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ye jo abhishek aur sameer Shahar mein jiske ghar rehne wale...
aur wo jo sameer ko target karne wale the shahar aate hi.... kya in dono groups ke bich koi connection hai..? .
Ab tak ke update bahut ache the ruby ji..... starting gao se hui jo 1980 ke dashak ke shuruati se ....bawani gao ka Thakur or Bhawanipur gao ka karta dharta ....suljhe huye insaan ....shaadi hui Sushila se nek or pati vrata aurat....inke paanch baache sameer ....padhayi me to acha hai hi ....sath nek and ache sanskar diye hai ....dono mata pita ne.....sammer school me kya poore gao me top kiya usne ...or medal dene ke liye uske baap ko bulaya gya...isse acha ek baap ke liye ho nhi skta ...ki wo khud apne bete ho sammanit kare .....sameer ke baad uske bhai behno ke bare me abhi sahi se disclose nhi hua to unke bare me abhi me kuch keh nhi sakta...Abhishek sammer ka dost ...or padhayi me honhar....iski behan Shweta ye sameer ko pasand krti pr isne abhi kaha nhi....
Ek scene me dikhaya gya Jha do bhai behan ek dusre ek saath kaam krida kr rhe the....ye jaroor bhawani thakur ke khilaf koi shadyantra rach rhe honge....
I think ye shayad abhishek or Shweta ki maa hai...mujhe to aisa lgta hai .... Aage dekhte hai kon hai ye...
Ek scene me dikhaya gya Jha ek aadmi or aurat apne damad ko bulane ki baat kr rhe the...shayad ye Sushila ke mata pita hai....jo unhe bulane ki baat kr rhe hai...
Ek scene me ek ladki sameer ko yaad kr rhi thi....usse chhati hai...pr darti hai samaj se kyuki unka rishta kuch aisa hai...jisse agr logo or sameer ko pta chla ko sab isse dur ho jayega...kahir kon hai ye wo to waqt batayega... I think ye Sushila ke bhai ki ladki hai....
Ek scene me Jha ek ldki ro rhi thi uski maang me sindoor chla gya ....wo us ladke ko janti hai...I think
rishta bhai behan ko hoga shayad Nisha ho ....
Last me apne dikhaya gal ke kuch log thakur ke paas aaye hai kyuki usne gao ki ladkiyon ko free me shikha dene ki baat khi...but kuch logo wo chiz pasand nhi aayi ...purane zamane me ye aksar hota tha...ki ladkiyo ka jyada padhne nhi diya jyada pichdi soch thi unki .....khair susbila ne unka ache se jawab diya ....bhawani thakur or uski family nek insaan hai...pr kuch log jarror uski achi soch se jalte honge or kuch usse badla lene ke bare me sochnge... dekhte hai aage kya interesting hota hai....
Apne kaha story 3generations ke beech chalegi its means ye bahut long story hone wali hai...or character bhi bahut aane wale hai story me ....to dekhte hai kya hota hai is story me bus ye adhura na rokna .....yhi guzarish hai....
Ek scene me dikhaya gya Jha do bhai behan ek dusre ek saath kaam krida kr rhe the....ye jaroor bhawani thakur ke khilaf koi shadyantra rach rhe honge....
I think ye shayad abhishek or Shweta ki maa hai...mujhe to aisa lgta hai .... Aage dekhte hai kon hai ye...
Ek scene me dikhaya gya Jha ek aadmi or aurat apne damad ko bulane ki baat kr rhe the...shayad ye Sushila ke mata pita hai....jo unhe bulane ki baat kr rhe hai...
Ek scene me ek ladki sameer ko yaad kr rhi thi....usse chhati hai...pr darti hai samaj se kyuki unka rishta kuch aisa hai...jisse agr logo or sameer ko pta chla ko sab isse dur ho jayega...kahir kon hai ye wo to waqt batayega... I think ye Sushila ke bhai ki ladki hai....
Ek scene me Jha ek ldki ro rhi thi uski maang me sindoor chla gya ....wo us ladke ko janti hai...I think
rishta bhai behan ko hoga shayad Nisha ho ....Last me apne dikhaya gal ke kuch log thakur ke paas aaye hai kyuki usne gao ki ladkiyon ko free me shikha dene ki baat khi...but kuch logo wo chiz pasand nhi aayi ...purane zamane me ye aksar hota tha...ki ladkiyo ka jyada padhne nhi diya jyada pichdi soch thi unki .....khair susbila ne unka ache se jawab diya ....bhawani thakur or uski family nek insaan hai...pr kuch log jarror uski achi soch se jalte honge or kuch usse badla lene ke bare me sochnge... dekhte hai aage kya interesting hota hai....
