Fantasy MERI JINDAGI(FANTASY+MAGIC+THRILLER) [completed]

[Smith_15]

Next update please

 

[Bilal jan]

UPDATE 45

Tabi sagar par pichese hamla hua jiise wo rukkator tabi usse charo tarafse black dragons ne gher liya
Wahi ankit ka b yahi haal tha usse b rosel samet charo tarafse gher rakha tha..

Wo sabi b dragons bane huye the or sagar par hamla he karne wale the ki tabi mea lava se udte huye bahar aaya..
Or mene apne hath se ice beam bana unsabi black dragons par pheke jiske lagte he wo sabi wahi jam gaye..

(Ab aap sab sochoge ki muje ice beam se hamla karna kabse aagaya toa batadu ki ye attack meane abi 1st tym use kiya or abi abi he sikha or wo kese toa usske liye thora flashback mea chalte hea..

Drake muje apne sath pakad lava mea girgaya tha..
Lava me jate he mere pehne huye saare kapde jalgaye the..
Wahi drake ka sarir ek dam se ek nilli roshni mea badal gaya or mere saamne aa uss roshni mea se awajaai..

Maaf karna malik mea aapko jite ji toa pehchan nai paya..
Par ab apna deh tyagane ke baad muje pata chal gaya he ki aap kon ho..
He bhagya vidhata muje apni kiye par pachtava he or mea shmaa praarti hu..
Kripiya kar muje shama kare jisse muje moksh prapt hosake .

Uski baate sun ek pal ko toa muje mehoome hua ki mea kitna mahan hu ya tha..
Par muje yee baat ajeeb lagi ki drake ek roshni me kaise badal gaya..

Jisse sayad drake b samaj gaya tha or wobola..

Malik ham dragons mea marte he hamara sarir ek roshni mea badal jata hea..
Or agar hame kisine harakar mara ho toa hame jaate jaate apni taqate b usse deni hoti hea .
Mea b isliye ruka hua hu..

Itna bol wo nilli roshni tej hone laggi or mere andar samagayi..

Jiise andar se drake ki awaj aai..
Maalik ab meri saari taqate aapki hui..
Muje pata he aapko inki jarurat nai hea qki aap pehle he sarvashaktiman ho par aapki udne ki ability jo ab tak aapko mili nai he wo ab aapko mil chuki hea sath he ab aap ham dragons ka weak point yaani ab ice beam b use kar sakoge..)
{Back to present}

Mere ice beam attack se drako ko chod waha majood sabi black dragons jaam chuke the..

Ab waha sirf mea ankit sagar rosel jo ki behka thi abi b or drako bache the..

Drako apne saamne muje or apne sabi sathiyo ka hasar dekh dargaya tha..
Or jab uski najar mere body par bane tattospar gayi (back or front dono he qki mea iss waqt pura nanga tha)
.usse dekh wo apne gutno ke bal beth apna hath apna dil par rakh sar jukaye huye bola.

Maa maaf karna maalik mea aapko pehchan nai paya..
Muje sama karye gaa..

Ye sab bolte huye drako buri tarha kaap raha tha..
Jisse dekh meri hassi chutgayi or mene usse kaha..

Ab tum muje jaan he chuke ho toa pehle sahi se khade ho jau..
Or mere liye pehle kuch kapde lau..

Wo jatse khade ho bhagte huye pashi ke gufa me gaya or mere liye kapde lekar aaya..

Jinhe pehne ke baad mea chalte huye rosel ke taraf gaya jo abi b behosh thi..
Usko apni baho mea pakad mene uske sar par kiss kiya jisse rosel ne muje behoshi ke halat me b jakad liya or fir mere kuch der hilane par usse hosh aaya..

Or muje apne saamne sahi salamat dekh usne muje jatse gale laga liya or mere chere par har jagha chumne lagi..
Jisse mera face pura gilla hogaya..

Ye toa acha hua ki sagar or ankit b chalte huye hamre pass aagaye jinhe dekh wo rukh gayi warna ye toa rukne ka naam he nai leh rahi thi..

Undono ke pass aate he mene ek baar dono ko gusse se dekha man toa kiya ki dono ka muu tod du..
Par mea dekhna chahta ki ye dono sahi mea mere sath hea ya kisi or ke..

