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birlliant update bro aise continue rakhty ayega dusro ki baaton ka dhiyan na dena
Update 1
Maharashtra ke ****** shahar ke ek jansewa hospital me ICU ke bahar ek pariwar khada tha
sab pare shan the par kar bhi kya sakte the
andar unki choti bahu do judwa bachho ko janam dene wali thi wese to ye khshi ki bat thi par isme uske jaan ko khatra tha
thoda intro kar lete he iss pariwar ka
is pariwar ke mukhiya ravindra patil ek 59sal ke achhe khase wyakti matwa ke admi Jo bhi dekhe bas unke aage kuch bol bhi naa paye iss umar me bhi kafi tagdi body ek purane pahlwan Jo thehre inke jesse hi inke dono bete the bada suraj patil Aur chota raghav patil (jiski biwi is waqt hospital me he )
ravindra patil ne apne pita ke business ko sambhala Aur unke dono beto ne usko age lejane ka kam kiya
Aur iske sath hi samaj me apna naam bhi banaya jansewa hospitals ke naam se jiske piche unki choti bahu matlb raghav ki patni priya ka bahut bada hath tha
back to story.... .
sab ek jaga beth kar doctor ke andar jane ka intajar kar rahe the par raghav dur betha tha wo is bat se Naraj tha ki priya ne usse jid karke fir se ek bacche ki jid ki thi
kyu ki unhone pahle bhi ek beti khoyi thi Aur fir priya ki jid par fir se bacha jisme priya ki jaan ko khatra tha
raghav apne kayalo me khoya tha ki waha se doctor tej tej kadmose ICU ke tarf jate he Aur age jakar ravindraji unko rok kar bat karte he Aur kuch samjha kar andar bhej dete he
unke jane ke bad raghav unke pass jakar bat karta he wo kafi pareshan tha priya ko lekar
uske pitaji usko sabse dur lejakar samjhate he par wo fir bhi kafi pareshan tha
fir wo apne jaga wapas akar beth jata he Aur apne khayalo me kho jata he fir najane wo apni pichle dino ke dukho ke bareme sochta rehta he
jab wo apne khyalo se bahar ata he to wo dekhta he ki doctor bahar aakar sab ko bata rahe the ki priya bilkul thik he Aur usko ek beta Aur ek beti hui he
raghav ye bat sunkar Bhag kar waha aata he to wo dekhta he ki waha uske sasur aur sali bhi agai he
jab raghav waha pahuchta he to uski sali usko ched ti he raghav bhi kuch nahi bolta kyu ki wo uske sali ka hak tha upar se wo abhi bas 10th se pass aut hoi thi to thodi chul - buli bhi thi
raghav apne sasur aur baki sab ka ashirwad leta he fir andar jana chahta he par doctor abhi rukne ko bolte he
fir raghav ek khursi par baith jata he Aur intajar karta he Aur baki sab apni bato me lag jate he to wahi pitaji Aur unke samadhi(priya ke pita) mithai lane chale jate he
wahi raghav ke bade bhai ke beta Aur beti unke nanhe bhai bahan se Milne ki jid karte he
Sirf wahi nahi the Jo waha bachhe the raghav ki 2bahane Aur thi unke bhi bachhe the par wo abhi chote the to unko abhi itna malum nahi tha
thode derbad ravindraji bhi wapas laut ate he mithaiyo ke sath Aur pure hospital Me mithai batwate he
fir youhi 3hr Aur nikal jate he to priya ko bachho ke sath dusre rum me shift kiya jata he
abhi bhi priya ko hosh nahi aaya tha to kisiko bhi milne nahi dete
thodi der bad nurse batati he ki priya ko hosh agya he sab milsakte he par koi bhi apni jaga se nahi hilta aisa nahi tha ki koi bachho se naa milna chahte ho par sab yahi chahte the ki raghav pahle jakar apne sare gile shikwe dur kar le
isi liye sab milkar usko andar bhej dete he. jab raghav andar jata he to wo dekhta he ki priya bed par ankhe band karke leti hui he Aur bachhe bhi pass me hi he
raghav pahle bachho ko dekhta he bahut hi pyare bachhe nind ki aghosh me sorahe the.
wo unko kuch waqt dekhta he fir jhuk ke. unke mathe par ek halke halke kiss karta he
fir wo priya ko dekhta he to wo abhi bhi kamjor lag rahi thi. par chahra wahi pyara sa jispe raghav fida tha.
