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Adultery Meri fantasy ( Adultery/Romance)

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लाजवाब अपडेट भाई लेकिन मैं ये नहीं समझ पा रहा हूं कि कहानी में सभी महिलाओं को बेबस क्यों दिखा रहे हो किसी को तो विरोधी बनाओ।।।
Aap bilkul sahi keh rahe h...but ye baat gaur karne wali h...story aaj se kam se kam..15 se 18 saal pehle ki h...
Kya us time ki nari itni saskat thi???

Koi social media nhi...bas ghar m hi dabi hui...
Maine to ye hi dekha ho sakta h main galat bhi hu...
Or dusri baat ..madhu jis situation m hai abhi...jo bhi uske sasural m ho raha h...
Wo kaha itna oppose kar payegi...muje nhi lagta...

Haan rahi baat mohan ki...usko bas abhi vardi ka nasha h...wo bhi tutega...lekin samay aane ke baad...lekin abhi to uska hi time h...wo kuch bhi kare...
Ravi ko yaha nhi lane ka reason ye h ki...ek to madhu log koi relative nhi h uske...jabki mohan h...or upper se age factor bhut mayne rakhta h...anju ko to wo bacha liya...kynki usne sun liya tha...or kaise usne bachaya h ...ye sab hi jante h....

Zabrdasti usko lana matlab...wo bas movie ke jaise ho jayega...or m nhi chata ki...kuch bhi Zabrdasti wala ho...even mohan madhu pe try karta h...wo bhi...mauka lagega to karega...nhi to Zabrdasti ka seen to nhi hoga...
Without any reason...

Dekhna ye h..raat ko mauka milta h??? Ki nhi...sach bolu to muje nhi pata...likhte time jaise situation banegi wo khud hoga...
Main bas neutral ho ke likh raha hu...na madhu ke side na mohan ke side....

Hope all you will be enjoyed...

Dekhiye story m logic hona zaroori h...ye nhi ki particular character hamko aacha lage to hum uske hisab se story likhe...har character ki apni value h...wo chae positive character ho ya negative...

Bas yahi kahunga....
Jo bhi hoga last seen ke hisab ki situation pe...

Keep reading...😊😊
 

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Aap bilkul sahi keh rahe h...but ye baat gaur karne wali h...story aaj se kam se kam..15 se 18 saal pehle ki h...
Kya us time ki nari itni saskat thi???

Koi social media nhi...bas ghar m hi dabi hui...
Maine to ye hi dekha ho sakta h main galat bhi hu...
Or dusri baat ..madhu jis situation m hai abhi...jo bhi uske sasural m ho raha h...
Wo kaha itna oppose kar payegi...muje nhi lagta...

Haan rahi baat mohan ki...usko bas abhi vardi ka nasha h...wo bhi tutega...lekin samay aane ke baad...lekin abhi to uska hi time h...wo kuch bhi kare...
Ravi ko yaha nhi lane ka reason ye h ki...ek to madhu log koi relative nhi h uske...jabki mohan h...or upper se age factor bhut mayne rakhta h...anju ko to wo bacha liya...kynki usne sun liya tha...or kaise usne bachaya h ...ye sab hi jante h....

Zabrdasti usko lana matlab...wo bas movie ke jaise ho jayega...or m nhi chata ki...kuch bhi Zabrdasti wala ho...even mohan madhu pe try karta h...wo bhi...mauka lagega to karega...nhi to Zabrdasti ka seen to nhi hoga...
Without any reason...

Dekhna ye h..raat ko mauka milta h??? Ki nhi...sach bolu to muje nhi pata...likhte time jaise situation banegi wo khud hoga...
Main bas neutral ho ke likh raha hu...na madhu ke side na mohan ke side....

Hope all you will be enjoyed...

Dekhiye story m logic hona zaroori h...ye nhi ki particular character hamko aacha lage to hum uske hisab se story likhe...har character ki apni value h...wo chae positive character ho ya negative...

Bas yahi kahunga....
Jo bhi hoga last seen ke hisab ki situation pe...