Qki muje pata chal chuka tha
Ki indono ne mujse kahi baate chupayi hea qki mene drako ka man padliya tha jisse muje pata chala ki ankit yaha pehle q aaya tha..
Par mea intino ka man nai pad paa raha tha jisse muje kya thi puri baat pata nai chal paa rahi thi..

Isliye mene apne expression change karte huye undono se kaha toa ab mt.thunder par charne ki surwat kahase karni he..

Jispar sagar ne kaha..
Surwat toa iss gufa ke uss par se he..

Usne uss gufa ke taraf isara kiya jaha se drako aaya tha abi..

Tabi mene drako ko apne pass bulaya or usse mt.thunder ke base tak lejane ko kaha.

Usne sirf haa me gardan hilayi or hame uske piche aaneko kaha .

Hamsabi uske sath chal gufa par karne lagge..
Or gufa par karte he hamare saamne ek bohot he ucha pahad tha jiska top badlo mea chupa hua tha..

Or upar ke taraf ishare karte huye drako bola..

Malik aapko upar tak sagar ke sath jana hoga..
Waha aage ek shield hea jisse sirf jode he par kar sakte hea..
Jaisi ki aap or sagar he..
Uss shield ko par karne ke baad aap dono me se ek pahad ki choti par jaa sakta hea jaha thunder crown rakha hua hea..
Or
Jaha tak mea samaj paya hu aap he choti tak jaaoge toa aapko wo thunder crown utha apne sar par rakhna hea..

Jisse aapne upar bijliya girne lagegi or jab tak aap un bijiliyo se tej bhaag unhe dodge nai kar lete tab tak naa toa aap uss crown ka nikal paaoge naahe mt.thunder se niche aa paoge.
Nahi koi aapki isme kisi b prakar ki madad kar payega..

Aapke aisa karte he aapme thunderstorm ki taqat aajayegi or aapki speed light se b fast hojayegi..

Uski baate sun rosel ne mera right shoulder kaske pakadliya or mujse chipakte huye boli

Tumhe koi risk leni ki jarurat ni he uss crown ke liye..
Pls tum aisa nai karoge..

Ye sab wo kisi bache ke tarha bol rahi thi jisse wo kafi cute lag rahi thi..

Isliye uske sar par kiss karte huye mene usse samjate huye kaha ki maaf karna rosel par muje mt.thunder par jana he hoga..
Qki isse meri behen ka future juda hea..
Or meri behen ke liye mea kuch b kar sakta hu..
Tum chinta mat karo muje kuch ni hoga..

Mere musee behen ka sunke rosel sagar ke taraf sawaliya najrose dekhne laggi jisse sagar ne usse chup rehne kaa ishara kiya..

Jisse mene dekh liya tha..
Par kuch bola nai..

Or fir sagar dragon mea badal gaya or fir mene rosel ke lips par ek chota sa kiss kar sagar ke pit par bethgaya or fir wo upar le taraf udne lagga..

Kuch he der udne par jab mene niche dekha toa ham kafi upar aachuke the..
Badlo ke karan niche ka kuch sahi se b ni dikh raha tha..

Or kuch he der me hamne wo shield par ki jiske bareme drako ne bataya tha..

Usse paar karte he mea aage badne lagga bina sagar se koi baat kiye tabi..
Pichese sagar ki awaaj aai..

Apna dyan rakhna bhai..

Jab mene sagar ko bolte huye uske face pe dekha toa uske face par mere liye muje fikar saaf dhulayi di jisse muje ye toa samaj aagaya tha ki sagar or ankit jo kuch b kar rahe he jarur usme mera he hit hoga..

Mene b muskurate huye haa kaha or aage badgaya..
 

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[Smith_15]

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[Bilal jan]

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[Naik]

UPDATE 45

Tabi sagar par pichese hamla hua jiise wo rukkator tabi usse charo tarafse black dragons ne gher liya
Wahi ankit ka b yahi haal tha usse b rosel samet charo tarafse gher rakha tha..

Wo sabi b dragons bane huye the or sagar par hamla he karne wale the ki tabi mea lava se udte huye bahar aaya..
Or mene apne hath se ice beam bana unsabi black dragons par pheke jiske lagte he wo sabi wahi jam gaye..

