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Guru y ne kaha ki ab meri training ka aakhri padav suru hoga..

Or isliye muje ek naye guru milenge or wo kal aayenge..

Fir mea apne ghar aagaya or sogaya tha...

Ab agge..

Kal ka intazar me besabri se kar raha tha qki pichle 4 mahino me mene jitni b mehnat kit thi apni duniya ko bachane ke liye ab wo complete hone wali hea..

Pura din fir issike intazar me bitgaya..

Or raatko apne schedule ke hisab se mea hall me pohach gaya apne training ke akhri padav ke liye par muje kya patta tha ki ye training meri jindagi he badal ke rakhdegi...

Khair training ke liye jaise he hall me pohacha mere saamne guru y ke sath ek or aadmi khade the wo b guru y ke ham umar ke he the bas unke pehnea huye kapde white ke sath sath golden be the..

Khair me unke pass jakar dono ko pranam kiya fir guru y bole..

Guru y - Aaryan ye hea aacharya raghav (a raghav)


Ye mere bade bhai hea or tumhare training ka agla padav ye he batayenge..

A raghav - Aaryan jis speed se tumne tumhari ab tak ki training ki hea ye chij kabilya taarif hea aaj tak siway hamare yuvraj ke kisne b iss speed se ye sab ni sikha hea...

Or kahi na kahi tumne unko b piche chod diya hea..

Ab is darti lok par koi b manusya tum se jadda na toa taqatwar he or nahi budhiman..

Bas tumhe apne shaktiyo ko pahchana hoga or iska sahi istemal karna hoga..

Rahi baat tumhari training ki jo mea karane walla hu toa wo ek tarha se tumhari pariksha b hogi jo kuch b ab tak tumne sikha he ussea aajmane ki..

Ussea pehlea mea tumhe tumhari energy source ko control karna sikhaunga taki tumhe aage ki training mea iski sayata mile..

Ab jo b mea kar raha hu ussea dyan se dekhna fir waise hea karna..

Ab tak jo tumne dyan lagana sikha tha jisse tumhari energy source ko tum or taqatwar kar paa rahe the waisa he karna he bas ismea tumhe ussea badane ke sath sath control b karna he jisse tum apne energy se koi b weapon ya hathyar bana sako..

Ab mere jaisa karna tum..

Itna bol a raghav dyan lagane lage or fir unhone dono hatho ko aapas me joda..

Achanak unke hatho ke bich ek roshni se aane lagi..

Dire dire wo roshni badi or fir ek white gole ka roop lea liya..

Uss energy ball se kafi heat mehsoos kar paa raha tha mea..

Ye sab karne ko mea kafi excited tha qki ye ab tak ki gayi training se kafi alag tha..

Mea b a raghav ke jaisa karne lagga par mea har baar nakam hota..

Bohot der kosis karne ke baad mere hatho ke bich ek choti se energy ball aayi..

Mere energy ball a raghav se kafi choti thi..

Par fir b mea khush tha ki mene akhir kar dikhaya..

A raghav man me - Ye kaise hosaktay abi tak aarayn bacha he or pehli baar kar raha he fir b uski energy ball me itni urja he jitne meri energy ball me b ni thi..

Aaryan he hame uss hadamba or nagraj ke changul se hamare desh ko bacha saktay..


Par abi usmea kafi samay hea..


Guru y ne kaha ki ab meri training ka aakhri padav suru hoga..

Or isliye muje ek naye guru milenge or wo kal aayenge..

Fir mea apne ghar aagaya or sogaya tha...

Ab agge..

Kal ka intazar me besabri se kar raha tha qki pichle 4 mahino me mene jitni b mehnat kit thi apni duniya ko bachane ke liye ab wo complete hone wali hea..

Pura din fir issike intazar me bitgaya..

Or raatko apne schedule ke hisab se mea hall me pohach gaya apne training ke akhri padav ke liye par muje kya patta tha ki ye training meri jindagi he badal ke rakhdegi...

Khair training ke liye jaise he hall me pohacha mere saamne guru y ke sath ek or aadmi khade the wo b guru y ke ham umar ke he the bas unke pehnea huye kapde white ke sath sath golden be the..

Khair me unke pass jakar dono ko pranam kiya fir guru y bole..

Guru y - Aaryan ye hea aacharya raghav (a raghav)


Ye mere bade bhai hea or tumhare training ka agla padav ye he batayenge..

A raghav - Aaryan jis speed se tumne tumhari ab tak ki training ki hea ye chij kabilya taarif hea aaj tak siway hamare yuvraj ke kisne b iss speed se ye sab ni sikha hea...

Or kahi na kahi tumne unko b piche chod diya hea..

Ab is darti lok par koi b manusya tum se jadda na toa taqatwar he or nahi budhiman..

Bas tumhe apne shaktiyo ko pahchana hoga or iska sahi istemal karna hoga..

Rahi baat tumhari training ki jo mea karane walla hu toa wo ek tarha se tumhari pariksha b hogi jo kuch b ab tak tumne sikha he ussea aajmane ki..

Ussea pehlea mea tumhe tumhari energy source ko control karna sikhaunga taki tumhe aage ki training mea iski sayata mile..

Ab jo b mea kar raha hu ussea dyan se dekhna fir waise hea karna..

Ab tak jo tumne dyan lagana sikha tha jisse tumhari energy source ko tum or taqatwar kar paa rahe the waisa he karna he bas ismea tumhe ussea badane ke sath sath control b karna he jisse tum apne energy se koi b weapon ya hathyar bana sako..

Ab mere jaisa karna tum..

Itna bol a raghav dyan lagane lage or fir unhone dono hatho ko aapas me joda..

Achanak unke hatho ke bich ek roshni se aane lagi..

Dire dire wo roshni badi or fir ek white gole ka roop lea liya..

Uss energy ball se kafi heat mehsoos kar paa raha tha mea..

Ye sab karne ko mea kafi excited tha qki ye ab tak ki gayi training se kafi alag tha..

Mea b a raghav ke jaisa karne lagga par mea har baar nakam hota..

Bohot der kosis karne ke baad mere hatho ke bich ek choti se energy ball aayi..

Mere energy ball a raghav se kafi choti thi..

Par fir b mea khush tha ki mene akhir kar dikhaya..

A raghav man me - Ye kaise hosaktay abi tak aarayn bacha he or pehli baar kar raha he fir b uski energy ball me itni urja he jitne meri energy ball me b ni thi..

Aaryan he hame uss hadamba or nagraj ke changul se hamare desh ko bacha saktay..


Par abi usmea kafi samay hea..

Aise he kuch der or practice karne se mea ab apne energy ball ka size bada paa raha tha or sath he usse apne man mutabik yaha se waha pass kar paa raha tha ..