Keep reading...😊😊
bhai aap apne hisab se likho..aur naturally dekha jaye toh hum sab yahi sochenge ki madhu kaise bhi kar ke uss darinde se bach jaye aur uss harami ko achhese saja mile..waise madhu yeh baat poonam ko bata sakti hai..!! aur ravi kaise aayega yeh dekhne me bhi maha aayega..!!
 
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भाई लगता है रवि से मन भर गया है इसलिए मोहन को तवज्जो दी जा रही हैं खैर ........
अपडेट वाकई सराहनीय है बधाई🙏🙏
 
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Mohan akel m betha hua ghinoni smile karke aram se beth gaya...or sochne laga....


Ab aage:::

Madhu kitchen se bhar aayi...or zaldi se apne room m chale gayi...usko apne pati pe bhut gussa aaa raha tha...

Lekin majboori thi...usne almira kholi...or waha se ek track suit nikala..

Bhar jane ki himaat nhi ho rahi thi...
Usne soch punam se bol de...to bhar aayi...or nazar niche karke punam ke room ko gayi...mohan usko dekh raha tha...

Madhu ne usko ignore kiya...or ander aagyi...to dekha...punam soyi hui h...uske sir m dard tha...jabki dono bacche khel kar rahe the...
Madhu chate hue bhi punam ko nhi utha ppayi...or nirash ho ke wapas aa gayi...

Or zaldi se room m aa ke door lock kar ke..bed m beth gayi...

Or sochne lagi...

Kya musibat h...apna chle gaye or muje yaha is rakshas ke sath chor diya...kya zarurat thi yaha rokne ki....ya to utna hi aacha adami hota...dekha nhi kaise ghur raha tha...

Main nhi jaungi kuch dene vene...aabhi ayengw to khud denge..mera ye hi kaam h...uske aage piche nachne ka...

Pata nhi anju did kaise rehti hogi is habsi ke sath...kitna ganda lagta h....kala mota....chiiii....ghin aati h dekh kar hi...or hansta h to kaisa lagta h....pata nhi kaise iske sath soti hogi???( chiddte hue sochte hue)


Madhu ye sab soch hi rahi thi ki darwaza khulne ki awaz aayi...usne socha bhuwan aa gyaa hoga...lekin wo heran thi ki itna zaldi kaise or ghadi ko dekhte hue room ka door khol ke bhar ko aane lagi...

Usne dekha...mohan waha nhi h...wo thoda vichar karne lagi...ki car ki awaz aayi...to samj gayi ki mohan bahar gaya h...wo khus hone lagi ki mohan chla gaya...

Lekin wo galat thi...mohan car ander khadi karne laga...

Jaise hi car ki light bhar se khidki ko bhed ke ander tak aane lagi to samj gayi ki...mohan ka final tha yaha rukne ka...

To zaldi se room se track suit or towel liya or mohan ke aane se pehle hall m rakh diya...or bhag ke room m aa gyai...

Madhu ka room m aana or mohan ka ghar ke ander aana...mohan ne darwaza band hote dekh liya or ghurte hue haal m aake dekha kapde rakhe hue the...

Mohan ne kapde uthaye...or sunghne laga...besharmo ki tarh jaise ki...usme madhu ki khusboo dhundh raha ho..

Or sochne laga...

Kab tak bachegi meri jaan...kuch na kuch karna padega...ajj ko...

Lekin kya karu...koi nhi pehle dekhu...bathroom kaha h...inka....???( hall ke chro tarf nazar ghuma ke...


Tabhi usko kapde dikhe haal m samj gaya ki ye hi hoga...or kapde or towel le kar chala gaya...

Or bathroom ja ke door band kiya or dekhne laga jiase kuch dhundh raha ho...

Sayad madhu ya punam ke kapde dhundh raha tha...lekin kuch mila nhi...wha...

To wash room m fresh ho ke sochne laga...

Kaya karu ?? Kya karu??? Kaise aayegi ye bulbul...bhav dekho kitna kha rahi h...

Ek kaam karta hu...iske pati ko to set kar dunga pila ke??

Lekin wo punam ka???? Dikhi bhi nhi?? Hai kha...so to nhi gayi...koi na...mohan police wale ke liya ye kon sa bada kaam h...

