Neelu lala
New Member
- 29
- 26
- 13
Flymovers777 Bhai pyaar se bharpoor update. Aise updates dil ko sukh pahunchate hain aur mujhe bahot accha laga ye dekhke ki Ravi aaj Deepika pe jhapatta nahi maara. Aasha hai ki Ravi dheere dheere thoda mature bane aur Deepika Ravi ka prem isi tarah aviral chalta rahe.Deepika ko bahut sukun mil Raha tha aaj...wahi Ravi ke pass ab koi shabd nahi Bache the...
Deepika ne Apna past Ravi ke samne khol ke rakh diya tha..Ravi ke man main Deepika ke Liye pyar or bhi badh gaya...
Or usne man hi man aaj ye pratigya kar li ki..ab shadi Hogi to Deepika se hi..nahi to nahi....
Ravi let gaya bed main...wahi Deepika uske room m Aayi.. Apne dupatte se muh pochte hue..or Ravi ko Pyar se dheme awaz m boli ..
D:: Suno ...( Ravi ko dekh ke)
Ravi Deepika ki awaz sun ke palat gaya.. Deepika usko dekh ke apni jheel jaise aankhon se dekhte hue boli ..
D:: nasta kar lo...Khana banne main der lagegi....( Thoda Pyar se request karte hue)
Ravi bed m beth gaya..Kuch bola nahi...
Ravi ko Thoda pareshan dekha to Deepika uske pass Aayi or boli..
D:: Kya hua?? Nasta to kar lo ...mujse gussa ho na ..mat baat Karna .lekin Khana to kha lo yaar ..( dukhi ho ke Ravi se Thoda sa dur khade ho ke Apne dupatte ko anguliyon main fasa ke).
Ravi ne Deepika ko muskura ke dekha .or uske dono hath pakad Liye....
Or usko dhere se Apne paas khinch ke bola ..
R:: nahi hu gussa....bas man nahi kar Raha....( Muskura ke)
Deepika ne palat ke door ko dekha..or boli ..
D:: muje Jana hai....Mami akele kaam kar Rahi Hogi...( Bhari sansoo se)
Ravi Kuch bola nahi...bas Apne sir ko Deepika ke pet m rakha or uske kamar m dono hath daal ke bas chain se aankh band kiye hue bas chup Raha..
Deepika ka Dil Ravi ke Liye pyar se bhar gaya...
Usne Apne hath Ravi ke baalon pe rakh diye...or Thoda jhuk ke Ravi ke sir ko chum li...
Ravi ne Deepika ko tight se pakad liya ...or gehri saans lete hue bas us pal ko jeene laga...
Tabhi Deepika bhut dhere se usse boli ...
D:: main jau ab???( Pyar bhari awaz m)
Ravi ne Deepika ko sir upper Karke ke dekha or muskuraya or fir se Deepika ko waise hi pakad ke Bethe Raha...
D:: choro na gate khula hai....koi Aa jayega....( Dabhi awaz m request karte hue)
Ravi ne uski kamar pe Thoda sa zor diya or Deepika Ravi ke bagal m beth gayi ...
Deepika ke bethte hi Ravi ne apna sir uske kandhe pe rakh diya... Deepika uske gaal main chingoti kaat ke Pyar se boli ..
D:. Tabhi to kehti hu bacche ho ....it e dino tak gussa tha ..or ab Pyar...haan?? Fir 2 din baad fir se muh fula Lena kyn??( Muskura ke Ravi ke gaal m chingoti kaat ke)
Ravi abhi bhi Kuch nahi bola .bas Deepika ke pet or kamar ma hath daal ke usko pakde Raha...
D:: Chalo choro kaam h Babu ji ,tumhara to Kya hai ..muje market bhi Jana hai..Mami ke sath....( Normal ho ke)
Lekin Ravi ne apni pakad or tight kar li..or Deepika ko dekh ke bade shant bhav se muskura ke bola...
R:: main nahi chor sakta apko ..( muskura ke Pyar se)
D:. Accha or jab gusse main Ulta sulta bolte ho tab nahi aata Dyan Kya bol Raha hu...haan??jab Dante ho muje be Matlab ke ..( Ravi ko dekh ke hanste hue)
R: to Pyar bhi to Tum se hi karta hu na...muje hamesa tumhare sath rehna hai...hamesa...or koi nhi chaiye muje...Sach main..( bolte hue Sharma ke Deepika ke gale lagte hue)
D: mere or ko dekh ke bolo to...Badi Sharm Aa Rahi h haan???( Ravi ko cherte hue)
R:: I love you so much...bhut Pyar karta hu tumse ...( Serious ho ke Deepika ko dekh ke)
Ravi ke aise bolne se ab Deepika Thoda sa Sharma gayi..or baat kaat ke boli ..
