Fantasy Meri Manorma.......... A Vintage Tale.....1913-1938

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[asadjee]

Zaberdast shaandaar update bhai
Dekhte h Rudra kaise nipat pata h parindon se
Shaandaar

thanks naik bhai..!!......... himmat e mardan madad e khuda

 

[asadjee]

Fantastic update asad bhai

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[asadjee]

Amazing
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[Nadeem440]

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[tpk]

Update....No:8
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RUDRA puri jaan laga kar daud raha tha.. cuhsti aur furti usme darindon se kamm nahi thi.. uske peeche daud kar koi use pakad nahi sakta tha.. lekin baat yahan adam khoor parindon ki thi..

rudra ke bhagne ki awaz se wo jaag rahe the.. aur rudra ko dekh bhayankar cheekh bhi rahe the.. kuch gidh numa parine rudra ke peeche bhi lag gaye the.. aur rudra


rudra ji jaan se bhaag raha tha.. rudra ko ek benefit hua tha k parindon ke puri tarha se uske peche lagne se pehle hi wo adha faasla tay kar chuka tha. abb bhi wo puri speed se chatnon par koodta hua aage badh raha tha. chadhayi wala kaam ek insan k liye asaan nahi tha.. par rudra kioi aam insan nahi tha. wo khud ek sher tha

babbar sher

adha fasla hua to parinde rudra tak pohnchne wale ho gaye aur rudra parindo ko dhayan me rakhte hue, ek hath me talvar aru dusre me khanjar liye hue upar chadta chala ja raha tha..


kuch hi der me 40 ke kareeb parinde rudra ke paaas pohnch gaye.. rudra ne bhi unhe dekh liya tha.. jaise hi parinde rudra ke paas aaye to rudra ne seedhe hath me maujud talvar se un parindo ko kaatna shuru kar dia..

parindon ko kaatte hue bhi rudra ruka nahi tha.. wo jaanta tha k ye gidh itne hi nahi rahenge, kuch hi der me sabb uske paas pohnch jaayenge.. aur fir wo kaise bhi karke khud ko bacha nahi paayega..

kuch gidh kat kar gir pade.. ek baat hui k kuch parinde rudra ke hathon marne wale parinde par toot pade.. rudra ne jab ye dekha to use rasta mil gaya.. fir to rudra ne ji jaan se un parindon ko apni talvar se udhedna shuru kar dia....


kai aur parinde bhi wahi pohnch chuke the. kuch rudra ki or badhne lage to kai apne hi sathiyon ki kati hui lashon par jhapat pade...

rudra fir un gidhon ko apni talvar aur khanjar se kaat'ta hua upar pohnch hi gaya... jaise hi wo upar pohcnha to jungle se bhayanak awazen bhi aana shuru ho gai thi.. jungle me so rahe gidh bhi jaag kar pahaad ki or badh rahe the... aur wo senkdon ki tadaad me the..

rudra jaldi se pahad ki choti par bane hue makan me ja ghusa.. andar ghuste hi rudra ko bohut gandi smell mehsus hone lagi.. rudra ne jungle life guzari thi to kisi hadd tak wo andhere me bhi dekh sakta tha.. aur fir wo bohut der se andhere me bhi tha..
rudra ne jaan liya k andar sadi hui lashen padi han..

lakdee ka bana hua makaan tha aur do kamre the uske.. kamron ke darwaze band the. isse pehle k parinde rudra ko apni lapet me lete rudra ne ek laat maari aur darwaze toot kar andar ja gira... andar se bohut hi gandi smell aa rahi thi.. par rudra k liye khud ko parindo se bachana zayada zaruri tha...... gandi badbu parse dhayan hatate hue rudra andar ja ghusa.. rudra ke peeche hi parinde bhi andar ghuste chale gaye....

rudra us kamre se hokar dusre kamre me ghusa aur darwaza band kar dia.. abb rudra safe ho chuka tha..

bahar bhayankar parindon ki awazen goonj rahi thee .. sabb makaan ke paas pohnch chuke the.. aur makaan me ghusne ka rasta dhund rahe the.. andar pehle kamre me maujud lashon par wo parinde toot pade the.. unki bhayankar awazon se rudra ke kaan ke parde phate jaa rahe the...


rudra kamre ke andar dekhne laga.. is kamre me bhi 1 lash rudra ko dikhi... usme se bhi smell aa rahi thi.. lekin kisi hadd tak kamm thi.. us kamre me khidki bhi thi wo khidki pahad ke dusri taraf khulti thi.... rudra pehle to sabb dekhta raha.. fir use mombatti aur matchbox dikhaai diye.. rudra ne foran hi matchbox uthaya aur ek teeli nikal kar use aag dikha di..

aag hote hi parinde ne bhi aur zayada shor machana shuru kar dia.. sabb milkar udte hue darwaze se takrane lage....... parr darwaza unki power se badhkar mazbut tha.. rudra ne pehle darwaze ko achhe se check kia. fir udhar se mutma'in ho kar mombatti ko aag laga di.......

roshni badhi to parindo ki cheekho pukaar bhi badh gai... rudra parindo ko chhod kamre ke andar ka dekhne laga.. andar ek choti si table thi, aur uspar ek notebook padi hui thi... rudra use utha kar dekhne laga

rudra anpadh nahi raha tha.. radhika BA pass thi, wo rudra ko padhna likhna bhi sikha chuki thi... savita bhi padhi likhi thi aur padhaai me ek genius student bhi thi. usne bhi rudra ki bohut madad ki thi..

rudra wo notebook utha kar dekhne laga.. jaise jaise rudra wo notebook padh raha tha.. rudra heran hota jaa raha tha..


notebook par likha sab padh kar rudra ne notebook ko table par rakha aur usi kamre me maujud ek lakdee ki khatiya ke neeche rakhe hue sandooq ko khench kar bahar nikal lia........ fir use khol kar rudra ne dekha to uski ankhen phati ki phati reh gai..

