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Adultery Meri fantasy ( Adultery/Romance)

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A:: sun na...kal 11 baje ko bola h maine dekh lena yaar..( request karte hue)
R:: thik h....( bekar sa muh bna ke)
Or fir do I niche aa gaye...
Ab aage:::

Ravi room m aa gya or usko ab Kal fir jana tha...or sochne laga..

Kya aurat h yaar ye bhi...ek bar karke bhi chain nhi h...apni dost ke ghar bula rahi h...kahi uske sath to nhi bolegi??

Sala muje kya se kya bana diya..ab main padhai karu ya in auraton ko kuch karne m lage rahu...

Or Mera number zaroor shilpa ne diya hoga..usko bhi aag zaida h...

Sabase pehle to ye number hi usko de deta hu...na hi ye mobile hoga na muje koi call karega..madhu bhi pata nhi kah se ye mobile dedi muje..

Ye sab aurate asi hi hain...wo Anita to hai hi palat...ghar phuch gayi to...ek ye vidya mami se picha chuta h to dusri mil gayi...

Galti bhi to meri hi h...bhut udd raha tha na main...kal jata hu or bol deta hu muje baar baar na bulaye...

Ase ravi ne kahana khaya or chup chap so gaya..

Agle din subh utha or padhne laga...karib 9 bje room se bhar aaya...

Su ita nasta bana rah thi usne nasta kiya kuch bola nhi...sunita ne ajj ravi se kuch nhi bola..socha ki khali exam h kya preshan karu ek hi baat ko lekar..

Ravi room m chala gaya..sunita khet ko...time dekha 10 baj raha tha..mobile off kiya tha or on bhi nhi kiya..

Shilpa ne bhi phone nhi kiya...

Ravi 10.45 pe tyar hua...or bike lekar Anita ke ghar ko chala gya..lekin ab phone kisko karta...

Ek man hua ki kal jis numbe se phone aaya h usko kar le..lekin nhi kiya..

Wahi Anita bhane se rekha ke ghar phuch chuki thi..

Or uski saas se baat kar rahi thi...rekha ki saas ke pero main dard tha...

Rekha bhi wahi bethi thi...or Anita usse ishare se baat kar rahi thi...or rekha apni khidki ke or ko gayi...dekha ki ravi kuch dur pe khada h..

Uski saans tez ho gayi..ki ab ander kaise laye..to Anita ko bhane se boli..

R::didi didi kuch kar rahe ho kya??( aate hue Anita ke pass)

A: nhi to kyn??( herani se dekh ke)

R::wo soch rahi thi ajj dhup aayi h..gehu sukha deti...thoda pakad doge??( normal ho ke)

Anita samj gayi..or boli..

A:: haan haan...chal na..chat m sukayegi na...??chal..( uthte hue)

Chachi tum aram karo...main rekha ki madd kar deti hu...( smile karke rekha or uski saas ko dekh ke)

Rekha or Anita upper chale gaye...
Rekha phone bhi le aayi..or Anita ko mila ke de diya..

A:: wo dikha kya??( phone lete hue)

R:: are apke ghar ke pass mod pe khada h...( dhere se pareshan ho ke)

Ravi dur khada mobile ko dekha raha tha..wapas jane hi wala tha ki Anita ka phone aay..

A: hello...rishab...

R: hello....( thoda ghabrake)

A: are m rekha ke ghar pe hu chat ko dekho...( halka sa hath hila ke idhar udhar dekh ke)

Ravi ne dono ko chat pe dekha to rekha side ko ho gayi...

A:: aa jao..aram se aana rekha ko niche bhej rahi hu koi dekh to nhi raha h na...( dhere se bolte hue)

R: muje nhi pata..( thoda irritate ho ke ghabraye hue)

A:: aa jao aa jao ..rekha niche ko aa rahi h..ja rekha...( rekha ko dekh ke)

Rekha ki bhi halat khrab thi..Pata nhi saas ander gayi ki nhi...

Kher niche gayi to dekha saas apne room m thi..so rahi thi..bed m lekin sayad niid nhi aayi thi..

Rekha ka blood pressure low tha... chupke se bhar ko gayi or gate khol diya..

Wahi ravi uske ghar ko aate hue sochne laga .

Marwa de gi ye..aunty...( tension m)

Or ravi ne bike kahdi ki..or sidha ander aa gaya..

Jha rekha or Anita rehte the waha bhut makan nhi bane the nayi colon thi...

Ravi sidha ander aaya..dekha gate ke ek kone m rekha kahdi h...rekha ne gate band kiya to ravi palta or rekha ko dekha...

Rekha bas muskura gayi or chup rehne ka ishara kiya..

.ravi ki to fuse thi...wo chup chap kahda raha..

Rekha ander ko gayi or ravi se ishare se ane ko bola...

Ravi bina bole uske piche chala gaya.

Ravi jiase handsome ladke ko apne piche aata dekha usko chaal hi badal gayi..kamar hila ke chalne lagi..

Ravi ki nazar uskw khulho pe padi lekin dar se uski halat kharab thi..
Rekha ne hall m aa ke usko upper jane ka ishara kiya...

