Romance Mohabbatein... (Completed)

[Adirshi]

Update 6

om dheere us ladki ke paas pahucha aur uski purse khol kar dekhne laga aur thik usi waqt us ladki ko bhi hosh aa gaya ye baat om ke dhayan main nahi aayi us ladki ne om ke hath se apna purse cheena aur usme se koi spray nikal kar om ki aankhon main mar diya isse om ki aankho main bohot jalan hone lagi. us ladki ne om ko jor se diwal par dhakela aur apna purse utha kar waha se bhag gayi diwal par sar lagne se om bhi behosh ho gaya aur ashish jisko is bare main kuch pata nahi tha wo bas phone par hello hello karta raha..........
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"om kuch to bolo aise chup chap to mat baitho" ye rima ki awaz thi jo omkar se kuch keh rahi thi

omkar-kya karu main fir chup chap na rahu to tumhare jaisa tumhare jaisa frustate ho jau

rima-frustate?? om main sirf baat kar rahi hu

omkar-ek hi baat hai

rima-om please sach sach batao tumhara problem kya hai? tum aise kyu behave kar rahe ho ? meri kuch galti hogi to wo batao aise chup reh kar kisi cheez ka hal nahi nilakne wala

omkar-sahi hai rima chup reh kar kisi cheez ka hal nahi nikalta aur mujhe is cheez ka hal nikalna bhi nahi hai meri agar galti hai to main itne din chup raha lekin...

rima-ohh matlab tumhara bolna hai ke ho bhi hua meri wajah se hua aur tum 100% sahi ho righr?

omkar-kon sahi kon galat mujhe is pachde main nahi padna hai rima meri bas itni hi ich hai ke jaisa maine tumhe samajh ke liya hai waisa tum bhi karo.manya hai ke kai baar tumhari parties main main akela kisi kone main baitha rehta tha lekin main ek wreiter hu kai baar aage ki kahani mujhe time bata kar nahi sujhti aur aise main mujhe sahi main ekant chahiye hota hai. kai baar hum agar kisi khoobsurat jagah par ghoome gaye to tum bhi to photography main leen h jati thi but main samajhta hu ke camera is your field ......

rima- enough om mujhe lagta hai hum is baat par chahe kitni bhi der lad le isme se koi outconi nahi niklega mujhe lagta hai hame yahi rukna chahiye tumhe tumhara rasta khula hai aur mujhe mera....

rima ke is vakya ke omkar ka man vichlit ho gaya rima ko rokna hamesha ki tarah manane use baho main bharna ye sab om ki aankho ke samne ho raha tha aur use ye bhi pata tha ke hamesha ki tarah mona is baar bhi ruk jayegi aur dono ka jhagda khatam ho jayega lekin aage future main kabhi na kabhi dono ke swabhav ka farak fir dikhega aur fir yahi sab hoga aur waise bhi pichle kuch mahino main dono main jhagde badh gaye the jispar om ko koi upai nahi soojh raha tha.................

shayad rima keh rahi thi wohi sahi rasta tha...........
omkar kuch nahi bola

rima-allright mr.writer...goodbye den........

rima ne ghar ka darwaja khola. ekbar omkar ki taraf dekha aur jor se darwaja laga kar chali gayi..
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darwaje ke awaz se omkar ekdum need main se utha apan kaha hai kis halat main hai ye kuch bhi uski samajh main nahi aa raha tha. raatko diwal par sar takrane ke wajah se wop jo behosh hua tha wo ab jaga tha aur usi behoshi ki halat main uske dimag main uske aur rima ke breakup ke scenes chal rahe the. omkar ka sar ab bhi kafi dukh raha tha.

"sir , breakfast ready hai " bahar koi darwaja jor se pit raha tha

omkar-hmm..yes aa raha hu

aisa bol kar omkar utha diwal ke sahare basin ke paas pahucha aue 5-6 baar apne chehre par pani marne ke baad use acha laga. usne ghadi par najar dali to subah ke 8:30 baj rahe the aur room chodne ke liye 2 ghante ka samay baki tha. goa main aane ke baad uske sath koi baat sahi nahi huyi thi pehle wo international hotel ka ghotala aur fir wo rang birange kapde pehne ladki omkar ko to aisa lagne laga tha ke usne goa aakar hi galti kar di.
jaldi jaldi naha kar omkar bahar aaya aur waha ke khane ke items dekh kar hi usne bagair breakfast kiye wo room chod di aur apna saman lekar road par taxi ke liye rah dekhne laga. pet main bhookh ke mare chuhe kud rahe the om main goa main aane ke baad kuch bhi nahi khaya tha isiliye usne socha ke pehle petpuja uar fir hotel ki shodh mohim aur isi vichar ke sath usne milihuyi taxi market ki or modne ko kaha. raste main ek acha sa hotel dekh kar om waha ruka aur ek kone ka table pakad kar fatafat nashte ki order di. ache se daba ke nashta karne ke bad uska dimag kuch shant hua aur fir uske baad usne strong coffee ke do cup khali kiya aur teesra hath main lekar kurchi par aaram se baitha aur do pal ke liye apni aankhen band ki. uski tandri khuli wo girte huye bartano ke awaz se usne aankhen khol kar dekha to ek ladki hotel main aate huye ek waiter se takrayi thi

