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Adultery Meri fantasy ( Adultery/Romance)

agmr66608

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Haan bhai thoda time mil gaya to socha ek update or de du..
Story bhi to puri karni h...fir dekhte h..kon si story aati h..
😇😇😇
भाई साहब, आपकी स्टोरी खतम करने की बात सामने आयी। आपकी कुछ अधूरा काम का फिरिसती दे देता हु:
१) उस गुप्ता का बढ़िया से दवाई देना है
२) नीमा, गीता को पूरा पूरी अपनाना है
३) दोस्त के घर के घोड़ियो को अपनाना है और उनलोगों का मुसकिल आसान करना है
४) दोस्त के आत्मीय के घर मे जहां एक रात बिताए थे, वहाँ पर पड़ने जाना है और बहुत कुछ क्रियाकर्म होना है
५) मधु के साथ साथ पूनम को भी अपनाना है और उस के मुसकिल भी आसान करना है
६) सबसे बड़ी बात दीपिका से बच्चा होना है और दीपिका को अपना धरमपतनी बनाना है

मुझे लगता है यह काम होने मे कांसे कम और १ साल से ऊपर लग जाना ही है बशर्ते की कोई और मोहतरमा इस बीच न जुट जाए कहानी मे। खैर, आप इस स्टोरी के लेखक है आगे आपकी मर्जी लेकिन यह हमलोग जैसे कुछ पाठको का गुजारिश ही समझ लीजिये की स्टोरी इतनी जल्दी खतम करने की बात मत कीजिये। कारण है की आपका स्टोरी मे जो घटनाक्रम जैसे दिखाया जाता है वो लाजवाब होता है। धन्यबाद🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
 
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भाई साहब, आपकी स्टोरी खतम करने की बात सामने आयी। आपकी कुछ अधूरा काम का फिरिसती दे देता हु:
१) उस गुप्ता का बढ़िया से दवाई देना है
२) नीमा, गीता को पूरा पूरी अपनाना है
३) दोस्त के घर के घोड़ियो को अपनाना है और उनलोगों का मुसकिल आसान करना है
४) दोस्त के आत्मीय के घर मे जहां एक रात बिताए थे, वहाँ पर पड़ने जाना है और बहुत कुछ क्रियाकर्म होना है
५) मधु के साथ साथ पूनम को भी अपनाना है और उस के मुसकिल भी आसान करना है
६) सबसे बड़ी बात दीपिका से बच्चा होना है और दीपिका को अपना धरमपतनी बनाना है

मुझे लगता है यह काम होने मे कांसे कम और १ साल से ऊपर लग जाना ही है बशर्ते की कोई और मोहतरमा इस बीच न जुट जाए कहानी मे। खैर, आप इस स्टोरी के लेखक है आगे आपकी मर्जी लेकिन यह हमलोग जैसे कुछ पाठको का गुजारिश ही समझ लीजिये की स्टोरी इतनी जल्दी खतम करने की बात मत कीजिये। कारण है की आपका स्टोरी मे जो घटनाक्रम जैसे दिखाया जाता है वो लाजवाब होता है। धन्यबाद🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
khtam nhi ho rahi h bhai...pura hoke hi hogi...lekin uske tarf chalna to hai hi..
Tension na lijiye...sab kuch hone ke baad hi hoga...
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raghav1992

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Haan bhai thoda time mil gaya to socha ek update or de du..
Story bhi to puri karni h...fir dekhte h..kon si story aati h..
😇😇😇
bhai ek salah du agar manoge tho

abhi aap bas isi story per apna dhyan dedo kyunki aap agar dusra koi naya story likhne ki start karoge tho dononko ek saath samay nahi de pavoge fir yaha readers bi tho aise hai ki update update karte rehte hai included me

halanki maine kabi waiting nahi likha per update ka intezaar kise nahi hota wo bi aisi story ho
 
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bhai ek salah du agar manoge tho

abhi aap bas isi story per apna dhyan dedo kyunki aap agar dusra koi naya story likhne ki start karoge tho dononko ek saath samay nahi de pavoge fir yaha readers bi tho aise hai ki update update karte rehte hai included me

halanki maine kabi waiting nahi likha per update ka intezaar kise nahi hota wo bi aisi story ho
Jab tak ye puri nhi hogi..new story nhi aayegi..
 