Kitno ko sulaya h tune...( man hi man muskurate hue)


Or jaldi se apna wallet nikala...or kuch dudhne laga...or r wallet ki choti jeb se ek goli nikal ke dekhte hue sochne laga...

Ye karegi kaam aab....aacha hua 2 bachi h....lekin usko dunga kaise....wo karna pdega....chalo pehle bhar ja ke...iske pati ka intezam karta hu....

Or fir mohan thodi der baad bhar aa gya...tab tak bhuwan bhi aa gya tha...bhuwan or madhu kitchen m the...madhu usse bol nhi rahi thi...
Bas pata tha kya bannna h...to pyaz wagera kaat rahi thi...

Tabhi mohan kitchen m aa gya...wo track suit jo usne pehna tha...thoda tight or chota tha...or hota bhi kyn nhi...kaha mohan kaha bhuwan....
Madhu ko ek baar hansi aa gyai...ek dam kisi nautanki ka jokar lag raha tha...lekin usne hansi control kar li...

Tabhi bhuwan bola...

Bh:: are mohan ji....ho gaye fresh???( mutton dhote hue)

M:: haan ho gaya...thoda tight h...sayad aap logo ko hansi aa rahi hogi muje pe...( madhu ko dekh ke)

Uski baat sun ke Madhu ek dam se serious ho gayi....
Or pyaza katne lagi....

Bh:: nhi nhi asi baat nhi h....app bethiye m aata hu...(smile karke)

M:: punam kaha h...dikh nhi rahi h...( bhuwan or madhu ko dekh ke)

Bhuwan herani se madhu ko dekh to madhu dhere se bi...

M:: apne room m h...sir dard ho raha h...keh rahi thi...( dhere se taki kewal bhuean sune pyaz kaate hue)

Lekin mohan ne sun liya...or bhar ko aagya or punam ke room ko jane laga...

Dekh punam leti thi...sir m kaoda bandh ke....
Mohan gandi nazar se dekhne laga or sochne laga...

Ohhh ye to bimar h...waise bhi abhi baacha gira h iska...ye to kaam ki nhi h...haan isko sulana padega...( punam ko leta hue dekh ke)

To bade aarm se bed ke pass ja ke uske bwtw ko godh m le kar bola..

Mo: punam o punam kya hua???( bhut hamdardi se)

Punam ne aankh kholi...or uth ke bethi or apne salwar ka duppat apne upper daal ke mohan se boli....

P:: bas jijia ji...sir dard kar raha h..bhut...( sir m hath rakhete hue)

Mo:: are tension se ho gaya hoga...thik ho jayega...dawai li...???( bhut aram se)

P:: nhi h nhi...ase hi bandha h thik ho jayega...app gaye nhi...( bethe hue sahi se)

Mo:: nhi bhai shab rok liye...ab kya kehta main...ruk m dawai deta hu...hogi sayad...hum police walo ko rakhni padti h na...kaam m mere bhi ho jata h..rakhe rehta hu( jhut bolte hue wallet m ase dekhte hue jaise usko pata na ho ki dawai h)

Or wallet se goli nikal ke dete hue...

Mohan itna tez tha ki...goli nikal ke di taki ko padh na pate kiski dawai de raha h...actually wo ek hard core nashe ki goli thi...

Or ye bolna sayad bachpana lage ki uske paas kaha se aayi...police wala h...kahi na kahi se mil hi jati h...

Or goli dete hue bola...

Mo:: kha le isko...acchi dwai h...thik ho jayega...are pani nhi h...main laata hu...( room m pani khojtw hue bhar ko jate hue)

Punam sochne lagi...

Ye anju didi to keh rahi thi jija ji ase h waise h...dekh kitni care kar rahe h...or us pankaj ko kaise jhada tha...

Mohan kitchen m gaya or zaldi se pani laya taki...koi or na dekh le ki wo punam ko kon si dawai de raha h...

Or pani laa ke bola...

Mo:: le pani...or kha le...thik ho jayega...( muh m dikhawati muskan late hue)

Punam jo sir dard se mare ja rahi thi...usne bhi zaldi se goli kaha li....

To mohan bola...

Mo:: tu aram kar...thik h...thik ho jayega...main hu...tension mat le ab....( muskurate hue)

Punam bhi muskura gayi...or let gayi....