Apne kaha story 3generations ke beech chalegi its means ye bahut long story hone wali hai...or character bhi bahut aane wale hai story me ....to dekhte hai kya hota hai is story me bus ye adhura na rokna .....yhi guzarish hai....
Update 13
Shweta waha se nazar niche kiye chhat se niche taraf aayi aur sidhiyon pe mudkar apne bhai ke taraf dekha to use apne bhai ke chehre pe ek pyari si rahasmay muskurat dikhi jise dekh kar uske man mastishk me ek halachal si mach gayi.
Wo niche aa to gayi magar abhi karne ko kuch tha nhi kyoki maa baapu to kheton se aaye nhi thi to wo khana banane me kiska hath batati. Abhi ye samay uske aur Abhishek ke padhane ka samay tha magar ab apne mane uthe lazza ke karan wo bhai ke sath baithkar padh nhi pati aur na hi usme himmat thi ki wo bhai ke nazaron ka samana kare.
Ab jab niche karne ko tha nhi fir Shweta man apni bhai ke sawal ko sochane laga.
Shweta (man me): Bhai ne akhir ye sawal kyo puchha ki main unhe chhote thakur kyo bulati hoon. Unhe to pta hota ki gaon ke sabhi log unhe chhote thakur bulate hain. Oh haa ye maine kaise dhyan nhi diya. maa aur baapu unhe beta kahkar tath bhai unhe nam se bulata hain, bhai sawal puchane ka karne ye tha ki meri ek matra saheli unki bahan hai. Jo unhe bhaiya ya bhai kahakar bulati hain isliye bhai ne sawal kiya ki main unhe chhote thakur kahkar kyo bulati hoon jabki unke hisab se mujhe Nisha ki tarah unhe bulana chahiye. Lekin main ye kaise kar sakti hoon jinhe samajhane layak hone se hi apne man Mandir ka Devta man chuki hoon unhe kaise wo kahkar bula loo.
Mere aane ke bad bhai kaise muskura rhe the iska matalab bhai ko kahin na kahin shak ho gaya hain mujhe bhai ke dil ki bat aur us muskurahat ka karan janana hoga magar kaise kuch soch Shweta kuch soch. Ha ye tarika sahi rahega bhai ko is tarah ghuma ke puchugi.
Abhi bhi Shweta pta nhi kya sochati rahti magar tabhi uska dhyan ek awaj se bhang kiya.
Awaj: are chhori ka soch rhi hain ja jaldi se pani la fir ham dono maa beti milkar khana banayege.
Awaj sunkar Shweta ne dekha uske maa baapu aa gaye. Isliye wo uthkar pani lane chali gayi tabhi uski nazar bhai par padi jo chhat se jhuk kar use dekha raha tha uske chehere pe wohi muskan thi. Ek bar fir Shweta sharama gayi aur jaldi se bither chali gayi.
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Yahan Shahar 1 me ek kamare me stri aur purush.
Purush: Kuch kaam bana.
Stri: Dukhi chehere se nhi bana, tumhari bat mankar maine apne bhai ko apni hushn ke jal me fasakar uske sath hambister bhi ho gayi magar.
Purush: Magar kya jab tu apne bhai chud gayi to tere maa banane me dikkat kaisi.
Stri: Pahle puri bat sunlo tumhari bat mankar main ek dhandhewali ki tarah ardhnage sharir ke sath bhai ko rijhana shuru kar diya shayad kismat bhi mere sath kyoki tabhi bhabhi ko unke mayeke se bulawa aa gaya aur wo chali gayi. Fir maine bhai ko patakar unke chud bhi gayi magar hay re fut kismat bhai ne pahle hi nasbandi kara li thi isliye main unse maa nhi ban sakti.
Purush: Ab kya hoga hamane samaj niyamo pe thak pe rakhkar ye bhi kar dala magar koi fayda nhi. Kab tak mujhe namard aur tumhe bajh ke tane duniya walon sunana hoga.
Stri: bahut jaldi ham is tane se mukt ho jayege.
Purush: kaise.
Stri: Us gaon ka ladka jo ki ek pahalwan hain aur maine dekha hain use badi shakt aur bemishal sharir ka malik hain wo mujhe maa banayega.
