flyingsara
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Next bro
good story.
Nice intro.
good update.
Nice update
Aapke comments ke liye bahut bahut shukriyaShuruwat bahut achhi hai.bas time se update dete raho comments or likes ki line lag jayegi
Bhai , aap bilkul theek samajh rahe hai , maine english me likhne ke chakkar me galat likh diya darasal maine poochhna chahta tha ki readers ko kis aurat ka character jyada pasand hai jo ki aapko recent updates me padhkar pata chala gaya hoga ki teeno auratein character waise ek dusre se different hai , aapko teeno auraton ka character kaisa laga aap ek do line sabke baare me likhkar bata sakte hai aur teeno me se aap ki favourite wali kaun hai woh bhi bata sakte hai waise toh teeno auratein ek dusre se alag soch rakhti hai aur bilkul unique hai, aap sabke liye do chaar line likh ke bata sakte hai ki aapka kiske prati jyada jhukav hai , aap rank bhi de sakte hai descending order me according to your favouritism 1 , 2 aur 3ये जो वोट में आप प्रश्न पूछ रहे हो उसका अभिप्राय क्या है , क्या मैं ये बताऊं की मैं पहले तीनों में से किस औरत को चोदना चाहता हूं? जैसा कि आपके इंग्लिश में पूछे गए प्रश्न का मतलब है, या आप पूछना कुछ और चाहते थे मगर अंग्रेजी भाषा के पूर्ण जानकर न होने की वजह से कुछ का कुछ पूछ बैठे हो,
मैं कैसे और किस प्रकार इन तीनों को चोदने का हक रखता हूं न तो मैं कहानी में कोई पात्र हूं और न ही मेरी उस जगह तक पहुंच है जहां वे तीनों रहती हैं, शायद आपका प्रश्न कुछ और है,,
Thanks, you accepted that you made a mistake, you are a genuine person, whereas many writers do not accept their mistakes and try to prove they are right, thanks man , carry on,,,,,Bhai , aap bilkul theek samajh rahe hai , maine english me likhne ke chakkar me galat likh diya darasal maine poochhna chahta tha ki readers ko kis aurat ka character jyada pasand hai jo ki aapko recent updates me padhkar pata chala gaya hoga ki teeno auratein character waise ek dusre se different hai , aapko teeno auraton ka character kaisa laga aap ek do line sabke baare me likhkar bata sakte hai aur teeno me se aap ki favourite wali kaun hai woh bhi bata sakte hai waise toh teeno auratein ek dusre se alag soch rakhti hai aur bilkul unique hai, aap sabke liye do chaar line likh ke bata sakte hai ki aapka kiske prati jyada jhukav hai , aap rank bhi de sakte hai descending order me according to your favouritism 1 , 2 aur 3
aap bhi ek acchhe reader lagte hai , ek hi cheej ko dekhne ka sabka nazariya alag alag hota hai , i hope you give your valuable thoughts about the story as I told you in recent post , if you give positive feedback it motivate me a lot and if you criticize the story it will make me to think that how can I improve this story thanks....Thanks, you accepted that you made a mistake, you are a genuine person, whereas many writers do not accept their mistakes and try to prove they are right, thanks man , carry on,,,,,