Nhi to batiye kya karna chaiye??
App jo bol rahe ho..deepika ki mami ka bhatije se...
Vidya dewar se..anju ka apne ashiq se...jo bhi h...
To story main kya hona chaiye?? Bas har jagh ravi???
Matlab ravi nhi hua harry potter ho gaya...
Are harry potter ke pass to jadhu ki chadi thi...
iske pass to wo bhi na h...
muje samj nhi aata yar...yaha sab log adultery story padhne aate hain..
or upper se ye bolte h...aurat koi khilona nhi h...
Matlab apne man ka na hua..to aurat khilona???
Ajj tak kyn nhi bola...jab bas ravi karta tha...ab ye bolenge ki ravi ne to pyar se kiya tha...
Are pyar se bhi kiya lekin kisi ki biwi ke sath to kiya...
galat to galat h...ab har koi ek sa to nhi hoga na..samaj main...
Dur kya jana yahi pe dekh lo...kisi ko ravi ki behan ke sath bhi karana h...ab alag alag soch h sabki...to jaise ravi kar raha h..or mohan bhi kare..ya virendra bhi..to characters m farak kaise ayega????
ase to ravi bhi har kisi ko khilona hi samj raha h...Main kam se kam maa behan ke sath to nhi likh raha jiska sala padhne m hi man ajeeb ho jata h...
Main us pe koi baat nhi kar raha...thik h jisko accha lagta h...wo padhe..
usme boliye ye story galat h...aisa nhi hona chaiye...asi story na likhni chaiye...
Har jagh ravi aa jaye bas...bacha le...are madhu ne bhi ravi ke sath kiya...wo galat nhi h...???tab to Deppika sunita sab galat h...
Haan bas..usne ravi ke sath kar liya to ravi ki mohar lag gayi...
Koi delh tak nhi sakta ab...
abhi kuch update thoda normal wale aa jaye...to bich main....kuch bolenge...bhai bhut din ho gaye...kuch dikha do....
Har jagh ravi ravi...ab stroy m kuch logic to lage...
matlab un story ki tarh jha main characters main hi sab kuch bhara h...baki sare chutiye ke patthe hainn...
wo to kuch jante hi nhi....
Or rahi batt story ke mukam ki...
muje na koi padamshree nhi milne wala..ki...mastram ke baad ye hi h sabke raat ke sukh dukh ke sathi....bas man hota h to...likh deta hu...
Or ab to wo bhi nhi h...yaha pe to bilkul nhi....
or rahi baat membership ki ....yaar muje un sab se koi matlab nhi rehta...
Yaar main apna simple ek funda bata du meri life ka bhi...
Main koi bhi kaam even mera job bhi...kiso ko kush karne ko nhi karta...
or yaha to bilkul bhi nhi...
ab main kitne readers ki baat sunu??? App kuch bolenge...wo kuch bolega...
Samj se pare hai mere...such main...
app jo keh rahe the aurat ko khilona bna diya...tab to yaar ye puri story hi galat h...
har character even deepika bhi galat h...
tab to ye story zald se zald band honi chaiye...
har koi khush nahi reh sakta bhai...muskil h ye...
har koi aata h...ek gyan pel ke jayega...
ab uske hisab se kahani likho...
majak h kya???
Yaha abhi ye hai ki..
Matlab abhi ravi bhaiya bina kisi logic ke yaha pe aa jaye...or mohan babu ki baja de...tab sab thik h..
Ravi h ,main character h...wo to superhero h...raat din bhatkta rehta h...ki kha uski premika..fasi hogi...usko bacha le...
starting se keh raha hu...nhi aaye kisi ko passnd to mat padhiye..or bhi acchi story hain ..main kon sa writter hu...
bas likh deta hu...
bhut acche aache writers hain...yaha pe...
but ab ye socho ki thodi wah wahi ke liye main...ab sabke hisab se story likhu...ye mujse nhi hoga...
Haan koi or likhna chata h ye story aage to likh sakta h...main to nhi likh raha...yaha pe..
or..jaise jaise jisko lage...main na kabhi copyright ke liye tak nhi bolunga...
is liye jisko khilona banna h...nhi banna h khud samj le...or ye story ko aage badhaye....
lekin story m puri kar lunga...ab to update dene ki bhi tension nhi h...
aram se likhunga...
..itna tension le kar bimar na hona muje...main apni story puri zarur karunga ...lekin apne pass likh ke rakhunga....
koi bhi jo chata h...is story ko x forum m aage badha sakta h...
Thanks
Writer sahab sbhi log apni apni rah de rhe h kisi ne bhi ye nhi kha ki aap likhna band kr do ya ye story kharab sbhi logo ne saraha hi h bs wo chahte h ki aap Ravi ko Mt pahuchao koi jag bhi sakta h padosi bhi a skta h ya aap ko lgta h ki sex hona jaruri hi h to aap madhu ko seticfaide mt hone dena
Or
Sabse bdi bat aapki story h aap likh sakte h
Reader to onli apni apni rah de rhe h usse aapko ghussa krne ki jrurat nhi h
Reder to kehte hi h aapne bhi koi story PDI hogi tb tumne bhi reply Kiya hoga to writer ko pasand aaye jruri to nhi
Or rha sabal orat ko khilona samjhna to orat ydi khud se kre to koi problam nhi or ydi kisi dabab me kiya bhi to samne wale ko bad me sza mil jati h ye to logic h na
Bese aapki story bahut achchhi h isliye aapse reder ummed lgate h
Or aap bhi gussa chodiye jitna update likhe h ek sath chipka dijiye