Ab mohan ke dimag m tha...bhuwan or madhu....
Or bhar haal m beth ke sochne laga...

Sala iske pati ko to kar dunga lekin iska...????ye sali natak karegi.dekha nhi dekh tak nhi rahi h..karna pdega uska bhi kuch jo natak na kare..isko kya du kaya du????( madhu ke bare m soch ke)

Or fir uske dimag m ek idea aaya...or zaldi se utha or apne kapde pehn ke kitchen ko gaya or bola...

Mo:: bhai shab aap kahan abnao...main anju ke ghar jaa ata hu...nhi to khenge ki..aaya nhi...( kitchen ke door m ja ke bhar se bolte hue)

Bh:: are kahna ban jata h...kaha ja rahe h...???( bhar ko aate hue)

Mo:: bas aabhi aaya.. tab tak bnao...bas gaya or aa gaya....( muskura ke bhar ko niklte hue jaise bhut zaldi m ho)

Bhuwan ko bhut ajeeb laga...jabki madhu ko aacha laga ki chalo gaya to sahi...sayad wahi ruk bhi jaye...

Lekin usko kya pata tha wo kaha gya h...


To be continued...
 
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भाई लगता है रवि से मन भर गया है इसलिए मोहन को तवज्जो दी जा रही हैं खैर ........
अपडेट वाकई सराहनीय है बधाई🙏🙏
Nhi aap galat soch rahe h...aisa nhi h...bas story aage badh rahi h...chote chote character bhi story m jaan dalte h...

Ravi ravi karke..boor na ho...or ye zaroori h...

Baki padhte rehiye...dekhiye kya hota h...
 
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Kamaal hai aap ki writing. hume dewaana bana rahi hai !

Keep up the good work.
 
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Mohan akel m betha hua ghinoni smile karke aram se beth gaya...or sochne laga....


Ab aage:::

Madhu kitchen se bhar aayi...or zaldi se apne room m chale gayi...usko apne pati pe bhut gussa aaa raha tha...

Lekin majboori thi...usne almira kholi...or waha se ek track suit nikala..

Bhar jane ki himaat nhi ho rahi thi...
Usne soch punam se bol de...to bhar aayi...or nazar niche karke punam ke room ko gayi...mohan usko dekh raha tha...

Madhu ne usko ignore kiya...or ander aagyi...to dekha...punam soyi hui h...uske sir m dard tha...jabki dono bacche khel kar rahe the...
Madhu chate hue bhi punam ko nhi utha ppayi...or nirash ho ke wapas aa gayi...

Or zaldi se room m aa ke door lock kar ke..bed m beth gayi...

Or sochne lagi...

Kya musibat h...apna chle gaye or muje yaha is rakshas ke sath chor diya...kya zarurat thi yaha rokne ki....ya to utna hi aacha adami hota...dekha nhi kaise ghur raha tha...

Main nhi jaungi kuch dene vene...aabhi ayengw to khud denge..mera ye hi kaam h...uske aage piche nachne ka...

Pata nhi anju did kaise rehti hogi is habsi ke sath...kitna ganda lagta h....kala mota....chiiii....ghin aati h dekh kar hi...or hansta h to kaisa lagta h....pata nhi kaise iske sath soti hogi???( chiddte hue sochte hue)


Madhu ye sab soch hi rahi thi ki darwaza khulne ki awaz aayi...usne socha bhuwan aa gyaa hoga...lekin wo heran thi ki itna zaldi kaise or ghadi ko dekhte hue room ka door khol ke bhar ko aane lagi...

Usne dekha...mohan waha nhi h...wo thoda vichar karne lagi...ki car ki awaz aayi...to samj gayi ki mohan bahar gaya h...wo khus hone lagi ki mohan chla gaya...

Lekin wo galat thi...mohan car ander khadi karne laga...

Jaise hi car ki light bhar se khidki ko bhed ke ander tak aane lagi to samj gayi ki...mohan ka final tha yaha rukne ka...

To zaldi se room se track suit or towel liya or mohan ke aane se pehle hall m rakh diya...or bhag ke room m aa gyai...

