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janvi23

“His strength, her pride ✨”
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Tujhe paakar maine khud ko paaya hai,
Teri har choti khushi me maine sukoon paaya hai.
Log kehte hain maa sabse zyada pyaar karti hai…
Haan, kyunki mera beta meri jaan hai. ❤️

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janvi❤️Aarush

Mera naam shayad itna important nahi…
important hai toh bas woh insaan, jisne meri zindagi ko ek naya matlab diya—Aarush. ❤️

Aur Aarush… woh mere liye sirf mere beta nahi, mera sukoon hai. 🌷

Meri khamoshi ko samajhne wala, meri aankhon mein chhupi pareshani ko bina pooche mehsoos karne wala, aur meri chhoti-chhoti khushiyon ko apni khushi samajhne wala.
Hamare rishte ki khoobsurti shayad bade-bade promises mein nahi, balki un chhoti-chhoti baaton mein hai—ek doosre ki fikr, bina kahe samajh jaana, mushkil waqt mein ek-doosre ka haath thaame rehna, aur har din thoda aur kareeb aana. ❤️

Aarush meri zindagi ka woh hissa hai jise main sirf pyaar nahi karti… main uske saath apni poori zindagi jeena chahti hoon.
Waqt badlega, halaat badlenge, zindagi mein bahut kuch badal sakta hai…

lekin mere dil mein Aarush ke liye jo jagah hai, woh kabhi nahi badlegi. ❤️‍🩹

Woh mera pyaar hai, mera humsafar hai, mera sukoon hai… aur meri kahani ka sabse khoobsurat hissa bhi. 🌹✨


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ye sirf ek kahani nahi hai… ye meri zindagi ka ek hissa hai. 🥀
Jo kuch main ab aap sabke saath share karne ja rahi hoon, woh mere liye sirf words nahi hain. Iske peeche meri feelings, meri memories, mere emotions aur meri zindagi ke woh pal hain, jinhe maine khud mehsoos kiya hai. ❤️‍🩹

Meri life hamesha simple nahi rahi. Kuch moments aise bhi aaye, jinhone mujhe andar se badla, kuch rishte aise rahe jinhe samajhna mere liye bhi aasaan nahi tha, aur kuch feelings aisi thi jinhe words mein explain kar pana bahut mushkil hai.

Main koi professional writer nahi hoon. ✍️
Main bas apni zindagi ke kuch real moments aur experiences aapke saath share karna chahti hoon—bilkul waise hi jaise maine unhe jiya aur mehsoos kiya.

Ho sakta hai meri kahani ka har part aapko samajh aaye… aur ho sakta hai kuch parts aapko confuse karein. Lekin meri request sirf itni hai ki please ise respect ke saath padhiye. 🤍
Kyuki har insaan ki zindagi ke peeche ek aisi kahani hoti hai, jo duniya ko poori tarah kabhi dikhai nahi deti…
Aur ye meri kahani hai. 🌸

Meri life… meri memories… mere emotions… aur meri woh journey, jise main ab pehli baar aapke saath share kar rahi hoon. 🥀❤️


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𝗖𝗵𝗲𝗰𝗸 𝗼𝘂𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝗻𝗲𝘄 𝘀𝘁𝗼𝗿𝘆 👇🏻

Tumse pahle tumse baad

 
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rahulgincstud

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Hi dear Admin and Story writer.
This story has lots of pages.
There is no need to have "Header Page" for each page (like picture and introduction etc). This will reduce readability, increase number of pages, unnecessary storage and also people will loose interest even to start reading.
SO PLEASE TALK TO ADMIN AND REMOVE THOSE THINGS AND REDUCE NUMBER OF PAGES.

SOME TIMES, TOO MUCH DRAMA WILL ALSO CREATE A BORING FEELING.

IF POSSIBLE PLEASE REMOVE EMPTY PAGES AND UNNECESSARY PAGES AND MAKE READING PLEASURABLE AND INTERESTING.
SOME TIMES IF WE SEE THERE ARE TOO MANY PAGES IN A STORY (MORE THAN 40 OR 50 PAGES, THEN PEOPLE WILL NOT EVEN SHOW INTEREST TO READ THAT STORY.

I DID NOT READ THIS STORY YET AS THIS HAS TOO MANY PAGES.
 