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Fir tution gaya...aaya to dekha.radha aa chuki thi...thoda der se aaya tha to ..madhu bhi dudh le kar ja chuki thi...
To book le kar madhu ke ghar ko chala gya..

Ab aage:::

Ravi madhu ke ghar jane laga...or gate m phucha to uska wo hi kutta bhonk raha tha...

Madhu bhar aayi...or ravi ko dekh ke muskurate hue bhar ko aayi or boli...

M:: are m ruki thi...tum der se aaye sayad..( gate kholte hue smile karke)

R: haan wo der ho gayi thi...ye book....( madhu ko book dete hue)

M:: are aa jao...kaha bhagne ki ho rahi h...bhut badal gaye ho ab...( dhere se ek nazar ander ko dekh ke)

Ravi kuch nhi bola or ander aane laga to madhu boli...

M:: suno tumko ek baat bhi batani h...( thoda dhere se serious ho ke)

R:: kya???( heran ho ke)

Madhu ne uska hath pakda or side ko le gayi or bi...

M: tumko yaad h us din aaye the...sham ko....m akele thi...( dhere se ander ko punam ko dekhte hue)

R:: haan haan to...( dhere se tension m)

M::us din tumhare jane ke baad mere kapde nhi mil rahe the...( dhere se ander ko dekhte hue)
Ravi samja nhi or bola...

R:: m m samja nhi...( thoda tension m)

M:: are buddhu...meri panty...or kya...( smile karke...dhere se)

R: ohh...haan...to....(gaur se dekhte hue)

M:: wo muje babu ji ke room m mili...unki almira main...sayad unhone dekh to nhi liya...hum dono ko..( dhere se)

Madhu ki baat sun ke ravi ke per kaampne lage...or bola....

R:: kya???( thoda zor se)

Or bfir ander ko dekh ke bola...kab ??.

M:: tum na pagal ho...zor se kyn bolte ho...main keh rahi hu...babu ji ko sayad pata chal gya...lekin m chle gayi thi iske papa ke sath...kal din m unka room saaf kar rahi thi...to mili almira main...muje kuch nhi kaha...tum thoda savdhan rehna...
Muje bhi aajeb tarh se dekhte h wo bola kuch nhi abhi...main bata rahi hu tumko...( dhere se sari baat bata di)

Ravi ka ab man nhi tha waha rukne ka..usko tension hone lagi...

Or bola...

R:: ye book lo..main jaa raha hu...( tension m)
M::are wo nhi hain abhi dar kyn rahe ho...main smbhal lungi...wo ase hi hain gandi gandi kitab padhte rehte h.....main tabhi yaha se chale gayi...kya bharosa unka...

R: to ab kya karoge?? Fas gaye...( behad dare hue awaz m)

M:: tumko kuch nhi hoga...m sambhal lungi...tension mat karo...mera ek kaam karoge???( ravi ko gaur se dekhte hue)

R::ab kya karna h...main kya karu???( thoda gusse m)

Ravi ko apne upper hi gussa aa rha tha ki uski thrak ne hi usko fasa diya tha...

To madhu dhere se ander ko dekh ke boli...
M:: main jo kahungi karoge???( ravi ki aankhon m dekh ke)

Madhu ke ase dekhne se ravi darne laga or bola...

R:: app muje darao mat...or chalo main jaa raha hu...khali aaya us din...unhone ghar m bol diya to main marunga or kuch nhi...( darte hue dhere se)

M:: kehbrahi hu na kuch nhi hoga tumko...???bas jo m kehti hu wo karna bas...( dhere se bol ke)

R:: bolo to sahi karna kya h....( irritate hote hue)

M:: dekho muje galat mat samjna...tum punam ko pata lo kaise bhi...main help karungi...( ravi ko dekh ke)

Madhu ki baat sun ke ravi ke hosh udd gaye...or bola...