Inshort me kuch had tak energy ko control karna sikh gaya tha tabi muje ek idea aaya or mene apni saari urja or dyan apne hatho me energy ball par conectarte kiya jisse uska size badne lagga or dire dire wo kafi badi hogayi thi..

tabi a raghav nea muje roka or bole bas aarayn agar tumne isse or bara kiya toa iske heat se he duniya tabha na hojaye..





‌a raghav ki baat maan meane gole mea se dire apni urja kam karne lagga jisse uska aakar b chota hogaya fir vo gayab hogaya...





‌kuch der or mene aise he thodi der energy control karne ki practice ki fir ghar aagaya...
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Tabi a raghav nea muje roka or bole bas aarayn agar tumne isse or bara kiya toa iske heat se he duniya tabha na hojaye..





‌a raghav ki baat maan meane gole mea se diredire apni urja kam karne lagga jisse uska aakar b chota hogaya fir vo gayab hogaya...





‌kuch der or mene aise he thodi der energy control karne ki practice ki fir ghar aagaya...

Ab aage....

Aise he 4 din tak mea apni energy ko control kar ussea ladne ke tarike sikhne lagga..

Aise karte huye muje hamesa mehsoos hota ki ismea kuch toa missing hea...

Mea har bar apne energy ko shape dene ke kosis karta par ho he nai paraha tha...

Mea sirf energy balls he bana sakta tha...


Par muje isse b aage badna tha par


Na jane kuch toa aisa tha mere andar jo meri energy ko rok raha tha..

Bohot bar training kedoran aisa lagta ki meri energy se he mera sarir fat jayega par tabi wo apne app kam ho jati..

Mea ek limit tak he sab kar paa raha tha...

Mene apni iss duwida ko a raghav or guru y ke b saamne rakha..


Meri bate sun dono muje ajib nazro se dekhne lagee..

{. Guru y apne man me- Bhaiya kya isse wo us khajar ke bareme batana chahiye..

A raghav apne man me - Sayad ye usse control kar leaga..


Agar usne us khanjar ko pa liya toa iski soyi huyi kuch saktiya zarur jaag jayegi...

Guru Y - baat toa tk bhaiya par is khanjar ki raksha wo mayavi chudail zoya kar rahi hea..


Aaryan ko abi uske saamne bejna tk hoga kya..

A raghav - aaj nai toa kal ussea ye karna he tha..


Or us tantrik se ladne se pehlea aarayn ke liye ek acha abyas b hoga or agar aaryan musibat mea pada toa uske dono rakshak toa he hi uske sath hamesa...

Guru y - tk hea bhaiya mea aarayn ko uske bareme bata ta hu fir.. }

Guru y - Aaryan agar tumhe apni energy ko apne man mutabik hatyar mea tabdil karna he toa uske liye tumhe ek chij ki jarurat hogi..

Aaryan - Kya hea aisa guruji bataye muje..


Mea apni energy ko pure tarike se use karna chahta hu...

Guru y - Aaryan tumhe aisa karne ke liyea ek jaduyi khanjar ki jarurat hogi jo yaha se bohot dur hea..


Or uski raksha b ek mayavi chudail kar rahi hea..

A raghav - Tumhe agar us khanjar ko pana hea toa uss chudail ke changul se us khanzar ko lanahoga..

Aarayn - Me zarur us khanjar ko pane ki puri kosis karunga guruji..


Par agar wo jagha yaha se dur hea toa mea waha pochunga kaise..

Guru y - Uski chinta nayi hea aaryan wo toa ham tumhe waha pochha denge par us chudail ko tum mar nai sakte usse mahadev se wardan prapt hea..

Aaryan - Fir guruji us khanjar ko me kaise hasil karunga..

A raghav - Aaryan iska jawab tumhare apne pass he hea..


Tum hea he kuch soch kar ussea harana hoga or us khanjar ko pana hoga tabi he tum puri tarha se apni energy ko control kar paoge..

Guru y - Beta is baat ko yaad rakhna jo abi a raghav ne kahi hea..

Uss chudail ko harane ka rasta tumhare andar he hea..


Bas jo ab tak tumne sikha hea usse use karna..

Aaryan - Tk hea guru y..


Toa fir kab jana hoga muje us khanjar ko lane..

A raghav - Aaryan abi he chale jav...


Mea tumhe sidhe ussijungle mea chod dunga jaha wo khanjar hea..Wo khanjar jungle me talab ke bicho bich ek pathar par dhasha hua hea..

Tum jab uss khanjar ke ass pass hoge toa wo khanjar ke saktiya tum mehsoos kar paoge or wo tumhe apne taraf khichea gi...

Guru y - Par yaad rakhna wo mayavi chudail hea uski raksha ke liye..

Or usne uss jungle mea tarha tarha ke view rache honge apne tilism se..

Or tumhe un sab se bachte huye uss khanjar tak pohach na hea..

Bas apne man ko shant rakhna har muskil ka jawab tumhare andar he hea bas shant dimag se socho ge toa wo chudail tumhara kuch ni bigar payegi...

Aaryan - Ji guru y mea dyan rakhunga..

A raghav - Aaryan tumhe waha jane se pehlea agar kuch sath lena ho jisse tumhe madat mile toa lea lo..

Qki waqt kam hea wo khanjar tumhe tab he dikhega jab suraj ki kirne us talab par giregi..

Or ye sab sirf 5 min ke liye he hota hea..

A raghav ke baat sun mene apne sath apni ek talwar or khanjar le liyea jisse mea training karta tha..


Or sath he wo jadibuti wala pani b jiise gaav bar jaate hea jo mea vedo ko pad shika tha..

Pehlea uss jadibuti ke pani se gaav barne mea 1 ghanta leta tha par ab mene ussmea kuch or jadibutiyo ko milakar ussea itna powerful banadiya hea ki..

Gaav b turant bar jaate hea or sari takhawat b turant he dur hojati hea..

Apne jarurato ke chije lene ke baad mea a raghav ke pass gaya ..

Unhone mere sar par hath rakha or unke hatho se ek roshni mereandar ane lagi..

Us roshni kea merwandar aate hea mere ankhe chamak ne lagi or unmea se nilli roshni aane lagii..

5 min muje normal hone mea lagge..

Jab mea normal hua toa mere aankhe blue colorke hogayi thi.


Or ab muje kafi dur tak ka dikh raha tha..

Tabi a raghav bole..

A raghav - aaryan abi mene tumhe durdristi ki shakti di hea...

Iski tumhe us mayavijungle mea bohot jarurat hogi..

