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arvindaa

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punam ji se baat karne ke baad mujhe sabse baat karna tha kyunki agar mai mahine bhar ke liye gayab ho jaunga to sab pareshan ho jayenge aur sabko bata ke jaunga to koi jane nahi dega. kyunki 12-15 lakh rupaye shivani ji ke liye ya fir ruhi mam ke liye koi badi baat nahi thi wahi archana aur rani to aur bhi jada nahi jane dengi. aur maa didi se to puchna hi bekar hai isliye mujhe ek jhuth bolna tha. jo mai soch bhi liya tha.lekin pahle entrance exam jaruri tha isliye 4 din jam ke padha aur fir hum tino exam dene gaye. hum tino ka exam bahut achha gaya tha. rani to bahut jada khush thi aur wo ghar aate aate kam se kam 100 baar archana ko thank you bol chuki thi.mai bhi apne ghar aa gaya fir mai phone uthaya aar maa didi ko chodkar sabko ek ek karke phone kiya aur sabko bol diya ki kal mujhe urgently gaav jana padega. gaav me mere chacha ji ki tabiyat bahut bahut bahut jada kharab hai. ab aisi baat pe koi bhi mujhe kaise rokta. mai janta tha ye bahut bada jhuth hai aur aisa jhuth bolna nahi chahiye lekin mere pass koi dusra idea aaya hi nahi. sablog mujhse ek baar milna to chahte the lekin mujhe pata tha sabke saamne mai jhuth nahi bol paunga kisi na kisi ke saamne sach mooh se nikal hi jayega isliye sabko milne se mana kar diya aur agli subah chup chap ghar lock karke nikal gaya. dopehar ko mai sidha punam ji ke pass pahucha jo humare gaav ki jamin thi wahan ke factory me.
jab mai unka chehra dekha to mera gussa bahut jada badh gaya kyunki unke chehre pe bhi kuch chot ke nisan the.
punam ji mere saamne sir jhuka kar baithi hui thi.
mai punam ji ko bola-punam ji aap bilkul bhi chinta mat karo. jis kisi ne bhi aapke aur humare sapno me tang adayi hai uski tange kaat kar uski gaand me fit kar dunga. un haramio ki himmat kaise hui aap par haath uthane ki.
meri ankhon me gussa dekh kar punam ji bhi dar gayi aur darte hue boli-wo log bahut khatarnaak hai raja.
mai bola-mujhse jada nahi hai.
aap sirf batao ye sab kisne kiya hai.
punam ji darte hue boli-dekho tumhe in sab me nahi padna chahiye.
mai bola-punam ji aap bilkul bhi mat dariye. mai hoon na mere rahte aapke aur mere sapne koi bhi nahi chin sakta. aap bas bataiye. kisne kiya ye sab.
punam ji darte hue mujhe sab chije bata di.
mai bola-thik hai ab dekhiye mai kya kya karta hoon.
punam ji kuch sochkar boli-dekho tum agar jaoge to mai bhi chalti hoon.
mai socha agar direct mana kar dunga to sayad inko bura lage.
mai bola-dekhiye aap yahi rahiye aur yahan se meri madad kijiye mera wada hai aapse jisne bhi aap par ek haath bhi uthaya hai us par kam se kam 100 jute marne ka mouka aapko jarur dunga. aap bus 15-20 din mujhpar bharosa kijiye. aapne duniya me bahut se logon par bharosa kiya hoga bahuto ne aapko dhokha diya hoga lekin kasam se mujhsa partner aapko nahi milega aur mai ye proof kar dunga. bas 15-20 din aap kisi ko kuch mat batana.
aur fir mai unke ghar se apna dimag doudate hue nikla. jab sab kuch soch vichar liya to chadh gaya bus par. shaam ko bus ek jagah ruki aur conductor chillaya ramouli gaav wale utar jao ramouli gaav wale utar jao.
mai bhi apna bag liya aur utar gaya. fir wahan se kachhi sadak thi ramouli gaav jaati thi. mai logon se puchte puchte ek ghar ke paas pahuch gaya. ek miiti aur ito(bricks) se bana ek ghar tha. mai andar ghusa to mujhe wo dikha jise dekhkar to man kiya ki is aadmi ka khoon kar doon fir bhi jabran muskurate hue bola-pranam fufa ji.
wo aadmi bole-tum koun ho beta.
mai-arey mai raja aapki mousi ki bhatiji ke ladke hai hum. nahi pahchane maaya di ke bete hai.
fufa ji yaad karte hue bole-ha haan yaad aaya tum maaya di ke ladke raja ho. aao aao baitho.
fufa jor se chillya-stuti arey stuti dekho maaya di ka ladka aaya hai. bachapan me dekha tha jab tum bahut chote the.
fir mera fufa tont marte hue bola-matric me to fail kar gaye the suna tha pass hue ki abhi bhi sab bhagwane bharose.
mai man me gaali diya isko fir bola-nahi nahi fufa ji 10th pass kar gaye hai abhi 12th ka exam diye hai.
fufa fir comment mara-pass kar jaoge ki gaay charaoge.
mera to sala iski baat sunkar jhaat sulag gaya. ek to isi harami ne mere bhai ki shaadi karayi thi. kasam se agar meri maa ki pichli jindagi kharab karne me iska thoda sa bhi haath hua na iski gaand maar kar jaunga.
tabhi bua bhi aa gayi-haath me ek chai ka cup lekar. mai unko bhi pranam kiya aur pucha-bhaiya nahi dikh rahe.
bua boli-arey wo gujraat me hai truck chala raha hai.
fufa bola-hum to bole the usko yahi rahne pata nahi kyun chala gaya.
mai man me bola-sala usko bhi aise hi din bhar comment maar maar kar pareshan karta hoga isliye chala gaya.
fufa bola-beta aaye ho ye to sahi hai koi kaam tha kya yahan.
mai bola-wo kya hai na fufa ji abhi to school band ho gaya hai to socha kuch mehnat majdoori karke kama loon to maa se pata chala ki aapke gaav me ek jamindaar hai jahan kaam mil sakta hai.
ye baat sunte hi mera fufa chati chouda karke bola-haan haan tum ek-do din ruko mai jamindaar se baat karke tumko wahan rakhwa dunga. humari kaafi jaan pahchan hai unse. tab tak gaav ghumna hai to ghum lo.
mai bola-thik hai. aur gaav ghumne ke liye nikal gaya. achhe se gaav dekha saath hi jamindaar ka bada bangla bhi dekha jiske gate ke pass 10-12 gaav ke mustande baithe gupp shup haak rahe the. mai ghum fir kar ek ghante me ghar aa gaya.

ab aaiye kuch logon ka intro kara deta hoon.
chirag kumar- umra 45 saal hai. ye hai mere mummy ke door ke fua ki bahan ke bete.
inhone hi mere bhai ki shadi ke liye meri bhabhi ke taraf se pahal ki thi.
stuti kumari-umar 40 saal. ye hai chirag ki patni ji. inka ek ladka hai jo gujraat me truck chalata hai.

ab is gaav ke jamindaar ke baare me kuch bata doon jo ramouli gaav ka bahut bada aur harami jamindaar hai.
nagma devi-umra 50 saal. ek number ki khadoos aur ghar ki malkin. ghar me sabse jada padhi likhi aurat.(ye baat mujhe punam ji batayi thi)
deva lattu-ye hai nagma ka pati aur lattu khandan ka jamindar. umra 55 saal.
iske do bete hai.
nirala lattu-umar 24 saal. ek number ka aaiyass ladka aur dimag se paidal.
virala lattu-umar 20 saal. ye dimag se bahut tej hai lekin utna hi jada sentimental hai.