R:: pagal ho kya aap...main kaise???nhi nhi muje kuch nhi karna...mere exam hian ...main to aaunga bhi nhi ab yaha...( gusse m)

M:: tum samj kyn nhi rahe ho...punam hi bacha sakti h ab...kaise bhi punam ko apne favour m le lo...punam waise hi chidi hui h apne mummy papa se...

Kal ko rudra ke dada ji ne kuch kiya bhi to wo supp karegi...nhi to wo pagal h...mere upper bhi niyat khrab h unki....samjo tum...( dhere ander ko dekh ke)

Tabhi punam ne door khola to madhu ander ko aa gyai...or ase boli ...jaise ravi abhi abhi aaya ho...or boli...

M:: are ander aao na...kitna sharmate ho...dekho punam tumse sharma rahe hain...( hanste hue)

Ravi ki to waise hi halat khrab thi..usko samj nhi aa rha tha kya kare...tk chup chap aander aa gya...
Or man hi man sochne laga...

Kehta tha na main zaida udd mat marega ek din...ab ho gaya...ho gayi man ki taslli...
Sala iska sasur ab marega meri...or upper se keh rahi h...iski nand ko pata le...pagala hu main...main to aunga bhi nhi ab..sala bhuddha mar bhi nhi raha h...


Kahi aa na jaye...yaar m jata hu..
Ravi ye sab soch hi raha tha ki punam boli...
P:: are kya hua?? ( ravi ko dekh ke muskurate hue uske samne bethi...)

Madhu hanste hue kitchen ko chle gayi...
Ravi ke muh se dar se awaz bhi nhi nikal rahi thi....
Bas naa main sir hilaya...

To punam boli...

P:: aacha muje ye LCM.bata doge...pata nhi...bhul gayi...( book kholte hue)

.ravi ka kuch karne ko man nhi tha...bas jana chata tha...or man hi man bolne laga...

Muje chor de yaar...bhad m gaya LCM..padh le khud hi...kyn aaya hunga iske ghar us din...marwa diya yaar...ghar m pata chlega to tudai ho jani h..meri...( rone wala muh bnate hue)

P:: are kya hua...preshan ho...bolo...( heran ho ke smile de kar)

R:: wo wo main na baad m bata dunga ek kaam h...m baad m aata hu...( uthte hue)

Or bhag gaya...

Punam heran thi or madhu se boli...

P:: babhi bhabhi....isko koi problem h kya...ajeeb sa kar raha tha...pata nhi...( bolte hue kitchen ko gayi)

Madhu usko dekhte hue hanste hue boli....

M:: are tumko dekh ke...pagal ho gaya hoga...( zor se hanste hue)

P:: pagal ho aap...maine kya kiya...( apni tarif sun ke thoda hanste hue)

M:: to kya...koi bhi dekhega tumko to pagal ho jayega...kahi kuch dikha to nhi diya usko...( uske uroozo m nazar marte hue hanste hue)

P:: app na sach m pagal ho...baacha h wo...pagal...( ankh dikha ke hanste hue kr apna dupatta sahi karte hue)

M:: unmmm...baccha h wo....tumko nhi pata h...( dhere se bol ke...kaam karte hue)

Punam ke kaan khade ho gaye or boli....

P:: kya kaha apne..???( heran ho ke madhu ko dekh ke)

M:: kuch nhi...wo thoda sharmila h...pehli baar jab aaya tha...mujse bhi ase hi darta tha...hai bhut cute na...

Ek din subh aaya tha...padhne aata tha..jab .m uth ke aayi...maine nighty pehni thi...rudra ko dudh pila ke aayi thi...

