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action g...faadUPDATE:-19 (Done And Dusted)
Main kiran ki taraf badha hi tha ki 5 bande meri taraf badhe, sayad mujhe rokne ke liye, ye lawde mujhe rokenge, ajji kaddu mera. Aur wo 5on mere paas aaye aur ek ne jaise hi hath pakdna chaha mera Maine uski taraf bina dekhe hath hataya aur waha se khade-khade hi uski neck pe kich maari , wo kati patang ki tarah niche gira aur uska ye haal dekhke waha khade har bande matlab har bande ke badan mein sursuri daud gayi kyuki maine bina uski taraf dekhe usey dodge kiya aur ek kick mein khatam, ye mera concentration tha main hawa ko feel kar paa raha tha aur sath sath har moving object ko.
Khair wo baki ke chaaro ne ek doosre ki taraf dekha aur meri taraf badh gaye.
Main:- aa jao bacho.
Aur itna bol ke main tezi se move hua aur wo charo bhi meri taraf bhaage lekin wo log still hindi film ke jaise ek ek kar ke aa rahe they kyuki ek to wo balcony ki chaudayi kam thi aur un bando mein koi cordination nahi tha.
Isliye pehle ek aaya usne mukka marna chaha mere muh pe ( ek to ye lawde muh pe hi kyu maarte hai) lekin main niche jhuka usko kamar se pakda aur ghuma ke zameen pe patak diya uska sir zameen mein baza aur wo wahi dher. main khada ho pata usse pehle teesre ne mujhe laat marni chahi lekin maine jhuke-2 uski laat pakdi aur apni taraf khicha lekin wo thoda heavy tha isliye nahi khicha ek hath se isliye maine usey dhaka de diya wo niche gira ab main uski taraf badha hi tha ki mujhe mere piche kuch mehsoos hua aur main ek dum se niche jhuk gaya aur ek danda thik mere sir ke upper se nikal gaya mein seconds mein palta aur piche dekha to ratan khada tha is time wo pagal to nahi tha for sure.
Abhay ko pata nahi kya sujha usne meri taraf ek knife fek diya, maine usey catch kiya aur apna hath piche le jaake piche se aate huye aadmi ke seene ke bicho bich ghop diya aur wo piche ko dhadam se gira aur knife mere hath mein reh gaya par usse khoon abhi bhi tapak raha tha. Ye scene dekh ke waha khadi sabhi ladies ki chikh nikal ( ruk jao abhi to khel suru hua, bina lund ke gaand fadunga tumhari)
Wo ratan bhi chaar kadam piche hua ye scene dekhke lekin main thoda sa aage bhada aur diwar pe ek pair rakhe ke piche jump maari aur piche se aate huye dono bando ke thobde pe kick di jisse wo dono side ko girey. Maine ek ka hath pakda aur usey khich ke khada kiya aur wo khada bhi hua lekin bich mein doosre hath se knife laa diya maine aur wo ghusa uski garden mein.
Wo abhi bhi jhuka hua tha kyuki ek hath pakda tha maine, mujhe knife nikalna tha isliye maine uski body pe maari laat aur wo us Thakur ke pairo mein gir gaya. Aur wo 5wa banda bhi utha uski fatti padi thi lekin ladna to tha hi usey isliye wo aage badha aur fir wo lawdo jaise muh pe mukka maarna chaha lekin is baar mein niche nahi jhuka balki uska hath pakad liya, uska hath kaamp raha tha aur fir wohi kampan uske body mein bhi hone lag gayi, uske aankho se aansoo aa gaye jaise wo bheekh maang raha ho jinda rehne ki aur ye sab dekh ke mujhe hasi aa gayi aur maine wo knife uske chest ke center mein dala aur khich ke niche ki taraf sarka diya.
