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which character do you like the most ?


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dreamboy2902

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Satyam , Rohit aur Rahul apni-apni mummiyan rati , sugandha aur Savitri ke saath society ki party me aaye hue the, kisi ke papa nahi aaye the kyunki woh office se abhi tak Ghar nahi pahunche the....

sajawat se lekar khaane peene ka shaandar intejaam kiya gaya tha aur mahaul me kaafi khulapan tha, ladkiyan itne chote chote kapde pehen kar ghoom rahi thi ki jaise unhone kapde apne jism ko dhakne ke liye nahi balki dikhane ke liye pehen rakhe the , ladkiyan toh chhodo auratein kahan pichhe rehne wali thi kisi ki saree ka pallu pardarshi tha jiski wajah se poora blouse mote mote chuche ke darshan karwa raha tha toh kisi ka lehenga itna tight tha ki gaand ki poori banawat acchhe se nazar aa rahi thi koi deep neck wala suit pehen kar apne aadhe se jyada chuche dikhate hue ghoom rahi thi toh koi itni tight suit pehen kar ghoom rahi thi ki dekhne Wale ko poore chuche ke darshan ho jaye nipple tak acchhe se dikhayi de rahe the....

Mardon ki bhi chaandi thi , gaane ki dhun par naachte hue apni apni biwiyon ko masal rahe the aur gaane bhi kaise munni badnaam hui , Sheela ki jawani... aisa mahaul unhone pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha aur jaise dusre mard apni apni auraton ke saath tharak mita rahe the woh sab dekhkar rati , sugandha aur savitri ki bhi tharak badh gayi thi , rati ke toh nipple bhi kadak ho gaye the aur uski chut se ras bhi tapakne laga tha.....

Satyam , Rohit aur Rahul ne shirt , pant aur coat pehen rakha tha aur cold drink peete hue ladkiyon aur auraton ko dekhkar apna lund masal rahe the, waise teeno dost ek dusre ki mummy ko bhi bahut jyada pasand karte the lekin aaj tak unhone ek dusre ki mummy ke baare me kuch galat nahi socha tha , Rohit apne dost satyam ki mummy rati ko pasand karta tha , Rahul apne dost Rohit ki mummy sugandha ko pasand karta tha aur Satyam apne dost Rahul ki mummy Savitri ko pasand karta tha, teeno dost chupke chupke apni apni mehbooba ko dekh rahe the....

Sugandha ne deep neck wali sleeveless blouse aur transparent saree pehen rakhi thi , sugandha bilkul modern aur open minded aurat thi aur nature wise bahut sweet thi , sugandha ko apne jism ko show off karna acchha lagta tha woh apne jism ke mayajaal me kisi ko bhi phasa sakti thi....

Rati ne half sleeve wali blouse aur silk ki saree pehen rakhi thi , rati jyada modern nahi thi lekin open minded aurat thi aur nature waise bahut strict thi , rati apne jism jyada show off toh nahi karti thi par woh apne thoughts kisi se bhi share kar leti thi woh apni baaton se kisi ka bhi trust jeet leti thi....

Savitri ne full sleeve wali blouse aur saree pehen rakhi thi , Savitri thodi conservative aur old fashioned aurat thi aur nature wise bahut shy thi, Savitri bilkul gharelu auraton ki tarah kapde pehenti thi aur apne thoughts kisi se jyada share nahi karti thi par Savitri sabse jyada samajhdar aurat thi....

Rati , sugandha aur Savitri party hall me sofe par baatein kar rahi thi....

Sugandha - dekh kitna romantic hai na , mujhe toh in couples ko dekhkar jealousy feel ho rahi hai rati !

Rati- romantic! kaisi baatein kar rahi hai, woh wala kaise uski chuchi daba raha hai aur woh dusra wala kaise apni wali ki gand masal raha hai , kyu Savitri ?

Savitri- tu kitni gandi baatein karti hai rati ! sex aur romance sab kuch nahi hota , pyaar , understanding aur trust bhi hota hai....

Rati- ye sab behooda baatein hai , sacchayi ye hai ki Savitri tere paas ek acchha life partner nahi hai , sugandha tere paas ek acchha lover nahi hai aur mere paas bhi ek acchha sex partner nahi hai, maine kuch galat kaha sugandha !

Sugandha- is baat se toh main bilkul sehmat hoon, apne pati ke affairs se toh main pareshaan ho gayi hoon kuch din pehle tak uska meri ek college friend ke saath affair chal raha tha aur abhi uska apne office ki assistant ke saath affair chal raha hai woh bas thoda bahut sex kar lete hai par romance me bilkul zero....

Rati- mera pati toh impotent hai woh bistar me kuch kar nahi sakta , 10 saal se main uski sexual health ko lekar pareshaan hoon , doctors se bhi consult kar liya unhone bhi bol diya ki ab mere pati hamesha aise hi rahenge woh baat alag hai ki apne pati ke saath mujhe thodi jabardasti karke oral sex karna padta hai....

Savitri- main bhi toh domestic violence jhel rahi hoon , apne pati ke pyaar ke liye tadap rahi hoon aur woh bahar kothe ki randiyon ko jyada pasand karta hai aur ghar me mujhe belt se maarta hai , main bhi pehelwaan ke pariwar se hoon kisi din gussa aa gaya toh kamine ko utha ke patak dungi....

