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Awesome updateFir sab log Apne room ko chale gaye...
Sunita bhi Apne bacchon ko le kar Apne room m sone chale gyii...
Or ravi Apne room m.....
Ab aage::
Ravi ko niid nhi aa rahi thi...wo bechan tha...lekin kya karta...
To wo Apne i port m song sunne laga...jo ki uske papa ne aaj uske liye bheja tha suresh ke sath... lekin udne bhi to gane nhi the...wo hi 2,4 song the...to ravi boor hone laga...
Ravi Deepika se milna cha Raha tha..lekin kahi se kahi tak koi ummid nhi thi...
Ase hi 12 bj gya....
To mushkil se so gya...
Or fir subh 7 bje tak soye raha...
Ravi ki nani ne usko uthaya....
N:: ravi uth ja beta subh ho gayi h school ko der ho jayegi...(bhar se boli)
R:: uth raha hu naniiii.( Angdai lete hue bola)
Fir karib 10 min baad ravi utha...or aankh malte hue bhar aa gya...
Or bathroom chala gya....
Or fir 8 bje nha liya...
Or nha ke room m aa gya...
Wahi sunita apane room m Apne bacchon ke liye nasta bna rahi thi kitchen m..
Ravi kapde pehn raha tha.. kyonki sunita khade ho ke khana bna rahi thi ..to usko ravi nhi dikha aaj us din ke jaise...
Haan ager Chati to dikh jata.. darwaza m ankh laga ke... lekin sunita roti bnane m bussy thi..usko ye dhan nhi aaya...or na wo ye karna chati thi....
Or fir ravi bhar ko aaya or apna room lock kiya..to sunita ne suna to zaldi se Apne ko hote hue bhar aayi or boli...
S:: ravi bhaiya nasta kar lo( aate ko hath m le kar gol gol ghumate hue)
R:: nhi bhabhi mami ne bna diya hoga...( Innocent simle dete hue)
S: kya hua fir 1 roti kha lo...( Request karte hue)
Tab ravi ko bhut accha laga or sunita ke room m aa gya...
Sunita kitchen m chale gyii...uske bacche wahi pe beth ke kha rahe the...
Ravi wahi pe rakhi ek chair m beth gya...or golu se baat karne laga...
Tabhi sunita aa gayi...or ravi ko khane ki plate di...ek normal smile ke sath or boli...
S:: pata nhi kaisi ho rahi hogi..sabji ,kl khet se le aayi thi...( Normal smile ke sath)
Ravi ne khaya or bola..
R:: badiya ho rahi h... tension mat kariye...app aacha bnate h khana..( innocent smile ke sath)
S:: chai piyoge??(puchte hue)
Kyonki ravi chai pita nhi tha..ye baat sunita ko bhi pata thi.. lekin fir bhi usne pucha..
R:: nhi bhabhi chai nhi pita.,( Smile dete hue)
Fir sunita kitchen m fyi or ek glass dudh le aayi..or ek roti..
Ravi plate piche karte hue bola...
R:: nhi nhi ab nhi khaunga...fir upper nhi khaunga to mami bhi gussa hongi...( Plate chupate hue)
S:: are nhi hongi gussa m bol dungi..( roti plate m rakhte hue hanste hue boli).
R:: nhi bhabhi pls sham ko khaunga pakka subh bhul nhi lagti...( Smile dete hue)
S:: chalo fir dudh pi lo..( dudh rakhte hue).
R:: na na itna dudh nhi..( mna karte hue)
S: are tum to ladkiyon ke jaise mna kar rahe ho...piyo na( hanste hue thoda zor de kar boli)
R:: kam kar do na bhabhi pls( request karte hue)
S:: are bhut h dudh..kon piyega yha...( Dudh ka glass dete hue)
Fir ravi ne dudh pi liya...
Sunita ne ek saree pehni thi or hamesa ki tarah sir m saree Ka palla rakha tha...
Fir ravi utha.. to sunita ne uske hath se plate le li or ravi hath dhone bhar chala gya...
Sunita ravi se boli...
S:: Ravi Bhaiya ( awaz dete hue)
R:: Haan bhabhi..( hath pochte hue plat ke dekha)
S:: wo m bacchon ko school chor ke aati hu...didi ko bta denge app.m abhi aati hu...( Normal ho ke)
R:: are m Chor aunga school ( muh pochte hue)
S:: apko bhi to der ho jayegi...( Normal ho ke)
R:. Are mera school 9.30 ka h...abhi 8.30 hua h...
S:: apko pareshani to nhi hogi...( Innocent face se boli)
R:: nhi nhi...( Golu or Bablu ka hath pakdte hue)
(((Or fir chala gya dono ko le kar aage side ko ..kyonki main gate aage side se hi jana padta tha...))))