Main jhuki to mere wha nazar chle gayi iski....ab uski bhi kya galti...bechare ka wo pura...mood m aa gya....maine dekh to sharma gya...bechara....( zor se hanste hue)

P:: chiiiii bhabhi aap chup ho jao...bhut gandi ho aap....sharm nhi aati apko...ye sab bolte hue??( hanste hue)

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M:: are mazak thodi kar rahi hu...wo dikhne m baccha h...baap re lower ke bhar se hi....unnnhhh....dar gayi main...( mazak karte hue punam se or naa main sir hilate hue jaise koi galat chiiz dekh li ho)

P:: chup raho yaar aap...bhaiya ko bula lo...app pagal ho gayi ho or kuch nhi...apko dekh ke hi bechara bhaga hoga...kam se kam muje padha to deta...( muh bnate hue)

M:: are apke bahiya...hunnnhhh....( thoda muh bna ke)

P::bol to ase rahi ho...jaise ki apne hi check kiya ho...( madhu ke man ko jaane ki koshish)

M:: main kyn check karungi....m to bata rahi hu...or wo bhi is gahr m...tumko lagta h...main koi check weck nhi kiya bas jo tha wo bata diya...
Accha h ladka...asia nhi h...tension mat lo...tumko kha nhi jayega...( muskurate hue)

P:: muje koi shock nhi h...wo sab ka...app hi bechain lag rahi ho....( madhu ke mann ko tatolne ki koshish)

Punam madhu se uske mann ki baat jaane ki koshish karne lagi...lekin madhu bhi bhut tez thi...wo sab samj rahi thi..bas usko punam ko shishe m utaena tha...kynki ek baar wo bhi kar leti...to dono ek hi naav m aa jate...

M:: are mazak kar rahi hu....wo mummy or papa ke se bhut darta h...tabhi nhi aata...thoda shy kiskam ka h...na...( bat bante hue)

P:: to kya mummy papa kha jayenge kya usko...??( apne maa baap ke bare m sun ke thoda bura feel karte hue gate ke tarf dekhte hue..jaha se ravi ravi gaya tha)

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M:: ab ye to wo hi jane....( sabji kaate hue)

P:: ek baat puchu???( madhu ki back ko dekh ke)

M: haan bolo na...??( muskuratevhue aage ko dekh ke)

P:: apko dekh ke uska wo sach m....????( dhere se)

Punam ke bolne se madhu samj gayi ki ek jigyasa to usne uske ander jaga hi di h...to thoda badha chada ke boli...

M:: jhut bolungi kya.??( muskura ke palat ke dekhte hue)

Punam uska muh dekhe reh gayi...or bina kuch bole...bhar chale gayi...halanki wo uski bhabhi thi...or khud bhi shadi sudha thi...lekin ase openly bolna thik nhi samja or bhar chale gayi...

Madhu usko jaate hue dekhte hue sochne lagi...

Punam tu kya jane...wo kya h....ek baar karke dekh...sab kuch bhul ke uski gulam na ban gayi to mera naam bhi madhu nhi...

Kaise bhi babuji ke aane se pehle..isko set karna padega...nhi to wo to chorenge nhi...ek dam se ja bhi nhi paungi iske papa ke sath...

Itna to h...babhu ji...ke mann m kuch to h...kahi mera faida na utha le...usse pehle kuch karna hoga...

Wahi punam bhar to aa gayi...lekin madhu ki baat ghar kar gayi...or sochne lagi...

Ye bahbhi bhi na...inke laksahn thik nhi lag rahe...kaise keh rahi thi...itna bada...jaise inhone hi napa ho inch tape se...hunnnh...pagal banne ko main hi hu jaise... hunnh...
Muje job karni h...kaise bhi...waise bhi...mardon se nafrat ho gayi h muje...
Muje kya uska bada ho ya chota...dekha nhi kitna masum h...or bhabhi ko dekho...tabhi chala gya hoga wo inke karan...
Inki hi nazar hogi us pe...wo to chup chap hi betha tha...
kya muje dekh ke chala gaya kya???( apne husan ki tariif m khus hote hue)

muje kya...muje to bas padhna tha..bhabhi jane or wo jane...uska nape ya kuch bhi kare uske sath...muje kya??( apne dil ko jhuti taslli dete hue)


Pata nhi bhuwan bhaiya kaise sambhalte honge inko...sambhal bhi pate honge ki nhi...laksan kuch thik nhi h inke....( kitchen ko dekh ke muskurate hue)

Wahi ravi ghar aa gya...or tension m tha...madhu ne uske tote khol diye the...

Ravi ko...samne virendra nazar aane laga....padhne ka bhi man nhi hua or sochne laga...