Waha kadam kadam par traps honge jo tumhe ab asani se dikhenge par fir b dyan rakhna tum..

Aaryan - Sukriya a raghav...


Mea us khanjar ko pake he rahunga..

Itna bol menea dono ka aashirwad liya..

Tabi a raghav ne dono hatho ko gol gol ghumaya or unme se bijliya chamkane lagi or hamare saamne ek portal sa khul gaya...

Portal ke uss taraf andhera dikh raha tha..


Mea heran tha qki ye mene pehli bar dekha tha..

Tabi guru y bole..

Guru y - Beta iss portal ke us par wo jungle hea..

Yaha se aage tumhe akele he jana hoga.


Meri baat yaad rakhna shant dimag se socho ge toa har muskil ka jawab tumhare he pass milega..

Apna dyan rakhna...

Mene dono ka ek bar fir aashirwad liya or uss portal mea chalagaya..

Portal mea guste he muje ajib se tarange mehsoos hone lagi..


Aisa lag raha tha ki mea bijli ke darwaje se gujar raha hu...

Mea jese he portal ke uss par gaya toa mea chaunk gaya tha qki...

Hope u all enjoy this one..


N kuch suggestion ho toa jarur dena..??
 

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Guru y - Beta iss portal ke us par wo jungle hea..

Yaha se aage tumhe akele he jana hoga.


Meri baat yaad rakhna shant dimag se socho ge toa har muskil ka jawab tumhare he pass milega..

Apna dyan rakhna...

Mene dono ka ek bar fir aashirwad liya or uss portal mea chalagaya..

Portal mea guste he muje ajib se tarange mehsoos hone lagi..


Aisa lag raha tha ki mea bijli ke darwaje se gujar raha hu...

Mea jese he portal ke uss par gaya toa mea chaunk gaya tha qki...

Ab aage...

Portal ke ispar ka najar bohot he ajib tha..

Mea is waqt jungle ke sima par khara tha jaha se wo jungle start hotay..

Par chukane wali baat ye thi ki jungle ke sima jaha se start hoti hea waha raat thi or uske is taraf din tha..

Mea yea dekhkar chaunk gaya tha..

Mene insab bato ko najar andaj karke apni nilli ankho se jungle ke taraf dekhne lagga muje jungle bohot se ajib chije dikhi..

Fir mene dire dire aage badna suru kiya..

Is waqt jungle mea andheratha par a raghav ke di huyi sakti ke karan mea aaram se dekh paraha tha..

Mea chalte huye aage badaya tha..


Ke tabi muje mehsoos hua ki koi mera picha kar raha hea..

Par jab mea piche murke dekhta toa waha koi nai hota...

Aise he kuch kadam or chalne ke baad muje ye toa confirm hua ki koi toa he jo mera picha kar raha hea par mea apni ankho se usse dekhni paraha tha..

Mere piche sirf per he per the..

Mea jaise thoda aage bada ki tabi mere pero mea kuch bandne laga..

Mea gor se dekha toa wo pero ki jarre thi..

Or wo mere pero ko jakad kar band rahi thi..

Mene apne hatho se apne aapko churane ki kosis ki par jaise mea hilta toa un jaron ki pakad majboot hojati..

Mere pairo mea aisa lag raha tha ki wo abu kat jayengea itni majboot pakad thi..

Mene apne aap ko shant kiya..


Or sochne lagga ki kya karu..

Tab tak un jarro kq ghera mujhpar barne lagga or wo mere kamar tak aagayi thi..

Tabi mene apni pit se apni talwar nikali..

Or un jaron ko katne lagga..


Jitna mea unka kaat tha utni he jarre or nikal thi jameen se..

Tabi mere dimag mea ek idea aaya or apne ek haath apne jole mea daal kar jinki mere kandhe par latak raha tha usmea jadibuti ke pani ki shisi nikali or us pani ko apne talwar par daal diya..

Wo pani talwar par daalne ke baad meane fir un jaron ko katna suru kiya..

Magar isbar jaha kahi be mere talwar lagti waha aag lag jati.


(Ye sab mene ved grantho ko padkar banana sikha tha)

Jisse jarre wapas nai aa pari thi mere pass.

Kuch he der mea mene un sabi jaron ko apne sarir se alag kar diya..

Mere aas pass sabi jarre jalkar khak ho chuki thi..

Or ab aur jarre b ni aarahi thi..

Insab se nipat kar mea fir aage badne lagga...

(Yaha batadu ki mene apne sath alag alag or b jadibutiyo ka pani laya hu..


Jo ki mene apne training ke doran bana na sikha tha or ye b unmea se ek thu..


Isse kisi b hathyar pe daal kar agar war kiya jaye toa uss jagha turant aag lag jati hea..

Aise he alag alag tarah ke pani mea apne sath laya hu)

Mea ab pehlea se jadda satark hokar chal raha tha..

Qki ab muje patta chal chuka he ki ye jungle jitna mene socha tha usse b kayi jadda khatarnak he..Kuch dur aage jane par muje bohot he jadda garmi mehsoos hone laggi..

Aisa lag raha tha ki mea kisi jwala mukhi ke pass hu..

Muje ye baat thodi ajeeb lagi isliye mea ussi direction mea chalane lagga jaha se heat aarahi thi..

Waha pohach kar mene dekha ki mere saamne lawa ke nadi beh rahi hea..

Or us nadi ke ass pass registani mitti thi yani sand thi..

Ab muje lag raha tha ki hona ho us khanjar tak jaane ka raasta is lawa ke uss paar he hoga par iss par kaise karunga..

Fir mene jungle mea se ek bade ped ko apni talwar se katta or usee us nadi ke upar pool jaise rakh diya taki mea uss paar jaa saku..

Par ped rakhte he wo jal gaya wo b kuch he seconds mea..

Ab mea soch mea padhaya tha qki is nadi ko kisi b pool ke jariye paar karna asamnav tha..

Fir mere dimag idea aaya ki mea jump karke uspar challa jaau..

Isliye mea bhag kar kinare se jump kari par jump karte he mea hava me jane ke bajaye niche jane lagga..

Mea lava me girne he walla tha ki tabi mene kinare ko pakad liya..

Or muskil se upar aaya..

Lava ke itne pass jane se mere kapde jalne lagge or ab meare track pant jo pehna tha vo jalkar half pant hogaya tha..


(Sehen sakti ke training ke doran aise kai chije mene sai thi isliye lava ke pass hone se mere body par uska kuch effect nai hua par mea lava ke andar ni ja sakta tha..


Qki yadi mea jatta toa jal jatta)

Badi muskil se mea fir kinare ke upar aaya..

Ab mea pareshan hogaya tha ki ab isse par karu toa karu kaise..

