Fantasy Meri Police wali Biwi

[DARK WOLFKING]

madhuri aur manali dono mere favourite character hai par dono ke pyar ki tulna karna galat hai ..

 

[Shetan]

tapan kya galat kiya?

Nahi muje laga tapan puri fight dekhta raha is lie muje laga sayad tapan ko darshak galiya denge. Lekin esa nahi huaa is lie me khush hu

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

Ha ha ha. Thank god aap ne tapan ko gali nahi di. Muje achha laga. Vo masoom he tabhi to Madhuri strong he. Muje achha laga. Ab aage update likhna suru karti hu. Sayad rat tak kuchh achha likh pau. Kyo ki bina planing ke story likh rahi hu

gaali dekar kya hoga ?? aur planning nahi hai aapke paas ..waiting for next ..

 

[Shetan]

Kam dev ji meri comments pe has rahe ho ya update pe?????

M joking naraj mat hona. Me update likhna start kar rahi hu

 

[kamdev99008]

Kam dev ji meri comments pe has rahe ho ya update pe?????

M joking naraj mat hona. Me update likhna start kar rahi hu

me is baat par hans raha tha ki........thanks god tapan ko readers ne gaalia nahin di.............
apki kahani achchhi hai............. aur madhuri ka shade agar white nahin to black bhi nahin hai,,,,,,,,,,grey hai
FSOG (fifty shades of grey)

agle update ka intzar hai

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

ab tak ki kahani se yahi lagta hai ki tiger aur tapan dono alag hai ..kyunki jab tiger moni ke sasth tha tab tapan ke paas shayad uski 2 ya 3 biwiya hongi ..aur tapan ke character ko fighter banane ki jarurat nahi wo jaisa hai best hai apne jagah par ..

jis tarah eram se pyar kar baitha tapan waisa character tiger ka nahi hai isliye dono alag hi hai ..
tapan bewajah kisise bhi sex nahi kiya abhi tak par tiger 2 ladkiyo se kar chuka hai ..eram ke saath uska attachment hi dekh lo ..

 

[Saaim]

Nahi muje laga tapan puri fight dekhta raha is lie muje laga sayad tapan ko darshak galiya denge. Lekin esa nahi huaa is lie me khush hu

aap har baat ko male female se na liya kare ,,agar aap ko lagta hai ke hum madhuri ko famale hone se bewafa kehete hai to aap galt hai,,,galti karne wala insan galt hota hai uus mai koi aurat mard ka bedhbhav nahi karte..jis ne bewafai ki wo galt hai ,
.kal raat hi mai ne aap ke manali par comment dekhe...aur sari raat jawab ki talash mai kat li .kuch time bad aap aur miss bose ko jawab dunga ke akhir mujhe madhuri aur manai q galt lagti hai ,,,

aaj phir niiñd ko āñkhoñ se bichhaḌte dekhā
aaj phir yaad koī choT purānī aa.ī

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

madhuri aur manali me bas apne pati ko pyar karne ka tarika alag hai jaga madhuri dil se pyar karti hai aur manali nahi ..warna pati ke aane par gusaa nahi hoti ..dono kahaniya start se padhoge to dono ki pyar ki gehrayi samajh aayegi .

 

[kamdev99008]

manali se mujhe koi problem nahin aur na rahul se hai...........ajit apna boya hua kaat raha hai
.......kaise ek husband apne dost ki last wish ke naam par apni wife se sex karane ki baat chupchap sun sakta hai....... balki laat markar dost ko ghar se nikal deta....................dosti ki bhi ek limit hoti hai............aisi baat to apne baap-bhai ki bhi koi bardast nahin karega

ulta ............ajit ne na sirf ye offer manali ke samne rakha............ balki juice mein Viagra dalkar is kaam ko anjaam bhi de diya

ab manali jo bhi kar rahi hai............use bewafai ya randipan nahin............ mauke ka fayda uthana kahte hain................
wo is mauke ka faida uthakar apni fantasy aur apni hawas (jarurat) ko pura kar rahi hai

aur manali ko agar ajit se nafrat ya gussa hai ..........to uski wajah rahul ko itni badi baat kahne ke baad bhi ghar mein banaye rakhna aur use manali ke sath akela chhodkar chudai ke mauke dena................hona chahiye, aur agar manali aisa sochti hai to wo sahi sochti hai


lekin is kahani mein .................... kami madhuri mein hai................ aur wo us baat ko accept bhi karti hai......... guilty bhi feel karti hai

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ab meri problem jis baat se hai wo characters nahin............writers ke kutark se hai........... is baat ko lekar meri shuru mein apse (Shetan ) bhi bahas hui thi....................aur unse (Manali Bose) se bhi hai...............
characters ko apne jaisa banaya hai waisa hi accept karo.......... readers agar apke characters ko kisi logic se galat sabit kar rahe hain......... to unki baat ko ya to logic se hi galat sabit karo............ ya apni kahani mein apni feelings ko character ke dwara samne aane do..........

kutark, bahas ya emotional blackmail se readers ko galat sabit karne ki koshish mat karo.......... bina kisi logic ke

ya fir readers se comment karne ko mana kar do, kyonki apko unke POV/reviews pasand nahin hain

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is mamle mein mein apka fan hoon................. apne bina character ki basic instinct ko badle ..........sirf uske emotions ko readers ke samne rakhkar kahani ke andaaj ko hi badal diya..............

is mamle me mein apki creativity ka fan hoon........ ki.... ek negative character ko apne is forum ke ek favourite character mein badal diya

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

kaamdev ji ...me aapke baat se sehmat hu ...ye kahaniya sab fantasy hoti hai jisme koi reality nahi hoti ..par jis tarah madhuri ka character dikhaya hai writer ne ( ek randi ki tarah par pati se sachcha prwm karti hai ) us tarah manali ka nahi hua wo bas apne hawas ko mitane me sabkuchh bhool gayi ..