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jab raat hua to sone ki baari aayi. is ghar me do room tha ek bramada aur fir ek angan jo khula hua tha. is ghar me sirf bahar hi ek gate tha baaki kisi room me gate nahi tha sirf parda laga hua tha. waise bhi mera fufa koi kaam dhaam nahi karta tha bas idhar ka udhar aur udhar ka idhar karke kuch paise kama leta tha.
yahan gaav me bijli bhi naa ke barabar hi tha. lalten ki roshni me hi hum sab khana khaye the.
mai ek room me andhere me leta soch raha tha ki kaise jamindaar se jamin lena hai. tabhi mujhe bua ka awaj sunayi diya.
stuti bua thoda gusse me boli-ye kya kar rahe hai. bagal room me bhatija hai.
tabhi mera fufa chirag ka awaj aaya-chup saali pata nahi kahan se ye maaya ka ladka raja aa gaya. uske chalte mai kya apni raat khrab karu.
fir stuti bua ka awaj aaya-arey ruk jaiye na wo kya sochega.
fir chirag fufa ka awaj aaya-jo sochna hai sochne do. gaand maraye wo.
aur fir tabhi stuti bua ki awaj aayi-ahhhhhhhhhhhh aur fir ek awaj aaya chatakkkkkkkk
fir chirag ka awaj aaya-chilla kyun rahi hai re randi pahli baar karwa rahi hai kya. fir se awaj aaya chattakkk ahhhhhhhhhhhh
fir aisa laga jaise chirag ne stuti bua ka mooh daba diya ho kyunki unke rone wali ahhh ahhh ahhh ahhh tin char baar awaj aaya.
fir chirag ka hafta hua awaj aaya- haahh ho gaya re haah ho gaya ab kya ro rahi hai.
mai man me socah-sala ye fufa to sachme bada gira hua aadmi hai. pahle apna jamin ka kaam kar leta hoon jaate jaate iski gaand me bhi fuljhadi sulga ke jaaunga jindagi bhar ke liye sudhar jaayega.
fir mai bhi so gaya. agla subah hua to yahan fresh hone ke liye khet me hi jana padta tha. mai bhi lota liya aur chal diya khet. jab fresh hokar aaya to ek kua tha ghar ke pass hi. waise gaav me 3-4 kua tha jiske ghar ke pass jo kua hota tha wahi sab log nahate the. mahilao ke liye ek bathroom jaisa bana hua tha aur purush kua ke pass hi naha lete the khule me. mai bhi kue ke pass gaya jo is ghar ke pass hi tha wahan nahaya fir ghar aaya.
bua ne subah kuch bana ke diya mai kha liya aur ghumne ke liye nikal gaya.
mera fufa bhi mujhe bolkar gaya tha ki aaj wo jaa raha hai jamindaar se mere kaam ke liye baat karega.
mai mast ghumta hua apne gaav se thoda bahar aa gaya tha kyunki mere gaav ke baad dusra gaav wahi tha jo meri bhabhi ka tha.
mai abhi road pe jaa hi raha tha ki mai dekha achanak se mere bagal se ek car nikla aur wo dhammm se samne se aa rahe ek bike se takra gaya.
bike se car takrate hi bike wala gir gaya aur wo gusse me utha aur car ke driver ke pass gaya aur khidki se haath ghusa ke chattaaakkkk se ek thappad jad diya.
bike wal bola-sale bhosdi ke ankh me lund fit karke gaadi chalata hai.
abhi wo itna hi bola tha ki car ke dusre side se ek lamba chouda ladka nikla aur wo bike wale ladke ke kanpaati pe pattaaaakkkkkkkk se ek dhar diya.
wo bike wala ladka jamin pe gir gaya.
wo jamin par se gusse me bola-teri maa chodu mujhpe haath uthata hai ruk abhi dekh tu. aur wo kisi ko call kiya aur bola-jaldi aa jao bhai.
aur sala uske phone karte hi 1 minut se bhi kam time me 4-5 log aa gaya sabke haath me mota mota lakdi ka danda tha. sab dhadd dhadd dhadd dhadd driver ko aur us lambe choude ladke ko maar ke leta diya uske bad sab gusse me piche ka gate kholne ka kosis karne laga lekin gate lock tha khul hi nahi raha tha. fir aage ka bhi gate kholne ka kosis kiya wo bhi lock tha.
to us bike wale ke ek dost ne bola-bum maar do saale ko. aur wo 4-5 log mil kar car ko ek taraf pura palat diya. aur fir bike wala palte hue car ke me jhuk ke jor se car ke ek shishe pe mara aur channn se thoda sa shisha toot gaya fir apni apne pocket se bomb jaisa kuch nikala bomb fek diya.
uske baad wo sab nikal gaya. dekhte dekhte car me dhua bharne laga. mai thoda door se ye sab dekh raha tha tabhi koi mere piche se bola-arey ye to apne gaav ka jamindaar hai.
mai ye sunte hi doud ke car ki taraf bhaga car me dhua bharne laga tha. sayad desi bomb tha isliye itna time lag raha tha. aur jaldi se palte hue car ke pass jhuka aur laat se piche ka toota hua shisha poora tod diya aur dum lagakar gate khola aur us aadmi ka haath pakad ke nikala aur fir dono car se jaldi se door bage.
abhi hum dono 3-4 kadam bhaage hi the ki booom se bomb fata aur uski awaj aur dhamaka se hum dono gir gaye. fir mai sambhal kar us jamindaar ko uthaya. fir road se gujar rahe ek car se lift lekar usko car me baitha diya.
wo jamindaar mujhe hafte hue sukriya bola aur chala gaya.
us car ke nikalte hi mai us road se bagal ke jungle ki taraf ghus gaya. kuch door jab chal kar andar aaya to 5 ladke mere saamne khade the. ye wahi panch the jo abhi jamindaar ke saath kand kiye the.
mai bola-waah tum logon ne mera dil jeet liya. mujhe pata nahi tha tum log itne achhe ho.
usme se ek bola-arey sir hume nilesh bhaiya ne bola hai achhe se kaam karo to aur kaam milega. ye sab kaam ke liye to humlog humesha se ready hai.
mai 30 hazar nikal kar us ladke ke haath me diya aur bola tum panch hi ho to wo ek aur kaha gaya.
wo ladka bola-sir jis car me aapne jamindaar ko baithaya na wo humara last sathi hai. hum log jo bhi kaam karte hai achhe se karte hai. wo jamindaar ko chod kar aayega fir hum sab us car se nikal jayenge. koi hum par shak bhi nahi karega kyunki usi ne to jamindaar ko bachaya hai.
mai-waah kya baat hai.
wo bola-kya sir aapne hi to idea diya tha.
mai-to kya hua kiya to tum logon ne. ab gayab ho jao is area se nahi to jamindaar kaat dalega.
wo log wahan se nikal liya.
mai man me bola-dekhta jaa jamindaar aaj to suruaat hai dekh abhi kya kya hoga tere saath. tune galat aadmi se panga le liya hai.

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kal din me jab mai punam ji ke factory se nikla tha tabhi main nilesh se mila tha. kyunki mujhe pata tha nilesh ko paise do aur thoda lalach do to bahut kuch kar sakta hai.
mai thoda tension wala chehra lekar nilesh ke pass gaya.
nilesh-kya hua raja thoda tension me ho.
mai bola-kya batau bhai mai socha tha ye coaching center jab achhe se chalne lagega tab ek aur center kholunga aur wahan ka head tumhe ya sravan ko banaunga lekin mai paisa laga kar jamin kharida aur jamin wahan ka ek harami jamindaar hadap liya. ab kam se kam wo jamin hi bik jaye to us paise ko yahan lagaunga jis se ye center aur achha banega jis se yahan kamai badhega lekin koi idea hi nahi aa raha hai. ek idea aaya bhi hai to wo bahut muskil hai.
ab paise ki baat ho nilesh piche hat jaaye ye to hone se raha.
nilesh bola-idea kya hai.
mai bola-mai chahta hoon kuch log jakar uske aadmi ko maare aur use bhi daraye aur mai use bacha loon fir wo mujhe man ne lagega aur mai apna jamin ka paisa ya jamin nikalwa lunga lekin mujhe aise gunde milenge kahan jo yahan aas pass ka nahi ho aur ye sab kaam bhi karde.
nilesh bola-mai janta hoon kuch log ko jo dusre rajya se hai yahan majdoori karte hai. unko paisa do to wo log kar denge.
mai bola-kya ye ho sakta hai.
nilesh bola-mai hoon na bhai bas jab bhi dusri jagah caoching kholna ya is coaching ko bada banana to mera bhi khyal rakhna.
mai bola-haan haan bilkul.
aur kya tha nilesh ne akhir sham hote hote 5 logon ka jugad kar hi diya. sabse mai phone pe baat bhi kar liya jab mai bas se ramouli gaav ki taraf aa raha tha.

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mujhe pata nahi tha ye ek din me ho payega ya 3-4 din legenge lekin kismat dekho aaj hi sab ho gaya.
mai mast ghar gaya. din me khana khaya.
udhar mera fufa jab jamindaar ke bangle me pahucha tha idhar udhar ghum kar dekha to use nagma ji mil gayi.
fufa daant nikal kar chaplusi wale andaj me bola-pranam malkin.
nagma-bolo kya baat hai chirag.
fufa-malkin mera ek bhatija aaya hai gaav se kuch kaam mil jata to thik rahta.
nagma-dekho humare pass abhi koi kaam nahi hai.
fufa-bahut ummid se aaye the malkin. kuch dekh lete aapka naam to gaav gaav tak hai.
nagma-thik hai thik hai. ghar me saaf safayi ka kaam kar lega , janwar ko khana wana de dega to thik hai kal le aana.
fufa-malkin wo kitne paise milenge wo bhi bata deti to achha rahta.
nagma-char hazar dungi mahine ka.
fufa-thik hai malkin. aap uska paisa mujhe de dijiyega. wo abhi chota hai na paise sambhal nahi payega.
nagma-thik hai de dungi. kal usko le kar aao tab sochungi noukari dena hai ya nahi.
mera fufa kutte ki tarah jibh nikalte hue bola-ji malkin. aur wo udhar se nikalne laga tabhi ek car gate ke pass aaya usme se jamindaar sahab nikle. jinke chehra gandgi aur dhua se kaala ho gaya tha kapde kharab ho gaye the. unke saath unke 5-6 log aur the jo gate ke pass se saath me aa rahe the. jamindaar deva ko is halat me dekhte hi unka beta nirala doud ke unke pass aaya.
nirala-kaise hua ye baapu.
deva-kuch badmash mil gaye the jo humari car se takraye fir ladayi ho gaya.
nirala gusse me bola-cheer ke rakh denge sabko.
aur wo ek aadmi ko bola-ae gaadi nikal saal gaav gaav dhundho sabko. aur fir 10-12 log jeep se sann sannn karke nikle apne hathon me badook talwaar lekar. un chutiyo ko ye bhi pata nahi tha saale pahchanenge kaise kisne mara hai. bas jeep lekar nikal gaye the.
nirala ke pass to bas sarir tha lamba chouda. dimag to tha uske chote bete virala ke pass jo abhi gaav me nahi tha kuch kaam se sahar gaya hua tha.
mera fufa ye sab dekhte hi gaand daba ke wahan se bhaag liya. fattu to ek number ka tha.
dopehar ka khana khate samay fufa mere saath tha.
fufa bola-dekh raja bahut mehnat se tumhare liye noukari maanga hai. tin hazar rupya milega. man lagakar kaam karna.
mai-ji fufa.
fufa-kal chalna mere saath. akele mat jana samjha.
mai-ji fufa.
fir kuch kaam to hua nahi shaam aa gaya. mai bas apne plan ke baare me sochta raha. kuch bhi ho nilesh ke bheje logon ne jamindaar ke driver aur bodygiard ko to achhe se kuta tha. dil khush ho gaya ye dekh kar. man to kar raha tha ki us jamindaar ko car me hi jala doon lekin jamin ke paper nikalwane the isliye bacha liya.
mai maa aur didi se fir shaam ko baat kiya aur bataya ki factory ke kaam se aaya hua hoon. maa ne bataya ki wo bhi chennai pahuch gayi hai aur achhe se hai. mujhe khushi hua. didi bhi thoda gussa hui lekin maine mana liya.
ab fir raat hua. mujhe pata tha sala ye fufa fir raat ko apni darindagi suru karega aur hua bhi waisa hi. raat hote hi bua ki rone wali chikh aayi. aaj bua ne virodh nahi kiya tha.
fufa humara char dhakko ke baad dher ho gaya.
mai chup chap so gaya.
 

