Adultery Meri fantasy ( Adultery/Romance)
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Nice update..!!Dono station ke tarf chla pade...
Deepika man hi man muskurate hue ander aa gayi sunita or nani ke sath...
Ab aage:::
Ravi log station thoda der se phuche bus bhar chuki thi...
Muskil se ek sheat mili...jaha pe ravi ne radha ko betha diya...uske baachon ke sath or khud khada ho gya...
Bus chlane lagi.....bus m bhid kafi thi...ravi jaise taise kahda rha bus..
Karib 30 min baad bus ek satation pe ruki...
Thodi sawari kam hui..to ravi condutor ke bagal wali sheat m beth gya..radha usse 2 sheat piche bethi thi...ek ladies ke sath...wo lady bhi...radha ke hi sehar tak jane wali thi...
Radha man hi man bhut khus thi..kynki ajj raat uska pati jane wala tha...or wo ghar m akele rahegi...ravi ke sath...
Jabki ravi ko kuch pata nhi tha...ki radha ka pati yani ki pradeep jane wala h...
Bus m kuch khas nhi hua...kynki ravi or radha dono ko hi sath m bethne ka mauka hi nhi mila...
Karib 3 baje...ravi log phuche....
Sab log staion m utarne lage...
Radha baccho ko le kar utari...or ravi uska saman le kar...
.radha ravi ko dekh ke muskurai...or ravi bhi bas noram reply diya to radha boli...
Rd:: kitni bheed thi bus m...hamko late ho gayi thi...( (apne bag ko kandhe m latkate hue .)
R:: hmmm...late ho gayi...koi nhi phuch gaye...( rishu ke sir m muskurate hue hath ferte hue)
Tabhi kamal bola...
K:: mumma..bhuk lag rahi...hhh...maggi khana h...maggi le lo na...( zidd karte hue)
Rd:: ek main ye bacchon se bhut pareshan hu...tum to aage bethe the..raste bhar dono ne jitna dimag khrab kiya h mera...ghar to chalo beta...wahi to banungi na...iske papa ko bhi aaj jana h...kahan bnaa hoga...( normal ho ke baat karte hue or riksha ka wait karte hue)
Tabhi ravi bola.....
R:: kha ja rahe hain??( thoda geran ho ke)
Rd:: are unko university ke kaam se jana padta h na..head office...tabhi to aa gayi main...( normal bina koi bhav ke)
Radha or ravi ase baat kar rahe the..naise ajj tak dono ke bich kuch hua na ho...
Radha ke pati ki jane ki baat sun ke ravi ke puri body main junjhuni si chad gayi...or usne ek nazar radha ke or ko mari...jo bilkul normal lag rahi thi...or riksha ka wait karte hue road ko ke dekh rahi thi...
Or tabhi ek riksha aa ke ruka...radha usse mol bhav karne lagi...
Or fir sab beth gaye...
Ravi ki godh m rishu or radha ki godh m kamal betha...
Radha road m dukan dekhte hue apne baal sambhalte hue ishar udhar dekh rahi thi..jaise ki kuch dundh rahi ho...
Ravi ne bhi kuch nhi pucha...tabhi radha ne riksha wale se bola..
Rd:: bhaiya ye dawai ki dukan m rokna to...( bag ko hath m pakdte hue)
Riksha wale ne side m rok diyaa..or radha ne kamal ko riksha m hi khada kiya or utarhte hue boli...
Rd:: ek min aayi haan ravi...dawai leni h...kamal beta yahi rehna...( riksha se utar ke medical shop pe jate hue)
Ravi ko samj nhi aaya ki radha kon si dawai lene gayi...
Or thodi der baad aayi...
Or dawai apne bag m rakhte hue...riksha m bethi..or ravi ko dekh ke dhere se boli...
Rd:: us din wo dawai laye the na..galat de di thi tumko...bhut problem hui muje...( dhere se bolte hue)
Riksha wala chala rha tha to...ravi kuch bola nhi..bas sunta raha...wo samj gaya ki radha garbh nirodhak goliya lene gayi thi...
Thodi der baad jaise hi rahda ki colony m phuche...kamal fukan dekh ke bola......
K:: mummy apne maggi nhi li na....muje mafgi khani h....( zidd karte hue)
Rd:: ghar m hai beta maggi bna du gi...ghar to phuchne do...bhit gande ho gaye ho dono ke dono...kabhi padhai ke liye to nhi karte aisa...( kamal ko dante hue)
Tabhi radha riksha wale se boli..