Baaki ki tarah uski chikh bhi nahi nikli aur wo bhi piche ki taraf gir gaya. Ab maine pehle thakur family ko ghura jo mere samne khadi thi, wo log dare huye they main piche palta to dekha ratan aur kiran ek doosre ka hath pakad ke kaamp rahe they aur waise bhi victim to wo hi hai to main unki taraf badh gaya lekin fir 10 log aur bhagke us balcony mein aaye. Main bhi inka hi wait kar raha tha kyuki maana raat ko kam bande honge haweli pe lekin 5 itne kam nhi ab kariban 10 bande they to samjh gaya ki bas ye hi hai ab jo hai. Aur yaha se chikhne chillane ki awaz bhi koi nahi sunega kyuki is haweli ke aaspaas koi ghar nahi hai.
Maine abhay ko taraf dekha to wo samjh gaya kya karna hai, itne wo 10 aadmi meri taraf badhe lekin jaise hi unhone abhay ko cross kiya abhay ne piche se do bando ka gala pakda aur piche ki taraf khich ke patak diya aur pass pada danda utha ke pehle wale ke sir pe diya aur doosra wala khada ho pata usse pehle uske thobde pe ek laat di aur fir wo danda diya uske sir pe. Aur fir piche se un bache huye ki taraf ho liya, idhar abhay ne 2 bando ko khatam kiya itne mein wo sab bhi mere paas pahuch gaye lekin ab khelne ka mood bilkul bhi nahi tha mera, isliye main bhi unki taraf badha aur pehle wale ne mukka maara main niche jhuk ke aage nikal gaya aur doosre bande ke thighs mein pura knife ghop diya aur jhatke se nikal ke teesre bande ke gale mein aur fir chothe bande ke ando pe laat maari aur wo jhuka aur jhukte hi uski khopdi mein laat di itne mein wo pehla banda palat ke wapis aaya lekin maine bina uski taraf mudde wo knife uski garden mein daal diya hath ghuma ke. Ab maine dekha ki bas 4 bande hi pairo pe khade hai baki sab ya to mar gaye ya tadap rahe hai dard mein. Aur ye charo ko Maine itni jaldi maara tha ki sab ki gaand chok kha gayi mere reflexes aur speed dekh ke.
Ab un 4ro ki bhi gaand fat chuki thi unhe samjh nahi aa raha tha ki mujhpe dhyan de ya abhay pe lekin main aur abhay nahi rukey hum dono aage badhe lekin unme se ek kuch jada hi bokhla gaya aur wo meri taraf bhaga chillate huye, maine wo knife fek ke maara jo sidha uski gale mein ghus gaya, aur ye dekh ke un teeno ka dhyan is taraf huya itne mein abhay ne piche se do bando ke gale mein danda fasa ke dabane lag gaya aur wo fadfadane.
Ab ye scene dekh ke wo aakhiri banda ghutno pe aa gaya aur hath jod ke rone laga ki usey chod, wo kuch nahi karega blah-blah.
Main:- ek shart pe chod dunga tujhe.
Wo:- manjoor hai.
Main:- is ratan ko maar de?
Aur maine wo knife uski taraf fek diya jo usne jhatt se utha liya.
Wo:- pakka chod doge na.
Main:- dimag ghumayega to teri gaand mein ye rampuri daal ke ghuma dunga.
Wo to jaise khus ho gaya
Wo:- ratan sahab maaf kar do, humey apni jaan pyari hai.
Ratan:- tune hamara namak khaya hai.
Main:- ooo bhsdk jada dialouge na maar, marja isse nahi to main maarne laga na to yahi narak ke darshan ho jayenge.
Itne wo Thakur aage aaya aur mere pairo mein gir gaya aur uske piche piche baaki family bhi, itne mein ratan ki chikh sunayi di aur sabne uski taraf dekh to wo niche pada fadfada raha tha. Sari Thakur family ke aankho mein aansoo aa gaye.
Thakur:- beta humey maaf kar do humse galti ho gayi.
Main:- galti to tumse huyi hai aur main aise hi maaf nahi kar dunga, mujhe keemat chahiye iski.
Thakur:- kitni.
Main:- 25 crore aur 4 automatic pistols with mags and ammo aur teri ye beti kiran.
