Fantasy Meri Police wali Biwi

[kamdev99008]

Yaar bro aap ko adulry story pasand he lekin me aap ke hisab se to nahi likh sakta meri story cockold he lekin SI bhi he or slave bi he aap ko achhi lage to padho nahi to koi bat nahi

Ek bat batao.... Ye attitude kis bat par dikha rahe ho.......
Meine kaha kya.....
1-Mujhe story pasand nahi
2-ap story band kar do
3-ap story me koi change karo

Mein kisi ko free me suggestions bhi nahi deta.....
Apko jo likhna hai likho.... Mujhe padhna hoga to padhunga

Ab agar apko mera review dena bhi pasand nahi a raha.... To future mein koi comment ya like tak nahi karunga... After all.... Apki thread hai....

 

[Reverse]

Sorry bhai muje jat pat dharam mazhab vali koi bimari nahi he

Awesome reply

 

[SamFisher]

Ek bat batao.... Ye attitude kis bat par dikha rahe ho.......
Meine kaha kya.....
1-Mujhe story pasand nahi
2-ap story band kar do
3-ap story me koi change karo

Mein kisi ko free me suggestions bhi nahi deta.....
Apko jo likhna hai likho.... Mujhe padhna hoga to padhunga

Ab agar apko mera review dena bhi pasand nahi a raha.... To future mein koi comment ya like tak nahi karunga... After all.... Apki thread hai....

Review jaroor do chahe -ve ho ya +ve. Story cuckold based hi hogi ye pehle hi confirm kardiye the writter ne. But aapne jo namuna likha agar yeh word writter ke taraf isara karte ho toh galat baat he.

 

[kamdev99008]

Review jaroor do chahe -ve ho ya +ve. Story cuckold based hi hogi ye pehle hi confirm kardiye the writter ne. But aapne jo namuna likha agar yeh word writter ke taraf isara karte ho toh galat baat he.

pahle us comment ko padho...............meine writer ko indicate karke 1 single word bhi nahi likha..........sentence ki to bat hi chhod do..................
agar 1 chhote se comment ko padhkar bhi ye usmein likhi hui bat ko..............ki...kiske bare mein kya kaha gaya..............na samjhe............aur bina samjhe ego aur attitude dikhane lage........................... ye ummeed mujhe ek writer se to kam se kam ....nahin thi.................aur ap bhi bina samjhe mujhe galat sabit karne ke liye daleel dene lage..................
to mein samajhta hu.................ki shayad yahan comment karke meine hi galti kar di.............

Ye bhi cuckold namuna hai....

Is pyar ke panchname ko pyar bata raha hai....
Policewali.... Pyar ka punchnama banane ke liye abhi kitne lund chus ke unka juice pilayegi ise... Abki to blouse lene ke liye gayi hai... Chut par uske lund ki seal lagwa ke ayegi kya.....
Lage raho

in lines se kahin bhi aisa mahsoos hua ki ye writer ke liye hain............jabki iske sath story ke hero ki thoughts ko quote kiya tha meine....jismein wo apni wife ke pyar ki gahrai ko feel kar raha tha...............
chaliye chhodiye...........................

i'm extremely sorry mr Shetan to disappoint you........... an mr SamFisher thanks for showing me my mistakes
best of luck

 

[SamFisher]

Meine bhi li

pahle us comment ko padho...............meine writer ko indicate karke 1 single word bhi nahi likha..........sentence ki to bat hi chhod do..................
agar 1 chhote se comment ko padhkar bhi ye usmein likhi hui bat ko..............ki...kiske bare mein kya kaha gaya..............na samjhe............aur bina samjhe ego aur attitude dikhane lage........................... ye ummeed mujhe ek writer se to kam se kam ....nahin thi.................aur ap bhi bina samjhe mujhe galat sabit karne ke liye daleel dene lage..................
to mein samajhta hu.................ki shayad yahan comment karke meine hi galti kar di.............

in lines se kahin bhi aisa mahsoos hua ki ye writer ke liye hain............jabki iske sath story ke hero ki thoughts ko quote kiya tha meine....jismein wo apni wife ke pyar ki gahrai ko feel kar raha tha...............
chaliye chhodiye...........................

i'm extremely sorry mr Shetan to disappoint you........... an mr SamFisher thanks for showing me my mistakes
best of luck

Meine aapko koi galat sabit nehin kiya. Mera last line padhiye meine likha he agar aapne kaha he writter ko. Aapne nehin kaha ye bata diya aur mujhe koi galat bhi nehin laga. Yeh koi iljaam nehin lagaya tha meine bro doubt tha phir bhi I'm sorry.

 

[Vickey]

Nice update

 

[Shetan]

Ek bat batao.... Ye attitude kis bat par dikha rahe ho.......
Meine kaha kya.....
1-Mujhe story pasand nahi
2-ap story band kar do
3-ap story me koi change karo

Mein kisi ko free me suggestions bhi nahi deta.....
Apko jo likhna hai likho.... Mujhe padhna hoga to padhunga

Ab agar apko mera review dena bhi pasand nahi a raha.... To future mein koi comment ya like tak nahi karunga... After all.... Apki thread hai....

Bro bro bro aap ki pichhli comment me bhi 1st me hi galat word us kiya or abhi bhi aap ki is comment me bhi attitude jese Ward us kiya


Aap ne hi story likhne ke lie mera moral up kiya aab aap hi muje ankela chhod do ge ???

 

[Shetan]

I

pahle us comment ko padho...............meine writer ko indicate karke 1 single word bhi nahi likha..........sentence ki to bat hi chhod do..................
agar 1 chhote se comment ko padhkar bhi ye usmein likhi hui bat ko..............ki...kiske bare mein kya kaha gaya..............na samjhe............aur bina samjhe ego aur attitude dikhane lage........................... ye ummeed mujhe ek writer se to kam se kam ....nahin thi.................aur ap bhi bina samjhe mujhe galat sabit karne ke liye daleel dene lage..................
to mein samajhta hu.................ki shayad yahan comment karke meine hi galti kar di.............

in lines se kahin bhi aisa mahsoos hua ki ye writer ke liye hain............jabki iske sath story ke hero ki thoughts ko quote kiya tha meine....jismein wo apni wife ke pyar ki gahrai ko feel kar raha tha...............
chaliye chhodiye...........................

i'm extremely sorry mr Shetan to disappoint you........... an mr SamFisher thanks for showing me my mistakes
best of luck

Its ok bro muje aap se koi sikayat nahi he bro chill yaar

 

[Vickey]

Bhai next update kb ayega?

 

[Shetan]

Bhai next update kb ayega?

Bhai parso tak aa jaega Pakka