Madhu ka room m aana or mohan ka ghar ke ander aana...mohan ne darwaza band hote dekh liya or ghurte hue haal m aake dekha kapde rakhe hue the...

Mohan ne kapde uthaye...or sunghne laga...besharmo ki tarh jaise ki...usme madhu ki khusboo dhundh raha ho..

Or sochne laga...

Kab tak bachegi meri jaan...kuch na kuch karna padega...ajj ko...

Lekin kya karu...koi nhi pehle dekhu...bathroom kaha h...inka....???( hall ke chro tarf nazar ghuma ke...

Tabhi usko kapde dikhe haal m samj gaya ki ye hi hoga...or kapde or towel le kar chala gaya...

Or bathroom ja ke door band kiya or dekhne laga jiase kuch dhundh raha ho...

Sayad madhu ya punam ke kapde dhundh raha tha...lekin kuch mila nhi...wha...

To wash room m fresh ho ke sochne laga...

Kaya karu ?? Kya karu??? Kaise aayegi ye bulbul...bhav dekho kitna kha rahi h...

Ek kaam karta hu...iske pati ko to set kar dunga pila ke??

Lekin wo punam ka???? Dikhi bhi nhi?? Hai kha...so to nhi gayi...koi na...mohan police wale ke liya ye kon sa bada kaam h...

Kitno ko sulaya h tune...( man hi man muskurate hue)

Or jaldi se apna wallet nikala...or kuch dudhne laga...or r wallet ki choti jeb se ek goli nikal ke dekhte hue sochne laga...

Ye karegi kaam aab....aacha hua 2 bachi h....lekin usko dunga kaise....wo karna pdega....chalo pehle bhar ja ke...iske pati ka intezam karta hu....

Or fir mohan thodi der baad bhar aa gya...tab tak bhuwan bhi aa gya tha...bhuwan or madhu kitchen m the...madhu usse bol nhi rahi thi...
Bas pata tha kya bannna h...to pyaz wagera kaat rahi thi...

Tabhi mohan kitchen m aa gya...wo track suit jo usne pehna tha...thoda tight or chota tha...or hota bhi kyn nhi...kaha mohan kaha bhuwan....
Madhu ko ek baar hansi aa gyai...ek dam kisi nautanki ka jokar lag raha tha...lekin usne hansi control kar li...

Tabhi bhuwan bola...

Bh:: are mohan ji....ho gaye fresh???( mutton dhote hue)

M:: haan ho gaya...thoda tight h...sayad aap logo ko hansi aa rahi hogi muje pe...( madhu ko dekh ke)

Uski baat sun ke Madhu ek dam se serious ho gayi....
Or pyaza katne lagi....

Bh:: nhi nhi asi baat nhi h....app bethiye m aata hu...(smile karke)

M:: punam kaha h...dikh nhi rahi h...( bhuwan or madhu ko dekh ke)

Bhuwan herani se madhu ko dekh to madhu dhere se bi...

M:: apne room m h...sir dard ho raha h...keh rahi thi...( dhere se taki kewal bhuean sune pyaz kaate hue)

Lekin mohan ne sun liya...or bhar ko aagya or punam ke room ko jane laga...

Dekh punam leti thi...sir m kaoda bandh ke....
Mohan gandi nazar se dekhne laga or sochne laga...

Ohhh ye to bimar h...waise bhi abhi baacha gira h iska...ye to kaam ki nhi h...haan isko sulana padega...( punam ko leta hue dekh ke)

To bade aarm se bed ke pass ja ke uske bwtw ko godh m le kar bola..

Mo: punam o punam kya hua???( bhut hamdardi se)

Punam ne aankh kholi...or uth ke bethi or apne salwar ka duppat apne upper daal ke mohan se boli....

P:: bas jijia ji...sir dard kar raha h..bhut...( sir m hath rakhete hue)

Mo:: are tension se ho gaya hoga...thik ho jayega...dawai li...???( bhut aram se)

P:: nhi h nhi...ase hi bandha h thik ho jayega...app gaye nhi...( bethe hue sahi se)

Mo:: nhi bhai shab rok liye...ab kya kehta main...ruk m dawai deta hu...hogi sayad...hum police walo ko rakhni padti h na...kaam m mere bhi ho jata h..rakhe rehta hu( jhut bolte hue wallet m ase dekhte hue jaise usko pata na ho ki dawai h)

Or wallet se goli nikal ke dete hue...

