Very Good reviewBro bua ka kaise KLPD hogaya uske pas thodi na L hai akki ka KLPD hogaya
Very Good reviewBro bua ka kaise KLPD hogaya uske pas thodi na L hai akki ka KLPD hogaya
Thanks bhai.Sare update read ker liye
or such kahun to mujhe mehsoos
howa k ap ko apni writing sudharne ki zarorat hi kyu k bohat bar Maine ye baat
note ki k ap like kuch or rahe
lakin us ka Matlab kuch or hota
Sentence me words ki hera Peri jese lagi story AP ko hard work ki zarorat hai aik dafa post Karne see pehle check zaror Kia karain baki story mast hai
mummy k sath kiss uff Kia bataon
B's mat pocho maza agya
Or kissi kk lo na lo lakin Nisha ko mat chorna us jaisa tagra maal pir na mile gi
Kya figure hai boss ladki ka
Bohat hi hot lagi wo
Although nyc story but apni writing pe focus karo to or better ho gi
Thanks bhai review karne ke liye.Abhi page 54 Tak hi update padha hai jaisa ki Maine kaha tha story k update ke sath sath story bhi jhakas hoti ja rahi hai ummid hai aage bhi jhakas update dekhne ko milenge
Thanks bhaiLag gye bua k aarmano k.
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Kya kya socha hoga bechari ne aur kya ho gya.
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Ye akki pe bechari fida sab h par h abhi tak sukha ka sukha hi.
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Ab mom bhi ready ho gye bua k saath.
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Nice update.
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Keep posting.
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Good review
Well congratulations bro
mujhe laga kahani k title se laga ta k ye romance pe ho gi per yahan to bohat
kuch ad ker dia ap ne khair
Baat Karu story ki to
Intro kafi acha raha
family members b apne hisaab se thek dikhae now age ka k pata
per story romanchak lag rahi to all the best baki ka review story complete read
karne ke baad du ga