sandooq k khulte hi kamre me roshni phel gai thi.. sandooq heeron se bhara hua tha.. kai rangon ke heere us sandooq me the... wo sab heere itni maaliyat ke the k kai riyasten khadi ki ja sakti thi....

rudra heeron ko aur kamre me padi hui lash ko dekhne laga..... fir rudra hassne laga.

rudra pagalon ki tarah se hassne laga to parinde firse shor machane lage the.. lekin rudra ko unki koi parwa nahi thi...

rudra lash se mukhatib hua

rudra:- bewaquf insan.... heere hasil karke bhi tum ise istemal me nahi laa sake.. aaj yahann bhuke payase mare pade ho.. kis kaam ke han ye sabb heere jo kisi insan se uski zindagi hi chhen len.... khud me dumm paida kar ke tum kisi bhi shehar me rehte hue in heeron se bhi badh kar kama sakte the...... lekin ek hi baar me ameer banne k chakkar me khud bhi mare aur apni phool si beti ko bhi marwa dia... lanat hai tumpar aur tum jaison par...... jo akhri saans tak pasion k liye jeete han.. khud to marte hi han, apnu ko bhi marwa dete han.....

rudra ne sandooq band kia aur firse khatiya ke neeche daal dia......

notebook padh kar rudra ko aur bhi kai herankun baaten pata chali theee.. jin parindon k baare me wo samjh raha tha k wo sirf raat me hi hamla karte han, aisa nahi tha.. wo din me bhi uth jaya karte the. lekin yahan mahino koi nahi aata to wo aksar din me soye rehne k aadi ho gaye the..

warna to agar wo din me bhi sone k aadi hote to yahan marne wale din ke samay yahan se nikal na chuke hote..... yahan maujud sabb mar chuke the.. to parinde bhi sab samjhte hue din k time so rahe the.. lakdee k bane hue makaan ke andar ghus kar wo lashon ko kha nahi sakte the.. abb unhe ek kamre me ghusne ka moka mila tha to sab milkar un laashon ko kha rahe the...

notebook ke hisab se ek helicopter bhi isi pahad par tabah halat me maujud tha.. kuch logon ne helicopter ki madad se bhi heeron ko apne kabze me lene ki koshish ki thi.. par itne adam khor parindon ne hote hue wo safal nahi ho paaye the, aur natije me jaan se hath dho baithe..

rudra to apni jaan bachane k liye speed se bhaga tha, aur kisi aur taraf dhayan nahi dia tha.. warna to makaan ke bahar aur bhi kai kankaal pade hue the..


rudra usi khatiya par let raat guzarne laga.. rudra ko parindo ke shaant hone ka intezar tha......

jaise jaise raat beet rahi thi, parinde bhi khamosh hote ja rahe the.. abb unhe koi aur shikaar nahi mil paa raha tha to wo makaan ke paas se hatt kar apne liye shikar dhundne nikal pade the.. lekin sabb nahi gaye the.. kai abhi bhi maujud the..


rudra ki raat jaagte hue guzar gai..


suba hui to rudra ne parindo ko dhayan me rakhte hue pahad ke dusri side wali khidki khol di... khidki se bahar dekh kar rudra heran reh gaya.... peeche paha nahi tha.

peeche ek khaai thi.. 150 gazz ke kareeb ek khaai thi.. aur lakdee ka makaan khaai ki kinare par bana hua tha.. khidki jab rudra ne kholi thi to chirrrrrrrrrrr ki tez awaz bhi hui thi. jisse kahin door parindo ke firse cheekhne ki awazen bhi sunaai di thi. rudra ne upar asmaan ki or dekha to use kuch gidh udte hue dikhe.. rudra ne khidki band kar di... firse awaz hui to gidh jo ud rahe the.. is baar wo awaz ki disha ko jaan gaye the.. aur seeedha khidki ki aur aaye aur badi power ke sath wo khidki se takraye.. lekin rudra khidki se peeth laga kar khada ho gaya tha.. khidki zayada mazboot nahi thi.. baarshon ke chalte wo lakdee kuch kamzor bhi ho gai thi..

kuch der gidh koshish karte rahe khidki ko todne ki. fir wo apne raste ho liye.. wo samjh gaye the k yahan daal nahi galne wali.

din khub nikal aaya to gidh aur bhi kamm ho gaye.. rudra ne darwaze ko thoda sa khol kar dusre kamre me jhanka to andhere ki waja se kuch gidh wahi soye hue the.. darwaze ki awaz hui to gidh firse shor machane lage.. lekin is baar wo kamm the to rudra ne speed se apni talvar ka istemal karte hue un gidhon ko kaatna shuru kar dia....

rudra ko bhi kahi kahi un gidhon ne kaat lia tha.. lekin rudra ne sab ko kaat bhi dia tha.. abb ye kamra bhi gidhon se saaf ho gaya tha.. rudra ne wahi se bahar dekha to use door suraj ki dhoop me kai kankaal dikhe.. abb is taraf use aur gidh nahi dikhe the.. lekin rudra zayada der is kamre me safe nahi reh sakta tha..

rudra jaldi se is kamre me maujud samaan ko dekhne laga.. use jo kuch bhi kaam ka dikha to usne dusre kamre me shift kar dia.. fir darwaze ko band kar sab samaan ko dekhne laga.. abb rudra ko yahan se nikalna tha..to rudra ko jugaad lagane ki soch raha tha.. jis raste se wo aaya tha wo usi raaste se nahi ja sakta tha..

ek to rudra us taraf jaana nahi tha, rudra ki manzil aage thi.. dusra rudra ko gidhon se bhi khatra tha.


samaan me rudra ko ek chhatri mili... rudra us chhatri ko dekhne laga.. uska kapda mabzut tha.. rudra sochne laga k is chhatri ki madad se wo kaai me utar sakta hai ya nahi......

kuch der chhatri ko check karne k baad rudra ne chhatri se khaai me utarne ka mann bana lia..



koi aur opstion nahit tha rudra ke paas........ rudra ne fir khud ko tayyar kia aur chhatri lekar khidki ko khol dia.. wo bahar asmaan me dekhne laga.. use ek do gidh hi dikhe, baaki sabb ghane jungle me sone k liye chale gaye the...


isse pehle k koi gidh rudra ki or matwajju hota, rudra chhatri ko mazbuti se pakad kar khaai me kood gaya...... ye sabb asaan nahi tha, rudra ne pehle aisa kabhi kia nahi tha.. aur rudra jaisa mard ek chhatri kaise jhel sakti thi... lekin hawa ne rudra ka bohut sath dia..... isse pehle k chhatri phatt jati aur rudra ko khaai me girati...



tez hawa ke chalte rudra khaai se bohut aage nikal gaya.. abb agar chhatri toot bhi jaati to rudra kisi darakht par hi gir sakta tha..

