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Ramu kaka aur kamla ko ghar se niklwa do chori ke ilzaam mein aur inki jagah ghar ka kaam karwaane ke liye naaz ke bete ali ki aur uski behen ki entry karwao, aur wo ghar ke kaam mein sandhaya ki madad karega kitchen mein bhi. Abhiraj aur aslam ko thoda college mein busy dikha do aur salma aur sunita baccho ki dekh bhaal mein busy rahengi.
Raghav aur rajeev apne business ki wajah se jyaada tar ghar se door business trips pe rahenge. Dheere dheere Ali aur sandhaya ki dosti karwao, aur fir Aslam aur Abhiraj ki dekha dekhi sandhaya aur Ali mein bhi thodi dosti ho jaaye, Uske liye pehle scene dikha dena ki sandhaya shopping karne jaaye market Ali ke saath aur waha kucch ladke sandhaya ko pareshaan kare to Ali unko pitai kare aur sandhaya ko bacha le, isse sandhaya ke mann mein Ali ke liye soft corner bann jaaye aur wo uske saath frank hoti chali jaaye.
Ali ko majakia dikhana, wo sandhaya se majak bhi kare jaise ki uske cousin bhai Aslam ko sunita jaisi itni sundar biwi mil gayi aur Ali ki koi girlfriend nahi hai, aur sandhaya ko chidhaaye, kyonki Ali ko pata lag jaaye ki sandhaya sunita se chiddhti hai aur fir wo baate banaaye ki Sunita ke to maje hai wo maa bhi bann gayi sundar si beti ki aur usko sabka pyaar bhi mil raha hai aur sunita Aslam ke saath kitna enjoy bhi karti hai, aur ghar mein rani ki tarah bann kar rehti hai jabki sandhaya ko ghar ka kaam bhi dekhna padta hai. Saath mein Ali sandhaya ki taarif bhi karta rahe ki wo sunita se kisi bhi tarah kam sundar, smart aur gunwaan nahi hai.
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Ali ke saath uski behen ko bhi servant quarters mein rukwa dena, ali ki behen jiski shaadi naaz bua aslam se karwana chahti thi , to ali ki behen aslam se pyaar karti hai bachpan se he kyonki usko uski ammi naaz ne yahi bataya tha ki bade hokar uska nikah aslam se hoga to wo aslam ko hi apna shohar maan ne lagi thi, magar sunita se shaadi hone ke kaaran uska dil toot gaya magar ab wo firse aslam ke najdeek jaane ki koshish kare, aur sunita ko ye pasand na aaye ki koi aur aslam se pyaar kare, sunita beti hone ke kaaran jannat ke saath busy rehti hai to aslam ko time nahi de paati isliye aslam bhi thoda Ali ki behen ki taraf attract hota jaaye
Aslam se beti hone ke baad sunita ki feelings aslam ke liye badal gayi hai, but usko khudko nahi pata tha magar jab naaz bua ki beti aslam se kareeb jaane ki koshish karegi to sunita ko accha nahi lagega wo chidhegi aur aslam ko apni aur attract karne ki koshish karegi khud se he, ye sunita ke mann mein aslam ke liye feelings aana aur sandhaya ki deep waali dosti Ali se hona is kahani ka turning point bann sakta hai, waise bhi 1.5 saal beet chuka hai.
Ali ko aise dikhao ki wo ghar ka kaam bhi karta hai aur saath mein sandhaya ko jab ghar se bahar jana ho kisi kaam se to wo uska personal driver aur assistant ka bhi kaam kare
Beshak aage chal kar ye bhi dikha dena ki jab sandhaya apne baccho se milne unke hostel mein jaaye pahado par jaha wo padhte hai to Ali ke saath mein he jaaye aur raste mein aate waqt tez baarish ke kaaran pahad toot jaaye aur unki gaadi bhi damage ho jaaye, magar ali apni jaan ki parwa kiye bina sandhya ko bacha le gaadi ko khaai mein girne se pehle aur rasta block hone ke kaaran unko saath majboori mein raat bitaani pade wahi aas paas mein kisi khandar ya jhopdi mein thand se bachne ke liye undo ko majbooran physical hona pade,
sandhya bhi ye realise karegi ki Ali ne uski jaan dobara se bachaai hai , 2-3 dinn tak raaste na khul paaye aur fir kisi hotel mein ek he room mile wo bhi chhota sa single bed wala par sandhaya guilt feel kare magar ali sandhaya ko convince kare ki wo sab majboori mein kiya aur ali ye kisi ko nahi batayega, kyonki wo sandhya ki bahut respect karta hai aur wo kabhi kisi no nahi batayega ki undo ke beech kya hua, par sandhya emotional jo jaaye aur wo jab tak waha pahaado par fase rahe unke beech kayi baar physical relation bane aur fir dheere dheere unke beech aage chal kar kaafi closeness badh jaaye jab ghar par aane ke baad bhi, magar indono ka secret rahe.
Fir 2 saal jab poore hone tak ye bhi dikha dena ki sandhaya aur sunita mein behno jaisa pyaar ho gaya hai, aur sandhaya bhi sunita ko support karna shuru kar de. Fir 3 saal jab shuru ho to abhiraj ki behen jo london mein rehti hai uski entry karwa dena aur saath mein aslam ki dono beheno ko bhi ghar mein jagah dilwa dena.
Is sabko dheere dheere kayi saare updates mein dikhaya ja sakta hai agar lekhak chahe to. Aur ye sab apne tarreke se likhna, u write gud story.