Rd:: bas bhaiya yahi pe rok do...( hath upper karje piche se boli)
Riksha wale ne roka ..sab log utar gaye...ravi ne bag utara...
Or radha ne riksha wale ko paise diye..or gate khol ke aander aane lage to radha apne aap hi bolti hui ander ko aayi...
Rd: 4 din ghar se nhi gayi...iske papa to kya bolu...kitna ganda karke rakha h...jaise koi tmyha rwhta hi nhi ho...( bhar pade sukhe patto ko dekh ke)
Or fir usne door khatkhataya...pradeep ne door khola or bola....
P: areaa gaye...deepa ka phon aaya tha abhi..kyn aa gyi tum??( jali wale darwaje ki chitkan kholte hue)
Rd:: aa gayi ...app jane wale the..ghar ko ase kaise chorte...bhar dekho kitna ganda ho rha h..kam se kam ek jhadu hi maar dete...( muh bna ke...bag ko niche sofe m rakhte hue)
P:: are office jau kahna jo bnau...kar lena na..aa gyi ho to...( thoda irritate ho ke)
Ravi ne pardeep ke per chue...or chup chap beth gaya....
.radha muh bna ke ander ko chle gayi...or ander ja ke bed room ko dekh ke boli...
Rd:: pata nhi kaise rehte h...jha dekho waha kapde..jhute..chaaple...hazar baar bola h...jhute bhar utaro...( gusse m bed m pade hue kapde samethe hue..or pero se jhute side ko fenkte hue)
Bhar prdeep or ravi baat kar rahe the..ander se radha ki bolne ki awaz aayi to pardeep ne gusse se ander ko dekha..lekin kuch bola nhi.
.tabhi kamal ander gaya or bed m lete hue radha se bola.....
K:: mumma bhuk lag rahi h...( rote hue zidd karte hue)
Rd:: kya karu fir...bana rahi hu na...kaam hi to kar rahi hu...4 din kahi chle jao..ghar ko...chidiyaghar bna dete h...( badbadte hue)
Pradeep ravi se baat karta raha...
Fir radha kitchen ko gayi...or jate hue ravi se boli...
Rd: ravi maggi kha loge na??( smile karke)
R: haan haan kha lunga..( normal ho ke)
Kitchen m radha gayi to sink m pade hue bartan dekh ke uska para or chadh gaya..or gusse se bhar pradeep ko dekhne lagi...lekin kuch boli nhi...
Or zaldi se bartan dho ke maggi bnae lagi...
Pradeep apne bacchon se baat kar raha tha...
Radha maggi le kar aayi or sabko dene lagi to radha pardeep se boli...
Rd:: app kaho ge??( normal ho ke)
P:: nhi maine khana khaya h abhi...
Rd:: apke kapde rakhne honge kotne baje h train???( maggi kahte hue)
P:: 6.45 ki h...chle jaunga..5.15 bje tak...wo apne singh shab bhi jane wale h...unke ghar se hote hue jaunga...( ghadi dekh ke)
Rd:: 4 to baj gaya h...kahan kya bnau...ab...???kam se kam aalo hi ubal ke rakh lete...( jaldi se kahte hue)
P:: are trin m kha lenge kuch...rehne do...( radha ko dekh ke)
Rd:: haan fir bimar hona...bna rahi hu main ...alooki sabji or parthe bna deti hu...bhar khana zaroori h kya .??( pradeep ko dante hue)
Pradep kuch nhi bola..
Or radha zaldi se kitchen m ja ke kahna bnne lagi...
.or bhar se boli...
Rd:: suniye apne kade nikal lijiye .jo le jane h...rakh deti hu...( kitchen se hi bolte hue)
.pradeep bhi uth ke apne kapde niklne laga.......
Gas m aalo rakh ke..radha bhar aayo..or zaldi se hath pochte hue...pradeep ka bag rakhne lagi....
Or bag rakh ke zaldi se ghadi dekh ke kitchen ko bhagi...ravi radha ko dekh raha tha ki kitna zaldi wo sab kuch kar leti h...
Lekin kuch bola nhi...bas bethe raha...
Radha ne 5 bje tak kaise bhi...pradeep ka kahna pack kar diya...or uske bag m kahnaa rakhte hue pradeep se boli...
Rd:: khana rakh diya h...ja ke kha lena aap...( bag ki chain lagte huw)
P: hmmm...( shirt ke button lagte hue)
Or fir 5.20 pe pradeep kane laga to ravi se bola...
