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Fantasy Meri Police wali Biwi

Shetan

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Dosto sexual ye part meri nahi kisi or ki soch he. Piks bhi. Me sirf story create karne ki kosis me hu
 
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Yash420

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यह अपडेट कुछ खाश नहीं था
क्या मैडम जी जब आप का कहानी नेक्स्ट लेवल पर चल रहा है तो आप नै यह अपडेट बीच में क्यूं गुसैड दिया इस में कहानी की लेवल थोड़ा लो हो जाता है
बाकी कहानी आप की है आप कैसे इसे बेहतर कर कै आगे बढ़ाएंगे वह आप ही जाने
 

mahadev31

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me yaha comment karta hu story pe na ki writer pe...aap apni kahani apne real style me likhiye ...mere jo dil me aata hai wo me comment me likh deta hu.... agar kisi baat ka bura lage to aap kahe sakte hai,,, me maafi maang lunga ? kahani sahi ja rahi hai aur aap daily update bhi de rahe hai ....bus aap apne hissab se kahani poori kijiye.... agar mere kehne se aap story ki kahani change karne lage to mujhe hi writer banna padega ( me reader hu writer nahi)
 

Yash420

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me yaha comment karta hu story pe na ki writer pe...aap apni kahani apne real style me likhiye ...mere jo dil me aata hai wo me comment me likh deta hu.... agar kisi baat ka bura lage to aap kahe sakte hai,,, me maafi maang lunga ? kahani sahi ja rahi hai aur aap daily update bhi de rahe hai ....bus aap apne hissab se kahani poori kijiye.... agar mere kehne se aap story ki kahani change karne lage to mujhe hi writer banna padega ( me reader hu writer nahi)
भाई एक दम सही कहा आपने
 

fantasyWriter

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Madhuri muh hatati he.

Madhuri ; yahi to me jan na chahti hu.

Ushman ; agar mene hamla kiya hota to chhup gaya hota.

Madhuri ; ushman ke balo ko pakad ke uski gardan ko chatne lagi.

Ushman ; ye sala kutta hi aap ka dushman he medam.

Madhuri itna sun ke kaha wait karti. Gale ko muh se daba ke Madhuri ne jabde ko sakt kar diya. Ushman ki ankhe ek dam se fati ki fati rahe gai. Vo thoda chhatpataya. Madhuri ke pet me jor jor se panch marne laga. Madhuri ki ek pasli tut gai. Lekin Madhuri ne apne sikar ko nahi chhoda. Vo lagatarr jabde ke ghere ko or sakt karti rahi. Dhire dhire dilawar jese body wale mard bhi Madhuri ke samne bebas ho gaya. Sans na milna or dam ghut kar vo mar gaya. Madhuri ne jese muh hataya Madhuri ke muh se blood bahar girne laga. Ushmsn ke dill me bhi ek dar peda huaa.
Usne jindgi me 1 st time esa mardar dekha tha. Uske hosh udd gae. Madhuri ki halat kharab dekh ke bola.

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Ushman and Dilawar episode need to be edited.
Ushman ki jagah Dilawar hona chahiye ! Nash Dilabar ki katne waali hai to gardan bhi usi ki chati jaayegi.
Agar meri finding sahi ho to please post ko update kar de !

Thanks for writing an interesting novel.
:thanks: :applause:
 
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