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Fantasy Meri Manorma.......... A Vintage Tale.....1913-1938

asadjee

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Wahhh asadjee bhai ek aur ladki ki enty ho gayi. Ab to apne hero ki 4 wife ho gayi aur jaha tak mai janta hu. Abhi aur bhi bahut hongi. Dekhte hai. Ye list kaha tak ja kr rukta hai. Aur her ek ladki me aakhir kya kya khaas baat niklti hai ki wo apne arjun ko pasand aati hai.
Aur waha rudhra bhi miss merry ko bacha liya. Dekhte hai ye bhi gore harami nikalte hai Nelson ki tarah ya dil ke ache hai. Ab ye to next update me hi pata chlega.
Ek baar fir se sukriya itna acha Update dene ke liye.
thanks bhai................... jaane kya likha hua hai arjun ki kismat me.. aur manorma kyun use aisi rah dikha rahi hai..

parr

jo bhi hai, arjun ke mze hone lage han, aur wo bhi manorma ke rang me rangne laga hai.. abhi to bohut kuch saamne aaye tab pata chale ka rangon ka asal maksad tha kya.??........ rudra ne marry ko bacha kar apna farz pura kiya .. kar bhala to ho bhala..
 

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Update....No:20

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manorma ne jo bataya tha, wo bohut hairat angez tha, par tha haqeeqat par mabni.. ladkiyon ko kidnap karke pure behri jahaz ko bhi bhar rakha tha harami logon ne, aur fir isi behri jahaz par ek ladki apni behen ko bachane k liye bhi maujud thi..

kitni badi baat thi k ek ladki hokar wo apni behen ko bachane k liye ek aise jahaz par maujud thi.. jis jahaz par reh rahe gundon ka kaam hi ladkiyon ko aghwa karke dusron desho me bechna tha.. badi himmat ki baat thi

arjun:- ladki kahan hai is waqt

manorma:- wo neeche chhupi hui hai.. bass abb wo kuch hi der me hamla karne hi wali

arjun:- uske liye khatra ho sakta hai kya

manorma:- wo bhi koi doodh ki dhuli hui nahi hai arjun. bohut bahadur ladki ha wo. par itno se lad pana, fir apni behen ko bacha lena uske mumkin nahi rahega.. wo bhi yahan phans jaayengi

arjun:- tu fir mujhe gun aur uski bullets do

manorma:- gun aa chuki hai tumhare hath me, aur iski bullets kabhi khatam nahi hongi. abb tum bas apna kaam shuru kar do.. der ho rahi hai, ladki k liye khatra badh sakta hai

mere bolte hi mere hath me gun aa gai thi.. mai guns dekh kar heran reh gaya

arjun:- ye gun.. aisi gun to main kabhi dekhi hi nahi..

manorma:- sawal baad me kar lena, lekin future design gun hai, bohut powerfull aur zabardast maar wali gun hai.. bass ab tum shuru ho jaao

main side me andhere me tha.. ek hath me talvar to dusre hath me gun thi.. mere saamne jahaz ke arshe par 30 badmash guns liye hue khade the

sab meri or na dekhte hue baki sab taraf dekh rahe the.. ek baat main nahi bata paya wo ye k behri jahaz lunger andaz tha.. shayad wo kisi ka wait kar raha tha

gun badmasho ki aur karte hue maine fir trigger dabana shuru kar dia.. pehle maine guns wale badmasho ka safaya karna shuru kiya tha.. firing hote hi cheekho pukar mach uthi

goliyon ki tadtadahat ki awaz to thi hi, marne walun ki cheekho se bhi samandar aur behri jahaz ka area goonjne laga tha.. gun ki goliyan sach me hi kahtam hone ka naam nahi le rahi thee.. main bina trigger chhode jaga badal badal kar badmasho ko khatam kar raha tha..'

gun se goliyan nahi nikal rahi thee... ek hisab se guns se lazer light nikal rahi thi.. hahaha goliyan jab khatam hi nahi hongi to heavy machine gun ki belt ke jaise hi bullets bhi guns se nikal rahi thee.. zayada der nahi lagi aur upar maujud sabhi badmash lashon me tabdeel ho chuke the...... aam gun hoti to magazine khali hone par badalne me time lagta tha, usi time me saamne wale ko moka mila jaya karta tha, fir asli jung shuru ho jaya karti thi.. par yahan to aisa koi chakkar hi nahi tha..

sabko maar kar main fir neeche jaane laga.. neeche bhi bohut bhayanak shor macha hua tha...

arjun:- neeche ke badmash upar kyun nahi aaye manorma, aur kitne han wo aur kahan han

manorma:- arjun neeche 20 ke kareeb badmash maujud han, wo sab upar aa rahe han, tumne badi jaldi sabko khatam kar dia hai to tumhe aisa laga raha hai, jaise bohut der ho gai hai..

manorma ki baat sunkar main kuch aage badh kar side me ho gaya, aage ek rahdari thi aur dono side me cabin bane hue the.. cabin ki back side khali thee.. main wahi ja pohncha aur upar aane walun ka intezar karne laga

zayada der nahi guzri.. bhagte kadmon ki awazen aane lage, wo shor machate hue aa rahe the.. koi peeche se unhe guide bhi kar raha tha..

aane wale 10 the.. wo upaar jaane lage to maine guns ka rukh unki aur karke firse trigger daba dia.. ek baar firse firing aur marne walun ka shor goonj utha.. fir marne walun ki cheekhen aur meri guns ki awaz ek sath hi tham gai.... fire karne k baad kaun zinda hai, kaun nahi, ye dekhne k liye main nahi ruka tha.. main bohut speed se aage badh raha tha..