(Ab aap sab sochoge ki muje ice beam se hamla karna kabse aagaya toa batadu ki ye attack meane abi 1st tym use kiya or abi abi he sikha or wo kese toa usske liye thora flashback mea chalte hea..

Drake muje apne sath pakad lava mea girgaya tha..
Lava me jate he mere pehne huye saare kapde jalgaye the..
Wahi drake ka sarir ek dam se ek nilli roshni mea badal gaya or mere saamne aa uss roshni mea se awajaai..

Maaf karna malik mea aapko jite ji toa pehchan nai paya..
Par ab apna deh tyagane ke baad muje pata chal gaya he ki aap kon ho..
He bhagya vidhata muje apni kiye par pachtava he or mea shmaa praarti hu..
Kripiya kar muje shama kare jisse muje moksh prapt hosake .

Uski baate sun ek pal ko toa muje mehoome hua ki mea kitna mahan hu ya tha..
Par muje yee baat ajeeb lagi ki drake ek roshni me kaise badal gaya..

Jisse sayad drake b samaj gaya tha or wobola..

Malik ham dragons mea marte he hamara sarir ek roshni mea badal jata hea..
Or agar hame kisine harakar mara ho toa hame jaate jaate apni taqate b usse deni hoti hea .
Mea b isliye ruka hua hu..

Itna bol wo nilli roshni tej hone laggi or mere andar samagayi..

Jiise andar se drake ki awaj aai..
Maalik ab meri saari taqate aapki hui..
Muje pata he aapko inki jarurat nai hea qki aap pehle he sarvashaktiman ho par aapki udne ki ability jo ab tak aapko mili nai he wo ab aapko mil chuki hea sath he ab aap ham dragons ka weak point yaani ab ice beam b use kar sakoge..)
{Back to present}

Mere ice beam attack se drako ko chod waha majood sabi black dragons jaam chuke the..

Ab waha sirf mea ankit sagar rosel jo ki behka thi abi b or drako bache the..

Drako apne saamne muje or apne sabi sathiyo ka hasar dekh dargaya tha..
Or jab uski najar mere body par bane tattospar gayi (back or front dono he qki mea iss waqt pura nanga tha)
.usse dekh wo apne gutno ke bal beth apna hath apna dil par rakh sar jukaye huye bola.

Maa maaf karna maalik mea aapko pehchan nai paya..
Muje sama karye gaa..

Ye sab bolte huye drako buri tarha kaap raha tha..
Jisse dekh meri hassi chutgayi or mene usse kaha..

Ab tum muje jaan he chuke ho toa pehle sahi se khade ho jau..
Or mere liye pehle kuch kapde lau..

Wo jatse khade ho bhagte huye pashi ke gufa me gaya or mere liye kapde lekar aaya..

Jinhe pehne ke baad mea chalte huye rosel ke taraf gaya jo abi b behosh thi..
Usko apni baho mea pakad mene uske sar par kiss kiya jisse rosel ne muje behoshi ke halat me b jakad liya or fir mere kuch der hilane par usse hosh aaya..

Or muje apne saamne sahi salamat dekh usne muje jatse gale laga liya or mere chere par har jagha chumne lagi..
Jisse mera face pura gilla hogaya..

Ye toa acha hua ki sagar or ankit b chalte huye hamre pass aagaye jinhe dekh wo rukh gayi warna ye toa rukne ka naam he nai leh rahi thi..

Undono ke pass aate he mene ek baar dono ko gusse se dekha man toa kiya ki dono ka muu tod du..
Par mea dekhna chahta ki ye dono sahi mea mere sath hea ya kisi or ke..

Qki muje pata chal chuka tha
Ki indono ne mujse kahi baate chupayi hea qki mene drako ka man padliya tha jisse muje pata chala ki ankit yaha pehle q aaya tha..
Par mea intino ka man nai pad paa raha tha jisse muje kya thi puri baat pata nai chal paa rahi thi..

Isliye mene apne expression change karte huye undono se kaha toa ab mt.thunder par charne ki surwat kahase karni he..

Jispar sagar ne kaha..
Surwat toa iss gufa ke uss par se he..

Usne uss gufa ke taraf isara kiya jaha se drako aaya tha abi..

Tabi mene drako ko apne pass bulaya or usse mt.thunder ke base tak lejane ko kaha.

Usne sirf haa me gardan hilayi or hame uske piche aaneko kaha .