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punam ji se baat karne ke baad mujhe sabse baat karna tha kyunki agar mai mahine bhar ke liye gayab ho jaunga to sab pareshan ho jayenge aur sabko bata ke jaunga to koi jane nahi dega. kyunki 12-15 lakh rupaye shivani ji ke liye ya fir ruhi mam ke liye koi badi baat nahi thi wahi archana aur rani to aur bhi jada nahi jane dengi. aur maa didi se to puchna hi bekar hai isliye mujhe ek jhuth bolna tha. jo mai soch bhi liya tha.lekin pahle entrance exam jaruri tha isliye 4 din jam ke padha aur fir hum tino exam dene gaye. hum tino ka exam bahut achha gaya tha. rani to bahut jada khush thi aur wo ghar aate aate kam se kam 100 baar archana ko thank you bol chuki thi.mai bhi apne ghar aa gaya fir mai phone uthaya aar maa didi ko chodkar sabko ek ek karke phone kiya aur sabko bol diya ki kal mujhe urgently gaav jana padega. gaav me mere chacha ji ki tabiyat bahut bahut bahut jada kharab hai. ab aisi baat pe koi bhi mujhe kaise rokta. mai janta tha ye bahut bada jhuth hai aur aisa jhuth bolna nahi chahiye lekin mere pass koi dusra idea aaya hi nahi. sablog mujhse ek baar milna to chahte the lekin mujhe pata tha sabke saamne mai jhuth nahi bol paunga kisi na kisi ke saamne sach mooh se nikal hi jayega isliye sabko milne se mana kar diya aur agli subah chup chap ghar lock karke nikal gaya. dopehar ko mai sidha punam ji ke pass pahucha jo humare gaav ki jamin thi wahan ke factory me.
jab mai unka chehra dekha to mera gussa bahut jada badh gaya kyunki unke chehre pe bhi kuch chot ke nisan the.
punam ji mere saamne sir jhuka kar baithi hui thi.
mai punam ji ko bola-punam ji aap bilkul bhi chinta mat karo. jis kisi ne bhi aapke aur humare sapno me tang adayi hai uski tange kaat kar uski gaand me fit kar dunga. un haramio ki himmat kaise hui aap par haath uthane ki.
meri ankhon me gussa dekh kar punam ji bhi dar gayi aur darte hue boli-wo log bahut khatarnaak hai raja.
mai bola-mujhse jada nahi hai.
aap sirf batao ye sab kisne kiya hai.
punam ji darte hue boli-dekho tumhe in sab me nahi padna chahiye.
mai bola-punam ji aap bilkul bhi mat dariye. mai hoon na mere rahte aapke aur mere sapne koi bhi nahi chin sakta. aap bas bataiye. kisne kiya ye sab.
punam ji darte hue mujhe sab chije bata di.
mai bola-thik hai ab dekhiye mai kya kya karta hoon.
punam ji kuch sochkar boli-dekho tum agar jaoge to mai bhi chalti hoon.
mai socha agar direct mana kar dunga to sayad inko bura lage.
mai bola-dekhiye aap yahi rahiye aur yahan se meri madad kijiye mera wada hai aapse jisne bhi aap par ek haath bhi uthaya hai us par kam se kam 100 jute marne ka mouka aapko jarur dunga. aap bus 15-20 din mujhpar bharosa kijiye. aapne duniya me bahut se logon par bharosa kiya hoga bahuto ne aapko dhokha diya hoga lekin kasam se mujhsa partner aapko nahi milega aur mai ye proof kar dunga. bas 15-20 din aap kisi ko kuch mat batana.
aur fir mai unke ghar se apna dimag doudate hue nikla. jab sab kuch soch vichar liya to chadh gaya bus par. shaam ko bus ek jagah ruki aur conductor chillaya ramouli gaav wale utar jao ramouli gaav wale utar jao.
mai bhi apna bag liya aur utar gaya. fir wahan se kachhi sadak thi ramouli gaav jaati thi. mai logon se puchte puchte ek ghar ke paas pahuch gaya. ek miiti aur ito(bricks) se bana ek ghar tha. mai andar ghusa to mujhe wo dikha jise dekhkar to man kiya ki is aadmi ka khoon kar doon fir bhi jabran muskurate hue bola-pranam fufa ji.
wo aadmi bole-tum koun ho beta.
mai-arey mai raja aapki mousi ki bhatiji ke ladke hai hum. nahi pahchane maaya di ke bete hai.
fufa ji yaad karte hue bole-ha haan yaad aaya tum maaya di ke ladke raja ho. aao aao baitho.
fufa jor se chillya-stuti arey stuti dekho maaya di ka ladka aaya hai. bachapan me dekha tha jab tum bahut chote the.
fir mera fufa tont marte hue bola-matric me to fail kar gaye the suna tha pass hue ki abhi bhi sab bhagwane bharose.
mai man me gaali diya isko fir bola-nahi nahi fufa ji 10th pass kar gaye hai abhi 12th ka exam diye hai.
fufa fir comment mara-pass kar jaoge ki gaay charaoge.
mera to sala iski baat sunkar jhaat sulag gaya. ek to isi harami ne mere bhai ki shaadi karayi thi. kasam se agar meri maa ki pichli jindagi kharab karne me iska thoda sa bhi haath hua na iski gaand maar kar jaunga.
tabhi bua bhi aa gayi-haath me ek chai ka cup lekar. mai unko bhi pranam kiya aur pucha-bhaiya nahi dikh rahe.
bua boli-arey wo gujraat me hai truck chala raha hai.
fufa bola-hum to bole the usko yahi rahne pata nahi kyun chala gaya.
mai man me bola-sala usko bhi aise hi din bhar comment maar maar kar pareshan karta hoga isliye chala gaya.
fufa bola-beta aaye ho ye to sahi hai koi kaam tha kya yahan.
mai bola-wo kya hai na fufa ji abhi to school band ho gaya hai to socha kuch mehnat majdoori karke kama loon to maa se pata chala ki aapke gaav me ek jamindaar hai jahan kaam mil sakta hai.
ye baat sunte hi mera fufa chati chouda karke bola-haan haan tum ek-do din ruko mai jamindaar se baat karke tumko wahan rakhwa dunga. humari kaafi jaan pahchan hai unse. tab tak gaav ghumna hai to ghum lo.
mai bola-thik hai. aur gaav ghumne ke liye nikal gaya. achhe se gaav dekha saath hi jamindaar ka bada bangla bhi dekha jiske gate ke pass 10-12 gaav ke mustande baithe gupp shup haak rahe the. mai ghum fir kar ek ghante me ghar aa gaya.

ab aaiye kuch logon ka intro kara deta hoon.
chirag kumar- umra 45 saal hai. ye hai mere mummy ke door ke fua ki bahan ke bete.
inhone hi mere bhai ki shadi ke liye meri bhabhi ke taraf se pahal ki thi.
stuti kumari-umar 40 saal. ye hai chirag ki patni ji. inka ek ladka hai jo gujraat me truck chalata hai.

ab is gaav ke jamindaar ke baare me kuch bata doon jo ramouli gaav ka bahut bada aur harami jamindaar hai.
nagma devi-umra 50 saal. ek number ki khadoos aur ghar ki malkin. ghar me sabse jada padhi likhi aurat.(ye baat mujhe punam ji batayi thi)
deva lattu-ye hai nagma ka pati aur lattu khandan ka jamindar. umra 55 saal.
iske do bete hai.
nirala lattu-umar 24 saal. ek number ka aaiyass ladka aur dimag se paidal.
virala lattu-umar 20 saal. ye dimag se bahut tej hai lekin utna hi jada sentimental hai.


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jab raat hua to sone ki baari aayi. is ghar me do room tha ek bramada aur fir ek angan jo khula hua tha. is ghar me sirf bahar hi ek gate tha baaki kisi room me gate nahi tha sirf parda laga hua tha. waise bhi mera fufa koi kaam dhaam nahi karta tha bas idhar ka udhar aur udhar ka idhar karke kuch paise kama leta tha.
yahan gaav me bijli bhi naa ke barabar hi tha. lalten ki roshni me hi hum sab khana khaye the.
mai ek room me andhere me leta soch raha tha ki kaise jamindaar se jamin lena hai. tabhi mujhe bua ka awaj sunayi diya.
stuti bua thoda gusse me boli-ye kya kar rahe hai. bagal room me bhatija hai.
tabhi mera fufa chirag ka awaj aaya-chup saali pata nahi kahan se ye maaya ka ladka raja aa gaya. uske chalte mai kya apni raat khrab karu.
fir stuti bua ka awaj aaya-arey ruk jaiye na wo kya sochega.
fir chirag fufa ka awaj aaya-jo sochna hai sochne do. gaand maraye wo.
aur fir tabhi stuti bua ki awaj aayi-ahhhhhhhhhhhh aur fir ek awaj aaya chatakkkkkkkk
fir chirag ka awaj aaya-chilla kyun rahi hai re randi pahli baar karwa rahi hai kya. fir se awaj aaya chattakkk ahhhhhhhhhhhh
fir aisa laga jaise chirag ne stuti bua ka mooh daba diya ho kyunki unke rone wali ahhh ahhh ahhh ahhh tin char baar awaj aaya.
fir chirag ka hafta hua awaj aaya- haahh ho gaya re haah ho gaya ab kya ro rahi hai.
mai man me socah-sala ye fufa to sachme bada gira hua aadmi hai. pahle apna jamin ka kaam kar leta hoon jaate jaate iski gaand me bhi fuljhadi sulga ke jaaunga jindagi bhar ke liye sudhar jaayega.
fir mai bhi so gaya. agla subah hua to yahan fresh hone ke liye khet me hi jana padta tha. mai bhi lota liya aur chal diya khet. jab fresh hokar aaya to ek kua tha ghar ke pass hi. waise gaav me 3-4 kua tha jiske ghar ke pass jo kua hota tha wahi sab log nahate the. mahilao ke liye ek bathroom jaisa bana hua tha aur purush kua ke pass hi naha lete the khule me. mai bhi kue ke pass gaya jo is ghar ke pass hi tha wahan nahaya fir ghar aaya.
bua ne subah kuch bana ke diya mai kha liya aur ghumne ke liye nikal gaya.
mera fufa bhi mujhe bolkar gaya tha ki aaj wo jaa raha hai jamindaar se mere kaam ke liye baat karega.
mai mast ghumta hua apne gaav se thoda bahar aa gaya tha kyunki mere gaav ke baad dusra gaav wahi tha jo meri bhabhi ka tha.
mai abhi road pe jaa hi raha tha ki mai dekha achanak se mere bagal se ek car nikla aur wo dhammm se samne se aa rahe ek bike se takra gaya.
bike se car takrate hi bike wala gir gaya aur wo gusse me utha aur car ke driver ke pass gaya aur khidki se haath ghusa ke chattaaakkkk se ek thappad jad diya.
bike wal bola-sale bhosdi ke ankh me lund fit karke gaadi chalata hai.
abhi wo itna hi bola tha ki car ke dusre side se ek lamba chouda ladka nikla aur wo bike wale ladke ke kanpaati pe pattaaaakkkkkkkk se ek dhar diya.
wo bike wala ladka jamin pe gir gaya.
wo jamin par se gusse me bola-teri maa chodu mujhpe haath uthata hai ruk abhi dekh tu. aur wo kisi ko call kiya aur bola-jaldi aa jao bhai.
aur sala uske phone karte hi 1 minut se bhi kam time me 4-5 log aa gaya sabke haath me mota mota lakdi ka danda tha. sab dhadd dhadd dhadd dhadd driver ko aur us lambe choude ladke ko maar ke leta diya uske bad sab gusse me piche ka gate kholne ka kosis karne laga lekin gate lock tha khul hi nahi raha tha. fir aage ka bhi gate kholne ka kosis kiya wo bhi lock tha.
to us bike wale ke ek dost ne bola-bum maar do saale ko. aur wo 4-5 log mil kar car ko ek taraf pura palat diya. aur fir bike wala palte hue car ke me jhuk ke jor se car ke ek shishe pe mara aur channn se thoda sa shisha toot gaya fir apni apne pocket se bomb jaisa kuch nikala bomb fek diya.
uske baad wo sab nikal gaya. dekhte dekhte car me dhua bharne laga. mai thoda door se ye sab dekh raha tha tabhi koi mere piche se bola-arey ye to apne gaav ka jamindaar hai.
mai ye sunte hi doud ke car ki taraf bhaga car me dhua bharne laga tha. sayad desi bomb tha isliye itna time lag raha tha. aur jaldi se palte hue car ke pass jhuka aur laat se piche ka toota hua shisha poora tod diya aur dum lagakar gate khola aur us aadmi ka haath pakad ke nikala aur fir dono car se jaldi se door bage.
abhi hum dono 3-4 kadam bhaage hi the ki booom se bomb fata aur uski awaj aur dhamaka se hum dono gir gaye. fir mai sambhal kar us jamindaar ko uthaya. fir road se gujar rahe ek car se lift lekar usko car me baitha diya.
wo jamindaar mujhe hafte hue sukriya bola aur chala gaya.
us car ke nikalte hi mai us road se bagal ke jungle ki taraf ghus gaya. kuch door jab chal kar andar aaya to 5 ladke mere saamne khade the. ye wahi panch the jo abhi jamindaar ke saath kand kiye the.
mai bola-waah tum logon ne mera dil jeet liya. mujhe pata nahi tha tum log itne achhe ho.
usme se ek bola-arey sir hume nilesh bhaiya ne bola hai achhe se kaam karo to aur kaam milega. ye sab kaam ke liye to humlog humesha se ready hai.
mai 30 hazar nikal kar us ladke ke haath me diya aur bola tum panch hi ho to wo ek aur kaha gaya.
wo ladka bola-sir jis car me aapne jamindaar ko baithaya na wo humara last sathi hai. hum log jo bhi kaam karte hai achhe se karte hai. wo jamindaar ko chod kar aayega fir hum sab us car se nikal jayenge. koi hum par shak bhi nahi karega kyunki usi ne to jamindaar ko bachaya hai.
mai-waah kya baat hai.
wo bola-kya sir aapne hi to idea diya tha.
mai-to kya hua kiya to tum logon ne. ab gayab ho jao is area se nahi to jamindaar kaat dalega.
wo log wahan se nikal liya.
mai man me bola-dekhta jaa jamindaar aaj to suruaat hai dekh abhi kya kya hoga tere saath. tune galat aadmi se panga le liya hai.