Thakur:- bhagwan ke khatir chod do, paisa beshak doogna le lo.
Main:- sun budhau ab deal mein change aa gaya paisa 50cr ho gaya hai baaki same .
Ritesh:- humey manjoor hai.
Main:- to jaao aur jaldi se karo jugaad, aur ek cheez to reh gayi, wo black Fortuner aur le jaaunga main.
Wo ritesh samajhdaar laga mujhe usne apni family ko bachana jada important samjha aur waise bhi main inhe to nahi maarta. Wo ritesh jaane laga to maine abhay ko uske sath bhej diya aur kiran ki taraf mud gaya, wo samajh gayi ki wo marne wali hai isliye wo rone lagi lekin main jaise hi uske paas pahucha to manisha mere samne aa gayi aur rote huye naa mein garden hillane lagi.
Main:- nahi marunga isey, lekin kuch baat karni hai mujhe isse.
Manisha ne haa mein mundi hillayi aur aage se hatt gayi, Maine kiran ka hath pakda aur usey uske room mein leke gaya aur bahar se darwaza band kiya.
Kiran:- please mat maaro mujhe,
Main:- dekh pehle ek cheez clear kar du ki tu mujhe koi pyar wyar nahi karti tu bas apni hawas mitane mujhe yaha laayi hai.
Kiran kuch na boli bas niche dekh ke subakne lagi
Main:- tujhe jinda chod dunga lekin badle mein mere liye kaam karna hoga tujhe marte dum tak.
Kiran:- mujhe manjoor hai.
Main:- then pack your bags.
Main bahar aaya room se to wo ratan mar chuka tha aur wo aadmi bhaag chuka tha, abhay ne bhi ek bag aur ek suitcase le rakha tha.
Main:- manisha apna saman pack karo.
Aur wo jaise hi gayi main gaya thakur ke samne aur ghuma ke punch diya uske thobde pe.
Main:- ye tha mujhe utha ke yaha laane ke liye. Aur sun us rajpoot ko ya jo bhi hai wo usey ache se samjha diyo ki, wo aur tu mere piche na aaye nahi to aisi halat kar dunga ki tu aur wo rajpoot redlight area mein bhikh maangoge aur plan banao to aisa banana ki main mar jau, kyuki main jinda bacha to tum logo ko marne nahi dunga, jinda rakhke hi itna dard dunga ki tum din raat maroge.
Aur ye bolke main apne room mein aaya aur nahaya kyuki khoon lag rakha tha, main bahar aaya aur wo pajama t-shirt utar ke khud ke kapde pehene aur pehnte hi bed pe gir gaya aur behosh.
Meri aankh khuli to maine ek rahat ki saas li lekin samne abhay baitha tha aur uske paas ek bag tha aur ek suitcase. Actually mujhe kuch yaad nahi tha ki kya kaand kiya hai maine aur ye baat abhay ko bhi pata thi isliye usne mujhe sab kuch bataya aur uski baate sunke mujhe shock laga kyuki kiran ko kyu chod diya usne aur apne sath le jaa raha hai. Lekin thodi tassali bhi thi ki usne family ko chod diya.
Main:- bc ye guns ka kya karenge humey to chalani nahi aati.
Abhay:- tujhe nahi aati to kya hua usey to aati hai na.
Main:- usey sab kuch aata hai par wo itni aasani se kyu gaya.
Abhay:- uska kaam khatam to gaya aur wo tere jaisa backchod to hai nahi.
Main:- waise jo bhi ho thakur ki gaand faad di
Abhay:- abey thakur ki chod usne meri bhi faad hi di thi.
Main:- chal acha hai ab yaha se to nikale.
Abhay:- ab MLA ka kya karna hai.
Main:- abey maa chudaye MLA humey paise mil gaye humey kya chahiye kyu uske piche time waste kiya.
Abhay:- to ab kya karna hai.
Main:- ab Delhi settle honge lekin pehle school se documents laane honge.
Abhay:- yaar MLA ko tapka dete hai tera drugs bhi mil jayega aur wo baad mein dikkat bhi nahi dega.