Ab mea bechain hone lagga tha..

Tabi muje guru y ki baat yaad aayi ki shant dimag se sochna hoga muje..

Mene apne appko shant kiya or fir sochne lagga ki kya karu jisse mea us par ja saku..

Na mea kisi b chij ko as a bridge use kar sakta hu or na he mea jump kar ja sakta hu qki us mayavi chudail nea apne tilism sea waha ki gravity bada di hea..

Kuch der sochne par b muje koi rasta nai najar aaraha tha us nadi ko par karneka..

Muje lagne lagga ki mea us khanjar ko nai paa sakunga tabi mene gusse mea sand ko mutti me pakad kar lava ke nadi mea phenka..

Or jo mene dekha ussea mea chaunk gaya tha..

Akhir aisa kya tha jaane ke liye nxt update ka intazar kare..

Or kuch suggestion ho toa za deana??
 

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Mene apne appko shant kiya or fir sochne lagga ki kya karu jisse mea us par ja saku..

Na mea kisi b chij ko as a bridge use kar sakta hu or na he mea jump kar ja sakta hu qki us mayavi chudail nea apne tilism sea waha ki gravity bada di hea..

Kuch der sochne par b muje koi rasta nai najar aaraha tha us nadi ko par karneka..

Muje lagne lagga ki mea us khanjar ko nai paa sakunga tabi mene gusse mea sand ko mutti me pakad kar lava ke nadi mea phenka..

Or jo mene dekha ussea mea chaunk gaya tha..

Ab aage

Jaise he wo sand lava par giri vahi tehar gayi kuch minute ke liyea or fir niche chali gayi lava mea..

Issea muje idea aaya or meane khade hokar jungle se ek badaor jadda sa ped tod kar layya or usse apni talwar se karkar ek badda or chouda favda banadiya jisse mea sand ko lava me daal saku..

Faavda banane ke baad mene apni puri taqat se usse sand mea andar tak gusaya fir usse daka dete huye kinare par lakar jitni b sand jama hui usse lava mea daal diya..

Aisa kai baar karne ke baad or lava ki nadi or kinare ka level same hua bas fark ye tha ki nadi mea lava ke jagha sand thi..

Ab bas muje jaldi se isse paar karna tha..

Qki lava kabi b sand ko apne sath baha leja sakta tha..

Fir mene apni speed se us nadi ko paar kiya..

Sand kafi daram hochuki thi lava ke wajase par fir b mea usse sehen kar paa raha tha bas mere per jal chuke the..

Dusre taraf pohach kar mene apne bag mea se healing water nikal jo ki mene training ke doran use karta tha apne gaav barne ke liye..

Mene wo pani ka ek gut pi liya jisse mere pair b tk hogaye or mea ab pehlea se jadda fresh feel kar raha tha..

Hard training ke wajase mera stamina kafi bad chuka tha isliye mea agar pure din b doudta rahu fir b ni tahkta tha..

Jaise he pair tk huye..


Meane apne aapko sayi kiya or fir us jungle mea east disha ke taraf chlane lagga..

Muje is waqt malum ni tha kis disha me janna he muje par fir b muje lag raha tha ki east direction he sahi hogi qki suraj ki pehli kiran se he muje wo talab dikhega or suraj east side se aata he hea isliye me ussi disha mea chalne lagga..

Kuch dur jaane par fir muje wahi pedo ka saamna karna padda jinhe mene aaram se jalakar khak kardiya..

Abi suraj ugne me sirf 1 ghanta bacha tha..

Mere pass kafi kam samay tha isliye mea teji se aage badne lagga..

Abi mea kuch dur he gaya tha ki muje bhediye ki awaje aayi..

Par bhediye ke awaj mea me dard mehsoos kar paa raha tha..


(Muje sabi janwaro ki language aati he yaha tak insano me b jitni b language ho wo b..

Ye sab mene training ke doran grantho se sikha tha)

Isliye mea teaji us disha me chalne lagga..

Me thoda aage aaya tha ki muje wo bhediya dik gaya uske per ke aarpar ek badda sa katta gussa hua tha..

Mea jaldi se uske pass gaya or uske pair ko jispar katta lagga tha usse apne hatho me pakda or bhediya se kha..


(Yaha mene uski language mea baat ke thi par hindi mea bataunga)..

Aaryan - Daro mat mea tumhari madat kar sakta hu..


Bas tum shant raho..

Bhediya pehlea toa muje apni basha bolta dek chaunka par is waqt usse dard b kafi horaha tha isliye usne meri baat mani or shant hogaya..

Mene uske pair se katte ko ek he baar me khich kar nikla jisse usse or dard hua par fir b wo usse control kar raha tha tabi..

Mene apne bag se healing water nikala or usse ek gut pila diya..

Jisse uske per ka gaav kuch he der me tk hogaya..

Ab wo puri taraha fit hochuka tha..

Bhediyene khade hote huye mujse kaha..

Bhediya - Shukriya meri madat karne ke liyea..


Mera naam rakha hea or mea is jungle ke bhediyon ka sartaj hu..

Tum yaha ke toa ni hoa..

Tumhe yaha se jaldi chale jana chahiye anyata wo Zoya chudail tumhe b yaha kaid kar ke apna gulam banadegi...

Aaryan - Tum uski chinta mat karo..


Mea yaha wo jaduyi khanjar lene aaya hu..


Kya tum muje bata sakte ho wo talab kaha he jaha wo khanjardasha hua hea pathar mea..

B rakha - Tumne meri madat ki he isliye tumhe zarur batunga par uski raksha wo Zoya kar rahi hea...

Or aaj tak usse koi nai harra paya he kewal us khanjar ke malik ko chodkar..

Isliye us khanjar ki wo raksha kar rahi hea taki apne malik ke aane par wo khanjar unhe lota sake..

Aaryan - dhanyawad dost bas muje waha ka rasta batado tum qki suryoday se pehle muje waha pohach na hoga..

B rakha - Chalo fir tum meri pit par bet jaau..


Mea tumhe waha jald he pohacha dunga..


Par mea us zoya se ladne mea tumhari koi madat ni karunga qki mere saare log uske tilism mea fase huye hea..

Mea chahkar b unhe ni bacha sakta..

Aaryan - Tum uski chinta na karo..


Tumhare logon ko b uske tilism se chuda dunga..

Itna bol mea uski pit par beth gaya or wo rakha teji se doudne lagga.

Or kuch hi der doudne ke baad wo ruka or mujse bola .

B rakha - Yaha se tumhe akele he jana hoga..

Issi disha mea kuch dur chalne par tumhe us mayavi chudail ka ashiyana dikhayi dega..