P:: ravi thoda der ho gayi...scooter chlana jante ho???( smile karje)
Ravi jo newas paper padh raha tha...turnt bola...
R::haan haan....( news paper fold karkee)
P:: thoda aage tak chor do...wo mere sath wale h unke ghar tak...( request karte hue)
Ravi zaldi se utha...or fir pardeep sabko bye keh ke...ravi ke sath chla gya...
Or karib 15 min baad aaya...radha uska bhar hi wait kar rahi thi...ravi aaya to main gate kholte hue boli...
Rd: chor diya kaha tak chora??( gate khol ke aage se hatte hue)
R:: wo yahi pe kisi ke gahr pe( scooter ander laate hue)
Rd: haan wo manish ke papa bhibjane wale h...unke wahi...( gate ko band karte hue)
Ravi ander aa gya...radha ander aayi to dekha dono bacche ladai kar rahe the...
Radha ko gussa aaya..or dono bacchon ko ek ek thappd lagaya ...
Dono baache rone lage...to radha boli...
Rd:: dimag khrab karke rakh h..padhne ka naam nhi h...le jaungi khai ab..tum dono ko....chup chap padho ab...nhi to bhar kar dungi...batmeez kahi ke...( gusse se).
Kamal subukne laga..or rishu zor se rone laga to radha boli..
Rd:: rishu muh band karta h ki nhi...( gusse se dante hue)
Ravi dono ko chup karne laga...radha bhar ko chle gayi or dusre room se boli...
Rd:: ek iske papa h..bacchon se bhi agye gujare hain...kisi chizz ka tamizz nhi h...bacche bhi ye hi sikhenge...koi chizz jagh m nhi rakhte h...( samna sahi se rakhte hue bed room m)
Tabhi rishu rote hue...kamal ko laat marne alga...to kamal bhi rote hue bola...
K:: mummy dekh lo ye rishu ko...maar raha h..fir muje mat bolna..app...( hath se bachav karte hue rishu ki laat se)
Radha ander se hi boli...
Rd: rishu agarr m aa gayi na..ti tu dekh lena..bhut bigad gaya h...sharm nhi aaymti bhaiya pe laat marte hue( gusse se danda le kar room mm atte hue)
Ravi ne rishu ko apne pass chupa liya...to radha shant hui...or kamal se boli.....
Rd:: kamal beta chlo bhar betho...isko to m ajj khana nhi dungi ruk tu...( gusse se rishu ko dekh ke)
Kamal bhi usko chidate hue bhar ko chla gya...
Tabhi radha ravi se boli....
Rd:: main to pagal ho jaungi is ghar m...( ravi ko dekh ke pareshan hote hue)
Ravi kuch nhi bola bas muskura diya...
Or radha bhar ko chle gayi...
Or thodei der baad aayi or ravi se boli...
Rd:: ravi kya khoge?? Are deepa ko bhi phone nhi kiya...mila do to phone...( ravi ko dekh ke)
R: kuch bhi kha lunga..( telephone ke pass jate hue)
Ravi ne telephone milaya or deep se baat kar li..or jab phone rakha to ravi se boli..
Rd: sabji bhi nhi...iske papa na...ghar m kuch rakha nhi h..( muh bna ke)
Chlo sabji le aate h...( ravi ko dekh ke)
R:: main le aata hu..koi nhi..( radha ko dekh ke normal ho ke)
Rd:: nhi nhi m bhi chlti hu..scooter se jate h...kamal rishu...main sabji lene ja rahi hu...ager dono apni jgh se uthe to tab dekhna( haal se hi dono ko bolte hue)
Tabhi kamal bola....
K: mummy samosa lana...( ander se bolte hue)
Rd:: abhi maggi khayi h..ab samosa..thik h laungi..lekin padhai karoge dono sun lo...( baal bnate hue)
K: haan thik h mummy..( khus ho ke)
Radha rishu ke wale room m gayi or boli..
Rd: tuje khan h ki nhi...??( thoda gusse se)
Rishu kuch nhi bol raha tha..to radha ravi ke or dekh ke boli...jo ki haal ke pass hi kahdi tha...
Rd:: dekha isko...jitna chota h...utna hi ye khota h...gussa dekho...( baal bnate hue muskurate hue ravi ko dekh ke)
Ravi bas muskura diya...