Hamsabi uske sath chal gufa par karne lagge..
Or gufa par karte he hamare saamne ek bohot he ucha pahad tha jiska top badlo mea chupa hua tha..

Or upar ke taraf ishare karte huye drako bola..

Malik aapko upar tak sagar ke sath jana hoga..
Waha aage ek shield hea jisse sirf jode he par kar sakte hea..
Jaisi ki aap or sagar he..
Uss shield ko par karne ke baad aap dono me se ek pahad ki choti par jaa sakta hea jaha thunder crown rakha hua hea..
Or
Jaha tak mea samaj paya hu aap he choti tak jaaoge toa aapko wo thunder crown utha apne sar par rakhna hea..

Jisse aapne upar bijliya girne lagegi or jab tak aap un bijiliyo se tej bhaag unhe dodge nai kar lete tab tak naa toa aap uss crown ka nikal paaoge naahe mt.thunder se niche aa paoge.
Nahi koi aapki isme kisi b prakar ki madad kar payega..

Aapke aisa karte he aapme thunderstorm ki taqat aajayegi or aapki speed light se b fast hojayegi..

Uski baate sun rosel ne mera right shoulder kaske pakadliya or mujse chipakte huye boli

Tumhe koi risk leni ki jarurat ni he uss crown ke liye..
Pls tum aisa nai karoge..

Ye sab wo kisi bache ke tarha bol rahi thi jisse wo kafi cute lag rahi thi..

Isliye uske sar par kiss karte huye mene usse samjate huye kaha ki maaf karna rosel par muje mt.thunder par jana he hoga..
Qki isse meri behen ka future juda hea..
Or meri behen ke liye mea kuch b kar sakta hu..
Tum chinta mat karo muje kuch ni hoga..

Mere musee behen ka sunke rosel sagar ke taraf sawaliya najrose dekhne laggi jisse sagar ne usse chup rehne kaa ishara kiya..

Jisse mene dekh liya tha..
Par kuch bola nai..

Or fir sagar dragon mea badal gaya or fir mene rosel ke lips par ek chota sa kiss kar sagar ke pit par bethgaya or fir wo upar le taraf udne lagga..

Kuch he der udne par jab mene niche dekha toa ham kafi upar aachuke the..
Badlo ke karan niche ka kuch sahi se b ni dikh raha tha..

Or kuch he der me hamne wo shield par ki jiske bareme drako ne bataya tha..

Usse paar karte he mea aage badne lagga bina sagar se koi baat kiye tabi..
Pichese sagar ki awaaj aai..

Apna dyan rakhna bhai..

Jab mene sagar ko bolte huye uske face pe dekha toa uske face par mere liye muje fikar saaf dhulayi di jisse muje ye toa samaj aagaya tha ki sagar or ankit jo kuch b kar rahe he jarur usme mera he hit hoga..

Mene b muskurate huye haa kaha or aage badgaya..
 

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[Hero tera]

UPDATE 46

Sagar se baat kar mea aaga bad choti ke taraf chadne lagga..

Or kuch der ki masakat ke baad mea upar chadgaya..

Upar aate he yaha ka watawaran dekh mere rongte khade hogaye the..
Qki mea iss waqt jameen se bohot bohot upar tha or yea jagha puri tarikese badlo se giri hui thi jo ki iss waqt safed rang ke the..

Or in sabi me bicho bich top par char pilar khade the jinke bich me ek crown rakha hua tha jispar diamond se thunder ka nishan bana hua tha jo ki uss crown ko or b attractive bana raha tha..

Mea dhire dhire us crown ke taraf badne laga..
Or jese jese mea uske taraf bad raha tha mere pet mea gud gud horahi thi..

Aisa lag raha ki wo crown he muje uske taraf khich raha hea..

Or jab mea uss crown ke karib pohcha toa mene kapte huye hato se uss crown ko uthaya or ek baar aankhe band kar kajal ko yaad kiya jiske liye muje ye karna he tha..

Or mere aankhe band karte he mere samne kajal ka hasta hua chera aaya..
Or wo bhagte huye mere pass he aarahi thi..

Bhai bhai bulate huye..
Par tabi achanak uski awaj ani band hui or jo drishya mea dekh paa raha tha wo b aane band hogaye..