Ravi dar raha tha..lekin dabe pau upper gaya to ander rekha saas boli..

Saas: rekha or rekha....Hai re mere per. .mar jati isse aacha...( ander se)

R:: haan haannnnn maa ji..( ravi ki upper jane ko bolte hue hath se)

S:: pure gehu mat sukhana...mausam kharb ho jayega...main to kuch kar bhi nhi pati...( ander se bolte hue)

R: haan maa ji thode hi sukhungi....sab kaha ho payega...( thoda confidence se kynki ravi upper ja chuka tha)

S:: muje dawai de deti...kya karu in pero ne to apahij bana diya h muje..( ander se dard se bolte hue)

Rekha ka to upper jane ka man tha ki dono kya kar rahe h..lekin saas ne tok diya to zaldi se uske room m gayi or zaldi dawai dene lagi...

S: tuje kya hua...??( herani se rekha ko dekh ke)

Rekha zaldbaji kar rahi thi to uski saas ne usko toka to boli..

R:. Kuch nhi maa ji..wo didi upper akele h na..gehu nikalne honge..main wo chadar lene aayi thi..( thoda haath slow karte hue dawai dete hue)

S: Haan haan ja...anita bhi aachi h...kon aat h aj kal ase...( uthte hue)

Rekha man m sochne lagi..

Umm h..acchi...Pata nhi kya kar rahi hogi...wo sukahyegi or na or hunnnhhhh..( man hi man Anita ko Koste hue jalan se)

Rekha ko uski saas ne uljah diya kabhi kisi kaam pe kabhi kisi kaam pe...

Usko saas pe gussa aane laga sochne lagi ki kahi uske jane tak picture khtam na ho jaye....

Kher 15 min baad ja payi..or tezi se chat ko aayi...

Dekha chat wala room ander se band tha..wo chat wale room ke darwaze pe kaan laga ke sunne lagi..

Ravi zald se zlad nipte ke jana chata tha...lekin aaj fir wo hi uska ling khada hone ka naam hi nhi le raha tha...

Anita pehle din ke tarh uske ling pe chuppe laga rahi thi churiyon ki awaz aa rhi thi bhar..

Ravi jeans ko thoda niche karke betha tha..or Anita zamin pe ghutne ke bal...tezi se uske ling ko chat rahi thi..jisse puchkarne ki awaz aa rahi thi..or halki halki ravi ki bhi...

Rekha gaur se sunne lagi or bich bich m sidhi se niche ko bhi dekhti...

Room ke Ander Anita..

A:: huaaa kucchh haaannn...uff kitna bada h...aacha lag raha h na...( ravi ke ling ko chate hue)

Ravi bas aankh band kiye dono hath bed m rakhe...halke halke siskte raha...

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Or bich bich m Anita ko dekhne laga...nashila aankho se..

Or fir Anita ke blouse ke upper se uske mamme dabane laga..

Anita unnnhh unnhh karte hue uska ling chatne lagi..

Ravi ka ling khada hua...

Or usne Anita ko hatya..or kahda ho gaya..

Anita muskurate hue be m let gayi or apni saree upper karne lagi..smile karke....ravi ke samne moti moti jangh dikhne lagi...

Ravi usko dekhte hue muh khula karke ling hilate hue Anita ko saree upper karke delhne laga....

Anita ne saree janghon tak kar li..wo ghutne mode hue thi..or fir ravi ki aankho m dekhte hue blouse kholne lagi smile karke...

Or aankho se ishar kiya jiase keh rahi ho aa jao...

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Bhar rekha ko churiyon ki awaz halki halki aa rahi thi samj nhi paa rahi thi ki ho kya raha h..koi ched bhi nhi tha jisse dekh pati...

Pareshan thi..Anita pe jalan ho rahi thi...wo to ye soch rahi thi ki ravi or anita kar rahe h..or Anita jhut bolti h ki ravi dard karta h...

Nhi to itne der se kya kar rahe h..soch soch ke pareshan thi..

Ki ander se anita ki dard bhari awaz aati jo ghuti ghuti si awaz thi..

Aaannnhhhhh ssiiiii haaiiiii marr gayyiii risshaabbbb...aaannhhh..
Sath m churiyon or payal ki bhi..
Ander ravi anita kedono per kahne pe rakhe zamin m per rakhe ukse upper jhuka hua ling uski badi si yoni m ghusa raa tha..

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Ravi ne Anita ke muh pe hath rakh diya..or tezi se kamar hilane laga..

Anita bed m dard ke mare hath marne lagi..Dard bahre face se..jisse churiyan khan khan karje bajne lagi..or bed ki chu chu chu awaz aane lagi...

Ravi dant bhinch ke anita ki khuli hui chut m ander bhar ho raha tha..Anita ki chut paniya gayi thi..or ek hath se chadar or ek hath se ravi ki baju pakde hue unnunnn karke chud rahi thi....

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Rekha gaur se awaz sunne lagi...uski yoni m bhi gila pan aa gay..mehorrn chaddi bhigne lagi...or pata nhi kab uska hath apne janghon ke jod pe saree or petikot ke upper chla gaya..or yoni ko bhichne lagi...

