Advice Needed MY STORY

[king cobra]

Ju like nageen kya men

han pyaar diwanapan nagin ka mashoor hai

 

[Ashish120]

Miss use off powers..

Wo TT hai wo kuch bhi kar sakta hai

 

[Dungeon Master]

Miss use off powers..

Misuse bolte

 

[Ashish120]

han pyaar diwanapan nagin ka mashoor hai

Lahul se kiyu nahi aate ju

 

[Aagasyta (Y. A.)]

Wo TT hai wo kuch bhi kar sakta hai

Tu pahle Postbit lagana seekh..

 

[king cobra]

Kaise ho..

story sec me rahta kabhi kabhi yahan aata hun jhankne to jaisan ka spam dekhta hun bahut dost banaya usne

 

[Aagasyta (Y. A.)]

Misuse bolte

Typo..

 

[Aagasyta (Y. A.)]

story sec me rahta kabhi kabhi yahan aata hun jhankne to jaisan ka spam dekhta hun bahut dost banaya usne

 

[Dungeon Master]

Typo..

Oxford pakad lega kabhi ju ko

 

[The_Punisher]

Typo..

Hau hau