"sorry.....sorry...I m extremly sorry" wo ladki bar bar waiter wo bole ja rahi thi

pile rang ka pkulo ke design wala long skirt . uper navy blur color ka short shirt. lambe kale baal. aankhon par moti frame ka goggle kandhe par ek shoti si sack aur hatho main papers ke gatthe wali files.

om bas us ladki ki or hi dekh raha tha
"kar de apni mohabbat main madhosh is tarah ki,
hosh bhi aane se pehle ijjajat mange.."
ye lafz pne aap hi omkar ke mu se nikal pade. hawa se udne wale apne balo ko sambhalne ke liye jab us ladki ne apne hath uper kiye to uska shirt bhi thoda uper utha jiske sath hi om ko uske navel bhag par bana tatoo dikha

"radha....."
bansuri ke sath likhi huyi ye akshar om ko diana karne ke liye kafi the

omkar-rdha...om ki radha....

omkar khud se hi badbada raha tha najane kitni der wo aise hi ek tuk radha ko dekhta raha tabhi radha ki najar uspar padi aur achanak se om ko apni chori pakdejane ka ehsaas hua aur usne apni najar dusri or fer li lekin aankho ke kone se usne dekha ke wo ladki usi ki or aa rahi hai

omkar- abe yaar ye pehchanti hai kya meko?? ye idhar kyu aa rahi hai

aise aneko khayal usne man main aaye aur wo thoda ache se baitha....................

 

[Adirshi]

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[Rahul]

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[Vikram Bhosle]

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[Adirshi]

awesome update bhai ji

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[Adirshi]

Update 7

omkar khud se hi badbada raha tha najane kitni der wo aise hi ek tuk radha ko dekhta raha tabhi radha ki najar uspar padi aur achanak se om ko apni chori pakdejane ka ehsaas hua aur usne apni najar dusri or fer li lekin aankho ke kone se usne dekha ke wo ladki usi ki or aa rahi hai

omkar- abe yaar ye pehchanti hai kya meko?? ye idhar kyu aa rahi hai

aise aneko khayal usne man main aaye aur wo thoda ache se baitha....................
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"excuse me" omkar baitha tha us table ke paas aakar wo ladki boli

omkar-yes.....

apna us ladki ke bolne ki taraf bilkul dhayan nahi tha aisa jatate huye omkar bola

ladki-agar yaha koi baitha na ho to kya main yaha baith sakti hu

omkar-oh..yes..yes why not..please

wo ladki samne ki kurchi sarka kar waha baith gayi aur apne haat main ke papers aur files waha rakh diye aur fir omkar se boli

ladki-hi I m radha

omkar-I know!

omkar ki is baat kar us ladki ke expressions dekhne layak the aur jald hi omkar ko bhi apni galti dhayan main aa gayi lekin ab usne us ladki ke tatoo par se uska naam jana ye baat wo derectly to nahi bol sakta tha na aur isiliye usne baat sambhalne ki koshish karte huye bola

omkar- matlab abhi tumne hi bataya na

radha- oh ha hihihi.........

omkar- I m omkar

aur ab wo bhi I know bolegi aur fir main tumhari writing ki fan hu wagaira wagaira bolegi aisa omkar ko lag raha tha lekin isme se kuch nahi hua uska baat kuch aur hi nikli

radha-mujhe lagta hai tumne mujhe pehchana nahi.

omkar- nahi..matlab hum pehle kabhi mile hai kya?? I m sorry lekin mujhe kuch bhi dhayan main nahi aa raha maine nahi pehchana aapko

omkar apne dimag main apne sare e-mail karne wale fan apne publication ke time mile huye fans ko yaad kar raha tha lekin unme se radha naam kisi ka bhi nahi tha sivay iske agar wo mile hote to wo us ladki ko dekhte hi pehchan jata

radha- ok never mind mujhe actually tumse mafi mangni hai....