raghav jhuk ke uske bhi mathe par ek kiss karta he to priya ankhe khol dekhti he. to jab dono ek dusre ke ankho me dekhte he to
kuch der bas khamosh rahte he fir achanak se unke chehre par smile ajati he
priya kuch kahna chahti thi par raghav usko chup rahneka ishara karta he. fir jhuk kar priya ke honto par ek chota sa kiss kar ke usko bolta he.
raghav - ab tum aram karo main bahar hu Aur ek smile karta he badle me priya bhi ek smile Karti he. Aur raghav bahar ajata he
fir baki sab bhi unsse milte he bachho ki buaye aur mousi bhi kafi khush the wo bachho ko god me lekar khelne lagte he kyu ki wo ab jag chuke the
Aur bachho ke bade bhai-bahan to apne khel me hu magan the
isi tarha hasi khushi Aaj ka din nikal jata he fir dusre din priya ko chutti mil jati he to sab usko ghar lekar ate he fir agale din puja Aur party rakhi jati he puja ke bad bachho ka naam rakha jata he
ladki ka naam Jo ki wo badi thi to uska naam - ARUSHI rakha jata he
AUR ladke ka naam- ARUSH rakha jata he
aise hi waqt bitta jata he Aur wo bade hote jate he
dekhte dekhte 2sal bit jate he sabhi hasi khushi rah rahe the raghav Aur priya bhi bahut khush the apni jindagi me apne bachho ke karan kyu ki dono the bhi bahut nath- khat
sabhi khush the par kya khushi kabhi ek jaga rah pai he
ek din kuch aisa huwa ki sab ki jandagi badal gai
tu be continued......
UPDATE 2
ek din kuch aisa huwa ki sab ki jandagi badal gai
ab aage....
sab hasi khushi rah rahe the raghav aur priya ko apni pahli beti ki yad to ati thi par ab in chote bachho ke karan wo khuah the
Aur in bachhoke bade bhai-behan bhi har waqt in ke sath khelte the
dekhte2 dosal bit gaye ab to arushi-arush bhi chalna aur bolna Sikh gaye the Jo bhi inko dekhta wo bas unme hi Kho jata unki harkate hi kuch aisi thi din bhar puri haveli me apne chote kadmo se Bhag te rehte priya unko dhund dhund kar pareshan ho jati
fir ek bar jab priya bachho Aur raghav ke death har salke tarha apne mayke gai to thi par wapas aye to sab ko ek jhatka laga
Kyu ki unke sath priya ki choti Behan siya thi Jo ek shadi ke jode me khadi thi
Sab heran the ki unko siya ki shadi ka kyu nahi bataya Aur nahi siya ki shadi ki umar he
Sab ko kuch samj nahi araha tha par ye to ek kuch nahi tha Jo priya ne unke sar par bomb foda
Usne bataya ki siya ki shadi raghav se hui he ye ek sab se bada jhatka tha gharwalo ke liye
Kyu ki sab jante the ki raghav priya se kitna pyar karta he
Fir kisiko yea samajh nahi araha tha ki raghav ne siya se kyu shadi ki
to priya ne yea bataye ki siya raghav se pyar Karti thi aur usne apni jaan dene ki koshish ki he Aur usne siya ka hath sab ko dikhaya jis par ab bandage laga huwa tha
sab ko siya ki is har kat par bahut gussa aya par fir bhi unhone kuch nahi kaha kyu ki priya ne usko apna liya tha par sab Naraj jarur the
fir bhi sab ne uska swagat kiya is bat ki khabar priya ko bhi thi ke siya ko sabki narajgi ka samna karna padega par wo janti thi ki waqt ke sath sab thik ho jayega
aise hi in kuch mahino me siya ne sab ke dilo me apne liye jaga banali thi
par sab se Jada bat karne wali wo siya kahi kho gai thi Aur raghav bhi ab Jada tar kam ke karan Bahar hi rahta tha ya fir aisa bhi ki wo bhar rahne ka bahana dhund ta tha
idhar priya apne bachho ke sath pure pariwar ko sambhal rahi thi usne har kadam par siya ka sath diya take siya sabke dilo me apne liye jaga bana sake
fir siya ne ek pyari si beti ko janam diya jiska naam KOMAL rakha gaya uska swagat bhi patli pariwar me joro shoro se huwa sab khush the par sab se Jada khush to arushi Aur arush the kyu ki
unko ek pyari si gudiya mil gai thi Jo unse choti thi kyu ki har bachhe ka sapna hota he ki usse bhi koi chota ho jiske sath wo khel sake