Main aaj se hi ye sab kaam chor deta hu...yaar ye buddha mar dega...sala dekhta bhi kaise h...dekha nhi us din jab vivek ki bua ke sath dekha to kaise ghur raha tha..sach m tabhi dekh raha hoga...
Or madhu kya keh rahi thi...uske piche bhi pada h...kya sach m...wo to uski bahu h... sab sale harami hain...madhu ne hi dikhaya hoga usko..kuch...bhagwan bacha le....( upper ko dekhte hue jaise ki bhagwan ji se baat kar raha ho)


Main to jaunga hi nhi uske ghar ...

Or ravi puri raat tension m hi tha...kahan kha ke chuo chap room m aa gya...radha ke paas tak nhi gya...
Or so gya...

Raat ko sapne dekha...ki wo punam ke sath kar raha h...or piche se virendra usko marne ko aa raha h....

Or keh raha h...

Sale pehle meri bahu fir meri beti....mera hi ghar mila h tuje apni thark mitane ko...tuje main aaj chorunga nhi .

Niid m ravi pasina pasina hone laga...or ek dam se utha...or jab dekha sapna tha to...bed m zor se let gaya....

Ab to niid bhi nhi aa rahi thi......

To be continued...
Nice update...
 
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Sale pehle meri bahu fir meri beti....mera hi ghar mila h tuje apni thark mitane ko...tuje main aaj chorunga nhi .
Niid m ravi pasina pasina hone laga...or ek dam se utha...or jab dekha sapna tha to...bed m zor se let gaya....
Ab to niid bhi nhi aa rahi thi......

Ab aage::::

Ravi subh der tak soya raha..ajj school ki chutti ka last din tha...

Radha or deepika aage side the...or apne apne kaam m lage the...

Ravi subh utha to sir dard kar raha tha...nahane ke baad aage gaya or nasta kiya or fir se room m aa ke so gaya...

Deepika uske room m jhadu lagne aayi to dekha ravi so raha h to boli..

D:: kya hua?? Tabiyat khrab h kya??( door mat uthate hue)

Ravi jo lete tha waise hi aankh band karke bola...
R:: hmmm...sir dard kar raha h...aap bhar ko jaoge to door band kar dena ..thodi der sota hu..( waise hi lete hue deepika se bol ke).

D:: dawai du kya??( ravi ke pass bethe hue uske sir ko dabate hue)

R:: naa thik ho jayega...so jata hu..thodi der..agwr vivek ka phone aayega to bol dena tabiyat thik nhi h...( deepika ke godh m sir rakhe hue)

D:: h.mmm...chalo tum araam karo muje bhut kaam h...market bhi jana h...(uthte hue)

R:: hmm...door band kar dena...( rajai odh ke sote hue)

Or deepika chale gayi...
Ravi bhi so gaya...
Wahi vivek ke ghar pe...

Anju or ruma rablvi ka wait kar rahe the...halanki kuch din m hi ruma ka pati bhi aane wala tha...lekin usko intezar ravi ka tha...

Kuch din telephone m baat zaroor hui thi...lekin uske baad dono ko karob aane ka mauka nhi mila...

Wahi anju ko bhi apne ghar jana tha...pata nhi akab aa jaye uska pati usko lene...
Wahi madhu ke ghar pe...

Raat ko madhu ne punam ko uske sath sone ko bola...lekin punam ne usko hanstw hue taal diya...

Subh se dono m koi khass baat nhi hui thi...uska main reason ye bhi tha ki..madhu ghar ke kaamo m lagi thi...or baachon ko sambhal rahi thi...

Jabhi punam padhai kar rahai thi...to madhu ne bhi usko distrub karna thik nhi samjha..
Punam ko maths m kuch dikkat thi...to irritate hone lagi...or sochne lagi...

Ufffoooo....kyn nhi ho raha...ye...main bhul gayi...ye ravi ka baacha bhi....bata hi deta to...kya chala jata...main kon sa jo uska kha rahi thi.....
Bhaiya bhi school band the kam se kam aa hi jate...unko bhi bas paise se hi matlab h....
Hunnnhhh...paisa paisa karke mar jayenge ye log...


