele pe aa gyai...
Usne dyan nhi diya ki ravi hhj..lekin neha ne dekh liya or boli..
N: are..ravi...tum..???.( hanste hue)
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Ravi ne dono ek or dekha bas muskura ke namste kiya...
Anju ne ek saree pehni thi...smile lekin bhut khubsurat lag rahi thi...
Neha ravi se baat kar rahi thi...or anju ravi ko dekh rahi thi bade pyar se...
Or jaise hi ravi ne usko dekha...sharma gayi...or kuch na boli.
Bs thele wale se na koi rate pucha na kuch...bas santare utha ke taraju m dalne lagi....
Ravi ne usko nazar utha ke dekha or sochne laga ..
.waha to itna lad rahi thi...2 rupee ke liye...or yhaa bina rate puche....
Tabhi neha boli...
N: ajj aaye nhi...( muskurate hue)
R:: wo bas ase hi.....or app log...( neha ko dekh ke lekin tirchi nazar se anju ko dekh ke)
N:: are kaam tha bazzar ja hi rahe h ghar ko...( smile karke)
Ravi ne fruits le liye..or neha se bola...
R:: chaliye m bhi ghar ko hi ja raha hu...( bike m fruits rakhete hue)
N:...nhi nhi chle jayenge....kha pareshan ho ge???( smile karke)
R:: m kya pareshan hota hu...bike m to jana h...( smile se)
Anju smile karke hasne lagi...or thele wale ko paise dene lagi..
Yaha wo thelea wala confused ho gyaa ki anju usko dekh ke hans rahi h to khud bhi hanste hue...anju ko bache hue paise dene laga..
Anju ne jaise hi usko dekha...ek dam se gambhir face bana liya...or zaldi se paise liye ...or mud gayi...
Neha ne anju se bola...
N:: didi or kuch kaam h???
Anju ki to juban bhi nhi nikal rahi thi..bas kaise karke boli...
A:: nhi to ab kya kaam hoga....( ek nazar ravi ko dekhi...or fir sharma ke bhane se apne bag ko check karne lagi)
Ravi bola..
R: bethiye fir....( thoda aage ko sarak ke)
Tabhi anju ne wo kiya jo uska man chata tha
..jadi se bike ke or badhi...or turtant ek side ko er karke beth gayi..ravi bhi iske liye tyar nhi thi...to bike ek side ko girne lagi....tabhi...neha heran ho ke boli...
Bike disbalnce hone lagi...lekin ravi ne sambhal li...
To neha boli anju se...
N:: moti kahi ki...beth gayi apna...( muh bna ke hanste hue)
Anju ko apni galti ka ehsah hua...or utarte hue boli...
A:: are sorry wo tu beth ja pehle...( sharm se dono ko dekhte hue)
Ravi zor se hasna chata tha lekin hansi control kar li...
To neha boli..
N: pagal beth gayi to uthi kyn...chal beth ravi ko der kar rahi h...tu bhi pagal hi rahegi...( hanste hue)
Fir is baar anju dubra bethi...lekin is bar ravi bike acche se pakde raha...or anju ne ek hath ravi ke shoulder pe rakha...or aage ko khisk gayi...jisse ki neha ke liye bhi jgh ho...
Tabhi neha boli....
N:: didi ye bag pakad...( anju ko dete hue)
Anju jo apne kyali m khoyi thi...turtant boli...
A:: haan haan laa....( hathravi ke shoulder se hath ke..bag pakdte hue)
Tabhi neha boli...
N:: aage ko ho na...girayegi muje...( hanste hue bethne lagi)
Tabhi ravi thida or aage ko hua..to anju khud bakhud aage ko ho gayi...or neha ke bthne se uske mmote unnnat uroz...ravi ki pith m dhas gaye...
Yha shikar or shikari dono ko bura haal tha...
Ravi ko apni pith m aisa mehsoos hua jaise ki pani ka gubbbra dab gaya ho....
Or wahi...ravi ki pith m urozz dabte hi...anju ki aankh dard ko masti se bhar gayi...kynki aaj subh se hi uske left stan ke nipple m dard ho rah tha...or ase ragdhne or dabne se to jaan hi nikal gyai...
Or tabhi ravi ne bike start ki...or aane lage...
Raste bhar anju ke urozz uski pith se ragad khate rahe...or spped brakar or gaddhon m pure dabte rahe...
Annju sarre raste aankh band hi kiye rahi...
Wahi ravi sawdhani se bike chala rha tha..ki jhatke jaisa na lage or anju galat na sochw...lekin bike baar baar gaddhon m hi jati...
Ravi ko apne pe gussa aane laga...
Kher ravi ne vivek ke ghar pe bike roki...to neha utar gayi...or anju se boli...
N:: ae didi so gayi kya...( utar ke apna dupattaa sahi karte hue)
Anju hosh m aayi or hadbaa ke uatr gayii..or jaise hi ravi se dur hui...urooz apni postion m aa gaye dubara..