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Deadmax

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Sach bol raha hu, last asa romantic story 2023 mai padha or after that aab mila asa etna acha story
Mene to 2 din mai hi complete kar diya
Love u janvi aunty
Keep writing
 

block_kyu_kiya_janvi_

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rahulgincstud
Isiliye every writer index create karte hai, jisse new a update pe direct jump kiya ja sake, aabse index use karo, manually pages switching avoid karo.
 
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block_kyu_kiya_janvi_

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Hi dear Admin and Story writer.
This story has lots of pages.
There is no need to have "Header Page" for each page (like picture and introduction etc). This will reduce readability, increase number of pages, unnecessary storage and also people will loose interest even to start reading.
SO PLEASE TALK TO ADMIN AND REMOVE THOSE THINGS AND REDUCE NUMBER OF PAGES.

SOME TIMES, TOO MUCH DRAMA WILL ALSO CREATE A BORING FEELING.

IF POSSIBLE PLEASE REMOVE EMPTY PAGES AND UNNECESSARY PAGES AND MAKE READING PLEASURABLE AND INTERESTING.
SOME TIMES IF WE SEE THERE ARE TOO MANY PAGES IN A STORY (MORE THAN 40 OR 50 PAGES, THEN PEOPLE WILL NOT EVEN SHOW INTEREST TO READ THAT STORY.

I DID NOT READ THIS STORY YET AS THIS HAS TOO MANY PAGES.

Isiliye every writer index create karte hai, jisse new a update pe direct jump kiya ja sake, aabse index use karo, manually pages switching avoid karo.
 

janvi23

“His strength, her pride ✨”
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Hi dear Admin and Story writer.
This story has lots of pages.
There is no need to have "Header Page" for each page (like picture and introduction etc). This will reduce readability, increase number of pages, unnecessary storage and also people will loose interest even to start reading.
SO PLEASE TALK TO ADMIN AND REMOVE THOSE THINGS AND REDUCE NUMBER OF PAGES.

SOME TIMES, TOO MUCH DRAMA WILL ALSO CREATE A BORING FEELING.

IF POSSIBLE PLEASE REMOVE EMPTY PAGES AND UNNECESSARY PAGES AND MAKE READING PLEASURABLE AND INTERESTING.
SOME TIMES IF WE SEE THERE ARE TOO MANY PAGES IN A STORY (MORE THAN 40 OR 50 PAGES, THEN PEOPLE WILL NOT EVEN SHOW INTEREST TO READ THAT STORY.

I DID NOT READ THIS STORY YET AS THIS HAS TOO MANY PAGES.
👇

I understand your point about the number of pages, but the pages cannot simply be removed or deleted because that would go against the forum rules. We have to follow the format and guidelines of the forum.

If the number of pages feels too much, please use the " INDEX " to navigate directly to the updates you want to read. This makes it much easier to find and continue the story without going through every page.

Also, every update has members sharing their own thoughts, feelings, reactions, and opinions. Those are their genuine feelings, so we cannot simply ignore or remove them.
I respect your opinion, but I hope you’ll also respect the forum rules, the way the story is presented, and the feelings of the members who are enjoying and responding to each update.
 

curious1964

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The problem with your comment is you are commenting on a real life character and not a fictitious one ! This is a real life story of the writer herself ! In your comment ,you approve of the wrong doings of that particular character, who has brought so much misery and unhappiness in the life of the writer ! How can one display such inhumanely and callous attitude towards other people's sufferings !

Even after being aware of the resentment and hurt feelings your irresponsible comments has inflicted in the mind of the writer, you're defending yourself instead of apologising........so sky high your ego is !

Don't delete your comment........so that it would remind one and all, whoever reads that comment, the kind of human being,you are !
All, meere coment se bawal mach rha hai but I can't be able to delete this
I just mentioned about the character not a story
Story writing is good & it should keep continue
whatever I said that's my personal opinion so generalized it
 
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Kawal Kumar

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The problem with your comment is you are commenting on a real life character and not a fictitious one ! This is a real life story of the writer herself ! In your comment ,you approve of the wrong doings of that particular character, who has brought so much misery and unhappiness in the life of the writer ! How can one display such inhumanely and callous attitude towards other people's sufferings !

Even after being aware of the resentment and hurt feelings your irresponsible comments has inflicted in the mind of the writer, you're defending yourself instead of apologising........so sky high your ego is !

Don't delete your comment........so that it would remind one and all, whoever reads that comment, the kind of human being,you are !
Who',s you to comment by the way if my comment is a problematic it is between me n writer who the fuck are you to poke your nose between this
Fuck off
 
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