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Thank you so much ritadannyReally stunning sister
Thank you so much ritadannyReally stunning sister
Muhje lag raha ha ham xforum pe nahi kahi magazine padh rahy hn story me sex nahi hona chahiye randipan ya fun nahi hona chahiye bs desh k liye story lekho xforum chod 2
Thank you so muchupdate bohat acha tha
thank u
Kosid jarur karungiek chota se advice hai please
jese action ka ek poora scene ha aise hi Madhuri k sex ka bhi ek poora scene hona chahiye
maza ata ha lekin Jab Madhuri khud se sex kare too
U r welcomeThank you so much ritadanny
Aap ne jo camment ki vo comment takriban 1 ya 2 update ke bad karte to samaz aata. Kyo ki aage jo huaa uska twist ho ya zutth.Mai Aapki Story ki Burai nahi kar raha hu,
1 bat mujhe Dusri Story se alag lagi isliye kahi,
Dusri kisi bhi Story me Team ka koi Pakde jane par ya Wife Gunde me Fas jane par use bachane ke liye jaldi karwahi hoti hai,
yadi Jonny ke jagah par Madhuri ko mar diya jata to uska Pati ya uski Team kya kar lete.
Qki Madhuri bhi Gundo ke bich unka pura Business khatam karne aur unhe Marne hi gayi thi to Pakde jane par Gunde bhi to usko Mar sakte hai.
Ha, Aap Writer hone ke nate ye pahle se decide kar le ki kharab se kharab paristhiti me bhi koi Madhuri ko Jaan se nahi marega, isliye baki Log nischint rahte hai to alag bat hai.
Jab us Agent (Madhuri) ki pahchan khul gayi aur Madhuri aur uski Team ko bhi pakad liya gaya hai to kya ye sambhav nahi ki Gunde unhe Mar bhi sakte hai to unhe jaldi bachane ki kosis ki jaye,
ya sab isi bat se nischint rahte hai ki Hum Team ke sabhi Member ko ikhatta karte hai, fhir Plan banate hai, fhir bachane jayenge.
Sirf ye soche ki yadi Gunde MADHURI ko CHODNE par dhyan na dekar turant Jaan se maar dete jaise Jonny ko mar diya to kya hota ?
Shilpa ka naya Villan ka Rup Bevkuf jyada laga, Madhuri ki Kabiliyat, Chalaki, Sahas, aur Dusmano se ladne aur Bachne ki Kabiliyat ke bare me Shilpa bhi acche se janti hai.
Shilpa ko yadi Madhuri ko raste se hata kar sirf Apne Pati ki eklouti Wife banna hai to use bina Samnay aaye Madhuri ko Turant marwa dena chahiye tha, Qki Shilpa bhi is bat ko janti hai ki Madhuri kitni badi Randi hai, sirf Customer se Chudwate rahne se Madhuri ko koi fark nahi padega, lakin kabhi bhi Mouka milne par Madhuri sabko Khatm karke Bach jayegi.
Aise me Shilpa ka Madhuri ko na Marwakar sirf sabse CHUDWATE rahne ko bolna COMEDY jaisa laga.
Thank you so much me kosis jarur karungiAgreed bro
Chalo man liya ki story me Madhuri ki img ek randi ki he. Par puri story me ek jesi hi comment. Kya story me dirf randipan hi he??Medam ji
Me starting se apki story padh raha hu.... Aur apki writing ka fan bhi hu....
Lekin madhuri ke favour me apka koi bhi comment mujhe logical nahi laga.. Kutark hi hai
Desh bhakti ke nam par prostitution... Kaise sahi hua?
Fir raw, army, cbi, police ki kya jarurat.... Kothe kholkar unme randiyo ko baitha do... Wo hi desh chala bhi leingi aur bacha bhi leingi .....
Madhuri ek randi hai aur tapan uska dalal... Isme koi shak nahi
Apna kam nikalne ke liye tapan ko ek master randi chahiye thi, aur madhuri ko shetan ke domination se chhutkara pakar ek submissive dalal chahiye tha..... Isiliye in dono ne apni gandi soch ko pyar ka nam dekar shadi ki....
Desh ki bat chhodo.... Madhuri ka aath denewala koi vyakti surakshit nahi hai.... Ya to surbhi aur jonny ki tarah madhuri ke choduon ne mar diya ya maut ki ore badh raha hai... Jabki inko marnewalo ko madhuri maja de rahi hai... Jyadatar apni marji se ya kabhi-kabhi apni bewkoofi me fanskar majburi me
Ab tak madhuri kisi villain ko mar nahi payi... Jabki uake flashback se pata chalta hai... Usne us officer kamal ko hi nahi... Uski bekasoor biwi ko bhi berahmi se mar diya.... Kya desh ke masoom logo ko bewajah mar dena desh bhakti hai....
Desh... Logon se banta hai...
Log... Desh se nahi
Umeed to nahi ki apki kahani me bhi koi sahi aur samajhdar character akar desh ya samaj ke liye kuchh achchha karega, kyonki apne shuru me hi bata diya tha ap Chutiyadr ko apna guru manti hain....
Fir bhi apke likhne ke hausle aur likhne ki kabiliyat ki kadr karte huye akhir tak apke sath rahunga....
But.... No KUTARK plz