Adultery Mummy ko bus me ek anjaan ladke ne choda

[xxxsimplewriterxxx_]

Bahot hi achchi story likhi hai aapne aur bahot hi achche dhng se likha hai.

Kuchh feedback meri taraf se. 2nd plot may chudai ko thoda aur detail may likha jaa sakta tha, jaise pahle plot may tha.
Ek naya plot aur add kiya jaa sakta hai jismy beta train may maa ko dekhta hai chhup kar jaise usne bus may dekha tha.
Ek aur naya character add kiya jaa sakta hai. first ploat may wo ladka maa ka brain wash karne ki kosis karta tha ki 10-12 bf bana lo. issi ke upar ke naya character add kiya jaa sata hai aur iske bare may 1st wale ladke ko nahi pata chalna chahiye.

Very good suggestions, maybe I can make a mini series out of it, any more ideas/suggestions you have?

 

[Rinkp219]

Beta ko moka milega kya

 

[Iam_xxx]

Very good suggestions, maybe I can make a mini series out of it, any more ideas/suggestions you have?

One more feedback I would like to give. I have noticed this in the majority of mother-related stories. In the beginning the mother was portrayed as a shy women which was dominated by the boy but after 2-3 plot author change the character of the mother and put her in the dominated position. In real life a woman's character does not change if she is shy she will remain shy. In your first plot (the Bus scene) the mother was totally shy and the boy was dominating her. She was doing everything whatever the boy was asking but she remained shy but in your last plot she was the one who was dominating.

This is my general observation. But it is up to you, you know what is best for your story.

 

[Jannat1972]

Aur isme kya add kiya jaa sakta hai?

Aap bete k kisi college frnd k saath continue kar sakte ho uske baad bete k saath incest bhi dikha sakte ho ..it's all up to u ....aap behter tarike se bada sakte ho story ko ...

 

[xxxsimplewriterxxx_]

One more feedback I would like to give. I have noticed this in the majority of mother-related stories. In the beginning the mother was portrayed as a shy women which was dominated by the boy but after 2-3 plot author change the character of the mother and put her in the dominated position. In real life a woman's character does not change if she is shy she will remain shy. In your first plot (the Bus scene) the mother was totally shy and the boy was dominating her. She was doing everything whatever the boy was asking but she remained shy but in your last plot she was the one who was dominating.

This is my general observation. But it is up to you, you know what is best for your story.

Ye to main bhi agree karta hun, sex se nature change nahi hota hai, especially a Indian traditional mom ka

 

[xxxsimplewriterxxx_]

Aap bete k kisi college frnd k saath continue kar sakte ho uske baad bete k saath incest bhi dikha sakte ho ..it's all up to u ....aap behter tarike se bada sakte ho story ko ...

I don't like incest, but she will be kinda like a mommy to her bf also, right lmao

 

[xxxsimplewriterxxx_]

Continued as a Mini Series...
-BETA POV-

Mainne kisi tarah bus wali ghatna ko bhula diya. Aakhir aur kar bhi kya sakta tha? Mera muh kholna matlab apne ghar ki barbadi. Hum Lucknow pahunch gaye aur shadi ke mahaul mein kho gaye. Shadi ka environment ek taraf kaafi shandar tha, to dusri taraf ladai-jhagde ki wajah se tanav bhi bana hua tha. Main in sab cheezon ko nazar-andaz kar apni umar ke family members ke saath ghul mil gaya aur shadi ke kaamon mein hath batane laga.

Agle din shadi thi. Hum sab barat le kar community hall pahunch gaye. Khane ka accha intezaam tha, to hum sab usme busy ho gaye. Raat ko shadi ka program chal raha tha, aur sab log thak kar aadhe soye hue lag rahe the. Main bhi baar-baar neend ke jhoke me chala ja raha tha, ki tabhi mera phone baj utha. Papa ki call thi.

"Beta, tumhari mummy phone nahi utha rahi hain. Unhe phone dedo, mujhe unse thodi baat karni hai," Papa bole. Maine haan kaha aur mummy ko nazar ghuma ke dekhne ki koshish ki, lekin wo kahin dikh nahi rahi thi. To main phone lekar community hall ke bahar gaya aur food stalls ke paas nazar daudayi. Tab mujhe mummy dikh gayi.

Main aadhi neend me unki taraf badhne laga, lekin jaise-jaise main nazdeek gaya, meri neend ekdum hawa ho gayi.