Or meri ankhe khul gayi..

Aankhe khultay he mene wo crown ko pehen liye..
Or turant he jis jagha se mene crown uthaya tha waha bohot badi bijli giri jiske chalte uss jagha ke pass khade hone ke karan mea b uske chapet mea aagaya or mere pehne huye kapde ek baar fir jal gaye..

Or mea wahi jameen par leta para tha..
Bijli ke karan pure sarir mea siran se doudne lagi thi..
Jis wajase muje kuch waqt lagga fir sambhalne mea..

Par abi mea fir khada ho pata ke tabi ek baar fir mere upar bijli giri...
Or mera pura sarir junjala sa gaya..
Bhale he mere upar uska koi gaav nai dikhrahatha..
Par muje kafi dard ho raha tha..
Or mea dard se sambhal pata usse pehle he mere upar. Fir bijli girti..

Or aisa lagatar kuch ganto tak chala..
Or mea ab behosh ho chuka tha..
Muje pata nai chala ye kab hua..
Par jab muje hosh aaya toa mea abi b wahi choti par nang awastha mea leta hua tha..
Or abi b bijli ke karan mere pure sarir mea dard ho raha tha..

Ek pal ko toa mere dimagh mea vichar b aaya ki mea sayad he ye kar paunga par dusre he pal kaju ka hasta hua chera mere aankho ke samne aaya jisse dekh mere aankho se do bund aasu chalak pare..

Muje wo bohot yaad aarahi thi wo kis haal me hogi mea yahi soch raha tha..

Or waha laksdweep mea .
Zoya or uski sabi behne mil kaju ko sambhal rahe the..
Jiska ro ro ke bura haal hochuka tha..
Or wo rote huye kehne lagi .

Didi muje bhai ke pass jana he..
Aap ne kaha tha wo aaj aayenge par wo abi tak nai aaye .
Or aap meri baat b nai karwarahe ho unse muje nai pata muje bhai ke pass jana he plss didi...

Zoya or uski behno ne lakh kosis ki usse chup karane ki samjane ki par wo thi ki manne ko tayar he ni thi..

Or aise he rote rote wo sogayi..
Par nind mea b wo aaryan ka naam pukar rahi thi..

Wahi zoya or uski beheno ne jab kajal ka uske bhai ke prati lagav dekha toa unke b aankho se aasu behne lagge..
Or we sabi he aarayn se contact karne ki nakam kosis karne lagge..

Tabi zoya man me..
He baghwan aaryan jald lout aao tum ab..
Kajal ko or sambhalna ab muskil hota jaraha he hamare liye..
Or jab isse apne mom dad or bhai ke bareme pata chalega tab ham kya karenge..
Pls aaryan jald lout aao..

Yaha dusri taraf
Mea kafi heran tha ki achanak he meri sarir ki sari thakavat or dard apne aap dur hogaye par ispar jada na sochte huye mea uss crown ki taqate pane ke liye ab mene bijliyo se bachne ki kosis karni suru kardi thi..

Jisme mea kuch had tak safal raha par 2-3 bar dodge karte he mujpar fir bijli girti..
Par me ruka nai or lagatar 5 dino ki mehnat ke baad mene bijli ki sakti apna bana liya tha..
Or mea light se b tej tha..

Or iss training ke karan mera sarir pehle se b jada bal sali hogaya tha..
Or b kahi khubiya bad gayi thi meri..

Or jab mea choti se niche utar ne lagga tabi mere upar wahi sahi kapde aagaye jo mere or sagar ke judne ke baad aaye the..

Or jab mea niche pohcha toa sagar bhag ke aa mere gale mila or mera haal chal pucha or aisehi or baate karte huye ham pahad se niche ke taraf aagaye..

Jaha gufa ke pass he rosel ek pathar pe beth pahad ke taraf he dekh rahi thi or sagar ko aata dekh wo khadi or ek tak uss or dekhne lagi or jab uski najar mujpar pari toa usne bhagte huye meri taraf chalang lagadi or mere gale lag gayi..

Uske aise chalang lagane ke karan mea sagar ke pit ke upar se niche gir gaya or rosel mere upar..

Par rosel ko toa insab se kuch pari he nai thi .
Usne fir ek baar anda dun chumban ki barsat suru kardi thi mere face par..

