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Thanx a lot.... Umidd he agle kuch update aapko pasnad aa jaaye.......Normal but par mazedaar update bhai keep going well
kamdev99008 bhai..ek baar yaha bhi najar fer lijiye.adultery ho ya incest .. kucch bhi chalega .. bas KLPD na ho jaaye .. jaise ki aapne kiya tha .. kamdev99008 bhaiya nahi dikhayi de rahe idhar .. aur unki moksh ki to baat he karni bekaar hai ...
आप ने ऐसा शमा बांधा है न कि कोई भी एक बार इस कहानी के चार पांच अपडेट पढ़ ले तो वो कहानी पढ़ना छोड़ ही नही सकता।Saayed bussy honge sanju sir........ Kaam ki wazah se kabhi kabhi man nehi baithta........aisa hota he......bich me gap aa jaaye to likhne ka dhyaan hat jata he........
Thanx a lot ...... Kashish rahegi sir ji.....आप ने ऐसा शमा बांधा है न कि कोई भी एक बार इस कहानी के चार पांच अपडेट पढ़ ले तो वो कहानी पढ़ना छोड़ ही नही सकता।
अगर राइटिंग मे थोड़ी सुधार हो जाए तब कहना ही कया ! कॉन्सेप्ट नो डाऊट , लाजवाब चुना है आपने।
Bhud badiya01
Ek hostel ke kamre teen dost abhi padhai kar rahe the........teeno roommates the....... Ek hi stream se padhai kar rahe the......deewar ki teen disha me teeno ki khatiya lagi hui thi aur bicho bich teeno ki kitabo ki mandi..... Mandi isliye kyu ki sab bikhre pade the aur teeno ke table par computers jiski cpu ki anjar panjar khule the......cabinet na ho kar aise hi table par motherboard pade huye the....... Teeno BE computer engineering kar rahe the......shuru ke ek saal nikal chuke the ab baki teen chaal bacha he.... Lekin teeno hi boring champu ban gaye the.......
Teeno ki mulakat hostel ki pehli din hui thi.......teeno hi ek dusre ke liye anjaan the....ghar se bataya gaya tha ki sambhal ke rehna kisi se dosti bosti kar ke kisi se ulajna mat pata nehi kaha kaha se lafange aayenge......apna boxa hamesa tala laga ke rakhna......nashiyat aise bheji thi jaise dusre brahmand jaa rahe the unke bachche......
Shuru shuru me to teeno hi ek dusre ki baatein chupate rahe lekin dheere dheere ek dusre ki dosti ki adat pad gaye..... Aur upar se senior ki ya phir takatwar ladko ki group se bachne ke liye teeno gehre dost ban gaye aur ekdusre ki madat karte bhaisaara dikhate.........
Teeno hi alag alag city se belong karte the........bhasha ki salika tour tarika samjhne me thora samay laga teeno ko.......bully hote huye ranging jhelte huye 6 manhine me comfortable ho gaye the teeno......
Small INTRO
aayan taneja , mayank bindu , utpal kothari........ Umr lagbhag teeno ke ek hi saal ke the 20.......
" obe 10 baj gaye....so jaa kaal project bhi to submit karna he naa....." uptal
" haleta warden bahar hi tehel raha he saale.....pith par dande barchana he to saa jaa hum nehi sone wale....pata he naa 11 baje se pehle so gaya to subah 4 baje uthwa kar pure ground ke 8 sakkar lagana dega.... " mayank
" lagta he ise naya rule nehi pata......" aayan
" kaise pata hoga aaj hi to chutti kat ke aaya he hatela.... " mayank
" kya rule be..... Ab kounsa rule bana diya hostel walo ne..... " utpal
" mat puch bhai..... Ek to hum bahar bhi kiray ke ghar me nehi reh sakte upar se ye hostel walo ki torture......naya rule bana diya he 11 baje tak padhai karna hoga aur to aur darwaza bhi khula rakhna hoga.....nehi to band baja baraat nikelgi sabki......khud principles yeha aa kar rule bana ke gaya he kaal..... " aayan
" Satyaanaash ho us mussar takle principles ki...... Yaar aate samay ek mast aunty dikhi thi socha tha uski yaad me mast neend pelunga...."
Hahhaahha
" kaisi thi.... Kitna mast tha be.....football kitne number ka tha......tune photo liya kya...." mayank
" are pure 5 number ke the......kya ball the be..... Photo liya naa lekin chehra nehi le paya be.....upar se maa bhi mere saath thi thik se dekhne ka bhi mouka nehi mila.... " utpal
Utpal dono ko apne mobile se photo dikhane laga.... Aur dono hawash ki janmo janmo ka pyaasa photo ko laalchai nazro se ghurne laga...... Lagta he aaj teeno ki raat ban jayegi khatiye par......teeno ki dosti is hadd tak badh chuki thi ki ab koi kisi ek ko puchta he ki kya kar rahe ho dusra jawab deta he muth maar raha hoon......kiski yaad me.... Teri maa ki....... Sawal puchne wali ki bolti band...... Yaadon koun hoti he wo log khud hi jaane lekin muth zaroor marte the ek dusre ki parva kiye bina......sharm is hadd tak khul chuki thi.......
Ata hu bhai... Ab ap aur Firefox dono ho to mein bhi aa hi jata hu...kamdev99008 bhai..ek baar yaha bhi najar fer lijiye.
Thanx a lotBhud badiya
Thanx a lot and Thanx for sugesstion but incest already daal rakha he....sorry brother lekin mixed rahega.......Bahut badiya likh rahe ho dost. Bas ek cheez chahta hun ki yeh story adultery he rahe incest ki taraf na jaye. Is subject me bahut kam story likha gaya hai. Likhte raho. Thanks