Adultery MISSION Pahad/Mountain (mom swap)

[ChestNut]

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ek hafte ka bol kar apni maao ko bulwa to liya hai .. magar inke hitler baapuo ka kya bharosa phirse na phone karke bula le ya beech mein lene ke liye aa tapke ...

waise kahani ko direction acchi di hai .. lagbhag har jaroori aspect cover karke chal rahe ho lekhak ji ...

shuruaat se lekar abhi tak ke updates mein kaafi farak dekhne ko mila hai .. har angle se he ...

thumbs up ...

lets see ab kya karte hai teeno .. aur kab tak inki maao ka bhram door ho pata hai mamta wala ...

nice update ...

 

[pisslover008]

Aapke review thread ki shaan badhane ka kaam karta he.......Thanx a lot bohot kam he aapke liye...... Lekin saayed aapse thori chuk ho gayi he......sampurna ne apne pati ko wohi bataya he jo use lagta he ki bachcho ka bachpana majak he.......aur mayank ke papa bhi apne bete aur apne patni ki wohi baat maante he.....mayank ke papa ya Mummy ko mayank ke dil me kya sachchai he wo abhi nehi pata he.......




Baki character ke jhalak to badalte rahegnge.......ab tak mere hisab se jo maine likha he us hisab se.....sampurna aur prema ki nature dono ka modern think diya he........aur hamesa depending on situation......Isliye aage jaa ke character ke jhalak badalte rahenge.......aise to itna experience writer nehi hoon ki har ek step logic ke saath likh chaku.....iske liye kabhi agar kuch logic sahi naa baithe to request ki skip karna dost..............

Dost koi nahi story mazedaar ja rahi wahi kaafi hai bas Mai speculation karraha ki shayed sampurna ka khula pan dekh ke aisa prateet ho raha ki wo Thoda zyada khulegi in ladkon se, prema ka scene bhi Kuch aisa hi laga, lekin pata nahi mujhey sampurna se zyada gandi vibes a rahi haha. Urmika toh kaafi shy aur seedhi gav ki aurat hai ussey zyada ganda pan Karna shayed mumkin na ho bachon ke liye.

 

[pisslover008]

Dost, ab yeh plan toh bana liya teeno ladko ne ab yeh dekhna mast rahega ki kya kya plan karengey taki inki mummiyan aur khul sake inke sath in 7 dino me.

Konsi mummy pehley khulegi?

Konsa dost zyada bhooka hai?

Kya papa se connection off rahega pure 7 din? Kya teeno mummiyan apne apne bf ke sath itna busy hongi ki apne patidev ko bhool jaye and mast maze ley?

Dekhna kaafi romanchak rahega. Keep updating.

 

[pisslover008]

Aapke review thread ki shaan badhane ka kaam karta he.......Thanx a lot bohot kam he aapke liye...... Lekin saayed aapse thori chuk ho gayi he......sampurna ne apne pati ko wohi bataya he jo use lagta he ki bachcho ka bachpana majak he.......aur mayank ke papa bhi apne bete aur apne patni ki wohi baat maante he.....mayank ke papa ya Mummy ko mayank ke dil me kya sachchai he wo abhi nehi pata he.......




Baki character ke jhalak to badalte rahegnge.......ab tak mere hisab se jo maine likha he us hisab se.....sampurna aur prema ki nature dono ka modern think diya he........aur hamesa depending on situation......Isliye aage jaa ke character ke jhalak badalte rahenge.......aise to itna experience writer nehi hoon ki har ek step logic ke saath likh chaku.....iske liye kabhi agar kuch logic sahi naa baithe to request ki skip karna dost..............

thankyou very much dost apke kind words ke liye and tareef ke liye. Apki story indeed bahut achi hai and kaafi Kuch age jake isme kiya ja sakta hai jo ofcos aap karogey. Please don't leave in between and complete karna story dost.

Mujhey strictly incest story pasand nahi ati, I like those stories jisme incest + adultery ka mix ho like yours. Simple incest bahut boring hota lol. Aur incest + adultery me bahut scope bhi hota hai.

Honestly aurat ko bhi haq hai ki wo ek se zyada mardon se apne sambhand rakhe....yahan zyadatar mard aise he jo kehhtey hai ki hero ek hi rakho and ussey sab aurton ko sex karwao lol matlab ek hero nahi superhero ho gaya. Sirf mard hi kyun allowed hai ek se zyada aurat se relation rakhne ke liye?

Ager mard karey toh stud and aurat karey to slut? Why this kolaveri di? Lol

 

[ChestNut]

tino ko pyar ki jaal mein fasa ke pagal kar do. wo tino baki sabkuch bhool jaye aur real gf ban jaye

Thanx a lot

 

[ChestNut]

Update plezzzz

Soon

 

[ChestNut]

kahani to mast likhi hai .. saale 3no dosto ki harkate aur inki bakchodi hasaati rehti hai ...

interesting .. aaj he is story ko padhna shuru kiya hai .. and its captivating on almost every front ...

bas ek downfall hai joki writer sahab ne shuru mein he bata diya tha .. spelling mistakes ko lekar .. it's not much .. padha to ja he raha hai .. agar possible ho to koshish karke spelling agar sahi likh sako to aur bhi better aur majedaar ho jaayegi kahani ...

although agar speed compronise hoti hai likhne ki to main ispar jyaada jor nahi dunga .. all in all nice story ...

keep it up .. good work ...

Thanx a lot ........ Me Kashish karunga........ Mera mil hindi nehi he isliye kuch spelling sayed hamesa hi mistake rahe..... Thanks

 

[ChestNut]

ye to tagda wala klpd ho gaya .. abhi to dhakkan bhi nahi khula tha aur in teeno ki seekai bhi ho gayi .. ye professarni to waqai mein apne pati se bhi jyaada khadoos hai ...

abhi to daaru ki he baat haangi hai .. galti se 3000 Rs. waali baat jo supriya ko dene gaye the wo baat galti se mooh se nikli to saari raat nange he murge bane rahenge ...

asli camping ka maza to inki maa le rahi hai .. ha ha ...

nice story

Thanks a lot .........

 

[ChestNut]

ek hafte ka bol kar apni maao ko bulwa to liya hai .. magar inke hitler baapuo ka kya bharosa phirse na phone karke bula le ya beech mein lene ke liye aa tapke ...

waise kahani ko direction acchi di hai .. lagbhag har jaroori aspect cover karke chal rahe ho lekhak ji ...

shuruaat se lekar abhi tak ke updates mein kaafi farak dekhne ko mila hai .. har angle se he ...

thumbs up ...

lets see ab kya karte hai teeno .. aur kab tak inki maao ka bhram door ho pata hai mamta wala ...

nice update ...

Thanks a lot.......

 

[ChestNut]

Dost koi nahi story mazedaar ja rahi wahi kaafi hai bas Mai speculation karraha ki shayed sampurna ka khula pan dekh ke aisa prateet ho raha ki wo Thoda zyada khulegi in ladkon se, prema ka scene bhi Kuch aisa hi laga, lekin pata nahi mujhey sampurna se zyada gandi vibes a rahi haha. Urmika toh kaafi shy aur seedhi gav ki aurat hai ussey zyada ganda pan Karna shayed mumkin na ho bachon ke liye.

Thans a lot