Neha to pallu hi thik karne m thi...jabki ravi ki nazar anjane m hi anju ke urozzo ke ubhar pe aa gyai...
Or ye anju ne bhi dekh liya ki...ravi uske kon se nazuk ang ko dekh raha h...to turant ghabrate hue palat gayi...or neha se boli...
A:: chal na ab...( dhere se)
Neha ne ravi ko thanks bola or ghar aane ko bola...
.to ravi ne mana kar diya...dono ander janne lage...jabki ravi anju ko hi dekhte raha....piche se...
Anju ki chaal kisi hirni se kam nhi thi..saree main uske . khule ek side ko jate fir dusre side ko.....tabhi ravi ko dyan aay ki wo kya dekh raha h...or chala gya apne ghar ko...
To be continue...
Writer sahab itna romantic kese soch lete ho ki padte huye aisa lge ki jese apne sath ho rha ho ab to anju or Ravi ki love story dhere dhere aage bdni lgi h kyuki aaj to anju ne darsa diya ki wo bhi Ravi ki chahne lgi hUska pati bhi...bhar dhup seek raha tha....
Or tabhi vidya aa gayi...ir shankar se baat kar rahi thi...
Ravi ne vidya ki awaz suni to dgere se utha or apna door band kar liya taki wo ander nhi aaye...Ravi ka mann nhi tha usse baat karne ka...
Ab aage:::
Vidya jana to chati thi...ravi ke room m lekin shankar ke wajh se nhi ja paayi..kynki kal hi uske chachere bhai vinay ne uski kaam leela sun hi li thi...
To ravi ka room ghurte hue chale gayi...
Ravi padh hi raha tha...kynki moj masti apne jagh thi padhai apni jgah...
Kynki life santulan mangti h...or ye baat ravi ko is umar m samj aa gayi thi...wo ek kitabi keeda bhi ban ke nhi reh sakta tha..or naa hi in sab kaam ke piche apni padhai ko nazarandazz kar sakta tha...
Sayad isiliye aage ki life m safal bhi hua...
Kher abhi uska past hi dekhte h....
To hua ye hi ravi padha raha tha...karib 12 baje uske door m knock hua....
Door khola to samne radha thi...or muskurte hie boli..
Rd::are kya baat darwaza band karke padhai kar rahe ho?? Aa jau kya...( dhere se hanste hue)
Ravi ne bhar ko dekha...sunita ka pati ander room ko chala gya tha...
Ravi ne usko rasta diya...to radha ne aankh dikha ke boli..
Rd:: pagal mazzak kar rahi hu...abhi koi time h ..wo sab ka...( bhut dhere se muh hi muh m boli ravi ko dekh ke jisse koi sun na paye)
Ravi ko bhit ajeeb laga wo to soch raha tha radha milne aayi hogi...bas kuch bol nhi paya...
Tovradha hanste hue boli..
Rd:: wo madhu ke ghar jana h...kuch le aaoge...us time gaye the bhul gayi...mangana...khali haath kya jau???( smile karke paise dete hue or apne uroozo ka darshan dete hue)
Ravi jo embarrasse feel kar raha tha hadbada ke bola...uske urozzo ko dekh ke...
R:: haan haan le aata hu...kya launga...( apne room ke ander aa ke)
Radha bhar hi kahde rahi...wo bewajh kisi ke shaq ka karan nhi banna chatai thi...or bhar se hi boli...
Rd:: kya laoge..?? Mithai le aana..or fruits...or bacchon ke liye chocolate wagera jo sahi lage...tumko bhi kuch chaiye to le aana...( bahr se bolte hue)
R:: thik h..( darwaza dide karke dawaze ke picheja ke pent pehnte hue)
Radha hasne lagi...kapde utarne ki awaz se samj gayi ki ladka kapde balad raha h...ek baar to man hua ki jaa ke ched de...lekin pata nhi kyn wahi pe kahdi ho ke muskurate rahi or sochne lagi....
Janab ko abhi bhut sharm aa rahi h...mere samne...or raat m baap re kya kaya bolta h us time...chii...sharm lagti h ab wo sab yaad karke...abhi aapp app...or raat ko tu...teri wo bhit tight h....chii sahrm bhi nhi lagti besharm ko....( darwaze ke pass kade ho ke)
Radha hans hi rahi thi ki ravi bhar aa gaya or radha ko hansta hua dekh kefir se emberssing feel karne laga...
To radha ne idhar udhar dekha...orapne chote se bag se ek dawai ka paat nikal ke ravi ko diya...or boli...
Rd:: suno ek kaam or kar doge??( idhar udhar dekh ke smile karke)
R: kya ??( heran ho ke)
Or radha ne jaldi se ravi ki mutthi m wo dawai ka paat thama diya or uski mutti band karte hue boli...
Rd:: ye le aana kahi se ..muje hi dena aa ke ..( sunita ke room ko dekh ke..or vidya ki chat ke or dekh ke)
Ravi ne bhi wo dawai ka patta jeb m rakh diya or nhi khola waha pe or bike le kar chala gya market ko...