Uske tk piche he wo talab he jaha wo khanjar laga hua hea..

Rakha ki baat sun mene usse ek baar or dhanyawad kaha fir uss disha mea chalne lagga..
 

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Mene apne appko shant kiya or fir sochne lagga ki kya karu jisse mea us par ja saku..

Na mea kisi b chij ko as a bridge use kar sakta hu or na he mea jump kar ja sakta hu qki us mayavi chudail nea apne tilism sea waha ki gravity bada di hea..

Kuch der sochne par b muje koi rasta nai najar aaraha tha us nadi ko par karneka..

Muje lagne lagga ki mea us khanjar ko nai paa sakunga tabi mene gusse mea sand ko mutti me pakad kar lava ke nadi mea phenka..

Or jo mene dekha ussea mea chaunk gaya tha..

Ab aage

Jaise he wo sand lava par giri vahi tehar gayi kuch minute ke liyea or fir niche chali gayi lava mea..

Issea muje idea aaya or meane khade hokar jungle se ek badaor jadda sa ped tod kar layya or usse apni talwar se karkar ek badda or chouda favda banadiya jisse mea sand ko lava me daal saku..

Faavda banane ke baad mene apni puri taqat se usse sand mea andar tak gusaya fir usse daka dete huye kinare par lakar jitni b sand jama hui usse lava mea daal diya..

Aisa kai baar karne ke baad or lava ki nadi or kinare ka level same hua bas fark ye tha ki nadi mea lava ke jagha sand thi..

Ab bas muje jaldi se isse paar karna tha..

Qki lava kabi b sand ko apne sath baha leja sakta tha..

Fir mene apni speed se us nadi ko paar kiya..

Sand kafi daram hochuki thi lava ke wajase par fir b mea usse sehen kar paa raha tha bas mere per jal chuke the..

Dusre taraf pohach kar mene apne bag mea se healing water nikal jo ki mene training ke doran use karta tha apne gaav barne ke liye..

Mene wo pani ka ek gut pi liya jisse mere pair b tk hogaye or mea ab pehlea se jadda fresh feel kar raha tha..

Hard training ke wajase mera stamina kafi bad chuka tha isliye mea agar pure din b doudta rahu fir b ni tahkta tha..

Jaise he pair tk huye..


Meane apne aapko sayi kiya or fir us jungle mea east disha ke taraf chlane lagga..

Muje is waqt malum ni tha kis disha me janna he muje par fir b muje lag raha tha ki east direction he sahi hogi qki suraj ki pehli kiran se he muje wo talab dikhega or suraj east side se aata he hea isliye me ussi disha mea chalne lagga..

Kuch dur jaane par fir muje wahi pedo ka saamna karna padda jinhe mene aaram se jalakar khak kardiya..

Abi suraj ugne me sirf 1 ghanta bacha tha..

Mere pass kafi kam samay tha isliye mea teji se aage badne lagga..

Abi mea kuch dur he gaya tha ki muje bhediye ki awaje aayi..

Par bhediye ke awaj mea me dard mehsoos kar paa raha tha..


(Muje sabi janwaro ki language aati he yaha tak insano me b jitni b language ho wo b..

Ye sab mene training ke doran grantho se sikha tha)

Isliye mea teaji us disha me chalne lagga..

Me thoda aage aaya tha ki muje wo bhediya dik gaya uske per ke aarpar ek badda sa katta gussa hua tha..

Mea jaldi se uske pass gaya or uske pair ko jispar katta lagga tha usse apne hatho me pakda or bhediya se kha..


(Yaha mene uski language mea baat ke thi par hindi mea bataunga)..

Aaryan - Daro mat mea tumhari madat kar sakta hu..


Bas tum shant raho..

Bhediya pehlea toa muje apni basha bolta dek chaunka par is waqt usse dard b kafi horaha tha isliye usne meri baat mani or shant hogaya..

Mene uske pair se katte ko ek he baar me khich kar nikla jisse usse or dard hua par fir b wo usse control kar raha tha tabi..

Mene apne bag se healing water nikala or usse ek gut pila diya..

Jisse uske per ka gaav kuch he der me tk hogaya..

Ab wo puri taraha fit hochuka tha..

Bhediyene khade hote huye mujse kaha..

Bhediya - Shukriya meri madat karne ke liyea..


Mera naam rakha hea or mea is jungle ke bhediyon ka sartaj hu..

Tum yaha ke toa ni hoa..

Tumhe yaha se jaldi chale jana chahiye anyata wo Zoya chudail tumhe b yaha kaid kar ke apna gulam banadegi...

Aaryan - Tum uski chinta mat karo..


Mea yaha wo jaduyi khanjar lene aaya hu..


Kya tum muje bata sakte ho wo talab kaha he jaha wo khanjardasha hua hea pathar mea..

B rakha - Tumne meri madat ki he isliye tumhe zarur batunga par uski raksha wo Zoya kar rahi hea...

Or aaj tak usse koi nai harra paya he kewal us khanjar ke malik ko chodkar..

Isliye us khanjar ki wo raksha kar rahi hea taki apne malik ke aane par wo khanjar unhe lota sake..

Aaryan - dhanyawad dost bas muje waha ka rasta batado tum qki suryoday se pehle muje waha pohach na hoga..

B rakha - Chalo fir tum meri pit par bet jaau..


Mea tumhe waha jald he pohacha dunga..


Par mea us zoya se ladne mea tumhari koi madat ni karunga qki mere saare log uske tilism mea fase huye hea..

Mea chahkar b unhe ni bacha sakta..

Aaryan - Tum uski chinta na karo..


Tumhare logon ko b uske tilism se chuda dunga..

Itna bol mea uski pit par beth gaya or wo rakha teji se doudne lagga.

Or kuch hi der doudne ke baad wo ruka or mujse bola .

B rakha - Yaha se tumhe akele he jana hoga..

Issi disha mea kuch dur chalne par tumhe us mayavi chudail ka ashiyana dikhayi dega..


Uske tk piche he wo talab he jaha wo khanjar laga hua hea..

Rakha ki baat sun mene usse ek baar or dhanyawad kaha fir uss disha mea chalne lagga..
Super mind blowing fantastic update bhai Mazza AA gaya
 

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Mene apne appko shant kiya or fir sochne lagga ki kya karu jisse mea us par ja saku..

Na mea kisi b chij ko as a bridge use kar sakta hu or na he mea jump kar ja sakta hu qki us mayavi chudail nea apne tilism sea waha ki gravity bada di hea..

Kuch der sochne par b muje koi rasta nai najar aaraha tha us nadi ko par karneka..

Muje lagne lagga ki mea us khanjar ko nai paa sakunga tabi mene gusse mea sand ko mutti me pakad kar lava ke nadi mea phenka..