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kal din me jab mai punam ji ke factory se nikla tha tabhi main nilesh se mila tha. kyunki mujhe pata tha nilesh ko paise do aur thoda lalach do to bahut kuch kar sakta hai.
mai thoda tension wala chehra lekar nilesh ke pass gaya.
nilesh-kya hua raja thoda tension me ho.
mai bola-kya batau bhai mai socha tha ye coaching center jab achhe se chalne lagega tab ek aur center kholunga aur wahan ka head tumhe ya sravan ko banaunga lekin mai paisa laga kar jamin kharida aur jamin wahan ka ek harami jamindaar hadap liya. ab kam se kam wo jamin hi bik jaye to us paise ko yahan lagaunga jis se ye center aur achha banega jis se yahan kamai badhega lekin koi idea hi nahi aa raha hai. ek idea aaya bhi hai to wo bahut muskil hai.
ab paise ki baat ho nilesh piche hat jaaye ye to hone se raha.
nilesh bola-idea kya hai.
mai bola-mai chahta hoon kuch log jakar uske aadmi ko maare aur use bhi daraye aur mai use bacha loon fir wo mujhe man ne lagega aur mai apna jamin ka paisa ya jamin nikalwa lunga lekin mujhe aise gunde milenge kahan jo yahan aas pass ka nahi ho aur ye sab kaam bhi karde.
nilesh bola-mai janta hoon kuch log ko jo dusre rajya se hai yahan majdoori karte hai. unko paisa do to wo log kar denge.
mai bola-kya ye ho sakta hai.
nilesh bola-mai hoon na bhai bas jab bhi dusri jagah caoching kholna ya is coaching ko bada banana to mera bhi khyal rakhna.
mai bola-haan haan bilkul.
aur kya tha nilesh ne akhir sham hote hote 5 logon ka jugad kar hi diya. sabse mai phone pe baat bhi kar liya jab mai bas se ramouli gaav ki taraf aa raha tha.

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mujhe pata nahi tha ye ek din me ho payega ya 3-4 din legenge lekin kismat dekho aaj hi sab ho gaya.
mai mast ghar gaya. din me khana khaya.
udhar mera fufa jab jamindaar ke bangle me pahucha tha idhar udhar ghum kar dekha to use nagma ji mil gayi.
fufa daant nikal kar chaplusi wale andaj me bola-pranam malkin.
nagma-bolo kya baat hai chirag.
fufa-malkin mera ek bhatija aaya hai gaav se kuch kaam mil jata to thik rahta.
nagma-dekho humare pass abhi koi kaam nahi hai.
fufa-bahut ummid se aaye the malkin. kuch dekh lete aapka naam to gaav gaav tak hai.
nagma-thik hai thik hai. ghar me saaf safayi ka kaam kar lega , janwar ko khana wana de dega to thik hai kal le aana.
fufa-malkin wo kitne paise milenge wo bhi bata deti to achha rahta.
nagma-char hazar dungi mahine ka.
fufa-thik hai malkin. aap uska paisa mujhe de dijiyega. wo abhi chota hai na paise sambhal nahi payega.
nagma-thik hai de dungi. kal usko le kar aao tab sochungi noukari dena hai ya nahi.
mera fufa kutte ki tarah jibh nikalte hue bola-ji malkin. aur wo udhar se nikalne laga tabhi ek car gate ke pass aaya usme se jamindaar sahab nikle. jinke chehra gandgi aur dhua se kaala ho gaya tha kapde kharab ho gaye the. unke saath unke 5-6 log aur the jo gate ke pass se saath me aa rahe the. jamindaar deva ko is halat me dekhte hi unka beta nirala doud ke unke pass aaya.
nirala-kaise hua ye baapu.
deva-kuch badmash mil gaye the jo humari car se takraye fir ladayi ho gaya.
nirala gusse me bola-cheer ke rakh denge sabko.
aur wo ek aadmi ko bola-ae gaadi nikal saal gaav gaav dhundho sabko. aur fir 10-12 log jeep se sann sannn karke nikle apne hathon me badook talwaar lekar. un chutiyo ko ye bhi pata nahi tha saale pahchanenge kaise kisne mara hai. bas jeep lekar nikal gaye the.
nirala ke pass to bas sarir tha lamba chouda. dimag to tha uske chote bete virala ke pass jo abhi gaav me nahi tha kuch kaam se sahar gaya hua tha.
mera fufa ye sab dekhte hi gaand daba ke wahan se bhaag liya. fattu to ek number ka tha.
dopehar ka khana khate samay fufa mere saath tha.
fufa bola-dekh raja bahut mehnat se tumhare liye noukari maanga hai. tin hazar rupya milega. man lagakar kaam karna.
mai-ji fufa.
fufa-kal chalna mere saath. akele mat jana samjha.
mai-ji fufa.
fir kuch kaam to hua nahi shaam aa gaya. mai bas apne plan ke baare me sochta raha. kuch bhi ho nilesh ke bheje logon ne jamindaar ke driver aur bodygiard ko to achhe se kuta tha. dil khush ho gaya ye dekh kar. man to kar raha tha ki us jamindaar ko car me hi jala doon lekin jamin ke paper nikalwane the isliye bacha liya.
mai maa aur didi se fir shaam ko baat kiya aur bataya ki factory ke kaam se aaya hua hoon. maa ne bataya ki wo bhi chennai pahuch gayi hai aur achhe se hai. mujhe khushi hua. didi bhi thoda gussa hui lekin maine mana liya.
ab fir raat hua. mujhe pata tha sala ye fufa fir raat ko apni darindagi suru karega aur hua bhi waisa hi. raat hote hi bua ki rone wali chikh aayi. aaj bua ne virodh nahi kiya tha.
fufa humara char dhakko ke baad dher ho gaya.
mai chup chap so gaya.
Amazing update ...raja mission impossible solve karne gaya he.
 