Jisse uski saree aage se mud gayi thi bhut si silvate pad gayi..

Ander ravi anita ki payal wale per ko jisme halke kale baal the...

Apne kandhe pe rakha hua..anita ke mamme dba dba ke ausko dekhte hue lambe lambe short marne laga..

Bed chu chu chu tezi se karne laga..Anita ki payal uski pindaliyo m fasi thi..apne honth kaat ke siskiyan daba ke ravi se chud rahi thi..

Har jahtke se wo upper ko ho jati..
Ravi ne pura daal diya to anita ne dard bhare face se..

Aaaannhhhhh maaaaaa maarrr gayyyiiiii...russhaabbbbb...aaaaaannnnhhhhhhh siiiiiii haaaiii...chhuuubbbbbb raaahhaaah..hhhh...maarrrrr jaauungiii....( dard bhare face se ravi ko dekh ke dabi hui awaz m ravi ke baju m marte hue)

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Jisse churiya kuch tut bhi gayi...or bhar rekha ki halat khrab ho gayi kahda hona muskil hone laga..
Wo to khud experience holder thi awqz se hi samj gayi ki anita ki chudai ho rahi h..

Ravi waise hi uski kokh tak daal ke rika ek lamb saans bhari or anita ke hoth pe jhuk gaya..

Anita puri fold ho gayi per sir tak phuch gaye..ravi bed m chad gaya ghutne ke bal..

Or ek lamba smooch liya..jiski awaz bhar tak rekha ne bhi suni..

Ummmmmmmmmaaaaaa......bhar lagatar smooch ki awaz aa rahi thi lekin bed hilne or jangho ke takrane ki koi awaz nhi..rekha nashili aankho se room m kan lagye thi ki..
Ek dam se thap thap thap thap ki awaz aane lagi or anita ki..

Ufffff maaaa...sssiiiii haaiiiii...rissshaabbb aaannnhhhhh ssiiiii maaaaa..ssiiiii haaiii ree..mar gayiiii...risshaabb thoda dhireee..uiiiii maaa...meri......aaannnhhhh..

Ander ravi ghutne ke bal anita ke upper chada hua rekha ke per ghutne se mude hue bed m or tezi se ravi usko chod raha tha..or uske nipple maslte hue...short laga raha tha..

Anita ke hath ravi ke pith m ghum rahe theor per uske kamar ke chor or kenchi banye hue the..

Room m thap thap thap thap ki aawaz or churiya ki khan kha. Khan...aa rahi thi...

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Anita masti m ravi se chud rahi thi..ravi ne uski chut puri khol ke rakh di thi..ling bhut tezi se bhar niklta to uski chut m samajhta har jhuka uski kokh pe padti raha tha..
Anita bed m machal rahi thi...2 baar pani chor chuki thi...

Ravi uske honth chuste hue usko chod raha tha..

Bhar rekha saree ke bhar se halke baalo wali apni jawan chut ko masle ja rahi thi...or ek hath se blouse ke bhar se apne uroz ko...

Or akhir kar uska badan akd gaya...or wo honth dab ke masti m sssiiiiiiiiiiiiii unnnnnnhh karte hue jahd gayi...or wahi beth gayi besudh ho ke...

Wahi thodi der baad jab usko churiyon ki tezi se awaz sunaiye di ti zaldi se uth ke bagal wale room m jo ki store room tha waha ja ke chup gayi...

2 Min baad room ka door khula...anita saree sahi karte hue bhar nikali..

Baal bikhre hue the lipstick faili hui thi..mathe si bindi gayab thi...ase lag raha tha bhut buri tarh se chudi h...

Ravi ander paint pehn raha tha Anita ki badi si chaddi abhi bhi zamin pe thi..jisko usne apni chut ko poch ke fenka tha..

Anita baal bante hue idhar udhar dekhne lagi jaise rekha ko dudh rahi ho...

Usko store room se awaz sunayi di to ander gayi dekha rekha normal ho ke gehu nikal rahi thi..

Rekha Anita ko dekh ke kutil muskan dete hue dhere se uski halat dekh ke boli..

R: hmmm..mili shanti??? Yaha tak awqz aa tmrahi thi apki..( hanste hue dhere se)

A:: chup kamini....( saree ka pallu sahi karte hue)

R:: gaya wo??( dhere se)

A:: na..ander hi h ja tu bhi....chakh le...( rekha ko dekh ke hanste hue)

R:: na baba na...app hi karo...muje nhi karna( bina Anita se bnazar milaye...dikhawa karte hue apne sidhe pan ka)

A:: niche tak to chor aa kam se kam ..teri saas soyi h...( dhere se boli)

Rekha ki aankh chamk gayi wo ravi ko dekhna chati thi..lekin sharm bhi lag rahi thi to boli..

R:: app chale jao na main kya jau ab...soyi hogi ma ji..( gehu nikalte hue)

A:: ja na tu...( zor dete hue)

Rekha dikhawati muh bna ke bhar ko chale gayi..or room ke bhar ja ke kahdi ho gayi..

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Ravi chup chap betha tha..uski nazar Anita ki chaddi pe padi..usne usko per se side kar diya..