Rishu radha ki apni santan tha...uske pehle pati se..jabki kamal pradeep ki...lekin usne kabhi dono m fark nhi samja...
Or fir radha or ravi scooter se chle gaye...
Radha man hi man bhut khus thi...bhar andhera ho gaya tha...jado ke din the to bajaj chetak scooter ke piche betho hui radha ne ravi ke kandhe pe sir hath rakha tha.
.or uske urozz ravi ki pith se dhanse yhe...or dono market ko chle jaye...
To be continue..
Bahot din baad apne hero Ravi ko wapas dekhkar maja aagaya..ab Radha ke toh maje honewale hai..Radha ko Ravi ka sath bhi mil gaya..woh bhi khush hogayi..Radha ko Ravi se Sonu ka matter bata dena chahiye..toh Ravi Radha ko bhi safe rakh sakega aur khud bhi safe rahega..!! Radha bahot achhi aurat hai..woh jarur Ravi se Deepika ke bare me pucchegi..Ravi ko bhi koi mil jayega apna Mann halka karne ko..!! Bhai ab Radha aur Ravi ki chudayi ke sath sath unki romantic baate bhi dikhana jaise couple karte hai ek dusre se..iss wajah se Radha bhi apne Mann ki baat bol degi aur Ravi bhi..maja aajayega..!!
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Sabhi aache hi hain bhai bura kon h.??..bas sare character apna role play kar rahe h..
Rahi baat romantic baat ki...wo likhte hue dekhte h..kya situation banti h...
Muje nhi lagta ravi deepika ke alawa itna kisi se khula hoga kabhi...
sex alag chizz h...lekin dil se pyar karna alag baat h...
Deepika ke sath to kuch bhi nhi hota tab bhi muje likhne m aacha lagta h...
Or rahi baat radha ya kisi bhi ladies ko safe karne ki...
Dekhiye ravi koi bhagwan nhi h...jo har kisi ko bacha lega...
Abhi kuch log bole madhu ke sath galat ho gyaa...bhai main..future ko dekh ke likh raha hu..ki ek ek chizz ka aage kya effect hoga..abhi nhi bata sakta....bas aram se story padiye...
Or muje bhi likhne dijiye. Bhut sochna padta h..kisi bhi seen ko likhne ke liye...
Jab koi befaltu argument karta h to mind stable nhi ho pata..likhne m dikaat hoti h...
Bas kahli likh dene se hi nhi hota...har ek update anne wale update se link rehta h...
Mohan ka character hi waisa h...isme uski thodi galati h...wo bas ek character h.. wo jab mentally negative h to wo postive play kaise kar sakta h???
Isliye abhi kuch mat boliye..muje bas likhne dijiye...
Ki kya hona h nhi hona h...main promise karta hu...jo bhi hoga bilkul real lagega...ye nhi ki hero ko super type dikha ke sabki problem solve karta dikhau...
Ravi ka age dekhiye...usi hisab se sab likhna h...
Taki padhne main wo comedy type na lage.ki har jagh shaktiman ke tarh ravi phucha h..haan jaha lagega muje usko hona chaiye wha jayega..lekin wo bhi ase hi jaise koi normal ladka ho...apke mere jaise hi...jaise usne anju ko bacha liya...
Ab aap log soche ki aadhi raat ko 12 baje kisi ko bachne ke liye phuche...khud sochiye ye possible h???
Isliye aram se padhte rahiye...ye main sabse hi chata hu ki...disturb na kare...
Muskil se time milta h likhne ko..or main kahli kisi se behas nhi karna chata...
Or uska koi matlab bhi nhi h...
Bhut saree aachi stories hain yaha...pe or bhi...
Hope all you will be understand this...
Pls request h app sab se...likhne dijiye...
Thank you..
I agree with your view point, You are doing a good job, keep it up and keep writing.
See here problem is that every body has a different mindset and different visualization. Also many a times people react immediately after reading the update often forgetting much of background info. So these things are bound to happen.
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They like it or they don't but the thing is people read it and do not ignore.
Bhai mai aapki writing ka fan hu..aap bahot achha likhte ho..isliye mai kabhi nahi chahunga ki aap hum readers ki har baat maan kar changes karte rahe..!! Maine bas apna opinion rakha hai..kyunki story me aapko kuchh characters bahot achhe lagte hai..jaise ki ravi aur deepika, geeta, radha, sunita, madhu, anju, ruma aur vivek ki buva, poonam..!! Aur bure characters me gupta, madhu ka sasur, mohan, vidya etc shamil hai..!! Toh jo achhe characters hai unke sath bura hoga toh bura toh lagega hi na..toh aap please mere comment ka bura mat maniye..maine bas apna thought rakha hai ki radha ko ravi apna rajdar bana sakta hai kyunki aage radha ravi ki madat karegi dono ko ek karne me aur geeta ko bhi ravi se pyaar hai toh isme bhi madat kar sakti hai..!! Baki aap apne hisab se likhiye kyunki aap likhte bahot achha ho..!!