Mummy ek ladke ke saath baithi baatein kar rahi thi. Aur yeh koi aira-gera nahi tha, balki wahi bus wala ladka tha. Use dekhte hi mera man kiya ki turant use pakad ke maar dun, lekin pata nahi kaise, maine khud ko control kar liya. Mainne use ghura aur mummy ko phone diya. Unhone phone le kar baat shuru ki, aur isse pehle ki main kuch kar dun, main wahan se chala gaya aur Mummy bhi mere sath chali aayi.
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Agle din hamara train mein reservation tha. Kismat se maine AC3 ki tickets le li thi. Main itna thak chuka tha ki din bhar sota raha, aur meri neend tab khuli jab mummy ne mujhe jagaya. Meri nazar unke chehre par gayi—ajeeb si utsukta thi unki aankhon mein, lekin maine is baat ko nazarandaz kiya. Main apna saman sametne laga, aur kuch der baad humne khana khaya aur train station ke liye nikal gaye.

Station par hum dono platform par khade train ka intezaar kar rahe the, lekin mujhe lag raha tha ki mummy bar-bar apne phone ki taraf dekh rahi thi, jaise kisi ka intezaar ho.

Achanak wo mere paas aayi aur kaha ki unhe ek emergency hai aur kuch der mein wapas aa jayengi. Maine pucha, "Kya pareshaani hai?" To unhone chupke se kaha, "Ladies issue." Ye sunkar maine aur kuch puchna zaroori nahi samjha aur baat wahi khatam kar di. Wo jaldi se bheed mein kho gayi, aur main wahi khada unka intezaar karta raha.

Thodi hi der mein train platform par aa gayi. Maine apna saman coach mein rakh diya aur mummy ko phone lagakar unhe jaldi aane ko kaha, kyunki train chutne hi wali thi.

Kuch waqt baad mummy train ke compartment mein dakhil hui. Wo halki si jhuki hui thi, jaise thak gayi ho, aur saans lene ki koshish kar rahi thi. Unka chehra pasine se chamak raha tha, aur unke baal bhi thode bikhre hue lag rahe the. Pasine ke wajah se unki sari pith par chipak gayi thi. Mujhe mummy ko dekh kar turant bus ka ek purana manzar yaad aa gaya, lekin maine us khayaal ko zabardasti apne dil se nikal diya.

"Mummy, sab theek hai na?" Maine dheere se puchha.
"Sab theek hai," unhone hichkichahat se jawab diya, phir apni jagah par baith kar paani ka ek sip liya.

Main chup ho gaya, lekin unki halat dekh kar mann mein ajeeb se sawaal uthne lage.
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Main kafi thaka hua tha, aur train ke chalne ke saath hi apni sleeper berth par jaa kar so gaya. Mummy bhi apni middle berth par chadh kar sone chali gayi. Thakaan ke maare main gehri neend mein chala gaya aur seedha agle din hi utha, jab Mummy ne mujhe jagaya.

Agle din Mummy ke chehre par ek alag hi chamak thi. Wo bahut khush aur chehak chahak rahi thi. Unka muskurata hua chehra dekh kar mujhe bhi bahut achha laga. Jaise unki muskaan ne meri sari chintaen mita di ho.

Maine socha ki jo kuch bus mein hua, use bhul jaana hi behtar hoga. Hum dono ne apna saman samet kar Papa ke bheje hue gaadi mein baith ghar ki taraf rukh kar liya.

 

[xxxsimplewriterxxx_]

-LADKA POV-

Main nashe me dhut tha, maine aur mere kuch dost ganje ke nashe me bistar pe pade hue the, main isi bich cigeratte jala ke pine laga, mujhe nashe ke halat me dhuen ka swad jyada pasand tha, mera ek dost meri aur dekh ke puchata hai, "Sale teri gf kisi aur ke sath ghum rahi thi, pata bhi hai sale kitni bari raand hai wo", maine apna sir haa me hilaya, "mujhe kya be, kisi ke sath ghume, bus chut mujhe deti rahe", ye sun mere dost hasane lagate hain, "Madarchod kasam se ekdam kameena hai sale tu", main hansate hue apna phone nikal apni nayi setting ka number milane laga aur dosto se kaha, "Wo to main hun, chal thoda lund ghisai kar ke aata hun", mera dost karwat lete hue kaha, "saale chala ja nahi raha hai, aur chala hai chodane, bhak chutiya sala", main hasane laga, "are ye wo nahi hai re, nayi set ki hai, aunty hai, pura khayaal rakhati hai mera".

