Adultery Meri fantasy ( Adultery/Romance)

[Shivam Singh chawda]

Gjb ka update....

 

[Ajay chauhan]

Gazam hoooootttttt update tha bro bus is baar gif kam the or jyada a che bhi nahi the par maza bahut aaya bro


I hope ek baar bas ek baar only one time beepa or sunita open mainded ho kar chudwaye only one time

 

[Sushilnkt]

Abhi puri raat padi hai..

 

[Shan shah]

Shandar varnan

 

[Avkash]

Bhut sandar

 

[Avkash]

Bhai shilpa ko thoda jaldi nhi ho gya sab. Thoda phone sex kra hi deta .chalo jo bhi ho per jo log shochte hai use bhut uper tum sochte ho. Ravi babu

 

[Sunilgupta]

Superb

 

[Rider prem]

flymovers bhai ise kehte hai gaand faad...nahi nahi chut faad sex....maza hi aa gaya...wese aapke likhe sex scenes seedhe hormones mai aag laga dete hai...wese shilpa ki chut ke feete to kat gaye ab thoda dusre paatron par bhi Parkash daale unse dur rehne ka bhi dil nahi karta hai khaskar Deepa aur anju ka batao ki wo kesi hai.... waiting to next explode...

 

[rajni615]

Ravi bed pe aaya...

Or shilpa ke bagal m let gaya...or usse bola..

R:: mazAaa aayyaa haann?? Aachha laagg tumheee..( shilpa ko baho m bhar ke)

Shilpa kuch na boli..bas ravi ke sine pe sir chupane lagi....

Or bolti bhi kya ki. .wo itna mazza aaya ki 2baar pani chor di abhi tak ..

R: daal du ...yaha...( chut sehlatw hue)
Light jali thi wo ti sharm se mar rahi thi...kuch na boli ..bas ravi ko tight se pakdte rahi..
Shilpa karwat le kar soyi thi..or ravi kohani ke bal uske or to ravi ko shilpa ke bade bahri nitamb dikhe...ravi ka Iman door gaya...or shilpa ko sidha kiya ...
Or uske samne hi cold cream nikli..or Al e supade pe malne laga...

Shilpa ki saans tezi se chalne lagi..wo mota supada dekh ke halat kharb hone lagi...
Bechari ne bol to diya tha..aurat bna do muje..lekin ab kya jab us aurat ko banne ki prakriya m jo dard hoga or thoda khun bhi niklega...

Shilpa ki ek dost ne usko bataya tha jo shilpa ko yaad aane laga..

Shilpa kya batu...jaan nikal gayi thi.sach m....Pata nhi tha aisabhi hota h..us time to lag ajj last din h mera..

Aisa laga jaise lakdi tuns di kisi ne ander..

Tere jija ji itne batmeez ruke nhi ...pura daal ke bol rahe the...

Dard hua kya...man to kiya thappd mar du...

S:: fir kya hua...( aankh badi karke)

Dost:: kuch nhi ...bas thodi der muje kiss karte rahe..thodi der m dard kam Hua to tab kiya...thodi der baad to main hi besharm ho gayi...
Subh dekh bed sheat or meri usme khun laga tha...

Fir to wo mazza aayya kya batu...raat bhar m 3 baar kiya tere jija ji ne..bol rahe the bhut tight h...chii sharm bhi nhi aati in ladko ko...


Shilpa ko wo baat yaad aayi to ravi se dhere se boli...

S:. Sunoooo...risshaabbbb...dard...hogaa naa.....plsss....firrr karr leenaa naa...( ravi ke or dekh ke request karte hue)

R:: nhi hoga...aram se karunga..nhi hoga....
Smajhate hue boobs dbate hue)

S:: nhi maine pehle nhi kiya h....tumne kiya h???( bechara sa muh bna ke)

R:: nhi movie m dekha h...( jhut bolte huw)

S: pakka naa..nikla doge naaa..( ravi ka hath pakdte hue)

R:: viswas kro nhi hone dunga dard...( gaal m kiss karte hue)

S:: light band kar do na...( skirt niche karte hue)

R:: kyn rehne do na...( shilpa ke upper aate hue)

S:: nhi pls .kar do na..night bulb on kar do....( dhere se ravi ko dekh ke pyar se)

Ravi utha or light band kar di...

Or bed m aa gaya...