D:: ab Pyar ho gaya ho to jau main?? ( Muskura ke)
R::na Bethe raho yahi....aise hi...( Deepika ke shoulder m sir rakh ke)
D:: hmmm..door khula hai...or Bethe raho...choro main ja Rahi hu....( Uthate hue muh bana ke)
Ravi ne Deepika ko niche khincha or bed m leta diya...
Deepika hadbada ke uthne lagi to Ravi ne usko pakad liya ...
Ravi Deepika ko dekhne laga...to Deepika ne Nazar fer li...or Ravi ki swetar ko dekhne lagi..Sharma ke...
Deepika ne dono Laal chudiyan se bhare hath se Ravi ki baju pakdi thi... majbooti se .
Deepika shant ho gayi...Ravi bas Deepika ko dekhte Raha bahut der tak...
Ravi Deepika ko gaur se dekhte Raha bahut der tak...
Kabhi uski Kali Kali ankhon ko dekhta...Jo niche ko Ravi ki swetar ko dekh Rahi thi...to kabhi uske Ras se bahre hue honthon ko dekhta..jinko ko pehle bhi chus Chuka tha..jee bhar ke .or chuste hue kaat bhi Chuka tha...
Ravi Deepika ke honth or gehuwa colour ke gaal bahut der tak dekhta Raha..to kabhi uski Kali Kali eyebrows ko dekhta ..Jo bhut aache se beauty parlour main banwayi hui thi....
Dono ke bich khamoshi thi... Deepika bhaut Sharma Rahi thi...Ravi ke aise dekhne se ..
To mahol ko halka Karne ko boli...
D:: choro na door khula hai...der ho Rahi h muje Bazar bhi Jana hai...( Sir upper Karke door ko dekhte hue)
Deepika ke aise Karne se ..or hathon se Ravi ko upper se halka sa push Karne se Deepika ki Laal chudiyan baj uthi....
Khan .....khannnn.....
Ravi bas Deepika ko dekhte rha...or dhere dhere uske upper letne laga...
Deepika Ravi ke chest m hath rakh ke Sharm se dusre side dekh ke baat ko ghumate hue boli...
D:: nasta kar lo na...( Bhut dheme awaz m)
Ravi Kuch nahi bola..bas Deepika ke pero ke bich jagh banane laga...
Ravi ka ling m pryapat tanav Aa Chuka tha .jisko Kahi na Kahi Deepika ne bhi mehsus kar liya tha apni janghon pe ..
Ravi ko Deepika ki Badi se urozzo ki gahti dikhane lagi...
To Deepika ki saans Tham gayi ..Sharm ke mare Kuch bol nahi payi ...or Ravi ke chest m hath rakh ke fir se kampati hui awaz m boli...
D:: naahhhiii....plsssss.......chhorrrr dddooo naaaa......derrrr Hooo raaahhiii haaiiiiii....plsssss...( Machalte hue Nazar dusre taraf karte hue)
Ravi ne Deepika ke us hath ko Kalai se pakda Jo usne chest pe rakha tha...or upper takiye ke or Le gaya...or Deepika ke pero ke bich jagh bna ke let gaya...
Ravi ka muh thik Deepika ke face ke upper tha...or Deepika ke naram bade urooz Ravi ki chati se dabe hue the...
Ravi uski aankhon or or honth ko dekhne laga...
Deepika Sharm se mar gayi....or Nazar dusre taraf kar li...bas Apne kalai ko ravi ke majboot hathon se churane lagi....halke se ..
Deepika koi bahut takat nahi laga Rahi thi..bas Sharm se hath ko ghuma Rahi thi...
Ravi bas usko dekhta Raha machalte hue....
To Deepika Ravi ko dekh ke boli...Sharm se....bina Nazar milaye..
D:: chor do na...der ho Rahi h ...Mami Aa jayegi....choro na...,( Rone Wala muh bna ke request karte hue)
Ravi bilkul shant tha...lekin Ander se bahut uttejit tha...sayad itna ki Deepika ke upper lete hue hi wo pighal jaye...