Saman liya or jeb se jab paise nikalne laga wo dawai ka patta jeb se gira...
Wahi pe kahde ek admi ravi se bola....
Adami:: are tumahara ye kya gir gaya..( dawa i je or ishara karke)
Ravi ne ek dam se zamin m dekha...to hos udd gaye...
Wo garbh nirodhak dawai ka bhar ka cover tha...ravi sharm se pani ho gya...or turant jeb m rakh diya...
Wo adami ravi ko ghur ke dekhne laga...jab tak ravi waha se chala nhi gya...
Jaise hi usne sauda liya turant bhaga...bike ke or ghabra ke...
Or wo adami us shop keeper se bola...
Admi:: dekha is ladke ko???( ravi ke traf ishara karke)
Shop keeper apni chair se uth ke..bhar ko jhankte hue bola..
S:: kon?? Bhai shab...( bhar ko dekhte hue)
Lekin ravi ja chuka tha..tabhi.wo bola..
Adami:: are ye chokra jo gya...jeb m garb nirodahka dwai le kar ghum raha h...pata nhi kya ho gya h aj kal ke bacchon ko...
Shop keeper bhi hasnte hue bola...
S:: are bhai shab ajj ke laundo ka danada bhut zaldi zor marne lagta h...( us admi ki mithai tolte hue)
Wahi ravi ko radha pe gussa aa raha tha ki be faltu bezatti karwa di...
Lekin galti uski bhi thi...sahi se usne hi nhi rakha...ab kiya ravi ne h to goli bhi to usko hi laa ke deni hogi...
To bechara pure market ghumta raha ki kaha..koi ladka type mile dukan pe jo le le ...
Lekin har jagh uncle type hi bethe the..ek maan hua ki nhi le jata hu...tabhi socha...sala nhi le gaya or kuch gadbad ho gaya to...
Ye sochte hue pure bazar m ghumne laga...kishmet se ek dukan peek ladka dikha...jo usse bada tha lekin uncle type nhi tha..
Ravi ne himmat ki...or sidhe dukan pe gya...or jebse wo dawai ka cover nikal ke us ladke ko pakda diya...
Or bhit casually bola..
R: bhai ye dawai de do...( ek dam confidence se)
Ladke ne usko dekha lekin sidhe dawai de i...ravi ne zaldi se paise liye or ghar ko aane laga...
Or ek jagh fruits kharid raha tha ki...uske bagal wale dukan pe...usko neha or anju dikhayi diye...jo fruits wale se behas kar rahi thi...
A:: bhaiya khud mat dalo apki bola...tab bhi...ek to paise kam nhi kar rahe ho upper se...dekho pure santare khrab h...chal neha nhi lena yaha se...( gusse se)..
Ravi ne jaise hi usko aate dekha...ase react karne laga...jaise..ki usko dekh ana ho...
Wo thele wala anju ko pata nhi kya kya bolne laga...anju ravi jaha pe kahda tha us thele pe aa gyai...
Usne dyan nhi diya ki ravi hhj..lekin neha ne dekh liya or boli..
N: are..ravi...tum..???.( hanste hue)
writing keyboard
Ravi ne dono ek or dekha bas muskura ke namste kiya...
Anju ne ek saree pehni thi...smile lekin bhut khubsurat lag rahi thi...
Neha ravi se baat kar rahi thi...or anju ravi ko dekh rahi thi bade pyar se...
Or jaise hi ravi ne usko dekha...sharma gayi...or kuch na boli.
Bs thele wale se na koi rate pucha na kuch...bas santare utha ke taraju m dalne lagi....
Ravi ne usko nazar utha ke dekha or sochne laga ..
.waha to itna lad rahi thi...2 rupee ke liye...or yhaa bina rate puche....
Tabhi neha boli...
N: ajj aaye nhi...( muskurate hue)
R:: wo bas ase hi.....or app log...( neha ko dekh ke lekin tirchi nazar se anju ko dekh ke)
N:: are kaam tha bazzar ja hi rahe h ghar ko...( smile karke)
Ravi ne fruits le liye..or neha se bola...
R:: chaliye m bhi ghar ko hi ja raha hu...( bike m fruits rakhete hue)
N:...nhi nhi chle jayenge....kha pareshan ho ge???( smile karke)
R:: m kya pareshan hota hu...bike m to jana h...( smile se)
Anju smile karke hasne lagi...or thele wale ko paise dene lagi..
Yaha wo thelea wala confused ho gyaa ki anju usko dekh ke hans rahi h to khud bhi hanste hue...anju ko bache hue paise dene laga..
Anju ne jaise hi usko dekha...ek dam se gambhir face bana liya...or zaldi se paise liye ...or mud gayi...
Neha ne anju se bola...
N:: didi or kuch kaam h???
Anju ki to juban bhi nhi nikal rahi thi..bas kaise karke boli...