Red colour ka night bulb ja rah tha room m...

Shilpa ne hath badha ke torch band karne lagi to ravi usko apni bahon m le kar bola...

R:: ye mat band karo pls ..tumko dekhnna h...( hath pakdte hue)

S:: kynnnn.....light jali to h...( dhere se kasmate hue)

R:: nhi ye bhi jalne do....( shilpa ke urozz maslte hue)

Shila kuch nhi keh payi...ravi janta tha shilpa ka pehl baar h..to usko or garam karna zaroori h..

To usne shilpa ki skirt ko fir se uthya..or yoni m hath fera diya...

Shilpa ki body m ek alag si sansnahta daud gyai...

Or wo machlne lgi..

Ravi uske gale or gaal pe kiss karne laga...Shilpa bhi ab thoda thoda mood m aane lagi...or gardan hila ke ravi ke honth pe apne gale ko ragdne lagi...

Ravi ne jaise hi shilpane yoni ke ched m anguli daali..Shilpa chihuk gayi...or dard bhati awaz m boli..

S:: aaannnhhh risshabbbb...aaannnn...nhhhiii...plss angulliii maat daallooo naa...( hath pakdte hue dard bari aawaz m aankh band kiye hue...)

Ravi ne uske yoni se hath hataya..or uska hath pe apna ling pakda diya ...jaise keh raha ho..iski sahi jagh ye h...

Shilpa ka hath jaise hi uske supade pe pada..cold cream hath m lag lagi....

Usnw ravi ke ling ko muthiyana chalu kar diya...or ravi ne apna hath uski pith pe le gaya or uski bra ka huq khol diya......

Or shilpa ko halaka sa sidha kiya or uske nipple chusne laga...

Shilpa mast m pagala ho gayi....or ravi ka ling hilate hhue dhere de boli...


S:: risshaabbbb aaannnhhhh aaraam sew...aaanhhhh....( left hath se ravi ka mota ling or right hath se uske bal khinche hue)

Bhar thand thi lekin dono bhut garam the...

Ravi ne fir se uski yoni ko bhincha...or anghuthe se bhagnasa m hamle karne chalu kar diye. ..
Shilpa ki yoni m fir se barsat chali hk gyai...

Rravines nipple ko zor se khinch to ..cchhppp ki aawaz hui...or shilpa ka bhi muh khula reh gaya..or usne ravi ke supade ke ched m nakun laga diya..

Ravi ne bhi jawab hamle m shilpa ki..yoni m anguli ander sarka di..

Shilpa dard se bilbila gayi...

Or ling chor ke ravi ka hath pakdne lagi..

Or ravi se boli..

Aaannnhhhh maarr gaayiii..ssiii naa naaa..rishabbb aaahh anguli...mat daalo na.....
Ravi ke uske honth m zordar chumban liya or fir bola. .

R:: kya dalu fir. ( chut ke fank sehlate hue)

Shilpa ke pass koijawab nhi tha..

Ravi fir se yoni ki lakir ko jor se daba ke bola...

R:: batao naa kyaa daaluuu yaaahaa....( shilpa ke kaan pe kiss karte hue)

S: nnnhhhhiii paattt aaannnhhh siiii risshaabbb plsss..aannnnhhj plsss ..aannnhhhh...( gardan upper karke dhanush ke akar m aate hue)

R:: haaannn..booolllooo naa kyyaaa daaluu yaahh issmeee...( bhagnasa ko anguthe se kuredte hue or middle finger ko yoni ki lair m sehlate hue)

S:: riiissaaaaabbb....plllllsss aaannnhh maarrr jaaauinnggggiii yaarrr pllsssss.....( machlte hue)

R:: bol...naa merriii jaann. Kyaa daluu teriiii chhuttt mmmmmmmm....( yoni ko or zor se sehlate hue)


Shilpa bol nhi payi...or ravi ke muh se chut shabd sun ke uttejan m..ravi ko aapne uuperr khichne laagiii daaanttt bhiincchhh keee...ravi ki kamar m nakun lagte hue...

R:: chhodddddd duuu tuujeeee......daalll duuu puaarra haannn haannn.haan....jheel. lewggiiii merraaaaa ....( bhagnasa ko maslte hue shilpa ke face ko dekh ke)
Ravi ki in baato ne raho sahi kasar bhi nikal di....

