Adultery Meri fantasy ( Adultery/Romance)

[Shanu]

Awesome update bhai

 

[The Mask Editor]

Good updates
Lekin aisa lagta hai ki dipika, neema ke baad tisra balatkar hone wala hai story me jo ki bahut galat hai

It is the combination of good parts and bad parts that we all get attached with the story. I do agree that some parts are bad but that increases our emotional attachment with the story.

 

[Avkash]

Bhai ravi or mami ka kya sheen hai

 

[Flymovers777]

Bhai main sabse maffi chaunga...lekin story main apne hisab se hi likunga...

If any one not agreed then you can skip that part...but story will resume as same potential..

Because i think...there is need also some dark part...
Many readers are saying that...Deepika, neema and now madhu also facing...dark side of life...

But that is the reason there is i am writing story...

If all will be in a positive..then no necessary to write the story...

And remember its just fantasy adultery story...not a based on real incident ..but i want to write the story as like real..


So please if any one hurting ,forgive me..
But i can't change the story...

Thank you...

 

[Raj Shah Playboy]

Bhai main sabse maffi chaunga...lekin story main apne hisab se hi likunga...

If any one not agreed then you can skip that part...but story will resume as same potential..

Because i think...there is need also some dark part...
Many readers are saying that...Deepika, neema and now madhu also facing...dark side of life...

But that is the reason there is i am writing story...

If all will be in a positive..then no necessary to write the story...

And remember its just fantasy adultery story...not a based on real incident ..but i want to write the story as like real..


So please if any one hurting ,forgive me..
But i can't change the story...

Thank you...

Bhai story tumhari soch tumhari, toh aap hi likho jo tumko likhna sahi lage, baaki logo ki mat suno.....!
Nice update
Keep Writing...!

 

[The Mask Editor]

Bhai main sabse maffi chaunga...lekin story main apne hisab se hi likunga...

If any one not agreed then you can skip that part...but story will resume as same potential..

Because i think...there is need also some dark part...
Many readers are saying that...Deepika, neema and now madhu also facing...dark side of life...

But that is the reason there is i am writing story...

If all will be in a positive..then no necessary to write the story...

And remember its just fantasy adultery story...not a based on real incident ..but i want to write the story as like real..


So please if any one hurting ,forgive me..
But i can't change the story...

Thank you...

I like your view point. Please carry forward this story as per your imagination. We are following and liking this story based on your view point. There will be feedbacks and criticism but do not change your direction.

We admire you and your writing ability as the author of this story.

 

[A.A.G.]

Bhai main sabse maffi chaunga...lekin story main apne hisab se hi likunga...

If any one not agreed then you can skip that part...but story will resume as same potential..

Because i think...there is need also some dark part...
Many readers are saying that...Deepika, neema and now madhu also facing...dark side of life...

But that is the reason there is i am writing story...

If all will be in a positive..then no necessary to write the story...

And remember its just fantasy adultery story...not a based on real incident ..but i want to write the story as like real..


So please if any one hurting ,forgive me..
But i can't change the story...

Thank you...

bhai aapki baat sahi hai..aap apne hisab se likhiye..lekin aap yeh bhi toh sochiye ki madhu rape hone ja raja hai toh naturally sabki feelings bhi yahi hogi ki yeh nahi hona chahiye..hum toh bas humari feelings share kar rahe hai..baki aap apne hisab se likhiye..aur rahi baat ravi ki toh sabka zukav ravi ki taraf hai kyunki ravi ka character hi itna achha aapne banaya hai ki woh sabke liye hero hi hai..aur ravi madhu ko pehchanta hai aur dono ke bich achha rishta bhi hai toh sabko aisa lagna lazmi hai ki ravi madhu ko kuchh bhi kar ke bacha le..lekin kahani ke writer aap hai aur kahani ko kaise pehlu dene hai yeh aapka decision hai..aur hum toh hai hi aapke sath..!!

 

[politeps]

कहानी आपकी है आप अपने हिसाब से लिखो पर ये जो मोहन और मधु का दृश्य आप लिख रहे हो अगर उसमे आप ये दिखाते की मोहन मधु को अपनी ओर आकर्षित कर के उसके साथ सेक्स करता है। तो किसी को भी अजीब नहीं लगता । बाकी आपकी कल्पना जैसे आपको ठीक लगे वैसे लिखो ये आपकी मर्जी है। कहानी आपकी है जैसे लिखना हो वैसा लिखो

 

[A.A.G.]

कहानी आपकी है आप अपने हिसाब से लिखो पर ये जो मोहन और मधु का दृश्य आप लिख रहे हो अगर उसमे आप ये दिखाते की मोहन मधु को अपनी ओर आकर्षित कर के उसके साथ सेक्स करता है। तो किसी को भी अजीब नहीं लगता । बाकी आपकी कल्पना जैसे आपको ठीक लगे वैसे लिखो ये आपकी मर्जी है। कहानी आपकी है जैसे लिखना हो वैसा लिखो

Bhai mohan ka character harami type ka hai..Jo khud ke biwi ki ijjat nahi karta woh dusri aurat ki kya karega..attract karne ki toh baat hi nahi aati..aise aadmi ka toh lund katna chahiye..!!

 

[Avkash]

T

Bhai main sabse maffi chaunga...lekin story main apne hisab se hi likunga...

If any one not agreed then you can skip that part...but story will resume as same potential..

Because i think...there is need also some dark part...
Many readers are saying that...Deepika, neema and now madhu also facing...dark side of life...

But that is the reason there is i am writing story...

If all will be in a positive..then no necessary to write the story...

And remember its just fantasy adultery story...not a based on real incident ..but i want to write the story as like real..


So please if any one hurting ,forgive me..
But i can't change the story...

Thank you...

Tum apne hisab se likho bhi