Purush: Magar kaise ye to bata.
Stri: Apko pta hain na gaon me 8 tak hi school hain isliye wo padhane shahar aayega. Bhai ne bola hain wo kisi tarah use hamara yahan rukane ka prabandh kara dege fir main use apne sharir ke jal me fasa lugi. Naya khun hain asani se fas jayega aur ek bar badan ki garmi use mil gayi to wo jarur aayega. Fir uske niche letakar me maa ban jaougi.
Purush: kya aesa ho payega. Agar aesa ho gaya to hamara kaam safal ho jayega.
Stri: apko mujhe pe shak hain kya jab bahan hokar bhai se chudane me kamayab ho gayi to us ladke se mera koi rishta bhi nhi hain is umar sharir kuch magari hain wo nhi bach payega aur hama kaam jarur ho jayega.
Ye bol kar wo wo hasane lagi jisme wo purush bhi shamil ho gaya.
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Ayiye apko le chalti hoon Bhawanipur se 100 km dur ek gaon jiska nam hain Surajpur jahan ke thakur hain Bhan Singh.
Bhan Singh 55 Varshiye hain bahut sehatmand aur sabhy Thakur hain inki Dharmapatni Nitu 53 varshiye.
Ye pure gaon ko apna pariwar manti hain hain inke pariwar ka parichay bad me dugi pahale yahan kuch ghat raha hain wo dekh le. Vaise apko bata du ye wo haweli hain jahan ek ladki Sameer ki photo ko nihar rhi thi.
Nitu apne kamare me baithi thi tabh uske darwaje pe dastak huyi.
Nitu: koun hain ander aa jao.
Nitu ke bolate hi Sameer ke umar ki ek ladki darwaja khol kar kamare ke ander aa gayi.
Nitu: are sonal beta is samay tu yahan ye to tere sone ka time hota hain na.
Sonal Nitu aur Bhan ki chhoti ladki ka nam hain jo apne bhai ki judwa aur dono apne badi bahan 20-21 sal chhote hain aesa kyo aage pta chalega.
Sonal: ha maa magar main aap se kuch bat karna chahati thi isliye main apke pas aayi.
Nitu: kya bat karni hain beta batao.
Sonal: Maa apko pta hain is sal maine aur bhai dono ne 8 kar li isliye ab hame shahar jana hoga padhane kyoki kisi gaon me isase aage ki padhai nhi ho sakti hain.
Nitu: to kya hua tu bhi apne bhai ke sath Shahar 2 chali jana.
Sonal: maa main isliye aayi hoon bhai ke sare mitra shahar 2 ja rahe hain isliye wo bhi ja rha rhe hain. Magar meri ek matra saheli Kusum to shahar 1 ja rhi hain jahan uske baapu kaam karte hain isliye main bhi wohi jana chahati hoon.
Nitu: magar tu akeli.
Sonal: Akeli kaha maa Kusum hain uske bapu hain aur aur jiji ka beta bhi to wohi padhane ja rha hain.
Nitu: jab tu sab pta kar rakha hai. fir kya chali jana.
Sonal: Maa ek bat aur Kaka aaye huye wo kal Kusum ko lekar jayege to main bhi sath jana chahati hoon.
Nitu: itani jaldi kyo dekh tere didi jija aane wale hain unke bad chali jana.
Sonal: ma isliye to ja rhi hoon.
Nitu: matlab
Sonal: matlab ye maa jiji ke sath unka beta bhi ayega jo meri hi class me hoga. Main use dost ki tarah milana chahati wo mujhse yahan mil lega to wo mujhe waha mousi mousi bulayega jo mujhe achchha nhi lagega isliye.
Nitu: thik hain maine tujhe kabhi kis bat ke liye nhi roka magar teri didi ko bura lagega.
Sonal: main didi se bat kar lugi maa bus aap jane ki ijajat de do aur baba se bhi dilwa do.
Nitu: thik hain tu jane ki taiyari kar baki sab main dekh loogi.
Maanki bat sunkar Sonal maa ka gal chumkar apne kamare chal di taiyari karne.
Shweta waha se nazar niche kiye chhat se niche taraf aayi aur sidhiyon pe mudkar apne bhai ke taraf dekha to use apne bhai ke chehre pe ek pyari si rahasmay muskurat dikhi jise dekh kar uske man mastishk me ek halachal si mach gayi.