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Main apni baat puri karta hi tha ki ek dost uthkar baith gaya, aankhein masalate hue bola, "Aunty? Saale, tujhe kab se aunty pasand aane lagi? Kya baat hai, purana flavor chhod ke naye menu pe aa gaya?"

Main hansne laga, "Arre, uncle ko uncle mat bol, aunty ka asar dekh ke teri bhi soch badal jayegi. Kaam bhi tight karti hai aur khayaal bhi rakhti hai. Agli baar set kara doonga tere liye."

Sab fir se hasne lage. Ek aur dost, jo thodi der se chup tha, beech mein bola, "Aur bata, kya kya karwa liya aunty se? Ya phir sirf dialoguebaazi kar raha hai?"

Maine cigarette ka ek aur kash lagaya aur ek dheemi si muskaan ke saath bola, "Sab kuch, beta... sab kuch. Poora service package. Ab tum log padhe raho bistar pe, main phone milata hoon."

Maine number dial kiya, aur dusre kamre mein jaane laga. Peeche se ek dost chillaya, "Saale, video call pe kar lena, hum bhi seekh lenge!"

Main hans kar bola, "Tum logo ke aukat ke bahar hai ye, beta. Seekhna hai to khud try kar."

Dusre kamre mein jaake phone lagaya, aunty ne phone uthaya. Dheemi si awaaz mein boli, "Bohot der se call kar rahe ho, ab yaad aaye?"

Maine haste hue kaha, "Arre aunty, doston ke saath busy tha. Ab aap se baat karke energy recharge karni hai."

Wo thoda hansi, "Bas baatein karoge ya milne ka plan bhi hai?"

Maine turant bola, "Plan to wahi hai, bas aap time de do."

Wo boli, "Samay tumhare haath mein hai, main ready hoon."

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Maine aunty se confirm kiya aur nashe ke halat me hi dost ko bola, "Saale, ruk tu, dekh kaise aunty se mil ke aata hoon." Sab hans rahe the, par mujhe koi parvah nahi thi. Main rickshaw liya aur unke ghar ki taraf chal pada.

Jaise hi main aunty ke ghar pahunchta hoon, darwaza khat-khataya. Aunty ne andar se poocha, "Kaun?"

Maine bola, "Aunty, main hoon."

Darwaza khula aur aunty ne mujhe dekha. Unka chehra pehle confusion bhara tha, phir gussa. "Nashe me aaye ho? Ye kya halat banai hai tumne?" Wo ek maa ki tarah mujhe daantne lagi.

Main muskurate hue bola, "Arre aunty, main to aapko dekhne aya hoon. Nashe ka kya hai, wo to chala jayega."

Unhone meri baat ignore ki aur mujhe andar le aayi. "Chup chap sofa pe baitho. Main tumhare liye juice la rahi hoon."

Main sofa par latak gaya, aankh band karke. Tab tak aunty kitchen se ek glass juice lekar aayi aur bola, "Piyo pehle. Dimag thikane pe lao."

Main hanste hue juice leke bola, "Aunty, aap itna khyaal rakhti hain, lagta hai mujhe har din yahan aana chahiye."

Unhone meri taraf ghurke dekha, "Zyada natak mat karo. Chup chap juice piyo."

Main juice ka ek sip lete hue bola, "Aunty, mujhe lagta hai, aap mere liye hi bani ho. Maa ka pyar, biwi ka care aur girlfriend ka thrill sab ek saath."

Wo hansi, "Bas bas, zyada buttering mat karo. Mujhe pata hai tum jaise ladko ke nakhre."

Main flirt karte hue bola, "Arre aunty, aapka nakhra dekh kar to main pagal ho gaya hoon. Ab toh mujhe yahan se jaane ka mann hi nahi."

Wo meri taraf hansi daba kar dekhti rahi, "Tum bas line maarne me expert ho. Lekin meri baat suno, zyada shararat karoge to tumhe deewar ke bahar phenk dungi."

Main aur mazak me bola, "Deewar ke bahar nahi, aunty, aapke paas rehna hai mujhe."

Aunty thoda sharma ke bola, "Chup raho, juice khatam karo aur seedhe baitho."

Maine juice khatam kar ke glass table pe rakha, phir aunty ki taraf mudh kar bola, "Aunty, sach me, mujhe samajh nahi aata, aap itni perfect kaise ho."

Wo mujhe haath se maarne ki nautanki karte hue boli, "Tumhare jaisa perfect line maara, to main perfect ban gayi."