arjun:- baaki ke sab kahan han manorma

manorma:- isi raste aae badh kar seerhiyan neeche jaati han, unhi seerhiyo ke neeche wo side me chhupe hue han.. abb wo upar nahi aayenge, wo tumhara neeche sawagat karne k liye tayyar han..

arjun:- ladki ab tak nikli nahi kya apni jaga..

manorma:- wo bhi bas un chhupe huon ke peeche pohnchne hi wali hai

arjun:- uske pass gun hai ya talvar

manorma:- dono, uske pas rifle ha

manorma ki bat sunkar maine tezi se seerhiyon tak ja pohnchaa.. wahi pohnch kar side me ho ke main neeche firing karne lagaa

neeche se bhi kai guns dwara firing karke mujhe jawab dia jaane laga.. abb us ladki ke action me aane ka samay ho gaya tha..

mai bhi bina trigger chhode stairs se neeche fire kar raha tha.. meri guns ki goliyan khatam nahi ho paa rahi thi, ye bat sabke liye herankun rahi hogi.. aur fir sound jo meri gun se nikal raha tha, wo bhi aaj kal ki gun se hatt kar tha.. gun ki maar to main dekh hi chuka tha.

manrma:- ruk kar left side me jaa kar fire karo arjun.. arjan ladki bhi firing position me aa chuki hai, yahan se firing karte hue ladki ko koi goli bhatak kar lag sakti hai

manorma k kahe mubtabaq fir main left side me ho gaya, 4 sec k liye trigger par mera dabao hat gaya tha..

neeche se bohut shor ki awaz aane lagi thi.. meri gun ke aage wo kaise apni guns se fire kar sakte the... be-tahasha nikalne wali goliyon ki waja se wo ghabra gaye the.. aur firing karna chhod kar khud ko safe rakh rahe the...

lekin wo wahan bhi safe nahi rahe, ladki ne bhi apni guns se firing shuru kar di.. waqfe waqfe se ladki ki gun se goliyan nikal rahi thi, badle me neeche maujud badmash cheekhte hue dher ho rahe the..

neeche se bhi ladki ki or firing ki jaane lagi, to maine bhi firse apni gun ke trigger par ungli rakhte hue dabao badha dia.. bache hue badmasho ki cheekhen goonjne lagee, aur der fir der nahi lagi aur sare badmash anginat chhed apne jismo me meri gunse banwa kar dher ho gaye

manorma:- ab tum ladki ko awaz do, khel khatam ho chuka hai

arjun;- aur baki bache hue badmash

manorma:- ab koi nahi bacha, agar koi bacha bhi hai to wo is jahaz ka amla hai...

arjun:-(ladki se) ruk jaao, firing karna band kar do.. yahan maujud sab badmash maare ja chuke han


ladki:- tum kaun ho

arjun:- saamne aa jaao fir bata donga, main dost hon, upar maujud sare maare ja chuke han, ab koi khatra baaki nahi raha

ladki:- main kaise tumpar yakeen kar lon

arjun:- itni lashen tumhare saamne maujud han, fir bhi yakeen nahi kar paa rahi ho

ladki:- theek hai tum neeche aa jaaao

arjun:- ok mai aa raha hon neeche

fir main neeche utarne laga.. neeche pohncha to kuch fasle par mujhe ek haal dikha, ladki usi haal ki ek side me maujud thi.. wo naqab me thi, uske kandhe par talvar bandhi hui thi

bina talvar ke hi maine aur ladki ne badmasho ko dher kr dia tha.. mai chalta hua ladki ke saamne ja pohncha.. wo mujhe aur main use ghor se dekhne lage.. fir main hi pehle bola.

arjun:- mera naam arjun hai, aur main yahan par maujud sabhi qaidi ladkiyon ko azad karwane aaya hon

ladki:-mera naam rajeswari hai.. bohut bohut dhanyavaad jo aapne meri madad ki.. warna to sab kar pana aur apni behen ke sath dusri ladkiyon ko bacha pana mere liye asaan na hota

arjun:- chalo baaki ki baaten baad me karte han, pehle qaidi ladkiyon ke paas chalte han, aapki behen bhi wahi hogi shayad

rajeshwari:- han meri behen bhi unhi ladkiyon me shamil ha... dono fir neeche k floor me jaane lage..

jahaz ka amla maar dhaar wala nahi tha.. wo mile to

arjun:- is jahaz par maujud sare badmash maare gaye han. to koi chalaki karne ki matt sochna

arjun:- manorma iski leader nahi dikha mujhe

manorma:- hehehehe wo pehli baar upar tumpar hamla karne walun me shamil tha, bina lade hi wo mara gaya.. chalo ab sabko bachao.. hum wapis bhi jana hai

neeche pohnche to bade bade haal numa room bane hue the, badi gandi smell aa rahi thi.. lakdee ke bade bade darwaze laga kar wo haal room band kiye hue the

laat maat kar maine ek door ko toda aur andar ja ghuse.. wahan ka dekh ke hi dimag kharab hone laga,.. ladkiyon ko aise rakha hua tha, jaise wo insan na hokar bhed bakriyan hon

"diiiiiiiiiiidiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii" unhi ladkiyon me se kisi ki awaz sunaai di to main aur rajeshwari udhar dekhne lage

rajeshwari ki behen thi wo, jisne awaz lagayi thi.. rajeshwari bhaag kar apni behen k paas pohnchi, andar kamre me ghuste hue rajeshwari ne apna naqab hata dia tha, uske khule chehre par pehle maine dhayan nahi dia tha.. par abb dekha to

arjun:- manorma rajeshwari to rajkumari kanwal ki takkar ki hai, kitni sunder hai na?

manorma:- hehehehe ye rajkumari kanwal se bhi kahi badhkar khubsurat hai arjun. future me ye bhi tumhari patni banne waliyon ki list me hai

arjun:- manorma tum mujhe future baare mat bataya karo,aksar tum adhi baaten karke mujhe uljha deti ho.. jahan tak main smajhta hon, tum foran hi mujhe is ladki se door bhi karne wali ho

manorma:- haan arjun, har cheez ka ek time hota ha, sahi time aane par sab bataya ja sakta hai, usse pehle nahi..

arjun:- to patni wali baat batane ki kya zarurat thi

manorma:- hehehehe maza lene k liye.. pehle rajkumari indra thi, fir rajkumari kanwal aa gayi, uske baad radha aur abb rajeshwari... tum kis kis ko sochoge, sab ko sochte hue tumhe dekh kar main tumhare maze liya karungi arjun

manorma to thamne wali thi nahi, main rajeshwari aur uski behen ke milan ko dekhne laga.. rajeshwari ki behen apni behen se milkar rone lagi thi.. yahan maujud sabhi ladkiyan zanjeeron se bandhi hui thee..

main wapis hua aur jahaz k amle se bol kar sab ladkiyon ko azad karwa dia.... 2 log amle me aisi the, jo marne wale badmasho ke sath the.. par wo jahaz ko chalane k liye khaas the, to unhe nahi mara maine, warna aise logon ko zinda rakh kar kuch hasil nahi hone wala tha..

sari ladkiyan khud ko azad jaan kar bohut khush thee.. jis pehle haal room me hum ghuse the.. wo hindustani lakdiyon ka tha.. baakiyon me alag alag desho ki ladkiyan theee

sabko lekar ek baar hum sab upar pohnche.. wahan lashen dekh kar sab darne lagee the.. par khud ko azaad jaan kar wo ye sab sehn bhi kar gayi thee.. fir jo mare pade the, wo insan the hi kahan

lashon ko utha kar samandar me phenka jane laga, kuch ladkiyan milkar khun saaf karne lageee.. jahaz k amle ne jahaz ko wapis hindustani sahil ki aur lejaane shuru kar dia

rajeshwari apni behen ko le kar mere paas aa gayi

rajeshwari:- arjun ye hai meri chhoti behen rameshwari

arjun:- bohut cute si ho tum meri behen.. rajeshwari agar future me meri patni bannne wali thi, to rameshwari to fir meri saali hui naa.. usi hisab se mujhe feelings bhi aane lagi thee..

rajeshwari mujhe muskurati nazron se dekhne lagi

rameshwari;- dhanyavaad bhai, aapki waja se main aur sab ladkiyan firse azad zindagi ji paayengi.. aur didi k liye bhi khatra tha, use bhi aapne hi bachaya hai

arjun:- bhaiyo ko dhanyavad nahi bolte, tum mere liye bhi chhoti behen hi ho.. vaise tum aise logon ke hath kaise lag gayi

rameshwrari:- galti se bhai, apni dosto ke sath door ke ek baagh me ja pohnchi thi.. wahi ye kameene log maujud the.. meri dost to kaise bhi karke wahan se bhaag nikli, par main unke hath lag gayi

rajeshwari;- unhi se mujhe pata chala tha k meri ladli behen galat logon ke hathe chad gai hai.. to fir main bhi nikal padi apni behen ko bachane k liye

arjun:- kitne dino se aap dono ghar se nikli hui han

rajeshwari:- aaj 17 din ho gaye han arjun

arjun;- ohh itne din, chalo achha hua, bura safar khatam hua

manorma:- gadhe ye safar bura nahi tha, ye safar to aur bhi bohut se rang lekar aane wala hai future me..

manorma ne firse aage ka mujhe batana shuru kar dia tha.. wo nahi talne wali thi.. maine use koi jawab nahi dia.. aur rajeshwari aur rameshwari se baaten karne laga

sahil par pohnche, fir ek ek karke sabhi ko jahaz se utaar kar hindustan ki sar zameen par utaar dia gaya.. abb se sab safe thee.. par sab ladkiyan thee.. to hamara desh bhi darindo se bhara hua tha

arjun:- ab in sab ka kya karna hai..

manorma:- wo sab tum chhodo, abb hum wapis mehal chalte han..

arjun:- hen, itni jaldi

manroma;-hehehehe ye jaldi nahi hai meri ranjhna, jitna kaam hamara tha, wo humne kar dia.. abb yahan thehar kar kar bhi kya hai.. main yahan bas sabki inti madad kar sakti hon k inhe koi khatra nahi rahega.. aur rajeshwari aur uski family bohut strong hai, wo sabko unke desho me bhejne ka intezam kar degi..

jahaz par milne wali sabhi ladkiyan jaan gai thee.. k meri waja se wo sab azaad hui han to wo mujhe bohut mashkoor nazron se dekh rahi thee..

main rajeshwari aur uski behen ke paas pohncha..

arjun:- achha abb mere jaane ka samay ho gaya hai

rajeshwari ne ek jhatke me sarr utha kar mujhe dekha, chand ki chandni me mujhe uski ankhon me bechaini si dikhi..

rajeshwari:- itni jaldi jaa rahe han aap

rameshwari:- bhai abhi matt jaao naa, abhi hamare liye khatra hai

arjun:- nahi chhoti abb koi khatra nahi raha hai, aap dono behne sab ladkiyon ko apne sath le jaayen, aur ek baat hum firse milenge, ye wada karke main jaa raha hon..

maine apni bahen rameshwari k liye phela di thee. wo udti hui meri bahun me aa gai thi, rameshwari abhi 18 ki nahi hui thi, wo dikhne me ek doll hi lagti thi.. uske liye mere dil ki feelings bohut saag thee..

rajeshwari apni behen k liye aur sab ladkiyon k liye bohut khush thi.. mujhse milke bhi wo bohut khush thi.. lekin abhi wo muje apne paas dekhne ki khawahish mand bhi thi....