Aur komal unse choti thi to unke kya kahne wo usko pyar se choti bulate the kuch hi salo me wo unki jan bangai thi
wo apni har sharart me usko apne sath rakhte the par jab bhi pakde jate to wo usko bacha lete the wo kabhi bhi usko kuch nahi hone dete
dhire dhire sab Jan gaye ki inka pyar kitna badh gaya tha wo kuch bhi karte to sath me kahi jate to sath me
bas jab priya arushi- arush ko apne mayke sar sal le jati to hi wo alag hote par wo is bat ke liye nahi mante the par unko har sal jana padta tha
in 8salo me jab raghav Aur siya ki shadi hui thi tab se raghav 2ya3 bar hi priya ke sath uske mayke gya tha par siya ek bar bhi nahi
is bar bhi priya akeli bachho ke sath 15dino ke liye gai thi kyu ki raghav ne isbar bhi kam ka bahana bana diya tha
priya ke jane ke kuch 3din bad jab raghav apne bhai ke sath office me tha to us waqt usko ek call ata he
jise pic karne ke bad raghav Jo sunta he usse wo apne hosh kho bethta he uske hath se mobile niche gir jata he Aur ankho se bas ansu nikal te he
uski ye halat dekh raghav ke bhai mobile utha kar hello bolte he to unko bhi ek jhatka lagata he call karne wala bata raha tha ki priya ke car ka accident ho gaya he aur wo ***** hospital me he Aur sath me 2no bachhe bhi
raghav ke bhai jaldi se khud ko sambhal te he Aur raghavko lekar hospital chale jate he raste me wo putaji ko bhi call karke sab bata dete he
kyu ki priya ka accident ghar wapas ate time raste me huwa tha Jo unke shahar se dur tha to unko waha pahchne me 2hr lag jate he
ab tak raghav khud ko sambhl chuka tha isliye hospital me pahucg te hi wo Bhag kar ICU ke tarf jata he
par waha jata he to usko jindagi ka sab se bada jhatka lagta he
waha ek ward boy priya ki dedbody ko ICU se bahar nikal raha tha aur andar aroshi ka operation ho raha tha aur dusre ICU me arush ka checkup ho raha tha
uske sir par ek gahra jakham tha aur doctor uske ilaj kar rahe the
par raghav to bas priya ko dekh kar royeja raha tha usko baki duniya ki koi khabar nahi thi
kuch der bad sab waha pahuch jate he sab priya ko dekh kar Rone lagte he
par pitahji sab ko shant ke hospital ke chief doctor se milte he waha se unko priya ka khat milta he jise padh kar us pahad jese admi ke bhi ankhe nam ho jati he
fir wo wapas akar sab ko us khat me ki bate batate he Aur Jo jaruri tha wo chupa te he par us khat Ki kuch bate raghav ko bhi pata thi Jo pitaji ne sab se chupai
priya ka apne bachho ke liye pyar dekh kar sab ghar wale fut fut kar rote he fir pitaji raghav ko samjha kar priya ka antim sanskar karne sab ke sath bhej te he
Aur khud arushi ka operation pura hone ke bad arush- arushi ko apne hospital shift kar dete he
to be continued
Good reviewBhai aapne jo update diye he usase to yahi lagta ge ki aapke paas ek aisi lekhani he jime koi jadu he ya fir maa sarswati ki aap par koi aseem anukampa he. Me ye isliye keh raha hu kyuki aap is waqt 2 story likh rahe ho aur dono hi bilkul alag language aur emotions ko show kar rahi he. Iss story me aapne ek pariwar, ek pati, ek maa, ek badi bahen aur bacho ke sabke emotions ko alag 2 tarike se dikhaya he. Jabki aapne apni dusari story me ek ma ka bete se itane saal dur rehne baad milne ke baad kya emotion hote he, ek bachha jab apne pariwar se dur ek jail jaise mahol me rehta he to us par kya bitati he. wo apne aap ko aane wali apno ki nafrat ke liye kaise taiyaar rakhta he. Kaise usaki life badal jati he ye sab dikhaya he.
Wah ab aur kya likhu bas yahi dua he rab se ki aapka swasth sahi rakhe jisase aap hume apni jadui lekhani ke jadu se apne aap se bandh kar rakh sake.
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