Tabhi Anita bhar aayi..or ander gayi .or ravi se dhere se boli..

A: kuch khaoge..( smile karje palat ke Rekha ko dekh ke)

R: nhi muje jana h..( kahde ho ke ek nazar Rekha ko dekh ke jo ki sharma rahi thi..darwaze ko chokhat pakd ke khadi thi)

A: thik h jao aram se jana ...rekha chor degi...( smile karke)

Ravi kuch nhi bola..bas bhar ko jane laga to rekha usko dekhte muskurate hue rasta dene lagi..

Or ravi ke piche piche chale gayi...

Ravi sidhi se niche utar raha tha piche rekha thi....

Jo mand mand muskura rahi thi...
Ravi kuch step niche utara or palat ke rekha ko dekha thoda embarrassed ho ke..

To rekha ne chup rehne ka ishara kiya muskurate hue or usko pass karke aage chale gayi..ravi dabe pau se niche aaya or rekha ne apni saas ke room ko dekha ..or ravi ko aane ka ishara kiya..

Ravi sidhe door ke tarf chala gya...rekha piche se aayi or dorr khola dono bhar aa gyae...
Bhar aake rekha usko dekh ke muskurate hue boli..

R:: kha rehte ho app...??( ravi ko gaur se dekh ke muskurate hue)
Ra:: bas yhi thdi dur pe...( embarrassed feel karte hue)

R:: hmmmm.....thik h ana kabhi...ab to dekh liya h...( ravi ko dekh ke)

Ravi jaan bujh ke usko gahr ka paya nhi bataya...wo bas jana chata tha..
Tabhi rekha ander ko dekhi or ravi se dhere se boli..

R:: wo mere hi ghar ka number h....or haan anita didi se mat bolna haan kuch bhi...khali galat samjhegi...( smile karje dhere se)

Ravi kuch nhi bola...

R:: ye tumhare pass hi rehta h mobile??( ander ko dekh ke)

Ravi ne bhi sir hila diya...wo tension m tha...

R:: okkkkkkkk......( smile karke)


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Or ravi jane laga..to uske piche gate aake gate khol ke bhar ko dekhi... boli...

R:: aram se jana...fir...accha fir baat karti hu..phone pe..didi ko mat bolna..( ishare se dhere se)

Ravi kuch nhi bola..bas zaldi se nikal gaya..
Rekha hanste hue gate band ki or sochte hue upper chale gayi...

Upper anita store room thi rekha chup chap room m gayi or bed sheta ki halat dekhi or jukh ke bed ke niche dekhi..Anita ki chaddi padi thi..jo gili thi..sayad ravi ne bhi apna ling pocha tha...

Or hanste hue store room ko chale gayi...

To be continued..
nice update..!!
ravi ne rekha ke ghar jakar anita ki pyaas bujha hi di..rekha ko ab jalan horahi hai anita se..rekha ek sharif aurat kya se kya ban gayi sirf gupta ki wajah se..ravi jab gupta ko marega tab rekha bhi apna badla legi iss harami gupta se aur gupta ke kayi raaj ravi ke samne kholegi..!! waise ab rekha jarur ravi ko call karegi aur usne ravi ko yeh bhi bola hai ki anita ko na bataye..shilpa se ek baar baat karke ravi sab clear kare toh achha hai..uss bichari ki bhi kya galti hai..!!
 
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M bas ek baat bol raha hu or baar baar bol raha hu...jisko story nhi aachi lage wo koi or story padh le...

Ravi ko kya karna h kya nhi karna h uske liye main hu...
Ager app logo ki fantasy is story se puri nhi ho rahi h to khud ek story likh li jiye...

Main ye sabke liye keh raha hu A to Z...koi bhi ho..

Pls muje suggestion nhi chaiye...M story mo apne hisab se likhna chata hu..

App sabhi se request h..pls disturb na kare...bhut muskil se time milta h...
 

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M bas ek baat bol raha hu or baar baar bol raha hu...jisko story nhi aachi lage wo koi or story padh le...

Ravi ko kya karna h kya nhi karna h uske liye main hu...
Ager app logo ki fantasy is story se puri nhi ho rahi h to khud ek story likh li jiye...

Main ye sabke liye keh raha hu A to Z...koi bhi ho..

Pls muje suggestion nhi chaiye...M story mo apne hisab se likhna chata hu..

App sabhi se request h..pls disturb na kare...bhut muskil se time milta h...
मित्र, आपका कहानी का पाठक है, पद के थोड़ा बहुत अपना कुछ न कुछ जरूर देंगे। लेकिन आपसे अनुरोध रहेगा की राय देखिये सबका लेकिन लिखिए वही जो आपके मन मे है। ये एक बात पर कोई बिचार नहीं कर रहा है की आप कैसे कहानी मे चरित्र चित्रण के लिए क्या भयानक बिस्तार किए है। ये रेखा का कहानी करीब करीब 300 पृस्था पहले लिखे थे उसके बाद के दीपिका का बहन का साथ गुप्ता का कार्यक्रम हुआ था जिसके बाद हुआ था की गुप्ता के ऊपर बदला लिया जाएगा। बहुत पुरानी बात है लेकिन आज समझ मे आ रहा है की उस गुप्ता के खिलाफ बदला लेने के लिए और दीपिका के ऊपर जो अत्याचार किया है उस गुप्ता ने उसका जानकारी होने के लिए क्या मस्त तरीका लगाये है। आप के कहानी मे सही मे कोई भी चरित्र का बर्णन ऐसे नहीं हुआ, जरूर उसके पीछे कोई न कोई बजह रहेगा ही। आप जितना सुंदर परिस्थिति का बर्णन करते है वो अपने आप मे लाजवाब है। इसील्ये आपसे अनुरोध है की किसिके कहने पर अपना चाल मत बादल दीजिएगा। आप जैसा लिख रहें है वैसे ही लिखते रहिए। आपका पाठककुल को आपकी ऐसा ही लिखावट पसंद होता है, उसके लिए आपने लेखन का शैली कभी भी नहीं बदल दीजिएगा। धन्यबाद।
 
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मित्र, आपका कहानी का पाठक है, पद के थोड़ा बहुत अपना कुछ न कुछ जरूर देंगे। लेकिन आपसे अनुरोध रहेगा की राय देखिये सबका लेकिन लिखिए वही जो आपके मन मे है। ये एक बात पर कोई बिचार नहीं कर रहा है की आप कैसे कहानी मे चरित्र चित्रण के लिए क्या भयानक बिस्तार किए है। ये रेखा का कहानी करीब करीब 300 पृस्था पहले लिखे थे उसके बाद के दीपिका का बहन का साथ गुप्ता का कार्यक्रम हुआ था जिसके बाद हुआ था की गुप्ता के ऊपर बदला लिया जाएगा। बहुत पुरानी बात है लेकिन आज समझ मे आ रहा है की उस गुप्ता के खिलाफ बदला लेने के लिए और दीपिका के ऊपर जो अत्याचार किया है उस गुप्ता ने उसका जानकारी होने के लिए क्या मस्त तरीका लगाये है। आप के कहानी मे सही मे कोई भी चरित्र का बर्णन ऐसे नहीं हुआ, जरूर उसके पीछे कोई न कोई बजह रहेगा ही। आप जितना सुंदर परिस्थिति का बर्णन करते है वो अपने आप मे लाजवाब है। इसील्ये आपसे अनुरोध है की किसिके कहने पर अपना चाल मत बादल दीजिएगा। आप जैसा लिख रहें है वैसे ही लिखते रहिए। आपका पाठककुल को आपकी ऐसा ही लिखावट पसंद होता है, उसके लिए आपने लेखन का शैली कभी भी नहीं बदल दीजिएगा। धन्यबाद।
Lekin bhut se log suddenly reaction de dete h..even story ke last m kya hona h wo bhi mere mind m h..abhi bhut kuch hona h..

Bas mera mind relax hoga to result accha ayega...nhi to fir koi faida nhi h...likhne ka...
 

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Lekin bhut se log suddenly reaction de dete h..even story ke last m kya hona h wo bhi mere mind m h..abhi bhut kuch hona h..

Bas mera mind relax hoga to result accha ayega...nhi to fir koi faida nhi h...likhne ka...
सब छोड़िए मित्र। आप अपने कहानी अपने हिसाब से लिखते चलिये जो हम लोग को बहुत पसंद है। खैर, इस forum मे बहुत सारे वैसे आदमी मिल जाएंगे जिसके चलते बहुत लेखक या लेखिका इस forum छोड़ दिये है लेकिन आपको उस सूची मे देखना कभी पसंद करेंगे। नमस्कार।
 
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M bas ek baat bol raha hu or baar baar bol raha hu...jisko story nhi aachi lage wo koi or story padh le...

Ravi ko kya karna h kya nhi karna h uske liye main hu...
Ager app logo ki fantasy is story se puri nhi ho rahi h to khud ek story likh li jiye...

Main ye sabke liye keh raha hu A to Z...koi bhi ho..

Pls muje suggestion nhi chaiye...M story mo apne hisab se likhna chata hu..

App sabhi se request h..pls disturb na kare...bhut muskil se time milta h...
Bhai Ap Story Writer Ho Ap Sey Behter Koi Nahi Janta Story Ma Kab Kya Add Karma Aur Kab Kya Chang Karna h Apko Koi Pasey Nahi Dyta Likhne Kay Ye Tu Ap Jasey Writer Ki Bila Fida Mahnat Key Waja Sey Ye Site Chal Rahi Baki Ap Jasey Likh Rahy Hum Es Main Bhut Khush Hain.Ap Bhut Bariya Likh Rahy Ho Keep It Up.This Was Mind blowing Fabolous Update.Keep Writing :what2::what2::vhappy1::wink:
 
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M bas ek baat bol raha hu or baar baar bol raha hu...jisko story nhi aachi lage wo koi or story padh le...

Ravi ko kya karna h kya nhi karna h uske liye main hu...
Ager app logo ki fantasy is story se puri nhi ho rahi h to khud ek story likh li jiye...

Main ye sabke liye keh raha hu A to Z...koi bhi ho..