Or shilpa to asti m pagal ho gayi .ravi ke muh se chodna shabd sun ke...
Shilpa ki aankh upper chad gayi..muh khula reh gyaaa..or gardan zor se haaannn mainn sir hilaaate hue boli....


S::: mummmmyyyyyy aaannnnnhhhhhhj.ssiiii haannnnnn haannnn baasssss......siiiiii...aaannnhh yaaahhhiii ssunnaaa thaan naa....haaannn kar doooo mujeee bassss.....ssiii pllssss.risshabbbb....pllsss......( ravi ko apne upper khinchte hue)

Ravi se bhi raha nhi gaya shilpa ki chut pani se bahri thi...

Ravi niche koo aaya or shilpa ke khule upper ko uthaye...or sidha apne honth uski bur pe laga diyee..
Or ek gehra chumban uske fanko pe liya...

Shilpa ne kamar upper karke ravi ke muh ko daba diya..

Ravi ne muh Hathaya to shilpa bed m giri dhadm se..

Or ravi ne torch li...or cold cream dhudhne laga..or cream ko apne supade pe lagya..
Or shilpa ke dino per apne kandhe pe rakhe...

Or ling ko uski chut m ragda to shilpa se madak siskiyan lete hue...


Bed sheat ko zor se bhinch liya...

Ravi ne torch tirchi rakh di..jisse shilp ka muh halka sa dikh sake..

Or shilpa ki chut m sir niche karke kafi sara thuk lagaya..

Or ling ko bur pe laga ke let gaya shilpa ke upper.....or jaise hi kamar ko dabaya .

Shilpa bil bola gyai...hath per marne lagi...
Ravi ne ling bhR khinch liya....

S:: naaa..naa.rishaabbb naaa.nhiiii..K
( darte hue chut ko hath se dhakte hue)

Ravi ne shilpa ke muh ko diwar ko kiya or usko samjhte hue piche se ling yoni pe ragdne laga....

Shilpa boli..

S:. Risshabbb...maarr jaaungiii..bhutt motta h.....maatt daalnnaa pllsss .( darte hue)

R:: kuch nhi hog baasss thod saa...
( chut ke ched m supade ko ragdte hue )


Pr shilpa ke pet m hath rakh ke piche ko kiya or halka sa apno kamar aage ko theli...to..ling thuk or cold cream l
Ke lage hone se..puukkkk karke...supada yoni ke challe m ja fasa..


Shilpa bilbila gayi...chatpatne lagi...
Ravi waise hi ruke raha...supada pura gussa hua tha...or supade nw jhelli faad di thi...


Ravi ki ling ki khal upper chad gayi thi..

Tight chut kya hoti h aaj pata chala...

Bhale hi geeta ke sath kiya tha..lekin shilpa ase letw thi ki chut or bhi tight ho gayi thi..

Shilpa ke dard se aansu nikl gaye...

Ravi ne hath aage badh ke uske uroozo ko dabaya...Shilpa rote huw boli....
S:: bhuttt darrrddd hooo raahha hhh niiklll dooo pllssss..maarr jauu ggiiiiii.....sacchh m...aaaannhhh aaannnhhh..mummmyyyyy...aaannnnnhhh( rote huw dhere se)

Ravi ne ling bhar khinch liya...

Shilpa ki jaan m jaan aayi or chut pakad ke beth gayi. ...ravi ne torch se dekha chut se halka sa khun tapk raha tha....Shilpa ne jaise hi kun dekha head dar gayi..

Ravi shilpa ko samjhate hue letne laga...or uske upper chadnw laga...to shilpa lete hue boli..

S:. Plssss...rishaabbb aaabb nhiii plsssss.....( ravi ko dur karte hue)

R: kuch nhi hoga jo hona tha ho gaya...bas ab karne do...dekho main nikla diya na...bas ek baar dalne do...( shilp ke upper lete hue

S:: nnnnhhhiii pllss.anhhi. hooo payeegaa.maiinn roo jauunngiiii...bhuuttt darrdd huaa tha....sach.m ....( darte hue anshu pochte hue)
Ravi shilpa ke upper let gaya...or shilpa ke anshu...apne jeeb se. Chatte hue bola..