Wo niche aa to gayi magar abhi karne ko kuch tha nhi kyoki maa baapu to kheton se aaye nhi thi to wo khana banane me kiska hath batati. Abhi ye samay uske aur Abhishek ke padhane ka samay tha magar ab apne mane uthe lazza ke karan wo bhai ke sath baithkar padh nhi pati aur na hi usme himmat thi ki wo bhai ke nazaron ka samana kare.
Ab jab niche karne ko tha nhi fir Shweta man apni bhai ke sawal ko sochane laga.
Shweta (man me): Bhai ne akhir ye sawal kyo puchha ki main unhe chhote thakur kyo bulati hoon. Unhe to pta hota ki gaon ke sabhi log unhe chhote thakur bulate hain. Oh haa ye maine kaise dhyan nhi diya. maa aur baapu unhe beta kahkar tath bhai unhe nam se bulata hain, bhai sawal puchane ka karne ye tha ki meri ek matra saheli unki bahan hai. Jo unhe bhaiya ya bhai kahakar bulati hain isliye bhai ne sawal kiya ki main unhe chhote thakur kahkar kyo bulati hoon jabki unke hisab se mujhe Nisha ki tarah unhe bulana chahiye. Lekin main ye kaise kar sakti hoon jinhe samajhane layak hone se hi apne man Mandir ka Devta man chuki hoon unhe kaise wo kahkar bula loo.
Mere aane ke bad bhai kaise muskura rhe the iska matalab bhai ko kahin na kahin shak ho gaya hain mujhe bhai ke dil ki bat aur us muskurahat ka karan janana hoga magar kaise kuch soch Shweta kuch soch. Ha ye tarika sahi rahega bhai ko is tarah ghuma ke puchugi.
Abhi bhi Shweta pta nhi kya sochati rahti magar tabhi uska dhyan ek awaj se bhang kiya.
Awaj: are chhori ka soch rhi hain ja jaldi se pani la fir ham dono maa beti milkar khana banayege.
Awaj sunkar Shweta ne dekha uske maa baapu aa gaye. Isliye wo uthkar pani lane chali gayi tabhi uski nazar bhai par padi jo chhat se jhuk kar use dekha raha tha uske chehere pe wohi muskan thi. Ek bar fir Shweta sharama gayi aur jaldi se bither chali gayi.
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Yahan Shahar 1 me ek kamare me stri aur purush.
Purush: Kuch kaam bana.
Stri: Dukhi chehere se nhi bana, tumhari bat mankar maine apne bhai ko apni hushn ke jal me fasakar uske sath hambister bhi ho gayi magar.
Purush: Magar kya jab tu apne bhai chud gayi to tere maa banane me dikkat kaisi.
Stri: Pahle puri bat sunlo tumhari bat mankar main ek dhandhewali ki tarah ardhnage sharir ke sath bhai ko rijhana shuru kar diya shayad kismat bhi mere sath kyoki tabhi bhabhi ko unke mayeke se bulawa aa gaya aur wo chali gayi. Fir maine bhai ko patakar unke chud bhi gayi magar hay re fut kismat bhai ne pahle hi nasbandi kara li thi isliye main unse maa nhi ban sakti.
Purush: Ab kya hoga hamane samaj niyamo pe thak pe rakhkar ye bhi kar dala magar koi fayda nhi. Kab tak mujhe namard aur tumhe bajh ke tane duniya walon sunana hoga.
Stri: bahut jaldi ham is tane se mukt ho jayege.
Purush: kaise.
Stri: Us gaon ka ladka jo ki ek pahalwan hain aur maine dekha hain use badi shakt aur bemishal sharir ka malik hain wo mujhe maa banayega.
Purush: Magar kaise ye to bata.
Stri: Apko pta hain na gaon me 8 tak hi school hain isliye wo padhane shahar aayega. Bhai ne bola hain wo kisi tarah use hamara yahan rukane ka prabandh kara dege fir main use apne sharir ke jal me fasa lugi. Naya khun hain asani se fas jayega aur ek bar badan ki garmi use mil gayi to wo jarur aayega. Fir uske niche letakar me maa ban jaougi.
Purush: kya aesa ho payega. Agar aesa ho gaya to hamara kaam safal ho jayega.
Stri: apko mujhe pe shak hain kya jab bahan hokar bhai se chudane me kamayab ho gayi to us ladke se mera koi rishta bhi nhi hain is umar sharir kuch magari hain wo nhi bach payega aur hama kaam jarur ho jayega.