Ravi to rukta hi ye bhabhi ne hi bhaga diya bechare ko or naam mera laga rahi h...hunnnhhh???

Tabhi madhu aa gayi...or usko coffee dete hue boli...

M:: kya ho gaya kyn itna pareshan ho rahi ho...( bethte hue)

P:: are bhabhi ye samj nhi aa rha...bhaiya bhi aa jate ....kahi tution lagna padhta h muje ab...aise nhi hoga...( book ko dekhte hue)

M:: unnnnnn...apne bhaiya ki to mat bolo....( apne pati pe gussa hote hue)

Punam kuch na boli..bas book dekte hue coffe pine lagi ..

Madhu waha se uth ke chale gayi...2no bacchon ke pass...
Jo room m khel rahe the....

Punam kafi irritate feel kar rahi thi...padhna chati thi lekin kuch bhi samj nhi aa raha tha...
Wahi ravi ko bukhar bhi aa gaya tha...

Khana bana ke radha or deepika market chale gaye the...

Ravi bukhar ke karn room m hi soya rha...uski nani uthane aayi to pata chala ki usko bukhar h...
Ravi ki nani wahi kahana le kar aa gayi...ravi ne jaise taise thoda sa kahna khaya...or fir so gaya...
4bje deepika wapas aayi to pata chala ki ravi ko bukhar h to turant uske room m gayi...or usko utha ke boli...

D:: ravi ravi....kya hua?? Bukhar aa gaya??( thoda preshan ho ke)

R::hmmm...halka sa h...( uthte hue)

Deepika ne uske sir pe hath lagaya...to dekha or boli...

D:: ohhh....bhut garam h sur...chalo doctor ko dikha laao...( pareshan ho ke uske sir m hath laga ke).

R:: are thik ho jayega...peracetamol de do...upper hogi..( apna sir pakdte hue)

D:: zaida na doctor mat bano...chlo chup chap ..( dante hue)

R:: main kahi nhi ja rha...ek tablet de do...thoda thik hoga to chala jaunga....( irritate ho ke)

D:: thik ho jo ho jayega to kya karoge ja ke ..dikhane m kya dikkat h???( smajhate hue)

R:: main nhi ja paunga..puri body m pain h ..( per sidha karte hue dard se)

Deepika dawai lene chale gyai...

Thodi der baad ravi ne dawai khai...or fir so gaya...

Wwahi radha deepika se boli...

Rd:: kya hua...?? Bhulhar aaya h kya ravi ko..???(
D:: haan mami...doctor ko dikha lo kaha maine...sunte kaha hain meri...dawai di h....( kaam karte hue)

Ase hi sham ho gayi....madhu dudh lene aayi...or dudh le kar jane lagi...to deepika miki...jo ravi ke liye garam pani le ja rahi thi...

D:: are aap ..?? Dudh lene aaye the???( muskurate hue)

M:: haan ....ja rahi hu...ye pani kha ko??( deepika ke hath ke or ishara karke).

D:: are wo ravi ko bhukar aaya h...doctor ko dikha laao kaha mante hain nhi...dekh ke aati hu...( smile karke)

M:: accha...kab se...kal to aaye the...hamare waha...( gaur se deepika ko dekh ke)

D:: haan kal raat bhi khana nhi khaya...subh sir dard ho raha h keh rahe the..main market gayi thi...aayi to pata chala...( zaldi m bolte hue)

M:: accha....chlo thik h m chlati hu...koi dikaat hogi to batana...( ghar ko jate hue)

D:: hmm thik h...( muskura ke)..

Deepika ravi ke room m chale gayi...or madhu apne ghar ..

Raste m jate hue madhu sochne lagi...

Meri baat sun ke to bukhar nhi aa gya...muje nhi batana chaiye tha.lekin ..batna bhi to zaroori tha...na..

Khali bhi dar raha h...uske dada ji ko to main sambhal lungi...kaise bhi...wo kahli dar raha h....( ghar jate hue sochne lagi...)

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Wahi ravi ka bukhar utar gaya tha to...Deepika usko aage side le aayi...

