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i am sorry lekin
bhai itna time naheen na hota. thoda bahut jo milta hai to usi mein likhta hoon aur phir thoda thoda update karta rahta hoon.
thodi der rukiye main abhi dusra update dein raha hoon.
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bhai itna time naheen na hota. thoda bahut jo milta hai to usi mein likhta hoon aur phir thoda thoda update karta rahta hoon.
thodi der rukiye main abhi dusra update dein raha hoon.
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{ I Was In Coma}
Aur jaesa ki aap jantein hain ki jo log kam boltein hain aur zayada logon se ghulna milna pasand naheen kartein , wo sochte bahut hain . To main bhi iss maujuda situations ke bare mein sochne laga .
Jab maine bus wale hadse ke baare mein yaad kiya to mujhe laga ki , yes ! it may be possible(ye mumkin hai ) ki main coma mein jaa sakta hoon . kiyun ki jis truck ne takkar mara tha , meri dhundhli dhundhli yaddasht (memory ) ke mutabik kaafi bada tha aur badi speed mein usne takkar mari thi .
To finally maine iss baat ko accept kar liya tha, ki haan mera accident hua hai , jiski wajah se main coma mein tha . Jis baat ko accept karnein mein dikkat ho rahi thi wo ye ki , "main doo saal coma mein tha !" .
Mujhe thoda sukoon mila , ki chalo ab kam se kam papa dateinge naheen haha .
Par phir maine socha yaar daant to choti cheez hai !, yahan main do saal se coma mein tha !!.
Mujhe iss baat ki seriousness ka andaza shayad iss liye naheen tha , kiyunki main coma mein tha, ye mujhe maloom chal chuka tha , par coma mein jane ki , ya coma mein rahne ki feeling kya hoti hai mujhe thodi na maloom tha .
Mere liye to bas mano , ki abhi kuch der pahle main bus mein tha aur achanak se truck dekha , ankh band hui aur jab ankh khuli to adhi raat ho chuki thi ,tab maine socha ki shayad sapne dekh raha tha , par jab meri subah aankh khuli to mujhe pata chala ki main do saal se coma mein tha . Ab aap hi batyein ki akhir main kaese seriousness ka andaza laga sakta tha .
Mere liye iss baat se zayda to papa ki daant ka ahsaas tha . Are mujhe to accident se chot lagne tak ka ahsas naheen tha , kiyunki shayad jaese hi truck ne thokar mari hogi main behosh ho gaya tha aur phir shayad uske baad coma mein . Isliye mujhe halaki pata to chal gaya tha ki beshaq mera accident to hua tha , aur baat cheet sun ke ye bhi pata ho gaya tha ki main coma mein tha , phir bhi jayada dara naheen .
Par jis baat ne mujhe sabse jayada daraya tha , wo tha doctor ki kahee agli baat , jis baat ne mujhe kuch bolne par majboor kar diya tha . Aur wo baat thi ..........
.......... (to be cont..)
Aur jaesa ki aap jantein hain ki jo log kam boltein hain aur zayada logon se ghulna milna pasand naheen kartein , wo sochte bahut hain . To main bhi iss maujuda situations ke bare mein sochne laga .
Jab maine bus wale hadse ke baare mein yaad kiya to mujhe laga ki , yes ! it may be possible(ye mumkin hai ) ki main coma mein jaa sakta hoon . kiyun ki jis truck ne takkar mara tha , meri dhundhli dhundhli yaddasht (memory ) ke mutabik kaafi bada tha aur badi speed mein usne takkar mari thi .
To finally maine iss baat ko accept kar liya tha, ki haan mera accident hua hai , jiski wajah se main coma mein tha . Jis baat ko accept karnein mein dikkat ho rahi thi wo ye ki , "main doo saal coma mein tha !" .
Mujhe thoda sukoon mila , ki chalo ab kam se kam papa dateinge naheen haha .
Par phir maine socha yaar daant to choti cheez hai !, yahan main do saal se coma mein tha !!.
Mujhe iss baat ki seriousness ka andaza shayad iss liye naheen tha , kiyunki main coma mein tha, ye mujhe maloom chal chuka tha , par coma mein jane ki , ya coma mein rahne ki feeling kya hoti hai mujhe thodi na maloom tha .
Mere liye to bas mano , ki abhi kuch der pahle main bus mein tha aur achanak se truck dekha , ankh band hui aur jab ankh khuli to adhi raat ho chuki thi ,tab maine socha ki shayad sapne dekh raha tha , par jab meri subah aankh khuli to mujhe pata chala ki main do saal se coma mein tha . Ab aap hi batyein ki akhir main kaese seriousness ka andaza laga sakta tha .
Mere liye iss baat se zayda to papa ki daant ka ahsaas tha . Are mujhe to accident se chot lagne tak ka ahsas naheen tha , kiyunki shayad jaese hi truck ne thokar mari hogi main behosh ho gaya tha aur phir shayad uske baad coma mein . Isliye mujhe halaki pata to chal gaya tha ki beshaq mera accident to hua tha , aur baat cheet sun ke ye bhi pata ho gaya tha ki main coma mein tha , phir bhi jayada dara naheen .
Par jis baat ne mujhe sabse jayada daraya tha , wo tha doctor ki kahee agli baat , jis baat ne mujhe kuch bolne par majboor kar diya tha . Aur wo baat thi ..........
.......... (to be cont..)
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The plot of the story is very good bro .... something different jo ham logone pahle nahi para ....
Lekin ek aisa hi story xossip pe tha , iske agle update mai oh coma se bahar ayega , sirf itna sa hi tha , uske baad story ka update kabhi nahi aya , agar ap wohi writer ho toh ish baar ap please story ko pura kijiye ga ....
Lekin ek aisa hi story xossip pe tha , iske agle update mai oh coma se bahar ayega , sirf itna sa hi tha , uske baad story ka update kabhi nahi aya , agar ap wohi writer ho toh ish baar ap please story ko pura kijiye ga ....
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Hello, Ladies 
& Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.
Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.
Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.
Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.
Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel
& Gentleman, We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.
Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.
Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.
Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.
Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel
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Hello Everyone
We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of Xforum "The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC)..
Jaisa ki aap sabko maalum hai abhi pichle hafte he humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time Pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit chat thread toh pehle se he Hind section mein khulla hai.
Iske baare Mein thoda aapko btaadun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kissi bhi prefix ki short story post kar shaktey ho jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words takk ho shakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap Iss contest Mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa Rupp dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko pura Xforum dekhega ye ek bahot acha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories k liye kyunki USC Ki stories ko pure Xforum k readers read kartey hain.. Or jo readers likhna nahi caahtey woh bhi Iss contest Mein participate kar shaktey hain "Best Readers Award" k liye aapko bus karna ye hoga ki contest Mein posted stories ko read karke unke Uppar apne views dene honge.
Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske aalwa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne kaa mouka bhi milega Taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab k liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai Xforum k sabhi readers k Uppar apni chaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.
Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna suru kar shaktey hain or woh thread 21st February takk open rahega Iss dauraan aap apni story daal shaktey hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna suru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.
Koi bhi issue ho toh aap kissi bhi staff member ko Message kar shaktey hain..
Rules Check karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread.
Contest k regarding Chit chat karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Chit Chat Thread.
Regards :Xforum Staff.