Aur bhai comment ko please dil pe mat le..aap jo bhi likhoge achha hi likhoge..isliye aap apne hisab se hi likho apne flow me..hum toh hai hi padhne ke liye..!!
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Nhi bhai.M apke liye nhi bol raha hu apne kabhi bhi comments m koi galat baat nhi boli.bas apne dil ki hi baat boli....parso ek reader ne likha khani ki maa chod di...Bhai mai aapki writing ka fan hu..aap bahot achha likhte ho..isliye mai kabhi nahi chahunga ki aap hum readers ki har baat maan kar changes karte rahe..!! Maine bas apna opinion rakha hai..kyunki story me aapko kuchh characters bahot achhe lagte hai..jaise ki ravi aur deepika, geeta, radha, sunita, madhu, anju, ruma aur vivek ki buva, poonam..!! Aur bure characters me gupta, madhu ka sasur, mohan, vidya etc shamil hai..!! Toh jo achhe characters hai unke sath bura hoga toh bura toh lagega hi na..toh aap please mere comment ka bura mat maniye..maine bas apna thought rakha hai ki radha ko ravi apna rajdar bana sakta hai kyunki aage radha ravi ki madat karegi dono ko ek karne me aur geeta ko bhi ravi se pyaar hai toh isme bhi madat kar sakti hai..!! Baki aap apne hisab se likhiye kyunki aap likhte bahot achha ho..!!
Aur bhai comment ko please dil pe mat le..aap jo bhi likhoge achha hi likhoge..isliye aap apne hisab se hi likho apne flow me..hum toh hai hi padhne ke liye..!!
Bina kuch soche samje koi is tarh se kaise bol sakta h...
Muje wo baat bhut buri lagi...dekhiye har koi chata h uske hisab se ho ..lekin har chizz ka kehne ka tarkia hota h...ab app oder doge..yagalat shabd bologe...to wo to koi bhi nhi bardast karega...
Maine to yaha tak bola h kisi or ko likhna h to likh lo...kya pata aap log is story ke bare m jaida jante ho or jaida acche se likho...
lekin ye sab gali galoch...karna...accha nhi lagta ..
Main sabki feeling samjtha hu...lekin iske liye story ko divert nhi kar sakta...
Bas story padiye...koi bhi chizz zabrdasti nhi hoga...bas jo is update m h uska kahi na kahi link hoga...future m...
Bas mera kehna yahi h...aache se enjoy karke padiye..app logo ko bhi aacha lagega...or muje bhi likhne ka man karega...
Dekhiye m kisi ko janta thodi hu..na koi muje personally janta h...
Bas ek story ke madyam se hum log jude hue h...to us relation ko aache se bante rakhna bhi hamara hi kaam h...
Boliye lekin aache se..ye nhi ki. Kuch bhi bolo...koi kisi ki gali nhi sunta...
Chaliye story padhiye aage bhut interesting h ab...
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Sahi kaha bhai aapne..hum toh readers hai hum apne apne thoughts rakhte hai..lekin gaali galoch karna bahot galat hai..padhna hai toh padhe warna na padhe lekin gali pe aapka gussa hona toh banta hai..lekin aap hi yeh story achhese likh sakte ho..toh app negativity ko avoid kare aur apne hisab se likhe..hum hai padhne ke liye..!!
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क्या लिखते हो भाई मजा आ गया अब थोड़ा सुकून मिलेगा राधा और रबी की जमके रात भर रंग रालिया चलेगी खुल के क्युकी प्रदीप तो अब चला गया है अब तो दो जिस्म भूखे है जिस्म की प्यास रात भर चलेगीDono station ke tarf chla pade...
Deepika man hi man muskurate hue ander aa gayi sunita or nani ke sath...
Ab aage:::
Ravi log station thoda der se phuche bus bhar chuki thi...
Muskil se ek sheat mili...jaha pe ravi ne radha ko betha diya...uske baachon ke sath or khud khada ho gya...