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Maine juice ka glass table par rakha aur aunty ki taraf mudh kar mazakiya andaz me bola, "Aunty, ek baat bolu?"

Unhone thoda curiosity se dekha, "Haan bolo, ab kya natak karoge?"

Maine hasi dabate hue bola, "Aapko lagta hai na, ki main hi line maarne me expert hoon. Lekin such bolo, aap jitni khubsurat ho, aapko sirf ek boyfriend pe limit nahi karna chahiye."

Aunty ka chehra ekdum shock aur hansi ke mixture se bhar gaya, "Kya? Tumhare dimaag me aur kuch bach gaya hai bolne ke liye?"

Maine kaandhe uchatte bola, "Arre aunty, sach bol raha hoon. Aapke jaise aunty log 10-12 boyfriends rakhne ke layak hoti hain. Sab alag-alag kaam ke liye. Ek khana banane ke liye, ek shopping karane ke liye, ek romantic baatein karne ke liye..."

Unhone meri baat kaat ke bola, "Aur ek tumhare jaise shaitani dimaag wale ke liye, jo sirf faltu ki baatein karta hai!"

Main aur zyada mazak karte hue bola, "Haan aunty! Waise main us list me number one rahunga, entertainment aur khushi ke liye. Baaki log chhote-mote kaam ke liye."

Unhone haath me cushion uthaya aur mere taraf fake diya, "Chup raho, pagal! Tumhe lagta hai ki meri life koi TV serial hai?"

Main cushion pakad ke bola, "Aunty, sach me, aap kitne lucky ho jaoge. Aapko alag-alag surprises milenge har roz. Aur socho, sab aapki seva me lage rahenge."

Unhone aankhen ghoomate hue bola, "Mujhe lagta hai tumhara nasha utar raha hai ab. Ye bakwas idea kahaan se aaya tumhare dimaag me?"

Main haske bola, "Dil se, aunty. Main chahta hoon ki aapki life aur exciting ho jaye. Waise bhi, aap jitni stunning ho, sab log aap pe flat ho jayenge."

Unhone thoda sharmate aur gusse ke mixture me bola, "Tumhare jaise log jitne kam ho na, duniya utni acchi jagah banegi!"

Main apna ek haath dil pe rakhta hua drama karte bola, "Arre aunty, dil pe mat lo. Main toh sirf aapki khushi ke liye bol raha hoon."

Unhone meri taraf muskara ke dekha, "Khushi ki chinta mat karo. Tumhare jaise ek hi banda mere dimaag ki chhutti karne ke liye kaafi hai. Dus-gyarah boyfriend rakhe to shayad hospital jaana padega!"

Hum dono hasne lage, aur mahol aur bhi halka aur fun ho gaya.

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Maine juice ka glass khatam kiya aur aunty ki taraf dekha, unki aankhon me thodi curiosity aur thodi narazgi thi. Thoda mazak me bola, "Aunty, abhi ek aur idea aaya hai."

Unhone aankh dikhate hue kaha, "Ab kya naya shaitani plan hai tumhara?"

Main khada hoke zyada drama karte bola, "Aunty, ab aapko ek perfect saree look dena padega. Woh bhi braless, kyunki saree ka asli charm tabhi dikhta hai."

Unhone ekdum chauk ke bola, "Kya? Tum bilkul pagal ho gaye ho! Aur ye bakwas idea tumhare dimaag me kyun aaya?"

Maine apne dil pe haath rakha aur kaha, "Aunty, aap meri inspiration ho. Main chahta hoon ki aap apne look se sabko flat kar do. Waise bhi, ye mera naya mission hai—Aapki khoobsurti ko duniya ke saamne lana."

Unhone thoda sharmate hue bola, "Tumhe lagta hai main tumhari baaton me aa jaungi?"

Main mazakiya andaz me unka haath pakad ke bola, "Aunty, bas ek baar. Mujhe lagta hai, aapko bhi maza aayega."

Unhone thoda sharma kar aankhen neeche kar li, "Theek hai, lekin sirf ek baar. Aur tumhare aur stupid ideas nahi chalenge."

Maine unka haath pakad ke unhe bedroom ki taraf le gaya. Wahan ek light pink saree unke liye select ki aur kaha, "Yeh perfect hai. Aur blouse ka chakkar mat lo. Bilkul natural look chahiye."

Unhone saree li aur sharmate hue washroom me chale gayi. Kuch der baad jab wapas aayi, to meri aankhen unki taraf dekh ke ruki hi nahi. Saree unke upar bilkul graceful lag rahi thi, aur unka sharma hua chehra aur zyada khoobsurat lag raha tha.