Madhu apne ghar pahuchi...or poonam se boli...
M:: ravi ko bukhar aa gya....( dudh khali karte hue)

P:: kaise bhabhi...( apne baache ke kapde thik karte hue)

M:: kya pata....tumko dekh ke to nhi aaya...( hanste hue)

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P:: kya bhabhi aa p bhi fir suru ho gayi...usko bukhar aay h...or aap majak kar rahe ho...( thoda ruthte hue)

M:: are thik ho jayega...main kya mazak kar rahi hu...tumhare bhaiya aayenge keh rahe the aaj....( dudh gas m chadte hue).

P:: accha phone aaya tha kya...??( kitchen ke or aate hue..bacchon ke sath)

M:: hann maine bola...ghar main bhi log hain...tab aa rahe h...( thoda serious ho ke)

Punam man hi man hansne lagi to madhu boli...
M:: kya hua hansi kyn aa rahi h...( punam ko dekh ke).
P:: nhi kuch nhii....( hanste hue).

M:: bolo na...( zidd karte hue...)

P:: matlab ki aaj bhaiya ki kher nhi h....bwchare din bhar tution padha ke aayenge...or raat ko aapko padhyenge...( zor se hans ke)

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M:: unnn.....padha liya unhone...muje pata h...kitne der padha payenge...( muh bna ke double meaning baat karte hue)

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P:: aaacha kitna der padhna h meri madhubala ko...( hanste hue...uske shoulder pe apni chinn rahkhte hue)

M:: dekh lena...awaz aayegi hi bhar...( hanste hue uske hath ko dabate hue)

P: chii bhabhi bhut besharam ho aap...( sharma ke)

M:: are tum hi keh rahai ho...kitne der padhayenge..tab keh rahi hu dekh lena...( punam ko cherte hue)

Ase hi dono ki baat hote rahi...

Wahi ravi upper betha rha...radha ne bhi uska haal chal liya...Deepika kahan bna rahi thi...
Wahi madhu ke ghar pe 8 bhe bhuwan aa gya...
Punam or buwan beth ke baath kar rahe the..madhu kahan abna rhi thi...

Punam bhuwan se baat kar rahi thi...lekin dimag m madhu ki baat ghum rahi thi ki...dekh lena kitne der padhte h tumhare bhaiya...

Punam ko hansi aane lagi...to bhuwan ne pucha...lekin usne taal diya...

Wahi ravi ne bas daal pi...to deepik boli...
D:: tum niche hi so jana...khali raat ko tbiyat khrab hogi...( ravi ko dawai dete hue)

Ravj ne bas haan m sir hilaya....
Thodi der baad sab log niche chale gaye....


To be continue...
Nice twist achi story hai sir

Keep it up....!!!
 
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Thodi der baad punam chup hui....
Or fir madhu ne baat ko ghuma diya...wo usse uske baap ke bare m bhi bolna chati thi...pata nhi kyn aaj khud madhu ruk gayi...
Kya uski ye khamoshi..uske jeewan m ek naya mod layegi...????.

Ab aage:::

Din bhar dono main kuch khas bat nhi hui...
Wahi ravi ko bhi pata chala school m...baaton baaton m vivek ne usko bataya ki anju didi bhi apne ghar chale gayi h...pata chala ki uske jija ji aaye the...lene...or usko jana pada...

Anju ke jane se...ravi ko pata nhi kyn aacha nhi laga...lekin vivek se kuch na bola...

Din m school se aaya or kahan kha ke aram karne chala gya apne room...
Bukhar fir aane laga tha...to room m dawai kha ke so gaya tha...

Deepika ko period aa gaya tha to wo aone hi room m thi...usko to pata bhi nhi chala ki kab ravi aaya...

Tabhiyat thik nhi thi...lekin wo tution chala hi gaya...vivek ke ghar se kuch books leni thi to ravi aate time vivek ke ghar gaya...

Ghar gaya to pata chala ruma ka bhi husband aaya h..chutti...

Ravi ne usse baat to nhi ki...or ruma bhi husband ke aane se ravi se dur hi rahi...taki husban ko kuch bhi galat na lage...

Ravi chup chap apne ghar aa gaya...