A:: nhi to ab kya kaam hoga....( ek nazar ravi ko dekhi...or fir sharma ke bhane se apne bag ko check karne lagi)
Ravi bola..
R: bethiye fir....( thoda aage ko sarak ke)
Tabhi anju ne wo kiya jo uska man chata tha
..jadi se bike ke or badhi...or turtant ek side ko er karke beth gayi..ravi bhi iske liye tyar nhi thi...to bike ek side ko girne lagi....tabhi...neha heran ho ke boli...
Bike disbalnce hone lagi...lekin ravi ne sambhal li...
To neha boli anju se...
N:: moti kahi ki...beth gayi apna...( muh bna ke hanste hue)
Anju ko apni galti ka ehsah hua...or utarte hue boli...
A:: are sorry wo tu beth ja pehle...( sharm se dono ko dekhte hue)
Ravi zor se hasna chata tha lekin hansi control kar li...
To neha boli..
N: pagal beth gayi to uthi kyn...chal beth ravi ko der kar rahi h...tu bhi pagal hi rahegi...( hanste hue)
Fir is baar anju dubra bethi...lekin is bar ravi bike acche se pakde raha...or anju ne ek hath ravi ke shoulder pe rakha...or aage ko khisk gayi...jisse ki neha ke liye bhi jgh ho...
Tabhi neha boli....
N:: didi ye bag pakad...( anju ko dete hue)
Anju jo apne kyali m khoyi thi...turtant boli...
A:: haan haan laa....( hathravi ke shoulder se hath ke..bag pakdte hue)
Tabhi neha boli...
N:: aage ko ho na...girayegi muje...( hanste hue bethne lagi)
Tabhi ravi thida or aage ko hua..to anju khud bakhud aage ko ho gayi...or neha ke bthne se uske mmote unnnat uroz...ravi ki pith m dhas gaye...
Yha shikar or shikari dono ko bura haal tha...
Ravi ko apni pith m aisa mehsoos hua jaise ki pani ka gubbbra dab gaya ho....
Or wahi...ravi ki pith m urozz dabte hi...anju ki aankh dard ko masti se bhar gayi...kynki aaj subh se hi uske left stan ke nipple m dard ho rah tha...or ase ragdhne or dabne se to jaan hi nikal gyai...
Or tabhi ravi ne bike start ki...or aane lage...
Raste bhar anju ke urozz uski pith se ragad khate rahe...or spped brakar or gaddhon m pure dabte rahe...
Annju sarre raste aankh band hi kiye rahi...
Wahi ravi sawdhani se bike chala rha tha..ki jhatke jaisa na lage or anju galat na sochw...lekin bike baar baar gaddhon m hi jati...
Ravi ko apne pe gussa aane laga...
Kher ravi ne vivek ke ghar pe bike roki...to neha utar gayi...or anju se boli...
N:: ae didi so gayi kya...( utar ke apna dupattaa sahi karte hue)
Anju hosh m aayi or hadbaa ke uatr gayii..or jaise hi ravi se dur hui...urooz apni postion m aa gaye dubara..
Neha to pallu hi thik karne m thi...jabki ravi ki nazar anjane m hi anju ke urozzo ke ubhar pe aa gyai...
Or ye anju ne bhi dekh liya ki...ravi uske kon se nazuk ang ko dekh raha h...to turant ghabrate hue palat gayi...or neha se boli...
A:: chal na ab...( dhere se)
Neha ne ravi ko thanks bola or ghar aane ko bola...
.to ravi ne mana kar diya...dono ander janne lage...jabki ravi anju ko hi dekhte raha....piche se...
Anju ki chaal kisi hirni se kam nhi thi..saree main uske . khule ek side ko jate fir dusre side ko.....tabhi ravi ko dyan aay ki wo kya dekh raha h...or chala gya apne ghar ko...
To be continue...
Nice updateRd:: sona nhi h kya tumhari mami aa jayegi upper...mera ho gya ...nhi chaiye or kitna karna h..manoge kya...( hanste hue)
.Ravi bas hans diya...or kamal ko uthaya...or dono niche jane lage...
Ab aage:::
Man to ravi ka or bhi tha...lekin zaida risk lena sahi nhi samja usne. Or dono niche aa gaye...
Deepika door khol ke hi soyi thi...radha or ravi ander aaye...or dhere se apne dono bacchon ko Deepika ke bagal m sula fiya to radha boli...Ravi se...
Rd:: suno. Ek baar bathroom k9 chal doge???( dhere se)
Ravi ne bas jaan m gardan hilai...
Or dono piche side gaye ..radha zaldi se wash room gayi...or apna muh dhoyi aache se...or baal bandh ke bhar ko aa gayi....or dusre wash room m ravi gaya...
Dono bhar aaye...or..ravi ne ne aate time fir se radha ke khulhon m hath mara...dhere se...
Radha chonk gayi...or bhut dhere boli...