kuch der me fir mai wahan se nikal liya tha.. jahaz ke amle ko manorma ne maar dia tha..bohut dino se uske khun nahi piya tha, itna khun dekh kar wo bardasht kar gai thi. shayad abhi wo khun peene ki halat me nahi thi.. khun pi kar wo madhosh ho jaati, aur sab bhul jaati, shayad isi liye usne khun nahi piya tha..

rajeshwari ne poocha tha k main kaise jaaonga, to maine ek side me ishara kar dia tha.. wahan bahadur khada hua tha..

jis sahil par hum pohnche the, wahan se 6 km ke fasle par ek fauji chhauni thi, wahi se sab aage jaane wale the.. kahi koi khatra nahi raha tha...

bahadur par baitha main wahan se nikal liya.. sabki nazron se ojhal hua to fir manorma mujhe pal bhar me hi mehal me bhi le aayi....

bahadur astabal me tha, aur main apne kamre me masehri par leta hua rajeshwari ko band ankhon se dekhne laga, wo sach me hi dekhne layal thi.. kamal ki sunder aur bahadur ladki thi wo.. apni behen ko bachane k liye wo akeli nikal padi thi, aise kharnak safar par..


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rudra shanta kumari ke sath kolkata ghoomne laga, use shanta ka sath bohut achha lagne laga tha, manorma ka sath bhi use bura nahi lag raha tha.. par shanta me use kuch alag si feelings aane lagi thee..

shayad ye badle halat ke karan tha, warna to rudra aisa nahi tha, basti me rehte use bohut si ladkiyon ne pareshan kiya tha, par rudra hamesha se hi sabse door door raha tha, shanta me use sabse hatt kar dikha tha, ya shanta sabse hatt kar thi.. jo bhi tha par rudra k liye shanta kumari khaas hone lagi thi..

manorma ka bhi rudra khayal rakh raha tha, manorma ki narazgi ko wo samjhta tha, par wo uske liye kuch kar nahi sakta tha..

dusre din firse rudra shanta ko lekar shehar ghoom raha tha.. shanta ka gham aur bhi kam ho gaya tha, rudra ka sath paa kar shanta khil uthi thi.. uske andar bhi kuch kuch hone laga tha.....

manorma dono ko dekh kar jal bhun rahi thi..

rudra wali taxi dariya ke pal parse guzar rahi thi... k peeche se ek car jo bohut speed se aa rahi thi. shayad uska break fail ho gaya tha, horn musalsal baj raha tha, gaadiyon ko overtake karte hue, kisi gaadi se takkar hone se bachate hue wo aage badh rahi thi.. rudra ne sarr khidki se sar bahar nikal kar aane wali gaadi ko dekha, usme ek gori ladki maujud thi...

dekhte hi dekhte wo car pul ke railing se takrati hui, fir railing ko todti hui dariya me jaane lagi....

rudra cheekh pada... taxi rokko

taxi foran ruki.. to rudra manorma ko shanta ka khayal rakhne ko bol kar taxi se nikla aur dariya me kood gaya, car jo ab tak pani me doob chuki thi.. car ke ulatne se shayad driving seat par baithi hui ladki kahi sar takrane se behosh bhi ho gai thi

rudra ke dariya me koodte hi foran wahi angrezo ki 3 gadiyan aur bhi aa kar ruk gai.. sab cheekh rahe the, chilla rahe the.. traffic bhi sara ruk chuka tha.. rudra ko dariya me koodte dekh kar shanta kumari bhi cheekh padi thi.. wo bhi rudra ko aise karte dekh kar darr gai thi

rudra paani ke andar rehte hue car tak pohncha, darwaza kholne ki koshish ki to nahi khula, rudra ne ek punch mara aur sheesha tod dia.. fir foran hi hath andar daal kar ladki ko tatolne laga, paani saag nahi tha, wo ladki ko dekh nahi sakta tha.. rudra ne fir der nahi ki, seat belt kholi aur ladki ko lekar car se, fir paani ki satah par aa gaya..

rudra ko ladki samet dekh kar kuch aur angrez bhi dariya me kood gaye... wo rudra ke paas pohnche.. aur

ek angrez:- thanks man tumne miss marry ko bacha kar humen zindagi di hai, miss marry governer sir ki beti hai.. miss marry ko kuch ho jata to hamari khair nahi thi, angrez english me bola tha..

rudra ne koi jawab nahi dia.. use ladki ki fikr lagi hui thi

upar se rassi latka di gai thi.. fir sab ek ek karke upar pohnchne lage.. miss marry ko lejane me bhi rudra hi kaam aaya.. ye asaan nahi tha, ek ladki ko lekar rassi par chadna, miss marry behosh thi

rudra upar aaya to shanta uske gale lag kar aansu bahane lagi

shanta:- agar aapko kuch ho jata to

"kuch hua to nahi naa.. aur fir tum to mujhe jaanti hi ho na, kaise mujhe kuch ho sakta tha"rudra shanta ki peeth thapakte hue bola tha

rudra taxi me baith kar jaane laga to usi angrez ne use rok liya

wo:- sorry mr tum nahi jaa sakte, governer sir tumhare baare me zarur poochhenge, isliye tum hamare sath hi chalo

manorma:- chale chalo iske sath rudra ye tumhare liye bhi sahi rahega.. desh ke hakim han to aage bhi zarurat padti rahegi..

manorma ki sunne ke bad rudra fir unke sath jane k liye tayyar ho gaya .. rudra aur shanta taxi me baithe, fir taxi goron ki gadiyon ka peecha karte hue aage badhne lagi...


shanta kumari rudra ke sath satt kar baithi thi.. rudra use dekh kar fir bahar dekhne laga, aur manorma bura sa mohn bana kar shanta ko aur rudra ko ghoorne lagi..