Pls muje suggestion nhi chaiye...M story mo apne hisab se likhna chata hu..

App sabhi se request h..pls disturb na kare...bhut muskil se time milta h...
bhai aapki kahani se dil se hum log jud gaye hai aur har ek update par bas apni pratikriya dete hai..lekin humne aapko kabhi nahi bola ki humare hisab se likhiye..aap apne hisab se hi likhiye..aur comments par jyada dhyaan mat dijiye..aap bahot achha likh rahe ho..aur hum bahot enjoy bhi kar rahe hai..!!
 

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Rekha store room ko aayi..or Anita ne palat ke dekha or boli..

A:: kyn hans rahi h kya ho gya...???( halki smile se)

R:: kuch nhi ..apka kuch saman reh gaya h sayad...( kutil muskan se)

A:: kya reh gaya khan?( herani se dekh ke)

R:: are us wale room pe bed ke niche...( muh or naak ke bich anguli rakh ke hanste hue)

A:: samji nhi bata na...( sochte hue)

R:: are apki panty or kya??( dhere se daant pis ke )

Anita ko bhut embarrasse feel hua...or boli..

A:: are haan re bhul gayi...( bhar ko jate hue)

R:: gili ho rahi h wo ase hi pehnoge kya??( hanste hue us pe).

A:: nayi panty h re ...badal lungi ghar ja ke..( bhar ko jate hue)

Or us room m gayi or apni panty bed ke niche se nikali..or pehan li..

Pehnte hi..jagh jagh gila lagne laga..or bhut aajib sa muh bna ke aayi or boli.....

A:: sab gili ho gayi h rekha. ( saree jhtake hue)

R:: accha... ( hanste hue gehu niklate hue)

A:: tuje bhut hansi aa rahi h..kyn( chidte hue)

R:: to kya rou???( smile karke).

A:: sun awqz aa rahi thi kya bhar..( dhere se bol ke gehu ka bora pakad ke)

R:: muje kya pata main koi kaan laga ke sunne rahi thi kya?? Haan aa to rahi thi apki..awaz or bed ki...( hanste hue)

A:: bata na majak mat kar. .( pareshan ho ke)

R:: are kya karna h ab rahi thi ki nhi...apko majja aaya na??( smile karje..usse maje lete hue)

A:: haan..aaya bas..bata to aa rahi thi ki nhi..( dhere se utsukta purvak)

R::hmm aa rahi thi...itna kyn ro rahi thi app..aisa laga jaise pareshani ho rahi thi apko. ( anjan bnate hue mazee lete hue)

A:: hogi nhi kya..dekha h tune usko..baap re..kaise chala gaya nader soch ke hi dimag khrab ho raha h...rukta bhi nhi h...sab dard kar diya..kamine ne...( muh bana ke)

R: ab usko kyn gali de rahe ho bulaya to apne hi tha..lekin dikhne m to bhut sidha h. .( kahde ho ke Anita ko dekh ke)

A:: haan hai sidha ek baar le kar dekh le pata chal jayega tuje meri bhut majak bna rahi h...ab agli baar karke dekh lena fir puchungi tujse( muh bna ke)

R:: nhi main thik hu...kon karega...apko dar nhi lagta didi kisi ko pata chal gaya to...baap re na na..meri to himaat nhi h...( dikhawa karte hue anita ke mann ki baat janne ki kosis karte hue)


A:: kuch nhi chalta kon sa jo roz karna h...are abhi umar h...to kar le rahi hu..kasam se rekha...ek baar karke dekhna..halat khrab kar deta h re....mere ander baache dani tak dard kar diya..( bhut dhere se bol ke)

R:: chup ho jao didi.....chii..kya bolte rehti ho..sharm bhi nhi aati apko..( smile karke hanste hue)

A::To maine jhut bol rahi hu kya sach m...aisa laga jaise koi rod daal di ho...jaan nikal di...( dhere se bol ke)

R:: to bulaya kyn dubara chain nhi mila ek baar main( man hi man Anita se jalan karte hue)

A:: are ase bhi dard thodi hota h tu to ase keh rahi h jaise tune kabhi kiya hi nhi hoga....kyn pawan ke papa karte h to tuje dard nhi hota?? To fir tu nhi karti??( chidd ke)

R::are app gussa kyn ho rahi ho..apki margi...main to puch rahi thi ase hi...( anita ke kandhe pe hath rakh ke smile se)

A:: chal chal zaldi gehu daal dete h muje to kahde hone m bhi ajeeb ho raha h..puri bhigi hui h..panty ( gehu ke bore ko pakd ke)

Or fir dono ne gehu dale..lekin Rekha ke dimag m wo awz hi gunj rahi thi chaddi to uski bhi gili thi...

or fir Anita apne ghar ko chale gayi..
Rekha niche aayi...or apne room m sone lagi..or sochne lagi..

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Sahi m ye Anita ke maje hain yaar...na hing lagi na fitkari or rang bhi chokha...

Kon kahega iske beti ki shadi ho gayi hogi..batao kitni aag h..mere ghar m bula ke bhi kar li...

Ek main hu...nhi nhi ab nhi karna h kuch khali iske papa is baar muje maar denge...