R:: kucchh nhhi hogaaa.ekk baar ghus jaywga...fir aachha lageggaa....lag raha h na aachaaa...ase...( ling ko chut m ragdte hue)

S:: haaannnnn..aaannhhh aahhnn. ..plssss aandderr maatt daalna...plsss.asseee hi karteee rahooo .(( rone wali aawaz m masti se)

R:. Bas thoda sa..bass thoda sa..meri jaan...gaal chumte hue chut m ragdne laga...

Shilpa fir de masti m aa gyai. ..or uski aankh band hone lagi...

Ravi ne uskw honth muh m bhare or ling ko ched m lagaya...
Or kamar dBa di..

Ling sarsarta hua aadhe zaida chut ke faank failate hue...ander ghus gaya..

Shilpa ki jaan nikla gayi..pet patkne lagi chatpatne lagi....
Lekin ravi ne honth nhi chore..or uskw face ko pakde hue honth chusta raha..

Shilpa ke aansu nikal gaye...or rote raghii..body ko hila hila ke...jahtke se...

Ravi chusta raha...or dhere se uske boobs ko hath m le kar maslnw laga...

Shilpa ko thoda aram mila ravi aadha ling aandee daale rakha raha...or shilpa ko shant karne laga...

Thodi der baad jab shilpa ka rona band hua to..ravi ne dherr se honth chore or bola..

R:: aaabb. Thhikkk h..haann..( face se baal hattte hue)

S:. Haaaannnnn...( rone wali awaz m)

R:: dard hua ab...( gaal m kiss karte hue)

S::: nnhhiiii...( rone wali aawaz m jaise koi ro ke bolta h)

R:: karu or. .( baal sehlate hue)

S:: naa naannanA..plssss..( kamr pakdte hue)

R:: nhi kar raha hu..bas... nipple chus lu tumhare...( boobs dabte hue)


S: haaannnnnnnn...( bhare hue gale se)

Ravi ne muh niche kiya or shilpa ke nipple chusne laga....

Shilpa ko bhut aacha lagne laga...ravi zor se chusne laga.....
S
Ab shilpa bhi...ssiisi ssiii karne lagi or ravi ke baal sehlane lagi...

Yoni m geela pan suru ho gaya tha....
Ravi bethasa uskw nipple baar baari chusta ko khinchta raha....

Shilpa kii aankh bnad ho nw lagi..or bhut mazza aane lagaa..


Or shilpa ki kamar khud bakhud hilne lagi..

Ravi samj gaya lekin khud nhi kiya...wo shilpa ko garam kar dena chata tha....
Or shilpa ke nipple chor ke..
Boobs dabte hue..uske gale m kaan ke piche chumtw hue jeeb se chatne laga..

Shilpa mano dusr du iya m thi...

Or kamar ko dhere dhere hilane lagi...
Ravi uskw gaal m chumban le kar bola....
R:: maarr luuu teri chhutttt...( uttejana ml

Shilpa kuch na boli..

Bas ..uffff uffff ifff karne lagi..ravi ki kamr ko daba ke..

R:: bata na mar lu. Chuttttt....bata na shilpa meri jaan....( gaal chumtw hue)

Shilpa ki to yoni ne ravi ke muh se shilpa sun ke pani chorna suru kar diya..

Or shilpa boli...

S: haaaaaaaqnnnn... ssiiiiii aannnnhhhhhj asssiiii risshaabbb aaannnhhhh ssaiii dherreeee seeaannhhhh..( machlte hue upper uthte hue)

Ravi ne usko daba diya or nipple muh m liye or bhut dheree thoda thoda ling hilane laga..

Shilpa ne dard or masti se aankh band kar di...or honth kaate hue ravi ke sir ko apne boobs m dabte hue siskiyan lene lagi.....

S: ssiiss ssisisisi aannnhhh ssiiiiii ufff uuff aannnnnnnn aaannnn anan. Ssiiiiii..dhereeee dhereeeee aannn....( masti m)

Ravi ne niplle chore e or lips pr gyaa..or kiss karte hue ab thoda ling ko bhar khinch ke dalne laga..

Yoni ne ling ko jakad kw rakha tha...ling halka sa bhi ander bhar hota to fank ling pe kisis grib ke jaise chade dikhne lage...

Ravi ko bhut mazA aa rha tha..kynki ling m garam Paani lag raha tha...jisse .

Pach pach pach ki halki aawaz aane lagi thi...

Ravi kabhi gaal chumta to kabhi..gale ko to kabhi shoulder ko..