Jab ghar aaya to dekha aaj punam dudh lene aayi thi...madhu ka mood thik nhi tha..sayad isliye...

Punam ghar ke gate ke bhar ravi se miki..
Ravi ne usko nasmste kiya...punam bhi halka sa muskura gayi...or boli...

P:: bukhar aaya h kya???( halki smile se..madhu ke bete ka hath pakde hue)

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Ravi heran tha ki usko kaise pata chala to bola...
R:: haan bass...ase hi....( normal ho ke)

P:: hmmm....kyal rakho apna...or kab aa rahe ho muje padhne??( smile karke)

Ravi ko samj nhi aaya ki haan bole ki na...to bas bola...

R:: aaaunga...dekhta hu...( smile karke ghar ke aander ko dekhte hue)

Punam bas hanste hue chle gayi...
Or raste m sochne lgi...

Kitna sharmata h ye....jaise kha jaungi isko....( smile karte hue...rudra ko dekhte hue)

Or bahbhi keh rahi thi...ki us din wo dekha...( thoda shrm feel karte hue)


Bhabhi bhi na..pagal h...isko dekh ke lagta h...baat karne m to uski halat khrab hoti h...pagal h....( ravi ke ghar ko mud ke dekhte hue)


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Punam ye sab soch ke...apne ghar ko aa gayi...
Madhu puja kar rahi tji...din bhar zaida baat bhi nhi kar rahi thi...bas room m hi soye rahi...wo bhi apne sasur ke...

Apne room m jana hi nhi chati thi...jaise ki waha bhuwan abhi bhi ho..

Actually room m uski shadi ki photo lagi thi...jisme wo or bhuwan the...madhu us photo ko bhi nhi dekhna chati thi...

Punam ne aake dudh gas pe chadya...tab tak madhu bhi aa gayi...to boli..

P:: babhi kya khaogw???kya bnau???( smile karke)

M:: nhi main bnati hu...tum padhai kar lo...( bina kisi bhav ke ek dam gumsum)

Punam baat karke uska man halka karna chati thi...lekin madhu to jaise ek sadme main thi...
Or freez se sabzii nikalne lagi...

Punam kuch bolna chati thi..lekin is time bolna sahi nhi samja..

Or apne room m chle gayi padhne...
Jabki bacche kitchen m hi madhu ke sath the...
Tabhi phon3 baja...

Punam ne hi phone uthaya...

Pata chala ki uski maa ka phone h...jo roz isi time hi phone karti thi...

Punam ne baat ki...to pata chala ki uske pita yani ki virendra ki tabiyat kuch khrab h...

Syad 2,3 din m wapas aa jayenge...

Madhu kitchen se hi sari baat sun rahi thi...
Or phone rakh ke...punam kitchen m aayi or boli...

P:: papa ki tabiyat khrab ho rahi h...bahbhi...( thoda chinta karte hue)

M:: kyn kya hua...??( rukhe swar m)

P:: hart m dard h bol rahi thi mummy...pehlw hi keh rahi thi..thande m mat jao...sunte to hai nhi...( bol ke apne room ko jate hue)

Nadhu kuch na boli.. jaise usko ab kisi ke jeene ya marne se koi fark na ho...

Bas zaldi se kahana bnaya...or bacchon ko khilane lagi....

Tabhi door knock hua...

Madhu ne ghadi dekhi...or fir gate ko dekh ke sochi...
Abhi kon aaya hoga...is time....


Or uthte hue apne bete se boli..

M:: beta bahiya se ladna mat marungi main...betho m aati hu...kon aayaa hoga?...( uth ke jhuthe hath se bhar ko jate hue)

Punam apne room m padh rahi thi...
Door knock karne wale ne zor se knock kiya to madhu boli...

M:: are rahi hu...pata nhi kon h( chappl pehn ke door khol ke main door ko jate hue)

Or jaise hi door khola uske hosh udd gaye...
Or door se hathte hue..apne saree ke dupatte ko sahi karte hue boli...

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M:: tum??????( thoda gusse or darte hue dupatta se apne joban ko dhakte hue)

To be continued....
 
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