Lekin kuch bhi kaho..Ladka h bhut handsome...ufff...kya awaz nikal rahi thi Anita didi...usko bhi kya maza aaya hoga iske sath...main hoti tab pata chalata...ki kya hoti h aurat...( apni khubsurati pe ghaman D karte hue)

Nhi yar nhi karna h...kahli ek baar badnam ho gayi hu ab nhi...sach m akal nhi thi muje...kaas wo gupta uncle ne nhi kiya hota to main kabhi nhi karti..usne hi meri adadt bigadi...

Lekin wo suraj kamine ne sab jagh baat failayi..nhi to kisi ko pata thodi chalta...usse aache to wo dudh wale yadav kaka the...bichare chup chap karke chale gaye...

Uff kya karu....nhi nhi kuch nhi karna h...ab himmat nhi h...main karne wali hoti to guddu ke sath kar leti...nhi khali thik nhi h..iske papa ab maaf nhi karenge...khali ghar ujad jayega...sunny bhi bada ho raha h...

Are wo aisa nhi h us suraj ke jaise...dekha nhi kaise chup chap chala gaya bechara...aacha h ladka..dekh bhi nhi raha tha muje..ab wo Anita se to aachi hi lagti hungi na.main???..kha wo or kha main...( apne baal ki latto se khelte hue)


Ek baar phone karu??? Na na kya sochega wo bhi...

Are phone karne m kya h...baat karne se jo main thodi kuch kar le rahi hu....

Rekha ye sab soch hi rahi thi ki...uski saas ander se boli..

Saas:: Rekha o Rekha...sunny aane wala hoga khana bna leti....( ander se dard se karhane wali awaz m)

Rekha man m..

Ek ye hain chain nhi h...( irritate ho ke)

R:: haan maa ji bnati hu abhi to 1 hi baj raha h...apko bhuk lag rahi h kya??( apne room se bolte hue)

Saas:: nhi ..sunny ke liye bol rahi hu....gehu sukha diye ??Anita gayi??( ander se bolte hue)

R:: haan...gayi didi...( ander se bolte hue)

Rekha phone milane wali thi fir sochi ki saas uthi h to cordless le kar chat m chale gayi...gehu ko dekhne ke bhane...

Or himaat karke ravi ko phone milayi...

Ravi deepika ke room m tha or leta tha...mobile vibrated hua to dekha rekha ka number pehle to socha ki uthu ki nhi. .fir socha koi baat to nhi hui...or phone utha ke bola. ..

R: hello....

Re:: hello.....phuch gaye ghar??( smile karke dhere se)

R:: haan...kyn??.( bed m uth ke beth ke)

Re:: accha..kuch nhi ase hi phone ki...phuche ki nhi....( sharm se dhere se)

R: h.mm....

Re:: or ghar pe sab kha h.??...( dhere se niche ko dekh ke)

R: koi nhi sab yahi h..( jhut bolte hue)

Re: to kya sabke samne baat kar rahe ho??( tount jaisa maar ke)

R::nhi matlab main ander hu...( safi dete hue)

Re:: accha ..main bhi boor ho rahi thi..anita didi to chale gayi...( smile karke dhere se)

R::accha...( embarrassed feel karte hue)

Re:: ek baat bolu??( dhere se niche ko dekh ke)

R: haan...

Re:: main waise nhi keh rahi hu..or muje nhi bolna chaiye..lekin Anita didi ke chakkar m mat pado...tum to abhi chote ho...kahli aacha nhi lagta h na...( anita se jalan karte hue)

Ravi ko thoda aacha laga sochne laga ki keh to sahi rahi h...

R:: haan ...wo main jaan bujh ke nhi aaya...us din sayad apne hi bol diya tha main shilpa ke ghar m tha..( sikhayt bhari awaz)

Re: sorry wo muje nhi pata tha...really sorry...( request wali awa se)

R: hmmm..it s ok..( thoda aacha feel karke)

Re: thik h ab bulayegi to mat aana..khali kisi ne dekh liya to unko to akal h nhi...beti ki shadi hi gayi h..itna bada ladka h...nhi karna chaiye na..( anita se jalan karte hue)

R: hmmm..

Re:. Or batao...kitne m padhte ho..( smile karke)

R:: ji 10 main...lekin wo baar baar phone kar deti h...or blackmail karti h..haan galti to hui h..muje bhi shilpa ke ghar nhi aana chaiye tha..( apne dil ki baat bolte hue)

Re: choro wo to shilpa to chalo tumse bhut badi nhi h..Anita didi to ab tum samj rahe hoge na..main kya bol rahi hu??ye chizz blackmail karke thodi karni chaiye..or tum kyn dar rahe ho..bol dena main bhi bol dunga...apke ghar..dekho nhi daraoge.usko.to roz bulayegi..ajj mere ghar bula liya kal ko kahi or bulayegi...kher muje nhi bolna chaiye..lekin muje sahi nhi laga...( anita se jalan karte hue man ki bhadas nikalte hue)

R: hmm..wo to hai....haan main nhi aunga..thanks apka...( smile karie)

Re::are aisi baat nhi h...ab apni age bhi dekhni chaiye na unko...koi 30 32 saal ki aurat thodi h ...shadi ho gayi h beti ki...bolti to h 39 ki hi hu..muje to nhi lagta...( chidte hue anita se)

Ravi ke pass koi answer nhi tha...to baat kaat ke bola..