Or tab tak karti rahi jab tak uska man nai bhara..
Or bahar ka sor sun drako or ankit b gufa se bahar aagaye or muje or sagar ko dekh unke chero par b muskan aagayi .


Fir aisehi kuch der hamara milan chala or fir ham mehel aagya waha b jashan ka mohol bana hua tha jab unhe ye sab pata chala..

Sagar ke pita or drako ne gale mil apne sare gile sikhwe dur kiye..
Or sari praja ne muje or aaryan ko apna malik maan liya tha..

Or waha ek din ruk..
Ab samay aagaya tha waha se wida lene ka..
Or jab ye baat rosel ko pata chali toa usne apne mata pita se mere sath janeki baat kahi jispar unhone bina kuch soche hami bhardi..
Or fir ham charo waha se nikal laksdweep aagaye uss bungalow mea jaha zoya or kajal ruke huye the..

Par waha pohach samne ka najara jab mene dekha tab mere aankho se betahasha aasu nikal ne lagge..

Doston story ka pehla part samapt hota hai fir milenge second part ke saath

 

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UPDATE 46

Sagar se baat kar mea aaga bad choti ke taraf chadne lagga..

Or kuch der ki masakat ke baad mea upar chadgaya..

Upar aate he yaha ka watawaran dekh mere rongte khade hogaye the..
Qki mea iss waqt jameen se bohot bohot upar tha or yea jagha puri tarikese badlo se giri hui thi jo ki iss waqt safed rang ke the..

Or in sabi me bicho bich top par char pilar khade the jinke bich me ek crown rakha hua tha jispar diamond se thunder ka nishan bana hua tha jo ki uss crown ko or b attractive bana raha tha..

Mea dhire dhire us crown ke taraf badne laga..
Or jese jese mea uske taraf bad raha tha mere pet mea gud gud horahi thi..

Aisa lag raha ki wo crown he muje uske taraf khich raha hea..

Or jab mea uss crown ke karib pohcha toa mene kapte huye hato se uss crown ko uthaya or ek baar aankhe band kar kajal ko yaad kiya jiske liye muje ye karna he tha..

Or mere aankhe band karte he mere samne kajal ka hasta hua chera aaya..
Or wo bhagte huye mere pass he aarahi thi..

Bhai bhai bulate huye..
Par tabi achanak uski awaj ani band hui or jo drishya mea dekh paa raha tha wo b aane band hogaye..

Or meri ankhe khul gayi..

Aankhe khultay he mene wo crown ko pehen liye..
Or turant he jis jagha se mene crown uthaya tha waha bohot badi bijli giri jiske chalte uss jagha ke pass khade hone ke karan mea b uske chapet mea aagaya or mere pehne huye kapde ek baar fir jal gaye..

Or mea wahi jameen par leta para tha..
Bijli ke karan pure sarir mea siran se doudne lagi thi..
Jis wajase muje kuch waqt lagga fir sambhalne mea..

Par abi mea fir khada ho pata ke tabi ek baar fir mere upar bijli giri...
Or mera pura sarir junjala sa gaya..
Bhale he mere upar uska koi gaav nai dikhrahatha..
Par muje kafi dard ho raha tha..
Or mea dard se sambhal pata usse pehle he mere upar. Fir bijli girti..

Or aisa lagatar kuch ganto tak chala..
Or mea ab behosh ho chuka tha..
Muje pata nai chala ye kab hua..
Par jab muje hosh aaya toa mea abi b wahi choti par nang awastha mea leta hua tha..
Or abi b bijli ke karan mere pure sarir mea dard ho raha tha..

Ek pal ko toa mere dimagh mea vichar b aaya ki mea sayad he ye kar paunga par dusre he pal kaju ka hasta hua chera mere aankho ke samne aaya jisse dekh mere aankho se do bund aasu chalak pare..

Muje wo bohot yaad aarahi thi wo kis haal me hogi mea yahi soch raha tha..

Or waha laksdweep mea .
Zoya or uski sabi behne mil kaju ko sambhal rahe the..
Jiska ro ro ke bura haal hochuka tha..
Or wo rote huye kehne lagi .

Didi muje bhai ke pass jana he..
Aap ne kaha tha wo aaj aayenge par wo abi tak nai aaye .
Or aap meri baat b nai karwarahe ho unse muje nai pata muje bhai ke pass jana he plss didi...