Rd:: aree....kya kar rahe ho...so jao...ab....kal karna...Deepika uth jayegi...
Ravi bas muskura diya...or radha ander aayi...tab tak dekha Deepika uth gayi thi...or uske bacchon ko rajai odhate rahi thi...or radh se boli...
D:: so gaye kya dono...
Rd:: haan kamal to abhi soya...( bina nazar milaye .bed m lete hue).
Deepika uth ke light band karne lagi...or aa kelet gayi...
Radha or deepika baat karte rahe...or thodi hi der m so gaye...
Ssubh 5 30 pe sunita ki niid khuli...or roz ki tarh gaushala chale gyai. .
Sonu 7 baje tak sota raha...or jab utha to dekha...chappl m a hi bhi gobar laga hua tha...
To zaldi se sabse nazar bacha ke wash room gaya...or per dho ke aa gya...
Ajj ghar nikla jana chata tha...nhi to vidya ke ghar jana padta...or upper se sunita ne bhi dekh liya tha..
Bechara dra hua tha..to muh haath dho ke aage side gaya...dekha Deepika mandir m h...to nhane wale kapde le kar nhane chala gya...
Ravi padha raha tha...or sonu se bola tak nhi...
Sonu niche aa gya...or nhane chala gya...
Tabhi deepika puja karje aayi or ravi se boli...
D:: are sonu ki utha dete...so hi raha hoga...( jahdu pakde hue)
R:: uth to gaya h...abhi aaya tha...( kitab padhte hue)..
D:: accha ..tum kahi jane wale to nhi ho???( jhadu lagate hue)..
R: kyn???( deepika ko dekh ke)
D: wo madhu ne mami ko bulaya h...muje to time hoga nhi...tum chale jaoge...???( jhuke hue ravi ko dekhte hue jadhu lagte hue)
R:: main kahi nhi ja raha...yahi pe to ghar h...chale jayenge wo....( muh bna ke)
D:: kya hua fir...chale jaoge to...meri koi baat nhi sunte ho na...( ravi ko dante hue)
R:: ab m kya karunga yar unke ghar...thik h main chor au ga bas....( deepika ko samjhte hue)
Tabhi radha aa gayi...Ravi chup chap book padhne laga..to deepika radha se boli...
D:: mami...ravi aa jayenge haan apke sath...madhu ke ghar jaa aanna...bura manegi...( jhadu lagte hue)
Rd: haan haan thik h...din m jaingi fir...( muskurate hue)
Or fir sab apne apne kaam m lag ggye...
Wahi jaise hi sonu naha ke nikla...bhar...sunita dudh ke bartan dho rahi thi....or sonu ko dekhi...or fir kaam m lag gayi...
Sonu ki saans ruk gayi...or zaldi se aage side ko bhag gya.....
Wahi sunita man hi man boli......
Abhi dekho...kitna sariff ban raha h...or kal raat...muje kya kuch kare...hunnhhhh...( sonu ko jate hue dekh ke thoda gusse se)
Sonu aa ge side aaya...Ravi usse kuch nhi bola...sonu kitchen m gaya...Deepika aata gunah rahi thi...to bola...
S:: didi .didi...( dhere se darte hue)
D:: hmmm. .bol...( ata gunthe hue)
S:: wo na main chala jata hu aaj...turion bhi miss ho ja raha h...( dhere se darte hue)
D:: tuje aaj kya tution ki yaad aa gayi....ghumne ko nhi mil raha hoga na...yaha...tab...( ate ka bartan..self m rakhte hue)
S:: nhi wo chle jata hu...kya karunga...yaha bhi...( deepika ko dekh ke)
D:: main soch rahi thi...mami jayegi...to unko chorte hue chla jata...( roti baane ki tyari main)
Radha ka naam sun ke ek dam se bola.
S:: nhi nhiwo chle jayengi..main kaha jau unke ghar...( hadbada ke)
Ravi sab sun raha tha...or man hi man bola...
Usko kya hua ..kal to vidya mami ke chakkr m pada tha...kahi vidya mami ne 2,4 haath to nhi rakh diye...(sochte hue)
Tabhi deepika boli ..
D:: thik h jo karta h...lekin meri baat sun le...tu sudhar ja...sonu...papa bimar hain...tu aisa karega to kya karenge wo...ab 12 pass ho jayega tu...baccha h tu ab???.main danti hu bura lagta hoga tuje...lekin tere hi bhale ke liye bolti hu....
Kuch ban jayega...4 paise kamyega...apne liye hi...hum logo ko bhi aacha lagega...padhai kiya kar bhaiya...kaise karega bol...ase...
Itne bade bacchon ko kon bolta h padhne ko tuje to..kya bolu main...( tension m boli)
Sonu ko bhi bhut bur laga...or chala gya ander...
Or ravi se bola...
S:: bhai m chala jata hu aaj...padhai nhi ho rahi..( dhree se)
Ravi kuch nhi bola bas sonu ko dekha..jo rone jaise muh bnaya hua tha to ravi ko bhi bhut bura laga ..