Or jo mene dekha ussea mea chaunk gaya tha..

Ab aage

Jaise he wo sand lava par giri vahi tehar gayi kuch minute ke liyea or fir niche chali gayi lava mea..

Issea muje idea aaya or meane khade hokar jungle se ek badaor jadda sa ped tod kar layya or usse apni talwar se karkar ek badda or chouda favda banadiya jisse mea sand ko lava me daal saku..

Faavda banane ke baad mene apni puri taqat se usse sand mea andar tak gusaya fir usse daka dete huye kinare par lakar jitni b sand jama hui usse lava mea daal diya..

Aisa kai baar karne ke baad or lava ki nadi or kinare ka level same hua bas fark ye tha ki nadi mea lava ke jagha sand thi..

Ab bas muje jaldi se isse paar karna tha..

Qki lava kabi b sand ko apne sath baha leja sakta tha..

Fir mene apni speed se us nadi ko paar kiya..

Sand kafi daram hochuki thi lava ke wajase par fir b mea usse sehen kar paa raha tha bas mere per jal chuke the..

Dusre taraf pohach kar mene apne bag mea se healing water nikal jo ki mene training ke doran use karta tha apne gaav barne ke liye..

Mene wo pani ka ek gut pi liya jisse mere pair b tk hogaye or mea ab pehlea se jadda fresh feel kar raha tha..

Hard training ke wajase mera stamina kafi bad chuka tha isliye mea agar pure din b doudta rahu fir b ni tahkta tha..

Jaise he pair tk huye..


Meane apne aapko sayi kiya or fir us jungle mea east disha ke taraf chlane lagga..

Muje is waqt malum ni tha kis disha me janna he muje par fir b muje lag raha tha ki east direction he sahi hogi qki suraj ki pehli kiran se he muje wo talab dikhega or suraj east side se aata he hea isliye me ussi disha mea chalne lagga..

Kuch dur jaane par fir muje wahi pedo ka saamna karna padda jinhe mene aaram se jalakar khak kardiya..

Abi suraj ugne me sirf 1 ghanta bacha tha..

Mere pass kafi kam samay tha isliye mea teji se aage badne lagga..

Abi mea kuch dur he gaya tha ki muje bhediye ki awaje aayi..

Par bhediye ke awaj mea me dard mehsoos kar paa raha tha..


(Muje sabi janwaro ki language aati he yaha tak insano me b jitni b language ho wo b..

Ye sab mene training ke doran grantho se sikha tha)

Isliye mea teaji us disha me chalne lagga..

Me thoda aage aaya tha ki muje wo bhediya dik gaya uske per ke aarpar ek badda sa katta gussa hua tha..

Mea jaldi se uske pass gaya or uske pair ko jispar katta lagga tha usse apne hatho me pakda or bhediya se kha..


(Yaha mene uski language mea baat ke thi par hindi mea bataunga)..

Aaryan - Daro mat mea tumhari madat kar sakta hu..


Bas tum shant raho..

Bhediya pehlea toa muje apni basha bolta dek chaunka par is waqt usse dard b kafi horaha tha isliye usne meri baat mani or shant hogaya..

Mene uske pair se katte ko ek he baar me khich kar nikla jisse usse or dard hua par fir b wo usse control kar raha tha tabi..

Mene apne bag se healing water nikala or usse ek gut pila diya..

Jisse uske per ka gaav kuch he der me tk hogaya..

Ab wo puri taraha fit hochuka tha..

Bhediyene khade hote huye mujse kaha..

Bhediya - Shukriya meri madat karne ke liyea..


Mera naam rakha hea or mea is jungle ke bhediyon ka sartaj hu..

Tum yaha ke toa ni hoa..

Tumhe yaha se jaldi chale jana chahiye anyata wo Zoya chudail tumhe b yaha kaid kar ke apna gulam banadegi...

Aaryan - Tum uski chinta mat karo..


Mea yaha wo jaduyi khanjar lene aaya hu..


Kya tum muje bata sakte ho wo talab kaha he jaha wo khanjardasha hua hea pathar mea..

B rakha - Tumne meri madat ki he isliye tumhe zarur batunga par uski raksha wo Zoya kar rahi hea...

Or aaj tak usse koi nai harra paya he kewal us khanjar ke malik ko chodkar..

Isliye us khanjar ki wo raksha kar rahi hea taki apne malik ke aane par wo khanjar unhe lota sake..

Aaryan - dhanyawad dost bas muje waha ka rasta batado tum qki suryoday se pehle muje waha pohach na hoga..

B rakha - Chalo fir tum meri pit par bet jaau..


Mea tumhe waha jald he pohacha dunga..


Par mea us zoya se ladne mea tumhari koi madat ni karunga qki mere saare log uske tilism mea fase huye hea..

Mea chahkar b unhe ni bacha sakta..

Aaryan - Tum uski chinta na karo..


Tumhare logon ko b uske tilism se chuda dunga..

Itna bol mea uski pit par beth gaya or wo rakha teji se doudne lagga.

Or kuch hi der doudne ke baad wo ruka or mujse bola .

B rakha - Yaha se tumhe akele he jana hoga..

Issi disha mea kuch dur chalne par tumhe us mayavi chudail ka ashiyana dikhayi dega..


Uske tk piche he wo talab he jaha wo khanjar laga hua hea..

Rakha ki baat sun mene usse ek baar or dhanyawad kaha fir uss disha mea chalne lagga..
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Tabi a raghav nea muje roka or bole bas aarayn agar tumne isse or bara kiya toa iske heat se he duniya tabha na hojaye..





‌a raghav ki baat maan meane gole mea se diredire apni urja kam karne lagga jisse uska aakar b chota hogaya fir vo gayab hogaya...





‌kuch der or mene aise he thodi der energy control karne ki practice ki fir ghar aagaya...

Ab aage....

Aise he 4 din tak mea apni energy ko control kar ussea ladne ke tarike sikhne lagga..

Aise karte huye muje hamesa mehsoos hota ki ismea kuch toa missing hea...

Mea har bar apne energy ko shape dene ke kosis karta par ho he nai paraha tha...

Mea sirf energy balls he bana sakta tha...


Par muje isse b aage badna tha par


Na jane kuch toa aisa tha mere andar jo meri energy ko rok raha tha..

Bohot bar training kedoran aisa lagta ki meri energy se he mera sarir fat jayega par tabi wo apne app kam ho jati..

Mea ek limit tak he sab kar paa raha tha...

Mene apni iss duwida ko a raghav or guru y ke b saamne rakha..


Meri bate sun dono muje ajib nazro se dekhne lagee..