150 gazz ke kareeb ki khaai rudra chhatri ki madad se 70-80 gazz ak paat chuka tha. abb rudra khatre se bahar bhi tha...... rudra neeche dekhte hue, chhatri ko mabzuti se pakde hawa ke dosh par udne laga...

rudra ko jungle me kahi se shor ki awazen sunaai dene lagi.. awazen sunkar rudra jaan gaya k kahi aas paas hi koi junglee kabila bhi maujud hai.. aur wo sabb rudra ko dekh bhi chuke han......

shoq unke ajeeb se saaz ka tha.. sab ek dusre ko saavdhan kar rahe the..

jald hi rudra ek darakht ke kareeb pohncha to rudra ne chhatri ko chhod dia aur darakht k koodte hue neeche aane laga...... rudra itna to mahir tha hi, use koi chot nahi aai.....


jaise hi rudra neeche pohncha, aas paas se keedon makoron ki tarha se junglee insan nikalne lage.... aisa lag raha tha jaise zameen insan ugal rahi ho, sabke hathon me lakdee ke neze the, pal bhar me hi kai teze rudra ke seene se lage hue the..

rudra sabko dilchasp nazron se dekhne laga.. rudra chahta to apne talvar aur khanjar ka istemal karke kaiyon ko dher kar sakta tha.. parr rudra in masoomo ko maarna nahi chahta tha. jab tak k uski zindagi ko koi khatra laahaq na ho jaaye..

rudra se uski talvar aur khanjar le liye gaye the.. rudra ke pairon ki talashi nahi li gai thi.. rudra ke dono pairon par bhi chhote chhote khanjar bandhe hue the..

rudra ko lakdee ke bane hue tezon ki chhaon tale jungle me hi kahi ek disha me lejaaya jaane laga.. rudra ko dekh unme se kuch heran bhi the, rudra rada hua nahi thaaaaaaaaaaaa...


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george ke mohn se do rajkumariyon ka naam sunkar mujhe bohut ajeeb sa laga tha.. mujhe andar se ramanchak kisam ki feelings bhi aane lagi theen..

arjun:- tumne dono ko dekh rakha hai kya....... nashe me adhe ludhak chuke george se maine poocha.... wo khi khi karke hassne laga

george:- haan dono ko kai baar dekha hai, wo to apne ghulamo ke sath aksar hi rath par sawar hokar nikalti rehti han.... rajkumari kanwal kabhi kabhi yahan ka chakkar lagati han.. to sab hi dekh lete han.......... george nashe me puri tarha se talli ho chuka tha..

arjun:- aur agar main bhi dono me se kisi ko dekhne chahu to

george:- kal dekh lena.. kal ghodon ki race hai, kal dekh lena.......

arjun:- kya matlab, kahan hai race, maine to kahi bhi ghodon ki race ka maidan nahi dekha..

george:- wo dusri taraf hai..

kuch der aur george se baat hui saala bohut zayada dolne laga tha.. sahi se baat bhi nahi karr paa raha tha..

jis ilake main maujud tha.... ye ek riyasat thi.. risayat ka naam sureshgadh tha..
aur yahan ke raja ka naam thakur amarnath singh tha...

george se mujhe pata chala tha k kal ghodon ki race hai aur door door se log race me hissa lene k liye aaaye hue han..... aur sureshgadh ke dusri taraf mehmano k liye intezam bhi maujud hai..

george ko sone k liye chhod kar main bahar nikal pada.... apne ghode par sawar hokar fir main sureshgadh ke dusri taraf jaane laga... mera bhi mann hone laga k main bhi race me hissa lon..... jaisa ghoda mere paas tha, mera nahi khayal k aisa ghoda kisi aur ke paas bhi hoga..

ghode ko speed se daudate hue main kuch hi minton me us maidan me jaa pohncha.. wahan bohut se kheme lage hue the.. mele ka sa samaaan tha wahan.


main bhi ghode par sawar hokar khemo ke beech me se guzarta hua aage badhne laga.. main sab dekhta hua aage badh raha tha... ek maidan me charon aur kheme lage hue the.. aur khemo ke beech ka maidan kya tha

ek bohut bada maidan tha... manzar dekh kar dil khush ho gaya.. andar ki dunya bohut hi khubsurat thi... jaga jaga log apne apne ghodo ko ek lambi rassi ki madad se gol gol dauda rahe the..



badi badi hastiyan maujud theee.. koi nawaz tha to koi kisi riyasat ka rajkumar.. george ke hisab ye salana race thi.. pure desh se hi log yahan par aaye hue the..

sab ke sab vvip kapdon me the.. sabke sath unke naukar ghoom rahe the.. har ek ka ghoda ek se badhkar ek tha.. lekin mere ghode jaisa mujhe koi bhi nahi dikha.. ye baat to main maidan me maujud logon ki ankhon se bhi jaan paa raha tha..

kisi ke pass behtreen ghoda ho.... aur wo khud bhi zabardast personality ka maalik ho. to fir uski taur hi kuch aur bann jati thi..... yahi mere sath ho raha tha.


jiski bhi nazar mujhpar padti, wo ruk kar mujhe aur mere ghode ko bade ghaur se dekhne laga....... kuch ki ankhon me to mujhe hasad dikhaai dene laga..