Ye bol kar wo wo hasane lagi jisme wo purush bhi shamil ho gaya.
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.
.
.
.
.
Ayiye apko le chalti hoon Bhawanipur se 100 km dur ek gaon jiska nam hain Surajpur jahan ke thakur hain Bhan Singh.
Bhan Singh 55 Varshiye hain bahut sehatmand aur sabhy Thakur hain inki Dharmapatni Nitu 53 varshiye.
Ye pure gaon ko apna pariwar manti hain hain inke pariwar ka parichay bad me dugi pahale yahan kuch ghat raha hain wo dekh le. Vaise apko bata du ye wo haweli hain jahan ek ladki Sameer ki photo ko nihar rhi thi.
Nitu apne kamare me baithi thi tabh uske darwaje pe dastak huyi.
Nitu: koun hain ander aa jao.
Nitu ke bolate hi Sameer ke umar ki ek ladki darwaja khol kar kamare ke ander aa gayi.
Nitu: are sonal beta is samay tu yahan ye to tere sone ka time hota hain na.
Sonal Nitu aur Bhan ki chhoti ladki ka nam hain jo apne bhai ki judwa aur dono apne badi bahan 20-21 sal chhote hain aesa kyo aage pta chalega.
Sonal: ha maa magar main aap se kuch bat karna chahati thi isliye main apke pas aayi.
Nitu: kya bat karni hain beta batao.
Sonal: Maa apko pta hain is sal maine aur bhai dono ne 8 kar li isliye ab hame shahar jana hoga padhane kyoki kisi gaon me isase aage ki padhai nhi ho sakti hain.
Nitu: to kya hua tu bhi apne bhai ke sath Shahar 2 chali jana.
Sonal: maa main isliye aayi hoon bhai ke sare mitra shahar 2 ja rahe hain isliye wo bhi ja rha rhe hain. Magar meri ek matra saheli Kusum to shahar 1 ja rhi hain jahan uske baapu kaam karte hain isliye main bhi wohi jana chahati hoon.
Nitu: magar tu akeli.
Sonal: Akeli kaha maa Kusum hain uske bapu hain aur aur jiji ka beta bhi to wohi padhane ja rha hain.
Nitu: jab tu sab pta kar rakha hai. fir kya chali jana.
Sonal: Maa ek bat aur Kaka aaye huye wo kal Kusum ko lekar jayege to main bhi sath jana chahati hoon.
Nitu: itani jaldi kyo dekh tere didi jija aane wale hain unke bad chali jana.
Sonal: ma isliye to ja rhi hoon.
Nitu: matlab
Sonal: matlab ye maa jiji ke sath unka beta bhi ayega jo meri hi class me hoga. Main use dost ki tarah milana chahati wo mujhse yahan mil lega to wo mujhe waha mousi mousi bulayega jo mujhe achchha nhi lagega isliye.
Nitu: thik hain maine tujhe kabhi kis bat ke liye nhi roka magar teri didi ko bura lagega.
Sonal: main didi se bat kar lugi maa bus aap jane ki ijajat de do aur baba se bhi dilwa do.
Nitu: thik hain tu jane ki taiyari kar baki sab main dekh loogi.
Maanki bat sunkar Sonal maa ka gal chumkar apne kamare chal di taiyari karne.
Aaj bhi samaj me aese log baithe hain ladki siksha ladki paida hona hi pasand nhi warna bhrun hatya ye na hotithakurain bilkul sathik jawab deke bolti bandh kar di sabki... padhne ka sabko Hak hai... ab jab thakur sahab help kar rahe hai is mamle mein to kuch logo ko mirchi lag gayi... ki unke ghar ab wo ladkiyan kaam karne nahi aayegi... ye jo waha kuch aurate shikayat kar rahi thi, I think.. ye Sabhi ek number ki aalsi type ki aurate hai, bachhiya aake Kam karegi aur ye log ghar pe baithe baithe aaish karenge.... achha kiya thakurain ne tit for tat jawab deke...
udhar shayad abhishek ko bhi is baat ka andaza hai shweta sameer ko dil hi dil mein chaahti hai..
Khair .. shaandar update shanadar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan
Aise hi likhti rahiye aur apni manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karti rahiye..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
Lekin kya kare inka kuch log karte bhi nhi pta nhi ye so kab jayegi dhanywad
De diya late diya iske liye sorry