{. Guru y apne man me- Bhaiya kya isse wo us khajar ke bareme batana chahiye..

A raghav apne man me - Sayad ye usse control kar leaga..


Agar usne us khanjar ko pa liya toa iski soyi huyi kuch saktiya zarur jaag jayegi...

Guru Y - baat toa tk bhaiya par is khanjar ki raksha wo mayavi chudail zoya kar rahi hea..


Aaryan ko abi uske saamne bejna tk hoga kya..

A raghav - aaj nai toa kal ussea ye karna he tha..


Or us tantrik se ladne se pehlea aarayn ke liye ek acha abyas b hoga or agar aaryan musibat mea pada toa uske dono rakshak toa he hi uske sath hamesa...

Guru y - tk hea bhaiya mea aarayn ko uske bareme bata ta hu fir.. }

Guru y - Aaryan agar tumhe apni energy ko apne man mutabik hatyar mea tabdil karna he toa uske liye tumhe ek chij ki jarurat hogi..

Aaryan - Kya hea aisa guruji bataye muje..


Mea apni energy ko pure tarike se use karna chahta hu...

Guru y - Aaryan tumhe aisa karne ke liyea ek jaduyi khanjar ki jarurat hogi jo yaha se bohot dur hea..


Or uski raksha b ek mayavi chudail kar rahi hea..

A raghav - Tumhe agar us khanjar ko pana hea toa uss chudail ke changul se us khanzar ko lanahoga..

Aarayn - Me zarur us khanjar ko pane ki puri kosis karunga guruji..


Par agar wo jagha yaha se dur hea toa mea waha pochunga kaise..

Guru y - Uski chinta nayi hea aaryan wo toa ham tumhe waha pochha denge par us chudail ko tum mar nai sakte usse mahadev se wardan prapt hea..

Aaryan - Fir guruji us khanjar ko me kaise hasil karunga..

A raghav - Aaryan iska jawab tumhare apne pass he hea..


Tum hea he kuch soch kar ussea harana hoga or us khanjar ko pana hoga tabi he tum puri tarha se apni energy ko control kar paoge..

Guru y - Beta is baat ko yaad rakhna jo abi a raghav ne kahi hea..

Uss chudail ko harane ka rasta tumhare andar he hea..


Bas jo ab tak tumne sikha hea usse use karna..

Aaryan - Tk hea guru y..


Toa fir kab jana hoga muje us khanjar ko lane..

A raghav - Aaryan abi he chale jav...


Mea tumhe sidhe ussijungle mea chod dunga jaha wo khanjar hea..Wo khanjar jungle me talab ke bicho bich ek pathar par dhasha hua hea..

Tum jab uss khanjar ke ass pass hoge toa wo khanjar ke saktiya tum mehsoos kar paoge or wo tumhe apne taraf khichea gi...

Guru y - Par yaad rakhna wo mayavi chudail hea uski raksha ke liye..

Or usne uss jungle mea tarha tarha ke view rache honge apne tilism se..

Or tumhe un sab se bachte huye uss khanjar tak pohach na hea..

Bas apne man ko shant rakhna har muskil ka jawab tumhare andar he hea bas shant dimag se socho ge toa wo chudail tumhara kuch ni bigar payegi...

Aaryan - Ji guru y mea dyan rakhunga..

A raghav - Aaryan tumhe waha jane se pehlea agar kuch sath lena ho jisse tumhe madat mile toa lea lo..

Qki waqt kam hea wo khanjar tumhe tab he dikhega jab suraj ki kirne us talab par giregi..

Or ye sab sirf 5 min ke liye he hota hea..

A raghav ke baat sun mene apne sath apni ek talwar or khanjar le liyea jisse mea training karta tha..


Or sath he wo jadibuti wala pani b jiise gaav bar jaate hea jo mea vedo ko pad shika tha..

Pehlea uss jadibuti ke pani se gaav barne mea 1 ghanta leta tha par ab mene ussmea kuch or jadibutiyo ko milakar ussea itna powerful banadiya hea ki..

Gaav b turant bar jaate hea or sari takhawat b turant he dur hojati hea..

Apne jarurato ke chije lene ke baad mea a raghav ke pass gaya ..

Unhone mere sar par hath rakha or unke hatho se ek roshni mereandar ane lagi..

Us roshni kea merwandar aate hea mere ankhe chamak ne lagi or unmea se nilli roshni aane lagii..

5 min muje normal hone mea lagge..

Jab mea normal hua toa mere aankhe blue colorke hogayi thi.


Or ab muje kafi dur tak ka dikh raha tha..

Tabi a raghav bole..

A raghav - aaryan abi mene tumhe durdristi ki shakti di hea...

Iski tumhe us mayavijungle mea bohot jarurat hogi..

Waha kadam kadam par traps honge jo tumhe ab asani se dikhenge par fir b dyan rakhna tum..

Aaryan - Sukriya a raghav...


Mea us khanjar ko pake he rahunga..

Itna bol menea dono ka aashirwad liya..

Tabi a raghav ne dono hatho ko gol gol ghumaya or unme se bijliya chamkane lagi or hamare saamne ek portal sa khul gaya...

Portal ke uss taraf andhera dikh raha tha..


Mea heran tha qki ye mene pehli bar dekha tha..

Tabi guru y bole..

Guru y - Beta iss portal ke us par wo jungle hea..

Yaha se aage tumhe akele he jana hoga.


Meri baat yaad rakhna shant dimag se socho ge toa har muskil ka jawab tumhare he pass milega..

Apna dyan rakhna...

Mene dono ka ek bar fir aashirwad liya or uss portal mea chalagaya..

Portal mea guste he muje ajib se tarange mehsoos hone lagi..


Aisa lag raha tha ki mea bijli ke darwaje se gujar raha hu...

Mea jese he portal ke uss par gaya toa mea chaunk gaya tha qki...

Hope u all enjoy this one..


N kuch suggestion ho toa jarur dena..??
very nice update bhai
 
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Itna bol mea uski pit par beth gaya or wo rakha teji se doudne lagga.

Or kuch hi der doudne ke baad wo ruka or mujse bola .

B rakha - Yaha se tumhe akele he jana hoga..

Issi disha mea kuch dur chalne par tumhe us mayavi chudail ka ashiyana dikhayi dega..


Uske tk piche he wo talab he jaha wo khanjar laga hua hea..

Rakha ki baat sun mene usse ek baar or dhanyawad kaha fir uss disha mea chalne lagga..

Ab aage..

Mea jaise aage badda samne ka najara dekh mea chaunk gaya tha??

Qki mere saamne us chudail ka thikana tha..

Saala aisa lagra tha bhuto ka adda ho wo..