Bahot khoob shaandaar update bhai
Tow Arjun n manorma ki madad se saari ladkiyon ko bacha lia or isi chakker m ek or ladki jud gayi Arjun ki zindagi m Rajeshwari naam ki
Manorma khoob maza leti h Arjun ko future ki thodi thodi jhalkiya dikha dikha ker
Or idher wali Manorma khoob jalti h Rudra or Shanta Kumari ki Nazdikiya dekh ker
Badhiya zaberdast shaandaar update bhai
 
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asadjee

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Bahot khoob shaandaar update bhai
Tow Arjun n manorma ki madad se saari ladkiyon ko bacha lia or isi chakker m ek or ladki jud gayi Arjun ki zindagi m Rajeshwari naam ki
Manorma khoob maza leti h Arjun ko future ki thodi thodi jhalkiya dikha dikha ker
Or idher wali Manorma khoob jalti h Rudra or Shanta Kumari ki Nazdikiya dekh ker
Badhiya zaberdast shaandaar update bhai
Thank U Naik Bhai.... ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™
 
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Nadeem440

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nice update sir
Waiting for next update
Please next update soon sir
 
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Update....No:20
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manorma ne jo bataya tha, wo bohut hairat angez tha, par tha haqeeqat par mabni.. ladkiyon ko kidnap karke pure behri jahaz ko bhi bhar rakha tha harami logon ne, aur fir isi behri jahaz par ek ladki apni behen ko bachane k liye bhi maujud thi..

kitni badi baat thi k ek ladki hokar wo apni behen ko bachane k liye ek aise jahaz par maujud thi.. jis jahaz par reh rahe gundon ka kaam hi ladkiyon ko aghwa karke dusron desho me bechna tha.. badi himmat ki baat thi

arjun:- ladki kahan hai is waqt

manorma:- wo neeche chhupi hui hai.. bass abb wo kuch hi der me hamla karne hi wali

arjun:- uske liye khatra ho sakta hai kya

manorma:- wo bhi koi doodh ki dhuli hui nahi hai arjun. bohut bahadur ladki ha wo. par itno se lad pana, fir apni behen ko bacha lena uske mumkin nahi rahega.. wo bhi yahan phans jaayengi

arjun:- tu fir mujhe gun aur uski bullets do

manorma:- gun aa chuki hai tumhare hath me, aur iski bullets kabhi khatam nahi hongi. abb tum bas apna kaam shuru kar do.. der ho rahi hai, ladki k liye khatra badh sakta hai

mere bolte hi mere hath me gun aa gai thi.. mai guns dekh kar heran reh gaya

arjun:- ye gun.. aisi gun to main kabhi dekhi hi nahi..

manorma:- sawal baad me kar lena, lekin future design gun hai, bohut powerfull aur zabardast maar wali gun hai.. bass ab tum shuru ho jaao

main side me andhere me tha.. ek hath me talvar to dusre hath me gun thi.. mere saamne jahaz ke arshe par 30 badmash guns liye hue khade the

sab meri or na dekhte hue baki sab taraf dekh rahe the.. ek baat main nahi bata paya wo ye k behri jahaz lunger andaz tha.. shayad wo kisi ka wait kar raha tha

gun badmasho ki aur karte hue maine fir trigger dabana shuru kar dia.. pehle maine guns wale badmasho ka safaya karna shuru kiya tha.. firing hote hi cheekho pukar mach uthi

goliyon ki tadtadahat ki awaz to thi hi, marne walun ki cheekho se bhi samandar aur behri jahaz ka area goonjne laga tha.. gun ki goliyan sach me hi kahtam hone ka naam nahi le rahi thee.. main bina trigger chhode jaga badal badal kar badmasho ko khatam kar raha tha..'

gun se goliyan nahi nikal rahi thee... ek hisab se guns se lazer light nikal rahi thi.. hahaha goliyan jab khatam hi nahi hongi to heavy machine gun ki belt ke jaise hi bullets bhi guns se nikal rahi thee.. zayada der nahi lagi aur upar maujud sabhi badmash lashon me tabdeel ho chuke the...... aam gun hoti to magazine khali hone par badalne me time lagta tha, usi time me saamne wale ko moka mila jaya karta tha, fir asli jung shuru ho jaya karti thi.. par yahan to aisa koi chakkar hi nahi tha..

sabko maar kar main fir neeche jaane laga.. neeche bhi bohut bhayanak shor macha hua tha...

arjun:- neeche ke badmash upar kyun nahi aaye manorma, aur kitne han wo aur kahan han

manorma:- arjun neeche 20 ke kareeb badmash maujud han, wo sab upar aa rahe han, tumne badi jaldi sabko khatam kar dia hai to tumhe aisa laga raha hai, jaise bohut der ho gai hai..

manorma ki baat sunkar main kuch aage badh kar side me ho gaya, aage ek rahdari thi aur dono side me cabin bane hue the.. cabin ki back side khali thee.. main wahi ja pohncha aur upar aane walun ka intezar karne laga

zayada der nahi guzri.. bhagte kadmon ki awazen aane lage, wo shor machate hue aa rahe the.. koi peeche se unhe guide bhi kar raha tha..

aane wale 10 the.. wo upaar jaane lage to maine guns ka rukh unki aur karke firse trigger daba dia.. ek baar firse firing aur marne walun ka shor goonj utha.. fir marne walun ki cheekhen aur meri guns ki awaz ek sath hi tham gai.... fire karne k baad kaun zinda hai, kaun nahi, ye dekhne k liye main nahi ruka tha.. main bohut speed se aage badh raha tha..

arjun:- baaki ke sab kahan han manorma

manorma:- isi raste aae badh kar seerhiyan neeche jaati han, unhi seerhiyo ke neeche wo side me chhupe hue han.. abb wo upar nahi aayenge, wo tumhara neeche sawagat karne k liye tayyar han..