omkar-mafi mujhse?? par kyu???

radha- kal raat...wo medical store.....tumhari room.......tumhari aankhon main spray...wo..wo....wo ladki mai hi thi

omkar-what!!!

omkar table par hath marte huye jor se chillaya jisse radha bhi thodi embarass feel kar rahi thi

radha-cool down......... cool down .....I said I m sorry

omkar- hoe dare you?? ek to tumko raat main akeli ko raste pe chodna theek nahi hoga isiliye main tumhe apne room par le gaya aur tum...

gusse ke mare omkar ke mu se shad nahi nikal rahe the

radha-I m really sorry omkar sahime koi galat femi thi actually tum jab mujhe room par lekar gaye tab main bekhosh thi aur jab hosh aaya tab tum adhe mujhpar jhuke huye the mujhe laga ke.....

omkar- kya laga main tumhara rape karunga

radha-ha....matlab

omkar-ha?? get lost....get lost from here

radha-omkar please main sahime dil sesorry bol rahi hu

omkaar ke hatho par hath rahte huye radha boli aur uske us ek sparsh se omkar ke sabhi sences ekdum shant ho gaye jais ekoi thandi hawa ka jhowka uske sharir ko chu kar gaya ho

radha-lekin tum khud hi socho na ek to pehle hi main puri tarah hosh main nahi thi uspar wo andheri room aur samne ek anjaan shaks jo mujhpar adha jhuka hua tha main...main bohot ghabra gayi thi

omkar-hmm its ok.....lekin tumhe kaise pata chala ye sab

radha-wo...kya..hua ...na

omkar-na atko mat khul kar bolo aur kya kand kiya tumne

radha-aaj subah main polce ko lekar gayi thi waha kal huyi ghatna ki complent ki thi maine police station main

radha ki baat sunkar om ne sidha apne sar par hath maar liya

omkar-height hai yaar you are just horrible!!

radha-matlab maine aise hi chod dena chahiye tha kya so main waha police ko lekar gayi to wo medical wala mila aur usne mujhe uri baat batayi aur maine instant complent wapas le li fir hotel se pata chala ke tum checkout kar chuke ho aur ab subah subah nastha ke liye jagah dhundoge aur waise bhi ye hotel yaha ke taxi wale prefer karte hai to socha ek baar yaha dkh lu tumhe aur tum mil gaye

omkar-aur suppose wo medical wala na milta to

radha- to kya abhi tumhare piche police hoti ya maybe tum jail main hote

omkar- thank god us bechare medical wale ke wajah se aaj jaan bach gayi warna tumhari krupa se to main jail main hota

radha- really sorry once again lekin kya karu duniya main achai se wiswas uth gaya hai mera

omkar-ye lekin main ne sachme tumhe nahi pehchana matlab raat ko wo rang birange baal wo shorts aur ab ye decent look

radha- are wo wig tha aur baki ka avtar bhi waise hi kiya tha

omkar-lekin kyu aise??

radha- its a bit personal kabhi fursat main lile na to bataungi

personal se pmkar ke dhayan main aaya wo mangalsutra aur usne radha ke gale ki or dekha to wo waha nahi tha

"I hope baki ki cheezo jaisa wo mangal sutra bhi nakli ho" omkar ne man main kaha aur radhausko jane ke liye bye bolne lagi aur jaise hi wo mudne wali thi uska dhayan omkar ke bag ki or gaya

radha-tum ja rahe ho goa se

omkar-nah..actually main kal hi aaya hu aur filhat 3 hafte yahi hu isiliye rehne ke liye jagah dhoond raha hu

radha-any prefrences matbal kaisi jagah chahiye

omkar-mm thodi shant matlab main ek writer hu aur yaha book likhne aaya hu

radha- wow yaar waie tumhara jagah ka problen main solve kar sakti hu matlab agar tumhe ok hai to ek hme stay hai main bhi wahi reh rahi hu

omkar-kaha hai

radha-old goa hai typical portugies style ghar hai tumhe acha lagega filhal waha do hi log hai main aur sofie aunty jo owner hai achi jagah hai

omkar-ok den done

aur fir omkar ne uske aur radha ke liye ek ek coffee order ki aur fir dono us ghar ki or chal pade sabse khas baat to ye ki ghar milne se jyada itni khoobsurat ladki aas paas ho to kise romantic story nahi sujhegi ye baat omkar ke man main aayi usme hotel ka bill pay kiya aur wo aur radha chal pade us ghar ki or..................

 

[Adirshi]

Update posted

 

[Rahul]

superb update bhai ji