ek side me mujhe ek bada khema nazar aaya. jahan par table ke gird log baithe hue the.. wo kheme race me entry se related tha.... main bhi usi disha me badh gaya..

main wahan pohncha to wahan par maujud is riyasat ke raja ke khaas naukar mere ghode ke paas aa gaye aur adaab baja laane lage...... wo har kisi ka aise hi sawagat kar rahe the.... ye to raja ki taraf se order tha shayad un sab ko..

yahan aane wale sabb is riyasat me mehmaan the.... main ghode se utra to naukaro ne ghode ko thaam lia..

wahi khemo me maujud ek admi ne mujhse poocha

admi:- (hath jod kar namaste karte hue) janab e wala kahan se tashreef laaye han

arjun:- door junglon me ek basti hai main wahi se aaya hon, yahan aaya to pata chala k ghodon ki race ho rahi hai to main bhi hissa lena chala aaya...... use parnaam karte hue maine jawab dia.......

wo mujhe ghoor kar dekhne laga

admi:- dekhne se to kahi se bhi kisi junglee basti k nahi lagte...

arjun:- desh me ghoomta rehta hon, to aise dikhne laga hon.. aap batayen meri entry kaise hogi................

uski nature achhi thi.. wo mujhse bade adab se baat kar raha tha.. farmality nahi thi uske andaz me....

fir wo admi mujhe ek table par le gaya aur entry karwa di.... mere ghode ka naam usne poocha to main apne ghode ko dekhne laga, aur sochne laga k iska naam kya hona chahiye to maine apne hisab se uska naam bahadur likhwa dia.... mere mohn se bahadur nikla to kuch faasle par khada mera ghoda khushi se hinhinane laga.... uska andaz dance ka tha .. sab use dekhne lage

admi:- lagta hai bahadur saab khush ho gaye han, entry karwa kar..

main jidar tha, junglee darindon se main darta nahi tha.. mujhme power thi daring thi to usi hisab se maine apne ghode ko bahadur ka naam dia tha.. lekin mere ghode ko ye naam bohut pasand aa gaya tha......

admi ki baat ke jawab me maine bhi jawab me apne ghode ki tareef kardi...

kuch der wahi ruka raha fir apne ghode par sawar hokar main wahan ka chakkar lagane laga.... ek kheme mere naam ka bhi lagwaya jaane laga tha...


mujhe wahi rehna tha... pehle main george ko lekar aana chahta tha, fir hi main yahan reh sakta tha... warna to george kahi gummm hi ho jaata...


jab mera khema lag gaya to main wahi kuch der maujud raha...... fir apne ghode par baith kar main george ki taraf nikal pada

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george ko lekar kar main shaam ke samay main apne kheme me pohnch gaya tha..

george ko achhe se hamam ki sair karwa karwa di thi maine. george insaan ban gaya tha.. george ke liye bazaar se achhe kapde bhi le liye the, george abb unhi naye kapdon me tha.... aur bohut jach bhi raha tha..


kheme ko dekh kar george bohut khush hua tha. wo aisi life kabhi ji nahi paya tha, to uski khushi ka koi thikana nahi tha..


agle din sab apne apne ghodon ki malish kar rahe the.. aaj unke ghode maidan me daudne wale the.. to sabb apne apne ghode ko active kar rahe the..

mere ghode ki malish george kar raha tha.. sabko samaan de dia gaya tha.. george bohut khushi se ye sab kar raha tha.. aur bahadur wo bhi george ki traha se bohut chehak raha tha..


main kheme ke bahar baitha hua george ko dekh raha tha k manorma angdaai leti hui uth khadi hui.............. uski awaz sunkar main use dekhne laga


arjun:- saali aise angdaaiyan mat liya kar.... ek to tu khubsurat bohut hai. aur upar se teri ye adaayen mujhe kahin ka nahi chhodengi....... manorma mere sarr par baithi hui hi meri ankhon me dekhne lagi..... saali ke paas kaunsi kaunsi power thi.. mere sarr pr reh kar meri ankhon me dekh rahi thi...

meri baat sunkar. mere mohn se apne liye tareef sunkar to wo mujhpar fida hi ho gai..
uski susti sari khatam hui aur wo mere sarr par let ulti let kar dono kohniyan sarr parr rakhte hue dono hathon ki hatheliyon me apne chehre ko kaid karte hue mujhe bade pyar se niharne lagi..


main use hi dekh raha tha.. uski chhoti chhoti ankhen mujhe normal sieze ki dikh rahi thi.

manorma:- arjun mere arjun ek baar firse bolna..... aaj pehli baar tumne meri aisi taref ki hai... haaaaaayee zaalim kabse main tumhare aise hi shabdon k liye bechain thi..... ek ladki ko uska permi khubsurat kahe to wo to fir kurban hi ho jaayegi..
arjun ek baar firse bolna................ saali inta dheema, itna meetha boli k mere kaanon me saaz se bajne lage the.. mann nahi bharta tha uski meethi awaz se..

arjun:- ek dayen ki tareef main kyun karon......... dayan sunkar wo jhat se uth khadi hui aur kamar par hath rakhkar mujhe ghoorne lagi..

manorma:- taref nahi karni matt karo.... parr mujhe dayen matt bolna samjhe.. fir wo mohn fer kr khadi ho gai... saali nakhre karne lagi thi..

arjun:- manorma meri jaan...... main bhi meetha hi bola wo jhat se mud kar mujhe dekhne lagi.. uski ankhon me chamak aa gai thi..

maine apna face firse badal lia aur use chidane laga.. wo firse mohn phulane lagi. aur rukh mod kar khadi ho gai...... mai firse usse meetha bolne laga.. wo firse mujhe mudkar dekhne lagi...

kuch der yahi scene chalata raha.... main meetha bol kar use firse tang karne laga aur wo bhi maza lete hue mohn phula kar rukh mod leti...

fir wo main dono khilkhila kar hassne lage........