Sunita mann m...
Sach m bhut acche h ravi bhaiya bhi...
Ye sochate hue kitchen m aa gyi ..or batan dhone niche beth gayi...kyonki kitchen thoda purana tha to bartan dhone ka ek side niche bna hua tha..
Tabhi usko nazar us darwaje ke tute hisse m gya
Jisko dekh kar fir usko us din ka seen yaad aa gya..jo usne kitchen se dekha tha...
sunita bhi ek aurat thi..bhale wo us type ki aurat nhi thi lekin feeling to sabki hi hoti h... shankar ke bimar hone se wo kai din se mard ke sath sansarg karne se dur thi..
Lekin fir wo in sab baat se dhyan hata ke kaam m lag gayi...
Lekin fir mnn m sochne lagi..sach hota h itna bada??
Or fir apne kaam m lag gayi...
Wahi ravi.. branchon ko chor ke sidha upper gya...
Dekha Deepika kitchen m h...or sath m ravi ki nani bhi....
To ravi ne deppika ko dekha or Deepika ne bhi...
Lekin Deepika ne dekh ke sharm se aankh niche karke roti bnane lagi...smile dabate hue...
Ravi ander gya dekha suresh news padte padte nasta kar raha tha...
Or ravi ke nana room m the Apne..
Ravi Apne nana ji ke pass beth gya .or thodi der un se baat ki...
Tabhi Ravi ki nani ne usko awaz di...
N:: ravi nasta kar le...( Awaz dete hue)..
R:: aa raha hu nani(reply dete hue)
Dining table pe aaya to dekha suresh ja chuka tha..
Fir ravi wo plate le kar kitchen m or deepika se bola..
R:: ye roti km kar do.. sunita bhabhi ne roti khila di..( Deepika ko dekhte hue)
Deepika ne ek bar piche ko dekha ,,ravi ki nani kuch kar rahi thi to...
Aate ko gol gol ghuma ke hanste hue boli....
D::Accha ji( tawa m roti palate hue)
Ravi Deepika ko dekhte reh gaya...
Deepika ko ravi halt pe hansi aa rahi thi...
Suresh ke aa jane se bechara cha ke bhi kuch nhi kar sakta tha....
Or fir ravi ne khana khaya or chala gya Apne school....
To be continued...
Awesome updateFir sab log Apne room ko chale gaye...
Sunita bhi Apne bacchon ko le kar Apne room m sone chale gyii...
Or ravi Apne room m.....
Ab aage::
Ravi ko niid nhi aa rahi thi...wo bechan tha...lekin kya karta...
To wo Apne i port m song sunne laga...jo ki uske papa ne aaj uske liye bheja tha suresh ke sath... lekin udne bhi to gane nhi the...wo hi 2,4 song the...to ravi boor hone laga...
Ravi Deepika se milna cha Raha tha..lekin kahi se kahi tak koi ummid nhi thi...
Ase hi 12 bj gya....
To mushkil se so gya...
Or fir subh 7 bje tak soye raha...
Ravi ki nani ne usko uthaya....
N:: ravi uth ja beta subh ho gayi h school ko der ho jayegi...(bhar se boli)
R:: uth raha hu naniiii.( Angdai lete hue bola)
Fir karib 10 min baad ravi utha...or aankh malte hue bhar aa gya...
Or bathroom chala gya....
Or fir 8 bje nha liya...
Or nha ke room m aa gya...
Wahi sunita apane room m Apne bacchon ke liye nasta bna rahi thi kitchen m..
Ravi kapde pehn raha tha.. kyonki sunita khade ho ke khana bna rahi thi ..to usko ravi nhi dikha aaj us din ke jaise...
Haan ager Chati to dikh jata.. darwaza m ankh laga ke... lekin sunita roti bnane m bussy thi..usko ye dhan nhi aaya...or na wo ye karna chati thi....
Or fir ravi bhar ko aaya or apna room lock kiya..to sunita ne suna to zaldi se Apne ko hote hue bhar aayi or boli...
S:: ravi bhaiya nasta kar lo( aate ko hath m le kar gol gol ghumate hue)
R:: nhi bhabhi mami ne bna diya hoga...( Innocent simle dete hue)
S: kya hua fir 1 roti kha lo...( Request karte hue)
Tab ravi ko bhut accha laga or sunita ke room m aa gya...
Sunita kitchen m chale gyii...uske bacche wahi pe beth ke kha rahe the...
Ravi wahi pe rakhi ek chair m beth gya...or golu se baat karne laga...
Tabhi sunita aa gayi...or ravi ko khane ki plate di...ek normal smile ke sath or boli...