Maine taali bajate hue bola, "Aunty, aap to fashion magazine ka cover ban sakti ho! Seriously, ekdum breathtaking!"

Unhone aankh ghoomate hue bola, "Bas karo, zyada tarif mat karo."

Main unke kareeb jaake bola, "Aunty, sach me, aap itni stunning ho ki aapko ek nahi, 10-12 boyfriends hone chahiye. Sab aapke is look pe fida ho jayenge."

Unhone thoda sharma ke bola, "Tumhare pagal ideas kabhi khatam nahi hote, hai na?"

Main hasi dabate bola, "Arre aunty, sochiye. Har boyfriend aapke ek kaam me help karega. Ek shopping, ek cooking, ek romantic dates ke liye..."

Unhone mazak me haath uthaya, "Ab bas! Tumhare pagalpan ka koi ilaaj nahi."

Main unka haath pakad ke bola, "Aunty, bas aap meri baat maano. Aap sabke liye ek inspiration ho. Aap jaisi beautiful aur smart woman ko sabse zyada deserve karna chahiye."

Unhone thoda narazgi aur sharmate hue bola, "Tumhe lagta hai main tumhari baaton me aa jaungi?"

Main unke kareeb jaake bola, "Aunty, aap meri baaton me nahi aa rahi, aap apni khoobsurti ke magic ko samajh rahi ho."

Unhone halki si hasi di, "Tumhare jaise bachche ke sath mazak karne me hi maza hai."

Maine unhe ek mirror ke samne khada kiya aur bola, "Dekho aunty, ye look to duniya dekhne layak hai. Bas ek selfie aur sabko dikhao."

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-THIRD POV

Uska nasha dheere-dheere kam hone laga, lekin uske chehre ki mischievous muskaan abhi bhi bani hui thi. Usne almari ke paas rakhe sindoor ki chhoti si dabbi uthai aur teasingly Aunty ke paas jaakar bola, "Aunty, ekdum suhagan look ke liye ye sindoor lagana toh banta hai!"

Aunty ke chehre par ekdum se laalima chhagi. "Are pagal ho gaya hai kya? Yeh kya nautanki chal rahi hai?" unhone hasi chhupane ki koshish karte hue daanta sindoor ki dibbi dur wapas rakh di.

Usne bedpost ke sahare khade hote hue hasi mein jawab diya, "Aap toh waise hi Miss India lagti ho, par thoda aur dramatic touch de raha hoon. Waise sach bolo, Aap ek number ki maal ho!!!"

"Bas bas, zyada mat bol," Aunty ne aankhon se tokte hue kaha, lekin unke chehre ki hasi bata rahi thi ki unhe maza aa raha hai.

Phir woh almari ki taraf badha aur ek dusari elegant saree nikalte hue bola, "Aapko na, ye bhi braless style try karna chahiye. Bilkul bold aur stylish lagega!"

Aunty ne uske haath pe zor se maarte hue kaha, "Badmaash! Tumhare dimaag mein kuch aur chalta bhi hai kya?"

Lekin uski nonstop tareefon aur masti ke samne, Aunty ki sharm haar maan gayi. Dheere se dusari saree pehnte hue unhone mirror ke saamne khud ko dekha. "Ab khush ho? Tumhare pagal ideas ke hisaab se sab kar diya," unhone haste hue bola.

Woh ek kadam aur aage badh ke bola, "Perfect! Lekin ab ek kaam aur karna padega—petticoat hata do. Sirf saree mein na, elegance alag level pe chala jata hai."

Aunty ne nakhre dikhane ki koshish ki, lekin uske masti bhare bol aur flattery ke samne unka bhi bas nahi chala. Dheere se unhone petticoat bhi hata diya aur sirf saree mein khadi ho gayi.

"Dekha! Ab toh ekdum supermodel lag rahi ho!" usne Aunty ke chehre ki sharm aur hasi ko dekhte hue bola.

Woh aur paas aate hue dheere se bola, "Aapko aur BF banane chahiye, Aunty. Aapke style aur charm ka poora fayda uthana chahiye. Waise bhi, duniya ke liye ek inspiration ban jaogi!"

Aunty ne hasi mein bola, "Tere jaise BF toh mujhe maar dalenge. Aur koi hoga toh tujhe jalan hogi."

"Jalan toh tab hogi jab aap mujhe ignore karengi. Baaki toh jitne BF, utna maza!" usne aankh maarte hue bola, jisse Aunty ki hasi aur zyada badh gayi.