Or bass haan m sir hilaya...or muskura diya...
Ravi nahane chala gya..radha upper aayi tk Sony niche chala gya...
To deepika ne radha ko bata ki sonu ja raha h...radha man hi man khus thi..lekin kuch boli nhi...
Wahi sonu apne bag ko pack karne laga..or sochne laga...
Kuch bhi kaho...didi jo bhi bolti h...mere liye hi bolti h...ab m kewal padhai hi karunga...kisi ko mauka nhi dunga bolne ka...bas ghar chale jau....( bag m kapde rakhte hue)
Jab rabi ko nani ko pata chala ki sonu ja rha h to wo deepika se boli...
N:: sonu kyn ja raha h deepa???( kitchen m aake)
D:: padhai nhi ho rahi h keh raha h mummy ji...( dhukhi ho ke)
N:: din bhar to usko danti hi h...baccha h...wo ...( deepika ko thoda su te hue)
D:: maine kuch nhi bola mummy ji..sach m...wo khud hi bola...tution reh ja raha h....( roti banna rok ke)
N:: thik h...ghee bnaya h ...sonu ko de dena...( bhar ko jate hue)
D:: ji....
Or fur nasta karne ke baad sonu ready ho gaya...tk ravi bola....
R:: main chor dunga..bike se...( deepika ke samne sonu se)
Sonu bas muskura diya....
Or fir thodi der baad ravi usko bus station chal gya..chorne...
Or jab aaya to dekha vidya aayo thi...sayad sonu ki talash m....
Or jab pata chala ki sonu chala gya...to bhut Tezz jhtake laga...
Wahi ravi apne room m chla gya...
Or let gaya...or sonu or vidya ke bare m sochne laga...sunita thi nhi ghar pe....
Uska pati bhi...bhar dhup seek raha tha....
Or tabhi vidya aa gayi...ir shankar se baat kar rahi thi...
Ravi ne vidya ki awaz duni to dgere se utha or apna door band kar liya taki wo ander nhi aaye...Ravi ka mann nhi tha usse baat karne ka...
To be continued...
Behtreen updateUska pati bhi...bhar dhup seek raha tha....
Or tabhi vidya aa gayi...ir shankar se baat kar rahi thi...
Ravi ne vidya ki awaz suni to dgere se utha or apna door band kar liya taki wo ander nhi aaye...Ravi ka mann nhi tha usse baat karne ka...
Ab aage:::
Vidya jana to chati thi...ravi ke room m lekin shankar ke wajh se nhi ja paayi..kynki kal hi uske chachere bhai vinay ne uski kaam leela sun hi li thi...
To ravi ka room ghurte hue chale gayi...
Ravi padh hi raha tha...kynki moj masti apne jagh thi padhai apni jgah...
Kynki life santulan mangti h...or ye baat ravi ko is umar m samj aa gayi thi...wo ek kitabi keeda bhi ban ke nhi reh sakta tha..or naa hi in sab kaam ke piche apni padhai ko nazarandazz kar sakta tha...
Sayad isiliye aage ki life m safal bhi hua...
Kher abhi uska past hi dekhte h....
To hua ye hi ravi padha raha tha...karib 12 baje uske door m knock hua....
Door khola to samne radha thi...or muskurte hie boli..
Rd::are kya baat darwaza band karke padhai kar rahe ho?? Aa jau kya...( dhere se hanste hue)
Ravi ne bhar ko dekha...sunita ka pati ander room ko chala gya tha...
Ravi ne usko rasta diya...to radha ne aankh dikha ke boli..
Rd:: pagal mazzak kar rahi hu...abhi koi time h ..wo sab ka...( bhut dhere se muh hi muh m boli ravi ko dekh ke jisse koi sun na paye)
Ravi ko bhit ajeeb laga wo to soch raha tha radha milne aayi hogi...bas kuch bol nhi paya...
Tovradha hanste hue boli..
Rd:: wo madhu ke ghar jana h...kuch le aaoge...us time gaye the bhul gayi...mangana...khali haath kya jau???( smile karke paise dete hue or apne uroozo ka darshan dete hue)
Ravi jo embarrasse feel kar raha tha hadbada ke bola...uske urozzo ko dekh ke...
R:: haan haan le aata hu...kya launga...( apne room ke ander aa ke)
Radha bhar hi kahde rahi...wo bewajh kisi ke shaq ka karan nhi banna chatai thi...or bhar se hi boli...
Rd:: kya laoge..?? Mithai le aana..or fruits...or bacchon ke liye chocolate wagera jo sahi lage...tumko bhi kuch chaiye to le aana...( bahr se bolte hue)
R:: thik h..( darwaza dide karke dawaze ke picheja ke pent pehnte hue)
Radha hasne lagi...kapde utarne ki awaz se samj gayi ki ladka kapde balad raha h...ek baar to man hua ki jaa ke ched de...lekin pata nhi kyn wahi pe kahdi ho ke muskurate rahi or sochne lagi....
