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Incest Meri Maa ... Ab Meri Huyi (Fdom story)
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Hello maya ji.
Aapki kahani ek bahut alag kism ki approach hai jo maybe itne jaldi logo ko digest karne me problem ho rahi.
Jo ki maybe ek reason hai kam comments ka aur dusra reason jo me personally manta hu hai ki aapke update bahut hi slow hai.
Matlab aisa nahi ki aage growth nahi hi rahi kahani me but itni saari cheejen ek saath chhal rahi hai ki slow feel hoti hai.
Baaki kahani hai masaledar. I can sense it.
Plz chhod ke mat jana.
Aapki kahani ek bahut alag kism ki approach hai jo maybe itne jaldi logo ko digest karne me problem ho rahi.
Jo ki maybe ek reason hai kam comments ka aur dusra reason jo me personally manta hu hai ki aapke update bahut hi slow hai.
Matlab aisa nahi ki aage growth nahi hi rahi kahani me but itni saari cheejen ek saath chhal rahi hai ki slow feel hoti hai.
Baaki kahani hai masaledar. I can sense it.
Plz chhod ke mat jana.
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Dhanyvad Jo apko kahani pasand aur Sath Mera approach ..
Jab tak story buildup nhi hoti kahani kuch aese hi tedhi medhi chalegi
Story slow nhi update slow ho gaye the Jo ab dur ho rhi Hain.. comment ki pyas to sabko raheti taki story me sujhav mil sake Lekin main khud ke liye likh rhi Hoon to koi na aaj nhi to Kal comment bhi ayege....
Chije ab simtna Shuru ho gayi to slowness Hain wo bhi jaldi khatm Hogi...
Kahani to likhati rahugi jab take puri na karo doon Baki Rahi masale ki to wo aage bhar bhar ke hain...
Thanks once again
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Update 32 Maya at Home in present...
Main Apne kamare me gayi to pahle apni samano ko Apne Almirah me aur Jo Saman Jahan set hona tha. Waha set kiya..
Fir ek shorts and t shirt lekar washroom Chali gayi fresh hone jetlog aur itna jyada sochana kahin na kahin mujhe mentally air physically thakan thi. Isliye jakar light hot water bathtub me bhar ke sare kapade Nikal let gayi.
Fir phone utaya air Laga did call Priya ko..
Pahli ring call pick hua
Priya: Mistress ko APNI slave ka salam..
Main: Maine bola na jab tak TU India nhi aa jati tab tak no slave.
Priya: Kyo nhi Lekin main naam nhi na Le sakti Hoon mistress.
Main: Maine permission diya.
Priya: okay darling. Aram se pahuch gayi.
Main: ha aram se pahch gayi aur bath Le RHI Hoon tub me ye Bata Kya Hal Hain tere air Kristen se koi bat huyi.
Priya: main Badiya apke bina dono ka dil nhi lag RHA Hain Kristen taiyar me busy Hain air bacha hua Mera air uska kam do - teen nipta Jayega main to parso nikal lugi.
Main: okay , thodi der me whatsapp kar RHI Hoon task complete hona chahiye.
Priya: okay your wish command for me.
Fir main phone cut kar diya.
Fir Maine do message bheje ek Riya ko aur dusra Priya ko.
Thodi DER main jab sharir Halka hua to shower ke niche jakar bath complete Kiya aur kapde pahn ke Bahar AA gayi.
Main apko story ki character abhi take nam ke alawa use story see dur rakha Hain.
My bestie Monica jisane ham logo ke kushi ke liye sath CS to join Kiya magar graduation ke bad yahi MBA karne lagi.
Touch me Hain MBA ke bad usane apne dad ka business join kar Liya magar ye Kamini abhi take single Hain kutiya be ek do loudo ko date Kiya magar bat final nhi huyi.
Kal usase bhi milugi Riya to do din bad aayegi.
Main ye sab soch rhi thi tabhi MAA ki awaj aayi
Maa: Priya beta AA ja lunch ready Hain.
Main MAA ki awaj sunkar apni sabhi soch dar kinar Kiya aur AA gayi dining table pe.
Main Aayi to dekha maanke chehere ka Noor gayab Hain ek bechaini Hain.