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[shabjaila]

Super update dost.... maja aagaya....

 

[asadjee]

Shandar zabardast update sir

Waiting for next update sir
Plz update soon

bohut bohut shukriya Nadeem bhai.......... and thanks for waiting

 

[asadjee]

zabardast update

bohut bohut shukriya tpk ji

 

[asadjee]

Super update dost.... maja aagaya....

bundle of thanks shabjaila ji

 

[The king]

Update....No:8
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RUDRA puri jaan laga kar daud raha tha.. cuhsti aur furti usme darindon se kamm nahi thi.. uske peeche daud kar koi use pakad nahi sakta tha.. lekin baat yahan adam khoor parindon ki thi..

rudra ke bhagne ki awaz se wo jaag rahe the.. aur rudra ko dekh bhayankar cheekh bhi rahe the.. kuch gidh numa parine rudra ke peeche bhi lag gaye the.. aur rudra


rudra ji jaan se bhaag raha tha.. rudra ko ek benefit hua tha k parindon ke puri tarha se uske peche lagne se pehle hi wo adha faasla tay kar chuka tha. abb bhi wo puri speed se chatnon par koodta hua aage badh raha tha. chadhayi wala kaam ek insan k liye asaan nahi tha.. par rudra kioi aam insan nahi tha. wo khud ek sher tha

babbar sher

adha fasla hua to parinde rudra tak pohnchne wale ho gaye aur rudra parindo ko dhayan me rakhte hue, ek hath me talvar aru dusre me khanjar liye hue upar chadta chala ja raha tha..


kuch hi der me 40 ke kareeb parinde rudra ke paaas pohnch gaye.. rudra ne bhi unhe dekh liya tha.. jaise hi parinde rudra ke paas aaye to rudra ne seedhe hath me maujud talvar se un parindo ko kaatna shuru kar dia..

parindon ko kaatte hue bhi rudra ruka nahi tha.. wo jaanta tha k ye gidh itne hi nahi rahenge, kuch hi der me sabb uske paas pohnch jaayenge.. aur fir wo kaise bhi karke khud ko bacha nahi paayega..

kuch gidh kat kar gir pade.. ek baat hui k kuch parinde rudra ke hathon marne wale parinde par toot pade.. rudra ne jab ye dekha to use rasta mil gaya.. fir to rudra ne ji jaan se un parindon ko apni talvar se udhedna shuru kar dia....


kai aur parinde bhi wahi pohnch chuke the. kuch rudra ki or badhne lage to kai apne hi sathiyon ki kati hui lashon par jhapat pade...

rudra fir un gidhon ko apni talvar aur khanjar se kaat'ta hua upar pohnch hi gaya... jaise hi wo upar pohcnha to jungle se bhayanak awazen bhi aana shuru ho gai thi.. jungle me so rahe gidh bhi jaag kar pahaad ki or badh rahe the... aur wo senkdon ki tadaad me the..

rudra jaldi se pahad ki choti par bane hue makan me ja ghusa.. andar ghuste hi rudra ko bohut gandi smell mehsus hone lagi.. rudra ne jungle life guzari thi to kisi hadd tak wo andhere me bhi dekh sakta tha.. aur fir wo bohut der se andhere me bhi tha..
rudra ne jaan liya k andar sadi hui lashen padi han..

lakdee ka bana hua makaan tha aur do kamre the uske.. kamron ke darwaze band the. isse pehle k parinde rudra ko apni lapet me lete rudra ne ek laat maari aur darwaze toot kar andar ja gira... andar se bohut hi gandi smell aa rahi thi.. par rudra k liye khud ko parindo se bachana zayada zaruri tha...... gandi badbu parse dhayan hatate hue rudra andar ja ghusa.. rudra ke peeche hi parinde bhi andar ghuste chale gaye....

rudra us kamre se hokar dusre kamre me ghusa aur darwaza band kar dia.. abb rudra safe ho chuka tha..

bahar bhayankar parindon ki awazen goonj rahi thee .. sabb makaan ke paas pohnch chuke the.. aur makaan me ghusne ka rasta dhund rahe the.. andar pehle kamre me maujud lashon par wo parinde toot pade the.. unki bhayankar awazon se rudra ke kaan ke parde phate jaa rahe the...


rudra kamre ke andar dekhne laga.. is kamre me bhi 1 lash rudra ko dikhi... usme se bhi smell aa rahi thi.. lekin kisi hadd tak kamm thi.. us kamre me khidki bhi thi wo khidki pahad ke dusri taraf khulti thi.... rudra pehle to sabb dekhta raha.. fir use mombatti aur matchbox dikhaai diye.. rudra ne foran hi matchbox uthaya aur ek teeli nikal kar use aag dikha di..

aag hote hi parinde ne bhi aur zayada shor machana shuru kar dia.. sabb milkar udte hue darwaze se takrane lage....... parr darwaza unki power se badhkar mazbut tha.. rudra ne pehle darwaze ko achhe se check kia. fir udhar se mutma'in ho kar mombatti ko aag laga di.......

roshni badhi to parindo ki cheekho pukaar bhi badh gai... rudra parindo ko chhod kamre ke andar ka dekhne laga.. andar ek choti si table thi, aur uspar ek notebook padi hui thi... rudra use utha kar dekhne laga

rudra anpadh nahi raha tha.. radhika BA pass thi, wo rudra ko padhna likhna bhi sikha chuki thi... savita bhi padhi likhi thi aur padhaai me ek genius student bhi thi. usne bhi rudra ki bohut madad ki thi..

rudra wo notebook utha kar dekhne laga.. jaise jaise rudra wo notebook padh raha tha.. rudra heran hota jaa raha tha..


notebook par likha sab padh kar rudra ne notebook ko table par rakha aur usi kamre me maujud ek lakdee ki khatiya ke neeche rakhe hue sandooq ko khench kar bahar nikal lia........ fir use khol kar rudra ne dekha to uski ankhen phati ki phati reh gai..