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mai jab school pahucha to rani mujhe dikh gayi lekin archana rani se kuch baat kar rahi thi. aur rani kafi serious thi. mai socha mai bhi to sunu akhir dono me baat kya ho raha hai lekin jab tak mai wahan pahucha dono ki baat khatm ho gayi aur archana bina mere taraf dekhe chali gayi.
mai socha-isko kya ho gaya hai. fir socha sayad koi kaam hoga usko. rani se puchta hoon.
mai-rani kya baat kar rahi thi archana se.
rani-wo ek form aaya hai usi ka baat kar rahi thi. archana bol rahi thi ki priciple mam chahti hai ki mai aage achhe se padhu aur paise ki chinta na karu isliye mere liye school ne ek form bhara hai jisme mai exam de sakti hoon. agar top 5 me mai aaungi to meri fee maaf ho jayegi aur archana ne bhi wo form bhara hai to wo bol rahi thi ki mai uske saath hi taiyari karu.
mai-kya baat hai school to kaafi meharbaan hai tumpar.
rani boli-mai bhi soch rahi hoon tumhara rank to mujhse aage hai to tumhe bhi ye offer aaya hoga.
mai socha agar naa bol dunga to rani ko shak ho jayega.
mai bola-haan haan aaya to tha lekin uske pahle hi maine ye form bhar diya tha.
rani gusse me boli-tumne form bhar diya aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi.
mai-wo mai batane wala tha aaj lekin iske pahle hi ye sab ho gaya.
rani fir khush hokar boli-wahh ye to achhi baat hai. hum tino saath me taiyari karenge.
mai-lekin tumhe to archana pasand nahi hai na.
rani-haan mujhe wo pasand to nahi hai lekin fir bhi wo humari madad to kar rahi hai na.
rani man me boli-uski madad se hum dono ek hi college me chale jayenge wo bhi itne achhe college me. ek baar mai college pahuch jau uske baad tumhe apne jalwe dikhaungi. tumhe to apna bana ke rahungi.
mai-are oo maharani kaha kho gayi.
rani apna gala saaf karte hue boli-nahi nahi kuch nahi chalo.
fit humara class suru ho gaya. hum tino class me pura man laga kar padhe itna hi nahi lunch time me bhi jaldi khakar mai aur rani padhne lage to humare pass archana bhi aa gayi aur padhne lagi. fir baaki ke class bhi hue. fir mai ghar aaya khana khaya aur padhayi chalu. shaam ko maa ne jabran khelne ke liye bhej diya. aaj bahut din baad apne loafer dosto se mila lekin ab mai un loafer dosto ke badle jo usme kuch achhe ladke the unse dosti karne ka socha aur shaam ko 2 ghante khel kar aaya fir baith kar padhayi kiya. aur kha kar so gaya. maa mujhe ghar ka koi kaam nahi karne de rahi thi. mera kaam bas itna hi tha ki khana hai padhna hai aur khelna hai. aur sona hai.
somwar se shanivar kab aa gaya pata hi nahi chala. ab mai shaam ko school ke baad archana ke ghar jaane laga tha. wahan mai archana aur rani tino milkar ek saath padhayi karne lage the. archana sachme padhne me bahut tej thi. uska concentration aisa tha ki wo ek baar baithe to 4-5 ghante bina idhar udhar dekhe lagtar padh paati thi lekin mai aur rani aise nahi the. archana ke saath padhte padhte hum dono me bhi kaafi sudhar hua tha.
jab shanivaar ka raat aaya to mai khushi khushi maa ke paas gaya.
mai maa ko bola-maaya ji maine to pure hafte achhe se padhayi ki hai ab to mujhe meri mehnat ka fal dijiye.
maa boli-meri pyaare patidev ji. maine niyamo me kuch sudhar kiye hai. aapko pyaar har hafte nahi har do hafte me mila karega.
mai bola-ye beimani hai. mai iske khilaf dharna dunga.
maa boli-jhadu se pitayi karungi to sudhar jaoge chup chap so jao.
mai udas sa mooh bana kar apne room me aa gaya.
maa mere pass aayi aur boli-raja ye tumhare bhalayi ke liye hai aur mujhe ek baar chumi.
mai bola-dekhna maaya agle shanivar ko palang tod dunga.
maa boli-bilkul ji palang tod dena bulb tube lighth sab fod dena mujhe khush kar dena lekin abhi aap so jao aur goodnight bol kar chali gayi.
sunday ka din maine rakha tha holiday. aaj ke din mai sabse milne jata tha.
sunday ko mai sabse pahle rani ke ghar gaya nirmala aunty se mila. wo to ab lagbhag thik ho hi gayi thi aur kaafi khush bhi thi. unse kuch der baate hui fir mai shivani ji ke ghar gaya unse mila. mujhse mil kar wo bahut khush thi fir maine unko hotel ka bill dene ki baat ki to unhone bola ki dobara aisi baat ki to hotel hi aapke naam kar dungi. mai bola na baba na. hume maafi de do. uske baad fir pragya ji se mila. unke saath kuch pyaar bhari baate hui. wo ab mere saath kaafi khulte jaa rahi thi. dheere dheere wo mujhe sab chij batane lagi thi jaise office me kya kaam karti hai ghar me kab khati hai soti hai. waise bhi maine unko bol rakha tha har raat ek baar baat karne jo wo mujhse karti hi thi. hum dono me ab ek parivarik rista sa ban gaya tha. fir mai gaya apni mam ke pass. unse bhi kuch baat chit hua thoda pyaar bhi hua jo archana ne chup kar dekh bhi liya aur hum dono ko pata bhi nahi chala. jab shaam ko ghar lout raha tha to apne boundary me panvi aunty mil gayi. uncle bahar gaye the shopping karne to unke ghar jakar unhe bhi khush kar diya. fir ghar aaya thoda padhayi kiya aur kha pikar so gaya. fir somwar se shanivaar humne khub padhayi kiya is bich mai dekh raha tha rani aur archana ab kafi achhe se ek dusre se baat karte the lekin unki jadatar baate sirf padhayi ko lekar hi rahti thi. rani aur archana ki mehnat dekhkar mujhe bhi lagne laga tha ki mera bhale ho na ho in dono ka to selection ho kar hi rahega. is shanivaar jab raat ko mai khana kha raha tha to maa ko baar baar dekh raha tha. maa baar baar najre jhuka le rahi thi. jab mai maa ko lagatar dekhta raha to maa boli-aise kya dekh rahe ho chup chap khana khao.
mai khate hue bola-aaj mai nahi sunuga tumhari baat. aaj mujhe aapke saath sona hai matlab sona hai. aaj koi bahana nahi chalega.
maa boli-achha pahel khana to kha lo.
mai khana kha liya aur maa bhi kha li. fir maa bartan dhone kitchen chali gayi to mai bhi unke piche piche kitchen gaya aur piche se unhe pakad liya.
maa boli-kya kar rahe hai pahle bartan to dho lene dijiye.
mai bola-bartan to ab kal dhulega aaj to sirf pyaar hoga aapne hi to kaha tha aaj palang tod dunga bulb light sab fod dunga. ye bolkar mai piche se maa ko god me uthaya aur sidha bed pe lakar patak diya. fir mai bina waqt gawaye unpar chadh gaya. fir humara pyaar ek kiss se suru hua aur hum dono dheere dheere jungli ban gaye. sirf mai hi unke pyaar ka pyaasa nahi tha wo bhi utni hi pyassi thi. hum dono raat bhar chudayi karte rahe. kabhi bed pe kabhi jamin pe kabhi khade.raat 9 baje se suru hua karyakram subha ke 3 baje tak chala aur hum dono hafte hue ek dusre ke baahon me so gaye. subah 9 baje jab nind khula to mai maa ko bhi jagaya. fir aaj sunday tha to sabse ek ek karke mil bhi liya. sabhi ki jindagi achhi chal rahi thi sab log dheere dheere khushiyon ki raah me badh rahe the. isi tarah dekhte dekhte 2 mahine bit gaye.
ab mera archana aur rani ki taiyari bahut achhi ho gayi thi yahan tak ki class me jo test hue the usme hum tino ke sabhi test me 100% the. jisse jo bhi log hum logon se jude hue the chahe meri maa ho ya mam ho ya rani ki maa sab bahut khush thi. hum tino apne ghar ke shaan bane hue the. bich me ek baar didi bhi mujhse milne aana chahti thi lekin wo jab mere baare me suni ki mai din raat padhayi kar raha hoon to wo bhi udhar coachuing center me jada mehnat karne lagi. wahan bhi ab 200 bachhe ho gaye the jisse wahan bhi sab log khush the aur sabse jada khush the do log ek tha nilesh aur dusri thi vina ji. dono apne paiso se bhare bhavisya ki kalpana me khub mehant kiye jaa rahe the. jiska fayda coaching center ko ho raha tha yani mujhe bhi ho raha tha. ab har mahine sabko paise de dene ke baad sare kharche ke baad didi ke pass 40 se 50 hazar tak bach raha tha jo ki achha baat tha.
ab jaise jaise humara exam karib aa raha tha hum log aur jada padhayi me khote jaa rahe the aur 2 mahina fir isi tarah bit gaya. humne apna pre board bhi de diya jisme hum tino ne kaafi achha perform kiya tha. aur humare board exam ka bhi tarikh aa gaya tha saath hi humare entrance exam ka bhi aa gaya tha.kismat se baoard exam ke 4 din baad hi entrance exam ka bhi date tha.
maa ne saaf bol diya ki ab jitna bhi pyaar karna hai wo sab exam ke baad. ek mahine sirf padhayi.
sab log jaldi se jaldi humare exam khatm hone ka wait kar rahe the. jahan shivani ji apne shaadi ki planning ke liye wahi archana aur rani apni planning ke liye. in sabke bich ek ladki aisi thi jo bahut dukhi thi aur wo bhi mere exam khatm hone ka wait kar rahi thi aur wo thi punam ji. dheere dheere samay bit gaya aur exam suru ho gaya. sare exam ek ek karke hone lage. jis din mera akhiri exam tha us se ek din pahle humare ghar me padhare humare bade bhai sahab. ye aaye the maa ko chennai le jane ke liye.
maa bhai ko bhi bahut maanti hai. bade bhai ko dkehte hi pata nahi kyun lekin mujhe achha nahi lagta tha kyunki kahi na kahi mer epichel janm me maa pe hue atyacharo me mai bhai ko bhi doshi maanta hoon. aur ab wo maa ko mujhse door le jane wale the. ye sochte hi mujhe dar sa lahne lag gaya tha lekin mujhe ye bhi pata tha ki maa to jayegi hi aur mujhe jaldi se jaldi bhabhi ka bandobast karna padega kyunki maa ke chennai se lout te hi bhai ki shaadi ki baat suru ho jayegi.
mai akhiri exam bhi kisi tarah de diya.
maa ne bahut sapnde dekhe honge ki mere exam ke baad wo mere saath pyaar bhara samay bitayengi lekin un sapno ke bich maa ko apna bhavisya nahi pata tha aur mai apne pichle janm ko kuch pal ke liye bhool gaya tha jo fir se ek aaina ban kar mere saamne aa gaya aur mai tay kar liya is mahine to bhabhi ka kaam nipta kar hi aaunga.
final exam ke agle din hi mai maa ko bhai ke saath train se vida kiya.
jab ghar lout kar aaya to ghar pe ek post aaya tha jo government se tha. us post me likha tha 6 mahine me ye ghar khali karna padega. mai wo post apne pass rakh liya aur fir phone milaya punam ji ko.
mai ek baar phone milaya to unhone nahi uthyaa fir dusri baar bhi nahi uthaya fir jab tisri baar phone uthaya to wo phone uthayi aur darte hue boli-sorry raja please tum mujhe apne gundo se mat marwana mai wada karti hoon tumhara jo bhi nuksaan hua hai mai wo chuka dungi.
mai punam ji ki baat sunte hi sochne laga ab kya ho gaya.
mai punam ji ko bola-pahle bataiye to baat kya hai.
punam ji boli-humne wo xxxx gaav ke pass jamin li thi na use us gaav ke ek aadmi ne hadap liya hai. jab mai dobara se gayi thi wahan to usne mujhe bhi kidnap kar liya tha. wo kamina to mere papa se bhi paise maangne wala tha lekin kismat se mai wahan se bhag aayi lekin mere sare original documents jo mai lekar gayi thi usi ke pass hai. aur wo humari jamin gaban karke baitha hai. wo log bahut khatarnaak hai. bandook chaku ye sab to bahut common hai un logon ke liye. is jamin ko kharidne me tumhare jo bhi paise lage hai wo sab mai louta dungi mai wada karti hoon.
mai punam ji ko bola-punam ji aap mujhe bahut bada gunda samjhti hai na to dekhiye ab meri gundayi. mai sharifo ke liye mahaan bhale na ban pau gundo ke liye shaitan jaroor banunga. aap wait kijiye mai kal aapke pass aata hoon. aur mai phone kaat diya.
mujhe gussa to bahut aa raha tha.
sala maine abhi bussiness suru hi kiya hai aur gaav ke gunde ki itni aukaat ki mere raste me aaye. mai to gaav jarur jaunga aur us gunde se apna hisab punam ji ka hisab sabka hisab karke aaunga.
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punam ji se baat karne ke baad mujhe sabse baat karna tha kyunki agar mai mahine bhar ke liye gayab ho jaunga to sab pareshan ho jayenge aur sabko bata ke jaunga to koi jane nahi dega. kyunki 12-15 lakh rupaye shivani ji ke liye ya fir ruhi mam ke liye koi badi baat nahi thi wahi archana aur rani to aur bhi jada nahi jane dengi. aur maa didi se to puchna hi bekar hai isliye mujhe ek jhuth bolna tha. jo mai soch bhi liya tha.lekin pahle entrance exam jaruri tha isliye 4 din jam ke padha aur fir hum tino exam dene gaye. hum tino ka exam bahut achha gaya tha. rani to bahut jada khush thi aur wo ghar aate aate kam se kam 100 baar archana ko thank you bol chuki thi.mai bhi apne ghar aa gaya fir mai phone uthaya aar maa didi ko chodkar sabko ek ek karke phone kiya aur sabko bol diya ki kal mujhe urgently gaav jana padega. gaav me mere chacha ji ki tabiyat bahut bahut bahut jada kharab hai. ab aisi baat pe koi bhi mujhe kaise rokta. mai janta tha ye bahut bada jhuth hai aur aisa jhuth bolna nahi chahiye lekin mere pass koi dusra idea aaya hi nahi. sablog mujhse ek baar milna to chahte the lekin mujhe pata tha sabke saamne mai jhuth nahi bol paunga kisi na kisi ke saamne sach mooh se nikal hi jayega isliye sabko milne se mana kar diya aur agli subah chup chap ghar lock karke nikal gaya. dopehar ko mai sidha punam ji ke pass pahucha jo humare gaav ki jamin thi wahan ke factory me.
jab mai unka chehra dekha to mera gussa bahut jada badh gaya kyunki unke chehre pe bhi kuch chot ke nisan the.
punam ji mere saamne sir jhuka kar baithi hui thi.
mai punam ji ko bola-punam ji aap bilkul bhi chinta mat karo. jis kisi ne bhi aapke aur humare sapno me tang adayi hai uski tange kaat kar uski gaand me fit kar dunga. un haramio ki himmat kaise hui aap par haath uthane ki.
meri ankhon me gussa dekh kar punam ji bhi dar gayi aur darte hue boli-wo log bahut khatarnaak hai raja.
mai bola-mujhse jada nahi hai.
aap sirf batao ye sab kisne kiya hai.
punam ji darte hue boli-dekho tumhe in sab me nahi padna chahiye.
mai bola-punam ji aap bilkul bhi mat dariye. mai hoon na mere rahte aapke aur mere sapne koi bhi nahi chin sakta. aap bas bataiye. kisne kiya ye sab.
punam ji darte hue mujhe sab chije bata di.
mai bola-thik hai ab dekhiye mai kya kya karta hoon.
punam ji kuch sochkar boli-dekho tum agar jaoge to mai bhi chalti hoon.
mai socha agar direct mana kar dunga to sayad inko bura lage.
mai bola-dekhiye aap yahi rahiye aur yahan se meri madad kijiye mera wada hai aapse jisne bhi aap par ek haath bhi uthaya hai us par kam se kam 100 jute marne ka mouka aapko jarur dunga. aap bus 15-20 din mujhpar bharosa kijiye. aapne duniya me bahut se logon par bharosa kiya hoga bahuto ne aapko dhokha diya hoga lekin kasam se mujhsa partner aapko nahi milega aur mai ye proof kar dunga. bas 15-20 din aap kisi ko kuch mat batana.
aur fir mai unke ghar se apna dimag doudate hue nikla. jab sab kuch soch vichar liya to chadh gaya bus par. shaam ko bus ek jagah ruki aur conductor chillaya ramouli gaav wale utar jao ramouli gaav wale utar jao.
mai bhi apna bag liya aur utar gaya. fir wahan se kachhi sadak thi ramouli gaav jaati thi. mai logon se puchte puchte ek ghar ke paas pahuch gaya. ek miiti aur ito(bricks) se bana ek ghar tha. mai andar ghusa to mujhe wo dikha jise dekhkar to man kiya ki is aadmi ka khoon kar doon fir bhi jabran muskurate hue bola-pranam fufa ji.
wo aadmi bole-tum koun ho beta.
mai-arey mai raja aapki mousi ki bhatiji ke ladke hai hum. nahi pahchane maaya di ke bete hai.
fufa ji yaad karte hue bole-ha haan yaad aaya tum maaya di ke ladke raja ho. aao aao baitho.
fufa jor se chillya-stuti arey stuti dekho maaya di ka ladka aaya hai. bachapan me dekha tha jab tum bahut chote the.
fir mera fufa tont marte hue bola-matric me to fail kar gaye the suna tha pass hue ki abhi bhi sab bhagwane bharose.
mai man me gaali diya isko fir bola-nahi nahi fufa ji 10th pass kar gaye hai abhi 12th ka exam diye hai.
fufa fir comment mara-pass kar jaoge ki gaay charaoge.
mera to sala iski baat sunkar jhaat sulag gaya. ek to isi harami ne mere bhai ki shaadi karayi thi. kasam se agar meri maa ki pichli jindagi kharab karne me iska thoda sa bhi haath hua na iski gaand maar kar jaunga.
tabhi bua bhi aa gayi-haath me ek chai ka cup lekar. mai unko bhi pranam kiya aur pucha-bhaiya nahi dikh rahe.
bua boli-arey wo gujraat me hai truck chala raha hai.
fufa bola-hum to bole the usko yahi rahne pata nahi kyun chala gaya.
mai man me bola-sala usko bhi aise hi din bhar comment maar maar kar pareshan karta hoga isliye chala gaya.
fufa bola-beta aaye ho ye to sahi hai koi kaam tha kya yahan.
mai bola-wo kya hai na fufa ji abhi to school band ho gaya hai to socha kuch mehnat majdoori karke kama loon to maa se pata chala ki aapke gaav me ek jamindaar hai jahan kaam mil sakta hai.
ye baat sunte hi mera fufa chati chouda karke bola-haan haan tum ek-do din ruko mai jamindaar se baat karke tumko wahan rakhwa dunga. humari kaafi jaan pahchan hai unse. tab tak gaav ghumna hai to ghum lo.
mai bola-thik hai. aur gaav ghumne ke liye nikal gaya. achhe se gaav dekha saath hi jamindaar ka bada bangla bhi dekha jiske gate ke pass 10-12 gaav ke mustande baithe gupp shup haak rahe the. mai ghum fir kar ek ghante me ghar aa gaya.

