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Mai humesha suggest karunga har point par aap bas mere kahne par likhoge to dekhna kitna achi story banegi
Ji maine abhi padi ye, puri toh nahi par kai elements ko main apne hisab se re- write aur re- imagine karke jarur likhungaye ek story hai jo mujhe bohot pasad ayi thi ....is story ke page 6 and 9,10,11,12 me ek character ki entry hoti hai jo ke uss story ke salim ka bhatija hota hai or hero ka dost ...or wo hero or uski maa ke sath same ghar me rahta hai or jo chijhe karta hai wo to bawal hai...ek bar pard ke dekho agar waisa kuch create kiya to maja ayega.
Ji Bilkul Aar amMai humesha suggest karunga har point par aap bas mere kahne par likhoge to dekhna kitna achi story banegi
Bilkul sahi kaha dirty_thoughts ji aapne, aisa hi kuch irada haiLagta hai Aslam ji chut aur gand dono k ched bade kar denge
dirty_thoughts aap jaise bade Writer se tareef paana bahut badi baat haiSach main Aapki Maa bahut khubsurat hai
Wonderful Writing
Dhanyawaad kamini1991 jiWonderful story..... keep it up
Bhai main bhi bus likhne ki koshish kar raha hudirty_thoughts aap jaise bade Writer se tareef paana bahut badi baat hai