sandooq k khulte hi kamre me roshni phel gai thi.. sandooq heeron se bhara hua tha.. kai rangon ke heere us sandooq me the... wo sab heere itni maaliyat ke the k kai riyasten khadi ki ja sakti thi....

rudra heeron ko aur kamre me padi hui lash ko dekhne laga..... fir rudra hassne laga.

rudra pagalon ki tarah se hassne laga to parinde firse shor machane lage the.. lekin rudra ko unki koi parwa nahi thi...

rudra lash se mukhatib hua

rudra:- bewaquf insan.... heere hasil karke bhi tum ise istemal me nahi laa sake.. aaj yahann bhuke payase mare pade ho.. kis kaam ke han ye sabb heere jo kisi insan se uski zindagi hi chhen len.... khud me dumm paida kar ke tum kisi bhi shehar me rehte hue in heeron se bhi badh kar kama sakte the...... lekin ek hi baar me ameer banne k chakkar me khud bhi mare aur apni phool si beti ko bhi marwa dia... lanat hai tumpar aur tum jaison par...... jo akhri saans tak pasion k liye jeete han.. khud to marte hi han, apnu ko bhi marwa dete han.....

rudra ne sandooq band kia aur firse khatiya ke neeche daal dia......

notebook padh kar rudra ko aur bhi kai herankun baaten pata chali theee.. jin parindon k baare me wo samjh raha tha k wo sirf raat me hi hamla karte han, aisa nahi tha.. wo din me bhi uth jaya karte the. lekin yahan mahino koi nahi aata to wo aksar din me soye rehne k aadi ho gaye the..

warna to agar wo din me bhi sone k aadi hote to yahan marne wale din ke samay yahan se nikal na chuke hote..... yahan maujud sabb mar chuke the.. to parinde bhi sab samjhte hue din k time so rahe the.. lakdee k bane hue makaan ke andar ghus kar wo lashon ko kha nahi sakte the.. abb unhe ek kamre me ghusne ka moka mila tha to sab milkar un laashon ko kha rahe the...

notebook ke hisab se ek helicopter bhi isi pahad par tabah halat me maujud tha.. kuch logon ne helicopter ki madad se bhi heeron ko apne kabze me lene ki koshish ki thi.. par itne adam khor parindon ne hote hue wo safal nahi ho paaye the, aur natije me jaan se hath dho baithe..

rudra to apni jaan bachane k liye speed se bhaga tha, aur kisi aur taraf dhayan nahi dia tha.. warna to makaan ke bahar aur bhi kai kankaal pade hue the..


rudra usi khatiya par let raat guzarne laga.. rudra ko parindo ke shaant hone ka intezar tha......

jaise jaise raat beet rahi thi, parinde bhi khamosh hote ja rahe the.. abb unhe koi aur shikaar nahi mil paa raha tha to wo makaan ke paas se hatt kar apne liye shikar dhundne nikal pade the.. lekin sabb nahi gaye the.. kai abhi bhi maujud the..


rudra ki raat jaagte hue guzar gai..


suba hui to rudra ne parindo ko dhayan me rakhte hue pahad ke dusri side wali khidki khol di... khidki se bahar dekh kar rudra heran reh gaya.... peeche paha nahi tha.

peeche ek khaai thi.. 150 gazz ke kareeb ek khaai thi.. aur lakdee ka makaan khaai ki kinare par bana hua tha.. khidki jab rudra ne kholi thi to chirrrrrrrrrrr ki tez awaz bhi hui thi. jisse kahin door parindo ke firse cheekhne ki awazen bhi sunaai di thi. rudra ne upar asmaan ki or dekha to use kuch gidh udte hue dikhe.. rudra ne khidki band kar di... firse awaz hui to gidh jo ud rahe the.. is baar wo awaz ki disha ko jaan gaye the.. aur seeedha khidki ki aur aaye aur badi power ke sath wo khidki se takraye.. lekin rudra khidki se peeth laga kar khada ho gaya tha.. khidki zayada mazboot nahi thi.. baarshon ke chalte wo lakdee kuch kamzor bhi ho gai thi..

kuch der gidh koshish karte rahe khidki ko todne ki. fir wo apne raste ho liye.. wo samjh gaye the k yahan daal nahi galne wali.

din khub nikal aaya to gidh aur bhi kamm ho gaye.. rudra ne darwaze ko thoda sa khol kar dusre kamre me jhanka to andhere ki waja se kuch gidh wahi soye hue the.. darwaze ki awaz hui to gidh firse shor machane lage.. lekin is baar wo kamm the to rudra ne speed se apni talvar ka istemal karte hue un gidhon ko kaatna shuru kar dia....

rudra ko bhi kahi kahi un gidhon ne kaat lia tha.. lekin rudra ne sab ko kaat bhi dia tha.. abb ye kamra bhi gidhon se saaf ho gaya tha.. rudra ne wahi se bahar dekha to use door suraj ki dhoop me kai kankaal dikhe.. abb is taraf use aur gidh nahi dikhe the.. lekin rudra zayada der is kamre me safe nahi reh sakta tha..

rudra jaldi se is kamre me maujud samaan ko dekhne laga.. use jo kuch bhi kaam ka dikha to usne dusre kamre me shift kar dia.. fir darwaze ko band kar sab samaan ko dekhne laga.. abb rudra ko yahan se nikalna tha..to rudra ko jugaad lagane ki soch raha tha.. jis raste se wo aaya tha wo usi raaste se nahi ja sakta tha..

ek to rudra us taraf jaana nahi tha, rudra ki manzil aage thi.. dusra rudra ko gidhon se bhi khatra tha.


samaan me rudra ko ek chhatri mili... rudra us chhatri ko dekhne laga.. uska kapda mabzut tha.. rudra sochne laga k is chhatri ki madad se wo kaai me utar sakta hai ya nahi......

kuch der chhatri ko check karne k baad rudra ne chhatri se khaai me utarne ka mann bana lia..



koi aur opstion nahit tha rudra ke paas........ rudra ne fir khud ko tayyar kia aur chhatri lekar khidki ko khol dia.. wo bahar asmaan me dekhne laga.. use ek do gidh hi dikhe, baaki sabb ghane jungle me sone k liye chale gaye the...


isse pehle k koi gidh rudra ki or matwajju hota, rudra chhatri ko mazbuti se pakad kar khaai me kood gaya...... ye sabb asaan nahi tha, rudra ne pehle aisa kabhi kia nahi tha.. aur rudra jaisa mard ek chhatri kaise jhel sakti thi... lekin hawa ne rudra ka bohut sath dia..... isse pehle k chhatri phatt jati aur rudra ko khaai me girati...



tez hawa ke chalte rudra khaai se bohut aage nikal gaya.. abb agar chhatri toot bhi jaati to rudra kisi darakht par hi gir sakta tha..