Ravi aaj tak ye nahi samjh paya tha ki kyn wo Deepika ke aage bebas ho jata h..or aise hi uska virya niklane ko ho jata h bina Kuch kare...
Kya Deepika Sach main it I khoobsurat hai ki Ravi ka taap badha deti hai??
Deepika ki maang m sindur ,gale main mangalsutra,naak main nose ring...kaan main earrings...uske yovan ko or bhi badha dete the..
Abhi Deepika ko dekhte hue Ravi ko Rehman Sahab ka wo hi gana yaad aane laga..Jo wo Kuch der pehle sun Raha tha..
Tan mehka mehka ,rang dehka dehka .muje TU gulab si laage...
Jo hai sringar,Jo hai ye nikahar .to kyn na kaam na jagae....
Ye Deepika ki sundarta is ganne ko Satya shabit kar Rahi thi ...
Ravi ne ye sab sochte hi jaise hi halki si kamar dabayi...halanki ye jaan bujh ke nahi hua tha..bas ho gaya tha.. Deepika ko dekh ke .
Deepika ke bhagnasa main subada uske suit or mehroon panty ke upper se laga..
Deepika chihuk gayi....or hadbada gayi...jaise ki koi current lag gaya ho...
Ravi bhi Deepika ko aise dekh ke bagal m let gaya..or upper dekhte hue gehrai saans Lene laga jaise kitni Badi galti ho gayi ho...
Wahi Deepika buri tarh se Sharma gayi..or bed m beth gayi .or apna suit Jo ki uski Keke ke tane jaise jangho se hath gaya tha..sahi Karke duppata sahi karte hue Sharm se bed se uthi...
Dono Kuch bol nahi rahe the..lekin bahut Kuch ho Chuka tha abhi abhi 10 sec pehle ..
Ye baat Deepika ko bhi pata thi..or Ravi ko bhi..ki uska ling Deepika ke kaha pe laga hai...
Or Deepika bhi janti hi ki us jalim ling ne kaha pe hamla Kiya hai...
Deepika kahde ho ke dhere se boli...
D:: nasta kar lo..Aa Jana....( Sharma ke)
Ravi upper ko dekhte Raha...bas us pal ko yaad Karne laga..jab ling thik Deepika ke matar ke Dane pe laga tha...
Ravi hmmm bola ..or Deepika muskura ke Sharma ke aage side chale gayi..bahut dino baad face main aise muskan thi....
To be continued...
Romantic Update BhaiDeepika ko bahut sukun mil Raha tha aaj...wahi Ravi ke pass ab koi shabd nahi Bache the...
Deepika ne Apna past Ravi ke samne khol ke rakh diya tha..Ravi ke man main Deepika ke Liye pyar or bhi badh gaya...
Or usne man hi man aaj ye pratigya kar li ki..ab shadi Hogi to Deepika se hi..nahi to nahi....
Ravi let gaya bed main...wahi Deepika uske room m Aayi.. Apne dupatte se muh pochte hue..or Ravi ko Pyar se dheme awaz m boli ..
D:: Suno ...( Ravi ko dekh ke)
Ravi Deepika ki awaz sun ke palat gaya.. Deepika usko dekh ke apni jheel jaise aankhon se dekhte hue boli ..
D:: nasta kar lo...Khana banne main der lagegi....( Thoda Pyar se request karte hue)
Ravi bed m beth gaya..Kuch bola nahi...
Ravi ko Thoda pareshan dekha to Deepika uske pass Aayi or boli..
D:: Kya hua?? Nasta to kar lo ...mujse gussa ho na ..mat baat Karna .lekin Khana to kha lo yaar ..( dukhi ho ke Ravi se Thoda sa dur khade ho ke Apne dupatte ko anguliyon main fasa ke).
Ravi ne Deepika ko muskura ke dekha .or uske dono hath pakad Liye....
Or usko dhere se Apne paas khinch ke bola ..
R:: nahi hu gussa....bas man nahi kar Raha....( Muskura ke)
Deepika ne palat ke door ko dekha..or boli ..
D:: muje Jana hai....Mami akele kaam kar Rahi Hogi...( Bhari sansoo se)
Ravi Kuch bola nahi...bas Apne sir ko Deepika ke pet m rakha or uske kamar m dono hath daal ke bas chain se aankh band kiye hue bas chup Raha..
Deepika ka Dil Ravi ke Liye pyar se bhar gaya...