Main: maa aap kuch udas dikh rhi hain
MAA Meri bat sunkar hadbada gayi Jo Maine notice ki magar maa ne khud ko sambhala
Maa: Tum dino Ghar PE nhi thi tu waha ye char dino see tour pe dil nhi lag rha that tu AA gayi to Riya ki yaad aa rhi Hain.
Maa be badi safai se apne Dil ki bat chhupayi magar abhi mujhe aur aram Karna tha isliye Socha maa pe rat SE focus karugi air jaldi dinner finish kar Apne room me Chali gayi ac on kar JAISE bed PE leti Whatsapp notification aaya..
Main open Kiya to ek aur message tha
Malkin ka task Pura hua aasha Karti Hoon Malkin Apne is gulam kutiya se kush huyi Hogi...
Kiska tha ye message ?
Maa ke dil me Kya chal rha hain?
Monica Kya kar rhi Hain aajkal?
Main Apne kamare me gayi to pahle apni samano ko Apne Almirah me aur Jo Saman Jahan set hona tha. Waha set kiya..
Fir ek shorts and t shirt lekar washroom Chali gayi fresh hone jetlog aur itna jyada sochana kahin na kahin mujhe mentally air physically thakan thi. Isliye jakar light hot water bathtub me bhar ke sare kapade Nikal let gayi.
Fir phone utaya air Laga did call Priya ko..
Pahli ring call pick hua
Priya: Mistress ko APNI slave ka salam..
Main: Maine bola na jab tak TU India nhi aa jati tab tak no slave.
Priya: Kyo nhi Lekin main naam nhi na Le sakti Hoon mistress.
Main: Maine permission diya.
Priya: okay darling. Aram se pahuch gayi.
Main: ha aram se pahch gayi aur bath Le RHI Hoon tub me ye Bata Kya Hal Hain tere air Kristen se koi bat huyi.
Priya: main Badiya apke bina dono ka dil nhi lag RHA Hain Kristen taiyar me busy Hain air bacha hua Mera air uska kam do - teen nipta Jayega main to parso nikal lugi.
Main: okay , thodi der me whatsapp kar RHI Hoon task complete hona chahiye.
Priya: okay your wish command for me.
Fir main phone cut kar diya.
Fir Maine do message bheje ek Riya ko aur dusra Priya ko.
Thodi DER main jab sharir Halka hua to shower ke niche jakar bath complete Kiya aur kapde pahn ke Bahar AA gayi.
Main apko story ki character abhi take nam ke alawa use story see dur rakha Hain.
My bestie Monica jisane ham logo ke kushi ke liye sath CS to join Kiya magar graduation ke bad yahi MBA karne lagi.
Touch me Hain MBA ke bad usane apne dad ka business join kar Liya magar ye Kamini abhi take single Hain kutiya be ek do loudo ko date Kiya magar bat final nhi huyi.
Kal usase bhi milugi Riya to do din bad aayegi.
Main ye sab soch rhi thi tabhi MAA ki awaj aayi
Maa: Priya beta AA ja lunch ready Hain.
Main MAA ki awaj sunkar apni sabhi soch dar kinar Kiya aur AA gayi dining table pe.
Main Aayi to dekha maanke chehere ka Noor gayab Hain ek bechaini Hain.
Main: maa aap kuch udas dikh rhi hain
MAA Meri bat sunkar hadbada gayi Jo Maine notice ki magar maa ne khud ko sambhala
Maa: Tum dino Ghar PE nhi thi tu waha ye char dino see tour pe dil nhi lag rha that tu AA gayi to Riya ki yaad aa rhi Hain.
Maa be badi safai se apne Dil ki bat chhupayi magar abhi mujhe aur aram Karna tha isliye Socha maa pe rat SE focus karugi air jaldi dinner finish kar Apne room me Chali gayi ac on kar JAISE bed PE leti Whatsapp notification aaya..
Main open Kiya to ek aur message tha
Malkin ka task Pura hua aasha Karti Hoon Malkin Apne is gulam kutiya se kush huyi Hogi...
Kiska tha ye message ?
Maa ke dil me Kya chal rha hain?
Monica Kya kar rhi Hain aajkal?
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