150 gazz ke kareeb ki khaai rudra chhatri ki madad se 70-80 gazz ak paat chuka tha. abb rudra khatre se bahar bhi tha...... rudra neeche dekhte hue, chhatri ko mabzuti se pakde hawa ke dosh par udne laga...

rudra ko jungle me kahi se shor ki awazen sunaai dene lagi.. awazen sunkar rudra jaan gaya k kahi aas paas hi koi junglee kabila bhi maujud hai.. aur wo sabb rudra ko dekh bhi chuke han......

shoq unke ajeeb se saaz ka tha.. sab ek dusre ko saavdhan kar rahe the..

jald hi rudra ek darakht ke kareeb pohncha to rudra ne chhatri ko chhod dia aur darakht k koodte hue neeche aane laga...... rudra itna to mahir tha hi, use koi chot nahi aai.....


jaise hi rudra neeche pohncha, aas paas se keedon makoron ki tarha se junglee insan nikalne lage.... aisa lag raha tha jaise zameen insan ugal rahi ho, sabke hathon me lakdee ke neze the, pal bhar me hi kai teze rudra ke seene se lage hue the..

rudra sabko dilchasp nazron se dekhne laga.. rudra chahta to apne talvar aur khanjar ka istemal karke kaiyon ko dher kar sakta tha.. parr rudra in masoomo ko maarna nahi chahta tha. jab tak k uski zindagi ko koi khatra laahaq na ho jaaye..

rudra se uski talvar aur khanjar le liye gaye the.. rudra ke pairon ki talashi nahi li gai thi.. rudra ke dono pairon par bhi chhote chhote khanjar bandhe hue the..

rudra ko lakdee ke bane hue tezon ki chhaon tale jungle me hi kahi ek disha me lejaaya jaane laga.. rudra ko dekh unme se kuch heran bhi the, rudra rada hua nahi thaaaaaaaaaaaa...


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george ke mohn se do rajkumariyon ka naam sunkar mujhe bohut ajeeb sa laga tha.. mujhe andar se ramanchak kisam ki feelings bhi aane lagi theen..

arjun:- tumne dono ko dekh rakha hai kya....... nashe me adhe ludhak chuke george se maine poocha.... wo khi khi karke hassne laga

george:- haan dono ko kai baar dekha hai, wo to apne ghulamo ke sath aksar hi rath par sawar hokar nikalti rehti han.... rajkumari kanwal kabhi kabhi yahan ka chakkar lagati han.. to sab hi dekh lete han.......... george nashe me puri tarha se talli ho chuka tha..

arjun:- aur agar main bhi dono me se kisi ko dekhne chahu to

george:- kal dekh lena.. kal ghodon ki race hai, kal dekh lena.......

arjun:- kya matlab, kahan hai race, maine to kahi bhi ghodon ki race ka maidan nahi dekha..

george:- wo dusri taraf hai..

kuch der aur george se baat hui saala bohut zayada dolne laga tha.. sahi se baat bhi nahi karr paa raha tha..

jis ilake main maujud tha.... ye ek riyasat thi.. risayat ka naam sureshgadh tha..
aur yahan ke raja ka naam thakur amarnath singh tha...

george se mujhe pata chala tha k kal ghodon ki race hai aur door door se log race me hissa lene k liye aaaye hue han..... aur sureshgadh ke dusri taraf mehmano k liye intezam bhi maujud hai..

george ko sone k liye chhod kar main bahar nikal pada.... apne ghode par sawar hokar fir main sureshgadh ke dusri taraf jaane laga... mera bhi mann hone laga k main bhi race me hissa lon..... jaisa ghoda mere paas tha, mera nahi khayal k aisa ghoda kisi aur ke paas bhi hoga..

ghode ko speed se daudate hue main kuch hi minton me us maidan me jaa pohncha.. wahan bohut se kheme lage hue the.. mele ka sa samaaan tha wahan.


main bhi ghode par sawar hokar khemo ke beech me se guzarta hua aage badhne laga.. main sab dekhta hua aage badh raha tha... ek maidan me charon aur kheme lage hue the.. aur khemo ke beech ka maidan kya tha

ek bohut bada maidan tha... manzar dekh kar dil khush ho gaya.. andar ki dunya bohut hi khubsurat thi... jaga jaga log apne apne ghodo ko ek lambi rassi ki madad se gol gol dauda rahe the..



badi badi hastiyan maujud theee.. koi nawaz tha to koi kisi riyasat ka rajkumar.. george ke hisab ye salana race thi.. pure desh se hi log yahan par aaye hue the..

sab ke sab vvip kapdon me the.. sabke sath unke naukar ghoom rahe the.. har ek ka ghoda ek se badhkar ek tha.. lekin mere ghode jaisa mujhe koi bhi nahi dikha.. ye baat to main maidan me maujud logon ki ankhon se bhi jaan paa raha tha..

kisi ke pass behtreen ghoda ho.... aur wo khud bhi zabardast personality ka maalik ho. to fir uski taur hi kuch aur bann jati thi..... yahi mere sath ho raha tha.


jiski bhi nazar mujhpar padti, wo ruk kar mujhe aur mere ghode ko bade ghaur se dekhne laga....... kuch ki ankhon me to mujhe hasad dikhaai dene laga..

