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awesome fabulous update
bhai dimag bhot chalati hi
dur see dekha tab bhi pahachan liya
keep posting
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awesome fabulous update
bhai dimag bhot chalati hi
dur see dekha tab bhi pahachan liya
keep posting
jabardast like it
kya kahun samajh nahi aa raha yaar is update ke bare me ek achche dost ke nate kahun to mast hai aur ek achche reader ke nate bolun to kuch khas pasand nahi aaya ek baar fir story hero ki aisi taisi ho gayi aaj bhi uske andar dar jinda hai unke liye jinhone use lagbhag maar hi diya life me aur wo ab tak nidar na ban saka har koi baja raha uski agar ho sake to kuch super power ghusa do uske andar use bada banao bachcha na raha wo ab yaar
Yaar mai jab tumhare story pe comment karta hu tum story hi band kar dete ho lekin abb aur mujhse raha nahi jayega comment kiye bina....
Story SUPPERB chal raha hai bro.. Har ek line intresting hai.. Abb bass next update ka intezaar hai... [\B]
Aaj toh arushi murder ke mood mein thi bach gaya bhai
Ab yeh bata tu komal ke sath rahega ya wapas jayega
Waise tere writing ka fan hita jaa raha hu main dhire dhire
Waiting Next
SUPERB AWESOME SHAANDAAR FANTASTIC AUR INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI