Chinturocky
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Sorry brother aaj Ek marriage me Jana pad raha hi Jis Karan update post Nahi Kar paungaWaiting
Good story.
kuchh alag hatkar hai ye kahani..............
agle update ka intzar hai
yahan mujhe lagta hai............. nisha ne ajay se milkar raj aur disha ko alag karne ki sazish rachi thi
aur ab shayad ................ nisha aur ajay nahin bache............ raj aur disha bach gaye
lekin ....................
nisha aur ajay ki wajah se donon ke beech jo nafrat aur avishwas hai...............kya wo khatm ho payega
......................... ye mera andaja hai............ho sakta hai apki kahani kuchh alag ho
Thanks for supporting readersFirst of all, I want to thank and congratulate you very much for starting a new story. I liked the way you started the story and introduced the characters.
The story is about Raj and Disha but Nisha loves Raj and Ajay loves Disha, A love triangle is formed between all. Looking at Nisha, it feels like she is hiding something. The first update of the story has an accident, now let's see the fate of all our characters.
The first update of the story was very good, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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