Bus chlane lagi.....bus m bhid kafi thi...ravi jaise taise kahda rha bus..
Karib 30 min baad bus ek satation pe ruki...
Thodi sawari kam hui..to ravi condutor ke bagal wali sheat m beth gya..radha usse 2 sheat piche bethi thi...ek ladies ke sath...wo lady bhi...radha ke hi sehar tak jane wali thi...
Radha man hi man bhut khus thi..kynki ajj raat uska pati jane wala tha...or wo ghar m akele rahegi...ravi ke sath...
Jabki ravi ko kuch pata nhi tha...ki radha ka pati yani ki pradeep jane wala h...
Bus m kuch khas nhi hua...kynki ravi or radha dono ko hi sath m bethne ka mauka hi nhi mila...
Karib 3 baje...ravi log phuche....
Sab log staion m utarne lage...
Radha baccho ko le kar utari...or ravi uska saman le kar...
.radha ravi ko dekh ke muskurai...or ravi bhi bas noram reply diya to radha boli...
Rd:: kitni bheed thi bus m...hamko late ho gayi thi...( (apne bag ko kandhe m latkate hue .)
R:: hmmm...late ho gayi...koi nhi phuch gaye...( rishu ke sir m muskurate hue hath ferte hue)
Tabhi kamal bola...
K:: mumma..bhuk lag rahi...hhh...maggi khana h...maggi le lo na...( zidd karte hue)
Rd:: ek main ye bacchon se bhut pareshan hu...tum to aage bethe the..raste bhar dono ne jitna dimag khrab kiya h mera...ghar to chalo beta...wahi to banungi na...iske papa ko bhi aaj jana h...kahan bnaa hoga...( normal ho ke baat karte hue or riksha ka wait karte hue)
Tabhi ravi bola.....
R:: kha ja rahe hain??( thoda geran ho ke)
Rd:: are unko university ke kaam se jana padta h na..head office...tabhi to aa gayi main...( normal bina koi bhav ke)
Radha or ravi ase baat kar rahe the..naise ajj tak dono ke bich kuch hua na ho...
Radha ke pati ki jane ki baat sun ke ravi ke puri body main junjhuni si chad gayi...or usne ek nazar radha ke or ko mari...jo bilkul normal lag rahi thi...or riksha ka wait karte hue road ko ke dekh rahi thi...
Or tabhi ek riksha aa ke ruka...radha usse mol bhav karne lagi...
Or fir sab beth gaye...
Ravi ki godh m rishu or radha ki godh m kamal betha...
Radha road m dukan dekhte hue apne baal sambhalte hue ishar udhar dekh rahi thi..jaise ki kuch dundh rahi ho...
Ravi ne bhi kuch nhi pucha...tabhi radha ne riksha wale se bola..
Rd:: bhaiya ye dawai ki dukan m rokna to...( bag ko hath m pakdte hue)
Riksha wale ne side m rok diyaa..or radha ne kamal ko riksha m hi khada kiya or utarhte hue boli...
Rd:: ek min aayi haan ravi...dawai leni h...kamal beta yahi rehna...( riksha se utar ke medical shop pe jate hue)
Ravi ko samj nhi aaya ki radha kon si dawai lene gayi...
Or thodi der baad aayi...
Or dawai apne bag m rakhte hue...riksha m bethi..or ravi ko dekh ke dhere se boli...
Rd:: us din wo dawai laye the na..galat de di thi tumko...bhut problem hui muje...( dhere se bolte hue)
Riksha wala chala rha tha to...ravi kuch bola nhi..bas sunta raha...wo samj gaya ki radha garbh nirodhak goliya lene gayi thi...
Thodi der baad jaise hi rahda ki colony m phuche...kamal fukan dekh ke bola......
K:: mummy apne maggi nhi li na....muje mafgi khani h....( zidd karte hue)
Rd:: ghar m hai beta maggi bna du gi...ghar to phuchne do...bhit gande ho gaye ho dono ke dono...kabhi padhai ke liye to nhi karte aisa...( kamal ko dante hue)
Tabhi radha riksha wale se boli..
Rd:: bas bhaiya yahi pe rok do...( hath upper karje piche se boli)
Riksha wale ne roka ..sab log utar gaye...ravi ne bag utara...
Or radha ne riksha wale ko paise diye..or gate khol ke aander aane lage to radha apne aap hi bolti hui ander ko aayi...
