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[Yash420]

अच्छा था यह अपडेट मगर तपन जो लाफा मारा माधुरी को वह पहले मारना चाहिए था
तोह सायद कहानी में बहत बड़ा बदलाव होता
बाकी आप की कहानी है और आप नै कुछ अलग ही सोच कर लिख रही हो
जो कहनी कै लिए अच्छा हो सायद
Otherwise nice update
So
Keep it up

 

[Panisir]

Mujhe to Lagta hai Ajay ko hi molabi banane ki taiyari chal rahi hai aisa islie ki is Stori me realati to hai hi Nahi ye surf ek man ki fentasi hai Jo bina lojik ki hai kyo ki har apadet me 1/2 kamia hai jisaka raitar jawab hi Nahi de PA rahe hai ye to vahi bat hai ki Rohit 2 sal se singa our me tha to krees paid kaise hua isee Tarah isme koi lojik Nahi hai

 

[The Immortal]

Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.

Rules Check Karne k Liye Ye Thread Use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread

Entry Post Karne k Liye Ye thread Use Karein :- Entry Thread
Reviews Post Karne K liye Ye thread Use karein :- Reviews Thread
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Xforum Staff..

 

[Arvind274]

Nice update

 

[Shetan]

Mujhe to Lagta hai Ajay ko hi molabi banane ki taiyari chal rahi hai aisa islie ki is Stori me realati to hai hi Nahi ye surf ek man ki fentasi hai Jo bina lojik ki hai kyo ki har apadet me 1/2 kamia hai jisaka raitar jawab hi Nahi de PA rahe hai ye to vahi bat hai ki Rohit 2 sal se singa our me tha to krees paid kaise hua isee Tarah isme koi lojik Nahi hai

Mere khyal se aap ne story padhi nahi. Sayad aap bhi kahi comments hi padh kar to nahi bol rahe mene kai update pahele hi kaha tha. Jo dill me aaya vo likh rahi hu. Story bhi meri ye 1 st he. Me logo ki comment nahi padhti. Khas kar jo sirf negative hi dhundh rahe ho. Or please itni badi badi comment mat dijiye kyo ki muje page nahi story aage badha ni he.

 

[Shetan]

Ye story man ki fantacy he. Jo dill me aaya vo likhungi. Please tang na khiche or muje koi fark nahi padega koi padhe ya na padhe. Jo 2 4 logo ko story pasand aa rahi he. Me unhi ke lie story puri kar lungi.


Kai log to muje esa lagta he story kam nagetive jyada dhudh rahe he. Jise pasand nahi sokh se jae. Lekin apni chatyrai smartness na dikhae.

 

[Shetan]

अच्छा था यह अपडेट मगर तपन जो लाफा मारा माधुरी को वह पहले मारना चाहिए था
तोह सायद कहानी में बहत बड़ा बदलाव होता
बाकी आप की कहानी है और आप नै कुछ अलग ही सोच कर लिख रही हो
जो कहनी कै लिए अच्छा हो सायद
Otherwise nice update
So
Keep it up

Pahele mar deta to story nahi banti dost

 

[Gaurav5393]

Mujhe to Lagta hai Ajay ko hi molabi banane ki taiyari chal rahi hai aisa islie ki is Stori me realati to hai hi Nahi ye surf ek man ki fentasi hai Jo bina lojik ki hai kyo ki har apadet me 1/2 kamia hai jisaka raitar jawab hi Nahi de PA rahe hai ye to vahi bat hai ki Rohit 2 sal se singa our me tha to krees paid kaise hua isee Tarah isme koi lojik Nahi hai

To yaha koun real story likh raha hai bhai ye btao.. enjoyment k liye hai koi yaha movie ki story nai chal rahi hai.. Or story hota hai Update hota hai logic hota.. Or logic pr itna focus hai to maths padho logics ache ache milen gay..Ek wo Shikari bhai the jinka shikar ho gaya lagta hai bhot din se comments nai dikh rahe unke.. ???

 

[kamdev99008]

Ye story man ki fantacy he. Jo dill me aaya vo likhungi. Please tang na khiche or muje koi fark nahi padega koi padhe ya na padhe. Jo 2 4 logo ko story pasand aa rahi he. Me unhi ke lie story puri kar lungi.


Kai log to muje esa lagta he story kam nagetive jyada dhudh rahe he. Jise pasand nahi sokh se jae. Lekin apni chatyrai smartness na dikhae.

To yaha koun real story likh raha hai bhai ye btao.. enjoyment k liye hai koi yaha movie ki story nai chal rahi hai.. Or story hota hai Update hota hai logic hota.. Or logic pr itna focus hai to maths padho logics ache ache milen gay..Ek wo Shikari bhai the jinka shikar ho gaya lagta hai bhot din se comments nai dikh rahe unke.. ???

Nindak niyare rakhiye angan kuti chhaway......................

aap likhti rahein..............jaise apko sahi lage

rahi bat meri, shikari bhai ya arvind bhai ki...................hamare criticism se apki story ki polpularity bhi badhi aur
hamne jo kamiyan batayin unse kahani mein bhi sudhaar karne ke ideas mile apko
to shikari bhai ko thanks bol dena..............

keep it up

beeti tahi bisaar de......aage ki sudhi le

 

[Arvind274]

Waiting maidam. Coments ke reply ke chakkar me update bhul gyi kya.