Wahi shilpa aankh band kiye..ravi ko shoulder se pakde thi...

Shilpa ab dhere dhere niche se sahyog dene lagi..yoni ne ling kon swikar kar liya tha...or shilpa charm aanad pe thi...bas metha metha dard tha...ravi bhut dhere kamar hila raha tha..sans rok k...chut garmi us pe havy hone lagi thi...ravi sans roke hue kaise apne app ko roka tha....

Ravi jhad na jaaye isliye...dips wali postion m leta hua bhut dhere kamar gila raha tha...

Ling bas 1 inch aage piche ho raha tha...

Shilpa ab ravi ko apne upper khichne lagi...to ravi uske face ko dekh ke bola...

R:. Maajja aa raha h....(saans rok ke

S:: sssiisis haaiiiii....siiii haaannn bhuuttt aannhhhh.ssiiii...rishab...aaannnhhh...siiii meereeee uppperrr aaaopp naaa...plssss( bahe khol ke pyar se ravi ko dekhte hue)

R:: ek baar dalne do pura....bhut maan karr raha h .bhut tighhttt hhh....( kamar hilate huw apne ko control karte hue)

Sshilpa boli to kuch nhi..bas ravi ko apne upper khinch ke uskw honth ko apne honth se mila ke per ghutne se mod ke upper ko kar li..

Ravi josh se bhar gaya..or kamar ko zor se dabne laga..

Shilpa ravi ko maazza dena chati thi..to..aaankh zor se band karke..ravi ke baju zor se pakde hue dard ko jhelna lagi..

Lekin chut it i gili thi ki ling kisi chappu ke jaise jut m gote lagne laga .

Ravi ling ko ander dalne laga....Shilpa ne kiss todi...or aankh zor se band karje kabhi honth aapse m zor ke to kabhi siskiyan lete huw...ravi ke gaale m haath daal ke ..usse chudne lagi..per ki anguliyan mod ke..har jahtke se


Chut se pach pach ki awaz aane lagi...shaan se jitna ho sake sehan karnw lagi....

Ravi utne tez nhi maar raha tha na hi pura daal raha tha....
Ravi hafne laga...sahi m shilpa ki chut bhut tight thi...or shilpa ko bhi mazza aane laga...

Ravi ruka or shilpa ke per apne shoulder pe liye to shilpa samj gayi. Or dar se naa naan naana main sir hilane lagi..

Lekin ravi ab nhi maana..or shilpa ke upper let gaya or ling ko fir se chut m laga le bola....

R:: ab nhi hoga sehan...muje karna h ab....( chut m ragdte hue)

S: naan nanana nNan plssss....rishab...nhhii..( darte hue)

R:: kuch nhi hoga..bas ab karne dooo...( ling ko ander dalte hue)

Shilpa ne aaaaannnnhhhhhh ki or ravi ko dard bahre face se dekhi...ravi dips wali position m shilpa ko dekh ke ab thoda tezi se usko chodne laga..


Shilpa ki aankhe dard or masti se upper ho gayi...

Sir idhar udhar marne lagi..



Tezi se sans lete hue madak siskiya or dard bhari siskiya lene lagi...

Ravi ka man kiya ki pura daal ke chod de uski chut....

Shilpa sir upper karke dard bahre e face se chut m ling ander bahar hote dekhne lagi..or fir sir bed m de mari..or kabi takiya to kabhi bed sheat pakdne lagi..to kabhi rahi ki baju...


Shilpa ko mazza bhit aa raha tha....

Rravior shilpa dono ek dusre ki aankh m dekh rahe the or ravi lagatar jahtke marne laga...

Sshilpa aanhh aaanhh aannhhh aanhhh karje ravi ko dekh ke dard bahre face se chudne lagi...



Shilpa ko dekh ke ravi or bhi uttejit hone laga...

Or usne shilpa ke per dard hone lage..or wo per faila ke let gayai...to ravi uske upper let gaya...


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Or tezi se ling ko ander bhR karne laga...uske honth chuste hue..

Shilpa ki karhane ki awaz pure room m gunj rahi thi..or ravi ke tez saanso ki....or thap thap thap ki...

Shilpa ki chut m chot tk lag rahi thi..lekin chot ka dard us time kaha hota h...wo to baad m pata chlata h kitna nuksaan hua h..