Janab ko abhi bhut sharm aa rahi h...mere samne...or raat m baap re kya kaya bolta h us time...chii...sharm lagti h ab wo sab yaad karke...abhi aapp app...or raat ko tu...teri wo bhit tight h....chii sahrm bhi nhi lagti besharm ko....( darwaze ke pass kade ho ke)
Radha hans hi rahi thi ki ravi bhar aa gaya or radha ko hansta hua dekh kefir se emberssing feel karne laga...
To radha ne idhar udhar dekha...orapne chote se bag se ek dawai ka paat nikal ke ravi ko diya...or boli...
Rd:: suno ek kaam or kar doge??( idhar udhar dekh ke smile karke)
R: kya ??( heran ho ke)
Or radha ne jaldi se ravi ki mutthi m wo dawai ka paat thama diya or uski mutti band karte hue boli...
Rd:: ye le aana kahi se ..muje hi dena aa ke ..( sunita ke room ko dekh ke..or vidya ki chat ke or dekh ke)
Ravi ne bhi wo dawai ka patta jeb m rakh diya or nhi khola waha pe or bike le kar chala gya market ko...
Saman liya or jeb se jab paise nikalne laga wo dawai ka patta jeb se gira...
Wahi pe kahde ek admi ravi se bola....
Adami:: are tumahara ye kya gir gaya..( dawa i je or ishara karke)
Ravi ne ek dam se zamin m dekha...to hos udd gaye...
Wo garbh nirodhak dawai ka bhar ka cover tha...ravi sharm se pani ho gya...or turant jeb m rakh diya...
Wo adami ravi ko ghur ke dekhne laga...jab tak ravi waha se chala nhi gya...
Jaise hi usne sauda liya turant bhaga...bike ke or ghabra ke...
Or wo adami us shop keeper se bola...
Admi:: dekha is ladke ko???( ravi ke traf ishara karke)
Shop keeper apni chair se uth ke..bhar ko jhankte hue bola..
S:: kon?? Bhai shab...( bhar ko dekhte hue)
Lekin ravi ja chuka tha..tabhi.wo bola..
Adami:: are ye chokra jo gya...jeb m garb nirodahka dwai le kar ghum raha h...pata nhi kya ho gya h aj kal ke bacchon ko...
Shop keeper bhi hasnte hue bola...
S:: are bhai shab ajj ke laundo ka danada bhut zaldi zor marne lagta h...( us admi ki mithai tolte hue)
Wahi ravi ko radha pe gussa aa raha tha ki be faltu bezatti karwa di...
Lekin galti uski bhi thi...sahi se usne hi nhi rakha...ab kiya ravi ne h to goli bhi to usko hi laa ke deni hogi...
To bechara pure market ghumta raha ki kaha..koi ladka type mile dukan pe jo le le ...
Lekin har jagh uncle type hi bethe the..ek maan hua ki nhi le jata hu...tabhi socha...sala nhi le gaya or kuch gadbad ho gaya to...
Ye sochte hue pure bazar m ghumne laga...kishmet se ek dukan peek ladka dikha...jo usse bada tha lekin uncle type nhi tha..
Ravi ne himmat ki...or sidhe dukan pe gya...or jebse wo dawai ka cover nikal ke us ladke ko pakda diya...
Or bhit casually bola..
R: bhai ye dawai de do...( ek dam confidence se)
Ladke ne usko dekha lekin sidhe dawai de i...ravi ne zaldi se paise liye or ghar ko aane laga...
Or ek jagh fruits kharid raha tha ki...uske bagal wale dukan pe...usko neha or anju dikhayi diye...jo fruits wale se behas kar rahi thi...
A:: bhaiya khud mat dalo apki bola...tab bhi...ek to paise kam nhi kar rahe ho upper se...dekho pure santare khrab h...chal neha nhi lena yaha se...( gusse se)..
Ravi ne jaise hi usko aate dekha...ase react karne laga...jaise..ki usko dekh ana ho...
Wo thele wala anju ko pata nhi kya kya bolne laga...anju ravi jaha pe kahda tha us thele pe aa gyai...
Usne dyan nhi diya ki ravi hhj..lekin neha ne dekh liya or boli..
N: are..ravi...tum..???.( hanste hue)
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Ravi ne dono ek or dekha bas muskura ke namste kiya...
Anju ne ek saree pehni thi...smile lekin bhut khubsurat lag rahi thi...
Neha ravi se baat kar rahi thi...or anju ravi ko dekh rahi thi bade pyar se...
Or jaise hi ravi ne usko dekha...sharma gayi...or kuch na boli.
Bs thele wale se na koi rate pucha na kuch...bas santare utha ke taraju m dalne lagi....
Ravi ne usko nazar utha ke dekha or sochne laga ..
.waha to itna lad rahi thi...2 rupee ke liye...or yhaa bina rate puche....