arjun:- ladki ab tak nikli nahi kya apni jaga..

manorma:- wo bhi bas un chhupe huon ke peeche pohnchne hi wali hai

arjun:- uske pass gun hai ya talvar

manorma:- dono, uske pas rifle ha

manorma ki bat sunkar maine tezi se seerhiyon tak ja pohnchaa.. wahi pohnch kar side me ho ke main neeche firing karne lagaa

neeche se bhi kai guns dwara firing karke mujhe jawab dia jaane laga.. abb us ladki ke action me aane ka samay ho gaya tha..

mai bhi bina trigger chhode stairs se neeche fire kar raha tha.. meri guns ki goliyan khatam nahi ho paa rahi thi, ye bat sabke liye herankun rahi hogi.. aur fir sound jo meri gun se nikal raha tha, wo bhi aaj kal ki gun se hatt kar tha.. gun ki maar to main dekh hi chuka tha.

manrma:- ruk kar left side me jaa kar fire karo arjun.. arjan ladki bhi firing position me aa chuki hai, yahan se firing karte hue ladki ko koi goli bhatak kar lag sakti hai

manorma k kahe mubtabaq fir main left side me ho gaya, 4 sec k liye trigger par mera dabao hat gaya tha..

neeche se bohut shor ki awaz aane lagi thi.. meri gun ke aage wo kaise apni guns se fire kar sakte the... be-tahasha nikalne wali goliyon ki waja se wo ghabra gaye the.. aur firing karna chhod kar khud ko safe rakh rahe the...

lekin wo wahan bhi safe nahi rahe, ladki ne bhi apni guns se firing shuru kar di.. waqfe waqfe se ladki ki gun se goliyan nikal rahi thi, badle me neeche maujud badmash cheekhte hue dher ho rahe the..

neeche se bhi ladki ki or firing ki jaane lagi, to maine bhi firse apni gun ke trigger par ungli rakhte hue dabao badha dia.. bache hue badmasho ki cheekhen goonjne lagee, aur der fir der nahi lagi aur sare badmash anginat chhed apne jismo me meri gunse banwa kar dher ho gaye

manorma:- ab tum ladki ko awaz do, khel khatam ho chuka hai

arjun;- aur baki bache hue badmash

manorma:- ab koi nahi bacha, agar koi bacha bhi hai to wo is jahaz ka amla hai...

arjun:-(ladki se) ruk jaao, firing karna band kar do.. yahan maujud sab badmash maare ja chuke han


ladki:- tum kaun ho

arjun:- saamne aa jaao fir bata donga, main dost hon, upar maujud sare maare ja chuke han, ab koi khatra baaki nahi raha

ladki:- main kaise tumpar yakeen kar lon

arjun:- itni lashen tumhare saamne maujud han, fir bhi yakeen nahi kar paa rahi ho

ladki:- theek hai tum neeche aa jaaao

arjun:- ok mai aa raha hon neeche

fir main neeche utarne laga.. neeche pohncha to kuch fasle par mujhe ek haal dikha, ladki usi haal ki ek side me maujud thi.. wo naqab me thi, uske kandhe par talvar bandhi hui thi

bina talvar ke hi maine aur ladki ne badmasho ko dher kr dia tha.. mai chalta hua ladki ke saamne ja pohncha.. wo mujhe aur main use ghor se dekhne lage.. fir main hi pehle bola.

arjun:- mera naam arjun hai, aur main yahan par maujud sabhi qaidi ladkiyon ko azad karwane aaya hon

ladki:-mera naam rajeswari hai.. bohut bohut dhanyavaad jo aapne meri madad ki.. warna to sab kar pana aur apni behen ke sath dusri ladkiyon ko bacha pana mere liye asaan na hota

arjun:- chalo baaki ki baaten baad me karte han, pehle qaidi ladkiyon ke paas chalte han, aapki behen bhi wahi hogi shayad

rajeshwari:- han meri behen bhi unhi ladkiyon me shamil ha... dono fir neeche k floor me jaane lage..

jahaz ka amla maar dhaar wala nahi tha.. wo mile to

arjun:- is jahaz par maujud sare badmash maare gaye han. to koi chalaki karne ki matt sochna

arjun:- manorma iski leader nahi dikha mujhe

manorma:- hehehehe wo pehli baar upar tumpar hamla karne walun me shamil tha, bina lade hi wo mara gaya.. chalo ab sabko bachao.. hum wapis bhi jana hai

neeche pohnche to bade bade haal numa room bane hue the, badi gandi smell aa rahi thi.. lakdee ke bade bade darwaze laga kar wo haal room band kiye hue the

laat maat kar maine ek door ko toda aur andar ja ghuse.. wahan ka dekh ke hi dimag kharab hone laga,.. ladkiyon ko aise rakha hua tha, jaise wo insan na hokar bhed bakriyan hon

"diiiiiiiiiiidiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii" unhi ladkiyon me se kisi ki awaz sunaai di to main aur rajeshwari udhar dekhne lage

rajeshwari ki behen thi wo, jisne awaz lagayi thi.. rajeshwari bhaag kar apni behen k paas pohnchi, andar kamre me ghuste hue rajeshwari ne apna naqab hata dia tha, uske khule chehre par pehle maine dhayan nahi dia tha.. par abb dekha to

arjun:- manorma rajeshwari to rajkumari kanwal ki takkar ki hai, kitni sunder hai na?

manorma:- hehehehe ye rajkumari kanwal se bhi kahi badhkar khubsurat hai arjun. future me ye bhi tumhari patni banne waliyon ki list me hai

arjun:- manorma tum mujhe future baare mat bataya karo,aksar tum adhi baaten karke mujhe uljha deti ho.. jahan tak main smajhta hon, tum foran hi mujhe is ladki se door bhi karne wali ho

manorma:- haan arjun, har cheez ka ek time hota ha, sahi time aane par sab bataya ja sakta hai, usse pehle nahi..