S:: pata nhi kaisi ho rahi hogi..sabji ,kl khet se le aayi thi...( Normal smile ke sath)
Ravi ne khaya or bola..
R:: badiya ho rahi h... tension mat kariye...app aacha bnate h khana..( innocent smile ke sath)
S:: chai piyoge??(puchte hue)
Kyonki ravi chai pita nhi tha..ye baat sunita ko bhi pata thi.. lekin fir bhi usne pucha..
R:: nhi bhabhi chai nhi pita.,( Smile dete hue)
Fir sunita kitchen m fyi or ek glass dudh le aayi..or ek roti..
Ravi plate piche karte hue bola...
R:: nhi nhi ab nhi khaunga...fir upper nhi khaunga to mami bhi gussa hongi...( Plate chupate hue)
S:: are nhi hongi gussa m bol dungi..( roti plate m rakhte hue hanste hue boli).
R:: nhi bhabhi pls sham ko khaunga pakka subh bhul nhi lagti...( Smile dete hue)
S:: chalo fir dudh pi lo..( dudh rakhte hue).
R:: na na itna dudh nhi..( mna karte hue)
S: are tum to ladkiyon ke jaise mna kar rahe ho...piyo na( hanste hue thoda zor de kar boli)
R:: kam kar do na bhabhi pls( request karte hue)
S:: are bhut h dudh..kon piyega yha...( Dudh ka glass dete hue)
Fir ravi ne dudh pi liya...
Sunita ne ek saree pehni thi or hamesa ki tarah sir m saree Ka palla rakha tha...
Fir ravi utha.. to sunita ne uske hath se plate le li or ravi hath dhone bhar chala gya...
Sunita ravi se boli...
S:: Ravi Bhaiya ( awaz dete hue)
R:: Haan bhabhi..( hath pochte hue plat ke dekha)
S:: wo m bacchon ko school chor ke aati hu...didi ko bta denge app.m abhi aati hu...( Normal ho ke)
R:: are m Chor aunga school ( muh pochte hue)
S:: apko bhi to der ho jayegi...( Normal ho ke)
R:. Are mera school 9.30 ka h...abhi 8.30 hua h...
S:: apko pareshani to nhi hogi...( Innocent face se boli)
R:: nhi nhi...( Golu or Bablu ka hath pakdte hue)
(((Or fir chala gya dono ko le kar aage side ko ..kyonki main gate aage side se hi jana padta tha...))))
Sunita mann m...
Sach m bhut acche h ravi bhaiya bhi...
Ye sochate hue kitchen m aa gyi ..or batan dhone niche beth gayi...kyonki kitchen thoda purana tha to bartan dhone ka ek side niche bna hua tha..
Tabhi usko nazar us darwaje ke tute hisse m gya
Jisko dekh kar fir usko us din ka seen yaad aa gya..jo usne kitchen se dekha tha...
sunita bhi ek aurat thi..bhale wo us type ki aurat nhi thi lekin feeling to sabki hi hoti h... shankar ke bimar hone se wo kai din se mard ke sath sansarg karne se dur thi..
Lekin fir wo in sab baat se dhyan hata ke kaam m lag gayi...
Lekin fir mnn m sochne lagi..sach hota h itna bada??
Or fir apne kaam m lag gayi...
Wahi ravi.. branchon ko chor ke sidha upper gya...
Dekha Deepika kitchen m h...or sath m ravi ki nani bhi....
To ravi ne deppika ko dekha or Deepika ne bhi...
Lekin Deepika ne dekh ke sharm se aankh niche karke roti bnane lagi...smile dabate hue...
Ravi ander gya dekha suresh news padte padte nasta kar raha tha...
Or ravi ke nana room m the Apne..
Ravi Apne nana ji ke pass beth gya .or thodi der un se baat ki...
Tabhi Ravi ki nani ne usko awaz di...
N:: ravi nasta kar le...( Awaz dete hue)..
R:: aa raha hu nani(reply dete hue)
Dining table pe aaya to dekha suresh ja chuka tha..
Fir ravi wo plate le kar kitchen m or deepika se bola..
R:: ye roti km kar do.. sunita bhabhi ne roti khila di..( Deepika ko dekhte hue)
Deepika ne ek bar piche ko dekha ,,ravi ki nani kuch kar rahi thi to...
Aate ko gol gol ghuma ke hanste hue boli....
D::Accha ji( tawa m roti palate hue)
Ravi Deepika ko dekhte reh gaya...
Deepika ko ravi halt pe hansi aa rahi thi...
Suresh ke aa jane se bechara cha ke bhi kuch nhi kar sakta tha....
Or fir ravi ne khana khaya or chala gya Apne school....
To be continued...