Tabhi neha boli...
N: ajj aaye nhi...( muskurate hue)
R:: wo bas ase hi.....or app log...( neha ko dekh ke lekin tirchi nazar se anju ko dekh ke)
N:: are kaam tha bazzar ja hi rahe h ghar ko...( smile karke)
Ravi ne fruits le liye..or neha se bola...
R:: chaliye m bhi ghar ko hi ja raha hu...( bike m fruits rakhete hue)
N:...nhi nhi chle jayenge....kha pareshan ho ge???( smile karke)
R:: m kya pareshan hota hu...bike m to jana h...( smile se)
Anju smile karke hasne lagi...or thele wale ko paise dene lagi..
Yaha wo thelea wala confused ho gyaa ki anju usko dekh ke hans rahi h to khud bhi hanste hue...anju ko bache hue paise dene laga..
Anju ne jaise hi usko dekha...ek dam se gambhir face bana liya...or zaldi se paise liye ...or mud gayi...
Neha ne anju se bola...
N:: didi or kuch kaam h???
Anju ki to juban bhi nhi nikal rahi thi..bas kaise karke boli...
A:: nhi to ab kya kaam hoga....( ek nazar ravi ko dekhi...or fir sharma ke bhane se apne bag ko check karne lagi)
Ravi bola..
R: bethiye fir....( thoda aage ko sarak ke)
Tabhi anju ne wo kiya jo uska man chata tha
..jadi se bike ke or badhi...or turtant ek side ko er karke beth gayi..ravi bhi iske liye tyar nhi thi...to bike ek side ko girne lagi....tabhi...neha heran ho ke boli...
Bike disbalnce hone lagi...lekin ravi ne sambhal li...
To neha boli anju se...
N:: moti kahi ki...beth gayi apna...( muh bna ke hanste hue)
Anju ko apni galti ka ehsah hua...or utarte hue boli...
A:: are sorry wo tu beth ja pehle...( sharm se dono ko dekhte hue)
Ravi zor se hasna chata tha lekin hansi control kar li...
To neha boli..
N: pagal beth gayi to uthi kyn...chal beth ravi ko der kar rahi h...tu bhi pagal hi rahegi...( hanste hue)
Fir is baar anju dubra bethi...lekin is bar ravi bike acche se pakde raha...or anju ne ek hath ravi ke shoulder pe rakha...or aage ko khisk gayi...jisse ki neha ke liye bhi jgh ho...
Tabhi neha boli....
N:: didi ye bag pakad...( anju ko dete hue)
Anju jo apne kyali m khoyi thi...turtant boli...
A:: haan haan laa....( hathravi ke shoulder se hath ke..bag pakdte hue)
Tabhi neha boli...
N:: aage ko ho na...girayegi muje...( hanste hue bethne lagi)
Tabhi ravi thida or aage ko hua..to anju khud bakhud aage ko ho gayi...or neha ke bthne se uske mmote unnnat uroz...ravi ki pith m dhas gaye...
Yha shikar or shikari dono ko bura haal tha...
Ravi ko apni pith m aisa mehsoos hua jaise ki pani ka gubbbra dab gaya ho....
Or wahi...ravi ki pith m urozz dabte hi...anju ki aankh dard ko masti se bhar gayi...kynki aaj subh se hi uske left stan ke nipple m dard ho rah tha...or ase ragdhne or dabne se to jaan hi nikal gyai...
Or tabhi ravi ne bike start ki...or aane lage...
Raste bhar anju ke urozz uski pith se ragad khate rahe...or spped brakar or gaddhon m pure dabte rahe...
Annju sarre raste aankh band hi kiye rahi...
Wahi ravi sawdhani se bike chala rha tha..ki jhatke jaisa na lage or anju galat na sochw...lekin bike baar baar gaddhon m hi jati...
Ravi ko apne pe gussa aane laga...
Kher ravi ne vivek ke ghar pe bike roki...to neha utar gayi...or anju se boli...
N:: ae didi so gayi kya...( utar ke apna dupattaa sahi karte hue)
Anju hosh m aayi or hadbaa ke uatr gayii..or jaise hi ravi se dur hui...urooz apni postion m aa gaye dubara..
Neha to pallu hi thik karne m thi...jabki ravi ki nazar anjane m hi anju ke urozzo ke ubhar pe aa gyai...
Or ye anju ne bhi dekh liya ki...ravi uske kon se nazuk ang ko dekh raha h...to turant ghabrate hue palat gayi...or neha se boli...
A:: chal na ab...( dhere se)
Neha ne ravi ko thanks bola or ghar aane ko bola...
.to ravi ne mana kar diya...dono ander janne lage...jabki ravi anju ko hi dekhte raha....piche se...
Anju ki chaal kisi hirni se kam nhi thi..saree main uske . khule ek side ko jate fir dusre side ko.....tabhi ravi ko dyan aay ki wo kya dekh raha h...or chala gya apne ghar ko...
To be continue...