Rd: 4 din ghar se nhi gayi...iske papa to kya bolu...kitna ganda karke rakha h...jaise koi tmyha rwhta hi nhi ho...( bhar pade sukhe patto ko dekh ke)
Or fir usne door khatkhataya...pradeep ne door khola or bola....
P: areaa gaye...deepa ka phon aaya tha abhi..kyn aa gyi tum??( jali wale darwaje ki chitkan kholte hue)
Rd:: aa gayi ...app jane wale the..ghar ko ase kaise chorte...bhar dekho kitna ganda ho rha h..kam se kam ek jhadu hi maar dete...( muh bna ke...bag ko niche sofe m rakhte hue)
P:: are office jau kahna jo bnau...kar lena na..aa gyi ho to...( thoda irritate ho ke)
Ravi ne pardeep ke per chue...or chup chap beth gaya....
.radha muh bna ke ander ko chle gayi...or ander ja ke bed room ko dekh ke boli...
Rd:: pata nhi kaise rehte h...jha dekho waha kapde..jhute..chaaple...hazar baar bola h...jhute bhar utaro...( gusse m bed m pade hue kapde samethe hue..or pero se jhute side ko fenkte hue)
Bhar prdeep or ravi baat kar rahe the..ander se radha ki bolne ki awaz aayi to pardeep ne gusse se ander ko dekha..lekin kuch bola nhi.
.tabhi kamal ander gaya or bed m lete hue radha se bola.....
K:: mumma bhuk lag rahi h...( rote hue zidd karte hue)
Rd:: kya karu fir...bana rahi hu na...kaam hi to kar rahi hu...4 din kahi chle jao..ghar ko...chidiyaghar bna dete h...( badbadte hue)
Pradeep ravi se baat karta raha...
Fir radha kitchen ko gayi...or jate hue ravi se boli...
Rd: ravi maggi kha loge na??( smile karke)
R: haan haan kha lunga..( normal ho ke)
Kitchen m radha gayi to sink m pade hue bartan dekh ke uska para or chadh gaya..or gusse se bhar pradeep ko dekhne lagi...lekin kuch boli nhi...
Or zaldi se bartan dho ke maggi bnae lagi...
Pradeep apne bacchon se baat kar raha tha...
Radha maggi le kar aayi or sabko dene lagi to radha pardeep se boli...
Rd:: app kaho ge??( normal ho ke)
P:: nhi maine khana khaya h abhi...
Rd:: apke kapde rakhne honge kotne baje h train???( maggi kahte hue)
P:: 6.45 ki h...chle jaunga..5.15 bje tak...wo apne singh shab bhi jane wale h...unke ghar se hote hue jaunga...( ghadi dekh ke)
Rd:: 4 to baj gaya h...kahan kya bnau...ab...???kam se kam aalo hi ubal ke rakh lete...( jaldi se kahte hue)
P:: are trin m kha lenge kuch...rehne do...( radha ko dekh ke)
Rd:: haan fir bimar hona...bna rahi hu main ...alooki sabji or parthe bna deti hu...bhar khana zaroori h kya .??( pradeep ko dante hue)
Pradep kuch nhi bola..
Or radha zaldi se kitchen m ja ke kahna bnne lagi...
.or bhar se boli...
Rd:: suniye apne kade nikal lijiye .jo le jane h...rakh deti hu...( kitchen se hi bolte hue)
.pradeep bhi uth ke apne kapde niklne laga.......
Gas m aalo rakh ke..radha bhar aayo..or zaldi se hath pochte hue...pradeep ka bag rakhne lagi....
Or bag rakh ke zaldi se ghadi dekh ke kitchen ko bhagi...ravi radha ko dekh raha tha ki kitna zaldi wo sab kuch kar leti h...
Lekin kuch bola nhi...bas bethe raha...
Radha ne 5 bje tak kaise bhi...pradeep ka kahna pack kar diya...or uske bag m kahnaa rakhte hue pradeep se boli...
Rd:: khana rakh diya h...ja ke kha lena aap...( bag ki chain lagte huw)
P: hmmm...( shirt ke button lagte hue)
Or fir 5.20 pe pradeep kane laga to ravi se bola...
P:: ravi thoda der ho gayi...scooter chlana jante ho???( smile karje)
Ravi jo newas paper padh raha tha...turnt bola...
R::haan haan....( news paper fold karkee)
P:: thoda aage tak chor do...wo mere sath wale h unke ghar tak...( request karte hue)
Ravi zaldi se utha...or fir pardeep sabko bye keh ke...ravi ke sath chla gya...