Sugandha aur Rati apni saheli Savitri ko gusse me dekhkar muskurane lagti hai, jab Savitri ko gussa aata tha toh woh apni gaon wali dehati bhasha me gaali dene lagti thi aur bahut jyada cute lagti thi....

Savitri , rati aur sugandha ek dusre ka sahara thi aur jab teeno auratein ek saath hoti thi toh apne dukh aur dard bilkul bhool jaati thi....

Rati- oye sugandha vodka shots lagayegi?

Sugandha- i love vodka....

Rati- savitri tu ?

Savitri- nahi rati ! tujhe pata hai na mujhe pasand nahi hai....

Sugandha - Savitri my baby please bas ek shot....

Savitri - chup piyakkad kahin ki , rati tu bhi thoda limit me okay....

phir rati aur sugandha sofe se uthkar vodka peene ke liye chale jaate hai....

rati ko bahut jyada stress tha isliye woh ek ke baad ek 5 vodka shots lagatar pee jaati hai

sugandha- pagal hai kya! Sharabiyon ki tarah pee rahi hai....

Sugandha bilkul piyakkad aurat thi aur rati ka mood par depend karta tha jab uska mood hota hai toh woh kisi ki nahi sunti thi....

rati- chill yaar.... would you like to dance with me darling?

sugandha- lo gayi bhains paani me, lagta hai tujhe chadh gayi!


rati- bitch! shut your fucking mouth....

Dusri taraf Rohit , Rahul aur Satyam party hall me aaye toh ek saath the par ek dusre ki mummy ko dekhne ke chakkar me alag alag ho gaye the....
 
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mastmast123

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ये जो वोट में आप प्रश्न पूछ रहे हो उसका अभिप्राय क्या है , क्या मैं ये बताऊं की मैं पहले तीनों में से किस औरत को चोदना चाहता हूं? जैसा कि आपके इंग्लिश में पूछे गए प्रश्न का मतलब है, या आप पूछना कुछ और चाहते थे मगर अंग्रेजी भाषा के पूर्ण जानकर न होने की वजह से कुछ का कुछ पूछ बैठे हो,
मैं कैसे और किस प्रकार इन तीनों को चोदने का हक रखता हूं न तो मैं कहानी में कोई पात्र हूं और न ही मेरी उस जगह तक पहुंच है जहां वे तीनों रहती हैं, शायद आपका प्रश्न कुछ और है,,
 
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dreamboy2902

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ये जो वोट में आप प्रश्न पूछ रहे हो उसका अभिप्राय क्या है , क्या मैं ये बताऊं की मैं पहले तीनों में से किस औरत को चोदना चाहता हूं? जैसा कि आपके इंग्लिश में पूछे गए प्रश्न का मतलब है, या आप पूछना कुछ और चाहते थे मगर अंग्रेजी भाषा के पूर्ण जानकर न होने की वजह से कुछ का कुछ पूछ बैठे हो,
मैं कैसे और किस प्रकार इन तीनों को चोदने का हक रखता हूं न तो मैं कहानी में कोई पात्र हूं और न ही मेरी उस जगह तक पहुंच है जहां वे तीनों रहती हैं, शायद आपका प्रश्न कुछ और है,,
Bhai , aap bilkul theek samajh rahe hai , maine english me likhne ke chakkar me galat likh diya darasal maine poochhna chahta tha ki readers ko kis aurat ka character jyada pasand hai jo ki aapko recent updates me padhkar pata chala gaya hoga ki teeno auratein character waise ek dusre se different hai , aapko teeno auraton ka character kaisa laga aap ek do line sabke baare me likhkar bata sakte hai aur teeno me se aap ki favourite wali kaun hai woh bhi bata sakte hai waise toh teeno auratein ek dusre se alag soch rakhti hai aur bilkul unique hai, aap sabke liye do chaar line likh ke bata sakte hai ki aapka kiske prati jyada jhukav hai , aap rank bhi de sakte hai descending order me according to your favouritism 1 , 2 aur 3
 
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Bhai , aap bilkul theek samajh rahe hai , maine english me likhne ke chakkar me galat likh diya darasal maine poochhna chahta tha ki readers ko kis aurat ka character jyada pasand hai jo ki aapko recent updates me padhkar pata chala gaya hoga ki teeno auratein character waise ek dusre se different hai , aapko teeno auraton ka character kaisa laga aap ek do line sabke baare me likhkar bata sakte hai aur teeno me se aap ki favourite wali kaun hai woh bhi bata sakte hai waise toh teeno auratein ek dusre se alag soch rakhti hai aur bilkul unique hai, aap sabke liye do chaar line likh ke bata sakte hai ki aapka kiske prati jyada jhukav hai , aap rank bhi de sakte hai descending order me according to your favouritism 1 , 2 aur 3
Thanks, you accepted that you made a mistake, you are a genuine person, whereas many writers do not accept their mistakes and try to prove they are right, thanks man , carry on,,,,,
 

dreamboy2902

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Thanks, you accepted that you made a mistake, you are a genuine person, whereas many writers do not accept their mistakes and try to prove they are right, thanks man , carry on,,,,,
aap bhi ek acchhe reader lagte hai , ek hi cheej ko dekhne ka sabka nazariya alag alag hota hai , i hope you give your valuable thoughts about the story as I told you in recent post , if you give positive feedback it motivate me a lot and if you criticize the story it will make me to think that how can I improve this story thanks....
 
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