Usne Apne hath Ravi ke baalon pe rakh diye...or Thoda jhuk ke Ravi ke sir ko chum li...
Ravi ne Deepika ko tight se pakad liya ...or gehri saans lete hue bas us pal ko jeene laga...
Tabhi Deepika bhut dhere se usse boli ...
D:: main jau ab???( Pyar bhari awaz m)
Ravi ne Deepika ko sir upper Karke ke dekha or muskuraya or fir se Deepika ko waise hi pakad ke Bethe Raha...
D:: choro na gate khula hai....koi Aa jayega....( Dabhi awaz m request karte hue)
Ravi ne uski kamar pe Thoda sa zor diya or Deepika Ravi ke bagal m beth gayi ...
Deepika ke bethte hi Ravi ne apna sir uske kandhe pe rakh diya... Deepika uske gaal main chingoti kaat ke Pyar se boli ..
D:. Tabhi to kehti hu bacche ho ....it e dino tak gussa tha ..or ab Pyar...haan?? Fir 2 din baad fir se muh fula Lena kyn??( Muskura ke Ravi ke gaal m chingoti kaat ke)
Ravi abhi bhi Kuch nahi bola .bas Deepika ke pet or kamar ma hath daal ke usko pakde Raha...
D:: Chalo choro kaam h Babu ji ,tumhara to Kya hai ..muje market bhi Jana hai..Mami ke sath....( Normal ho ke)
Lekin Ravi ne apni pakad or tight kar li..or Deepika ko dekh ke bade shant bhav se muskura ke bola...
R:: main nahi chor sakta apko ..( muskura ke Pyar se)
D:. Accha or jab gusse main Ulta sulta bolte ho tab nahi aata Dyan Kya bol Raha hu...haan??jab Dante ho muje be Matlab ke ..( Ravi ko dekh ke hanste hue)
R: to Pyar bhi to Tum se hi karta hu na...muje hamesa tumhare sath rehna hai...hamesa...or koi nhi chaiye muje...Sach main..( bolte hue Sharma ke Deepika ke gale lagte hue)
D: mere or ko dekh ke bolo to...Badi Sharm Aa Rahi h haan???( Ravi ko cherte hue)
R:: I love you so much...bhut Pyar karta hu tumse ...( Serious ho ke Deepika ko dekh ke)
Ravi ke aise bolne se ab Deepika Thoda sa Sharma gayi..or baat kaat ke boli ..
D:: ab Pyar ho gaya ho to jau main?? ( Muskura ke)
R::na Bethe raho yahi....aise hi...( Deepika ke shoulder m sir rakh ke)
D:: hmmm..door khula hai...or Bethe raho...choro main ja Rahi hu....( Uthate hue muh bana ke)
Ravi ne Deepika ko niche khincha or bed m leta diya...
Deepika hadbada ke uthne lagi to Ravi ne usko pakad liya ...
Ravi Deepika ko dekhne laga...to Deepika ne Nazar fer li...or Ravi ki swetar ko dekhne lagi..Sharma ke...
Deepika ne dono Laal chudiyan se bhare hath se Ravi ki baju pakdi thi... majbooti se .
Deepika shant ho gayi...Ravi bas Deepika ko dekhte Raha bahut der tak...
Ravi Deepika ko gaur se dekhte Raha bahut der tak...
Kabhi uski Kali Kali ankhon ko dekhta...Jo niche ko Ravi ki swetar ko dekh Rahi thi...to kabhi uske Ras se bahre hue honthon ko dekhta..jinko ko pehle bhi chus Chuka tha..jee bhar ke .or chuste hue kaat bhi Chuka tha...
Ravi Deepika ke honth or gehuwa colour ke gaal bahut der tak dekhta Raha..to kabhi uski Kali Kali eyebrows ko dekhta ..Jo bhut aache se beauty parlour main banwayi hui thi....
Dono ke bich khamoshi thi... Deepika bhaut Sharma Rahi thi...Ravi ke aise dekhne se ..
To mahol ko halka Karne ko boli...
D:: choro na door khula hai...der ho Rahi h muje Bazar bhi Jana hai...( Sir upper Karke door ko dekhte hue)
Deepika ke aise Karne se ..or hathon se Ravi ko upper se halka sa push Karne se Deepika ki Laal chudiyan baj uthi....
Khan .....khannnn.....
Ravi bas Deepika ko dekhte rha...or dhere dhere uske upper letne laga...