arjun:- to patni wali baat batane ki kya zarurat thi

manorma:- hehehehe maza lene k liye.. pehle rajkumari indra thi, fir rajkumari kanwal aa gayi, uske baad radha aur abb rajeshwari... tum kis kis ko sochoge, sab ko sochte hue tumhe dekh kar main tumhare maze liya karungi arjun

manorma to thamne wali thi nahi, main rajeshwari aur uski behen ke milan ko dekhne laga.. rajeshwari ki behen apni behen se milkar rone lagi thi.. yahan maujud sabhi ladkiyan zanjeeron se bandhi hui thee..

main wapis hua aur jahaz k amle se bol kar sab ladkiyon ko azad karwa dia.... 2 log amle me aisi the, jo marne wale badmasho ke sath the.. par wo jahaz ko chalane k liye khaas the, to unhe nahi mara maine, warna aise logon ko zinda rakh kar kuch hasil nahi hone wala tha..

sari ladkiyan khud ko azad jaan kar bohut khush thee.. jis pehle haal room me hum ghuse the.. wo hindustani lakdiyon ka tha.. baakiyon me alag alag desho ki ladkiyan theee

sabko lekar ek baar hum sab upar pohnche.. wahan lashen dekh kar sab darne lagee the.. par khud ko azaad jaan kar wo ye sab sehn bhi kar gayi thee.. fir jo mare pade the, wo insan the hi kahan

lashon ko utha kar samandar me phenka jane laga, kuch ladkiyan milkar khun saaf karne lageee.. jahaz k amle ne jahaz ko wapis hindustani sahil ki aur lejaane shuru kar dia

rajeshwari apni behen ko le kar mere paas aa gayi

rajeshwari:- arjun ye hai meri chhoti behen rameshwari

arjun:- bohut cute si ho tum meri behen.. rajeshwari agar future me meri patni bannne wali thi, to rameshwari to fir meri saali hui naa.. usi hisab se mujhe feelings bhi aane lagi thee..

rajeshwari mujhe muskurati nazron se dekhne lagi

rameshwari;- dhanyavaad bhai, aapki waja se main aur sab ladkiyan firse azad zindagi ji paayengi.. aur didi k liye bhi khatra tha, use bhi aapne hi bachaya hai

arjun:- bhaiyo ko dhanyavad nahi bolte, tum mere liye bhi chhoti behen hi ho.. vaise tum aise logon ke hath kaise lag gayi

rameshwrari:- galti se bhai, apni dosto ke sath door ke ek baagh me ja pohnchi thi.. wahi ye kameene log maujud the.. meri dost to kaise bhi karke wahan se bhaag nikli, par main unke hath lag gayi

rajeshwari;- unhi se mujhe pata chala tha k meri ladli behen galat logon ke hathe chad gai hai.. to fir main bhi nikal padi apni behen ko bachane k liye

arjun:- kitne dino se aap dono ghar se nikli hui han

rajeshwari:- aaj 17 din ho gaye han arjun

arjun;- ohh itne din, chalo achha hua, bura safar khatam hua

manorma:- gadhe ye safar bura nahi tha, ye safar to aur bhi bohut se rang lekar aane wala hai future me..

manorma ne firse aage ka mujhe batana shuru kar dia tha.. wo nahi talne wali thi.. maine use koi jawab nahi dia.. aur rajeshwari aur rameshwari se baaten karne laga

sahil par pohnche, fir ek ek karke sabhi ko jahaz se utaar kar hindustan ki sar zameen par utaar dia gaya.. abb se sab safe thee.. par sab ladkiyan thee.. to hamara desh bhi darindo se bhara hua tha

arjun:- ab in sab ka kya karna hai..

manorma:- wo sab tum chhodo, abb hum wapis mehal chalte han..

arjun:- hen, itni jaldi

manroma;-hehehehe ye jaldi nahi hai meri ranjhna, jitna kaam hamara tha, wo humne kar dia.. abb yahan thehar kar kar bhi kya hai.. main yahan bas sabki inti madad kar sakti hon k inhe koi khatra nahi rahega.. aur rajeshwari aur uski family bohut strong hai, wo sabko unke desho me bhejne ka intezam kar degi..

jahaz par milne wali sabhi ladkiyan jaan gai thee.. k meri waja se wo sab azaad hui han to wo mujhe bohut mashkoor nazron se dekh rahi thee..

main rajeshwari aur uski behen ke paas pohncha..

arjun:- achha abb mere jaane ka samay ho gaya hai

rajeshwari ne ek jhatke me sarr utha kar mujhe dekha, chand ki chandni me mujhe uski ankhon me bechaini si dikhi..

rajeshwari:- itni jaldi jaa rahe han aap

rameshwari:- bhai abhi matt jaao naa, abhi hamare liye khatra hai

arjun:- nahi chhoti abb koi khatra nahi raha hai, aap dono behne sab ladkiyon ko apne sath le jaayen, aur ek baat hum firse milenge, ye wada karke main jaa raha hon..

maine apni bahen rameshwari k liye phela di thee. wo udti hui meri bahun me aa gai thi, rameshwari abhi 18 ki nahi hui thi, wo dikhne me ek doll hi lagti thi.. uske liye mere dil ki feelings bohut saag thee..

rajeshwari apni behen k liye aur sab ladkiyon k liye bohut khush thi.. mujhse milke bhi wo bohut khush thi.. lekin abhi wo muje apne paas dekhne ki khawahish mand bhi thi....