Zoya or uski behno ne lakh kosis ki usse chup karane ki samjane ki par wo thi ki manne ko tayar he ni thi..

Or aise he rote rote wo sogayi..
Par nind mea b wo aaryan ka naam pukar rahi thi..

Wahi zoya or uski beheno ne jab kajal ka uske bhai ke prati lagav dekha toa unke b aankho se aasu behne lagge..
Or we sabi he aarayn se contact karne ki nakam kosis karne lagge..

Tabi zoya man me..
He baghwan aaryan jald lout aao tum ab..
Kajal ko or sambhalna ab muskil hota jaraha he hamare liye..
Or jab isse apne mom dad or bhai ke bareme pata chalega tab ham kya karenge..
Pls aaryan jald lout aao..

Yaha dusri taraf
Mea kafi heran tha ki achanak he meri sarir ki sari thakavat or dard apne aap dur hogaye par ispar jada na sochte huye mea uss crown ki taqate pane ke liye ab mene bijliyo se bachne ki kosis karni suru kardi thi..

Jisme mea kuch had tak safal raha par 2-3 bar dodge karte he mujpar fir bijli girti..
Par me ruka nai or lagatar 5 dino ki mehnat ke baad mene bijli ki sakti apna bana liya tha..
Or mea light se b tej tha..

Or iss training ke karan mera sarir pehle se b jada bal sali hogaya tha..
Or b kahi khubiya bad gayi thi meri..

Or jab mea choti se niche utar ne lagga tabi mere upar wahi sahi kapde aagaye jo mere or sagar ke judne ke baad aaye the..

Or jab mea niche pohcha toa sagar bhag ke aa mere gale mila or mera haal chal pucha or aisehi or baate karte huye ham pahad se niche ke taraf aagaye..

Jaha gufa ke pass he rosel ek pathar pe beth pahad ke taraf he dekh rahi thi or sagar ko aata dekh wo khadi or ek tak uss or dekhne lagi or jab uski najar mujpar pari toa usne bhagte huye meri taraf chalang lagadi or mere gale lag gayi..

Uske aise chalang lagane ke karan mea sagar ke pit ke upar se niche gir gaya or rosel mere upar..

Par rosel ko toa insab se kuch pari he nai thi .
Usne fir ek baar anda dun chumban ki barsat suru kardi thi mere face par..

Or tab tak karti rahi jab tak uska man nai bhara..
Or bahar ka sor sun drako or ankit b gufa se bahar aagaye or muje or sagar ko dekh unke chero par b muskan aagayi .


Fir aisehi kuch der hamara milan chala or fir ham mehel aagya waha b jashan ka mohol bana hua tha jab unhe ye sab pata chala..

Sagar ke pita or drako ne gale mil apne sare gile sikhwe dur kiye..
Or sari praja ne muje or aaryan ko apna malik maan liya tha..

Or waha ek din ruk..
Ab samay aagaya tha waha se wida lene ka..
Or jab ye baat rosel ko pata chali toa usne apne mata pita se mere sath janeki baat kahi jispar unhone bina kuch soche hami bhardi..
Or fir ham charo waha se nikal laksdweep aagaye uss bungalow mea jaha zoya or kajal ruke huye the..

Par waha pohach samne ka najara jab mene dekha tab mere aankho se betahasha aasu nikal ne lagge..

Doston story ka pehla part samapt hota hai fir milenge second part ke saath

Nice update

 

[Alok]

लाजबाव अपडेट भाई

 

[prince4luv]

uch he der udne par jab mene niche dekha toa ham kafi upar aachuke the..
Badlo ke karan niche ka kuch sahi se b ni dikh raha tha..

Or kuch he der me hamne wo shield par ki jiske bareme drako ne bataya tha..

Usse paar karte he mea aage badne lagga bina sagar se koi baat kiye tabi..
Pichese sagar ki awaaj aai..

Apna dyan rakhna bhai..

Jab mene sagar ko bolte huye uske face pe dekha toa uske face par mere liye muje fikar saaf dhulayi di jisse muje ye toa samaj aagaya tha ki sagar or ankit jo kuch b kar rahe he jarur usme mera he hit hoga..

Mene b muskurate huye haa kaha or aage badgaya..

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