Pure jungle me hare bare ped the par ye salla pura ped he kalla tha or size me b itna bada tha ki kya batau..

Ye sayad bargad ka ped tha..

Ped se lambi lambi tehnia latak rahi thi wo b kali kali..

Ek bar toa mea b thoda gabra gaya tha ye najara dekh..

Par fir b khud par control kar mea aage bada..

Or jaise he me us ped ke taraf apna kadam badaya ..

Ek jor ke jatke ke sath mea piche udta hua gaya..

Or tik piche ek ped se takraya..

Jatka itna jor se tha ki jis ped se mea takraya wo ped aadha tut gaya tha...

Abi mea thoda sambal he tha ki mere saamne wale kale ped se jade mere taraf aane lagi or mere hath per jakad liyea usnea..

Ab mea hava mea zul raha tha..

Mea is waqt hava mea X ki taraha latak raha tha..

Par mea kuch kar b ni paa raha tha..


Bohot kosis ki fir b mea apne hath pero ko chuda ni paa raha tha..

Tabi mere saamne kalla duva uthne lagga..

Or pure jungle mea chamakadaro ki awaj aane lagi..

Havaye kafi tej chal rahi thi..

Us ped ke tk upar bijliya chamak rahi thi..

Kul milkar salla mohol bhutiya hogaya tha..

Tabi vo kalla duva chatne lagga or mere saamne kale kapdo mea ek ladki khadi thi



Uska rup dekh toa mea hang hogaya tha qki mene kabi chudail toa ni dekhi thi par jo socha tha usse toa ye wali bohot he sundar thi sath he ajib b..

Khair mea abi usko gur he raha tha ki wo mere pass aayi or mujse boli..

Chudail - Kon ho tum..


Or yaha aaneke himat kaise huyi tumhari..

Aaryan - Mera naam Aaryan he or mea yaha jaduyi khanjar lene aaya hu..

Meri baate sun wo chudail hasne lagi or boli..

Chudail - bache abi b waqt he challa ja chod dungi tuje mea..

Warna aaj tak jo b yaha aaya he uski lash tak yaha se lautna saki..

Itna bol fir se wo apni daravni hasi hasne lagi..

Aaryan - Chahe kuch b ho jaye mea us khanjar ko yaha se lekar he jaunga..

Or aisa karne se koi b muje ni rok sakta..


Tum b nai..

Mera itna he bolna tha ki us chudail ne apna hath hava me kiya or uske hath me hunter aagaya or wo us hunter se muje marne lagii


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Par hunter ki mar ka toa mujpar koi asar ni horaha tha..

Qki isse kai guna jadda mene sehen sakti ki training ke waqt dard jela tha...

Kuch der muje marne par b muje kuch na hote dekh usne hunter fir ek barr hava mea gol ghumaya or fir muje marne lagi..

Par isbar hunter se bijliya gir rahi thi..

Muje issea b jadda farak ni pad rahatha par hunter ki maar or bijli ke wajase mera T-shirt fat gaya tha or mere chest par jagga jagga hunter or bijli ke jalne ke nishan hogaye the..

Fir mea bola..

Aaryan - Hath band toa koi b kisse b mar saktay..


Mene toa socha tha zoya chudail bohot taqatwar hogi..

Par tum toa buzdil nikli jo kayaron ke jaise hath pav band muje mar rahi ho..


Dam he toa hath khola fir batata hu tumhe..

Meri batao se uski bohot jali??

Isliye usne mere hath pair aajad kardiye..

Hath pair aazad hote he mea thoda angadayi lete huye usse bola..

Aaryan - Ha ab dekhte he mayavi zoya me kitna dam he...

Itna bol mene apni talwar jo apne pit par lagi hui thi usse bahar nikala or apna stance lea liya..

Mere tayar hote hee..

Zoya ne b apne hunter ko talwar me badal liya or mujpar war karne ke liyea aage badne lagi..

Usne apni talwar se mere sar par war kiya par mene block kar liya..

Fir usne chest par kiya wo b block..

Fir sar par fir block..

Mea uske saare war sirf block he kar raha tha..

Or ek opening milne ka intazar kar raha tha taki mea us par war kar saku par zoya lagatar attack he kare ja rahi thi or mea block..

Par mere pass jadda samay ni tha isliye muje jo b karna tha jaldi karna tha..

Par zoya apne waro ko block hota dekh mujpar energy ball se hamla kiya or mea isske liye tayar ni tha..

Iske wajase energy ball lagte he mea kale ped se ja takraya or us ped ki kuch tahaniya b tut gayi..

Par zoya yaha nai ruki or mujpar lagatar energy balls fekne lagi..

Energy ball lagne ke wajase me kafi gayal hochuka tha..

Zoya mere pass aakar mujse boli..

Zoya - Q itna he dam hea..


Abi toa badi badi batte kar rahe the..

Ab muje gussa ane lagga tha par zoya se head to head fight mea me jit ni sakta tha ..


Or mere pass samay b nai hea..

Ek toa wo amar he upar se chudail b..

Oo yes idea mea apne man me bola or apne hath se ek energy ball banayi or jaise he zoya mere pass aayi uspar fek de..

Ye sab achanak hua tha isliye zoya tayar nai thi..

Or meri energy ball lagte hi wo piche ki taraf gir padi..

Meri energy ball ke wajase waha halka dua sa hogya tha..

Diye mea kuch saaf nai dik raha tha par mere pass a raghav ki di hui sakti thi isliye mea aram se dekh paa raha tha..

Par us zoya ko kuch ni dikh raha tha isi baat ka fayda uthakar meane apna khanjar jo mea apne sath layya tha usse nikala or zoya ke taraf baghaa or uske piche aate he uski choti kaat di apne khanjar..

Choti katte he mea jor se chillaya ..

Aaryan - Ye Yes yes I did it..


Yahoo ..

Itna bol mea uchalne lagga..

Or yaha jo kuch b hua ispar zoya ko yakeen he ni horaha tha..

Zoya dadham se apne ghutno ke bal niche beth gayi..

Or rone lagi..

Par muje ye baat bohot ajeeb lagi par mene uspar kuch khass dyan nai diya..

Or us kale ped ke piche jo talab tha us taraf bagne lagga qki ab mere pass samay kafi kam tha or qki kuch he seconds me suraj ki kirne talab par girne wali he..

Jaise mea talab ke pass pohacha tabi suraj tk us talab ke upar agaya tha or uski kirne talab par girne lagi thi..

Suraj ki kirne talab par girte he saamne jo najara tha dekh mea ussi me kho gaya..

Kya tha aisa jaane ke liye nxt update ka wait kare..
 
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