धन्यवाद आपका।Nice and superb update...
साथ बने रहिए।
धन्यवाद आपका।Nice and superb update...
very nice update waiting for
धन्यवाद आपका।Next
अगर आप सच में लेखक ने होकर लेखिका है तो
आपके जज्बे, साहस को कोटी कोटी प्रणाम
इस कहानी में नहीं जोड़ सकते अब किसी को।Add more character
धन्यवाद आपका।Nice and superb update...
धन्यवाद आपका।Nice update...
Ohhh acha aab kahani apne end ki taraf jaa rhi h koi nhi but ye story hamesha yadd rhi gi bahut he awesome tarike se aap ne ye story paesh kei hDhanywaad aapka.
Aapka sujhav bilkul sahi hai, lekin kahani pahle hi bahut jyada lambi ho chuki hai 119 Update ho chuke hain aur Manisha abhi bhi bachi hui hai.
Main ise kaskar manisha ka conversation aur jyada lambi nahi kheech na chahti aur na hi itna chhota karna chahti hoon ki kahani ka maza khatam ho jaye.
Main lagbhag 50 din se regular 2 update de rahi hoon. Ab regular Update dene ke liye mere paas samay bahut kam hai.
Isliye main koshish kar rahi hoon ki kahani ko jyada se jyada rochak aur achhi tarike se kam samay me khatam kar saku.
Sath bane rahiyega.
धन्यवाद आपका।Ohhh acha aab kahani apne end ki taraf jaa rhi h koi nhi but ye story hamesha yadd rhi gi bahut he awesome tarike se aap ne ye story paesh kei h
Mja aaya ye story phadne me
धन्यवाद आपका।Hi mahi ji , app bohot achi writer he kya app is story ko complete kar skti he please (Choti Behnein Chodein Bari behan Ki Madad Se )that was my fav story, or mujhe nahi lagta app se better koi ise like skta he please