Ravi ab pura ling ander dalne laga lekin baache dani se pehle hi khinch leta...

Per failane se chut m thodi jagh or ban gayi thi...ab to ling barbar ander bahar ho raha tha..

Shilpa baar baar thodi der m pani chor deti...

Pani chut or ling ke bich se jagh bna ke bed shet m girne laga...



Ravi ne shilpa ke honth m kiss karte hue tezi se usko chodne laga...


Shilpa uunnn. Unnn unnn unnn unnnn.kRte hue...chudne lagi...

Ravi ne Tabhi honth chuste hue jaise hi ling pura ander dala ling shilpa ke garbh se ja takraya...to shilpa..ne zor se patkane lagi...


Dard or masti se pagala ho gayi...ravi ne fir se dhakke lagne chalu kiye kiss thodi to shilpa karhate hue boli...

S:: aaannnhhh..ssiii riiiidsmssssbbb..aaannnhhh siii cchhorrr dddoo naaaa..aananhhhb siiiii..maa ....( dard bahre face se ravi ko dekhte huw)

Ravi ne usko dekha or pura ling ander thele diya...or baachedani ke muh pe laga to shilpa bilbila ke boli..


S:: mmmaaaaa...mamamamma mamamam...aaannnhhhhh nhhhiiiii rissshaabb plsssss....maarrr gaayiiii aaannaannahhhh anannnhh..( hanfte hue)

Ravi ab bar baar ase hi karta pehle ling thoda thoda ander bhar karta to fir ek baar m pura daal deta...
To shilpa ...dard bahri aawaz m ye hi boltiii..

S:: maaaaa...maarrr gaayyiiii..aananahh rissshabbbb aannhhhhhh plsssss pllsssss...nnhhii aannhhh ssiiiii haaiiiii maaa....

Ravi chodte hue bola....

R: mazA nnhhi. Aaa rhaaa haan....haann...( dhakke karte hue pure ander tak ab...)
S:: marr jaau gggiiii. Saacchh mmm....aaandeerr laaggg raahhh hhh yaar...saacchh .m aananhhh risshabb plsss plsss plssss..yaar...( dard bhare face se)

R:: pehle baata aa raha h ki nhhiii...( dhake marte hue baache dani pe)



S:. Haana haan bassss...aabb too chhorrr dooo naa.....aanhhhhghhj meraa 3...baarrr hhooo gyaaa yaarrr aannnhh risshabbb plsss...dhere dheree aananhhh maaaa maarr gayyyiiiiiii aannnnn......


Ravi ne usko dekha or uskw honth chus liye...or kiss tod ke bola.....

R:. Baacchee daaniii mm laaggv raahha hh naa...haaan haan. Haannn.haannnn.( zor se chodte huw)

Shilpa ki rone ki awaz aane lagi...
Bed m shilpa per falaiye hue ravi ko pakde hue dard bahri aawaz nikal h...
Pure room m thapp taahahp thappp thapp tahpppp..or sanoso ki awazzzzz or shilpa ki...
Aaanhhh anaanhh aannhhhh hhoooo tttooo ggyaaaa yaarrr cchooorr ddoo naaa....marr,jaaunnggiiii..saacchmmm.aaannnhhh aasmaan. Ssiii haaiiii sssiii risshaaabbb aannanhhh ssii ssiisi risshabbbb myyy lovvveee aaannhh siii aasiii aaahh ssiii ii aammm commmiinnggggg aaannhhh aannhhhh..( kamar upper karte hue pani niklte hue)


Shilpa ki madak awaz ne ravi ko bhi pagal kar diya...or wo laga thokne niche tak...
.or shilpa ke urooz maslte hue..shilpa ke honth kaat diye .or pura jad tak daal diyaaa.

Or bhar di shilpa ki bur. ...apne maal se...



Shilpa ki aankh upper ko chad gayi...ravi ka maal baache dani ko bharne laga...

Nicee

 

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Mind blowing Marvelous
मग़र अभी तो पूरी रात बाकी है
मेरे चाहने से कुछ नही होगा और होगा वो ही जो ईश्वर (लेखक) की मर्जी होगी क्योंकि इस रचना के सारे पात्र तो ईश्वर की कटपुतलियां है फिर भी शिल्पा के पात्र को कुछ और open करो रवि और शिल्पा के बीच conversation बढ़ाये ये मेरी इल्तजा है