Main:- chal to fir tapka hi dete hai isey bhi.
Aur fir hum kuch aur baat karte usse pehle kiran aur manisha aa gayi bag leke hum chaaro niche aaye us ritesh ne mujhe keys di car ki aur hum sab ne bag usme dala aur main aaya driving seat pe aur abhay mere bagal mein, manisha aur kiran piche ki seat pe baithe. Maine location set ki delhi ki aur hum nikal pade apni manzil ki aur.
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abhay ka kuch ala khichdi banane laga h??UPDATE:-20 ( Back to track)
Hum log waha se nikle humey rohtak pahuchne mein 6 hours lagne they, lekin bich mein manisha ne bola ki uske ghar chalo subah niklenge. Maine bhi uski baat maan li aur car ko uske ghar ki taraf mod diya.
30 minute ki drive ke baad hum ek ache se ghar ke samne ruke waha pe ek tala laga hua tha jiske chabi humme se kisi ke paas bhi nahi thi, isliye pathar se wo tala toda aur hum ander aaye paise ka aur guns ka bag bhi ander leke aaye.
Hum log hall mein aaye to waha manisha aur uski family ki pic thi jisey dekh manisha sad ho gayi aur sayad aansoo bhi aa gaye uski aankho maine lekin maine uske kandho pe hath rakha aur usey tasalli di to wo mere gale lag gayi.
Manisha:- tum to mujhe nahi chod doge na?
Main:- tumhe kya lagta hai.
Manisha:- mujhe nahi pata, promise karo mujhe.
Main:- okk Devil's promise.
Manisha:- noo! God's promise.
Main:- bhagwan bhi ek baar ko apna wada tod de, lekin devil never break his promise.
Manisha:- okkk, i love you.
Main:- manisha chodo mujhe aur jaake so jaao dekho raat ke 2 bajne wale hai.
Manisha:- main tumhare sath soungi.
Main:- nahi nahi bilkul nahi tum so jao.
Manisha ne bura sa muh banaya aur chali gayi kiran ko leke aur usey uske room mein chodke mujhe ek look deke room mein ghus gayi.
Kitni cute hai bc mann karta hai iski aankho se iske dil ki gehrayio mein utar jaau, maan karta hai iske sagar roopi naino mein doob ke mar jaau, agar ye baar kehde ki AK mujhe apna dil de do, kasam se abhi seena faad ke iske hath mein rakh du.
Abhay:- ooo majnu gayi bhabhi , ab chale.
Actually main ek jagah khada hoke bas ye baate soch raha tha pagal ki tarah, bhenchod ye kya ho raha hai mujhe chutiyo wale kaam kyu kar raha hu.
Main:- chal- chal.
Hum dono bhi ek room mein aaye aur wo paiso ka bag rakha aur us suitcase ko table pe rakh ke khola, wow bhenchod Glock 17Gen 4 17+1 shot 9mm Luger pistols thi wo chaaro
Main:- 2 teri 2 meri.
Abhay:- silver wali meri, black teri
Main:- done!
Abhay:- noob chalani aati hai.
Main:- lawde khud ko teesmaarkhan na samjh tune bhi school mein shooting sikhi hai.
Abhay:- abey tujhe to reload bhi na karni aati hogi.
Main:- bhsdk mujhe waise bhi knifes pasand hai ye gun to sirf darane ke liye aur tu bhsdk kab kaam aayega sikha mere ko.
Abhay:- guruji bol.
Main:- lawda mera.
Uske baad abhay ne mujhe reload karna, lock- unlock aur bhi kayi tareeke bataye ki aim kaise karte etc. Uske baad humne ciggrete fuki aur so gaye.
Raat ko late soye to late to uthna hi tha. Isliye Subah ke 9 baje they aur koi mujhe jhakjhor ke utha raha tha.
Main:- abey sone de na.