Deepika Ravi ke chest m hath rakh ke Sharm se dusre side dekh ke baat ko ghumate hue boli...
D:: nasta kar lo na...( Bhut dheme awaz m)
Ravi Kuch nahi bola..bas Deepika ke pero ke bich jagh banane laga...
Ravi ka ling m pryapat tanav Aa Chuka tha .jisko Kahi na Kahi Deepika ne bhi mehsus kar liya tha apni janghon pe ..
Ravi ko Deepika ki Badi se urozzo ki gahti dikhane lagi...
To Deepika ki saans Tham gayi ..Sharm ke mare Kuch bol nahi payi ...or Ravi ke chest m hath rakh ke fir se kampati hui awaz m boli...
D:: naahhhiii....plsssss.......chhorrrr dddooo naaaa......derrrr Hooo raaahhiii haaiiiiii....plsssss...( Machalte hue Nazar dusre taraf karte hue)
Ravi ne Deepika ke us hath ko Kalai se pakda Jo usne chest pe rakha tha...or upper takiye ke or Le gaya...or Deepika ke pero ke bich jagh bna ke let gaya...
Ravi ka muh thik Deepika ke face ke upper tha...or Deepika ke naram bade urooz Ravi ki chati se dabe hue the...
Ravi uski aankhon or or honth ko dekhne laga...
Deepika Sharm se mar gayi....or Nazar dusre taraf kar li...bas Apne kalai ko ravi ke majboot hathon se churane lagi....halke se ..
Deepika koi bahut takat nahi laga Rahi thi..bas Sharm se hath ko ghuma Rahi thi...
Ravi bas usko dekhta Raha machalte hue....
To Deepika Ravi ko dekh ke boli...Sharm se....bina Nazar milaye..
D:: chor do na...der ho Rahi h ...Mami Aa jayegi....choro na...,( Rone Wala muh bna ke request karte hue)
Ravi bilkul shant tha...lekin Ander se bahut uttejit tha...sayad itna ki Deepika ke upper lete hue hi wo pighal jaye...
Ravi aaj tak ye nahi samjh paya tha ki kyn wo Deepika ke aage bebas ho jata h..or aise hi uska virya niklane ko ho jata h bina Kuch kare...
Kya Deepika Sach main it I khoobsurat hai ki Ravi ka taap badha deti hai??
Deepika ki maang m sindur ,gale main mangalsutra,naak main nose ring...kaan main earrings...uske yovan ko or bhi badha dete the..
Abhi Deepika ko dekhte hue Ravi ko Rehman Sahab ka wo hi gana yaad aane laga..Jo wo Kuch der pehle sun Raha tha..
Tan mehka mehka ,rang dehka dehka .muje TU gulab si laage...
Jo hai sringar,Jo hai ye nikahar .to kyn na kaam na jagae....
Ye Deepika ki sundarta is ganne ko Satya shabit kar Rahi thi ...
Ravi ne ye sab sochte hi jaise hi halki si kamar dabayi...halanki ye jaan bujh ke nahi hua tha..bas ho gaya tha.. Deepika ko dekh ke .
Deepika ke bhagnasa main subada uske suit or mehroon panty ke upper se laga..
Deepika chihuk gayi....or hadbada gayi...jaise ki koi current lag gaya ho...
Ravi bhi Deepika ko aise dekh ke bagal m let gaya..or upper dekhte hue gehrai saans Lene laga jaise kitni Badi galti ho gayi ho...
Wahi Deepika buri tarh se Sharma gayi..or bed m beth gayi .or apna suit Jo ki uski Keke ke tane jaise jangho se hath gaya tha..sahi Karke duppata sahi karte hue Sharm se bed se uthi...
Dono Kuch bol nahi rahe the..lekin bahut Kuch ho Chuka tha abhi abhi 10 sec pehle ..
Ye baat Deepika ko bhi pata thi..or Ravi ko bhi..ki uska ling Deepika ke kaha pe laga hai...
Or Deepika bhi janti hi ki us jalim ling ne kaha pe hamla Kiya hai...
Deepika kahde ho ke dhere se boli...
D:: nasta kar lo..Aa Jana....( Sharma ke)
Ravi upper ko dekhte Raha...bas us pal ko yaad Karne laga..jab ling thik Deepika ke matar ke Dane pe laga tha...
Ravi hmmm bola ..or Deepika muskura ke Sharma ke aage side chale gayi..bahut dino baad face main aise muskan thi....
To be continued...