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Main is Story ko 3 Din k Ander Mai Complete Kro ya Na?

  • Yes

    Votes: 8 88.9%
  • No

    Votes: 1 11.1%

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DAIVIK-RAJ

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Nice super duper update
writer se ek request hai
update se pahle uska number daal de
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update 1
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baddevil1297

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Main Story to be Point likh Raha Ho agr apne Shuru se story parhi ho gi to apko Maloom ho ga k Meri Koi bhi Update Story se hat kr nehi ha or na hi Boring hr Charactor ko us ki Role ki Hisab se Dekha raha hoon
Ha bhai ap badiya likh rhe ho
 
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kingkhankar

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Good going friend.
You are writing quite well.
 

win_sam201

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nice update bro waiting for next
 
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JUGNU BHAI

A Story of Love, Emotion, Pain, Hate And Felling
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Nice super duper update
writer se ek request hai
update se pahle uska number daal de
like

update 1
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Ok Bhai Theek ha Agli Update k Sath Number Bhi do Ga. Ab Tak 21 Update De chuka hoon. Next Update 22 ho Ge.
 
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JUGNU BHAI

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Update: 22

Chalo ab ya sara din yahi guzarana ha kya itna bol k sari ghari me beth gye. Chalo soham ritu ne awaz lagai me ja kar car me beth gya. Abe to abhi tak yehi ha mujhe lga k os din k baad to hum logo k pass b nehi ayo gye payal ne kha. Main chup rha gussa to buhat aya lekin kr b kya sakta tha.ritu agle seat pe baithi thi jab bhi wo mere kharib ati mera dil ki dharken bohat tez ho jati main chup chup ke ritu ki tarf dekh rha tha dar b lag rha tha kehi wo dekh na le lekin phir be me bas ose dekhna chahta tha.koi or b tha mujhe dekh rha tha lekin mujhe maloom nehi tha. Ritu moun me supari kha rhi thi k achanak wo mere kharib ayi os ka chehra mera face ke samna tha mere to dil ki mano dharken hi ruk gayi. Mai os ke chehre me ko dekhne lga os pal mujhe itna sukoon mil rha tha k kya btayo. Os ne meri ankoon me dekha me bhi bas os ki ankoon ko hi dekh rha tha phir os ne age ho kr window ke bahr dekhne lagi os ka pait mujhe nazr a rha tha os ne supari bahr phenki or meri tarf moun kiya or meri moun pr soupari phenk de or wapas beth gayi. Main apne Moun ko apni bazon se saaf krne lga pichey bethi larkia muj pr has rhi thi

Ritu: Are maine to supari bahr phenki thi pta nehi kaise tumhare moun pr gir gye

Main: Koi baat nehi ap ko maafi mangne ki zaroorat nehi

Ritu: Mafi aur main tumse Meri joothi bhi tumse maafi mange

Payal: Tum noukr ho os k to apni had me raho

Ritu: Car ruko yehi pr

Main: Pr abhi jaga nehi aye

Ritu: maine kha car ruka

Main: Car ko ek side me ruka

Ritu: Chalo bahr niklo sare k sare

Payal: Pr hoa kya ha

Ritu: Btati hoon

Sare Ghari k bahr a gaye sonam yaar jaldi bta kya baat ha yaha bohut dhoop ha mujse khara nehi hoa ja rha. Wo samne Resturant ha na waha khana khane chalte ha. Lekin hum to khana apne sath laye ha waha ja kr khaye ge

Ritu: nehi hum yehi khaye gye

Payal: Ritu yaar man ja age bohut late hoon gye ha

Ritu: Nehi maine kha na

Anjali: Chal thik ha soham tum car me baitho hum khana kha kr ate ha

Main: ok

Ritu: Nehi tum yahi khare rahoo ge jab tak hum khana kha kr nehi ate

Anjali: tum pagal ho gye ho kya ye yaha dhoop me khara kaise rahe ga

Ritu: maine bol diya ha waise b ye mera ghulam ha

Chalo chale 5 ki 5 samne resturant me chali jati ha ritu anjali ka bazu pakr kr le jati ha. Yaha baithy ha yaha shesha laga hoa ha or hum os pr nazr rak sakte ha. Ritu sheshe k sath wali kursi pr baith jati ha.yaha bahr se wo mujhe nazr a rahi thi.

Payal: are wah ritu mujhe laga k tum hame khana khilana yaha layi hoo. Lekin ab pta lga k tum ose sabk sika rhi hoon.