ab aaiye kuch logon ka intro kara deta hoon.
chirag kumar- umra 45 saal hai. ye hai mere mummy ke door ke fua ki bahan ke bete.
inhone hi mere bhai ki shadi ke liye meri bhabhi ke taraf se pahal ki thi.
stuti kumari-umar 40 saal. ye hai chirag ki patni ji. inka ek ladka hai jo gujraat me truck chalata hai.

ab is gaav ke jamindaar ke baare me kuch bata doon jo ramouli gaav ka bahut bada aur harami jamindaar hai.
nagma devi-umra 50 saal. ek number ki khadoos aur ghar ki malkin. ghar me sabse jada padhi likhi aurat.(ye baat mujhe punam ji batayi thi)
deva lattu-ye hai nagma ka pati aur lattu khandan ka jamindar. umra 55 saal.
iske do bete hai.
nirala lattu-umar 24 saal. ek number ka aaiyass ladka aur dimag se paidal.
virala lattu-umar 20 saal. ye dimag se bahut tej hai lekin utna hi jada sentimental hai.


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jab raat hua to sone ki baari aayi. is ghar me do room tha ek bramada aur fir ek angan jo khula hua tha. is ghar me sirf bahar hi ek gate tha baaki kisi room me gate nahi tha sirf parda laga hua tha. waise bhi mera fufa koi kaam dhaam nahi karta tha bas idhar ka udhar aur udhar ka idhar karke kuch paise kama leta tha.
yahan gaav me bijli bhi naa ke barabar hi tha. lalten ki roshni me hi hum sab khana khaye the.
mai ek room me andhere me leta soch raha tha ki kaise jamindaar se jamin lena hai. tabhi mujhe bua ka awaj sunayi diya.
stuti bua thoda gusse me boli-ye kya kar rahe hai. bagal room me bhatija hai.
tabhi mera fufa chirag ka awaj aaya-chup saali pata nahi kahan se ye maaya ka ladka raja aa gaya. uske chalte mai kya apni raat khrab karu.
fir stuti bua ka awaj aaya-arey ruk jaiye na wo kya sochega.
fir chirag fufa ka awaj aaya-jo sochna hai sochne do. gaand maraye wo.
aur fir tabhi stuti bua ki awaj aayi-ahhhhhhhhhhhh aur fir ek awaj aaya chatakkkkkkkk
fir chirag ka awaj aaya-chilla kyun rahi hai re randi pahli baar karwa rahi hai kya. fir se awaj aaya chattakkk ahhhhhhhhhhhh
fir aisa laga jaise chirag ne stuti bua ka mooh daba diya ho kyunki unke rone wali ahhh ahhh ahhh ahhh tin char baar awaj aaya.
fir chirag ka hafta hua awaj aaya- haahh ho gaya re haah ho gaya ab kya ro rahi hai.
mai man me socah-sala ye fufa to sachme bada gira hua aadmi hai. pahle apna jamin ka kaam kar leta hoon jaate jaate iski gaand me bhi fuljhadi sulga ke jaaunga jindagi bhar ke liye sudhar jaayega.
fir mai bhi so gaya. agla subah hua to yahan fresh hone ke liye khet me hi jana padta tha. mai bhi lota liya aur chal diya khet. jab fresh hokar aaya to ek kua tha ghar ke pass hi. waise gaav me 3-4 kua tha jiske ghar ke pass jo kua hota tha wahi sab log nahate the. mahilao ke liye ek bathroom jaisa bana hua tha aur purush kua ke pass hi naha lete the khule me. mai bhi kue ke pass gaya jo is ghar ke pass hi tha wahan nahaya fir ghar aaya.
bua ne subah kuch bana ke diya mai kha liya aur ghumne ke liye nikal gaya.
mera fufa bhi mujhe bolkar gaya tha ki aaj wo jaa raha hai jamindaar se mere kaam ke liye baat karega.
mai mast ghumta hua apne gaav se thoda bahar aa gaya tha kyunki mere gaav ke baad dusra gaav wahi tha jo meri bhabhi ka tha.
mai abhi road pe jaa hi raha tha ki mai dekha achanak se mere bagal se ek car nikla aur wo dhammm se samne se aa rahe ek bike se takra gaya.
bike se car takrate hi bike wala gir gaya aur wo gusse me utha aur car ke driver ke pass gaya aur khidki se haath ghusa ke chattaaakkkk se ek thappad jad diya.
bike wal bola-sale bhosdi ke ankh me lund fit karke gaadi chalata hai.
abhi wo itna hi bola tha ki car ke dusre side se ek lamba chouda ladka nikla aur wo bike wale ladke ke kanpaati pe pattaaaakkkkkkkk se ek dhar diya.
wo bike wala ladka jamin pe gir gaya.
wo jamin par se gusse me bola-teri maa chodu mujhpe haath uthata hai ruk abhi dekh tu. aur wo kisi ko call kiya aur bola-jaldi aa jao bhai.
aur sala uske phone karte hi 1 minut se bhi kam time me 4-5 log aa gaya sabke haath me mota mota lakdi ka danda tha. sab dhadd dhadd dhadd dhadd driver ko aur us lambe choude ladke ko maar ke leta diya uske bad sab gusse me piche ka gate kholne ka kosis karne laga lekin gate lock tha khul hi nahi raha tha. fir aage ka bhi gate kholne ka kosis kiya wo bhi lock tha.
to us bike wale ke ek dost ne bola-bum maar do saale ko. aur wo 4-5 log mil kar car ko ek taraf pura palat diya. aur fir bike wala palte hue car ke me jhuk ke jor se car ke ek shishe pe mara aur channn se thoda sa shisha toot gaya fir apni apne pocket se bomb jaisa kuch nikala bomb fek diya.
uske baad wo sab nikal gaya. dekhte dekhte car me dhua bharne laga. mai thoda door se ye sab dekh raha tha tabhi koi mere piche se bola-arey ye to apne gaav ka jamindaar hai.
mai ye sunte hi doud ke car ki taraf bhaga car me dhua bharne laga tha. sayad desi bomb tha isliye itna time lag raha tha. aur jaldi se palte hue car ke pass jhuka aur laat se piche ka toota hua shisha poora tod diya aur dum lagakar gate khola aur us aadmi ka haath pakad ke nikala aur fir dono car se jaldi se door bage.
abhi hum dono 3-4 kadam bhaage hi the ki booom se bomb fata aur uski awaj aur dhamaka se hum dono gir gaye. fir mai sambhal kar us jamindaar ko uthaya. fir road se gujar rahe ek car se lift lekar usko car me baitha diya.
wo jamindaar mujhe hafte hue sukriya bola aur chala gaya.
us car ke nikalte hi mai us road se bagal ke jungle ki taraf ghus gaya. kuch door jab chal kar andar aaya to 5 ladke mere saamne khade the. ye wahi panch the jo abhi jamindaar ke saath kand kiye the.
mai bola-waah tum logon ne mera dil jeet liya. mujhe pata nahi tha tum log itne achhe ho.
usme se ek bola-arey sir hume nilesh bhaiya ne bola hai achhe se kaam karo to aur kaam milega. ye sab kaam ke liye to humlog humesha se ready hai.
mai 30 hazar nikal kar us ladke ke haath me diya aur bola tum panch hi ho to wo ek aur kaha gaya.
wo ladka bola-sir jis car me aapne jamindaar ko baithaya na wo humara last sathi hai. hum log jo bhi kaam karte hai achhe se karte hai. wo jamindaar ko chod kar aayega fir hum sab us car se nikal jayenge. koi hum par shak bhi nahi karega kyunki usi ne to jamindaar ko bachaya hai.
mai-waah kya baat hai.
wo bola-kya sir aapne hi to idea diya tha.
mai-to kya hua kiya to tum logon ne. ab gayab ho jao is area se nahi to jamindaar kaat dalega.
wo log wahan se nikal liya.
mai man me bola-dekhta jaa jamindaar aaj to suruaat hai dekh abhi kya kya hoga tere saath. tune galat aadmi se panga le liya hai.