R:: mera number unke pass aa gaya.h baar baar phone karti h..mere exam bhi hain...shilpa ne bola tha khali mil lena ab wo to roz call karti h...( man ki bhdas nikalte hue)

Re:: wo hi to..kher choro...mana kar dena..main to ajj itna dar gayi thi na..ab dekho na meri saas bhi h..bimar h wo ase to...mere husband ** Nagar main hain..hum logo ne abhi bnaya h makan..pehle Anita didi ke wahi rehte the.. ab apna ghar to apna hi hota h na....( pyar se bolte hue)

R:: h....mm....wo to h...accha kis department m job karte h apke husband??( normal ho ke puchte hue)

Ravi ko rekha se baat karke aacha lag raha tha to thoda khul gaya..

Re: wo jal nigam main hai..senior clark hain..pehle hum log ** pur the..fir waha se transfer ho gaya..** Nagar main...( normal ho ke)

Ravi ka dimag thanka or bola...

R:: ** pur m kha rehte the??( sochte hue)

Rekha ab dar gayi ki ravi wha kisi ko janta to nhi h...to boli..

Re:. Kyn tum jante ho kya kisi ko..??( thoda sendeh karte hue)

R:. Nhi nhi actually mere mami ka ghar h waha..M gaya hu waha...( normal ho ke)

Re:: unke papa ka kya naam h??( thoda shocked ho ke)

R: gopal chaturvedi..( ek dam se bol pada..)

Re:: acchaa....to unki beti...kon si badi wali ye choti wali...4 bacche h unke..???( sochte hue)

R: haan haan ..deepika...wo meri mami hain( smile karke)

Re: ohhhhh...haan uski shadi bhi to yahi hui h...hum log aa gaye the..tab jab uski shadi hui....thik thik..haan muje pata to tha ..uski bhi shadi yahi hui h..tumhare mama bank main hain??( andaaza lagate hue)

R: h....mmmm....

Ab ravi dar gaya ki ye to deepika ke jaan pehchan ki nikli...to bola..

R: ek baat bolu..pls kabhi batyiega mat...ki main apke ghar aaya tha ye wo...pls( request karte hue)

Re: are nhi nhi..main kha aa rahi hu tumhare waha..or kyn bataungi...chinta mat karo..bas wo Anita didi se dur hi raho wo pagal h...sach m...kahli apni padhai karo ..uska kya h..beti ki shadi ho gayi h..beta bhi lag hi jayega...tum to 10 m hi ho..lekin lagte nhi ho 10 main
Bura mat maana...kharb hua tha kya 10 main( thoda jijhate hue)

R:: nhi nhi....wo ek class Bachchan m drop ho gaya tha..isliye..ab lagta hua bada lekin .*** ka hi hu ...( smile karke)

Ye sab baat ho hi rahi thi ki rekha ne bhi apni umar bata di..

Re:: mera beta bhi 5 th main h...muje bhi 32va laga h...( style se bolte hue)

R: oh.........( bas itna hi bol paya..)

Re: ok chalo thik h..accha to deepika mami hui tumhari...chalo sahi h...( thoda hanste hue)

Ravi samj nhi paya ki usne ase kyn bola..or puchne ki himmat bhi nhi thi..lekin jaise usne bola..hans ke ki deepika hui fir tumhari mami..to wo ravi ajeeb laga...

R: thik h .fir baat karta hu...or wo aunty bolegi to pls phone mat kariye ga...( request karte hue)

Re: ok ok...or aacha main karu to...( zor se hans ke baal ko sanwarte hue chat m ghumte hue)

Ravi kuch bol nhi paya...

To rekha samj gayi..or boli..

Re: chalo thik h...phone rakhti hu. Ye mobile m bhut bill aata h iske paa kha denge muje...bill dekh ke.sunny bhi aane wala hoga ..khana bnaa h..ok fir baat karti hu sham ko....( smile se).

Or fir phone cut gaya...

Ravi ko thoda aacha laga ki chalo us Anita se picha chutega..lekin kya sach m...??

Or fir padhne laga...

To be continued..
nice update..!!
rekha ne firse anita ko chheda ravi ko lekar aur rekha ko anita se jalan bhi ho rahi hai..rekha khud ke bare me bhi soch rahi hai ki kaise gupta ne uska zabardasti rape kiya aur fir uss cable wale ladke suraj ne pure gaon me baat failayi..rekha ka pati pawan achha nikla nahi toh rekha ko kab ka divorce de deta..lekin rekha ko ravi achha lag raha hai..!! rekha ne ravi se call pe bhi baat ki aur usse anita se dur rehne ki bhi hidaya de di..lekin ab rekha khud ravi ke close ja rahi hai aur ab deepika ke bare me jankar hansi bhi nikal gayi uski..kya ravi rekha se sab sach jan payega aur rekha usko sach batayegi..!!
 
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