ek side me mujhe ek bada khema nazar aaya. jahan par table ke gird log baithe hue the.. wo kheme race me entry se related tha.... main bhi usi disha me badh gaya..

main wahan pohncha to wahan par maujud is riyasat ke raja ke khaas naukar mere ghode ke paas aa gaye aur adaab baja laane lage...... wo har kisi ka aise hi sawagat kar rahe the.... ye to raja ki taraf se order tha shayad un sab ko..

yahan aane wale sabb is riyasat me mehmaan the.... main ghode se utra to naukaro ne ghode ko thaam lia..

wahi khemo me maujud ek admi ne mujhse poocha

admi:- (hath jod kar namaste karte hue) janab e wala kahan se tashreef laaye han

arjun:- door junglon me ek basti hai main wahi se aaya hon, yahan aaya to pata chala k ghodon ki race ho rahi hai to main bhi hissa lena chala aaya...... use parnaam karte hue maine jawab dia.......

wo mujhe ghoor kar dekhne laga

admi:- dekhne se to kahi se bhi kisi junglee basti k nahi lagte...

arjun:- desh me ghoomta rehta hon, to aise dikhne laga hon.. aap batayen meri entry kaise hogi................

uski nature achhi thi.. wo mujhse bade adab se baat kar raha tha.. farmality nahi thi uske andaz me....

fir wo admi mujhe ek table par le gaya aur entry karwa di.... mere ghode ka naam usne poocha to main apne ghode ko dekhne laga, aur sochne laga k iska naam kya hona chahiye to maine apne hisab se uska naam bahadur likhwa dia.... mere mohn se bahadur nikla to kuch faasle par khada mera ghoda khushi se hinhinane laga.... uska andaz dance ka tha .. sab use dekhne lage

admi:- lagta hai bahadur saab khush ho gaye han, entry karwa kar..

main jidar tha, junglee darindon se main darta nahi tha.. mujhme power thi daring thi to usi hisab se maine apne ghode ko bahadur ka naam dia tha.. lekin mere ghode ko ye naam bohut pasand aa gaya tha......

admi ki baat ke jawab me maine bhi jawab me apne ghode ki tareef kardi...

kuch der wahi ruka raha fir apne ghode par sawar hokar main wahan ka chakkar lagane laga.... ek kheme mere naam ka bhi lagwaya jaane laga tha...


mujhe wahi rehna tha... pehle main george ko lekar aana chahta tha, fir hi main yahan reh sakta tha... warna to george kahi gummm hi ho jaata...


jab mera khema lag gaya to main wahi kuch der maujud raha...... fir apne ghode par baith kar main george ki taraf nikal pada

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george ko lekar kar main shaam ke samay main apne kheme me pohnch gaya tha..

george ko achhe se hamam ki sair karwa karwa di thi maine. george insaan ban gaya tha.. george ke liye bazaar se achhe kapde bhi le liye the, george abb unhi naye kapdon me tha.... aur bohut jach bhi raha tha..


kheme ko dekh kar george bohut khush hua tha. wo aisi life kabhi ji nahi paya tha, to uski khushi ka koi thikana nahi tha..


agle din sab apne apne ghodon ki malish kar rahe the.. aaj unke ghode maidan me daudne wale the.. to sabb apne apne ghode ko active kar rahe the..

mere ghode ki malish george kar raha tha.. sabko samaan de dia gaya tha.. george bohut khushi se ye sab kar raha tha.. aur bahadur wo bhi george ki traha se bohut chehak raha tha..


main kheme ke bahar baitha hua george ko dekh raha tha k manorma angdaai leti hui uth khadi hui.............. uski awaz sunkar main use dekhne laga


arjun:- saali aise angdaaiyan mat liya kar.... ek to tu khubsurat bohut hai. aur upar se teri ye adaayen mujhe kahin ka nahi chhodengi....... manorma mere sarr par baithi hui hi meri ankhon me dekhne lagi..... saali ke paas kaunsi kaunsi power thi.. mere sarr pr reh kar meri ankhon me dekh rahi thi...

meri baat sunkar. mere mohn se apne liye tareef sunkar to wo mujhpar fida hi ho gai..
uski susti sari khatam hui aur wo mere sarr par let ulti let kar dono kohniyan sarr parr rakhte hue dono hathon ki hatheliyon me apne chehre ko kaid karte hue mujhe bade pyar se niharne lagi..


main use hi dekh raha tha.. uski chhoti chhoti ankhen mujhe normal sieze ki dikh rahi thi.

manorma:- arjun mere arjun ek baar firse bolna..... aaj pehli baar tumne meri aisi taref ki hai... haaaaaayee zaalim kabse main tumhare aise hi shabdon k liye bechain thi..... ek ladki ko uska permi khubsurat kahe to wo to fir kurban hi ho jaayegi..
arjun ek baar firse bolna................ saali inta dheema, itna meetha boli k mere kaanon me saaz se bajne lage the.. mann nahi bharta tha uski meethi awaz se..

arjun:- ek dayen ki tareef main kyun karon......... dayan sunkar wo jhat se uth khadi hui aur kamar par hath rakhkar mujhe ghoorne lagi..

manorma:- taref nahi karni matt karo.... parr mujhe dayen matt bolna samjhe.. fir wo mohn fer kr khadi ho gai... saali nakhre karne lagi thi..

arjun:- manorma meri jaan...... main bhi meetha hi bola wo jhat se mud kar mujhe dekhne lagi.. uski ankhon me chamak aa gai thi..

maine apna face firse badal lia aur use chidane laga.. wo firse mohn phulane lagi. aur rukh mod kar khadi ho gai...... mai firse usse meetha bolne laga.. wo firse mujhe mudkar dekhne lagi...

kuch der yahi scene chalata raha.... main meetha bol kar use firse tang karne laga aur wo bhi maza lete hue mohn phula kar rukh mod leti...

fir wo main dono khilkhila kar hassne lage........

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