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kal din me jab mai punam ji ke factory se nikla tha tabhi main nilesh se mila tha. kyunki mujhe pata tha nilesh ko paise do aur thoda lalach do to bahut kuch kar sakta hai.
mai thoda tension wala chehra lekar nilesh ke pass gaya.
nilesh-kya hua raja thoda tension me ho.
mai bola-kya batau bhai mai socha tha ye coaching center jab achhe se chalne lagega tab ek aur center kholunga aur wahan ka head tumhe ya sravan ko banaunga lekin mai paisa laga kar jamin kharida aur jamin wahan ka ek harami jamindaar hadap liya. ab kam se kam wo jamin hi bik jaye to us paise ko yahan lagaunga jis se ye center aur achha banega jis se yahan kamai badhega lekin koi idea hi nahi aa raha hai. ek idea aaya bhi hai to wo bahut muskil hai.
ab paise ki baat ho nilesh piche hat jaaye ye to hone se raha.
nilesh bola-idea kya hai.
mai bola-mai chahta hoon kuch log jakar uske aadmi ko maare aur use bhi daraye aur mai use bacha loon fir wo mujhe man ne lagega aur mai apna jamin ka paisa ya jamin nikalwa lunga lekin mujhe aise gunde milenge kahan jo yahan aas pass ka nahi ho aur ye sab kaam bhi karde.
nilesh bola-mai janta hoon kuch log ko jo dusre rajya se hai yahan majdoori karte hai. unko paisa do to wo log kar denge.
mai bola-kya ye ho sakta hai.
nilesh bola-mai hoon na bhai bas jab bhi dusri jagah caoching kholna ya is coaching ko bada banana to mera bhi khyal rakhna.
mai bola-haan haan bilkul.
aur kya tha nilesh ne akhir sham hote hote 5 logon ka jugad kar hi diya. sabse mai phone pe baat bhi kar liya jab mai bas se ramouli gaav ki taraf aa raha tha.

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mujhe pata nahi tha ye ek din me ho payega ya 3-4 din legenge lekin kismat dekho aaj hi sab ho gaya.
mai mast ghar gaya. din me khana khaya.
udhar mera fufa jab jamindaar ke bangle me pahucha tha idhar udhar ghum kar dekha to use nagma ji mil gayi.
fufa daant nikal kar chaplusi wale andaj me bola-pranam malkin.
nagma-bolo kya baat hai chirag.
fufa-malkin mera ek bhatija aaya hai gaav se kuch kaam mil jata to thik rahta.
nagma-dekho humare pass abhi koi kaam nahi hai.
fufa-bahut ummid se aaye the malkin. kuch dekh lete aapka naam to gaav gaav tak hai.
nagma-thik hai thik hai. ghar me saaf safayi ka kaam kar lega , janwar ko khana wana de dega to thik hai kal le aana.
fufa-malkin wo kitne paise milenge wo bhi bata deti to achha rahta.
nagma-char hazar dungi mahine ka.
fufa-thik hai malkin. aap uska paisa mujhe de dijiyega. wo abhi chota hai na paise sambhal nahi payega.
nagma-thik hai de dungi. kal usko le kar aao tab sochungi noukari dena hai ya nahi.
mera fufa kutte ki tarah jibh nikalte hue bola-ji malkin. aur wo udhar se nikalne laga tabhi ek car gate ke pass aaya usme se jamindaar sahab nikle. jinke chehra gandgi aur dhua se kaala ho gaya tha kapde kharab ho gaye the. unke saath unke 5-6 log aur the jo gate ke pass se saath me aa rahe the. jamindaar deva ko is halat me dekhte hi unka beta nirala doud ke unke pass aaya.
nirala-kaise hua ye baapu.
deva-kuch badmash mil gaye the jo humari car se takraye fir ladayi ho gaya.
nirala gusse me bola-cheer ke rakh denge sabko.
aur wo ek aadmi ko bola-ae gaadi nikal saal gaav gaav dhundho sabko. aur fir 10-12 log jeep se sann sannn karke nikle apne hathon me badook talwaar lekar. un chutiyo ko ye bhi pata nahi tha saale pahchanenge kaise kisne mara hai. bas jeep lekar nikal gaye the.
nirala ke pass to bas sarir tha lamba chouda. dimag to tha uske chote bete virala ke pass jo abhi gaav me nahi tha kuch kaam se sahar gaya hua tha.
mera fufa ye sab dekhte hi gaand daba ke wahan se bhaag liya. fattu to ek number ka tha.
dopehar ka khana khate samay fufa mere saath tha.
fufa bola-dekh raja bahut mehnat se tumhare liye noukari maanga hai. tin hazar rupya milega. man lagakar kaam karna.
mai-ji fufa.
fufa-kal chalna mere saath. akele mat jana samjha.
mai-ji fufa.
fir kuch kaam to hua nahi shaam aa gaya. mai bas apne plan ke baare me sochta raha. kuch bhi ho nilesh ke bheje logon ne jamindaar ke driver aur bodygiard ko to achhe se kuta tha. dil khush ho gaya ye dekh kar. man to kar raha tha ki us jamindaar ko car me hi jala doon lekin jamin ke paper nikalwane the isliye bacha liya.
mai maa aur didi se fir shaam ko baat kiya aur bataya ki factory ke kaam se aaya hua hoon. maa ne bataya ki wo bhi chennai pahuch gayi hai aur achhe se hai. mujhe khushi hua. didi bhi thoda gussa hui lekin maine mana liya.
ab fir raat hua. mujhe pata tha sala ye fufa fir raat ko apni darindagi suru karega aur hua bhi waisa hi. raat hote hi bua ki rone wali chikh aayi. aaj bua ne virodh nahi kiya tha.
fufa humara char dhakko ke baad dher ho gaya.
mai chup chap so gaya.
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Bhai kya baat he new new character bahut khoob......
New character matalab naya adventure bhayi wah majja aayega...
Lage raho bhai.....
 

A.A.G.