Or karib 15 min baad aaya...radha uska bhar hi wait kar rahi thi...ravi aaya to main gate kholte hue boli...
Rd: chor diya kaha tak chora??( gate khol ke aage se hatte hue)
R:: wo yahi pe kisi ke gahr pe( scooter ander laate hue)
Rd: haan wo manish ke papa bhibjane wale h...unke wahi...( gate ko band karte hue)
Ravi ander aa gya...radha ander aayi to dekha dono bacche ladai kar rahe the...
Radha ko gussa aaya..or dono bacchon ko ek ek thappd lagaya ...
Dono baache rone lage...to radha boli...
Rd:: dimag khrab karke rakh h..padhne ka naam nhi h...le jaungi khai ab..tum dono ko....chup chap padho ab...nhi to bhar kar dungi...batmeez kahi ke...( gusse se).
Kamal subukne laga..or rishu zor se rone laga to radha boli..
Rd:: rishu muh band karta h ki nhi...( gusse se dante hue)
Ravi dono ko chup karne laga...radha bhar ko chle gayi or dusre room se boli...
Rd:: ek iske papa h..bacchon se bhi agye gujare hain...kisi chizz ka tamizz nhi h...bacche bhi ye hi sikhenge...koi chizz jagh m nhi rakhte h...( samna sahi se rakhte hue bed room m)
Tabhi rishu rote hue...kamal ko laat marne alga...to kamal bhi rote hue bola...
K:: mummy dekh lo ye rishu ko...maar raha h..fir muje mat bolna..app...( hath se bachav karte hue rishu ki laat se)
Radha ander se hi boli...
Rd: rishu agarr m aa gayi na..ti tu dekh lena..bhut bigad gaya h...sharm nhi aaymti bhaiya pe laat marte hue( gusse se danda le kar room mm atte hue)
Ravi ne rishu ko apne pass chupa liya...to radha shant hui...or kamal se boli.....
Rd:: kamal beta chlo bhar betho...isko to m ajj khana nhi dungi ruk tu...( gusse se rishu ko dekh ke)
Kamal bhi usko chidate hue bhar ko chla gya...
Tabhi radha ravi se boli....
Rd:: main to pagal ho jaungi is ghar m...( ravi ko dekh ke pareshan hote hue)
Ravi kuch nhi bola bas muskura diya...
Or radha bhar ko chle gayi...
Or thodei der baad aayi or ravi se boli...
Rd:: ravi kya khoge?? Are deepa ko bhi phone nhi kiya...mila do to phone...( ravi ko dekh ke)
R: kuch bhi kha lunga..( telephone ke pass jate hue)
Ravi ne telephone milaya or deep se baat kar li..or jab phone rakha to ravi se boli..
Rd: sabji bhi nhi...iske papa na...ghar m kuch rakha nhi h..( muh bna ke)
Chlo sabji le aate h...( ravi ko dekh ke)
R:: main le aata hu..koi nhi..( radha ko dekh ke normal ho ke)
Rd:: nhi nhi m bhi chlti hu..scooter se jate h...kamal rishu...main sabji lene ja rahi hu...ager dono apni jgh se uthe to tab dekhna( haal se hi dono ko bolte hue)
Tabhi kamal bola....
K: mummy samosa lana...( ander se bolte hue)
Rd:: abhi maggi khayi h..ab samosa..thik h laungi..lekin padhai karoge dono sun lo...( baal bnate hue)
K: haan thik h mummy..( khus ho ke)
Radha rishu ke wale room m gayi or boli..
Rd: tuje khan h ki nhi...??( thoda gusse se)
Rishu kuch nhi bol raha tha..to radha ravi ke or dekh ke boli...jo ki haal ke pass hi kahdi tha...
Rd:: dekha isko...jitna chota h...utna hi ye khota h...gussa dekho...( baal bnate hue muskurate hue ravi ko dekh ke)
Ravi bas muskura diya...
Rishu radha ki apni santan tha...uske pehle pati se..jabki kamal pradeep ki...lekin usne kabhi dono m fark nhi samja...
Or fir radha or ravi scooter se chle gaye...
Radha man hi man bhut khus thi...bhar andhera ho gaya tha...jado ke din the to bajaj chetak scooter ke piche betho hui radha ne ravi ke kandhe pe sir hath rakha tha.
.or uske urozz ravi ki pith se dhanse yhe...or dono market ko chle jaye...
To be continue..