Naina
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Bahot hi shandar story hai apki.... awesome writing skill.... Brilliant update writer sahab ...
Thanks bhaiYar akki ke dimag me chal kya raha he pehle bechari aunty ke sath aur ab arti aur sunaina ke sath
Aur ye chachi ki chal kyu badli hui hai
Waiting bhaiThanks bhai
Kahani ke saath aise hi bandhey rahiye
Thanks bhainice one bhai pace ke liye awesome one
update review
bhai akki mind game khelne mai expert lg rha hai like vo chahta hai ki Aarti aur Sunaina khud problem ko face kren aur handle karen yan vo pith piche help krega mujhe 2 option hi najar aa rhe hai
ye update character build up ke liye acha lga Akki na sirf logo ki madad krna janta hai but vo kaise selfdependent hon ye bhi janta hai
ye meri ek theory hai jo update ke aane pr hi shi yan galat sabit hogi
tb tk ke liye
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Thanks bhai.Suspense bro abb dekhte hai aage kya hota hai... Waiting for next
Aapka pehle review ek dum awesome tha bhai.Hi friends gazab ka update tha yaar ,,,shayad akki soch raha hai ke uske bahen kesi par dependent na ho par aap yaha par kuch masala add kar sakte ho jase ke uske madat koi dusra ladka kar de or akki ke image down ho ja or vo ladka mahan ban ja phir bawal akki or ladka ke bich lamba matter create full masala aise kuch shayad app samag gaye ho ge.
Thanks mamBahot hi shandar story hai apki.... awesome writing skill.... Brilliant update writer sahab ...
Ha bhai bas ek hero hi chahiye hame chahe heroine anek hoAapka pehle review ek dum awesome tha bhai.
Bhai aap ne Jo kaha me us cheez par soch Chuka tha Lekin is kahani ke reader ne mujhe kahani ke start hotey time par kaha tha ke is kahani Ko adultery mat banana.aur kisi aur ladke Ko kahani me mat laana.isliye me ne is baare me socha nhi.
Thanks for your suggestions aur aage bhi aise review detey rehna