kuch der me fir mai wahan se nikal liya tha.. jahaz ke amle ko manorma ne maar dia tha..bohut dino se uske khun nahi piya tha, itna khun dekh kar wo bardasht kar gai thi. shayad abhi wo khun peene ki halat me nahi thi.. khun pi kar wo madhosh ho jaati, aur sab bhul jaati, shayad isi liye usne khun nahi piya tha..

rajeshwari ne poocha tha k main kaise jaaonga, to maine ek side me ishara kar dia tha.. wahan bahadur khada hua tha..

jis sahil par hum pohnche the, wahan se 6 km ke fasle par ek fauji chhauni thi, wahi se sab aage jaane wale the.. kahi koi khatra nahi raha tha...

bahadur par baitha main wahan se nikal liya.. sabki nazron se ojhal hua to fir manorma mujhe pal bhar me hi mehal me bhi le aayi....

bahadur astabal me tha, aur main apne kamre me masehri par leta hua rajeshwari ko band ankhon se dekhne laga, wo sach me hi dekhne layal thi.. kamal ki sunder aur bahadur ladki thi wo.. apni behen ko bachane k liye wo akeli nikal padi thi, aise kharnak safar par..



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rudra shanta kumari ke sath kolkata ghoomne laga, use shanta ka sath bohut achha lagne laga tha, manorma ka sath bhi use bura nahi lag raha tha.. par shanta me use kuch alag si feelings aane lagi thee..

shayad ye badle halat ke karan tha, warna to rudra aisa nahi tha, basti me rehte use bohut si ladkiyon ne pareshan kiya tha, par rudra hamesha se hi sabse door door raha tha, shanta me use sabse hatt kar dikha tha, ya shanta sabse hatt kar thi.. jo bhi tha par rudra k liye shanta kumari khaas hone lagi thi..

manorma ka bhi rudra khayal rakh raha tha, manorma ki narazgi ko wo samjhta tha, par wo uske liye kuch kar nahi sakta tha..

dusre din firse rudra shanta ko lekar shehar ghoom raha tha.. shanta ka gham aur bhi kam ho gaya tha, rudra ka sath paa kar shanta khil uthi thi.. uske andar bhi kuch kuch hone laga tha.....

manorma dono ko dekh kar jal bhun rahi thi..

rudra wali taxi dariya ke pal parse guzar rahi thi... k peeche se ek car jo bohut speed se aa rahi thi. shayad uska break fail ho gaya tha, horn musalsal baj raha tha, gaadiyon ko overtake karte hue, kisi gaadi se takkar hone se bachate hue wo aage badh rahi thi.. rudra ne sarr khidki se sar bahar nikal kar aane wali gaadi ko dekha, usme ek gori ladki maujud thi...

dekhte hi dekhte wo car pul ke railing se takrati hui, fir railing ko todti hui dariya me jaane lagi....

rudra cheekh pada... taxi rokko

taxi foran ruki.. to rudra manorma ko shanta ka khayal rakhne ko bol kar taxi se nikla aur dariya me kood gaya, car jo ab tak pani me doob chuki thi.. car ke ulatne se shayad driving seat par baithi hui ladki kahi sar takrane se behosh bhi ho gai thi

rudra ke dariya me koodte hi foran wahi angrezo ki 3 gadiyan aur bhi aa kar ruk gai.. sab cheekh rahe the, chilla rahe the.. traffic bhi sara ruk chuka tha.. rudra ko dariya me koodte dekh kar shanta kumari bhi cheekh padi thi.. wo bhi rudra ko aise karte dekh kar darr gai thi

rudra paani ke andar rehte hue car tak pohncha, darwaza kholne ki koshish ki to nahi khula, rudra ne ek punch mara aur sheesha tod dia.. fir foran hi hath andar daal kar ladki ko tatolne laga, paani saag nahi tha, wo ladki ko dekh nahi sakta tha.. rudra ne fir der nahi ki, seat belt kholi aur ladki ko lekar car se, fir paani ki satah par aa gaya..

rudra ko ladki samet dekh kar kuch aur angrez bhi dariya me kood gaye... wo rudra ke paas pohnche.. aur

ek angrez:- thanks man tumne miss marry ko bacha kar humen zindagi di hai, miss marry governer sir ki beti hai.. miss marry ko kuch ho jata to hamari khair nahi thi, angrez english me bola tha..

rudra ne koi jawab nahi dia.. use ladki ki fikr lagi hui thi

upar se rassi latka di gai thi.. fir sab ek ek karke upar pohnchne lage.. miss marry ko lejane me bhi rudra hi kaam aaya.. ye asaan nahi tha, ek ladki ko lekar rassi par chadna, miss marry behosh thi

rudra upar aaya to shanta uske gale lag kar aansu bahane lagi

shanta:- agar aapko kuch ho jata to

"kuch hua to nahi naa.. aur fir tum to mujhe jaanti hi ho na, kaise mujhe kuch ho sakta tha"rudra shanta ki peeth thapakte hue bola tha

rudra taxi me baith kar jaane laga to usi angrez ne use rok liya

wo:- sorry mr tum nahi jaa sakte, governer sir tumhare baare me zarur poochhenge, isliye tum hamare sath hi chalo

manorma:- chale chalo iske sath rudra ye tumhare liye bhi sahi rahega.. desh ke hakim han to aage bhi zarurat padti rahegi..

manorma ki sunne ke bad rudra fir unke sath jane k liye tayyar ho gaya .. rudra aur shanta taxi me baithe, fir taxi goron ki gadiyon ka peecha karte hue aage badhne lagi...


shanta kumari rudra ke sath satt kar baithi thi.. rudra use dekh kar fir bahar dekhne laga, aur manorma bura sa mohn bana kar shanta ko aur rudra ko ghoorne lagi..
Nice update bhai waiting for next update
 
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