Mohan itna tez tha ki...goli nikal ke di taki ko padh na pate kiski dawai de raha h...actually wo ek hard core nashe ki goli thi...

Or ye bolna sayad bachpana lage ki uske paas kaha se aayi...police wala h...kahi na kahi se mil hi jati h...

Or goli dete hue bola...

Mo:: kha le isko...acchi dwai h...thik ho jayega...are pani nhi h...main laata hu...( room m pani khojtw hue bhar ko jate hue)

Punam sochne lagi...

Ye anju didi to keh rahi thi jija ji ase h waise h...dekh kitni care kar rahe h...or us pankaj ko kaise jhada tha...

Mohan kitchen m gaya or zaldi se pani laya taki...koi or na dekh le ki wo punam ko kon si dawai de raha h...

Or pani laa ke bola...

Mo:: le pani...or kha le...thik ho jayega...( muh m dikhawati muskan late hue)

Punam jo sir dard se mare ja rahi thi...usne bhi zaldi se goli kaha li....

To mohan bola...

Mo:: tu aram kar...thik h...thik ho jayega...main hu...tension mat le ab....( muskurate hue)

Punam bhi muskura gayi...or let gayi....

Ab mohan ke dimag m tha...bhuwan or madhu....
Or bhar haal m beth ke sochne laga...

Sala iske pati ko to kar dunga lekin iska...????ye sali natak karegi.dekha nhi dekh tak nhi rahi h..karna pdega uska bhi kuch jo natak na kare..isko kya du kaya du????( madhu ke bare m soch ke)

Or fir uske dimag m ek idea aaya...or zaldi se utha or apne kapde pehn ke kitchen ko gaya or bola...

Mo:: bhai shab aap kahan abnao...main anju ke ghar jaa ata hu...nhi to khenge ki..aaya nhi...( kitchen ke door m ja ke bhar se bolte hue)

Bh:: are kahna ban jata h...kaha ja rahe h...???( bhar ko aate hue)

Mo:: bas aabhi aaya.. tab tak bnao...bas gaya or aa gaya....( muskura ke bhar ko niklte hue jaise bhut zaldi m ho)

Bhuwan ko bhut ajeeb laga...jabki madhu ko aacha laga ki chalo gaya to sahi...sayad wahi ruk bhi jaye...

Lekin usko kya pata tha wo kaha gya h...


To be continued...
nice update..!!
madhu ko kuchh bhi karke iss harami se bachna hoga..mohan jaise logo ko toh lund hi katne chahiye..khud ki biwi nahi sambhli iss se aur dsre ki biwi ko chodne ki soch raha hai aur yeh poonam iss mohan ko achha samajh rahi hai lekin usse kaha pata hai ki woh madhu ke pichhe pada hai..madhu ko poonam ko bata dena chahiye..kaise bachegi madhu..kisi ko toh usko bachana hoga..madhu dudh lene toh jayegi na ravi ke ghar toh ravi ko bhi khane pe lekar aajaye..ravi jarur iss harami mohan ki mansa samjhega..aur madhu ko bachane ke liye kuchh karega..!!
 
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Nhi aap galat soch rahe h...aisa nhi h...bas story aage badh rahi h...chote chote character bhi story m jaan dalte h...

Ravi ravi karke..boor na ho...or ye zaroori h...

Baki padhte rehiye...dekhiye kya hota h...
मैं कभी किसी भी कहानी में हस्तक्षेप नहीं करता हूं क्योंकि मैं जानता हूं लेखक जब किसी रचना का निर्माण करता है तो उसकी रूपरेखा लेखक के दिमाग़ में मस्तिष्क में रहती है
अब इस कहानी में अभी तक एक शशक्त किरदार है तो वो रवि है और अभी तक की कहानी इसी किरदार के इर्दगिर्द ही घूम रही है
आशा है आप मेरी मनोदशा को समझ रहे होंगे।🙏🙏
 
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