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mai jab school pahucha to rani mujhe dikh gayi lekin archana rani se kuch baat kar rahi thi. aur rani kafi serious thi. mai socha mai bhi to sunu akhir dono me baat kya ho raha hai lekin jab tak mai wahan pahucha dono ki baat khatm ho gayi aur archana bina mere taraf dekhe chali gayi.
mai socha-isko kya ho gaya hai. fir socha sayad koi kaam hoga usko. rani se puchta hoon.
mai-rani kya baat kar rahi thi archana se.
rani-wo ek form aaya hai usi ka baat kar rahi thi. archana bol rahi thi ki priciple mam chahti hai ki mai aage achhe se padhu aur paise ki chinta na karu isliye mere liye school ne ek form bhara hai jisme mai exam de sakti hoon. agar top 5 me mai aaungi to meri fee maaf ho jayegi aur archana ne bhi wo form bhara hai to wo bol rahi thi ki mai uske saath hi taiyari karu.
mai-kya baat hai school to kaafi meharbaan hai tumpar.
rani boli-mai bhi soch rahi hoon tumhara rank to mujhse aage hai to tumhe bhi ye offer aaya hoga.
mai socha agar naa bol dunga to rani ko shak ho jayega.
mai bola-haan haan aaya to tha lekin uske pahle hi maine ye form bhar diya tha.
rani gusse me boli-tumne form bhar diya aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi.
mai-wo mai batane wala tha aaj lekin iske pahle hi ye sab ho gaya.
rani fir khush hokar boli-wahh ye to achhi baat hai. hum tino saath me taiyari karenge.
mai-lekin tumhe to archana pasand nahi hai na.
rani-haan mujhe wo pasand to nahi hai lekin fir bhi wo humari madad to kar rahi hai na.
rani man me boli-uski madad se hum dono ek hi college me chale jayenge wo bhi itne achhe college me. ek baar mai college pahuch jau uske baad tumhe apne jalwe dikhaungi. tumhe to apna bana ke rahungi.
mai-are oo maharani kaha kho gayi.
rani apna gala saaf karte hue boli-nahi nahi kuch nahi chalo.
fit humara class suru ho gaya. hum tino class me pura man laga kar padhe itna hi nahi lunch time me bhi jaldi khakar mai aur rani padhne lage to humare pass archana bhi aa gayi aur padhne lagi. fir baaki ke class bhi hue. fir mai ghar aaya khana khaya aur padhayi chalu. shaam ko maa ne jabran khelne ke liye bhej diya. aaj bahut din baad apne loafer dosto se mila lekin ab mai un loafer dosto ke badle jo usme kuch achhe ladke the unse dosti karne ka socha aur shaam ko 2 ghante khel kar aaya fir baith kar padhayi kiya. aur kha kar so gaya. maa mujhe ghar ka koi kaam nahi karne de rahi thi. mera kaam bas itna hi tha ki khana hai padhna hai aur khelna hai. aur sona hai.
somwar se shanivar kab aa gaya pata hi nahi chala. ab mai shaam ko school ke baad archana ke ghar jaane laga tha. wahan mai archana aur rani tino milkar ek saath padhayi karne lage the. archana sachme padhne me bahut tej thi. uska concentration aisa tha ki wo ek baar baithe to 4-5 ghante bina idhar udhar dekhe lagtar padh paati thi lekin mai aur rani aise nahi the. archana ke saath padhte padhte hum dono me bhi kaafi sudhar hua tha.
jab shanivaar ka raat aaya to mai khushi khushi maa ke paas gaya.
mai maa ko bola-maaya ji maine to pure hafte achhe se padhayi ki hai ab to mujhe meri mehnat ka fal dijiye.
maa boli-meri pyaare patidev ji. maine niyamo me kuch sudhar kiye hai. aapko pyaar har hafte nahi har do hafte me mila karega.
mai bola-ye beimani hai. mai iske khilaf dharna dunga.
maa boli-jhadu se pitayi karungi to sudhar jaoge chup chap so jao.
mai udas sa mooh bana kar apne room me aa gaya.
maa mere pass aayi aur boli-raja ye tumhare bhalayi ke liye hai aur mujhe ek baar chumi.
mai bola-dekhna maaya agle shanivar ko palang tod dunga.
maa boli-bilkul ji palang tod dena bulb tube lighth sab fod dena mujhe khush kar dena lekin abhi aap so jao aur goodnight bol kar chali gayi.
sunday ka din maine rakha tha holiday. aaj ke din mai sabse milne jata tha.
sunday ko mai sabse pahle rani ke ghar gaya nirmala aunty se mila. wo to ab lagbhag thik ho hi gayi thi aur kaafi khush bhi thi. unse kuch der baate hui fir mai shivani ji ke ghar gaya unse mila. mujhse mil kar wo bahut khush thi fir maine unko hotel ka bill dene ki baat ki to unhone bola ki dobara aisi baat ki to hotel hi aapke naam kar dungi. mai bola na baba na. hume maafi de do. uske baad fir pragya ji se mila. unke saath kuch pyaar bhari baate hui. wo ab mere saath kaafi khulte jaa rahi thi. dheere dheere wo mujhe sab chij batane lagi thi jaise office me kya kaam karti hai ghar me kab khati hai soti hai. waise bhi maine unko bol rakha tha har raat ek baar baat karne jo wo mujhse karti hi thi. hum dono me ab ek parivarik rista sa ban gaya tha. fir mai gaya apni mam ke pass. unse bhi kuch baat chit hua thoda pyaar bhi hua jo archana ne chup kar dekh bhi liya aur hum dono ko pata bhi nahi chala. jab shaam ko ghar lout raha tha to apne boundary me panvi aunty mil gayi. uncle bahar gaye the shopping karne to unke ghar jakar unhe bhi khush kar diya. fir ghar aaya thoda padhayi kiya aur kha pikar so gaya. fir somwar se shanivaar humne khub padhayi kiya is bich mai dekh raha tha rani aur archana ab kafi achhe se ek dusre se baat karte the lekin unki jadatar baate sirf padhayi ko lekar hi rahti thi. rani aur archana ki mehnat dekhkar mujhe bhi lagne laga tha ki mera bhale ho na ho in dono ka to selection ho kar hi rahega. is shanivaar jab raat ko mai khana kha raha tha to maa ko baar baar dekh raha tha. maa baar baar najre jhuka le rahi thi. jab mai maa ko lagatar dekhta raha to maa boli-aise kya dekh rahe ho chup chap khana khao.
mai khate hue bola-aaj mai nahi sunuga tumhari baat. aaj mujhe aapke saath sona hai matlab sona hai. aaj koi bahana nahi chalega.
maa boli-achha pahel khana to kha lo.
mai khana kha liya aur maa bhi kha li. fir maa bartan dhone kitchen chali gayi to mai bhi unke piche piche kitchen gaya aur piche se unhe pakad liya.
maa boli-kya kar rahe hai pahle bartan to dho lene dijiye.
mai bola-bartan to ab kal dhulega aaj to sirf pyaar hoga aapne hi to kaha tha aaj palang tod dunga bulb light sab fod dunga. ye bolkar mai piche se maa ko god me uthaya aur sidha bed pe lakar patak diya. fir mai bina waqt gawaye unpar chadh gaya. fir humara pyaar ek kiss se suru hua aur hum dono dheere dheere jungli ban gaye. sirf mai hi unke pyaar ka pyaasa nahi tha wo bhi utni hi pyassi thi. hum dono raat bhar chudayi karte rahe. kabhi bed pe kabhi jamin pe kabhi khade.raat 9 baje se suru hua karyakram subha ke 3 baje tak chala aur hum dono hafte hue ek dusre ke baahon me so gaye. subah 9 baje jab nind khula to mai maa ko bhi jagaya. fir aaj sunday tha to sabse ek ek karke mil bhi liya. sabhi ki jindagi achhi chal rahi thi sab log dheere dheere khushiyon ki raah me badh rahe the. isi tarah dekhte dekhte 2 mahine bit gaye.
ab mera archana aur rani ki taiyari bahut achhi ho gayi thi yahan tak ki class me jo test hue the usme hum tino ke sabhi test me 100% the. jisse jo bhi log hum logon se jude hue the chahe meri maa ho ya mam ho ya rani ki maa sab bahut khush thi. hum tino apne ghar ke shaan bane hue the. bich me ek baar didi bhi mujhse milne aana chahti thi lekin wo jab mere baare me suni ki mai din raat padhayi kar raha hoon to wo bhi udhar coachuing center me jada mehnat karne lagi. wahan bhi ab 200 bachhe ho gaye the jisse wahan bhi sab log khush the aur sabse jada khush the do log ek tha nilesh aur dusri thi vina ji. dono apne paiso se bhare bhavisya ki kalpana me khub mehant kiye jaa rahe the. jiska fayda coaching center ko ho raha tha yani mujhe bhi ho raha tha. ab har mahine sabko paise de dene ke baad sare kharche ke baad didi ke pass 40 se 50 hazar tak bach raha tha jo ki achha baat tha.
ab jaise jaise humara exam karib aa raha tha hum log aur jada padhayi me khote jaa rahe the aur 2 mahina fir isi tarah bit gaya. humne apna pre board bhi de diya jisme hum tino ne kaafi achha perform kiya tha. aur humare board exam ka bhi tarikh aa gaya tha saath hi humare entrance exam ka bhi aa gaya tha.kismat se baoard exam ke 4 din baad hi entrance exam ka bhi date tha.
maa ne saaf bol diya ki ab jitna bhi pyaar karna hai wo sab exam ke baad. ek mahine sirf padhayi.
sab log jaldi se jaldi humare exam khatm hone ka wait kar rahe the. jahan shivani ji apne shaadi ki planning ke liye wahi archana aur rani apni planning ke liye. in sabke bich ek ladki aisi thi jo bahut dukhi thi aur wo bhi mere exam khatm hone ka wait kar rahi thi aur wo thi punam ji. dheere dheere samay bit gaya aur exam suru ho gaya. sare exam ek ek karke hone lage. jis din mera akhiri exam tha us se ek din pahle humare ghar me padhare humare bade bhai sahab. ye aaye the maa ko chennai le jane ke liye.
maa bhai ko bhi bahut maanti hai. bade bhai ko dkehte hi pata nahi kyun lekin mujhe achha nahi lagta tha kyunki kahi na kahi mer epichel janm me maa pe hue atyacharo me mai bhai ko bhi doshi maanta hoon. aur ab wo maa ko mujhse door le jane wale the. ye sochte hi mujhe dar sa lahne lag gaya tha lekin mujhe ye bhi pata tha ki maa to jayegi hi aur mujhe jaldi se jaldi bhabhi ka bandobast karna padega kyunki maa ke chennai se lout te hi bhai ki shaadi ki baat suru ho jayegi.
mai akhiri exam bhi kisi tarah de diya.
maa ne bahut sapnde dekhe honge ki mere exam ke baad wo mere saath pyaar bhara samay bitayengi lekin un sapno ke bich maa ko apna bhavisya nahi pata tha aur mai apne pichle janm ko kuch pal ke liye bhool gaya tha jo fir se ek aaina ban kar mere saamne aa gaya aur mai tay kar liya is mahine to bhabhi ka kaam nipta kar hi aaunga.
final exam ke agle din hi mai maa ko bhai ke saath train se vida kiya.
jab ghar lout kar aaya to ghar pe ek post aaya tha jo government se tha. us post me likha tha 6 mahine me ye ghar khali karna padega. mai wo post apne pass rakh liya aur fir phone milaya punam ji ko.
mai ek baar phone milaya to unhone nahi uthyaa fir dusri baar bhi nahi uthaya fir jab tisri baar phone uthaya to wo phone uthayi aur darte hue boli-sorry raja please tum mujhe apne gundo se mat marwana mai wada karti hoon tumhara jo bhi nuksaan hua hai mai wo chuka dungi.
mai punam ji ki baat sunte hi sochne laga ab kya ho gaya.
mai punam ji ko bola-pahle bataiye to baat kya hai.
punam ji boli-humne wo xxxx gaav ke pass jamin li thi na use us gaav ke ek aadmi ne hadap liya hai. jab mai dobara se gayi thi wahan to usne mujhe bhi kidnap kar liya tha. wo kamina to mere papa se bhi paise maangne wala tha lekin kismat se mai wahan se bhag aayi lekin mere sare original documents jo mai lekar gayi thi usi ke pass hai. aur wo humari jamin gaban karke baitha hai. wo log bahut khatarnaak hai. bandook chaku ye sab to bahut common hai un logon ke liye. is jamin ko kharidne me tumhare jo bhi paise lage hai wo sab mai louta dungi mai wada karti hoon.
mai punam ji ko bola-punam ji aap mujhe bahut bada gunda samjhti hai na to dekhiye ab meri gundayi. mai sharifo ke liye mahaan bhale na ban pau gundo ke liye shaitan jaroor banunga. aap wait kijiye mai kal aapke pass aata hoon. aur mai phone kaat diya.
mujhe gussa to bahut aa raha tha.
sala maine abhi bussiness suru hi kiya hai aur gaav ke gunde ki itni aukaat ki mere raste me aaye. mai to gaav jarur jaunga aur us gunde se apna hisab punam ji ka hisab sabka hisab karke aaunga.
behatarin update..!!
 
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