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Uska mischievous mood abhi bhi bana hua tha. Usne sindoor ki dabbi uthai aur mazak karte hue Aunty ke paas jaakar bola, "Bas ab toh yeh mang bhi bhar deta hoon. Aapka toh aaj poora makeover karna hai!"

Aunty ne aankhon se daantne ki koshish ki, lekin unki sharm aur hasi dono ek saath unhe rok nahi paayi. "Kya pagalpan hai ye! Chal, hata isse!" Lekin jab tak Aunty kuch aur bolti, usne unka mang dheere se sindoor se bhar diya.

"Aunty, ab toh ekdum official lag rahi ho!" usne hasi mein bola. Aunty ne sharma ke apni aankhein jhuka li, lekin unke chehre par ek ajeeb si laali aur hasi thi.

Tabhi, uska phone baj utha. Usne screen par dekha, call uski girlfriend ka tha. Aunty ki nazar bhi phone ki taraf gayi, aur unka chehra ek pal ke liye stiff ho gaya. Lekin agle hi pal unhone apne jazbat chhupate hue ek halki muskaan apne chehre par le aayi.

"Lagta hai madam apna haq jatane wali hai," Aunty ne mazak karte hue bola, lekin unki awaaz me ek halki jalan ka ehsaas tha.

Usne call uthate hue casually bola, "Haan, bolo? Haan yaar, abhi busy hoon. Kya? Achha, theek hai, bas aa raha hoon."

Phone rakhte hi usne Aunty ki taraf dekha aur bola, "Aunty, ek zaruri kaam aa gaya hai. Main nikalta hoon."

Aunty ne ek moment ke liye kuch nahi kaha. Lekin unke chehre ki muskaan dheere se gayab ho gayi. "Theek hai, ja. Kaam important hota hai," unhone halki si hasi ke sath kaha, lekin unki awaaz me ek udaasi thi.

Usne jaldi se apne shoes pehne, aur darwaze ki taraf chalte-chalte bola, "Aap tension mat lena, milte hain phir!"

Darwaza band hone ki awaz ke sath hi Aunty ne apne jazbat ko roka, lekin unki aankhon me ek gussa ke sath ek dukh bhi tha. Unhone khud ko sambhalte hue, sindoor ko apne maang se saaf kar diya. Phir chup-chaap sofa par baith gayi, apni zindagi ke faislon par sochti hui.

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Agle hafte, ladka college ke baad phir se Aunty ko phone lagata hai. Uska mood kaafi masti bhara tha, aur uska mann tha Aunty ke saath phir se waqt bitane ka. Lekin Aunty ne phone nahi uthaya. Pehle toh usne socha ki shayad busy hongi, lekin jab kaafi der tak koi jawab nahi mila, toh uska patience khatam hone laga.

"Phone nahi utha rahi? Kya baat hai, Aunty aaj ignore kar rahi hai?" usne socha, aur bina waqt gaway apni bike nikali aur seedha Aunty ke ghar ki taraf chal diya.

Woh hamesha ki tarah pichhle darwaze se chupke se andar ghus gaya. Aunty ka ghar uske liye jaise doosre ghar jaisa ho chuka tha. Lekin aaj kuch alag tha. Ghar me ek ajeeb si khamoshi thi, jo uska curiosity aur badha rahi thi.

Uski nazar Aunty ke band kamre ki taraf gayi. Usne dheere se apne kadam badhaye aur darwaze ke paas pahunch gaya. Wahan pahunch ke usne kaan laga diya. Andar se aane wali halki-halki awazein uska dhyan kheench rahi thi.

"Aunty... kya sach me...?" usne apne andar hi andar socha. Uski curiosity ab excitement me badal chuki thi. Dheere-dheere, usne andar ki baat sunni.

Awazon se use samajh aaya ki Aunty kisi ke saath thi... aur wo bhi ek naye boyfriend ke saath! Uske chehre par ek mischievous muskan phail gayi.

"Toh Aunty ne meri baat maan hi li!" usne mann hi mann muskara kar socha. Use ek ajeeb si khushi ho rahi thi, jaise uski zid puri ho gayi ho. Lekin saath hi, uska mann aur masti karne ko kar raha tha.

Usne socha ki andar ghus ke unhe surprise de, lekin phir ruka aur bola, "Nahi, pehle dekhte hain, Aunty ka naya boyfriend kaun hai." Uska chehra ab pura excitement se chamak raha tha.

 

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