Aur itna bolke maine aankh kholi to manisha mujhe hila hila ke utha rahi thi. Mera to din hi ban gaya sabse pehle usey dekhke, kaash meri aur manisha ki alag duniya hoti jaha roz wo mujhe aise hi uthati main office jata waha se thak haar ke ghar aata fir manisha mujhe pyar se paani pilati (lawde khiyali pulaw na paka ye is janam mein possible na hai)
Main:- tumne takleef kyu ki, abhay utha deta na.
Manisha:- kyu main nahi utha sakti kya?
Main:- utha sakti ho, bilkul utha sakti ho.
Manisha:- jaldi se fresh hoke aao breakfast ready hai fir nikalna bhi hai.
Maine haa mein mundi hillayi aur usne aage badh ke mere gaal pe kiss ki aur bhaag gayi.
Haaye kitni masoom hai aur main kitna bada darinda kya ye mere sath reh bhi payegi, ab to reh legi matlab baad mein apne sath nahi rakh paunga kyuki condition change ho jayegi, lekin main abhi kyu future plan kar raha hu, abhi mujhe jaake nahana chahiye.
Main bathroom mein ghusa aur nahaya aur wo hi kapde doobara pehne kyuki aur kapde they hi nahi bc, maine room mein aake ready hua aur ek gun apni jeans mein daali aise hi hawabaazi ke liye.
Fir hum sab ne breakfast kiya aur car mein baith ke nikal liye, maine 2 ghante mein delhi pahucha diya tha sabko kyuki ek to fortuner aur upper se main driver
Manisha:-chalo shopping karte hai ab to tum crorepati ho.
Bc ye kya bol rahi hai, wo kiran kya sochegi ki mere baap se paisa cheen ke crorepati bane ghum rahe
Abhay:- haa bhai chal humne bhi kabhi mall se shopping nahi ki hai
Main:- okk to chalo.
Abhay ne mujhe rasta bataya aur maine bhi pahucha diya car ko mall mein, humne bag mein se paise nikale aur chal diye mall mein, abhay ko kisi ka sath jada pasand nahi aata, wo akela rehna jada pasand karta hai isliye wo nikal gaya akela kuch paise leke. Manisha ne mera hath pakda aur mujhe khich ke le gayi boys section mein aur kiran bichari food court mein chali gayi.
Main:- waise tumhari choice kharab hai fir bhi tum hi pasand kar lo.
Manisha:- what do you mean by choice kharab hai?
Wo aankhe matkati huyi boli
Main:- tumhari choice hu main aur mujhme aisa koi feature nahi hai jo koi ladki mujhe pasand kare, even tum bhi mujhse nafrat karti thi lekin achanak se pyar.
Manisha:- batati hu baad mein.
Main:- intezaar rahega ma'am.
Bhenchod kya kya karna pad raha hai ladki ke piche, shopping, ji huzuri aise to lawde lag jayenge.
Khair hum dono ne shopping ki actually shopping nahi puri shop hi kharid li 15 jeans 15 shirts ,t-shirts, shorts, sneakers bhenchod itne kapde maine apni jindagi mein nahi kharide they aur wo bhi itne mehnge. Khair humari shopping khatam huyi aur hum bill pay karke food court mein aaye to waha abhay aur kiran kuch baate kar rahe they aapas mein aur humey dekh ke wo dono chup ho gaye mujhe ajeeb laga kyuki abhay jaldi se kisi se baat nahi karta aur ladki se to bhut hi rare baat karta hai khair maine jada dhyan nahi diya is taraf. Humne waha pe lunch kiya aur nikal pade haryana ke liye.
Hum hamari city mein ghuse hi they ki abhay ne mujhe ek taraf ishara kiya aur maine us taraf dekha to meri aankhe badi ho gayi, kyuki waha wo rajesh aur uske sath 3 4 log khade they, lekin hum abhi kuch nahi kar sakte they kyuki manisha sath thi hamare.
Aur main problem thi ki ab hum rahenge kaha kyuki us room mein to main manisha ko rakh nahi sakta aur gaon mein bhi nahi leke jaa sakta isliye maine ek property dealer ke paas phone kiya jo ki hamare jaan pehchan ka hi hai.