Ritu: Tu bas dekhti ja me iske sath kya krti hoon. Ab pore 1 ghante tak dhoop me khara rahe ga tu pata lage ga ritu kya chiz ha

Sonam: yaar ritu bahr bohut garmi ha mujse 1 min khara nehi hoa ja rha tha ye 1 ghante kaise khara rhe ga

Ritu: are papa khahtte ha ye log bohut deet hote ha inhe itni jaldi kuch nehi hota

Sonam: pr ha to wo bhi insan ha na

Payal: choro yaar yar oski baat kyu kr rhe ho kane ka order do ab 1 ghanta begair khane k nehi guzr sakta

Yaha bahr me sark ke becho bech khara tha charo tarf se dhoop a rahi thi sooraj bhi sar pr tha or garmi ki itni shiddat thi k kya btao abhi mujhe khara hoye 5 mint hoye the k main paisene se bheeg gya tha.

15 min baad order bhi agaya chalo khana khate ha. Yaar os bechare ko bhi bhook lagi ho ge kriti boli yaar ye tum sab ho aj ho kya gya ha os ki hi tarf dari kr rhi hoon sab. Phir sab chup chap khana khane lagte ha pr anjali khana nehi kha rhi thi ab is madam ko kya ho gya tum khana kyu nehi kha rhi mujhe bhook nehi ha. Bhook nehi ha ya soham ki wajah se dekho os pr taras khana choro or khana khao ritu boli.

Priti: Yaar ritu me kab kha ise dekh rhi hoon sirf tumhe hi dekhi ja rha ha

Ritu:dekhne do soch rha ho ga k mujhe is pr taras a jaye ga

Priti: Yaar itni garmi me ye kaise khara ha

Sonam: Waise ha bohut handsome kahi kala na ho jaye

Ritu: Hone do mujhe os se kiya

Kriti: yaar mai os ki ankoon me tumhare liye kuch chiz dekh rahi hoon. Priti ne sahi kha wo tab ka sirf tumhe he dekhe ja rha ha

Payal:are main btao os ki ankoon me ritu k liye nafrat hi ho ge or itni zillat k baad muhabat to mumkin hi nehi

Anjali bhe ab ghor se soham ko dekh rahi thi wo sirf ritu ko dekh rha tha os ki ankoon me ek alag cheez thi

Ritu: Acha me abhi washroom se hoon kr ati hoon. Itna bol kr ritu waha se chale gye

Payal: are wo dekho kaise garmi ke mare tarap rha ha

Main jo kharib andhe ghante se bhi zyada waqt se yaha khara tha itni shidat ki garmi me . Ritu ye smaj rhi thi ke wo mujhe saza de kr gaye thi ose maloom nehi tha ye mere liye saza nehi balke inam tha. Gharmi ki shiddat ka to mujhe maloom hi nehi tha kyuke mere ander koi aise chiz k sidat thi jis k age gharmi b kuch nehi. Mai bas ritu ko dekh raha tha ose dekh kr mujhe ek alag hi chiz ka ahsas hota. Main bas ose dekhne me kho sa gya tha mera dil kr rha tha khas ye waqt kabhi khatm hi na ho. Wo jab bhi hasti to aisa lagta jannat se mil gye ha. Os ke chehre pr aye hoe bal jab wo ose peechy krti to aisa lagta dil h bahr a jaye ga.lekin kismat ko bhi ye zaida deer k liye meri khushi manzoor nehi thi ritu uthi or waha se chali gye. Os ke jane k baad m jaise wapas duniya me aya mera poora jism bheega hoa tha or chehra poora lal tha mere jism me ekdam kante chujbe lage garmi ki wajah se mujhe bohut zyada kharish ho rhe thi. Garmi k mare aisa lag rha tha k abhi behosh ho jao ga

Payal: Are ritu to a gaye wo kaise machal rha ha garmi k wajah se

Ritu: Haa lekin ye tab ka toon aise khara tha jese A.C Wale room me khara kiya hoon

Anjlai: Me bahr j rahi hoon

Ritu: Are ruk ham bhe a rahe ha

Anjali: Wo bechara kaise tadap rha ha tum log to yaha AC me baithe hoo

Kriti: Chal Chale wese bhi ghanta ho gya ha

Ritu: mere pass a kr chalo ab car me betho

Main: Car me beth gya ab ja kr thora sukoon hoa tha

Ritu: bahr zyada garmi to nehi lagi

Main: Nehi

Ritu: Tumhe dekh kr to aisa nehi lag rha poore bheege hoe ho

Main: I am fine

Ritu: Chalo tum kehte ho to man leti hoon
 

Chinturocky

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Achchha update hai
 

Arjun Singh 72

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Super update
 
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