Main:- hello londe.
Wo:- aur Chaudhary sahab kaise ho?
Main:- sun 4 room, 1 kitchen, aur hall plus parking ho aisa flat chahiye 15 minute mein message kar mujhe.
Wo:- abhi karta hu aur payment.
Main:-tu udhar hi miliyo, de dunga.
Wo:- thik hai bhai aur koi sewa.
Main:- hai ek kaam lekin wo baad mein.
Aur itna bolke maine phone cut kiya aur car ko side laga ke us rajesh and party ko dekhne laga. Wo log kuch nahi kar rahe they bas has-has ke baate kar rahe they.
15 minute mein message aaya aur location milte hi maine car dauda di aur wo location 15 minute ki hi duri pe tha.
Hum udhar pahuche to wo ek society type tha and waha ke flats same hi they aur sunder bhi, hum hamare flat ke paas pahuche aur waha bahar hi wo dealer mil gaya. Hum car se utre wo mujh se gale mila aur humey ghar wagarh dikhaya itne mein abhay ne usey paise laake diye aur usey chalta kiya kyuki wo paka raha tha.
Waise to sab cheez thi flat mein bas khaane-peene ki cheezo ko chod ke, uske liye maine kiran ko paise de diye they aur bol diya tha ki arrange kar le wo sab cheez. Uske baad sab apne apne selected rooms mein gaye. Mera aur manisha ka room upper tha wahi abhay aur kiran ka neeche floor pe. Mere room mein locker tha matlab ab main paise rakh sakta hu isme. Ab paise mile hai to ameeri to dikhani hai isliye 3 iphone book kare maine apne phone se. Aur room mein jaake taiyar hua ek gun paint mein daali aur car ki keys leke abhay ke room mein aaya aur nikal pade hum kuch samman ikkhata karne. Lekin main in sab mein vivek ko bhul chuka tha pata nahi kyu but abhi dimag mein uska khayal nahi tha. Hum dono ek bike ke showroom mein gaye ek duke kharidi aur uski delivery ghar karwa ke fir do knife liye bilkul rampuri type and aur bhi kayi equipments liye jo kaam aa sakte they kabhi bhi aur fir nikal diye us jagah pe jaha rajesh ko dekha tha.
Lekin hum waha pahuche to koi nahi tha lekin socha puchtach hi karle thodi isliye hum jaha wo baithe they waha gaye aur us dukan wale se pucha ki wo log kaha hai to usne bataya pata nahi sahab kaha gaye log.
Tabhi meri nazar thodi dur ek admi pe padi jo phone pe kisi baat kar raha tha aur uska thobda dekh ke mein pehchaan gaya ki ye rajesh ke sath tha abhi.
Main:- wo raha ek to chal isey hi dharte hai.
Abhay:- chal.
Hum dono aise hi masti masrte huye uske bilkul paas pahuch gaye.
Main:- oo bhaisahab time kya hua hai?
Wo:- nahi pata mujhe.
Main:- to phone mein dekh ke batao na.
Wo:- abey bola na nahi pata.
Aur wo piche mudda aur piche mujhe dekh ke shock ho gaya, i know wo mujhe janta hoga lekin shock hone ki kya baat hai usme.
Wo:- tu tu jinda kaise hai, tujhe to kidnap kar le gaye they na.
Main:- un sab ko nipta diya maine, chal ab tu rajesh ka pata bata.
Wo:- kabhi nahi bataunga.
Ab waha log ikhatta hote isse pehle abhay ne gun nikal ke uske mathe pe rakhi aur bola.
Abhay:- abey lawde chal car mein baith kab se pak-pak kiye jaa raha hai.
Wo bichara dar gaya aur chupchap car mein baith gaya aur abhay uske sath baith gaya. Maine car start kari aur us jagah le li jaha hum in sabko thikane lagate hai jaha koi nahi dhundh sakta inhe. Bas is waqt mujhe abhay ka behavior thoda wierd lag raha tha jaise wo koi cheez chata ho aur usey na mili ho.
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